Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The so called sheep
Rocky Lagou said:
I find this poem beautifully parallel to my ethical standpoints. I strive to promote the notion that \"you have to live for YOURSELF\" in my poetry and my works. Although it may seem egocentric, at the end of the day, it is \"survival of the fittest.\" If you decide to follow leaders and join the bandwagon, you will never stand out or make YOUR voice heard. So I love the way you expressed that message through this poem! Bravo! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:29
Rocky Lagou said:
I find this poem beautifully parallel to my ethical standpoints. I strive to promote the notion that \"you have to live for YOURSELF\" in my poetry and my works. Although it may seem egocentric, at the end of the day, it is \"survival of the fittest.\" If you decide to follow leaders and join the bandwagon, you will never stand out or make YOUR voice heard. So I love the way you expressed that message through this poem! Bravo! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:29
Confrontation
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the concept of the unity of opposites or kenzen inchinyo .. these fine words made me think along such lines ........ N
February 22nd, 2022 08:08
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the concept of the unity of opposites or kenzen inchinyo .. these fine words made me think along such lines ........ N
February 22nd, 2022 08:08
Confrontation
L. B. Mek said:
an introvert
is only, one action
or sentence, away
from evolving
into an extrovert...
and a bookworm
is simply short of self-belief
from utilising
that same creativity
they\'ve been cultivating
in all those imagined scenes
they brought to life, in their mind\'s - eye...
(such is the gap
between our hopeful wishes
and those dreams
we realised, in-to our reality....)
February 22nd, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
an introvert
is only, one action
or sentence, away
from evolving
into an extrovert...
and a bookworm
is simply short of self-belief
from utilising
that same creativity
they\'ve been cultivating
in all those imagined scenes
they brought to life, in their mind\'s - eye...
(such is the gap
between our hopeful wishes
and those dreams
we realised, in-to our reality....)
February 22nd, 2022 05:26
Confrontation
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice lines
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
beautiful analogy , magma is hidden and lava flows out...wow !!
Let the eruptions give us wonderful poems :)) LAVA is a surely a fertile one !!
February 22nd, 2022 02:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice lines
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
beautiful analogy , magma is hidden and lava flows out...wow !!
Let the eruptions give us wonderful poems :)) LAVA is a surely a fertile one !!
February 22nd, 2022 02:48
Confrontation
Caring dove said:
Another great writing spiller ..🙂 there is so much more to us , than our difficult emotions .. as you express in your poem . It’s what’s underneath that matters and our true self
February 22nd, 2022 02:34
Caring dove said:
Another great writing spiller ..🙂 there is so much more to us , than our difficult emotions .. as you express in your poem . It’s what’s underneath that matters and our true self
February 22nd, 2022 02:34
The so called sheep
Rozina said:
Great lines. Yes always easier to follow the crowd. It needs guts to stand up and speak out one’s own beliefs.
February 21st, 2022 21:52
Rozina said:
Great lines. Yes always easier to follow the crowd. It needs guts to stand up and speak out one’s own beliefs.
February 21st, 2022 21:52
The so called sheep
Neville said:
there is more to this page than first meets the eye .. once the brain is engaged and an imagination is added, it is possible to interpret this fine work in many ways that go far beyond the obvious ......... super spiller ................ Neville
February 21st, 2022 15:49
Neville said:
there is more to this page than first meets the eye .. once the brain is engaged and an imagination is added, it is possible to interpret this fine work in many ways that go far beyond the obvious ......... super spiller ................ Neville
February 21st, 2022 15:49
The so called sheep
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! What and ending and once truly connected to that inner raw, the heart no longer feels the need for more.
Whatever will be will be..
Fantastic stuff, write on!
February 21st, 2022 13:30
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! What and ending and once truly connected to that inner raw, the heart no longer feels the need for more.
Whatever will be will be..
Fantastic stuff, write on!
February 21st, 2022 13:30
The so called sheep
L. B. Mek said:
\'Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion
roared across streets
docile was it ?\'
loved these stanzas
wonderfully worded, showcasing
that less is more
succinctly inked, wonder of poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 21st, 2022 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion
roared across streets
docile was it ?\'
loved these stanzas
wonderfully worded, showcasing
that less is more
succinctly inked, wonder of poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 21st, 2022 06:55
The so called sheep
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words spilleronsheet, so much meaning for which to contemplate.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words spilleronsheet, so much meaning for which to contemplate.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:55
The so called sheep
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we have to follow the heart .. not just follow everyone ejse whilst making ourselves unhappy
Great writing again , spiller ))
February 21st, 2022 03:18
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we have to follow the heart .. not just follow everyone ejse whilst making ourselves unhappy
Great writing again , spiller ))
February 21st, 2022 03:18
The so called sheep
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, So many interpretations strike at once. But
Let not the SHEEP not Sleep,
The journey is surely Steep
Not the time to Weep
Face the Lion with a LEAP !!
Good one !! But Poignant one ofcourse !!
February 21st, 2022 02:58
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, So many interpretations strike at once. But
Let not the SHEEP not Sleep,
The journey is surely Steep
Not the time to Weep
Face the Lion with a LEAP !!
Good one !! But Poignant one ofcourse !!
February 21st, 2022 02:58
Hide and seek
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully constructed evolution of \"Hide and Seek\" here spilleronsheet.
In your your poem, you have succinctly tied certain phases down, and I really do hope in time, that the \"seeking\" will outweigh the \"hiding!\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 19th, 2022 13:27
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully constructed evolution of \"Hide and Seek\" here spilleronsheet.
In your your poem, you have succinctly tied certain phases down, and I really do hope in time, that the \"seeking\" will outweigh the \"hiding!\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 19th, 2022 13:27
Fishing
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy between fishing and life. I personally saw it as a metaphor for writing.
\"holding the steady ink of rod
placing the brush in strokes\"
\"the more fishes in basket
pleases the stomach
the more marks on sheet
appeases the ambitions\"
Are you fishing for a poem? 👀😊
February 18th, 2022 11:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy between fishing and life. I personally saw it as a metaphor for writing.
\"holding the steady ink of rod
placing the brush in strokes\"
\"the more fishes in basket
pleases the stomach
the more marks on sheet
appeases the ambitions\"
Are you fishing for a poem? 👀😊
February 18th, 2022 11:32
Fishing
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem. Many interesting and memorable lines.
February 18th, 2022 09:14
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem. Many interesting and memorable lines.
February 18th, 2022 09:14
Fishing
Vamsi Sudha said:
Best lines of the poem
\"come to the pond of fate
the pond of divinity that is laid
but remember to leave the burdens at home
cause happiness can’t live without peace on its own\"
Nice allegory !!
February 18th, 2022 06:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Best lines of the poem
\"come to the pond of fate
the pond of divinity that is laid
but remember to leave the burdens at home
cause happiness can’t live without peace on its own\"
Nice allegory !!
February 18th, 2022 06:40
Fishing
L. B. Mek said:
this is really good
great job weaving your image/metaphor
of fishing, throughout your poem..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
this is really good
great job weaving your image/metaphor
of fishing, throughout your poem..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 06:25
Hide and seek
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hide and Seek
Another silver Streak
From Spiller at Peak
And nothing more to Tweak
And your poem is Classic :)
February 18th, 2022 02:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hide and Seek
Another silver Streak
From Spiller at Peak
And nothing more to Tweak
And your poem is Classic :)
February 18th, 2022 02:18
Hide and seek
Rocky Lagou said:
Life does fly by, doesn\'t it? I feel like we must cherish every moment of it. Lovely poem and the \"hide and seek\" metaphor fits so well with this message. 💖💫
February 17th, 2022 10:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Life does fly by, doesn\'t it? I feel like we must cherish every moment of it. Lovely poem and the \"hide and seek\" metaphor fits so well with this message. 💖💫
February 17th, 2022 10:20
Hide and seek
Rozina said:
Your poem brought back memories of my university days. I used to skip some boring lectures - that was easy as those classes were big. For the smaller tutorials we had to think of ingenious ways to escape the eagle eyes of our professors. Thank you for this trip down memory lane.
February 17th, 2022 02:00
Rozina said:
Your poem brought back memories of my university days. I used to skip some boring lectures - that was easy as those classes were big. For the smaller tutorials we had to think of ingenious ways to escape the eagle eyes of our professors. Thank you for this trip down memory lane.
February 17th, 2022 02:00
Hide and seek
dusk arising said:
The inner city hide n seek of today for youngsters is a very dangerous game of bloodshed and gangs. Something people are born into.
It came as a surprise to me a few years back just how dangerous it could be for my young apprentice to be in parts of town where he was a stranger.
Maybe the gang life is hide when away from your neighborhood but seek strangers when you are with your gang... For me that was Mods and Rockers back in the 1960\'s. Does much change?
February 16th, 2022 15:37
dusk arising said:
The inner city hide n seek of today for youngsters is a very dangerous game of bloodshed and gangs. Something people are born into.
It came as a surprise to me a few years back just how dangerous it could be for my young apprentice to be in parts of town where he was a stranger.
Maybe the gang life is hide when away from your neighborhood but seek strangers when you are with your gang... For me that was Mods and Rockers back in the 1960\'s. Does much change?
February 16th, 2022 15:37
Hide and seek
Paul Bell said:
Life sure does fly by, and youth can be fleeting, some will prosper, some will fail, it\'s the way of the world and always will be. In a way I feel sorry for kids today, they\'re denied the freedom that probably made us what we are today.
February 16th, 2022 14:44
Paul Bell said:
Life sure does fly by, and youth can be fleeting, some will prosper, some will fail, it\'s the way of the world and always will be. In a way I feel sorry for kids today, they\'re denied the freedom that probably made us what we are today.
February 16th, 2022 14:44
Alloy
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of \"pure\" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊
February 16th, 2022 09:47
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of \"pure\" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊
February 16th, 2022 09:47
Alloy
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
These lines were excellent...
\"An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible \"
Time you prove your mettle !! :) dear Alloy !!
February 16th, 2022 01:01
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
These lines were excellent...
\"An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible \"
Time you prove your mettle !! :) dear Alloy !!
February 16th, 2022 01:01
The hundredth
Rocky Lagou said:
I know I already commented, but the first time around I honestly oversaw the power that one particular line possesses:
\"if a poet can write
it’s not only the pen
he holds
but also upon the support\"
This should be pinned with the rest of the iconic quotes in history books. 💖🌟👏
February 15th, 2022 11:59
Rocky Lagou said:
I know I already commented, but the first time around I honestly oversaw the power that one particular line possesses:
\"if a poet can write
it’s not only the pen
he holds
but also upon the support\"
This should be pinned with the rest of the iconic quotes in history books. 💖🌟👏
February 15th, 2022 11:59
Lost and unfound
Rozina said:
Such a creative poem. Hiding until the time is right probably. I enjoyed it.
February 14th, 2022 21:48
Rozina said:
Such a creative poem. Hiding until the time is right probably. I enjoyed it.
February 14th, 2022 21:48
Lost and unfound
dusk arising said:
That mischievous muse... all mine wants to do is write limericks at the moment... i swear she\'s got another man.
February 14th, 2022 13:14
dusk arising said:
That mischievous muse... all mine wants to do is write limericks at the moment... i swear she\'s got another man.
February 14th, 2022 13:14
Lost and unfound
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Nice play on \"lost and found.\" This was a journey from hope to dismay. This \"lost soul and muse\" feels like an enigma yet something so tangible and real. Nice job! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖.
February 14th, 2022 12:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Nice play on \"lost and found.\" This was a journey from hope to dismay. This \"lost soul and muse\" feels like an enigma yet something so tangible and real. Nice job! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖.
February 14th, 2022 12:11
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