Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Poetic lightning
arqios said:
Like lightning through the night sky, your words illuminate the fleeting; each spark a ghost of the fire that birthed it. I can almost smell the soot on your fingers.
August 16th, 2025 07:53
arqios said:
Like lightning through the night sky, your words illuminate the fleeting; each spark a ghost of the fire that birthed it. I can almost smell the soot on your fingers.
August 16th, 2025 07:53
Poetic lightning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If people don\'t get this, they probably don\'t belong on this site. They might be looking for Tinder or something. An excellent write on the poetic process, my friend. Love it, Soren. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If people don\'t get this, they probably don\'t belong on this site. They might be looking for Tinder or something. An excellent write on the poetic process, my friend. Love it, Soren. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:24
Poetic lightning
Poetic Licence said:
Love this, inspiration, blink and it\'s gone, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
Love this, inspiration, blink and it\'s gone, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 06:45
Poetic lightning
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Beautifully captures the fleeting nature of inspiration.
August 16th, 2025 05:59
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Beautifully captures the fleeting nature of inspiration.
August 16th, 2025 05:59
Sky vine
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
This poem is so powerful! It shows how two things can be connected and grow together, but sometimes that connection can be toxic. The imagery is beautiful, but the ending is heartbreaking.
August 16th, 2025 05:54
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
This poem is so powerful! It shows how two things can be connected and grow together, but sometimes that connection can be toxic. The imagery is beautiful, but the ending is heartbreaking.
August 16th, 2025 05:54
Let it go
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
A raw mirror held up in verse.
Such a beautiful verse.
August 16th, 2025 03:39
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
A raw mirror held up in verse.
Such a beautiful verse.
August 16th, 2025 03:39
Sky vine
Friendship said:
This poem explores themes of interdependence and the cycle of life through the imagery of a vine and an orchid. It reflects on the struggle for survival, growth, and the eventual merging of two identities into one. The relationship between the vine and the orchid symbolizes both cooperation and competition in nature. To me, you seem to be painting an amazing picture illustrating the beauty and complexity of natural relationships, perhaps serving as a metaphor for human connections and the balance of life and death in the natural world.
August 15th, 2025 14:15
Friendship said:
This poem explores themes of interdependence and the cycle of life through the imagery of a vine and an orchid. It reflects on the struggle for survival, growth, and the eventual merging of two identities into one. The relationship between the vine and the orchid symbolizes both cooperation and competition in nature. To me, you seem to be painting an amazing picture illustrating the beauty and complexity of natural relationships, perhaps serving as a metaphor for human connections and the balance of life and death in the natural world.
August 15th, 2025 14:15
Let it go
Friendship said:
Your poem powerfully illuminates the liberating theme of personal responsibility, revealing the profound freedom that emerges from releasing the burdens of blame and resentment. It wisely suggests that while it may be tempting to project our shortcomings onto others, true empowerment and self-salvation arise from courageously acknowledging our own faults and graciously refraining from judgment. The poem serves as a radiant reminder to the reader to focus on personal growth and the transformative importance of releasing negative emotions associated with judgment and blame, cultivating a healthier and more enlightened mindset.
August 15th, 2025 12:43
Friendship said:
Your poem powerfully illuminates the liberating theme of personal responsibility, revealing the profound freedom that emerges from releasing the burdens of blame and resentment. It wisely suggests that while it may be tempting to project our shortcomings onto others, true empowerment and self-salvation arise from courageously acknowledging our own faults and graciously refraining from judgment. The poem serves as a radiant reminder to the reader to focus on personal growth and the transformative importance of releasing negative emotions associated with judgment and blame, cultivating a healthier and more enlightened mindset.
August 15th, 2025 12:43
Sky vine
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The cycle of life reaching for the light on the lee side of time - the search, the bond, the seeds and the inevitable return to the soils of birth and death. A great poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:07
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The cycle of life reaching for the light on the lee side of time - the search, the bond, the seeds and the inevitable return to the soils of birth and death. A great poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:07
Let it go
Tony Grannell said:
I see what you mean, Soren with reference to my poem, Sweet Forgiveness. The same message but on different sides of the fence. We old bards think alike - hahaha! That said, this is far superior, in depth, intellect and poetic expression. You are a master observer of life, so, too, to render forth your pronouncements with poetic flair, most admirable indeed.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:52
Tony Grannell said:
I see what you mean, Soren with reference to my poem, Sweet Forgiveness. The same message but on different sides of the fence. We old bards think alike - hahaha! That said, this is far superior, in depth, intellect and poetic expression. You are a master observer of life, so, too, to render forth your pronouncements with poetic flair, most admirable indeed.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:52
Let it go
Lorenz said:
I wonder about the philosophical aspect of the text ,but I appreciate the elegance of the word !
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Lorenz said:
I wonder about the philosophical aspect of the text ,but I appreciate the elegance of the word !
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Let it go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame and find freedom in release. The rhymes give it a measured, almost meditative cadence. Well done, my friend. A very strong poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame and find freedom in release. The rhymes give it a measured, almost meditative cadence. Well done, my friend. A very strong poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:09
Let it go
Priya Tomar said:
Some good advices that should be followed .
Very nice ....
August 15th, 2025 08:50
Priya Tomar said:
Some good advices that should be followed .
Very nice ....
August 15th, 2025 08:50
Let it go
rebellion_in_sanity said:
High philosophy in a zipped format. Simply loved it. Great write
August 15th, 2025 06:58
rebellion_in_sanity said:
High philosophy in a zipped format. Simply loved it. Great write
August 15th, 2025 06:58
Let it go
Poetic Licence said:
Blame to easy to apportion by those refusing to except responsibility for their own actions. If you cannot be honest with yourself, how can others ever trust you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
Blame to easy to apportion by those refusing to except responsibility for their own actions. If you cannot be honest with yourself, how can others ever trust you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:15
Let it go
Teddy.15 said:
Your language read out loud is a rap and made me chuckle, never a truer word said my dear sorrenbarret, your wisdom and indirect advice is sparkling in this. 🌹 🤭
August 15th, 2025 04:27
Teddy.15 said:
Your language read out loud is a rap and made me chuckle, never a truer word said my dear sorrenbarret, your wisdom and indirect advice is sparkling in this. 🌹 🤭
August 15th, 2025 04:27
Sky vine
Goldfinch60 said:
That climb into the world is there for us all soren.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That climb into the world is there for us all soren.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:08
Sky vine
NinjaGirl said:
I always do love nature in a story, I suppose it\'s what makes us human. Lovely!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
NinjaGirl said:
I always do love nature in a story, I suppose it\'s what makes us human. Lovely!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
Sky vine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light (I love the imagery), only to end in a bittersweet turn. Again, I love the imagery, which is earthy yet delicate. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light (I love the imagery), only to end in a bittersweet turn. Again, I love the imagery, which is earthy yet delicate. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:53
Sky vine
Neville said:
this reminds me, or rather makes me imagine a determined quest for freedom .. reaching for the sky & breaking free from some kind of hypothetical shackles .. I like it a lot .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:08
Neville said:
this reminds me, or rather makes me imagine a determined quest for freedom .. reaching for the sky & breaking free from some kind of hypothetical shackles .. I like it a lot .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:08
Sky vine
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend. You can see the whole story unfolding painted in watercolors. Incredible writing, majestic fluidity. One of my favorites. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 14th, 2025 10:51
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend. You can see the whole story unfolding painted in watercolors. Incredible writing, majestic fluidity. One of my favorites. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 14th, 2025 10:51
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good, fierce but controlled. The contrast carries the words with immense force.
August 14th, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good, fierce but controlled. The contrast carries the words with immense force.
August 14th, 2025 10:05
Scraps given
rebellion_in_sanity said:
There are pieces we give to others that live and some to those long dead - simply too good
August 14th, 2025 10:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
There are pieces we give to others that live and some to those long dead - simply too good
August 14th, 2025 10:00
Sky vine
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning dear sorrenbarret barret even more so because my late brother was called Lee, and I am curing my orchids at the moment, they surely need some TLC 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:28
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning dear sorrenbarret barret even more so because my late brother was called Lee, and I am curing my orchids at the moment, they surely need some TLC 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:28
Sky vine
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of jack and the beanstalk for some reason, has a touch of stairway to heaven about it, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of jack and the beanstalk for some reason, has a touch of stairway to heaven about it, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:45
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