Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Opposites attract
Bella Shepard said:
It is the opposites of life, the yin and yang, that make the world go round, exquisitly captured in this thought provoking piece. Beautifully done!
October 13th, 2025 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
It is the opposites of life, the yin and yang, that make the world go round, exquisitly captured in this thought provoking piece. Beautifully done!
October 13th, 2025 12:27
Opposites attract
orchidee said:
Good write Sisyphus, erm, SB. lol. He should have tried rolling a marble up the mountain instead!
October 13th, 2025 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write Sisyphus, erm, SB. lol. He should have tried rolling a marble up the mountain instead!
October 13th, 2025 10:24
Opposites attract
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is searing…nature becomes metaphor for us all, where need becomes control and pain feeds power. The imagery, the rhythm, the restraint...it’s all masterfully balanced. Exceptional work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is searing…nature becomes metaphor for us all, where need becomes control and pain feeds power. The imagery, the rhythm, the restraint...it’s all masterfully balanced. Exceptional work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:38
Opposites attract
Priya Tomar said:
Good poem .
Very true ..... opposites attract .
October 13th, 2025 08:35
Priya Tomar said:
Good poem .
Very true ..... opposites attract .
October 13th, 2025 08:35
Nuts
Aman 12 said:
logic\'s moth...this poem of yours doesnt answer..it documents everything. especially the mythmaking of war.
October 13th, 2025 08:07
Aman 12 said:
logic\'s moth...this poem of yours doesnt answer..it documents everything. especially the mythmaking of war.
October 13th, 2025 08:07
Holes in our day
Aman 12 said:
every metaphor refuses comfort. built identities are often vulnerable.
October 13th, 2025 08:04
Aman 12 said:
every metaphor refuses comfort. built identities are often vulnerable.
October 13th, 2025 08:04
Sensitive
Aman 12 said:
some people must travel alone..isolation is sometimes so necessary.I loved all the metaphors.. one of your best work.
October 13th, 2025 08:01
Aman 12 said:
some people must travel alone..isolation is sometimes so necessary.I loved all the metaphors.. one of your best work.
October 13th, 2025 08:01
Opposites attract
Friendship said:
Your poem discusses the dynamics of attraction and repulsion in relationships, focusing on the interplay between strength and weakness.
October 13th, 2025 06:26
Friendship said:
Your poem discusses the dynamics of attraction and repulsion in relationships, focusing on the interplay between strength and weakness.
October 13th, 2025 06:26
Opposites attract
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren I enjoyed every word here, your write is splendidly written. Splendor 🤴as you’ve stated,
“Why does the innocent girl favor the wild boy
The naive lad the seductive siren seek
The nurturing woman to the drunkard makes herself a toy
The powerful dominate the weak”
This I would have to say is my favorite verse. You used words such as “drunkard” what is that word defined by, its meaning. You point out or made a good point/ point(s) overall. Within this entire piece I do find it interesting, it’s what I picked up, an image of maybe a girl with a drink at hand and she’s running from or something or someone or maybe just facing what she doesn’t want to face. This is a powerful written poem here 🤴🥂✨
October 13th, 2025 06:09
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren I enjoyed every word here, your write is splendidly written. Splendor 🤴as you’ve stated,
“Why does the innocent girl favor the wild boy
The naive lad the seductive siren seek
The nurturing woman to the drunkard makes herself a toy
The powerful dominate the weak”
This I would have to say is my favorite verse. You used words such as “drunkard” what is that word defined by, its meaning. You point out or made a good point/ point(s) overall. Within this entire piece I do find it interesting, it’s what I picked up, an image of maybe a girl with a drink at hand and she’s running from or something or someone or maybe just facing what she doesn’t want to face. This is a powerful written poem here 🤴🥂✨
October 13th, 2025 06:09
Opposites attract
Lorenz said:
Icarus burns his wings.
Prometheus clings to his rock.
I prefer only to love my reflection
in Narcissus mirror ...
October 13th, 2025 05:17
Lorenz said:
Icarus burns his wings.
Prometheus clings to his rock.
I prefer only to love my reflection
in Narcissus mirror ...
October 13th, 2025 05:17
Sensitive
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we learn which way to go soren and hopefully will end in the right place which I seem to have done.
Andy
October 13th, 2025 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we learn which way to go soren and hopefully will end in the right place which I seem to have done.
Andy
October 13th, 2025 00:57
After the fall
KC said:
WHY ARE ALL UR POEMS SO GREAT, BEAUTIFUL, AND INTERESTING?????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 12th, 2025 22:51
KC said:
WHY ARE ALL UR POEMS SO GREAT, BEAUTIFUL, AND INTERESTING?????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 12th, 2025 22:51
Sensitive
Paul Bell said:
Sensitive souls don\'t stand a chance in this manic world.
In fact, even the strong are thrown under the bus now.
You can see why mental health is at pandemic levels now.
October 12th, 2025 14:51
Paul Bell said:
Sensitive souls don\'t stand a chance in this manic world.
In fact, even the strong are thrown under the bus now.
You can see why mental health is at pandemic levels now.
October 12th, 2025 14:51
Survival
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This has to be one of the best in philosophical reach and relevance. Strangely this one is hits home for being accessible. Accessible, yet elevated and poetic- a walk on knife edge.
October 12th, 2025 07:58
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This has to be one of the best in philosophical reach and relevance. Strangely this one is hits home for being accessible. Accessible, yet elevated and poetic- a walk on knife edge.
October 12th, 2025 07:58
Sensitive
Friendship said:
What a fascinating yet sensitive topic. I have a friend who I wish could gain insight into this! The poem \"Sensitive\" explores the fragility of sensitive individuals and their interactions with the world, portraying the challenges and dangers they face. It likens their sensitivity to volatile substances and delicate objects that require careful handling, emphasizing the importance of self-preservation and the potential risks involved in emotional vulnerability. Your poem raises awareness about the struggles of sensitive individuals, advocating for understanding and care in a world that often overlooks the fragility of human emotions. It encourages readers to consider the complexity of human experiences and the importance of nurturing sensitivity rather than disregarding it.
October 12th, 2025 07:01
Friendship said:
What a fascinating yet sensitive topic. I have a friend who I wish could gain insight into this! The poem \"Sensitive\" explores the fragility of sensitive individuals and their interactions with the world, portraying the challenges and dangers they face. It likens their sensitivity to volatile substances and delicate objects that require careful handling, emphasizing the importance of self-preservation and the potential risks involved in emotional vulnerability. Your poem raises awareness about the struggles of sensitive individuals, advocating for understanding and care in a world that often overlooks the fragility of human emotions. It encourages readers to consider the complexity of human experiences and the importance of nurturing sensitivity rather than disregarding it.
October 12th, 2025 07:01
Near sighted
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"thought painted home my defense\" an absolute masterstroke by a true master
October 12th, 2025 06:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"thought painted home my defense\" an absolute masterstroke by a true master
October 12th, 2025 06:34
Survival
gray0328 said:
suggests that collective survival requires suppressing personal creativity and uniqueness. It implies a trade-off between societal order and individual freedom. Well Done Brother
October 12th, 2025 05:46
gray0328 said:
suggests that collective survival requires suppressing personal creativity and uniqueness. It implies a trade-off between societal order and individual freedom. Well Done Brother
October 12th, 2025 05:46
Survival
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren but I don\'t think I will see it in my lifetime.
Andy
October 12th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren but I don\'t think I will see it in my lifetime.
Andy
October 12th, 2025 01:10
Survival
RSM0812 said:
This is a lesson for the learning mind. It evokes the way people should treat others and live in a better world of kindness and understanding.
October 11th, 2025 20:45
RSM0812 said:
This is a lesson for the learning mind. It evokes the way people should treat others and live in a better world of kindness and understanding.
October 11th, 2025 20:45
Survival
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful ethical dilemmas you pulled thought those lovely lines….a dialectics between utilitarian vs individualism….keep penning dear soren
October 11th, 2025 15:41
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful ethical dilemmas you pulled thought those lovely lines….a dialectics between utilitarian vs individualism….keep penning dear soren
October 11th, 2025 15:41
Survival
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love the way you started it and how you ended it. It conveys a very hard-to-accept message, but it\'s true. Nicely written, dude!
October 11th, 2025 14:32
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love the way you started it and how you ended it. It conveys a very hard-to-accept message, but it\'s true. Nicely written, dude!
October 11th, 2025 14:32
Survival
Lorenz said:
What is strong will become weak. This reminds me something : \'\' Who controls the present ...\'\'
October 11th, 2025 10:17
Lorenz said:
What is strong will become weak. This reminds me something : \'\' Who controls the present ...\'\'
October 11th, 2025 10:17
Near sighted
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always capturing my complete attention! Great write my friend!
October 11th, 2025 09:21
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always capturing my complete attention! Great write my friend!
October 11th, 2025 09:21
Near sighted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is piercing truth wrapped in quiet rhyme...the dream of home shadowed by the cost of looking away. You turned privilege into poetry, and it hits hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is piercing truth wrapped in quiet rhyme...the dream of home shadowed by the cost of looking away. You turned privilege into poetry, and it hits hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:37
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