Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Church, through the eyes of a child
Rin the Magnificent said:
Delightfully penned, Soren!
Thou captured what just could be a universal children\'s feature.
Excellent work, as per usuall!
November 5th, 2024 00:45
Rin the Magnificent said:
Delightfully penned, Soren!
Thou captured what just could be a universal children\'s feature.
Excellent work, as per usuall!
November 5th, 2024 00:45
Dance
NafisaSB said:
lovely write - i only hope none of the fellow poets have to suffer it - or even mankind in general
November 5th, 2024 00:35
NafisaSB said:
lovely write - i only hope none of the fellow poets have to suffer it - or even mankind in general
November 5th, 2024 00:35
Dance
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem
thought provoking i\'d say!! π€
That Tyburn Jig
I\'ll never do, no way JΕse!!π€£
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 4th, 2024 17:34
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem
thought provoking i\'d say!! π€
That Tyburn Jig
I\'ll never do, no way JΕse!!π€£
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 4th, 2024 17:34
Expectations
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
Wow, what great poem with a powerful message! Indeed societal expectations can weigh you down; and unmet expectations bring untold frustrations
November 4th, 2024 13:09
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
Wow, what great poem with a powerful message! Indeed societal expectations can weigh you down; and unmet expectations bring untold frustrations
November 4th, 2024 13:09
Dance
Lorenz said:
\"The public hangman dancing the tyburn jig !\'\'
Gruesom story that I have just discovered ...
November 4th, 2024 12:01
Lorenz said:
\"The public hangman dancing the tyburn jig !\'\'
Gruesom story that I have just discovered ...
November 4th, 2024 12:01
Dance
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Theres\' the hymn \'Lord of the dance\'. It\'s balanced, not that life is just some escapism of dance at every step - pun intended there! So olde writers speak of \'the dance of life\'.
November 4th, 2024 10:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Theres\' the hymn \'Lord of the dance\'. It\'s balanced, not that life is just some escapism of dance at every step - pun intended there! So olde writers speak of \'the dance of life\'.
November 4th, 2024 10:11
King of day queen of night
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, the sun and the moon bring such wonders to us.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, the sun and the moon bring such wonders to us.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:44
Bear
Thad Wilk said:
π€£π€£
After the first
5 lines I couldn\'t
\"BEAR IT\" π» I had to laugh!
π (No pun) ,ππ
Thanks fur sharing my friend!
Beast regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 3rd, 2024 19:43
Thad Wilk said:
π€£π€£
After the first
5 lines I couldn\'t
\"BEAR IT\" π» I had to laugh!
π (No pun) ,ππ
Thanks fur sharing my friend!
Beast regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 3rd, 2024 19:43
Birth of a poem
Ladywithaquill said:
Just the right inspiration to write about anything and everything!
November 3rd, 2024 19:15
Ladywithaquill said:
Just the right inspiration to write about anything and everything!
November 3rd, 2024 19:15
King of day queen of night
Lorenz said:
Some lines seem to come from the centuries of Nostradamus !
November 3rd, 2024 11:27
Lorenz said:
Some lines seem to come from the centuries of Nostradamus !
November 3rd, 2024 11:27
King of day queen of night
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem,
eye pleasing imagery!ππ
The rhyme, the metaphor,
woven wonderfully!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 3rd, 2024 11:09
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem,
eye pleasing imagery!ππ
The rhyme, the metaphor,
woven wonderfully!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 3rd, 2024 11:09
King of day queen of night
arqios said:
Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Donβt know enough of that science to calculate.
November 3rd, 2024 07:27
arqios said:
Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Donβt know enough of that science to calculate.
November 3rd, 2024 07:27
King of day queen of night
Teddy.15 said:
One of the finest ever nature poems I\'ve ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret πΉ
November 3rd, 2024 07:10
Teddy.15 said:
One of the finest ever nature poems I\'ve ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret πΉ
November 3rd, 2024 07:10
King of day queen of night
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting read soren. I like it. ππ
November 3rd, 2024 05:00
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting read soren. I like it. ππ
November 3rd, 2024 05:00
King of day queen of night
Neville said:
Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..
November 3rd, 2024 04:39
Neville said:
Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..
November 3rd, 2024 04:39
Birth of a poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:18
Birth of a poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!
November 3rd, 2024 01:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!
November 3rd, 2024 01:22
Birth of a poem
Dan Williams said:
Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. \"Born from mind\'s womb, words lost in menses\" sums that up nicely. Fine work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:38
Dan Williams said:
Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. \"Born from mind\'s womb, words lost in menses\" sums that up nicely. Fine work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:38
Birth of a poem
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! π
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! πππ
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 2nd, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! π
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! πππ
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 2nd, 2024 20:41
Birth of a poem
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi amigo
November 2nd, 2024 17:08
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi amigo
November 2nd, 2024 17:08
Birth of a poem
arqios said:
Wide is the poetβs scope and larger still is poetryβs reach!
November 2nd, 2024 08:21
arqios said:
Wide is the poetβs scope and larger still is poetryβs reach!
November 2nd, 2024 08:21
Birth of a poem
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.
Superbly crafter dear friend. πΉ
November 2nd, 2024 04:50
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.
Superbly crafter dear friend. πΉ
November 2nd, 2024 04:50
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