Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Used
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn gleeful disgust running through this, taking the ordinary fact of shared human life and pushing it into increasingly filthy, funny territory until you can’t look at “clean” the same way again. The rhyme and relentless accumulation are the engine, and that final “used spouse” lands like the punchline to the whole wonderfully gross argument.
September 22nd, 2026 07:22
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn gleeful disgust running through this, taking the ordinary fact of shared human life and pushing it into increasingly filthy, funny territory until you can’t look at “clean” the same way again. The rhyme and relentless accumulation are the engine, and that final “used spouse” lands like the punchline to the whole wonderfully gross argument.
September 22nd, 2026 07:22
Used
arqios said:
Second hand air is horrible, it’s humid and oftentimes moist and also could be texture and scent laden.
September 22nd, 2026 07:07
arqios said:
Second hand air is horrible, it’s humid and oftentimes moist and also could be texture and scent laden.
September 22nd, 2026 07:07
Too late
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful way of saying- too little done too late, or overlooked or ignored 😔
September 22nd, 2026 06:01
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful way of saying- too little done too late, or overlooked or ignored 😔
September 22nd, 2026 06:01
Used
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s it all about, mate - Complaint? Everything recycles - even me, who might well include parts of a once distant star...
September 22nd, 2026 04:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s it all about, mate - Complaint? Everything recycles - even me, who might well include parts of a once distant star...
September 22nd, 2026 04:26
Down hill
Goldfinch60 said:
That increase in power is shown so well in your words soren.
Andy
September 22nd, 2026 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
That increase in power is shown so well in your words soren.
Andy
September 22nd, 2026 00:53
Down hill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I felt this in my stomach. By the end, I was bracing for impact. Powerful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I felt this in my stomach. By the end, I was bracing for impact. Powerful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:13
Down hill
Kevin Hulme said:
A lot of Comments here associate this Poem with Cars , Bikes . On Reading my first thought was \'Falling in Love\'. Says a lot about a Person. Other People: Other Interpretations.
Good Write.
September 21st, 2026 06:17
Kevin Hulme said:
A lot of Comments here associate this Poem with Cars , Bikes . On Reading my first thought was \'Falling in Love\'. Says a lot about a Person. Other People: Other Interpretations.
Good Write.
September 21st, 2026 06:17
Down hill
arqios said:
A veritable feast for the eyes, the mind and heart. Good stuff Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 21st, 2026 05:51
arqios said:
A veritable feast for the eyes, the mind and heart. Good stuff Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 21st, 2026 05:51
Down hill
Paul Bell said:
This is why I drive a car, motorbikes always come off second best.
Mind you, now we have bicycles flying by at a rate of knots.
September 21st, 2026 04:44
Paul Bell said:
This is why I drive a car, motorbikes always come off second best.
Mind you, now we have bicycles flying by at a rate of knots.
September 21st, 2026 04:44
Down hill
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Finely spoken my friend, horse power building
September 21st, 2026 03:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Finely spoken my friend, horse power building
September 21st, 2026 03:37
Storm brewing
NafisaSB said:
sounds very much like the rains we have here..thankfully the rainy season is ending though, and the warm days are making their way back
September 21st, 2026 01:53
NafisaSB said:
sounds very much like the rains we have here..thankfully the rainy season is ending though, and the warm days are making their way back
September 21st, 2026 01:53
Storm brewing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those drops may fall soren but skin is waterproof.
Andy
September 21st, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those drops may fall soren but skin is waterproof.
Andy
September 21st, 2026 01:47
Storm brewing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now I want a dark porch, a chair, and a hard rain, Soren. Loved this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now I want a dark porch, a chair, and a hard rain, Soren. Loved this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:50
Storm brewing
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes there\'s Something about the Wind picking-up and the Black Clouds looming.
Fine discriptive write.
September 20th, 2026 10:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes there\'s Something about the Wind picking-up and the Black Clouds looming.
Fine discriptive write.
September 20th, 2026 10:31
Storm brewing
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I heard a crash in the kitchen - KP smashing plates, bored with sewage every day. lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I heard a crash in the kitchen - KP smashing plates, bored with sewage every day. lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:34
Awaiting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love when death gets stripped of all its grandeur and becomes something almost absurdly ordinary. In fact, it is obsurdly ordinary. This one was right up my dark little alley. Loved it lots, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love when death gets stripped of all its grandeur and becomes something almost absurdly ordinary. In fact, it is obsurdly ordinary. This one was right up my dark little alley. Loved it lots, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:45
Awaiting
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP awaits eagerly (?) her next helping of sewage, dished up by me! lol. Well, I tell her it\'s got lots of protein in it. Dunno why she complains, while Fido and I have roast dinners. lol.
September 19th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP awaits eagerly (?) her next helping of sewage, dished up by me! lol. Well, I tell her it\'s got lots of protein in it. Dunno why she complains, while Fido and I have roast dinners. lol.
September 19th, 2026 09:57
Awaiting
Friendship said:
Your poem portrays the emotional state of a host waiting for a visitor (death) that has been delayed, reflecting the tension between hope and resignation.
September 19th, 2026 09:12
Friendship said:
Your poem portrays the emotional state of a host waiting for a visitor (death) that has been delayed, reflecting the tension between hope and resignation.
September 19th, 2026 09:12
Awaiting
arqios said:
Having lived with elders two generations up have brought such feelings and intersections. Sometimes I sit at a table and part of me waits... for them that have gone and for my own passing on.
September 19th, 2026 07:30
arqios said:
Having lived with elders two generations up have brought such feelings and intersections. Sometimes I sit at a table and part of me waits... for them that have gone and for my own passing on.
September 19th, 2026 07:30
Awaiting
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we are all waiting. The Kettle is on.
Tea Cups laid out. No message in my inbox.
But he\'s a busy Man . Probably in Traffic.
A fine write here and a fave.
September 19th, 2026 07:23
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we are all waiting. The Kettle is on.
Tea Cups laid out. No message in my inbox.
But he\'s a busy Man . Probably in Traffic.
A fine write here and a fave.
September 19th, 2026 07:23
Awaiting
Paul Bell said:
Some appointments you don\'t want to keep, but you know at some point you will.
Sadly we all pay the piper in the end.
September 19th, 2026 06:22
Paul Bell said:
Some appointments you don\'t want to keep, but you know at some point you will.
Sadly we all pay the piper in the end.
September 19th, 2026 06:22
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