Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Thief, priest and engineer
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
Be as
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
The garden
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
The garden
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
The garden
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
The garden
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
Be as
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Be as
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Be as
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
Be as
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
Be as
Paul Bell said:
The elixir of life, worth more than gold in hot countries.
One drop found in faraway planets, man will be there exploiting it.
You can see why nature unleashes it now and again.
November 4th, 2025 05:07
Paul Bell said:
The elixir of life, worth more than gold in hot countries.
One drop found in faraway planets, man will be there exploiting it.
You can see why nature unleashes it now and again.
November 4th, 2025 05:07
Be as
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Water\'s far too important to give to KP. She can have the sewage water! lol. I\'m still \'orrible to her. heehee.
November 4th, 2025 04:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Water\'s far too important to give to KP. She can have the sewage water! lol. I\'m still \'orrible to her. heehee.
November 4th, 2025 04:55
Thief, priest and engineer
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, being saved from death is the way to go.
Andy
November 4th, 2025 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, being saved from death is the way to go.
Andy
November 4th, 2025 02:08
Thief, priest and engineer
NinjaGirl said:
Ha, ha! I love it, my attention was immediately captured by the \"engineer\" portion and I\'m so glad I decided to read it!
November 3rd, 2025 22:49
NinjaGirl said:
Ha, ha! I love it, my attention was immediately captured by the \"engineer\" portion and I\'m so glad I decided to read it!
November 3rd, 2025 22:49
Thief, priest and engineer
Bella Shepard said:
Leave it to the engineer to have to fix the problem no matter the outcome. A very clever, and darkly humorous write my friend, in perfect rhyme.
November 3rd, 2025 15:32
Bella Shepard said:
Leave it to the engineer to have to fix the problem no matter the outcome. A very clever, and darkly humorous write my friend, in perfect rhyme.
November 3rd, 2025 15:32
Thief, priest and engineer
Paul Bell said:
Where is an engineer when you want one.
Mind you, we\'re all engineers now.
But it\'s nice to know the guillotine has now been greased, and the next poor chap will be in the basket.
November 3rd, 2025 14:24
Paul Bell said:
Where is an engineer when you want one.
Mind you, we\'re all engineers now.
But it\'s nice to know the guillotine has now been greased, and the next poor chap will be in the basket.
November 3rd, 2025 14:24
Thief, priest and engineer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hums with gallows humor and precision craftsmanship. A parable, a joke, and a history lesson all at once…executed flawlessly, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 13:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hums with gallows humor and precision craftsmanship. A parable, a joke, and a history lesson all at once…executed flawlessly, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 13:27
Goodbye
Settes said:
I really liked your poem. I share your feeling. I felt exactly the same when I lost a friend who was diagnosed with cancel.
November 3rd, 2025 10:24
Settes said:
I really liked your poem. I share your feeling. I felt exactly the same when I lost a friend who was diagnosed with cancel.
November 3rd, 2025 10:24
Near sighted
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Great words. This shows the hubris of only maintaining the home since nothing has yet to hit the doorstep or infiltrate past the white picket fence. Great poem!
November 3rd, 2025 09:59
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Great words. This shows the hubris of only maintaining the home since nothing has yet to hit the doorstep or infiltrate past the white picket fence. Great poem!
November 3rd, 2025 09:59
Solo climbing
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Solo climbing is by no means easy. A very well written piece
November 3rd, 2025 09:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Solo climbing is by no means easy. A very well written piece
November 3rd, 2025 09:56
Thief, priest and engineer
Aman 12 said:
death turned into a punchline. Felt like a mechanical parable.
November 3rd, 2025 07:24
Aman 12 said:
death turned into a punchline. Felt like a mechanical parable.
November 3rd, 2025 07:24
Thief, priest and engineer
Victor Bolshov said:
Oh! Oh!! Beautiful!
As a physicist by education and an engineer by occupation, I have to say:
Warheads and bombs, measured in megatons, for all I know, can be on their way.
Is it the engineers? Or he who rules and steers - to be blamed for this final dismay?
November 3rd, 2025 04:44
Victor Bolshov said:
Oh! Oh!! Beautiful!
As a physicist by education and an engineer by occupation, I have to say:
Warheads and bombs, measured in megatons, for all I know, can be on their way.
Is it the engineers? Or he who rules and steers - to be blamed for this final dismay?
November 3rd, 2025 04:44
What you want
KC said:
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November 3rd, 2025 04:43
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November 3rd, 2025 04:43
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