Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Before we knew better
Tony Grannell said:
A truely delightful little verse, petite in its innocence, as if written by a child, so convincing its wholeheartedness. Just lovely.
All the best,
Tony.
May 10th, 2025 07:32
Tony Grannell said:
A truely delightful little verse, petite in its innocence, as if written by a child, so convincing its wholeheartedness. Just lovely.
All the best,
Tony.
May 10th, 2025 07:32
Before we knew better
John Prophet said:
Innocence lost… so true. Well said.
John
May 10th, 2025 06:15
John Prophet said:
Innocence lost… so true. Well said.
John
May 10th, 2025 06:15
Before we knew better
arqios said:
Should we come closer to our centre- the truest part of our pure selves we shall wield such power again! 🕊🙏🏻
May 10th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
Should we come closer to our centre- the truest part of our pure selves we shall wield such power again! 🕊🙏🏻
May 10th, 2025 05:46
Before we knew better
TTEUK said:
Well written, this brought me joy on an empty morning. I remember those days well.
May 10th, 2025 04:58
TTEUK said:
Well written, this brought me joy on an empty morning. I remember those days well.
May 10th, 2025 04:58
Before we knew better
David Wakeling said:
i sometimes long for those days of childhood when wishing made it so,This is a wonderful trip down memory lane. Well done mi amigo
May 10th, 2025 04:34
David Wakeling said:
i sometimes long for those days of childhood when wishing made it so,This is a wonderful trip down memory lane. Well done mi amigo
May 10th, 2025 04:34
Before we knew better
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, if only we could maintain that childs view as we get older, wouldn\'t the world be a better place, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 04:12
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, if only we could maintain that childs view as we get older, wouldn\'t the world be a better place, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 04:12
Seasons pass
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - what a wonderful way to describe the passing seasons..enjoyed the comparisons.
May 10th, 2025 03:19
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - what a wonderful way to describe the passing seasons..enjoyed the comparisons.
May 10th, 2025 03:19
When the east wind cries
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, I was absolutely intrigued by them.
Andy
May 10th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, I was absolutely intrigued by them.
Andy
May 10th, 2025 01:18
Broken toys
Jeremy Leach said:
Very nicely written and a relatable theme. I love the imagery through those child\'s eyes. My kind of poem. Can\'t help thinking of Supertramp\'s Logical song but don\'t want to detract from your work here.
May 10th, 2025 00:35
Jeremy Leach said:
Very nicely written and a relatable theme. I love the imagery through those child\'s eyes. My kind of poem. Can\'t help thinking of Supertramp\'s Logical song but don\'t want to detract from your work here.
May 10th, 2025 00:35
When the east wind cries
Dan Williams said:
This is just genius. Those Aztecs were quite serious people and you have nailed the heart of it. Wonderful.
May 9th, 2025 22:15
Dan Williams said:
This is just genius. Those Aztecs were quite serious people and you have nailed the heart of it. Wonderful.
May 9th, 2025 22:15
Too many
Dan Williams said:
I guess this is about the shortest can be made of the human condition. I am so glad there is someone else who sees things as I do. Amen.
May 9th, 2025 22:11
Dan Williams said:
I guess this is about the shortest can be made of the human condition. I am so glad there is someone else who sees things as I do. Amen.
May 9th, 2025 22:11
When the east wind cries
Friendship said:
The poem masterfully weaves together threads of Aztec mythology, illuminating deities such as Tezcatlipoca (the god of the night sky and conflict), Tlaloc (the rain god), and Xipe Totec (the god of agricultural renewal). It celebrates the profound cultural significance of corn in Mesoamerican societies, where it was not only a staple food but also a vibrant symbol of life and fertility. The themes of sacrifice and rebirth are beautifully intertwined with agricultural cycles, making the poem profoundly relevant in exploring the intricate relationship between humans and nature. The poem\'s thoughtful exploration of these themes resonates deeply with contemporary discussions on sustainability and the cyclical nature of life. The exact historical context is not specified, but it evokes traditional narratives that have been passed down through generations, likely reflecting ancient practices and beliefs.
May 9th, 2025 14:16
Friendship said:
The poem masterfully weaves together threads of Aztec mythology, illuminating deities such as Tezcatlipoca (the god of the night sky and conflict), Tlaloc (the rain god), and Xipe Totec (the god of agricultural renewal). It celebrates the profound cultural significance of corn in Mesoamerican societies, where it was not only a staple food but also a vibrant symbol of life and fertility. The themes of sacrifice and rebirth are beautifully intertwined with agricultural cycles, making the poem profoundly relevant in exploring the intricate relationship between humans and nature. The poem\'s thoughtful exploration of these themes resonates deeply with contemporary discussions on sustainability and the cyclical nature of life. The exact historical context is not specified, but it evokes traditional narratives that have been passed down through generations, likely reflecting ancient practices and beliefs.
May 9th, 2025 14:16
When the east wind cries
Tony Grannell said:
A most intriguing poem that has roused further investigating into the culture of the Aztecs. I know of the Aztecs through Spanish history. How Cortes destroyed most everything including their great library, as horrendous as the destruction of the library in ancient Alexandria. Your knowledge beams bright in every line as does your poetic acumen. A very interesting and well composed passage of poetry.
All the best,
Tony.
May 9th, 2025 10:49
Tony Grannell said:
A most intriguing poem that has roused further investigating into the culture of the Aztecs. I know of the Aztecs through Spanish history. How Cortes destroyed most everything including their great library, as horrendous as the destruction of the library in ancient Alexandria. Your knowledge beams bright in every line as does your poetic acumen. A very interesting and well composed passage of poetry.
All the best,
Tony.
May 9th, 2025 10:49
When the east wind cries
Lorenz said:
Reminiscent of the film \'\'apocalypto\'\' ! A civilization of cruel greatness !
May 9th, 2025 10:20
Lorenz said:
Reminiscent of the film \'\'apocalypto\'\' ! A civilization of cruel greatness !
May 9th, 2025 10:20
When the east wind cries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to love learning about the Aztecs and remember Tezcaltipoca. A fantastic and rich poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to love learning about the Aztecs and remember Tezcaltipoca. A fantastic and rich poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:23
Too many
NafisaSB said:
I agree wholeheartedly with your views and hope that there is a change for the better in future
May 9th, 2025 07:57
NafisaSB said:
I agree wholeheartedly with your views and hope that there is a change for the better in future
May 9th, 2025 07:57
Too many
RSM0812 said:
That\'s a lot of rhyming words. Lol. Your a hell of an artist Sorrenbarett.
May 9th, 2025 07:44
RSM0812 said:
That\'s a lot of rhyming words. Lol. Your a hell of an artist Sorrenbarett.
May 9th, 2025 07:44
Too many
Neilton said:
impressed !! you described a very sad reality in the best way possible
May 9th, 2025 07:21
Neilton said:
impressed !! you described a very sad reality in the best way possible
May 9th, 2025 07:21
When the east wind cries
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I would consider getting laid before Spring.
May 9th, 2025 06:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I would consider getting laid before Spring.
May 9th, 2025 06:36
When the east wind cries
Poetic Licence said:
I am thankful for the author\'s notes otherwise I would not have a clue, enjoyed the read and liked the layout
May 9th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
I am thankful for the author\'s notes otherwise I would not have a clue, enjoyed the read and liked the layout
May 9th, 2025 06:18
When the east wind cries
arqios said:
It was this type of take that drew me in as a child and the needing to know was so great that kept the lore despite the gore🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 06:07
arqios said:
It was this type of take that drew me in as a child and the needing to know was so great that kept the lore despite the gore🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 06:07
When the east wind cries
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing fable inspired by the Aztecs. Very enjoyable read. Excellent rhyme scheme as well
May 9th, 2025 05:08
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing fable inspired by the Aztecs. Very enjoyable read. Excellent rhyme scheme as well
May 9th, 2025 05:08
When the east wind cries
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful title that has set the scene for another magnificent poem. 🌹
May 9th, 2025 04:49
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful title that has set the scene for another magnificent poem. 🌹
May 9th, 2025 04:49
Too many
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren but it is also due to those who have the power to change things for the better but only want what is in it for them.
Andy
May 9th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren but it is also due to those who have the power to change things for the better but only want what is in it for them.
Andy
May 9th, 2025 01:16
Too many
Thoughter said:
rlly luv it, describe life n especially our failed society
May 8th, 2025 19:30
Thoughter said:
rlly luv it, describe life n especially our failed society
May 8th, 2025 19:30
Too many
David Wakeling said:
Okay now that is a list that some up the human condition. A powerful poem of all the problems in the world.Excellent
May 8th, 2025 16:36
David Wakeling said:
Okay now that is a list that some up the human condition. A powerful poem of all the problems in the world.Excellent
May 8th, 2025 16:36
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