Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Night wanderers
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful imagery evident here as ever Soren....right up my street, so to speak!
January 18th, 2026 07:39
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful imagery evident here as ever Soren....right up my street, so to speak!
January 18th, 2026 07:39
Night wanderers
Soman Ragavan said:
Watching fireflies must be an impressive sight. The poet captures the sight and sets it in poetry. It\'s a sight made of dreams. It symbolises the transience of life, since we know the time is limited. Dawn will make the sight vanish.
January 18th, 2026 05:54
Soman Ragavan said:
Watching fireflies must be an impressive sight. The poet captures the sight and sets it in poetry. It\'s a sight made of dreams. It symbolises the transience of life, since we know the time is limited. Dawn will make the sight vanish.
January 18th, 2026 05:54
Night wanderers
Katie B. said:
Beautiful tale of the life of a firefly. It brings more joy than once imagined in your poem.
Love it. A fave.
January 18th, 2026 05:12
Katie B. said:
Beautiful tale of the life of a firefly. It brings more joy than once imagined in your poem.
Love it. A fave.
January 18th, 2026 05:12
Steam engine
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write soren, many thoughts come to mind. LOL
Andy
January 18th, 2026 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write soren, many thoughts come to mind. LOL
Andy
January 18th, 2026 02:46
Too full for dessert
xTattooingPaperx said:
Only the taste of memory remains... This is the most poetic metaphor I\'ve read I think. Pain shouldn\'t be beautiful, but you wrote it that way.
January 17th, 2026 23:00
xTattooingPaperx said:
Only the taste of memory remains... This is the most poetic metaphor I\'ve read I think. Pain shouldn\'t be beautiful, but you wrote it that way.
January 17th, 2026 23:00
Did you know it\'s all true
DLewis88 said:
This is a wonderful and well-written poem. Our society has become overly reliant on technology.
January 17th, 2026 19:27
DLewis88 said:
This is a wonderful and well-written poem. Our society has become overly reliant on technology.
January 17th, 2026 19:27
Where is Santa? Does God know?
cellinic said:
very deep emotional and topical, both from the point of view of poetic sense and philosophy
January 17th, 2026 17:38
cellinic said:
very deep emotional and topical, both from the point of view of poetic sense and philosophy
January 17th, 2026 17:38
Steam engine
Allie561 said:
Great work Soren. This was a nice poem to wake up to as it’s a little humorous. Nonetheless the rhyming and descriptive words are on point, nice job.
January 17th, 2026 12:43
Allie561 said:
Great work Soren. This was a nice poem to wake up to as it’s a little humorous. Nonetheless the rhyming and descriptive words are on point, nice job.
January 17th, 2026 12:43
Steam engine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is bold and unapologetic. The rhythm drives hard, relentless, and playful all at once. It knows exactly what it’s doing and leans into it without flinching. That confidence carries the whole piece. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 17th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is bold and unapologetic. The rhythm drives hard, relentless, and playful all at once. It knows exactly what it’s doing and leans into it without flinching. That confidence carries the whole piece. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 17th, 2026 09:19
Steam engine
arqios said:
Love the adventure, quirky but gets you to where you’re going 🕊️🙏🏻
January 17th, 2026 06:51
arqios said:
Love the adventure, quirky but gets you to where you’re going 🕊️🙏🏻
January 17th, 2026 06:51
Steam engine
Paul Bell said:
People still hanker for steam engines in Britain, and the resurgence is brilliant.
You can feel steam at work, and no doubt, Smokey Mary put you through your paces, and you probably cursed a few times.
Now it\'s all comfort and no joy in trains.
January 17th, 2026 06:03
Paul Bell said:
People still hanker for steam engines in Britain, and the resurgence is brilliant.
You can feel steam at work, and no doubt, Smokey Mary put you through your paces, and you probably cursed a few times.
Now it\'s all comfort and no joy in trains.
January 17th, 2026 06:03
Steam engine
Teddy.15 said:
Now that is certainly a passionate way of writing about a locomotive my dear sorrenbarret 🔥 very clever and I did have a chuckle at your genius tease. 🌹
January 17th, 2026 05:32
Teddy.15 said:
Now that is certainly a passionate way of writing about a locomotive my dear sorrenbarret 🔥 very clever and I did have a chuckle at your genius tease. 🌹
January 17th, 2026 05:32
The train
Goldfinch60 said:
We all travel that path of life soren and we have both good and bad journeys, hopefully most are good,
Andy
January 17th, 2026 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
We all travel that path of life soren and we have both good and bad journeys, hopefully most are good,
Andy
January 17th, 2026 02:45
The train
arqios said:
Reminds me of that coach with night mares , was it the segment of the spirit of Christmas Future? I\'ve taken to writing with pen and paper before bed for anywhere between quarter of an hour to half an hour just to unburden my mind of the days input and (over) stimuli. Hope all is well your way. 🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:34
arqios said:
Reminds me of that coach with night mares , was it the segment of the spirit of Christmas Future? I\'ve taken to writing with pen and paper before bed for anywhere between quarter of an hour to half an hour just to unburden my mind of the days input and (over) stimuli. Hope all is well your way. 🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:34
The train
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. Time as motion, memory as shadow, life as something witnessed rather than steered. The descent into darkness and sleep closes the loop perfectly. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 21:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. Time as motion, memory as shadow, life as something witnessed rather than steered. The descent into darkness and sleep closes the loop perfectly. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 21:12
Gestation
Durdica Porobija said:
A metaphysical poem about the closeness of nature, mythology, religion and poetry...
January 16th, 2026 10:33
Durdica Porobija said:
A metaphysical poem about the closeness of nature, mythology, religion and poetry...
January 16th, 2026 10:33
Perfection
Durdica Porobija said:
A metapoetic poem with the thesis that it is impossible to record a perfect poem in the human heart and mind. Does this mean that language is imperfect and that emotions are unattainable?
January 16th, 2026 10:19
Durdica Porobija said:
A metapoetic poem with the thesis that it is impossible to record a perfect poem in the human heart and mind. Does this mean that language is imperfect and that emotions are unattainable?
January 16th, 2026 10:19
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Durdica Porobija said:
Very strong and emotional point.
January 16th, 2026 10:10
Durdica Porobija said:
Very strong and emotional point.
January 16th, 2026 10:10
The train
Allie561 said:
I liked how the train seems to symbolize life. We pass by different monuments from time to time but we can’t stop the train to get out and look around. A very good write.
January 16th, 2026 09:33
Allie561 said:
I liked how the train seems to symbolize life. We pass by different monuments from time to time but we can’t stop the train to get out and look around. A very good write.
January 16th, 2026 09:33
The train
Lorenz said:
Asleep in a waking illusion or perhaps its opposite ?
The train takes us towards the end ...
January 16th, 2026 09:10
Lorenz said:
Asleep in a waking illusion or perhaps its opposite ?
The train takes us towards the end ...
January 16th, 2026 09:10
The train
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We travel...\" Indeed, Man is a wanderer by nature. This explains why continents and seas were explored. \"Images pass...\" : the illusion that it is the scene outside that is moving, when in fact it is our train which is the one moving... Man is restless, he has got to travel and poets are the ones who record those wanderings.
January 16th, 2026 07:52
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We travel...\" Indeed, Man is a wanderer by nature. This explains why continents and seas were explored. \"Images pass...\" : the illusion that it is the scene outside that is moving, when in fact it is our train which is the one moving... Man is restless, he has got to travel and poets are the ones who record those wanderings.
January 16th, 2026 07:52
The train
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write...you really capture the mood of the train journey here.
January 16th, 2026 04:53
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write...you really capture the mood of the train journey here.
January 16th, 2026 04:53
The train
Paul Bell said:
This is dark and depressing and spot on.
You can fly to the moon and the earth looks great, but in reality we\'re dying in our own filth.
January 16th, 2026 04:31
Paul Bell said:
This is dark and depressing and spot on.
You can fly to the moon and the earth looks great, but in reality we\'re dying in our own filth.
January 16th, 2026 04:31
The train
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Leaves on the train line?! Not getting anywhere?
January 16th, 2026 03:35
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Leaves on the train line?! Not getting anywhere?
January 16th, 2026 03:35
Too full for dessert
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I am sure that dessert will always be there for you.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I am sure that dessert will always be there for you.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:44
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