Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Thanatos night visitor
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Thanatos night visitor
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
Thanatos night visitor
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
Thanatos night visitor
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
Thanatos night visitor
Neville said:
Be careful what you wish for .. is something my parents taught me long ago & I am still a great believer in .. not because I am either this or that .. but because I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to put all my eggs in the same frying pan .. Still very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:32
Neville said:
Be careful what you wish for .. is something my parents taught me long ago & I am still a great believer in .. not because I am either this or that .. but because I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to put all my eggs in the same frying pan .. Still very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:32
Thanatos night visitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This theme is just so foreign to me, I am not sure what to say. 🤷♂️🤣 All kidding aside, well done on this, Soren. This, my friend, is a poignant meditation on mortality, with vivid imagery that contrasts light and darkness. Mortality and the swift passage of time are well thought out in this piece. I love how you\'ve captured life’s brevity so creatively, where a single night’s sleep transforms a child into an old man. Hauntingly beautiful poetic exposé on one of the most universal experiences to not just humanity, but all of life. Well done. 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This theme is just so foreign to me, I am not sure what to say. 🤷♂️🤣 All kidding aside, well done on this, Soren. This, my friend, is a poignant meditation on mortality, with vivid imagery that contrasts light and darkness. Mortality and the swift passage of time are well thought out in this piece. I love how you\'ve captured life’s brevity so creatively, where a single night’s sleep transforms a child into an old man. Hauntingly beautiful poetic exposé on one of the most universal experiences to not just humanity, but all of life. Well done. 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:32
Thanatos night visitor
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful writ around the visitor of death, I wouldn\'t mind which way i die violent or gentle, just as long as its quick, great write
March 13th, 2025 06:52
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful writ around the visitor of death, I wouldn\'t mind which way i die violent or gentle, just as long as its quick, great write
March 13th, 2025 06:52
Thanatos night visitor
arqios said:
Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:37
Thanatos night visitor
David Wakeling said:
This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo
March 13th, 2025 04:53
David Wakeling said:
This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo
March 13th, 2025 04:53
Thanatos night visitor
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified, as I\'ve lost many loved ones at a young age I truly dig deep and reflect on death in all its glory, before 1974 I believe I was in fact dead, because I wasn\'t alive, I know this will make sense to you because you know me well, I don\'t believe we should live in fear of death, because it is a natural cycle of the gift of life, none can escape it in the end. Stunning poem my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 13th, 2025 04:37
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified, as I\'ve lost many loved ones at a young age I truly dig deep and reflect on death in all its glory, before 1974 I believe I was in fact dead, because I wasn\'t alive, I know this will make sense to you because you know me well, I don\'t believe we should live in fear of death, because it is a natural cycle of the gift of life, none can escape it in the end. Stunning poem my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 13th, 2025 04:37
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Tom Dylan said:
This really packed a punch. Modern life in a nutshell. A fine, thought-provoking piece.
March 13th, 2025 03:28
Tom Dylan said:
This really packed a punch. Modern life in a nutshell. A fine, thought-provoking piece.
March 13th, 2025 03:28
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren but luckily I think outside the box and have reality in my life.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren but luckily I think outside the box and have reality in my life.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:43
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a mess! Is planet Earth a dumping ground for all the basket cases of the Universe?! Wait a minute, I\'m here too!!
March 12th, 2025 18:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a mess! Is planet Earth a dumping ground for all the basket cases of the Universe?! Wait a minute, I\'m here too!!
March 12th, 2025 18:37
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
arqios said:
So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 17:36
arqios said:
So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 17:36
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Sorrenbarret, you have hit so many of the sore points in which I dislike about our world, who would have ever thought these things up 30 years ago? I\'m glad I was born in the 70\'s I have seen a lot of wonderful things but also a lot I wish I hadn\'t. 🌹 Brilliant ❤️ some days I would definitely return my husband lol 🤣
March 12th, 2025 16:59
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Sorrenbarret, you have hit so many of the sore points in which I dislike about our world, who would have ever thought these things up 30 years ago? I\'m glad I was born in the 70\'s I have seen a lot of wonderful things but also a lot I wish I hadn\'t. 🌹 Brilliant ❤️ some days I would definitely return my husband lol 🤣
March 12th, 2025 16:59
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, SB.
No thanks, One mother and one wife
I have found it to be enough.
March 12th, 2025 12:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, SB.
No thanks, One mother and one wife
I have found it to be enough.
March 12th, 2025 12:55
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
When you write it like that, you realise how much of the modern is fake, entertaining and enjoyable read
March 12th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
When you write it like that, you realise how much of the modern is fake, entertaining and enjoyable read
March 12th, 2025 07:56
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, Soren, gets a fave for so many different reasons, starting with the rhyming title! LOL! Love it. Seriously though, if a poem could encapsulate today\'s issues, bury them up and come back to them later in time, this would be a PERFECT time capsule of where we are right now. What more can be said other than well done! Oh...yes...Bravo! 🌹🌹👏👏
March 12th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, Soren, gets a fave for so many different reasons, starting with the rhyming title! LOL! Love it. Seriously though, if a poem could encapsulate today\'s issues, bury them up and come back to them later in time, this would be a PERFECT time capsule of where we are right now. What more can be said other than well done! Oh...yes...Bravo! 🌹🌹👏👏
March 12th, 2025 07:52
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Salvia.S said:
Amazing insight into modern society. Brilliantly written!
March 12th, 2025 06:50
Salvia.S said:
Amazing insight into modern society. Brilliantly written!
March 12th, 2025 06:50
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Friendship said:
Your poem paints vivid pictures of modern life and its artificial elements, allowing readers to visualize the stark contrasts between authenticity and imitation.
March 12th, 2025 05:42
Friendship said:
Your poem paints vivid pictures of modern life and its artificial elements, allowing readers to visualize the stark contrasts between authenticity and imitation.
March 12th, 2025 05:42
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
David Wakeling said:
This is brillant.It sums up the despair that is felt with the way the modern world is. I was more of a throw away husband but the feeling is the same.Well written
March 12th, 2025 05:15
David Wakeling said:
This is brillant.It sums up the despair that is felt with the way the modern world is. I was more of a throw away husband but the feeling is the same.Well written
March 12th, 2025 05:15
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I must order another wife. Hope they don\'t send me someone worse than KP. lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I must order another wife. Hope they don\'t send me someone worse than KP. lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:10
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
The whole pome was great...but that last line made it for me. A fantastic ending indeed. Really makes it all sink it. Well done! 🌹
March 11th, 2025 13:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The whole pome was great...but that last line made it for me. A fantastic ending indeed. Really makes it all sink it. Well done! 🌹
March 11th, 2025 13:47
In school
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I know what you mean.
When I was in School, History was just about the Romans in Britain: Nothing else . It was only when I left I read History books and discovered more .
Teachers can be a bit ‘One Sided’ in matters. Good Write.
March 11th, 2025 10:25
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I know what you mean.
When I was in School, History was just about the Romans in Britain: Nothing else . It was only when I left I read History books and discovered more .
Teachers can be a bit ‘One Sided’ in matters. Good Write.
March 11th, 2025 10:25
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Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write, Soren. Had to read this twice to get my head around it. Nicely done!
March 11th, 2025 09:58
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write, Soren. Had to read this twice to get my head around it. Nicely done!
March 11th, 2025 09:58
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Neville said:
Kids eh\' who would have em .. but then, where would we all be without them .. a fun riddle .. some of us just can\'t win .. can we
March 11th, 2025 08:06
Neville said:
Kids eh\' who would have em .. but then, where would we all be without them .. a fun riddle .. some of us just can\'t win .. can we
March 11th, 2025 08:06
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