Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Degrees
Friendship said:
The poem “Degrees” explores the nuances of perception and the ambiguity of definitions in human behavior and experiences. It challenges the reader to consider the fluidity of concepts such as emotions, actions, and states of being, suggesting that many things exist on a spectrum rather than in binary categories.
September 24th, 2025 13:55
Friendship said:
The poem “Degrees” explores the nuances of perception and the ambiguity of definitions in human behavior and experiences. It challenges the reader to consider the fluidity of concepts such as emotions, actions, and states of being, suggesting that many things exist on a spectrum rather than in binary categories.
September 24th, 2025 13:55
Degrees
orchidee said:
A hair\'s breadth between normality and insanity? I cross the line (or that hair\'s breadth) each day, married to KP! heehee. It\'s only Fido that keeps me sane. lol
September 24th, 2025 10:33
orchidee said:
A hair\'s breadth between normality and insanity? I cross the line (or that hair\'s breadth) each day, married to KP! heehee. It\'s only Fido that keeps me sane. lol
September 24th, 2025 10:33
Degrees
Lorenz said:
\" A psychopath lovingly petting a dog ? \'\' This sentence intrigues me because it resonates with my text of today !
September 24th, 2025 09:17
Lorenz said:
\" A psychopath lovingly petting a dog ? \'\' This sentence intrigues me because it resonates with my text of today !
September 24th, 2025 09:17
Degrees
Keyara S Trotman said:
To infinity and beyond!!!! My dear Soren 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🥂✨
September 24th, 2025 07:35
Keyara S Trotman said:
To infinity and beyond!!!! My dear Soren 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🥂✨
September 24th, 2025 07:35
Degrees
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this spins with sharp tension…the questions stack until they blur, and you’re left holding the edge of it all. Stark and thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this spins with sharp tension…the questions stack until they blur, and you’re left holding the edge of it all. Stark and thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:18
Degrees
Paul Bell said:
As bob said, the times they are a changing.
Two seconds is a glance, 5 seconds is leering the judge informed him, jailing him for ten years.
When did the world go mad.
September 24th, 2025 04:44
Paul Bell said:
As bob said, the times they are a changing.
Two seconds is a glance, 5 seconds is leering the judge informed him, jailing him for ten years.
When did the world go mad.
September 24th, 2025 04:44
Ghosts
Goldfinch60 said:
Changes come in many ways soren and we can see them all.
Andy
September 24th, 2025 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Changes come in many ways soren and we can see them all.
Andy
September 24th, 2025 01:41
Ghosts
Paul Bell said:
This reminds me of the guy who lived at the bottom of my street. His garden was like a flower show, his pride and joy.
Then he died, and in time the weeds enveloped the garden, eventually killing it too.
He left his mark, cos I can still see it.
September 23rd, 2025 14:13
Paul Bell said:
This reminds me of the guy who lived at the bottom of my street. His garden was like a flower show, his pride and joy.
Then he died, and in time the weeds enveloped the garden, eventually killing it too.
He left his mark, cos I can still see it.
September 23rd, 2025 14:13
Ghosts
Teddy.15 said:
And what a way to bring in the autumn, wow, wonderful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 23rd, 2025 13:15
Teddy.15 said:
And what a way to bring in the autumn, wow, wonderful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 23rd, 2025 13:15
Ghosts
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem, \"Ghosts,\" explores the transient nature of existence, highlighting how moments, like smoke and shadows, come and go, leaving behind a cycle of growth and change. It reflects on the inevitability of time\'s passage and the way new beginnings arise from decay.
September 23rd, 2025 07:51
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem, \"Ghosts,\" explores the transient nature of existence, highlighting how moments, like smoke and shadows, come and go, leaving behind a cycle of growth and change. It reflects on the inevitability of time\'s passage and the way new beginnings arise from decay.
September 23rd, 2025 07:51
Ghosts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ghosts we are, indeed. Like wisps of clouds remnants...here one moment, then scattered like rain in the ground, buried, absorbed...forgotten. What about history? Eventually even that will be forgotten one day when humanity ceases to exist. Nothing lasts forever, not even memory. Thus, in some ways, we are ghosts now, haunting our abodes and other lives for a time...only to be gone. At least, that is what I get out of this short, but brilliantly metaphorical poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ghosts we are, indeed. Like wisps of clouds remnants...here one moment, then scattered like rain in the ground, buried, absorbed...forgotten. What about history? Eventually even that will be forgotten one day when humanity ceases to exist. Nothing lasts forever, not even memory. Thus, in some ways, we are ghosts now, haunting our abodes and other lives for a time...only to be gone. At least, that is what I get out of this short, but brilliantly metaphorical poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:46
Ghosts
arqios said:
I may be misreading this, but I love the last line; about leaving no scar or no mark. That is how it feels somehow much like our digital presence and footprints. But that is just the wayward way of my imagination. Of course, there is so much more to this poem, I\'m afraid that this comment had not done any justice to it.🙏🕊️
September 23rd, 2025 05:49
arqios said:
I may be misreading this, but I love the last line; about leaving no scar or no mark. That is how it feels somehow much like our digital presence and footprints. But that is just the wayward way of my imagination. Of course, there is so much more to this poem, I\'m afraid that this comment had not done any justice to it.🙏🕊️
September 23rd, 2025 05:49
Greater love hath no man
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren, that flows wonderfully.
September 23rd, 2025 02:50
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren, that flows wonderfully.
September 23rd, 2025 02:50
Heaven\'s rain
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, some things that happen in life are just inexplicable.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, some things that happen in life are just inexplicable.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:19
Heaven\'s rain
Dan Williams said:
\"A drop of sky caught by the eye\". . . just wonderful in its simple wisdom. More good work from you.
September 22nd, 2025 23:15
Dan Williams said:
\"A drop of sky caught by the eye\". . . just wonderful in its simple wisdom. More good work from you.
September 22nd, 2025 23:15
Heaven\'s rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a piece. It reads like a hymn to the inexplicable…a reminder that not everything must be understood to be real. That paradox is its own kind of grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
September 22nd, 2025 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a piece. It reads like a hymn to the inexplicable…a reminder that not everything must be understood to be real. That paradox is its own kind of grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
September 22nd, 2025 20:42
Heaven\'s rain
Paul Bell said:
I was thinking of a nuclear fallout site where nothing grows.
Nature does eventually clean it all.
September 22nd, 2025 11:59
Paul Bell said:
I was thinking of a nuclear fallout site where nothing grows.
Nature does eventually clean it all.
September 22nd, 2025 11:59
Heaven\'s rain
Friendship said:
The poem explores the idea of unexpected occurrences in life that evoke curiosity and contemplation. It suggests that some phenomena, like a single drop of rain, may lack a clear explanation but still hold significance and beauty.
September 22nd, 2025 10:31
Friendship said:
The poem explores the idea of unexpected occurrences in life that evoke curiosity and contemplation. It suggests that some phenomena, like a single drop of rain, may lack a clear explanation but still hold significance and beauty.
September 22nd, 2025 10:31
Heaven\'s rain
Teddy.15 said:
From your title to every line, quite breathtaking my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 22nd, 2025 04:22
Teddy.15 said:
From your title to every line, quite breathtaking my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 22nd, 2025 04:22
Greater love hath no man
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, love cna be so compellingly wonderful in life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, love cna be so compellingly wonderful in life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:08
The band
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren beautifully written out “The band” I can say, one thing I’ve noticed is that the word “band” isn’t capitalized. Now is there a reason as to why this is such? What is the meaning behind your title, when we are referring to the word band, there is a marching of people. For your poem your main point or maybe your main focus was on bees. I do love the background picture you’ve provided as this does correlate with your poem. With bees or even fish the background gives coral vibes or even where bees hide, or with pollen per-say. Your poem is nature, it’s a natural sense, environmental such. 🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:49
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren beautifully written out “The band” I can say, one thing I’ve noticed is that the word “band” isn’t capitalized. Now is there a reason as to why this is such? What is the meaning behind your title, when we are referring to the word band, there is a marching of people. For your poem your main point or maybe your main focus was on bees. I do love the background picture you’ve provided as this does correlate with your poem. With bees or even fish the background gives coral vibes or even where bees hide, or with pollen per-say. Your poem is nature, it’s a natural sense, environmental such. 🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:49
Read
Keyara S Trotman said:
ADORATION 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 My dear Soren I love how everything is fluent. There is rhyme and rhythm. Your word choices, “ berserk” just curious have you ever seen someone go beserk???
You stated in your writing that which I’d like to point out:
“Life blood spent, present of content drains from veins that spurt and flow
Perfume\'s scent, love\'s air bent, pain will vent from a poetic blow”
This is beautiful.. there a feeling of horror, yet we are referring to poetry, and poetry can be so many genres. Here you’ve managed for me yet I don’t know your particular aim here but I got horrifying, it’s terrifying.
Overall your piece is amazing… well put together, structured 👏🏼🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:38
Keyara S Trotman said:
ADORATION 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 My dear Soren I love how everything is fluent. There is rhyme and rhythm. Your word choices, “ berserk” just curious have you ever seen someone go beserk???
You stated in your writing that which I’d like to point out:
“Life blood spent, present of content drains from veins that spurt and flow
Perfume\'s scent, love\'s air bent, pain will vent from a poetic blow”
This is beautiful.. there a feeling of horror, yet we are referring to poetry, and poetry can be so many genres. Here you’ve managed for me yet I don’t know your particular aim here but I got horrifying, it’s terrifying.
Overall your piece is amazing… well put together, structured 👏🏼🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:38
Greater love hath no man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you trace...from mother to martyr to hidden love...this feels raw, unvarnished, and deeply human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you trace...from mother to martyr to hidden love...this feels raw, unvarnished, and deeply human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:36
Greater love hath no man
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive me dearest sorrenbarret but I see this as a rape poem, one that a women takes the greatest sacrifice, grows a life and gives to another as a gift, regardless of her torture. Kudos my friend. 🌹
September 21st, 2025 12:16
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive me dearest sorrenbarret but I see this as a rape poem, one that a women takes the greatest sacrifice, grows a life and gives to another as a gift, regardless of her torture. Kudos my friend. 🌹
September 21st, 2025 12:16
Greater love hath no man
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Being daft - in second place of greatness - me, laying down me life, well me cash, for KP\'s botox! lol. Sewage for dinner again dear! lol.
September 21st, 2025 11:28
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Being daft - in second place of greatness - me, laying down me life, well me cash, for KP\'s botox! lol. Sewage for dinner again dear! lol.
September 21st, 2025 11:28
Greater love hath no man
TommyDingo said:
Poetry at its finest! Brilliantly written!
September 21st, 2025 09:14
TommyDingo said:
Poetry at its finest! Brilliantly written!
September 21st, 2025 09:14
Greater love hath no man
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem explores the theme of sacrifice and the complexities of love, particularly the lengths one might go to for the sake of another. It highlights the idea that true love often involves selflessness and taking on burdens, even to the point of personal ruin or misunderstanding.
September 21st, 2025 07:04
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem explores the theme of sacrifice and the complexities of love, particularly the lengths one might go to for the sake of another. It highlights the idea that true love often involves selflessness and taking on burdens, even to the point of personal ruin or misunderstanding.
September 21st, 2025 07:04
Catinga was his name
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, you can never see the beauty within the outside of anybody.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, you can never see the beauty within the outside of anybody.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:09
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