Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Love of a father
arqios said:
Profoundly moved: never connected a rosebush with fatherhood.. wow!!! I love gardening and the forest, even more connections. Thanks for sharing. :-)
December 20th, 2024 07:33
arqios said:
Profoundly moved: never connected a rosebush with fatherhood.. wow!!! I love gardening and the forest, even more connections. Thanks for sharing. :-)
December 20th, 2024 07:33
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Cassie58 said:
It’s all about making money and cutting corners. The worse part of capitalism. I dislike intensely the way the world is moving. We need a more compassionate and a less throw away world Soren. You hit your point across well.
December 20th, 2024 07:30
Cassie58 said:
It’s all about making money and cutting corners. The worse part of capitalism. I dislike intensely the way the world is moving. We need a more compassionate and a less throw away world Soren. You hit your point across well.
December 20th, 2024 07:30
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Goldfinch60 said:
That is what it is like nowadays soren, back in my days we fixed things and did not just buy new things.
Andy
December 20th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That is what it is like nowadays soren, back in my days we fixed things and did not just buy new things.
Andy
December 20th, 2024 02:47
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
John Prophet said:
So true. Sad. Well said.
December 19th, 2024 21:01
John Prophet said:
So true. Sad. Well said.
December 19th, 2024 21:01
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Doggerel Dave said:
False modesty, Soren. Clear picture there (and also truthful).
Pop out as much poor quality poetry as you like - I\'ll understand that.
December 19th, 2024 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
False modesty, Soren. Clear picture there (and also truthful).
Pop out as much poor quality poetry as you like - I\'ll understand that.
December 19th, 2024 17:31
Call of the earth
Kerry said:
My goodness. If anyone with dementia, even early onset can remain as proficient as as you are, hats off. But, really hope this poem is not your case
December 19th, 2024 16:52
Kerry said:
My goodness. If anyone with dementia, even early onset can remain as proficient as as you are, hats off. But, really hope this poem is not your case
December 19th, 2024 16:52
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Neville said:
I never signed up for this .. and that\'s a fact, but they don\'t care, do they .. not hardly a single one of em .. 👍🐧
December 19th, 2024 13:08
Neville said:
I never signed up for this .. and that\'s a fact, but they don\'t care, do they .. not hardly a single one of em .. 👍🐧
December 19th, 2024 13:08
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Taking the bull by the horn - I don\'t know any better illustration of the phrase than the poem.
December 19th, 2024 11:02
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Taking the bull by the horn - I don\'t know any better illustration of the phrase than the poem.
December 19th, 2024 11:02
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how you intentionally had the form (or quality) of the poem match the crappiness of today\'s political bullshit. Brilliant my friend, and I am sure you agree with me on this...but I get really sick of what \"they\" say. Who are \"they\" anyway? And yet they make self-serving decisions that affect the rest of us. Anywho...enough of \"them\"...your poem, friend, is so very wonderfully done! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how you intentionally had the form (or quality) of the poem match the crappiness of today\'s political bullshit. Brilliant my friend, and I am sure you agree with me on this...but I get really sick of what \"they\" say. Who are \"they\" anyway? And yet they make self-serving decisions that affect the rest of us. Anywho...enough of \"them\"...your poem, friend, is so very wonderfully done! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:10
The fly
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant. Loved it. The lines flowed so well.
December 19th, 2024 05:09
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant. Loved it. The lines flowed so well.
December 19th, 2024 05:09
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
arqios said:
They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back to the Middle Ages.
December 19th, 2024 04:12
arqios said:
They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back to the Middle Ages.
December 19th, 2024 04:12
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of today\'s world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 19th, 2024 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of today\'s world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 19th, 2024 04:10
The fly
Dan Williams said:
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations have let you produce valid explanations in verse for what we mostly already know. Bravo.
December 19th, 2024 02:02
Dan Williams said:
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations have let you produce valid explanations in verse for what we mostly already know. Bravo.
December 19th, 2024 02:02
The fly
NinjaGirl said:
I like it--definitely makes me a little uneasy, but so does the person, so it was a beautiful metaphor!
December 18th, 2024 20:53
NinjaGirl said:
I like it--definitely makes me a little uneasy, but so does the person, so it was a beautiful metaphor!
December 18th, 2024 20:53
The fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow…excellent running metaphor that makes me want to sing, “shoo fly…” 😂 Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Seriously rich, and creepy, imagery!
December 18th, 2024 18:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow…excellent running metaphor that makes me want to sing, “shoo fly…” 😂 Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Seriously rich, and creepy, imagery!
December 18th, 2024 18:01
The fly
Thad Wilk said:
I guess the fly
has a meaning in life,
but I haven\'t figured
out yet what it is¿? 🤔
Awesome write!
Great use of metaphor
and creepy good imagery!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:18
Thad Wilk said:
I guess the fly
has a meaning in life,
but I haven\'t figured
out yet what it is¿? 🤔
Awesome write!
Great use of metaphor
and creepy good imagery!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:18
The fly
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should get an honourable mention for the pollination they do...irritating health hazard they may be...
A rich write, Soren.
December 18th, 2024 17:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should get an honourable mention for the pollination they do...irritating health hazard they may be...
A rich write, Soren.
December 18th, 2024 17:01
The fly
Ellen Marsell said:
A confused fly, repeating its disorderly choreography over and over... the perfect image of this chaotic creature.
December 18th, 2024 15:45
Ellen Marsell said:
A confused fly, repeating its disorderly choreography over and over... the perfect image of this chaotic creature.
December 18th, 2024 15:45
The fly
TobaniNataiella said:
A really enjoyable read about one of life`s real pains, and i love the last line, great read.
December 18th, 2024 14:16
TobaniNataiella said:
A really enjoyable read about one of life`s real pains, and i love the last line, great read.
December 18th, 2024 14:16
The fly
Cassie58 said:
Waiter there’s a fly in my soup.
Don’t worry, it won’t eat much.
Flies are a nuisance but they make for great metaphors. Also many jokes. Even flies have a purpose in life. Well penned Soren.
December 18th, 2024 10:57
Cassie58 said:
Waiter there’s a fly in my soup.
Don’t worry, it won’t eat much.
Flies are a nuisance but they make for great metaphors. Also many jokes. Even flies have a purpose in life. Well penned Soren.
December 18th, 2024 10:57
Call of the earth
NafisaSB said:
comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure
December 18th, 2024 07:22
NafisaSB said:
comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure
December 18th, 2024 07:22
Words of the prophets
NafisaSB said:
it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread
December 18th, 2024 07:11
NafisaSB said:
it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread
December 18th, 2024 07:11
The fly
Teddy.15 said:
There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb 🌹
December 18th, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb 🌹
December 18th, 2024 06:00
The fly
Melancholic~Onion said:
These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.
December 18th, 2024 03:52
Melancholic~Onion said:
These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.
December 18th, 2024 03:52
The fly
arqios said:
Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
December 18th, 2024 03:47
arqios said:
Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
December 18th, 2024 03:47
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett
