Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Time squozen
orchidee said:
It\'s like those Dali melting clocks picture.
Or that girl \'I\'ll scweam and scweam until I\'m sick\'
Or - it\'s cold today; my hands are scouqzen!\' lol
March 14th, 2024 11:22
orchidee said:
It\'s like those Dali melting clocks picture.
Or that girl \'I\'ll scweam and scweam until I\'m sick\'
Or - it\'s cold today; my hands are scouqzen!\' lol
March 14th, 2024 11:22
Greed\'s contentment
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem to be getting so much lazier with modern technology in our hands soren.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem to be getting so much lazier with modern technology in our hands soren.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:44
Greed\'s contentment
2781 said:
I\'m probably way off...Communication breakdown
March 13th, 2024 05:38
2781 said:
I\'m probably way off...Communication breakdown
March 13th, 2024 05:38
Resurrection men
Alan R said:
The dark imagery of this poem is oddly captivating, very unique
March 12th, 2024 10:38
Alan R said:
The dark imagery of this poem is oddly captivating, very unique
March 12th, 2024 10:38
Resurrection men
Doggerel Dave said:
If form trumps content, then we\'re all in the poo?
March 12th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
If form trumps content, then we\'re all in the poo?
March 12th, 2024 07:48
Fossil echoes
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant painting of the scene. Great work.
March 11th, 2024 21:06
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant painting of the scene. Great work.
March 11th, 2024 21:06
Fossil echoes
Teddy.15 said:
A dirty mirror, cracked and broken
Blind visions reversed, distorted
A revenant from a torn cocoon of words spoken
Years in silk chains leaves hope contorted
Such drama in your entire poem I do love this stanza,
naturally we are born with a bad streak and it is nurturing that makes us who we hopefully become as good people. Your poem is incredibly powerful. We are born from something and when gone maybe some bones will be one day found. A masterpiece today. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 06:41
Teddy.15 said:
A dirty mirror, cracked and broken
Blind visions reversed, distorted
A revenant from a torn cocoon of words spoken
Years in silk chains leaves hope contorted
Such drama in your entire poem I do love this stanza,
naturally we are born with a bad streak and it is nurturing that makes us who we hopefully become as good people. Your poem is incredibly powerful. We are born from something and when gone maybe some bones will be one day found. A masterpiece today. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 06:41
Fossil echoes
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren but in my life those echoes are so wonderful.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren but in my life those echoes are so wonderful.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:59
Fossil echoes
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about my middle name. They call me \'Fossil\', as Goldfinch and I are millions of years old, so we say! lol.
March 8th, 2024 02:49
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about my middle name. They call me \'Fossil\', as Goldfinch and I are millions of years old, so we say! lol.
March 8th, 2024 02:49
Summer
Bella Shepard said:
I read these three lovely lines, and I can hear it, I can smell it, and now I\'m pining for it. Thank you dear poet, it\'s perfect!
March 7th, 2024 15:15
Bella Shepard said:
I read these three lovely lines, and I can hear it, I can smell it, and now I\'m pining for it. Thank you dear poet, it\'s perfect!
March 7th, 2024 15:15
Summer
Cloie said:
Your poem is like a snapshot of summer\'s essence! I can practically hear the cicadas buzzing and smell the sweet aroma of orange blossoms. 🌞🌿
March 7th, 2024 11:57
Cloie said:
Your poem is like a snapshot of summer\'s essence! I can practically hear the cicadas buzzing and smell the sweet aroma of orange blossoms. 🌞🌿
March 7th, 2024 11:57
Summer
Accidental Poet said:
Spring and Summer I come out of Winter hibernation. Well penned soren. I\'ve not yet seen those pesky little critters and hope I don\'t. 🫤
March 7th, 2024 09:24
Accidental Poet said:
Spring and Summer I come out of Winter hibernation. Well penned soren. I\'ve not yet seen those pesky little critters and hope I don\'t. 🫤
March 7th, 2024 09:24
Summer
orchidee said:
It\'s getting through Winter here in the UK, with Spring-like scenes appearing.
March 7th, 2024 08:59
orchidee said:
It\'s getting through Winter here in the UK, with Spring-like scenes appearing.
March 7th, 2024 08:59
Summer
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful haiku
Hey sorrenbarret can I be very curious and ask where in the world you reside?
Cicadas- not my cup of tea but as long as they do not come to Tuscany I\'ll be ok. lol 🤣
March 7th, 2024 07:56
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful haiku
Hey sorrenbarret can I be very curious and ask where in the world you reside?
Cicadas- not my cup of tea but as long as they do not come to Tuscany I\'ll be ok. lol 🤣
March 7th, 2024 07:56
What do you see?
orchidee said:
I only see trouts these days - well one, an old one! lol.
March 6th, 2024 11:10
orchidee said:
I only see trouts these days - well one, an old one! lol.
March 6th, 2024 11:10
What do you see?
Teddy.15 said:
How wonderful you see what you choose to see, in Italy we say hai proscuitto sugli occhi when it comes to love as it is blind, you have opened yet another wonderful discussion and you have once again opened my mind wide open. Thank you for your cleverness Dr sorrenbarret 🌹
March 6th, 2024 10:12
Teddy.15 said:
How wonderful you see what you choose to see, in Italy we say hai proscuitto sugli occhi when it comes to love as it is blind, you have opened yet another wonderful discussion and you have once again opened my mind wide open. Thank you for your cleverness Dr sorrenbarret 🌹
March 6th, 2024 10:12
What do you see?
Bella Shepard said:
You tackle the illusion of life so poignantly my friend, it seems everything is in the eye of the beholder especially these days. Brilliant!
March 6th, 2024 09:15
Bella Shepard said:
You tackle the illusion of life so poignantly my friend, it seems everything is in the eye of the beholder especially these days. Brilliant!
March 6th, 2024 09:15
What do you see?
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot beat an examination of perception, Soren - a topic I\'m always fascinated by. Definitely still no answers - but good to see the questions out there in great poetic form.
March 6th, 2024 05:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot beat an examination of perception, Soren - a topic I\'m always fascinated by. Definitely still no answers - but good to see the questions out there in great poetic form.
March 6th, 2024 05:53
Don\'t be afraid
Bobby O said:
This switches direction perhaps w purposed intention. It’s almost as if it could be read to an intended partner or it also can read as a message to self such that it won’t be perfect and habits string remain but an ashen start is enough??
March 6th, 2024 04:51
Bobby O said:
This switches direction perhaps w purposed intention. It’s almost as if it could be read to an intended partner or it also can read as a message to self such that it won’t be perfect and habits string remain but an ashen start is enough??
March 6th, 2024 04:51
Don\'t be afraid
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren we also know that the safety of the dark will eventually bring us to the light of wonder.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren we also know that the safety of the dark will eventually bring us to the light of wonder.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:08
Don\'t be afraid
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the darkness my friend, for in your heart is enough light to shine your way. 😉 Very well penned soren.
March 5th, 2024 09:56
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the darkness my friend, for in your heart is enough light to shine your way. 😉 Very well penned soren.
March 5th, 2024 09:56
Don\'t be afraid
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
But, arrghh, who turned the light out? I just fell down the stairs! lol.
March 5th, 2024 04:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
But, arrghh, who turned the light out? I just fell down the stairs! lol.
March 5th, 2024 04:38
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