Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little bird
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless yet fleeting. The imagery of the bird and feather lingers like a bittersweet melody in the heart.
July 1st, 2025 14:21
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless yet fleeting. The imagery of the bird and feather lingers like a bittersweet melody in the heart.
July 1st, 2025 14:21
Little bird
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, this tale tells of a lost love. Symbolisms of birds and flight and a feather left. It was sad but tempered in the symbols. It\'s amazing how a love lost can linger for decades Nice poetry. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:13
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, this tale tells of a lost love. Symbolisms of birds and flight and a feather left. It was sad but tempered in the symbols. It\'s amazing how a love lost can linger for decades Nice poetry. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:13
Little bird
Teddy.15 said:
I have found this so very romantic the pain of being just a dream, exquisite imagery along with exquisite emotion, are you trying to bring a tear to teddy? Gorgeous poetry. 🌹deeply profound my dear friend.
July 1st, 2025 11:56
Teddy.15 said:
I have found this so very romantic the pain of being just a dream, exquisite imagery along with exquisite emotion, are you trying to bring a tear to teddy? Gorgeous poetry. 🌹deeply profound my dear friend.
July 1st, 2025 11:56
Little bird
Soman Ragavan said:
Life is fragile and fleeting, just like that bird. Acquaintances we make, some near, some far. The fleeting bird left a feather, as a memory that it flew past. Memories are all that are left with us and for us.
July 1st, 2025 07:35
Soman Ragavan said:
Life is fragile and fleeting, just like that bird. Acquaintances we make, some near, some far. The fleeting bird left a feather, as a memory that it flew past. Memories are all that are left with us and for us.
July 1st, 2025 07:35
Little bird
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully write written with tenderness, it gracefully dances as you read, very nice
July 1st, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully write written with tenderness, it gracefully dances as you read, very nice
July 1st, 2025 05:30
Little bird
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )) beautiful poem
I liked reading this
Seems a bit sad tho I like your way with words
July 1st, 2025 05:06
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )) beautiful poem
I liked reading this
Seems a bit sad tho I like your way with words
July 1st, 2025 05:06
Little bird
arqios said:
This poem shimmers with a quiet, aching beauty; like a memory glimpsed through morning mist. It evokes a love beyond time, tender and unreachable, wrapped in wistfulness and wonder. That final image of the single feather lingers like the echo of a dream, delicate and unforgettable. 🪶🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2025 04:38
arqios said:
This poem shimmers with a quiet, aching beauty; like a memory glimpsed through morning mist. It evokes a love beyond time, tender and unreachable, wrapped in wistfulness and wonder. That final image of the single feather lingers like the echo of a dream, delicate and unforgettable. 🪶🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2025 04:38
Poor Satan sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever impressed by your poetry skills, a sonnet on the Devil no less, wow. I\'m in awe
I believe he gets bad publicity, I mean I\'ve never met him, and even Dante said paradise for the view but he\'ll for the company! 🤣 Brilliant
July 1st, 2025 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever impressed by your poetry skills, a sonnet on the Devil no less, wow. I\'m in awe
I believe he gets bad publicity, I mean I\'ve never met him, and even Dante said paradise for the view but he\'ll for the company! 🤣 Brilliant
July 1st, 2025 03:26
Poor Satan sonnet
ForeverJesus7 said:
Sorry, my friend, but I truely disagree with this piece.
God is all powerfully.
Satan is defeated.
Jesus is our Savior.
Persistence is key
June 30th, 2025 10:24
ForeverJesus7 said:
Sorry, my friend, but I truely disagree with this piece.
God is all powerfully.
Satan is defeated.
Jesus is our Savior.
Persistence is key
June 30th, 2025 10:24
Poor Satan sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title alone gets a fave from me. Love this, my friend. Sympathy for the Devil, Soren Barrett edition! No, we did it...not the devil. Or if the devil made us do it, perhaps we the devil? Brilliant, my friend. Pure brilliance. The humor delivers deep! 🌹👏
June 30th, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title alone gets a fave from me. Love this, my friend. Sympathy for the Devil, Soren Barrett edition! No, we did it...not the devil. Or if the devil made us do it, perhaps we the devil? Brilliant, my friend. Pure brilliance. The humor delivers deep! 🌹👏
June 30th, 2025 08:13
Poor Satan sonnet
orchidee said:
There\'s some who won\'t give him the honour of a capital letter, so he is \'satan\'. KP got him mixed up - she thought I meant Old Stan up the road! lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:44
orchidee said:
There\'s some who won\'t give him the honour of a capital letter, so he is \'satan\'. KP got him mixed up - she thought I meant Old Stan up the road! lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:44
Poor Satan sonnet
Lorenz said:
Ha ! Ha! \'\'Underdog chained to a garbage can ! \'\' Cruel and splendid image !
June 30th, 2025 06:42
Lorenz said:
Ha ! Ha! \'\'Underdog chained to a garbage can ! \'\' Cruel and splendid image !
June 30th, 2025 06:42
Poor Satan sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write with my type of humour, no one can be blamed for everything, its just there are many who cant be honest, so it suits to blame everything on one person, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write with my type of humour, no one can be blamed for everything, its just there are many who cant be honest, so it suits to blame everything on one person, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 06:18
Poor Satan sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:
Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these two fictitious characters are coopted to make a point….
Enjoyed the write, Soren.
June 30th, 2025 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these two fictitious characters are coopted to make a point….
Enjoyed the write, Soren.
June 30th, 2025 06:11
Poor Satan sonnet
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever. Poor old Beelzebub blamed for everything that goes wrong. An interesting poem with a touch of sardonic humour. However it does raise an issue for Christians to confront. Does the Devil influence a man\'s decisions.A powerful poem. Excellent
June 30th, 2025 04:34
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever. Poor old Beelzebub blamed for everything that goes wrong. An interesting poem with a touch of sardonic humour. However it does raise an issue for Christians to confront. Does the Devil influence a man\'s decisions.A powerful poem. Excellent
June 30th, 2025 04:34
Poor Satan sonnet
arqios said:
Getting blamed for everything even when clearly not our doing makes us quite the fall guy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 30th, 2025 04:24
arqios said:
Getting blamed for everything even when clearly not our doing makes us quite the fall guy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 30th, 2025 04:24
The bribe
Kevin Hulme said:
I misread the title: I thought it said \'The Bride\'.
I was waiting for her appearance. Doh.
Enjoyed.
June 29th, 2025 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
I misread the title: I thought it said \'The Bride\'.
I was waiting for her appearance. Doh.
Enjoyed.
June 29th, 2025 19:45
The bribe
MendedFences27 said:
Good one SB. Quite a story and well told. Too many loopholes in the law, too many clever moves by lawyers, makes one think if justice is ever done. - Phil A.
June 29th, 2025 13:02
MendedFences27 said:
Good one SB. Quite a story and well told. Too many loopholes in the law, too many clever moves by lawyers, makes one think if justice is ever done. - Phil A.
June 29th, 2025 13:02
The bribe
Teddy.15 said:
What a tale of wisdom and of life. Brilliantly written my dear sorrenbarrett, loved the charm.at the end. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 10:19
Teddy.15 said:
What a tale of wisdom and of life. Brilliantly written my dear sorrenbarrett, loved the charm.at the end. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 10:19
The bribe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the narrative, Soren. A heavy hitter that makes one question the very nature of human \"justice\". Well done. 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the narrative, Soren. A heavy hitter that makes one question the very nature of human \"justice\". Well done. 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:57
The bribe
Poetic Licence said:
Is there such a thing as true justice, or does it happen the way its meant to happen. A very entertaining write, enjoyed my read
June 29th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
Is there such a thing as true justice, or does it happen the way its meant to happen. A very entertaining write, enjoyed my read
June 29th, 2025 07:14
The bribe
Soman Ragavan said:
This story is a “tour de force….” A masterstroke…. The farmer did what lawyers could not do. He used a nuclear weapon in his favour and outwitted the rancher. Farmers are known to be pragmatic… I suggest that you submit this story to an Artificial Intelligence platform for analysis.
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June 29th, 2025 06:57
Soman Ragavan said:
This story is a “tour de force….” A masterstroke…. The farmer did what lawyers could not do. He used a nuclear weapon in his favour and outwitted the rancher. Farmers are known to be pragmatic… I suggest that you submit this story to an Artificial Intelligence platform for analysis.
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June 29th, 2025 06:57
The bribe
arqios said:
...when survival hangs in the balance, who truly owns justice—the letter of the law, or its human weight? Heavy hitting stuff Soren🕊️🙏🏻
June 29th, 2025 04:35
arqios said:
...when survival hangs in the balance, who truly owns justice—the letter of the law, or its human weight? Heavy hitting stuff Soren🕊️🙏🏻
June 29th, 2025 04:35
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