Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Samprikta Paul said:

As we grow up, everything seems to scare slowly as the past is behind yet never left. Well done.

July 6th, 2026 14:10

The collector
Paul Bell said:

She always said she would throw me out with the rubbish.
Probably why I hid the bin and recycled her.

July 6th, 2026 13:34

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RSM0812 said:

Except his wife or no?

July 6th, 2026 13:28

Touch
NafisaSB said:

The difference between reality and what was imagined as truth is well Brought out ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๏ธ

July 6th, 2026 11:32

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Princess Osariemen Aihie said:

I love this poetry. Well done sir

July 6th, 2026 09:50

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arqios said:

Felt poem. Perhaps as with beauty, value lies with the beholder. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 6th, 2026 06:34

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Teddy.15 said:

One man\'s garbage is another man\'s treasure ๐ŸŒน

July 6th, 2026 05:02

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Syd said:

I know a few people like the person you\'ve described here Sorenbarret.

Well written - Syd ๐Ÿ„

July 6th, 2026 04:54

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

beautiful and a fav

July 6th, 2026 04:01

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Goldfinch60 said:

Can we believe anything these days soren?

Andy

July 6th, 2026 01:43

The collector
Alex Arnot said:

Feels like the antithesis to the old saying about one man\'s trash. Well written good sir!

July 6th, 2026 01:14

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NafisaSB said:



July 5th, 2026 21:50

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NafisaSB said:

Wonderful and a fact of life. ๐Ÿ’impressed

July 5th, 2026 21:50

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Friendship said:

Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.


July 5th, 2026 19:36

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Kevin Hulme said:

\'The Laws and Ass\'. Mr Bumble.
Nice one.

July 5th, 2026 19:12

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Doggerel Dave said:

...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)

Point worth making, Soren.

July 5th, 2026 18:27

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GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€ said:

Itโ€™s all about control today isnโ€™t it? A well written write!

July 5th, 2026 16:15

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Joseph M Marion said:

We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always

July 5th, 2026 16:00

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 5th, 2026 10:22

Ghost riders
gray0328 said:

What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of itโ€”like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren

July 5th, 2026 09:27

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Thomas W Case said:

Thereโ€™s a sharp, fractured rhythm hereโ€”like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.

July 5th, 2026 07:45

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soheil khodaparasti said:

Confusing, contradictory commands.

July 5th, 2026 07:41

Taken
RSM0812 said:

This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.

July 5th, 2026 06:14

Ghost riders
RSM0812 said:

Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.

July 5th, 2026 06:12

Ghost riders
Soman Ragavan said:

Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.

July 5th, 2026 06:11

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 5th, 2026 06:00

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arqios said:

Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 5th, 2026 05:32

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

the justice system sometimes me laugh

July 5th, 2026 04:36

Ghost riders
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true soren, the ghosts of the past are only in our memories now.

Andy

July 5th, 2026 01:18

Ghost riders
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this really resonated with me. Thereโ€™s a wistfulness running through it that feels less like mourning and more like quietly acknowledging that every generation leaves something behind. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 4th, 2026 23:04

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