Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Give and take
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together the interconnectedness of nature, creativity, and the cyclical nature of life, revealing the profound beauty of life\'s journey. It illuminates how trees and poetry both draw inspiration from their surroundings, with trees rooted in the earth and poets fueled by their thoughts and experiences. This majestic cycle of growth and renewal is a powerful testament to the transformative beauty of life. Your poem is a triumphant celebration of life\'s splendor, creativity, and the eternal cycles of nature, inviting readers to tap into the limitless potential for rebirth in both the natural world and their creative endeavors.
May 14th, 2025 06:12
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together the interconnectedness of nature, creativity, and the cyclical nature of life, revealing the profound beauty of life\'s journey. It illuminates how trees and poetry both draw inspiration from their surroundings, with trees rooted in the earth and poets fueled by their thoughts and experiences. This majestic cycle of growth and renewal is a powerful testament to the transformative beauty of life. Your poem is a triumphant celebration of life\'s splendor, creativity, and the eternal cycles of nature, inviting readers to tap into the limitless potential for rebirth in both the natural world and their creative endeavors.
May 14th, 2025 06:12
Give and take
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
Give and take
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
Shorty
Tony Grannell said:
I, too, thought you were poetising about some hard man and then to discover it was a lady by Jove and a famous one at that - Aphrodite. It\'s great to be caught off guard especially after such a fine and powerful introduction. I was engrossed and then stunned, stunned in a delightful way. How I love a good surprise. A great poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:45
Tony Grannell said:
I, too, thought you were poetising about some hard man and then to discover it was a lady by Jove and a famous one at that - Aphrodite. It\'s great to be caught off guard especially after such a fine and powerful introduction. I was engrossed and then stunned, stunned in a delightful way. How I love a good surprise. A great poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:45
What
NinjaGirl said:
Uncertainty lurks...literally. You are safe for now as it retreats..
May 13th, 2025 10:59
NinjaGirl said:
Uncertainty lurks...literally. You are safe for now as it retreats..
May 13th, 2025 10:59
What
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t as usual work out what your metaphor is this time Soren, but I tell you what, I\'m glad I\'m secure inside four walls with the door locked.....
May 13th, 2025 09:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t as usual work out what your metaphor is this time Soren, but I tell you what, I\'m glad I\'m secure inside four walls with the door locked.....
May 13th, 2025 09:34
What
Tony Grannell said:
When eyes glow, it\'s time to flee, especially so when in a jungle and even more so at night. A brave man you are to have undertaken such an adventure. A high tension verse, cemented with fear before a foreboding green glow and so deftly rendered with poetic flair. Well done, Soren.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:23
Tony Grannell said:
When eyes glow, it\'s time to flee, especially so when in a jungle and even more so at night. A brave man you are to have undertaken such an adventure. A high tension verse, cemented with fear before a foreboding green glow and so deftly rendered with poetic flair. Well done, Soren.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:23
What
Friendship said:
Woo how cool to experience this,,The human body gives off energy, so as you walked through the forest, you gave off energy to the earth, which contacts its spirits that live in the forest. A lot of people don\'t believe in this stuff until they see it with their own eyes, but it\'s been there for many years - the spirits in the forest. My grandparents taught me that it\'s nothing to be afraid of; it\'s startling at times when it happens, but it\'s the weirdest feeling you experience. The green mist you experience is impossible to describe because it seems so unreal. Green represents healing, growth, and natural spirits; it means your body has a lot of positive energy to contact the spirits. You went into the forest with a lot on your mind, and the earth was healing you.
May 13th, 2025 07:02
Friendship said:
Woo how cool to experience this,,The human body gives off energy, so as you walked through the forest, you gave off energy to the earth, which contacts its spirits that live in the forest. A lot of people don\'t believe in this stuff until they see it with their own eyes, but it\'s been there for many years - the spirits in the forest. My grandparents taught me that it\'s nothing to be afraid of; it\'s startling at times when it happens, but it\'s the weirdest feeling you experience. The green mist you experience is impossible to describe because it seems so unreal. Green represents healing, growth, and natural spirits; it means your body has a lot of positive energy to contact the spirits. You went into the forest with a lot on your mind, and the earth was healing you.
May 13th, 2025 07:02
What
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery on how the forest can play with your imagination, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery on how the forest can play with your imagination, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:39
What
David Wakeling said:
I see a hunter expecting a lion or tiger and finding a bird.Great fun read.
May 13th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
I see a hunter expecting a lion or tiger and finding a bird.Great fun read.
May 13th, 2025 04:49
What
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning visual of the darkness, forests have always given me the creeps, I couldn\'t tell you why though, darkness turns to light and the moment moves along with the ghost. Super 🌹
May 13th, 2025 04:22
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning visual of the darkness, forests have always given me the creeps, I couldn\'t tell you why though, darkness turns to light and the moment moves along with the ghost. Super 🌹
May 13th, 2025 04:22
What
arqios said:
The trees do not answer,
the night does not yield.
It appeared, then vanished—
not a beast, not a shadow,
but something else, unseen,
something heretofore waiting.
May 13th, 2025 03:47
arqios said:
The trees do not answer,
the night does not yield.
It appeared, then vanished—
not a beast, not a shadow,
but something else, unseen,
something heretofore waiting.
May 13th, 2025 03:47
Before we knew better
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken. the innocence of kids is a wonder to behold, and shines out from their fresh and beautiful faces, until the world starts polluting their impressionable minds
May 12th, 2025 23:51
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken. the innocence of kids is a wonder to behold, and shines out from their fresh and beautiful faces, until the world starts polluting their impressionable minds
May 12th, 2025 23:51
Weeds grow
Soman Ragavan said:
It is indeed strange how unwanted weeds wield such power, such strength. (Hello ! Four W\'s here : alliteration kicked in by itself....) They are bent on frustrating us. Whereas good, useful stuff we plant needs care and water, weeds thrive on nothing; they survive even drought or floods. Even when they disappear, they will reappear at some stage, as if by magic. They push out what we planted, what we need. When a plot of land is abandoned, weeds start taking over the place. The vegetable kingdom is amazing. Plants that start small and fragile end up splitting concrete, rocks....
\"...the rock that is not split with the long iron crowbar, splits when the roots of a tender shrub enter it.\" --(Ed) T. B. Krishnaswami : “TEN TAMIL ETHICS.” Madras, India : The South India Saiva Sidhanta Works Publishing Society, 1937. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
Tender-looking leaves weave their way through asphalt and gaps in concrete and come up to see the light of day. Little by little they will end up spitting the harder stuff.
May 12th, 2025 22:10
Soman Ragavan said:
It is indeed strange how unwanted weeds wield such power, such strength. (Hello ! Four W\'s here : alliteration kicked in by itself....) They are bent on frustrating us. Whereas good, useful stuff we plant needs care and water, weeds thrive on nothing; they survive even drought or floods. Even when they disappear, they will reappear at some stage, as if by magic. They push out what we planted, what we need. When a plot of land is abandoned, weeds start taking over the place. The vegetable kingdom is amazing. Plants that start small and fragile end up splitting concrete, rocks....
\"...the rock that is not split with the long iron crowbar, splits when the roots of a tender shrub enter it.\" --(Ed) T. B. Krishnaswami : “TEN TAMIL ETHICS.” Madras, India : The South India Saiva Sidhanta Works Publishing Society, 1937. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
Tender-looking leaves weave their way through asphalt and gaps in concrete and come up to see the light of day. Little by little they will end up spitting the harder stuff.
May 12th, 2025 22:10
Weeds grow
rrodriguez said:
Soren, you have crafted a deeply meaningful piece that resonates with me. I see it as a message to not let the negative get hold of your mind. I enjoyed reading it and absorbing its message.
May 12th, 2025 17:24
rrodriguez said:
Soren, you have crafted a deeply meaningful piece that resonates with me. I see it as a message to not let the negative get hold of your mind. I enjoyed reading it and absorbing its message.
May 12th, 2025 17:24
Shorty
Teddy.15 said:
Is it Elena? 🌹 Oh your poetry is really flying my friend. Beautiful ❤️
May 12th, 2025 15:11
Teddy.15 said:
Is it Elena? 🌹 Oh your poetry is really flying my friend. Beautiful ❤️
May 12th, 2025 15:11
Shorty
Lorenz said:
Some surrealistic accents inspired by \'\' Darker mind \'\' !
May 12th, 2025 13:27
Lorenz said:
Some surrealistic accents inspired by \'\' Darker mind \'\' !
May 12th, 2025 13:27
Shorty
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful and heartfelt poem—Shorty really comes to life in just a few lines. Well written!!!
May 12th, 2025 10:09
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful and heartfelt poem—Shorty really comes to life in just a few lines. Well written!!!
May 12th, 2025 10:09
Shorty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quite the goddess, Aphrodite. This is a powerful poem that, as I read it, speaks of resilience and strength, and a longing for someone who made quite a life long, loving impact. Well done, friend. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quite the goddess, Aphrodite. This is a powerful poem that, as I read it, speaks of resilience and strength, and a longing for someone who made quite a life long, loving impact. Well done, friend. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:48
Shorty
Friendship said:
Your poem triumphantly celebrates an extraordinary individual, referred to as \"shorty,\" who shatters expectations through unwavering strength, unrelenting resilience, and profound complexity in character, emphasizing the beautiful blend of toughness and tenderness, and showcasing how this remarkable person navigates a challenging world with unbridled grace, exceptional skill, and captivating charisma.
May 12th, 2025 07:04
Friendship said:
Your poem triumphantly celebrates an extraordinary individual, referred to as \"shorty,\" who shatters expectations through unwavering strength, unrelenting resilience, and profound complexity in character, emphasizing the beautiful blend of toughness and tenderness, and showcasing how this remarkable person navigates a challenging world with unbridled grace, exceptional skill, and captivating charisma.
May 12th, 2025 07:04
Shorty
David Wakeling said:
she sounds like an amazing person. Wonderfully constructed poem.I thought the great Banjo Patterson would have loved this. Very enjoyable read
May 12th, 2025 06:50
David Wakeling said:
she sounds like an amazing person. Wonderfully constructed poem.I thought the great Banjo Patterson would have loved this. Very enjoyable read
May 12th, 2025 06:50
Shorty
MDStone said:
Ah, the strength, comfort, protection, and passion of fighter. She knows what she wants and goes for it. Caught me off gaurd at the end, but I swear, I knew her sister. Enjoyed the read, Soren.
May 12th, 2025 05:42
MDStone said:
Ah, the strength, comfort, protection, and passion of fighter. She knows what she wants and goes for it. Caught me off gaurd at the end, but I swear, I knew her sister. Enjoyed the read, Soren.
May 12th, 2025 05:42
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