Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Vanity
Doggerel Dave said:

Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good for you, Soren.

July 28th, 2025 09:02

Vanity
RSM0812 said:

An entertaing story written in prose. Nice work.

July 28th, 2025 07:41

Vanity
Lorna said:

So funny.........laughed out loud! Poor cat............

July 28th, 2025 06:24

Vanity
Poetic Licence said:

Very entertaining and well captured in the write, I have seen a dog and cat have this type of relationship, the dog wishing to be a bit more amorous than the cat would like, enjoyed the read

July 28th, 2025 06:08

Vanity
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, SB. Enjoyed the read.

July 28th, 2025 06:01

Vanity
Friendship said:

The poem \"Vanity\" revolves around the theme of pride and its consequences. It explores the humorous dynamics between a dapper cat and a dog who becomes infatuated with him. The poem touches on topics such as self-image, romantic advances, and the awkwardness of relationships, ultimately highlighting the cat\'s struggle with vanity and his decision to flee from unwanted attention.

July 28th, 2025 05:37

Vanity
arqios said:

This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly skewers vanity with perfect comedic timing. I adore how your clever rhymes and playful twists invite us to chuckle at prideโ€™s folly ...keep spinning these charming tales! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 28th, 2025 04:09

The circle
ElizabethMoroz said:

Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth

July 28th, 2025 01:40

Psychological cancer
Friendship said:

I have no word for this.

July 27th, 2025 21:54

Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Tony Grannell said:

Excellent, Soren, well put, well composed with compassion and dignity. The world is full of beautiful imperfections where perfection lies within. \'Don\'t judge a book...\', as the saying goes. A poem filled with great understanding. Well done, my friend.

Fond regards,

Tony.

July 27th, 2025 12:34


Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Lorna said:

Aaahhhh if we could only save everything and everyone........

July 27th, 2025 07:27

Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Friendship said:

I am compelled to express my admiration for this remarkable poem. It has a profound impact, conveying a message that is both powerful and moving. The imagery is exquisite, creating a picture that is both beautiful and unforgettable. To me, your poem seems to explore themes of creativity, communication, and the fragility of life. It highlights the struggles of those who may be marginalized or misunderstood, as well as the beauty found in nature and the cycle of life and death. You painted rich with imagery. Like \"a painter with no hands,\" \"deaf mute no one understands,\" and \"the song of a bird,\" these phrases create vivid pictures and emotional resonance. The use of contrasts, such as \"green grass\" and \"a shell that looks like hell,\" emphasizes the dichotomy between beauty and suffering. It seems to serve as a reminder to appreciate the depth and potential within all beings and things, advocating for empathy and understanding in a world that often overlooks the intricate stories behind appearances.

July 27th, 2025 07:21

Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
arqios said:

Donโ€™t throw anything away. You never know the gift within. Hidden life waits in broken things. A crack can let new light through. Silence can still sing its song. Small wonders shine without words. Listen to the quiet voices. Believe in unseen potential. Something to take to heart every moment of every day.

July 27th, 2025 06:50

Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Poetic Licence said:

Dont discard people just because they look different or you don\'t understand them, try getting to know the person inside the shell you don\'t like the look off, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read

July 27th, 2025 06:50

Weak and strong
jim56 said:

love this it has everything feeling expression emotion
words say everything as you read it
nice flow beautifully written jim

July 27th, 2025 05:35

Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Salvia.S said:

Powerful and thought-provoking, this reminds us not to judge too quickly or discard what we donโ€™t fully understand. Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘


July 27th, 2025 05:25

Night\'s refuge
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren and the line \"Life \'tis but a dream, passing in the blink of an eye\" is so very true.

Andy

July 27th, 2025 01:51

Night\'s refuge
Jeremy Leach said:

Very well crafted and an eternally interesting topic. Reading this makes me stop and think about it all, which is good.

July 27th, 2025 01:42

Night\'s refuge
Bella Shepard said:

Dreams had such a wonderful, mystical aura, before we neurologically disected them. This beautiful poem evokes a mysticism that I think we will always choose hold on to. Excellent write!

July 26th, 2025 14:40

Night\'s refuge
Nature said:

It\'s a good poem S. Really appreciate your efforts in making this poem and giving me an entry into the world of literature.

July 26th, 2025 12:59

Night\'s refuge
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 26th, 2025 11:08

Night\'s refuge
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB. Enjoyed the read.

July 26th, 2025 08:29

Night\'s refuge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a beautifully layered piece, Soren. The mythic thread woven through sleep, memory, and renewal gives this an almost sacred weight. That final stanza brings it home quietly, yet powerfully. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ› A fave!

July 26th, 2025 08:24

Night\'s refuge
Poetic Licence said:

A very nicely crafted write of something I don\'t often have, peaceful sleep, enjoyed the read

July 26th, 2025 08:19

Night\'s refuge
Lorenz said:

A vision tinged with mythology and christian esotericism .
Journey to the realm of shadows where time no longer has any consistency .A fav .

July 26th, 2025 06:07

Gut feelings
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, Soren,

In a state of complete contentment to be interrupted by a sense, this is too good to be true, resulting in a strange form of paranoia, worrying for the simple reason, in having nothing to worry about, so much so to dig up the past, if you will, if not, there must be something looming for one to worry about. It\'s an awful state to find oneself in and in a way, somewhat comical, Woody Allen-ish. You have captured this state of the mind with your usual command of the poetic art which I always admire, truly.

Your fellow poet and friend,

Tony.

July 26th, 2025 05:44

Night\'s refuge
Friendship said:

Your poem \"Night\'s Refuge\" embarks on a transformative journey, exploring the rejuvenating sanctuary of sleep, the transient nature of life, and the profound desire for rebirth and redemption through the liberating power of forgetfulness. The poem illuminates the fleeting nature of existence, acknowledging the weight of sins and burdens, while suggesting that sleep (or death) offers a tranquil refuge where one can escape the pains of existence and perhaps emerge anew, unencumbered by past mistakes. Your poem masterfully employs vivid imagery, such as \"Hypnos\' silent shores\" and \"Morpheus under glued lids,\" to evoke the serene and dreamlike quality of sleep, crafting a mystical atmosphere that inspires and uplifts. This imagery creates a \"peaceful gate,\" symbolizing a welcoming and protective nature, while Mnemosyne (the goddess of memory) embodies the transformative power of forgetting. To me, \"Night\'s Refuge\" is a masterpiece that utilizes rich imagery, metaphor, and a free-form structure to explore the profound themes of sleep, memory, and the cyclical nature of existence, inspiring us to reflect on the human experience.

July 26th, 2025 05:35

Gut feelings
Jeremy Leach said:

Finely written. What strikes me is that it paints a picture of general unease from many angles but leaves it hanging without any resolve or answer, which adds to the sense of unease. Which makes it interesting and well done.

July 26th, 2025 05:22

In school
ElizabethMoroz said:

Great poetic commentary on institutionalised learning and the fabrication of history and education especially when it comes to First Nations people & colonisation. Well done, important observations in poetic form. Elizabeth

July 26th, 2025 03:38

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