Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Another day
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
Sensations
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Sensations
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Sensations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Sensations
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Sensations
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
Sensations
Lorenz said:
It hangs in the air like an oppressing industrial scent of laborious dawns...
April 5th, 2026 05:42
Lorenz said:
It hangs in the air like an oppressing industrial scent of laborious dawns...
April 5th, 2026 05:42
Sensations
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of something hidden in a piece of wood in st Peters Square Rome. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 04:48
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of something hidden in a piece of wood in st Peters Square Rome. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 04:48
Sensations
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 5th, 2026 04:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 5th, 2026 04:23
Sensations
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s strangely beautiful. The imagery is intense and tactile.
April 5th, 2026 04:08
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s strangely beautiful. The imagery is intense and tactile.
April 5th, 2026 04:08
Another day
Goldfinch60 said:
You obviously enjoyed the party soren but the morning after can be hard.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
You obviously enjoyed the party soren but the morning after can be hard.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:13
Another day
Kevin Hulme said:
And then there\'s the Revolting Bed.
Well Written.
April 4th, 2026 18:48
Kevin Hulme said:
And then there\'s the Revolting Bed.
Well Written.
April 4th, 2026 18:48
Another day
cellinic said:
Indeed this is something very special and substantial) Best wishes, my like
April 4th, 2026 13:56
cellinic said:
Indeed this is something very special and substantial) Best wishes, my like
April 4th, 2026 13:56
Another day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve felt that kind of morning…the weight of everything after the moment has passed. There’s a restless edge here that feels familiar, like sleep is just out of reach. Powerful write, my friend. Have a great weekend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve felt that kind of morning…the weight of everything after the moment has passed. There’s a restless edge here that feels familiar, like sleep is just out of reach. Powerful write, my friend. Have a great weekend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:07
Another day
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the morning after isn\'t worth the night before. Best to just sip the whiskey. The afterparty is always hard labor. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2026 09:53
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the morning after isn\'t worth the night before. Best to just sip the whiskey. The afterparty is always hard labor. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2026 09:53
Another day
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed the party is over, what a wonderful description in imagery 🌹 in Italian I\'ll give you a word too goloso 🌹
April 4th, 2026 07:22
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed the party is over, what a wonderful description in imagery 🌹 in Italian I\'ll give you a word too goloso 🌹
April 4th, 2026 07:22
Rebellion
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem on a Barron Landscape.
Can almost feel it.
April 3rd, 2026 18:53
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem on a Barron Landscape.
Can almost feel it.
April 3rd, 2026 18:53
Rebellion
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"Rebellion\" explores the harshness of a barren landscape, reflecting on themes of desolation, struggle, and the indifference of nature. The poet personified as \"Rocky\" embodies the resilience of the earth amid its cracked and broken state, symbolizing both destruction and survival.
April 3rd, 2026 15:35
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"Rebellion\" explores the harshness of a barren landscape, reflecting on themes of desolation, struggle, and the indifference of nature. The poet personified as \"Rocky\" embodies the resilience of the earth amid its cracked and broken state, symbolizing both destruction and survival.
April 3rd, 2026 15:35
Rebellion
orchidee said:
KP\'s complaining again. Dunno why! I give her food, with ideas in your poems. I give her \'vegetables\' of cactus and thistles! lol.
April 3rd, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
KP\'s complaining again. Dunno why! I give her food, with ideas in your poems. I give her \'vegetables\' of cactus and thistles! lol.
April 3rd, 2026 09:57
Rebellion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, unchanging weight to this…from the cracked surface to that final line of never being washed clean. That image of nature gnawing at it anchors everything. It doesn’t move…it endures. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, unchanging weight to this…from the cracked surface to that final line of never being washed clean. That image of nature gnawing at it anchors everything. It doesn’t move…it endures. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:03
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