Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Once
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
Once
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Once
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
The garden
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
Empty
arqios said:
Oh boy, that’s an excellent makes 5. That’s a terrible slip up on my part. Apologies 🕊️🙏🏻
November 5th, 2025 23:51
arqios said:
Oh boy, that’s an excellent makes 5. That’s a terrible slip up on my part. Apologies 🕊️🙏🏻
November 5th, 2025 23:51
The garden
NinjaGirl said:
\"Born of a man\'s pride\" This is so true, very well-written and such an important message!
November 5th, 2025 20:31
NinjaGirl said:
\"Born of a man\'s pride\" This is so true, very well-written and such an important message!
November 5th, 2025 20:31
They came
arqios said:
Oh my! I hope your foot is doing better. I imagined the retreat indoors was to retrieve cans of bug spray for a Rambo offensive. But that\'s just me. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:52
arqios said:
Oh my! I hope your foot is doing better. I imagined the retreat indoors was to retrieve cans of bug spray for a Rambo offensive. But that\'s just me. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:52
Thief, priest and engineer
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
Be as
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
The garden
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
The garden
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
The garden
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
The garden
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
Be as
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Be as
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Be as
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
Be as
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
Be as
Paul Bell said:
The elixir of life, worth more than gold in hot countries.
One drop found in faraway planets, man will be there exploiting it.
You can see why nature unleashes it now and again.
November 4th, 2025 05:07
Paul Bell said:
The elixir of life, worth more than gold in hot countries.
One drop found in faraway planets, man will be there exploiting it.
You can see why nature unleashes it now and again.
November 4th, 2025 05:07
Be as
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Water\'s far too important to give to KP. She can have the sewage water! lol. I\'m still \'orrible to her. heehee.
November 4th, 2025 04:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Water\'s far too important to give to KP. She can have the sewage water! lol. I\'m still \'orrible to her. heehee.
November 4th, 2025 04:55
Thief, priest and engineer
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, being saved from death is the way to go.
Andy
November 4th, 2025 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, being saved from death is the way to go.
Andy
November 4th, 2025 02:08
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