Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Enchou sareta senryu
Lorenz said:
Master are there answers without questions ?
March 23rd, 2026 09:24
Lorenz said:
Master are there answers without questions ?
March 23rd, 2026 09:24
Enchou sareta senryu
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Not a choice one would want to have to make. Good write.
March 23rd, 2026 08:36
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Not a choice one would want to have to make. Good write.
March 23rd, 2026 08:36
Sloth of the present
ann hegg said:
So amazingly real . A poem where reality meets words
March 23rd, 2026 08:13
ann hegg said:
So amazingly real . A poem where reality meets words
March 23rd, 2026 08:13
Enchou sareta senryu
arqios said:
Indeed. How could you choose! Could one be spared that agony?! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 05:31
arqios said:
Indeed. How could you choose! Could one be spared that agony?! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 05:31
Enchou sareta senryu
Prachi Dalvi said:
A dilemma presented nicely in just few words!!
March 23rd, 2026 04:41
Prachi Dalvi said:
A dilemma presented nicely in just few words!!
March 23rd, 2026 04:41
Enchou sareta senryu
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the thought is almost too much to bear
March 23rd, 2026 04:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the thought is almost too much to bear
March 23rd, 2026 04:11
Enchou sareta senryu
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t seen that dilemma in a long long time, Soren. Still interesting. Thanks for the revival.
March 23rd, 2026 04:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t seen that dilemma in a long long time, Soren. Still interesting. Thanks for the revival.
March 23rd, 2026 04:02
Smell of passion
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is so glorious soren in all its differing ways, I love being with Nature.
Andy
March 23rd, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is so glorious soren in all its differing ways, I love being with Nature.
Andy
March 23rd, 2026 02:50
Smell of passion
Dan Williams said:
I started out feeling this was just lovely but realized it is filled with your typical hard realizations. I mean, \"In it only fermented memories are found parasitic bound, bitter to the taste\" just sings to me, and lullaby. Almost amorous images tempered by cold facts. As usual, well done.
March 23rd, 2026 00:04
Dan Williams said:
I started out feeling this was just lovely but realized it is filled with your typical hard realizations. I mean, \"In it only fermented memories are found parasitic bound, bitter to the taste\" just sings to me, and lullaby. Almost amorous images tempered by cold facts. As usual, well done.
March 23rd, 2026 00:04
Smell of passion
Kevin Hulme said:
I prefer Spring to Autumn. One is Life , Renewal.
The other decay and Death.
Fine Poem.
March 22nd, 2026 20:26
Kevin Hulme said:
I prefer Spring to Autumn. One is Life , Renewal.
The other decay and Death.
Fine Poem.
March 22nd, 2026 20:26
Smell of passion
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I give that mouldy fruit to KP! Passion Sunday is today - always 2 weeks before Easter.
March 22nd, 2026 11:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I give that mouldy fruit to KP! Passion Sunday is today - always 2 weeks before Easter.
March 22nd, 2026 11:40
Able
Durdica Porobija said:
The fundamental contrast is the external, physical to the internal, emotional part of the human being. The theme of the song is a broken heart. Nothing can be done with it, it prevents every step forward, every action and every giving. It causes paralysis and depression. The song contains a hidden warning about treating the heart gently, that is, with love and related emotions.
March 22nd, 2026 09:59
Durdica Porobija said:
The fundamental contrast is the external, physical to the internal, emotional part of the human being. The theme of the song is a broken heart. Nothing can be done with it, it prevents every step forward, every action and every giving. It causes paralysis and depression. The song contains a hidden warning about treating the heart gently, that is, with love and related emotions.
March 22nd, 2026 09:59
Smell of passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from sweetness to something far more complicated…spring’s allure giving way to damage, decay, and what’s left behind. Lines like “fermented memories…bitter to the taste” really hold that shift. It’s beauty, but not untouched…full cycle, consequences included. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from sweetness to something far more complicated…spring’s allure giving way to damage, decay, and what’s left behind. Lines like “fermented memories…bitter to the taste” really hold that shift. It’s beauty, but not untouched…full cycle, consequences included. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:38
Smell of passion
Lorenz said:
The symphony starts with Vivaldi and ends with the discordant notes of Hendrix\'s guitar...
March 22nd, 2026 09:24
Lorenz said:
The symphony starts with Vivaldi and ends with the discordant notes of Hendrix\'s guitar...
March 22nd, 2026 09:24
Smell of passion
2781 said:
Nothing\'s wasted, nature needs the nutrients, and it all goes back to the earth (one way or another).
Here down under, the authorities went on a bee extermination project, followed by baiting, in a failed attempt to eradicate the varroa mite.
Not sure if it extends to death of Dave\'s mosquitoes? But who doesn\'t love a good conspiracy!
March 22nd, 2026 05:11
2781 said:
Nothing\'s wasted, nature needs the nutrients, and it all goes back to the earth (one way or another).
Here down under, the authorities went on a bee extermination project, followed by baiting, in a failed attempt to eradicate the varroa mite.
Not sure if it extends to death of Dave\'s mosquitoes? But who doesn\'t love a good conspiracy!
March 22nd, 2026 05:11
Sloth of the present
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting older can get this way soren but as i say to people, all is well, I got up this morning.
Andy
March 22nd, 2026 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting older can get this way soren but as i say to people, all is well, I got up this morning.
Andy
March 22nd, 2026 02:20
Sloth of the present
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand all that you are saying here.
So many people doing Shopping etc on-line .
Not going out.
March 21st, 2026 20:07
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand all that you are saying here.
So many people doing Shopping etc on-line .
Not going out.
March 21st, 2026 20:07
Sloth of the present
Allie561 said:
It’s sad to see the new generations without the drive or motivation to work. I feel like I keep seeing AI this AI that, the technology is being abused. I try to not let things just be handed to me. Great poem Soren.
March 21st, 2026 19:16
Allie561 said:
It’s sad to see the new generations without the drive or motivation to work. I feel like I keep seeing AI this AI that, the technology is being abused. I try to not let things just be handed to me. Great poem Soren.
March 21st, 2026 19:16
Sloth of the present
Neville said:
There are those who give up far too easily .. and those who by virtue of this or that don\'t have the choice .. I know what side of the fence I choose to be & although it gets harder, I hope it pays off in the end .. Another good un sir .. Neville
March 21st, 2026 12:16
Neville said:
There are those who give up far too easily .. and those who by virtue of this or that don\'t have the choice .. I know what side of the fence I choose to be & although it gets harder, I hope it pays off in the end .. Another good un sir .. Neville
March 21st, 2026 12:16
Sloth of the present
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with a heavy, dragging weight…like the body itself is resisting motion at every turn. It feels stuck in a way that’s almost physical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with a heavy, dragging weight…like the body itself is resisting motion at every turn. It feels stuck in a way that’s almost physical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:50
Sloth of the present
cellinic said:
Rather a serious statement, which may be interpreted somehow ambivalently! Best wishes,
March 21st, 2026 07:55
cellinic said:
Rather a serious statement, which may be interpreted somehow ambivalently! Best wishes,
March 21st, 2026 07:55
Spilt criticism
Awam said:
mind under pressure where words and images tumble over each other....and metaphors scraping the reader.
March 21st, 2026 06:29
Awam said:
mind under pressure where words and images tumble over each other....and metaphors scraping the reader.
March 21st, 2026 06:29
Sloth of the present
arqios said:
Hope you are doing well. This is so moving and thus arousing concern.🕊️🙏🏻
March 21st, 2026 06:23
arqios said:
Hope you are doing well. This is so moving and thus arousing concern.🕊️🙏🏻
March 21st, 2026 06:23
Sloth of the present
Prachi Dalvi said:
Each word weighs so much that u described it in a unique way.Nicely framed and worded!
March 21st, 2026 04:11
Prachi Dalvi said:
Each word weighs so much that u described it in a unique way.Nicely framed and worded!
March 21st, 2026 04:11
We are all one
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from afar soren and it all started with the \"Big Bang\" that is still enlarging the Universe.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from afar soren and it all started with the \"Big Bang\" that is still enlarging the Universe.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:21
Society a hitcher
Vipassana said:
I have sold my soul for a piece of bread and a soft bed
Unfortunately the society / world we live in forces this (and much of what you say in the poem) upon us. It\'s really difficult to escape it, in any material sense. Only in the mind, the heart, is there a possibility of true autonomy. End of speech.
You poem doesn\'t pull any punches. It\'s relentless, and has a powerful vitality of honesty.
March 21st, 2026 01:01
Vipassana said:
I have sold my soul for a piece of bread and a soft bed
Unfortunately the society / world we live in forces this (and much of what you say in the poem) upon us. It\'s really difficult to escape it, in any material sense. Only in the mind, the heart, is there a possibility of true autonomy. End of speech.
You poem doesn\'t pull any punches. It\'s relentless, and has a powerful vitality of honesty.
March 21st, 2026 01:01
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