Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Emotion
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 13th, 2026 11:32

Emotion
Lorenz said:

emotional addiction can seriously affect your mental health and turn you into poets !

June 13th, 2026 08:23

Emotion
arqios said:

Tempers do flare and even words fuel conflagration! πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

June 13th, 2026 07:33

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NafisaSB said:



June 13th, 2026 06:57

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NafisaSB said:

Agree wholeheartedly with the topic presented so well in verse πŸ€—

June 13th, 2026 06:57

Emotion
Friendship said:

This poem exudes intense violence and emotion, with the speaker harboring profound animosity, consistently displaying aggression while attempting to belittle others. Nonetheless, it underscores the significance of recognizing the potency of language and the necessity for emotional control to avoid causing harm through our words, serving as a cautionary reflection on the repercussions of letting anger dictate our expressions.

June 13th, 2026 06:54

Softly torn
NafisaSB said:

The duality is simply amazing and yet so true to life. Superb βœŒοΈπŸ’

June 13th, 2026 06:53

Emotion
Paul Bell said:

This is me on a Monday morning.
The litmus paper is lit leaving the house.
The first explosion comes when the mad neighbour continues part 96 of her life story.
By the time I find the train is cancelled I\'m on the moon.

June 13th, 2026 06:49

Emotion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a most explosive write, much enjoyed my friend

June 13th, 2026 04:36

Emotion
soheil khodaparasti said:

I like the conceptual unity emerging from imagery of pressure, explosion, and injury, which frames language as a physical and violent force.

June 13th, 2026 03:56

Softly torn
arqios said:

The world is moving too fast for me now. It’s all I can do to hang on and catch a glimpse of what isn’t truly mine.

June 12th, 2026 19:17

Softly torn
Kevin Hulme said:

Seems theres always a down side to every Up.
Or Vise Versa. All works out the same.
Good one.

June 12th, 2026 18:50

Burnt perspectives
Donteatmecows said:

I enjoyed it! the baking analogy was good and i relate with the buyer it has an ick-factor when u find hair in something...it disgusted me out!

June 12th, 2026 16:48

Softly torn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a powerful piece. From roses to silver spoons to that uneasy ride at the end, it all feels like a reminder that every high carries its own risk and every comfort has its edge. That\'s a truth I\'ve bumped into more than once myself. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 12th, 2026 13:06

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Lorenz said:

Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?

June 12th, 2026 04:29

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RSM0812 said:

Great imagery in few words. Enjoyed the read.

June 12th, 2026 03:46

Softly torn
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

enjoyed

June 12th, 2026 03:35

Softly torn
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 12th, 2026 02:20

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very true but all types of poetry can be wonderful.

Andy

June 12th, 2026 01:47

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cellinic said:

A serious and sincere, reverberating statement. My fave, my friend

June 11th, 2026 20:48

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Kevin Hulme said:

Must admit I\'ve never been into the \'Beat Poets\'.
Read \'On the Road\' a few years back , Couldn\'t see what the fuss was about.

June 11th, 2026 18:47

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MendedFences27 said:

I think I\'ll just throw some comments against the wall and see what sticks. Maybe, those \"word droppings\" if arranged properly, or if they contained some sort of meaning, perhaps then the author could do the work and present them as readable. (i.e. \"Portrait\' by E .E. Cummings or \"Libations\" by Amanda Gorman). Are writers (poets) not responsible for their art? Perhaps , they should paint \"by numbers\" before they besiege us with their attempted \"Mons Lisa\". - Phil A.

June 11th, 2026 15:49

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Mirela said:

Hi sorenbarrett, this poem made me smile

June 11th, 2026 14:19

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. πŸ˜„ As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🀣 Then I realized it was a senryu. πŸ˜… There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 11th, 2026 08:42

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Lorenz said:

A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !

June 11th, 2026 07:39

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Paul Bell said:

I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.



June 11th, 2026 06:01

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arqios said:

So sad, that current state of affairs πŸ˜’πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

June 11th, 2026 05:19

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David Wakeling said:

Oh I agree here. So often I have seen the non-words \"wap\" or \"wassup\". It strikes me as an excuse for not being able to write coherently.You certainly feel passionately about the issue.And rightly so.A great poem. Here here

June 11th, 2026 04:22

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a great analysis and a fav

June 11th, 2026 03:56

Flock
Goldfinch60 said:

They just want to control us into their ways not the way good life is.

Andy

June 11th, 2026 01:50

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