Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Lost paper thoughts
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good Write๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’™

December 21st, 2025 08:41

Human beans
arqios said:

The type and consistency/inconsistency of nurture/neglect we get and give affects us all๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

December 21st, 2025 08:02

Human beans
Michael Edwards said:

Wow, Friendship really does summarise this superb write . In my garden today here in early winter in the UK the first snowdrop, hemerocallis in bloom and birds singing in readiness for what lies ahead. Oh the circular joys of life.

December 21st, 2025 06:57

Human beans
Friendship said:

Your poem revolves around the consequences of excess and imbalance, particularly in the context of growthโ€”both in nature and in human development. The subject matter juxtaposes the nurturing of plants with the upbringing of children, suggesting that just as plants require a balance of water, sun, and nutrients, children also need a balanced environment to thrive. The poem warns against overindulgence and neglect, emphasizing that both extremes can lead to stunted growth and negative outcomes.

December 21st, 2025 05:17

Human beans
orchidee said:

A fine write SB. That reminds me - dung - to dish up more sewage for KPs meals. lol. I am horrible. heehee.

December 21st, 2025 03:22

Myopic science
Goldfinch60 said:

If it keeps going this way we will not be here soren. Why cannot love rule the world?

Andy

December 21st, 2025 02:19

Myopic science
Demar Desu said:

You been on a roll Soren

December 20th, 2025 22:18

Myopic science
Kevin Hulme said:

True true. And nicely summed-up .

December 20th, 2025 20:04

Myopic science
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truth. This reminds me of a poem I wrote earlier this year, \"And They Call It Science\". Very thought-provoking. my friend. What they call \"science\" is very constricted indeed and rarely leads to answers that don\'t change with the wind direction. And that is the nature of science, no? We only know what we think we know until we realize we don\'t know it at all. But these days science seems to know everything and gets so much wrong. Arrogance. And that is getting even worse these days. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

December 20th, 2025 09:14

Myopic science
Friendship said:

Well written, your poem critiques the narrow focus of scientific advancement, suggesting that while technology has made significant strides in combating illness and improving human life, it has also led to a loss of broader understanding and perhaps a disconnect from natural immunity and holistic health. The poem implies that a singular focus on chemical solutions can overlook the complexities and interdependencies of health and the environment.

December 20th, 2025 06:29

The brand you buy
Doggerel Dave said:

Charity shops keep me sartorially elegant....

December 20th, 2025 06:24

Myopic science
arqios said:

Just this week I was again pondering the idea of the Frankensteinic bent in all of humanity. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

December 20th, 2025 06:21

Myopic science
Katie B. said:

Thought provoking write. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing SB.

December 20th, 2025 04:14

Myopic science
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ahh, another item to add to my recipe book for when I prepare KP\'s meals - parasitic worms. She\'ll like those! lol.

December 20th, 2025 03:30

The brand you buy
Goldfinch60 said:

The most valuable thing that you can give to anybody is your time. Good write soren.

Andy

December 20th, 2025 02:10

The brand you buy
Lorenz said:

I never forget to give her due to the cleaning lady at the Martinez ! Question of class ...

December 19th, 2025 10:53

The brand you buy
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, sorenbarrett.
To stay afloat
Some take a plane
Others a boat
For me, a quatrain

December 19th, 2025 09:37

The brand you buy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this reads as a critique of class performance itself. Objects, scent, and surface become moral signals, while real work is dismissed as vulgar. Itโ€™s sharp, controlled, and unapologetic in what it names. Powerful and a fave for sure. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

December 19th, 2025 09:17

The brand you buy
Friendship said:

The poem explores the social divide between the wealthy and the working class, highlighting how material possessions and outward appearances are used to delineate class status. It critiques the superficiality of wealth and the obligations that come with it, suggesting that true value lies beyond materialism.

December 19th, 2025 07:31

The brand you buy
Katie B. said:

Love \"Purchased beauty is the riches duty.\" Nice write SB.

December 19th, 2025 07:30

Once
Dhiman Shah said:

INDEED A POEM THAT REALLY NEEDS APPRECIATION.

December 19th, 2025 06:17

The brand you buy
orchidee said:

Ohh, buying thing (again, or at any time of year?) that we neither need nor want?! Good write SB.

December 19th, 2025 04:03

The brand you buy
Demar Desu said:

Love the rhyming you came in with here, and the line calluses never never see in palacesโ€ฆ TOUGH

December 19th, 2025 03:57

The woods
Goldfinch60 said:

Those woods hold so many secrets form us all Soren and it would be wonderful to hear some of them.

Andy

December 19th, 2025 02:43

Adrift fading into twilight
Kevin Hulme said:

Every December I Read \'A Christmas Carol\'.
This is Like Scrooge and the Ghost of Christmas Past; Looking at Past years of when we were younger. People long gone : and much missed. Enjoyed your Poam.

December 18th, 2025 20:40

Imprisoned
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:

Nice write

December 18th, 2025 19:48

The woods
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

December 18th, 2025 16:47

The woods
Kevin Hulme said:

A fine Poem on one of Natures Loveliest Creations: The Forest.

December 18th, 2025 15:35

The woods
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, sorenbarrett. Do I sense a Druid heart?

December 18th, 2025 08:47

The woods
Paul Bell said:

Once upon a time, man and the forest fed off each other, lived and died in harmony.
I sometimes think people don\'t realise how important trees are.
In a way, they are probably more important than humans.

December 18th, 2025 08:33

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