Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Aisle twenty four
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
Aisle twenty four
Katie B. said:
Loved it! Clever write. Thanks for sharing your talent!
December 10th, 2025 05:57
Katie B. said:
Loved it! Clever write. Thanks for sharing your talent!
December 10th, 2025 05:57
Aisle twenty four
Friendship said:
Well executed, this morning\'s challenge was somewhat perplexing, yet the display of humor was commendable.
The poem revolves around the humorous and frustrating experience of trying to find a specific item in a large store, underscoring the challenges of communication and the absurdity of language. The speaker\'s repeated attempts to describe an item using various colloquial terms highlight the confusion that can arise when people use different words for the same object. Your poem likely aims to highlight the humor in miscommunication and the quirks of language, as well as the relatable experience of navigating a large store and the frustrations that can arise from it.
December 10th, 2025 05:46
Friendship said:
Well executed, this morning\'s challenge was somewhat perplexing, yet the display of humor was commendable.
The poem revolves around the humorous and frustrating experience of trying to find a specific item in a large store, underscoring the challenges of communication and the absurdity of language. The speaker\'s repeated attempts to describe an item using various colloquial terms highlight the confusion that can arise when people use different words for the same object. Your poem likely aims to highlight the humor in miscommunication and the quirks of language, as well as the relatable experience of navigating a large store and the frustrations that can arise from it.
December 10th, 2025 05:46
Aisle twenty four
Paul Bell said:
Reminds of the days when you needed to buy condoms, but for some reason you left with soap, shampoo, chewing gum, everything apart from the coveted condoms. Still, I did smell nice.
December 10th, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Reminds of the days when you needed to buy condoms, but for some reason you left with soap, shampoo, chewing gum, everything apart from the coveted condoms. Still, I did smell nice.
December 10th, 2025 04:16
Life\'s schooling
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I\'m told) legislated the first in the world (I\'m told) ban on social media for children under the age of 16. The world (I\'m told) is watching and may, (I\'m told) follow suit. Fair warning? Hate to see you left high and dry without at least some form of contingency plan, Soren......
December 10th, 2025 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I\'m told) legislated the first in the world (I\'m told) ban on social media for children under the age of 16. The world (I\'m told) is watching and may, (I\'m told) follow suit. Fair warning? Hate to see you left high and dry without at least some form of contingency plan, Soren......
December 10th, 2025 01:10
Solo climbing
Durdica Porobija said:
In my opinion, the poem is allegorical and depicts the risky human journey towards meaning or a goal. Falling into an abyss can signify the loss of illusions or death itself. A sensitive, empathetic poem towards human destiny.
December 9th, 2025 14:46
Durdica Porobija said:
In my opinion, the poem is allegorical and depicts the risky human journey towards meaning or a goal. Falling into an abyss can signify the loss of illusions or death itself. A sensitive, empathetic poem towards human destiny.
December 9th, 2025 14:46
Life\'s schooling
Lorenz said:
\" cultivate your Kindergarten ! \'\' Says the master !
December 9th, 2025 12:37
Lorenz said:
\" cultivate your Kindergarten ! \'\' Says the master !
December 9th, 2025 12:37
Life\'s schooling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch! It\'s the like the one-liner of poems, but not cliché in the slightest! Brilliance! Oh...and congrats on graduating! 🤣 All jokes aside, this is absolutely a fave, dear Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch! It\'s the like the one-liner of poems, but not cliché in the slightest! Brilliance! Oh...and congrats on graduating! 🤣 All jokes aside, this is absolutely a fave, dear Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 10:28
Life\'s schooling
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Life\'s schooling
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Life\'s schooling
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Life\'s schooling
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
Life\'s schooling
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite three lines with a fully lived life in between them, Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 9th, 2025 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite three lines with a fully lived life in between them, Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 9th, 2025 03:29
Who\'s the fool
cellinic said:
Rather wise and persuasive... A good and impressive write!
December 9th, 2025 02:58
cellinic said:
Rather wise and persuasive... A good and impressive write!
December 9th, 2025 02:58
Who\'s the fool
Goldfinch60 said:
Showing just how mad the world is at this time soren, well written.
Andy
December 9th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Showing just how mad the world is at this time soren, well written.
Andy
December 9th, 2025 02:15
Who\'s the fool
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Your choice in descriptive sensory words provide not only a lovely read but evokes sensations, I can almost hear these words. Great write Soren.
December 8th, 2025 20:30
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Your choice in descriptive sensory words provide not only a lovely read but evokes sensations, I can almost hear these words. Great write Soren.
December 8th, 2025 20:30
Who\'s the fool
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches me…it says more about survival than a whole stanza could. You’re pairing grit and grace in a way that lingers long after the last line. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches me…it says more about survival than a whole stanza could. You’re pairing grit and grace in a way that lingers long after the last line. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:17
Passing shades
Kevin Hulme said:
This time of year we all think of Loved Ones we\'ve known and lost. Fine Poem.
December 8th, 2025 20:12
Kevin Hulme said:
This time of year we all think of Loved Ones we\'ve known and lost. Fine Poem.
December 8th, 2025 20:12
Who\'s the fool
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written I love the metaphors I can totally tune into this and totally understand what you\'re writing I have the same issues
December 8th, 2025 18:09
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written I love the metaphors I can totally tune into this and totally understand what you\'re writing I have the same issues
December 8th, 2025 18:09
Who\'s the fool
arqios said:
This touched me so much. The dents and the teeth marks as well as the patching of broken eggs. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
This touched me so much. The dents and the teeth marks as well as the patching of broken eggs. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 07:50
Who\'s the fool
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time they locked the mad away, then someone had a bright idea of letting them into the community, but through time they lost them.
Now these mad people run governments and the sane allow them, which gets me wondering whose actually mad.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time they locked the mad away, then someone had a bright idea of letting them into the community, but through time they lost them.
Now these mad people run governments and the sane allow them, which gets me wondering whose actually mad.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Who\'s the fool
Friendship said:
The poem explores the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality. Yet the poet seems to explore the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality.
December 8th, 2025 06:07
Friendship said:
The poem explores the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality. Yet the poet seems to explore the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality.
December 8th, 2025 06:07
Who\'s the fool
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m just chatting to this spider, saying, Come indoors and build your web in the lounge!\' lol.
December 8th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m just chatting to this spider, saying, Come indoors and build your web in the lounge!\' lol.
December 8th, 2025 03:28
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