Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Is something there?
Teddy.15 said:
When you write like this it reminds me of my darling friend who has Dementia, this is a magnificent piece filled with emotional imagery. 🌹 I bow to you 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
When you write like this it reminds me of my darling friend who has Dementia, this is a magnificent piece filled with emotional imagery. 🌹 I bow to you 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 03:43
Now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The universe is aligning my friend. Last week, during therapy, I had this insight, coming from my Spirituality, of course: In God there is no was, in God there is no will be. In God…there just is. We only have and only ever will live in the now and until we realize that, we will never truly be living. Take God out of my statement, for those who don’t believe, the truth remains. There is no was, there is no will be. There just is. This poem expresses that so beautifully and succinctly it is a must fave for me, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
June 22nd, 2025 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The universe is aligning my friend. Last week, during therapy, I had this insight, coming from my Spirituality, of course: In God there is no was, in God there is no will be. In God…there just is. We only have and only ever will live in the now and until we realize that, we will never truly be living. Take God out of my statement, for those who don’t believe, the truth remains. There is no was, there is no will be. There just is. This poem expresses that so beautifully and succinctly it is a must fave for me, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
June 22nd, 2025 08:10
Now
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and filled with emotion - engraves itself in the mind
June 22nd, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and filled with emotion - engraves itself in the mind
June 22nd, 2025 06:09
Now
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful crafted write, for some poverty is a life long issue and struggle and I mean real poverty. While those around them just get fatter and fatter. Poignant and to me sad write on the current world
June 22nd, 2025 05:12
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful crafted write, for some poverty is a life long issue and struggle and I mean real poverty. While those around them just get fatter and fatter. Poignant and to me sad write on the current world
June 22nd, 2025 05:12
Now
Soman Ragavan said:
A description of some unhappy experiences in life. Sometimes we feel that all is going against us. It\'s just a long struggle.
June 22nd, 2025 05:03
Soman Ragavan said:
A description of some unhappy experiences in life. Sometimes we feel that all is going against us. It\'s just a long struggle.
June 22nd, 2025 05:03
Now
David Wakeling said:
I sense an element of despair in this poem.Seasoning has lost its flavour. It ends with one of the most powerful lines I have ever read.\" Sensations washed away in muddy tears ,time its engraver.Excellent
June 22nd, 2025 04:40
David Wakeling said:
I sense an element of despair in this poem.Seasoning has lost its flavour. It ends with one of the most powerful lines I have ever read.\" Sensations washed away in muddy tears ,time its engraver.Excellent
June 22nd, 2025 04:40
Now
Adiii said:
Wow such a great poetry on poverty
As someone from a third world country I have seen and faced it as well
I also like to write on difficult/sensitive /social topics and I have wrote on several already like nationalism , 3rd world struggle, immigration but I am not sure that should I release them in public maybe people will get offended Because Everyone have their own perspective on looking at things :)
June 22nd, 2025 04:20
Adiii said:
Wow such a great poetry on poverty
As someone from a third world country I have seen and faced it as well
I also like to write on difficult/sensitive /social topics and I have wrote on several already like nationalism , 3rd world struggle, immigration but I am not sure that should I release them in public maybe people will get offended Because Everyone have their own perspective on looking at things :)
June 22nd, 2025 04:20
Now
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed, poverty a really hard jar to escape from, your empathy compassion and poetic skills are truly felt in here, much like in all your work dear friend. 🌹a history lesson 🌹
June 22nd, 2025 03:08
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed, poverty a really hard jar to escape from, your empathy compassion and poetic skills are truly felt in here, much like in all your work dear friend. 🌹a history lesson 🌹
June 22nd, 2025 03:08
Deceptions
Damaso said:
I really liked it. I reached a point where it seemed to get tangled up, and when I reached the end, I found my way out again. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 21st, 2025 16:39
Damaso said:
I really liked it. I reached a point where it seemed to get tangled up, and when I reached the end, I found my way out again. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 21st, 2025 16:39
Love
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Lovely Inside and out
The substance and form
Sweet rhythms
June 21st, 2025 11:07
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Lovely Inside and out
The substance and form
Sweet rhythms
June 21st, 2025 11:07
Deceptions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This speaks of nature but really reveals the nature of humanity. A brilliant poem, whether taken literally or in a metaphorical sense. Powerfully true! 🌹👏
June 21st, 2025 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This speaks of nature but really reveals the nature of humanity. A brilliant poem, whether taken literally or in a metaphorical sense. Powerfully true! 🌹👏
June 21st, 2025 06:51
Demise of a poem
Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke said:
Beautiful poem. Keep it coming.
June 21st, 2025 05:29
Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke said:
Beautiful poem. Keep it coming.
June 21st, 2025 05:29
Deceptions
Soman Ragavan said:
An interesting observation of everyday stuff around us. Both steam and smoke can obscure our view for some time. Steam follows a clearer cycle : turning into clouds that fall as rain, to be again turned into steam. \"life\'s rain\" : indeed, rain sustains life. Water that got evaporated at one place turns into clouds that travel to other places to fall as rain. One interesting thing about salt is that, when boiled in water, the steam can be made to condense and salt is obtained again.... As for sugar, fertilisers and salts are thrown in sugar cane fields, but SUGAR is produced.... Another marvel of nature right under our eyes....
June 21st, 2025 05:16
Soman Ragavan said:
An interesting observation of everyday stuff around us. Both steam and smoke can obscure our view for some time. Steam follows a clearer cycle : turning into clouds that fall as rain, to be again turned into steam. \"life\'s rain\" : indeed, rain sustains life. Water that got evaporated at one place turns into clouds that travel to other places to fall as rain. One interesting thing about salt is that, when boiled in water, the steam can be made to condense and salt is obtained again.... As for sugar, fertilisers and salts are thrown in sugar cane fields, but SUGAR is produced.... Another marvel of nature right under our eyes....
June 21st, 2025 05:16
Deceptions
David Wakeling said:
For me this is how in Nature things deceive us but more than that it is about people and their deceptions. In this world we have to negotiate the many deceptions that people are capable of. An interesting poem.made me think
June 21st, 2025 04:38
David Wakeling said:
For me this is how in Nature things deceive us but more than that it is about people and their deceptions. In this world we have to negotiate the many deceptions that people are capable of. An interesting poem.made me think
June 21st, 2025 04:38
A strange guy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, there are people like that all over the world.
Andy
June 21st, 2025 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, there are people like that all over the world.
Andy
June 21st, 2025 01:27
A strange guy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem, Soren,, is playful, surreal, and tinged with irony. I love your use of absurdist imagery to sketch a character who is both whimsical and tragic—a kind of poetic trickster or holy fool. The character of the poem defies rules and expectations, bending reality with an air of tragic whimsy, operating in a nonsensical or distorted world but continuing to act with intent, if not wisdom. One of the strangest—and sharpest—character sketches I’ve read in a while...in all of the right ways. Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem, Soren,, is playful, surreal, and tinged with irony. I love your use of absurdist imagery to sketch a character who is both whimsical and tragic—a kind of poetic trickster or holy fool. The character of the poem defies rules and expectations, bending reality with an air of tragic whimsy, operating in a nonsensical or distorted world but continuing to act with intent, if not wisdom. One of the strangest—and sharpest—character sketches I’ve read in a while...in all of the right ways. Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:42
Redemption in deception
Firefall said:
Truly something to think about. Our words should encourage and not cause harm but that is not always the case. Great poem.
June 20th, 2025 10:55
Firefall said:
Truly something to think about. Our words should encourage and not cause harm but that is not always the case. Great poem.
June 20th, 2025 10:55
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