Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Indigestion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this..I see the stolen fruit as metaphor for sin (does not have to be in the eternal, religious sense), guilt turning sour inside, until the body rejects it in a kind of purging forgiveness. A tight, vivid piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Really love this!
September 30th, 2025 17:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this..I see the stolen fruit as metaphor for sin (does not have to be in the eternal, religious sense), guilt turning sour inside, until the body rejects it in a kind of purging forgiveness. A tight, vivid piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Really love this!
September 30th, 2025 17:57
Indigestion
cellinic said:
A nicely written, brief but significantly overwhelming write! Best wishes,
September 30th, 2025 07:54
cellinic said:
A nicely written, brief but significantly overwhelming write! Best wishes,
September 30th, 2025 07:54
Indigestion
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"Indigestion\" explores the consequences of illicit or hasty actions, particularly the emotional and physical discomfort that follows. It suggests that even brief moments of indulgence can lead to regret and eventual relief, highlighting the duality of pleasure and pain in human experiences.
September 30th, 2025 07:44
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"Indigestion\" explores the consequences of illicit or hasty actions, particularly the emotional and physical discomfort that follows. It suggests that even brief moments of indulgence can lead to regret and eventual relief, highlighting the duality of pleasure and pain in human experiences.
September 30th, 2025 07:44
Fear myths of the unknown
Iris Lynn said:
I love this poem such a strong piece great job!
September 30th, 2025 07:36
Iris Lynn said:
I love this poem such a strong piece great job!
September 30th, 2025 07:36
No reason
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, Nature brings beauty and wonder to us all.
Andy
September 30th, 2025 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, Nature brings beauty and wonder to us all.
Andy
September 30th, 2025 00:59
No reason
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece is filled with quiet joy…rejecting the cages of distraction, raising nature’s fine wine instead. It’s about more than scenery…it’s about the patience and authenticity that make contentment possible. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece is filled with quiet joy…rejecting the cages of distraction, raising nature’s fine wine instead. It’s about more than scenery…it’s about the patience and authenticity that make contentment possible. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:09
Nature
Friendship said:
A bit morbid, would you say they drank from her veins, made omelets from her brains? The poem serves to provoke thought about the impact of human actions on the environment and to raise awareness of the delicate balance between survival and sustainability. It critiques the exploitative tendencies of humanity while also acknowledging the primal instincts that drive survival.
September 29th, 2025 14:21
Friendship said:
A bit morbid, would you say they drank from her veins, made omelets from her brains? The poem serves to provoke thought about the impact of human actions on the environment and to raise awareness of the delicate balance between survival and sustainability. It critiques the exploitative tendencies of humanity while also acknowledging the primal instincts that drive survival.
September 29th, 2025 14:21
No reason
Friendship said:
The poem emphasizes the intrinsic value and beauty of nature, suggesting that it provides a sense of fulfillment and contentment that artificial experiences (like media) cannot replicate. The speaker finds solace and joy in the natural world.
September 29th, 2025 11:52
Friendship said:
The poem emphasizes the intrinsic value and beauty of nature, suggesting that it provides a sense of fulfillment and contentment that artificial experiences (like media) cannot replicate. The speaker finds solace and joy in the natural world.
September 29th, 2025 11:52
No reason
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dear Soren sleek and beautifully written 🥂. I have to say as I’ve read I did miss the word before “ view” with or without it it’s beautifully exceptionally written and beautifully worth the read. Overall i definitely enjoyed. 💯✨🤴
September 29th, 2025 09:50
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dear Soren sleek and beautifully written 🥂. I have to say as I’ve read I did miss the word before “ view” with or without it it’s beautifully exceptionally written and beautifully worth the read. Overall i definitely enjoyed. 💯✨🤴
September 29th, 2025 09:50
Night images
William Hromada said:
Time can be so subjective! Slow or fast!!!
September 29th, 2025 08:06
William Hromada said:
Time can be so subjective! Slow or fast!!!
September 29th, 2025 08:06
No reason
Lorenz said:
We are all animals encaged behind sulfuric bars that the dark poetry of our condition inspires...
September 29th, 2025 06:51
Lorenz said:
We are all animals encaged behind sulfuric bars that the dark poetry of our condition inspires...
September 29th, 2025 06:51
No reason
Paul Bell said:
Yes, as we run about at a hundred miles an hour, nature patiently gets on with her work.
Sometimes we need to slow down to appreciate it.
September 29th, 2025 05:59
Paul Bell said:
Yes, as we run about at a hundred miles an hour, nature patiently gets on with her work.
Sometimes we need to slow down to appreciate it.
September 29th, 2025 05:59
Gently
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking write, Soren. Nicely done.
September 29th, 2025 04:38
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking write, Soren. Nicely done.
September 29th, 2025 04:38
No reason
Soman Ragavan said:
Nature has the knack to grow back when battered. Overgrowth will resume after destruction by others. Thus, nature will reproduce its majesty for us to see.
September 29th, 2025 03:16
Soman Ragavan said:
Nature has the knack to grow back when battered. Overgrowth will resume after destruction by others. Thus, nature will reproduce its majesty for us to see.
September 29th, 2025 03:16
Nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is there for us all to enjoy in so many ways soren.
Andy
September 29th, 2025 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is there for us all to enjoy in so many ways soren.
Andy
September 29th, 2025 01:11
Gently
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful representation of a grim reality
- kudos
September 28th, 2025 23:56
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful representation of a grim reality
- kudos
September 28th, 2025 23:56
Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is raw and unflinching. The imagery of taking from the earth…her bones, her veins…lands heavy with truth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2025 16:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is raw and unflinching. The imagery of taking from the earth…her bones, her veins…lands heavy with truth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2025 16:25
Nature
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ohhh, thanks for more recipe ideas for KP here too! lol.
September 28th, 2025 13:01
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ohhh, thanks for more recipe ideas for KP here too! lol.
September 28th, 2025 13:01
Ghosts
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a beautifully atmospheric piece it evokes subtle movement and the passage of time with a calm, reflective tone.
September 28th, 2025 12:12
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a beautifully atmospheric piece it evokes subtle movement and the passage of time with a calm, reflective tone.
September 28th, 2025 12:12
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