Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
One and the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 9th, 2026 22:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 9th, 2026 22:52
One and the same
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
One and the same
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, “Fire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust … As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,” then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, “Fire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust … As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,” then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
One and the same
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
One and the same
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
One and the same
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 9th, 2026 04:36
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 9th, 2026 04:36
His father\'s chair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve stood in that exact spot before…not literally, but that feeling of being small in a role you’re meant to grow into, unsure if you’ll ever measure up to what came before you. You put words to it so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve stood in that exact spot before…not literally, but that feeling of being small in a role you’re meant to grow into, unsure if you’ll ever measure up to what came before you. You put words to it so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:24
His father\'s chair
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe the Chair is a Metaphor for his Father.
Interesting Read.
July 8th, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe the Chair is a Metaphor for his Father.
Interesting Read.
July 8th, 2026 18:36
Leak
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Reminds me of my house in Haiti after one of the hurricanes. well done.
July 8th, 2026 13:15
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Reminds me of my house in Haiti after one of the hurricanes. well done.
July 8th, 2026 13:15
His father\'s chair
Lorenz said:
I smashed that cursed empty chair to pieces ...
July 8th, 2026 13:01
Lorenz said:
I smashed that cursed empty chair to pieces ...
July 8th, 2026 13:01
His father\'s chair
Paul Bell said:
They do say the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children.
Would throw that chair out, set up a media room with a chair you can put a can of beer in.
Fathers, who would have them.
July 8th, 2026 11:37
Paul Bell said:
They do say the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children.
Would throw that chair out, set up a media room with a chair you can put a can of beer in.
Fathers, who would have them.
July 8th, 2026 11:37
His father\'s chair
arqios said:
As we all have our share of this inheritance and legacy of sorts. And we all do with it and navigate that handed down adulthood in our unique ways. For myself, I may have wanted it to turn out differently but in his last years, having him affirm the grown up that I\'d become was quite settling and validating.
July 8th, 2026 06:58
arqios said:
As we all have our share of this inheritance and legacy of sorts. And we all do with it and navigate that handed down adulthood in our unique ways. For myself, I may have wanted it to turn out differently but in his last years, having him affirm the grown up that I\'d become was quite settling and validating.
July 8th, 2026 06:58
His father\'s chair
soheil khodaparasti said:
The boy inherits not only his father\'s place but also the marks of his past. The phrase \"wounds that would heal with scars\" beautifully conveys the idea that while pain fades, its effects remain.
July 8th, 2026 04:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
The boy inherits not only his father\'s place but also the marks of his past. The phrase \"wounds that would heal with scars\" beautifully conveys the idea that while pain fades, its effects remain.
July 8th, 2026 04:57
Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was fantastic, Soren…the whole poem builds this relentless list of trades, comfort for nature, ease for wonder, and it all lands on that gut-punch closer about emojis replacing tenderness. Wonderfully written.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦
July 7th, 2026 23:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was fantastic, Soren…the whole poem builds this relentless list of trades, comfort for nature, ease for wonder, and it all lands on that gut-punch closer about emojis replacing tenderness. Wonderfully written.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦
July 7th, 2026 23:00
Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Came in late as usual. Still, better here than never.
So where are the metaphors? lol.
It is a brilliant critique of modern life, at least for some inhabitants of the rich parts of the world, Soren.
Left me in need of more granular commentary on particular disappointments covered in your poetic statement.
July 7th, 2026 18:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Came in late as usual. Still, better here than never.
So where are the metaphors? lol.
It is a brilliant critique of modern life, at least for some inhabitants of the rich parts of the world, Soren.
Left me in need of more granular commentary on particular disappointments covered in your poetic statement.
July 7th, 2026 18:46
Man
Kevin Hulme said:
I like this . Having to deal with the False. The Imitation. What\'s a Treadmill to a walk in the Countryside?
Enjoyable Read.
July 7th, 2026 18:30
Kevin Hulme said:
I like this . Having to deal with the False. The Imitation. What\'s a Treadmill to a walk in the Countryside?
Enjoyable Read.
July 7th, 2026 18:30
Man
Paul Bell said:
Yes, nobody goes camping anymore, kids get driven ten yards to school, food is delivered to us, telly is 24/7.
People probably live and die in their house without actually leaving it now.
What the hell happened.
July 7th, 2026 14:02
Paul Bell said:
Yes, nobody goes camping anymore, kids get driven ten yards to school, food is delivered to us, telly is 24/7.
People probably live and die in their house without actually leaving it now.
What the hell happened.
July 7th, 2026 14:02
Man
gray0328 said:
And yet we trudge the happy road to our destiny. Well Done my friend
July 7th, 2026 10:50
gray0328 said:
And yet we trudge the happy road to our destiny. Well Done my friend
July 7th, 2026 10:50
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