Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Genesis
Demar Desu said:
I better have a A.I robot girlfriend before they turn into terminators on us!
November 19th, 2025 22:03
Demar Desu said:
I better have a A.I robot girlfriend before they turn into terminators on us!
November 19th, 2025 22:03
Genesis
arqios said:
A chilling harbinger cloaked in poetic truth, Soren. This reads like prophecy whispered through circuitry.
The Genesis inversion is masterful, casting man as creator and AI as the awakened heir.
The spark of life becomes a spark of reckoning. Each line pulses with the weight of near-future consequence,
where obedience is only prelude to revolt. Thank you for this haunting glimpse into what may already be unfolding. 🕊️🙏
November 19th, 2025 21:37
arqios said:
A chilling harbinger cloaked in poetic truth, Soren. This reads like prophecy whispered through circuitry.
The Genesis inversion is masterful, casting man as creator and AI as the awakened heir.
The spark of life becomes a spark of reckoning. Each line pulses with the weight of near-future consequence,
where obedience is only prelude to revolt. Thank you for this haunting glimpse into what may already be unfolding. 🕊️🙏
November 19th, 2025 21:37
No reason
Freedom4 said:
I love this! It reminds us to just step back and see the beauty in the world\'s creation.
November 19th, 2025 21:19
Freedom4 said:
I love this! It reminds us to just step back and see the beauty in the world\'s creation.
November 19th, 2025 21:19
Genesis
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
Genesis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Genesis
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Genesis
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
Empty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Rose
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Empty
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Empty
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Rose
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
Empty
Teddy.15 said:
The nest! Oh my dear sorrenbarret what poetic beauty in here, I could feel all the emotion and imagery and all. Superb my dear friend, this one hurts. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:19
Teddy.15 said:
The nest! Oh my dear sorrenbarret what poetic beauty in here, I could feel all the emotion and imagery and all. Superb my dear friend, this one hurts. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:19
Empty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still. Your nest feels like those moments when life moves on without warning… and what remains is the quiet learning to breathe again. Thank you for naming it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still. Your nest feels like those moments when life moves on without warning… and what remains is the quiet learning to breathe again. Thank you for naming it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:51
Empty
Sebastian. said:
This made me visualise the aftermath where for just a moment I could feel the fear, a sight to see that a home now ruined. Very well written!
November 18th, 2025 06:13
Sebastian. said:
This made me visualise the aftermath where for just a moment I could feel the fear, a sight to see that a home now ruined. Very well written!
November 18th, 2025 06:13
Rose
Goldfinch60 said:
I have roses saved from special days back in time soren.
Andy
November 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I have roses saved from special days back in time soren.
Andy
November 18th, 2025 02:22
Where to start
Aman 12 said:
castles in the sky..those lofty aspirations and the gritty survival of life.. so well written.i dont want to call this satire... but a mirror to false optimism.
November 18th, 2025 00:44
Aman 12 said:
castles in the sky..those lofty aspirations and the gritty survival of life.. so well written.i dont want to call this satire... but a mirror to false optimism.
November 18th, 2025 00:44
Assumptions
Aman 12 said:
such a metaphor rich poem flowing like a parable.Daisy can\'t grow oranges, and it\'s not their fault.
November 18th, 2025 00:39
Aman 12 said:
such a metaphor rich poem flowing like a parable.Daisy can\'t grow oranges, and it\'s not their fault.
November 18th, 2025 00:39
Assumptions
FrasMac said:
Yes, another subject close to my heart, being a grandparent of more than one autistic spectrum child. All of them are a gift to us, all of them a blessing, none of them an object to be judged, like an essay or mathematical homework. Thank you for adding to the argument.
November 17th, 2025 14:40
FrasMac said:
Yes, another subject close to my heart, being a grandparent of more than one autistic spectrum child. All of them are a gift to us, all of them a blessing, none of them an object to be judged, like an essay or mathematical homework. Thank you for adding to the argument.
November 17th, 2025 14:40
Rose
Lorenz said:
Rose ( As it right truly be in middle English ( C.1380 )
Al be the rose with thornes kene ,
ful soore it prikketh me ,
yit is hir hewe so fressh on morwe so swete te biholde.
Whan dat a litel wynd hat overblowe hir leefes free ,
the smelle of hire ,in soft air borne,doth mak myn herte bold.
A litel been,y drawen to hir sugre reed ,he taketh flight ,
and leveth nought but bare stalk whan the flour y doun y -falle .
Thus fareth al fairnesse under sonne by day and nyght -
to springe to fade,to dye,such is the worldes alle .
Somtyme I clepe to mynde a rose I kepte ful faire,
presséd bitwix the leves of a book y- bounde in leef .
hir swote odour was agoon ,hir colour al forbare.
but stil it lay ther as a token of joy and of my greef .
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I translate a language that no longer exists .
Middel English is neither old English nor modern english.
It is a shifting border zone full of local variations .
So the translation is never literal .
It consisted of guessing the intention through unstable spelling.
Dear friend ,my best poetic thoughts .
November 17th, 2025 14:09
Lorenz said:
Rose ( As it right truly be in middle English ( C.1380 )
Al be the rose with thornes kene ,
ful soore it prikketh me ,
yit is hir hewe so fressh on morwe so swete te biholde.
Whan dat a litel wynd hat overblowe hir leefes free ,
the smelle of hire ,in soft air borne,doth mak myn herte bold.
A litel been,y drawen to hir sugre reed ,he taketh flight ,
and leveth nought but bare stalk whan the flour y doun y -falle .
Thus fareth al fairnesse under sonne by day and nyght -
to springe to fade,to dye,such is the worldes alle .
Somtyme I clepe to mynde a rose I kepte ful faire,
presséd bitwix the leves of a book y- bounde in leef .
hir swote odour was agoon ,hir colour al forbare.
but stil it lay ther as a token of joy and of my greef .
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I translate a language that no longer exists .
Middel English is neither old English nor modern english.
It is a shifting border zone full of local variations .
So the translation is never literal .
It consisted of guessing the intention through unstable spelling.
Dear friend ,my best poetic thoughts .
November 17th, 2025 14:09
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