Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Emotion
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how you expressed various emotions to disruptive effects. Well written.
June 14th, 2026 00:18
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how you expressed various emotions to disruptive effects. Well written.
June 14th, 2026 00:18
Emotion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The progression from pressure to explosion feels painfully familiar, and the imagery captures how destructive words can become when anger takes the wheel. Short, sharp, and impactful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The progression from pressure to explosion feels painfully familiar, and the imagery captures how destructive words can become when anger takes the wheel. Short, sharp, and impactful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:34
Emotion
Kevin Hulme said:
Basically I\'m Basil Fawlty 24/7. Fine use of Words to describe Anger.
June 13th, 2026 18:53
Kevin Hulme said:
Basically I\'m Basil Fawlty 24/7. Fine use of Words to describe Anger.
June 13th, 2026 18:53
Emotion
Lorenz said:
emotional addiction can seriously affect your mental health and turn you into poets !
June 13th, 2026 08:23
Lorenz said:
emotional addiction can seriously affect your mental health and turn you into poets !
June 13th, 2026 08:23
Poetry droppings
NafisaSB said:
Agree wholeheartedly with the topic presented so well in verse 🤗
June 13th, 2026 06:57
NafisaSB said:
Agree wholeheartedly with the topic presented so well in verse 🤗
June 13th, 2026 06:57
Emotion
Friendship said:
This poem exudes intense violence and emotion, with the speaker harboring profound animosity, consistently displaying aggression while attempting to belittle others. Nonetheless, it underscores the significance of recognizing the potency of language and the necessity for emotional control to avoid causing harm through our words, serving as a cautionary reflection on the repercussions of letting anger dictate our expressions.
June 13th, 2026 06:54
Friendship said:
This poem exudes intense violence and emotion, with the speaker harboring profound animosity, consistently displaying aggression while attempting to belittle others. Nonetheless, it underscores the significance of recognizing the potency of language and the necessity for emotional control to avoid causing harm through our words, serving as a cautionary reflection on the repercussions of letting anger dictate our expressions.
June 13th, 2026 06:54
Softly torn
NafisaSB said:
The duality is simply amazing and yet so true to life. Superb ✌️💐
June 13th, 2026 06:53
NafisaSB said:
The duality is simply amazing and yet so true to life. Superb ✌️💐
June 13th, 2026 06:53
Emotion
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning.
The litmus paper is lit leaving the house.
The first explosion comes when the mad neighbour continues part 96 of her life story.
By the time I find the train is cancelled I\'m on the moon.
June 13th, 2026 06:49
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning.
The litmus paper is lit leaving the house.
The first explosion comes when the mad neighbour continues part 96 of her life story.
By the time I find the train is cancelled I\'m on the moon.
June 13th, 2026 06:49
Emotion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most explosive write, much enjoyed my friend
June 13th, 2026 04:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most explosive write, much enjoyed my friend
June 13th, 2026 04:36
Emotion
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like the conceptual unity emerging from imagery of pressure, explosion, and injury, which frames language as a physical and violent force.
June 13th, 2026 03:56
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like the conceptual unity emerging from imagery of pressure, explosion, and injury, which frames language as a physical and violent force.
June 13th, 2026 03:56
Softly torn
arqios said:
The world is moving too fast for me now. It’s all I can do to hang on and catch a glimpse of what isn’t truly mine.
June 12th, 2026 19:17
arqios said:
The world is moving too fast for me now. It’s all I can do to hang on and catch a glimpse of what isn’t truly mine.
June 12th, 2026 19:17
Softly torn
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems theres always a down side to every Up.
Or Vise Versa. All works out the same.
Good one.
June 12th, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems theres always a down side to every Up.
Or Vise Versa. All works out the same.
Good one.
June 12th, 2026 18:50
Burnt perspectives
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed it! the baking analogy was good and i relate with the buyer it has an ick-factor when u find hair in something...it disgusted me out!
June 12th, 2026 16:48
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed it! the baking analogy was good and i relate with the buyer it has an ick-factor when u find hair in something...it disgusted me out!
June 12th, 2026 16:48
Softly torn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. From roses to silver spoons to that uneasy ride at the end, it all feels like a reminder that every high carries its own risk and every comfort has its edge. That\'s a truth I\'ve bumped into more than once myself. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. From roses to silver spoons to that uneasy ride at the end, it all feels like a reminder that every high carries its own risk and every comfort has its edge. That\'s a truth I\'ve bumped into more than once myself. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:06
Softly torn
Lorenz said:
Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?
June 12th, 2026 04:29
Lorenz said:
Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?
June 12th, 2026 04:29
Poetry droppings
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but all types of poetry can be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but all types of poetry can be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2026 01:47
Poetry droppings
cellinic said:
A serious and sincere, reverberating statement. My fave, my friend
June 11th, 2026 20:48
cellinic said:
A serious and sincere, reverberating statement. My fave, my friend
June 11th, 2026 20:48
Poetry droppings
Kevin Hulme said:
Must admit I\'ve never been into the \'Beat Poets\'.
Read \'On the Road\' a few years back , Couldn\'t see what the fuss was about.
June 11th, 2026 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
Must admit I\'ve never been into the \'Beat Poets\'.
Read \'On the Road\' a few years back , Couldn\'t see what the fuss was about.
June 11th, 2026 18:47
Poetry droppings
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ll just throw some comments against the wall and see what sticks. Maybe, those \"word droppings\" if arranged properly, or if they contained some sort of meaning, perhaps then the author could do the work and present them as readable. (i.e. \"Portrait\' by E .E. Cummings or \"Libations\" by Amanda Gorman). Are writers (poets) not responsible for their art? Perhaps , they should paint \"by numbers\" before they besiege us with their attempted \"Mons Lisa\". - Phil A.
June 11th, 2026 15:49
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ll just throw some comments against the wall and see what sticks. Maybe, those \"word droppings\" if arranged properly, or if they contained some sort of meaning, perhaps then the author could do the work and present them as readable. (i.e. \"Portrait\' by E .E. Cummings or \"Libations\" by Amanda Gorman). Are writers (poets) not responsible for their art? Perhaps , they should paint \"by numbers\" before they besiege us with their attempted \"Mons Lisa\". - Phil A.
June 11th, 2026 15:49
Poetry droppings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Poetry droppings
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Poetry droppings
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
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