Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Deep slumber
arqios said:
I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren 🕊️🙏
November 12th, 2025 07:55
arqios said:
I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren 🕊️🙏
November 12th, 2025 07:55
Spinoza\'s god
Keyara S Trotman said:
Are there any times that you’ve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren 🥂💕
November 12th, 2025 06:55
Keyara S Trotman said:
Are there any times that you’ve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren 🥂💕
November 12th, 2025 06:55
Solo climbing
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work
November 12th, 2025 04:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work
November 12th, 2025 04:34
Deep slumber
Lorenz said:
Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....
November 12th, 2025 04:27
Lorenz said:
Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....
November 12th, 2025 04:27
Spinoza\'s god
Kevin Hulme said:
I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.
November 11th, 2025 20:08
Kevin Hulme said:
I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.
November 11th, 2025 20:08
Spinoza\'s god
Neville said:
The way you have so masterfully captured our unique oneness is not beyond me .. because I feel so much a part of it .. Still, I sincerely hope you get my drift through this brain fog of mine .. and as I anxiously wait to hop on board one of the next incoming waves .. Take care and write on while I\'m taking a break 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
November 11th, 2025 11:35
Neville said:
The way you have so masterfully captured our unique oneness is not beyond me .. because I feel so much a part of it .. Still, I sincerely hope you get my drift through this brain fog of mine .. and as I anxiously wait to hop on board one of the next incoming waves .. Take care and write on while I\'m taking a break 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
November 11th, 2025 11:35
Spinoza\'s god
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something larger. You’ve written the purest form of belonging. That line...“As each wave falls another begins”...embodies the whole poem for me. Life and spirit, rising and returning, perfectly said, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something larger. You’ve written the purest form of belonging. That line...“As each wave falls another begins”...embodies the whole poem for me. Life and spirit, rising and returning, perfectly said, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:32
Glow
NafisaSB said:
I hope you never suffer from writer’s block; but continue to write and share some beautiful poems 👍
November 11th, 2025 08:41
NafisaSB said:
I hope you never suffer from writer’s block; but continue to write and share some beautiful poems 👍
November 11th, 2025 08:41
Be as
Aman 12 said:
its so difficult to be like water. gentle and fierce at the same time.
November 11th, 2025 06:46
Aman 12 said:
its so difficult to be like water. gentle and fierce at the same time.
November 11th, 2025 06:46
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Aman 12 said:
love without consent is just a conquest
November 11th, 2025 06:43
Aman 12 said:
love without consent is just a conquest
November 11th, 2025 06:43
Spinoza\'s god
Demar Desu said:
Have you written a poem titled this before?
November 11th, 2025 05:52
Demar Desu said:
Have you written a poem titled this before?
November 11th, 2025 05:52
Spinoza\'s god
Paul Bell said:
I\'m not too sure Spinoza was wrong in his thinking, everything does point that way.
It\'s just the evolution bit, humans moved a bit too fast in natures garden.
November 11th, 2025 04:42
Paul Bell said:
I\'m not too sure Spinoza was wrong in his thinking, everything does point that way.
It\'s just the evolution bit, humans moved a bit too fast in natures garden.
November 11th, 2025 04:42
Spinoza\'s god
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s in the air I breathe. Pity it\'s stale and stagnant, and whiffs of botox! heehee. Did you know that Spinoza chappie?
November 11th, 2025 03:29
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s in the air I breathe. Pity it\'s stale and stagnant, and whiffs of botox! heehee. Did you know that Spinoza chappie?
November 11th, 2025 03:29
Perfume of war
PerditaRose said:
Or could this be about WW1? I\'m not up on my history, but that\'s why God made Google. Like I said, it\'s thought-provoking.
November 10th, 2025 21:55
PerditaRose said:
Or could this be about WW1? I\'m not up on my history, but that\'s why God made Google. Like I said, it\'s thought-provoking.
November 10th, 2025 21:55
Perfume of war
PerditaRose said:
Your imagery is thought-provoking. It seems to me that you might be vegetarian?
November 10th, 2025 21:41
PerditaRose said:
Your imagery is thought-provoking. It seems to me that you might be vegetarian?
November 10th, 2025 21:41
Glow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is the art within the art…a poem about the breath that keeps poetry alive. Tender, elemental, and quietly brilliant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
November 10th, 2025 21:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is the art within the art…a poem about the breath that keeps poetry alive. Tender, elemental, and quietly brilliant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
November 10th, 2025 21:09
Glow
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Erm, I\'m not gonna throw the baby out with the bath-water - or rather, I\'m not gonna chuck myself on the bonfire with those leaves, twigs, etc.
This speaks to me, not of burning one\'s poems, but stoking up a fire in our minds maybe, if we\'ve become dry, as in writers block.
KP will have to wait. I can\'t feed her boiled leaves and twigs for supper as I need them for me bonfire! lol.
November 10th, 2025 13:05
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Erm, I\'m not gonna throw the baby out with the bath-water - or rather, I\'m not gonna chuck myself on the bonfire with those leaves, twigs, etc.
This speaks to me, not of burning one\'s poems, but stoking up a fire in our minds maybe, if we\'ve become dry, as in writers block.
KP will have to wait. I can\'t feed her boiled leaves and twigs for supper as I need them for me bonfire! lol.
November 10th, 2025 13:05
Glow
NinjaGirl said:
Taking it very literally-fire is fantastic for inspiration because it is so pretty! I do not know if you have ever written a poem to burn, but if you have not you totally should.
November 10th, 2025 13:04
NinjaGirl said:
Taking it very literally-fire is fantastic for inspiration because it is so pretty! I do not know if you have ever written a poem to burn, but if you have not you totally should.
November 10th, 2025 13:04
Relationships, everything has a price
NafisaSB said:
I think it all depends on who the buyer is- where the person is living, and whether it’s bought for use or as a status symbol 🤔😁
November 10th, 2025 12:02
NafisaSB said:
I think it all depends on who the buyer is- where the person is living, and whether it’s bought for use or as a status symbol 🤔😁
November 10th, 2025 12:02
Awakening
NafisaSB said:
Indeed our dreams are more beautiful than the harsh reality we face when we wake up. Beautifully crafted ✌️👏
November 10th, 2025 11:34
NafisaSB said:
Indeed our dreams are more beautiful than the harsh reality we face when we wake up. Beautifully crafted ✌️👏
November 10th, 2025 11:34
Glow
arqios said:
A daily challenge if there be one, to pay attention to inspiration when it sparks, with participative listening which in turn fuels the flame of the inspiring else it disappears. Perhaps even to strengthen the mind stretching it and flexing so as to gather thoughts which by nature tend to stray. They also burn away the blockages that keep writing from happening. Very relatable, Soren 🙏🕊️
November 10th, 2025 07:36
arqios said:
A daily challenge if there be one, to pay attention to inspiration when it sparks, with participative listening which in turn fuels the flame of the inspiring else it disappears. Perhaps even to strengthen the mind stretching it and flexing so as to gather thoughts which by nature tend to stray. They also burn away the blockages that keep writing from happening. Very relatable, Soren 🙏🕊️
November 10th, 2025 07:36
Glow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Can you be a writer and never have writer\'s block? Is writer\'s block a rite of passage?
On the eve of the morrow
I write of sorrow
The last words of both lines rhyme. It must be a poem. I read somewhere that\'s a couplet.
I bet someone will dig around in that and find a nugget to believe in. Happy writing.
November 10th, 2025 07:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Can you be a writer and never have writer\'s block? Is writer\'s block a rite of passage?
On the eve of the morrow
I write of sorrow
The last words of both lines rhyme. It must be a poem. I read somewhere that\'s a couplet.
I bet someone will dig around in that and find a nugget to believe in. Happy writing.
November 10th, 2025 07:33
Glow
Lorenz said:
.Throw all these vanities and yourself onto the pyre and be sanctified !
November 10th, 2025 07:32
Lorenz said:
.Throw all these vanities and yourself onto the pyre and be sanctified !
November 10th, 2025 07:32
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