Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



What we hold inside
soheil khodaparasti said:

A really philosophical reflection on emotional intimacy.

January 5th, 2026 16:56

The brand you buy
xTattooingPaperx said:

Holy smokes! Talk about word play... Evenly metered with assonance in every line. I especially love \"purchased beauty...\". Quite a take on life itself and so true

January 5th, 2026 16:24

What we hold inside
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, the metaphor carries real weight. Heat, sweetness, sting, and safeguarding all work together to show how raw feeling is both fuel and risk. That final boundary you draw makes the whole piece hum with purpose. Thought-provoking work, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 5th, 2026 16:04

What we hold inside
Teddy.15 said:

Passion beautifully decorated within these lines. ๐ŸŒน

January 5th, 2026 15:33

What we hold inside
Neville said:


Filled to the point of overflowing with truth and good common sense .. ๐ŸŒป๐Ÿ‘

January 5th, 2026 13:45

Love your enemies
lunarchloedip said:

forgiveness is filled with more peace than anger :)
thanks for sharing!

January 5th, 2026 12:51

Love your enemies
Rachel Poole said:

Forgiveness is by far the most important part of healing, not for the recipient, but for our own personal needs/wants! (in my opinion) Amazing read!

January 5th, 2026 12:21

What we hold inside
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem explores the concept of raw emotion and its dual natureโ€”both beautiful and painful. It reflects on how emotions can be intense and overwhelming, akin to honey that is both sweet and scalding when heated. The poem suggests that these emotions are precious and should be shared only with trusted individuals, much like honey stored in a hive, protected and reserved for those who deserve access.

January 5th, 2026 07:12

What we hold inside
arqios said:

The sealing could be a kind of protection ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

January 5th, 2026 06:54

What we hold inside
Aman 12 said:

poem is thick with feeling just like honey...deliberate weight of experience..will offer honey only to a friend.

January 5th, 2026 06:54

What we hold inside
Paul Bell said:

Great analogy for the food of thought.
Got a lot of goodness in it, but don\'t take it for granted.

January 5th, 2026 05:33

What we hold inside
Mutley Ravishes said:

All that holding, in the internal organs!

January 5th, 2026 04:12

What we hold inside
orchidee said:

Will the bees sting at the risk of losing their lives? I was cruel. I sent KP to get honey from my beehive but filled it with wasps instead! lol.

January 5th, 2026 03:11

Did you know it\'s all true
Teddy.15 said:

Wow only you could write about nature in such a beautiful mystical and hypnotizing manner. Oh you could definitely charm a python. ๐ŸŒน

January 4th, 2026 15:20

Love your enemies
Neville said:


Forgiveness .. the greatest gift ............ ever ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

January 4th, 2026 14:00

Did you know it\'s all true
Joseph M Marion said:

Very well written very beautiful

January 4th, 2026 13:33

Love your enemies
Joseph M Marion said:

I absolutely love this these are the things that I would do it\'s called compassion something that\'s been missing in this world why we very select band of writers can understand in depth much greater than most will ever in their entire life thank you for being such a good friend

January 4th, 2026 13:31

Did you know it\'s all true
orchidee said:

Yet - taking this humorously or seriously - I did once advocate in a fantasy, for cabbages to have a chance of ruling the country. My slogan was \'Cabbages Rule OK!\' But who knows? They might make a better job of things?

January 4th, 2026 10:03

Did you know it\'s all true
orchidee said:

In my daftness, I\'ve bought a tree indoors on chilly nights - a big oak tree! Or so I say. Well, I felt it was chilly outside for the poor tree to stay out all night. lol. I don\'t think we can take plants as sentient (feeling) beings though, like we can we animals and humans. But we should be concerned about the environment, conservation, etc.
Btu since when was I sentient towards KP? heehee.

January 4th, 2026 10:00

Did you know it\'s all true
Thomas W Case said:

This feels patient and alive. I like how it treats plants as witnesses instead of objects.

January 4th, 2026 09:34

Did you know it\'s all true
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is a poem of recognition. You reveal a world already communicating, remembering, and sharing, without needing humanityโ€™s permission. By the end, grace feels ecological, not abstract. Thoughtful and quietly profound work. I am a vegetarian...but the point you raise in your note is spot on. Life is life and we consume life to live. Period. What\'s weird is how we value some life over others...meat and veggies alike. Yet, our discrimination is based on what? Powerful stuff, my friend. Thank you for sharing.๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 4th, 2026 09:30

Did you know it\'s all true
Priya Tomar said:

Yes it\'s all true .
Great poem !

January 4th, 2026 08:34

Did you know it\'s all true
Friendship said:

Yes, they are alive. Well-worded.Your poem revolves around the hidden life of plants, their ability to communicate, and their relationships with one another and their environment. The imagery evokes a sense of wonder about the intricate

January 4th, 2026 08:06

Did you know it\'s all true
Neville said:



This made me think .. hard .. I\'m just gonna eat rocks from now on .. Unless you know summat I don\'t .. and if ya do, then I won\'t .. Neville

January 4th, 2026 06:10

Did you know it\'s all true
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

thoroughly enjoyed the read

January 4th, 2026 05:01

Did you know it\'s all true
Soman Ragavan said:

Indeed, both plants and animals amaze us by their capacity to understand, sense and respond to stimuluses reaching them. For instance, the sunflower follows the path of the sun across the sky. It is said that upon sunset, they turn 180 degrees to face East again, awaiting the next sunrise. When they are laded with seeds, they are too heavy to turn.

January 4th, 2026 04:51

Love your enemies
Kevin Hulme said:

An enjoyable Poem on Forgiveness.
Though my forgiving a rival Football team beating us the other week is asking too much. ๐Ÿ˜“.

January 3rd, 2026 14:21

Love your enemies
Lorenz said:

\" I have no ennemies if I discover any I eliminate them ! \'\'
( Radical management of interpersonal relationship )

January 3rd, 2026 13:40

Love your enemies
soheil khodaparasti said:

Great! A testament to forgiveness, compassion, and resilience, guided by understanding and love.

January 3rd, 2026 13:32

Love your enemies
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is a meditation on mercy without illusion. You name harm plainly, forgive without spectacle, and end with peace that doesnโ€™t need defense. By the final line, rest itself feels like the reward. And you are right, the nightly sleepโ€ฆfar more worth it than endless bitterness. Strong, grounded work. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 3rd, 2026 13:23

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