Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dark passion
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a haunting embrace of mortality, where desire and decay become one. Your words dance on the knife\'s edge between ecstasy and oblivion. Profoundly dark and captivating.
December 27th, 2025 03:04
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a haunting embrace of mortality, where desire and decay become one. Your words dance on the knife\'s edge between ecstasy and oblivion. Profoundly dark and captivating.
December 27th, 2025 03:04
Nothing of nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may disappear but they will always be in our minds soren.
Andy
December 27th, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may disappear but they will always be in our minds soren.
Andy
December 27th, 2025 02:42
Nothing of nothing
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on how Moments are Lost and never retrieved. It makes you realise the Importance of Photograpy to capture those times.
December 26th, 2025 21:05
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on how Moments are Lost and never retrieved. It makes you realise the Importance of Photograpy to capture those times.
December 26th, 2025 21:05
Nothing of nothing
arqios said:
And again you’ve spoken my heart exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
December 26th, 2025 17:15
arqios said:
And again you’ve spoken my heart exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
December 26th, 2025 17:15
Nothing of nothing
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2025 16:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2025 16:48
What schools don\'t teach
Allie561 said:
Wow, your poetry is always so insightful but I particularly enjoyed this one! Nice work as always!
December 26th, 2025 13:31
Allie561 said:
Wow, your poetry is always so insightful but I particularly enjoyed this one! Nice work as always!
December 26th, 2025 13:31
Nothing of nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a meditation on time, loss, and the fragility of record. You let smoke, ash, ink, and ice all speak the same quiet truth. Nothing announces itself, yet everything fades. Strong, thoughtful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a meditation on time, loss, and the fragility of record. You let smoke, ash, ink, and ice all speak the same quiet truth. Nothing announces itself, yet everything fades. Strong, thoughtful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Nothing of nothing
Friendship said:
This poem explores the ephemeral nature of memory, art, and existence. It reflects on how fleeting moments and thoughts can be easily forgotten or lost over time, ultimately becoming \"nothing\" as they drift away, much like smoke.
December 26th, 2025 07:30
Friendship said:
This poem explores the ephemeral nature of memory, art, and existence. It reflects on how fleeting moments and thoughts can be easily forgotten or lost over time, ultimately becoming \"nothing\" as they drift away, much like smoke.
December 26th, 2025 07:30
Nothing of nothing
cellinic said:
A very deep and imaginative reflection on one of the innermost perceived subjects, lovely)
December 26th, 2025 06:34
cellinic said:
A very deep and imaginative reflection on one of the innermost perceived subjects, lovely)
December 26th, 2025 06:34
Nothing of nothing
Katie B. said:
Lovely and so well written. Always a pleasure to read your work.
December 26th, 2025 03:48
Katie B. said:
Lovely and so well written. Always a pleasure to read your work.
December 26th, 2025 03:48
Nothing of nothing
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. I\'m still horrible, no good will to KP this season nor any season - ahh, an idea for Christmas present for her - nothing of nothing! heehee.
Dunno why she complained yesterday. I gave her something, I suppose - triple helping of sewage for Christmas dinner. This is too kind of me, yes?! lol.
December 26th, 2025 03:14
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. I\'m still horrible, no good will to KP this season nor any season - ahh, an idea for Christmas present for her - nothing of nothing! heehee.
Dunno why she complained yesterday. I gave her something, I suppose - triple helping of sewage for Christmas dinner. This is too kind of me, yes?! lol.
December 26th, 2025 03:14
What schools don\'t teach
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It may happen more in Church-related Schools - values of unselfishness, etc - though in some non-church schools too.
December 25th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It may happen more in Church-related Schools - values of unselfishness, etc - though in some non-church schools too.
December 25th, 2025 11:11
What schools don\'t teach
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully illuminates the significance of imparting timeless values like compassion, cooperation, and selflessness, far surpassing the fleeting allure of competition and materialism in education, thereby paving the way for a society that truly embodies empathy and justice. You eloquently advocate for a paradigm shift in our educational priorities, underscoring the vital importance of kindness, community, and wisdom in fostering a brighter future for generations to come.
December 25th, 2025 07:57
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully illuminates the significance of imparting timeless values like compassion, cooperation, and selflessness, far surpassing the fleeting allure of competition and materialism in education, thereby paving the way for a society that truly embodies empathy and justice. You eloquently advocate for a paradigm shift in our educational priorities, underscoring the vital importance of kindness, community, and wisdom in fostering a brighter future for generations to come.
December 25th, 2025 07:57
What schools don\'t teach
Katie B. said:
I totally agree with you and wish things were different. we need to raise human beings, compassionate and caring. Loved it!!! Impeccable as always.
December 25th, 2025 07:39
Katie B. said:
I totally agree with you and wish things were different. we need to raise human beings, compassionate and caring. Loved it!!! Impeccable as always.
December 25th, 2025 07:39
What schools don\'t teach
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
And there was light
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the beginning of our World.
Sad what we have done to a lot of it.
Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2025 13:39
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the beginning of our World.
Sad what we have done to a lot of it.
Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2025 13:39
Crickets and frogs
Allie561 said:
The imagery in this poem not only painted a picture, but made it feel like oneself was immersed. It’s a very powerful poem yet grounded peacefully. Nice work.
December 24th, 2025 13:13
Allie561 said:
The imagery in this poem not only painted a picture, but made it feel like oneself was immersed. It’s a very powerful poem yet grounded peacefully. Nice work.
December 24th, 2025 13:13
And there was light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a thoughtful meditation on origins, belief, and the human need to name power. You honor the mystery of creation while questioning what we do with that mystery once we touch it. That balance gives the poem its depth. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a thoughtful meditation on origins, belief, and the human need to name power. You honor the mystery of creation while questioning what we do with that mystery once we touch it. That balance gives the poem its depth. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:14
And there was light
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the creation of light and life, emphasizing the sun as a central figure in the genesis of existence. It reflects on humanity\'s relationship with the divine and the natural world, portraying the sun as both a source of life and a deity worshipped by primitive minds.
December 24th, 2025 07:01
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the creation of light and life, emphasizing the sun as a central figure in the genesis of existence. It reflects on humanity\'s relationship with the divine and the natural world, portraying the sun as both a source of life and a deity worshipped by primitive minds.
December 24th, 2025 07:01
And there was light
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, in Charles Wesley\'s hymn \'Hark, the herald angels sing\' a possibly confusing line in some versions is: \'Hail, the Sun of Righteousness\'. Yet it is also in some Bible versions as \'Sun\' (Malachi 4 v.2 in the Old Testament). Then a cross-reference relates it to Luke 1 v.78 - covered in my poem for today. Of course, it doesn\'t mean we should worship the sun.
And - makes sense to create light first - so God could see what he was doing maybe?!
December 24th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, in Charles Wesley\'s hymn \'Hark, the herald angels sing\' a possibly confusing line in some versions is: \'Hail, the Sun of Righteousness\'. Yet it is also in some Bible versions as \'Sun\' (Malachi 4 v.2 in the Old Testament). Then a cross-reference relates it to Luke 1 v.78 - covered in my poem for today. Of course, it doesn\'t mean we should worship the sun.
And - makes sense to create light first - so God could see what he was doing maybe?!
December 24th, 2025 03:28
Merry Trumpmess
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren and so very true the way the world is nowadays.
Andy
December 24th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren and so very true the way the world is nowadays.
Andy
December 24th, 2025 02:43
Merry Trumpmess
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This sharp satire masterfully wields holiday themes to critique policy and paranoia. The blend of absurdity and pointed allegory is brilliantly effective. A darkly merry and memorable piece.
December 23rd, 2025 14:34
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This sharp satire masterfully wields holiday themes to critique policy and paranoia. The blend of absurdity and pointed allegory is brilliantly effective. A darkly merry and memorable piece.
December 23rd, 2025 14:34
Merry Trumpmess
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece cuts because it refuses subtlety. The rhymes move fast, the images escalate, and the satire keeps tightening its grip. It’s absurd, yes (so is where we are currently)…but it’s also uncomfortably recognizable. A biting, fearless holiday revolt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece cuts because it refuses subtlety. The rhymes move fast, the images escalate, and the satire keeps tightening its grip. It’s absurd, yes (so is where we are currently)…but it’s also uncomfortably recognizable. A biting, fearless holiday revolt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:41
Merry Trumpmess
Friendship said:
You made me laugh, nicely put. Your poem \"Merry Trumpmess\" critiques contemporary political attitudes toward immigration and cultural traditions, particularly around the Christmas holiday. It presents a satirical perspective on how policies and rhetoric can impact cherished customs and figures associated with the season.
December 23rd, 2025 05:18
Friendship said:
You made me laugh, nicely put. Your poem \"Merry Trumpmess\" critiques contemporary political attitudes toward immigration and cultural traditions, particularly around the Christmas holiday. It presents a satirical perspective on how policies and rhetoric can impact cherished customs and figures associated with the season.
December 23rd, 2025 05:18
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