Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Spilt criticism
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
A word not needed
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
We come and go
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Us
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Greatness
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Enlightenment
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Enlightenment
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Enlightenment
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
Adrift
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Adrift
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Baby
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Adrift
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Adrift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Miricale
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
Adrift
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the personification of the plight of drift-wood as if we should show some sympathy.Very enjoyable read compadre
March 17th, 2026 07:08
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the personification of the plight of drift-wood as if we should show some sympathy.Very enjoyable read compadre
March 17th, 2026 07:08
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