Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little bird
Friendship said:
The poem celebrates the transformative power of love, longing, and the bittersweet beauty of unattainable relationships. It reflects on a past connection that transcends time, yet acknowledges the impossibility of physical reunion. A profound bond with a bird, symbolizing a lost love or a past life, inspires hope and renewal. The Poet feels a deep emotional connection to the bird, which represents not only a friend but also an embodiment of love that remains out of reach. The poem may be written to reflect on the nature of love, loss, and the memories that linger long after relationships have changed or ended. It serves to remind us of the beauty and pain of longing for something that can never be fully realized, and the transformative power of love to overcome even the most profound losses.
July 1st, 2025 06:18
Friendship said:
The poem celebrates the transformative power of love, longing, and the bittersweet beauty of unattainable relationships. It reflects on a past connection that transcends time, yet acknowledges the impossibility of physical reunion. A profound bond with a bird, symbolizing a lost love or a past life, inspires hope and renewal. The Poet feels a deep emotional connection to the bird, which represents not only a friend but also an embodiment of love that remains out of reach. The poem may be written to reflect on the nature of love, loss, and the memories that linger long after relationships have changed or ended. It serves to remind us of the beauty and pain of longing for something that can never be fully realized, and the transformative power of love to overcome even the most profound losses.
July 1st, 2025 06:18
Little bird
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully write written with tenderness, it gracefully dances as you read, very nice
July 1st, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully write written with tenderness, it gracefully dances as you read, very nice
July 1st, 2025 05:30
Little bird
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )) beautiful poem
I liked reading this
Seems a bit sad tho I like your way with words
July 1st, 2025 05:06
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )) beautiful poem
I liked reading this
Seems a bit sad tho I like your way with words
July 1st, 2025 05:06
Little bird
arqios said:
This poem shimmers with a quiet, aching beauty; like a memory glimpsed through morning mist. It evokes a love beyond time, tender and unreachable, wrapped in wistfulness and wonder. That final image of the single feather lingers like the echo of a dream, delicate and unforgettable. 🪶🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2025 04:38
arqios said:
This poem shimmers with a quiet, aching beauty; like a memory glimpsed through morning mist. It evokes a love beyond time, tender and unreachable, wrapped in wistfulness and wonder. That final image of the single feather lingers like the echo of a dream, delicate and unforgettable. 🪶🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2025 04:38
Poor Satan sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever impressed by your poetry skills, a sonnet on the Devil no less, wow. I\'m in awe
I believe he gets bad publicity, I mean I\'ve never met him, and even Dante said paradise for the view but he\'ll for the company! 🤣 Brilliant
July 1st, 2025 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever impressed by your poetry skills, a sonnet on the Devil no less, wow. I\'m in awe
I believe he gets bad publicity, I mean I\'ve never met him, and even Dante said paradise for the view but he\'ll for the company! 🤣 Brilliant
July 1st, 2025 03:26
Poor Satan sonnet
ForeverJesus7 said:
Sorry, my friend, but I truely disagree with this piece.
God is all powerfully.
Satan is defeated.
Jesus is our Savior.
Persistence is key
June 30th, 2025 10:24
ForeverJesus7 said:
Sorry, my friend, but I truely disagree with this piece.
God is all powerfully.
Satan is defeated.
Jesus is our Savior.
Persistence is key
June 30th, 2025 10:24
Poor Satan sonnet
Friendship said:
At times l believe lam the devil\'s sister because people get mad at me at every level!
The poem \"Poor Satan Sonnet\" illuminates the profound theme of the devil\'s misunderstood essence, presenting Satan as a symbol of humanity\'s unaddressed flaws and deepest fears. It sheds light on how society has historically misconstrued him, transferring blame for various misfortunes and calamities onto him while overlooking the intricacies of morality and free will. The character of Satan, as depicted in religious and cultural narratives, serves as a catalyst for introspection. It delves into the perception of Satan as a villain and the irony of his portrayal, prompting readers to question the fairness of society\'s judgment and the absurdity of the expectations placed upon him. Your poem inspires readers to reexamine their preconceived notions about good and evil, encouraging contemplation on the nature of blame, redemption, and the misrepresentation of characters in religious and cultural narratives. Through humor and irony, it critiques the tendency to externalize responsibility and the simplistic portrayals of complex figures like Satan, ultimately inviting readers to embrace a more nuanced understanding of the human experience.
June 30th, 2025 08:41
Friendship said:
At times l believe lam the devil\'s sister because people get mad at me at every level!
The poem \"Poor Satan Sonnet\" illuminates the profound theme of the devil\'s misunderstood essence, presenting Satan as a symbol of humanity\'s unaddressed flaws and deepest fears. It sheds light on how society has historically misconstrued him, transferring blame for various misfortunes and calamities onto him while overlooking the intricacies of morality and free will. The character of Satan, as depicted in religious and cultural narratives, serves as a catalyst for introspection. It delves into the perception of Satan as a villain and the irony of his portrayal, prompting readers to question the fairness of society\'s judgment and the absurdity of the expectations placed upon him. Your poem inspires readers to reexamine their preconceived notions about good and evil, encouraging contemplation on the nature of blame, redemption, and the misrepresentation of characters in religious and cultural narratives. Through humor and irony, it critiques the tendency to externalize responsibility and the simplistic portrayals of complex figures like Satan, ultimately inviting readers to embrace a more nuanced understanding of the human experience.
June 30th, 2025 08:41
Poor Satan sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title alone gets a fave from me. Love this, my friend. Sympathy for the Devil, Soren Barrett edition! No, we did it...not the devil. Or if the devil made us do it, perhaps we the devil? Brilliant, my friend. Pure brilliance. The humor delivers deep! 🌹👏
June 30th, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title alone gets a fave from me. Love this, my friend. Sympathy for the Devil, Soren Barrett edition! No, we did it...not the devil. Or if the devil made us do it, perhaps we the devil? Brilliant, my friend. Pure brilliance. The humor delivers deep! 🌹👏
June 30th, 2025 08:13
Poor Satan sonnet
orchidee said:
There\'s some who won\'t give him the honour of a capital letter, so he is \'satan\'. KP got him mixed up - she thought I meant Old Stan up the road! lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:44
orchidee said:
There\'s some who won\'t give him the honour of a capital letter, so he is \'satan\'. KP got him mixed up - she thought I meant Old Stan up the road! lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:44
Poor Satan sonnet
Lorenz said:
Ha ! Ha! \'\'Underdog chained to a garbage can ! \'\' Cruel and splendid image !
June 30th, 2025 06:42
Lorenz said:
Ha ! Ha! \'\'Underdog chained to a garbage can ! \'\' Cruel and splendid image !
June 30th, 2025 06:42
Poor Satan sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write with my type of humour, no one can be blamed for everything, its just there are many who cant be honest, so it suits to blame everything on one person, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write with my type of humour, no one can be blamed for everything, its just there are many who cant be honest, so it suits to blame everything on one person, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 06:18
Poor Satan sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:
Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these two fictitious characters are coopted to make a point….
Enjoyed the write, Soren.
June 30th, 2025 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these two fictitious characters are coopted to make a point….
Enjoyed the write, Soren.
June 30th, 2025 06:11
Poor Satan sonnet
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever. Poor old Beelzebub blamed for everything that goes wrong. An interesting poem with a touch of sardonic humour. However it does raise an issue for Christians to confront. Does the Devil influence a man\'s decisions.A powerful poem. Excellent
June 30th, 2025 04:34
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever. Poor old Beelzebub blamed for everything that goes wrong. An interesting poem with a touch of sardonic humour. However it does raise an issue for Christians to confront. Does the Devil influence a man\'s decisions.A powerful poem. Excellent
June 30th, 2025 04:34
Poor Satan sonnet
arqios said:
Getting blamed for everything even when clearly not our doing makes us quite the fall guy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 30th, 2025 04:24
arqios said:
Getting blamed for everything even when clearly not our doing makes us quite the fall guy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 30th, 2025 04:24
The bribe
Kevin Hulme said:
I misread the title: I thought it said \'The Bride\'.
I was waiting for her appearance. Doh.
Enjoyed.
June 29th, 2025 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
I misread the title: I thought it said \'The Bride\'.
I was waiting for her appearance. Doh.
Enjoyed.
June 29th, 2025 19:45
The bribe
MendedFences27 said:
Good one SB. Quite a story and well told. Too many loopholes in the law, too many clever moves by lawyers, makes one think if justice is ever done. - Phil A.
June 29th, 2025 13:02
MendedFences27 said:
Good one SB. Quite a story and well told. Too many loopholes in the law, too many clever moves by lawyers, makes one think if justice is ever done. - Phil A.
June 29th, 2025 13:02
The bribe
Teddy.15 said:
What a tale of wisdom and of life. Brilliantly written my dear sorrenbarrett, loved the charm.at the end. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 10:19
Teddy.15 said:
What a tale of wisdom and of life. Brilliantly written my dear sorrenbarrett, loved the charm.at the end. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 10:19
The bribe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the narrative, Soren. A heavy hitter that makes one question the very nature of human \"justice\". Well done. 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the narrative, Soren. A heavy hitter that makes one question the very nature of human \"justice\". Well done. 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:57
The bribe
Poetic Licence said:
Is there such a thing as true justice, or does it happen the way its meant to happen. A very entertaining write, enjoyed my read
June 29th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
Is there such a thing as true justice, or does it happen the way its meant to happen. A very entertaining write, enjoyed my read
June 29th, 2025 07:14
The bribe
Soman Ragavan said:
This story is a “tour de force….” A masterstroke…. The farmer did what lawyers could not do. He used a nuclear weapon in his favour and outwitted the rancher. Farmers are known to be pragmatic… I suggest that you submit this story to an Artificial Intelligence platform for analysis.
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June 29th, 2025 06:57
Soman Ragavan said:
This story is a “tour de force….” A masterstroke…. The farmer did what lawyers could not do. He used a nuclear weapon in his favour and outwitted the rancher. Farmers are known to be pragmatic… I suggest that you submit this story to an Artificial Intelligence platform for analysis.
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June 29th, 2025 06:57
The bribe
Friendship said:
Your story sheds light on the transformative power of resilience in the face of adversity, as a poor farmer bravely confronts a formidable opponent, illuminating the profound impact of justice, morality, and the unwavering determination to protect one\'s livelihood. You masterfully underscore the extraordinary lengths individuals will go to safeguard their futures, and the profound ethical dilemmas that arise from bribery and corruption within the legal system. A conflict between a poor farmer and a wealthy rancher over a piece of land becomes a powerful allegory, as their dispute leads to a revelatory journey through the legal system, where the farmer\'s unyielding spirit and the rancher\'s hubris poignantly embody the universal struggles between wealth and poverty, justice and injustice.
June 29th, 2025 06:54
Friendship said:
Your story sheds light on the transformative power of resilience in the face of adversity, as a poor farmer bravely confronts a formidable opponent, illuminating the profound impact of justice, morality, and the unwavering determination to protect one\'s livelihood. You masterfully underscore the extraordinary lengths individuals will go to safeguard their futures, and the profound ethical dilemmas that arise from bribery and corruption within the legal system. A conflict between a poor farmer and a wealthy rancher over a piece of land becomes a powerful allegory, as their dispute leads to a revelatory journey through the legal system, where the farmer\'s unyielding spirit and the rancher\'s hubris poignantly embody the universal struggles between wealth and poverty, justice and injustice.
June 29th, 2025 06:54
The bribe
arqios said:
...when survival hangs in the balance, who truly owns justice—the letter of the law, or its human weight? Heavy hitting stuff Soren🕊️🙏🏻
June 29th, 2025 04:35
arqios said:
...when survival hangs in the balance, who truly owns justice—the letter of the law, or its human weight? Heavy hitting stuff Soren🕊️🙏🏻
June 29th, 2025 04:35
The bribe
David Wakeling said:
A greta narrative poem. Very well constructed and well written. A nice humourous ending as well.I really enjoyed reading.Masterful
June 29th, 2025 04:29
David Wakeling said:
A greta narrative poem. Very well constructed and well written. A nice humourous ending as well.I really enjoyed reading.Masterful
June 29th, 2025 04:29
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