Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Friendship said:
Nice story. Your story revolves around a lone tree in a forest that initially exists in the shadow of larger, older trees. Over time, as the tree grows and matures, it ultimately becomes more significant than the giants that once overshadowed it.
June 27th, 2026 08:23
Friendship said:
Nice story. Your story revolves around a lone tree in a forest that initially exists in the shadow of larger, older trees. Over time, as the tree grows and matures, it ultimately becomes more significant than the giants that once overshadowed it.
June 27th, 2026 08:23
Age
JAINESH.D said:
Behind the Verse:
A rhythmic study of a single word\'s shifting power. It traces our journey from mechanical tension—where our coils hold onto memory and force—to elemental water bursting from the soil, and finally to the seasonal rebirth that foils winter. It’s a brief reflection on how the exact same force that stretches us to our limits can also bring us back to life.
June 27th, 2026 07:58
JAINESH.D said:
Behind the Verse:
A rhythmic study of a single word\'s shifting power. It traces our journey from mechanical tension—where our coils hold onto memory and force—to elemental water bursting from the soil, and finally to the seasonal rebirth that foils winter. It’s a brief reflection on how the exact same force that stretches us to our limits can also bring us back to life.
June 27th, 2026 07:58
Hidden
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautiful write, Soren. I can hear Tolkien and Turtle Island in this poem.
June 27th, 2026 04:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautiful write, Soren. I can hear Tolkien and Turtle Island in this poem.
June 27th, 2026 04:43
What is a friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write soren and shows a true friend.
Andy
June 27th, 2026 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write soren and shows a true friend.
Andy
June 27th, 2026 02:02
Look closer
JAINESH.D said:
The Architecture of Duality
True balance isn\'t the absence of conflict; it’s the quiet realization that opposites cannot exist without each other. This piece explores the delicate, cyclical nature of the human condition. We often try to divide our experiences into neat, separate boxes—black or white, right or wrong, strength or weakness. But the deeper we look, the more we find that every truth carries its own contradiction hidden right inside it. It’s a rhythmic reminder that when you feel entirely lost in the dark, you are inherently close to the light.
June 27th, 2026 00:09
JAINESH.D said:
The Architecture of Duality
True balance isn\'t the absence of conflict; it’s the quiet realization that opposites cannot exist without each other. This piece explores the delicate, cyclical nature of the human condition. We often try to divide our experiences into neat, separate boxes—black or white, right or wrong, strength or weakness. But the deeper we look, the more we find that every truth carries its own contradiction hidden right inside it. It’s a rhythmic reminder that when you feel entirely lost in the dark, you are inherently close to the light.
June 27th, 2026 00:09
Shadow of night
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
I can’t express it enough!!! I just love your work!
June 26th, 2026 13:15
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
I can’t express it enough!!! I just love your work!
June 26th, 2026 13:15
What is a friend
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, I remember that at school.
June 26th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, I remember that at school.
June 26th, 2026 11:13
What is a friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wonderful blend of humor, suspense, and childhood mischief. It feels like one of those stories everyone has tucked away somewhere, and that ending brought it home perfectly. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wonderful blend of humor, suspense, and childhood mischief. It feels like one of those stories everyone has tucked away somewhere, and that ending brought it home perfectly. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:30
What is a friend
Friendship said:
Nicely written story. Your story narrates a childhood incident involving two friends who accidentally start a fire while experimenting with a magnifying glass. The aftermath reveals their friendship\'s strength and the moral dilemmas they face when confronted with potential punishment
June 26th, 2026 07:23
Friendship said:
Nicely written story. Your story narrates a childhood incident involving two friends who accidentally start a fire while experimenting with a magnifying glass. The aftermath reveals their friendship\'s strength and the moral dilemmas they face when confronted with potential punishment
June 26th, 2026 07:23
What is a friend
arqios said:
Now there\'s a friend. Unsung heroes that need to be given airtime. 🕊️🙏
June 26th, 2026 06:07
arqios said:
Now there\'s a friend. Unsung heroes that need to be given airtime. 🕊️🙏
June 26th, 2026 06:07
What is a friend
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed read my friend
June 26th, 2026 05:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed read my friend
June 26th, 2026 05:12
What is a friend
soheil khodaparasti said:
Well crafted and emotionally engaging. A narrative poem with a beginning, rising action, climax, and resolution, structured in four quatrains representing the introduction, conflict, crisis, and resolution, and exploring the themes of childhood innocence, fear, friendship, and moral courage.
June 26th, 2026 04:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
Well crafted and emotionally engaging. A narrative poem with a beginning, rising action, climax, and resolution, structured in four quatrains representing the introduction, conflict, crisis, and resolution, and exploring the themes of childhood innocence, fear, friendship, and moral courage.
June 26th, 2026 04:46
Cold morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but it is so hot here at the moment that that wonderful hot food would be denied, roll on autumn.
Andy
June 26th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but it is so hot here at the moment that that wonderful hot food would be denied, roll on autumn.
Andy
June 26th, 2026 01:17
Cold morning
Kevin Hulme said:
Could smell that food all the way through that piece. Nice one. 🧂🍴🥄🍷
June 25th, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Could smell that food all the way through that piece. Nice one. 🧂🍴🥄🍷
June 25th, 2026 18:52
Cold morning
mylastwrites said:
You did it. I\'m now hungry. Great write can almost hear the sizzle. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:40
mylastwrites said:
You did it. I\'m now hungry. Great write can almost hear the sizzle. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:40
Cold morning
soheil khodaparasti said:
The Pleasant Nostalgia of a Traditional Wood-Fired Kitchen.
Warmth within, winter without—perhaps symbolizing, respectively, love and isolation, or the ideal life and real life.
June 25th, 2026 10:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
The Pleasant Nostalgia of a Traditional Wood-Fired Kitchen.
Warmth within, winter without—perhaps symbolizing, respectively, love and isolation, or the ideal life and real life.
June 25th, 2026 10:58
Cold morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a warm, inviting piece. I could almost smell the bacon, coffee, and wood smoke as I read this...it feels like stepping into a kitchen where good food and good company naturally belong together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a warm, inviting piece. I could almost smell the bacon, coffee, and wood smoke as I read this...it feels like stepping into a kitchen where good food and good company naturally belong together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Cold morning
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. None of that lovely food for KP. lol.
June 25th, 2026 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. None of that lovely food for KP. lol.
June 25th, 2026 09:02
Cold morning
Paul Bell said:
Put me down for the full English, I\'ll ldo the dishes too.
You can have all those culinary delights, but bacon and egg does it for me always.
June 25th, 2026 08:34
Paul Bell said:
Put me down for the full English, I\'ll ldo the dishes too.
You can have all those culinary delights, but bacon and egg does it for me always.
June 25th, 2026 08:34
Cold morning
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the act of cooking breakfast, featuring various food items such as bacon, eggs, hash browns, and coffee. It paints a vivid picture of a cozy kitchen, emphasizing the contrast between the cold outside and the warmth within.
June 25th, 2026 07:00
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the act of cooking breakfast, featuring various food items such as bacon, eggs, hash browns, and coffee. It paints a vivid picture of a cozy kitchen, emphasizing the contrast between the cold outside and the warmth within.
June 25th, 2026 07:00
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