Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Birth
Thomas W Case said:
This feels earned—like someone who’s swallowed the whole mess and didn’t spit it back out.
Myth and marrow tangled together here; illumination always costs blood, and you don’t flinch from the price.
February 3rd, 2026 07:48
Thomas W Case said:
This feels earned—like someone who’s swallowed the whole mess and didn’t spit it back out.
Myth and marrow tangled together here; illumination always costs blood, and you don’t flinch from the price.
February 3rd, 2026 07:48
Birth
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely loved the poem. I am still reeling from:
\"A siren\'s whispers leading to graves, \"
An easy fave 👏
February 3rd, 2026 03:53
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely loved the poem. I am still reeling from:
\"A siren\'s whispers leading to graves, \"
An easy fave 👏
February 3rd, 2026 03:53
Birth
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This is gross of me - but more recipe ideas for KP in this. heehee.
February 3rd, 2026 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This is gross of me - but more recipe ideas for KP in this. heehee.
February 3rd, 2026 03:30
Black spot
Goldfinch60 said:
Out damn spot indeed soren, those spots are everywhere in modern ife.
Andy
February 3rd, 2026 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Out damn spot indeed soren, those spots are everywhere in modern ife.
Andy
February 3rd, 2026 02:06
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RSM0812 said:
Rules. They are pushed sometimes. This read had a good point of the soverignty of rule makers and the consequences of chains. Remarkable.
February 2nd, 2026 20:18
RSM0812 said:
Rules. They are pushed sometimes. This read had a good point of the soverignty of rule makers and the consequences of chains. Remarkable.
February 2nd, 2026 20:18
Black spot
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little rhymer Soren. While I do get the Macbeth reference (done him at school) I would think any rose cultivator would be pricked by this one. Me? I\'ll stick with geraniums....
February 2nd, 2026 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little rhymer Soren. While I do get the Macbeth reference (done him at school) I would think any rose cultivator would be pricked by this one. Me? I\'ll stick with geraniums....
February 2nd, 2026 18:20
Black spot
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 Such a wonderful poet you are my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 2nd, 2026 14:47
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 Such a wonderful poet you are my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 2nd, 2026 14:47
Black spot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is satire rooted in rot. Shakespearean ghosts, martial language, and the blunt pragmatism of fertilizer all collide to show how decay, neglect, and remedy coexist. It’s clever, irreverent, and pointed…as well played as Lady Macbeth herself! Fabulous write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is satire rooted in rot. Shakespearean ghosts, martial language, and the blunt pragmatism of fertilizer all collide to show how decay, neglect, and remedy coexist. It’s clever, irreverent, and pointed…as well played as Lady Macbeth herself! Fabulous write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:22
Black spot
Paul Bell said:
The biggest threat to my garden is unfortunately me, I\'m like the mad scythe guy.
Plans are forming in my head for this year, and already I can see the garden in the distance legging it.
February 2nd, 2026 09:13
Paul Bell said:
The biggest threat to my garden is unfortunately me, I\'m like the mad scythe guy.
Plans are forming in my head for this year, and already I can see the garden in the distance legging it.
February 2nd, 2026 09:13
Black spot
E.J. Waling said:
Any gardener would appreciate this verse. Well poetically said. 👍🏼
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
E.J. Waling said:
Any gardener would appreciate this verse. Well poetically said. 👍🏼
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
Black spot
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why did it make me feel royalty and roses are as useful as each other? Of course I am wrong 😞. Loved it.
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why did it make me feel royalty and roses are as useful as each other? Of course I am wrong 😞. Loved it.
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
Black spot
Soman Ragavan said:
Shakespeare reviv\'d. Out, damn\'d spot ! Birnam Wood... Dung and hill : dunghill... The rose was destin\'d to ramble : Rambling Rose..
February 2nd, 2026 06:03
Soman Ragavan said:
Shakespeare reviv\'d. Out, damn\'d spot ! Birnam Wood... Dung and hill : dunghill... The rose was destin\'d to ramble : Rambling Rose..
February 2nd, 2026 06:03
Black spot
Lorenz said:
an infection turns insurrection ... I appreciate the social metaphor !
February 2nd, 2026 05:21
Lorenz said:
an infection turns insurrection ... I appreciate the social metaphor !
February 2nd, 2026 05:21
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arqios said:
capitalisation both of language and economy. A far-reaching meditation, much enjoyed Soren. 🕊️🙏
February 1st, 2026 19:47
arqios said:
capitalisation both of language and economy. A far-reaching meditation, much enjoyed Soren. 🕊️🙏
February 1st, 2026 19:47
The train
Vipassana said:
Lovely.
We travel until darkness obscures our vision and we sleep.
February 1st, 2026 19:20
Vipassana said:
Lovely.
We travel until darkness obscures our vision and we sleep.
February 1st, 2026 19:20
Too full for dessert
Vipassana said:
Felicity:
1 intense happiness: domestic felicity.
2 the ability to find appropriate expression for one\'s thoughts: speech that pleased by its accuracy, felicity, and fluency.
• a particularly effective feature of a work of literature or art: the King James version, thanks to its felicities of language, ruled supreme.
Writing poems demonstrates that you are not \"too full\" for more felicity. Keep feeling keep going.
February 1st, 2026 19:09
Vipassana said:
Felicity:
1 intense happiness: domestic felicity.
2 the ability to find appropriate expression for one\'s thoughts: speech that pleased by its accuracy, felicity, and fluency.
• a particularly effective feature of a work of literature or art: the King James version, thanks to its felicities of language, ruled supreme.
Writing poems demonstrates that you are not \"too full\" for more felicity. Keep feeling keep going.
February 1st, 2026 19:09
Second bow
Vipassana said:
rover: a person who spends their time wandering.
rover: (in various sports) a player not restricted to a particular position on the field.
Personally I find both versions of roving quite useful, often a time of discovering something important. Keep roaming, sir.
February 1st, 2026 18:57
Vipassana said:
rover: a person who spends their time wandering.
rover: (in various sports) a player not restricted to a particular position on the field.
Personally I find both versions of roving quite useful, often a time of discovering something important. Keep roaming, sir.
February 1st, 2026 18:57
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is smart wordplay with teeth. Ice melting, value shrinking, presence becoming unwelcome…the metaphor slides seamlessly into current realities without losing its footing. It’s understated, pointed, and effective. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 14:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is smart wordplay with teeth. Ice melting, value shrinking, presence becoming unwelcome…the metaphor slides seamlessly into current realities without losing its footing. It’s understated, pointed, and effective. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 14:02
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Allie561 said:
A very powerful poem with a hidden meaning. Ice unfortunately can’t tolerate spice and as we all know, milk is what really cures it. Great poem Soren.
February 1st, 2026 13:18
Allie561 said:
A very powerful poem with a hidden meaning. Ice unfortunately can’t tolerate spice and as we all know, milk is what really cures it. Great poem Soren.
February 1st, 2026 13:18
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rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
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Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
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Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
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Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
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