Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
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Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
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Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
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Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
Birth and death sun and moon
Allie561 said:
What an ethereal poem Soren. I cannot express how beautiful this is. The way that it can be read all together and separately is truly amazing work. I also enjoyed how they are similar but vastly different all on their own. What a talent you have, definitely one of my favorites.
January 31st, 2026 22:34
Allie561 said:
What an ethereal poem Soren. I cannot express how beautiful this is. The way that it can be read all together and separately is truly amazing work. I also enjoyed how they are similar but vastly different all on their own. What a talent you have, definitely one of my favorites.
January 31st, 2026 22:34
Birth and death sun and moon
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly stunning poetry, metaphor and all. I get a soft happy tone of heavenly vibes 🌹
January 31st, 2026 14:55
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly stunning poetry, metaphor and all. I get a soft happy tone of heavenly vibes 🌹
January 31st, 2026 14:55
Birth and death sun and moon
Paul Bell said:
Always like something different, catches the imagination.
You\'re on another level with this one.
Expect it to be pinched at some point in the future.
January 31st, 2026 14:35
Paul Bell said:
Always like something different, catches the imagination.
You\'re on another level with this one.
Expect it to be pinched at some point in the future.
January 31st, 2026 14:35
Birth and death sun and moon
Lorenz said:
I am fascinated by extinct and conlangs ! One advantage of being asymptomatic autistic !
January 31st, 2026 14:04
Lorenz said:
I am fascinated by extinct and conlangs ! One advantage of being asymptomatic autistic !
January 31st, 2026 14:04
Birth and death sun and moon
Lorenz said:
(Translation of your corker in proto-germanic )
Burtiz jah daus .Sunnon jah méno .
Dunst sunnonsetlaz
attarwibja spinan
Méno ward fangen .
Endilhaz strids feht .
kalu swartaz nahts .
Mùdis wiganaes .
Urstanden fo\' naht skrùd.
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Austan mistaz .
In spruzjan ist faran .
Ofenbranda hleithra .
Brennit daga .
Glôsi isenes middagis .
Skadwos swindan .
Guldin runa hlimmith .
Sama sinkwand spina .
( An essay )
January 31st, 2026 13:37
Lorenz said:
(Translation of your corker in proto-germanic )
Burtiz jah daus .Sunnon jah méno .
Dunst sunnonsetlaz
attarwibja spinan
Méno ward fangen .
Endilhaz strids feht .
kalu swartaz nahts .
Mùdis wiganaes .
Urstanden fo\' naht skrùd.
-------------------------------
Austan mistaz .
In spruzjan ist faran .
Ofenbranda hleithra .
Brennit daga .
Glôsi isenes middagis .
Skadwos swindan .
Guldin runa hlimmith .
Sama sinkwand spina .
( An essay )
January 31st, 2026 13:37
Birth and death sun and moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem moves as if light were a pendulum. Dawn to dusk, blaze to shadow, struggle to release…the structure itself enacts the passage it describes. The closing lift back into light feels earned and calm. Strong work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 31st, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem moves as if light were a pendulum. Dawn to dusk, blaze to shadow, struggle to release…the structure itself enacts the passage it describes. The closing lift back into light feels earned and calm. Strong work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 31st, 2026 12:37
Birth and death sun and moon
Lorenz said:
This Gothic inspiration absolutely delights me ! A mega 5 !
January 31st, 2026 10:27
Lorenz said:
This Gothic inspiration absolutely delights me ! A mega 5 !
January 31st, 2026 10:27
The way I like it
RSM0812 said:
A fave. The imagery was imaginative and moving. Enjoyed immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:53
RSM0812 said:
A fave. The imagery was imaginative and moving. Enjoyed immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:53
Birth and death sun and moon
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I found the poem to be visually attractive (as well as its contents). An easy fave.
January 31st, 2026 06:27
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I found the poem to be visually attractive (as well as its contents). An easy fave.
January 31st, 2026 06:27
Invisible
Soman Ragavan said:
The word \"gravity\" suits the nature of love. Love pulls and sweeps us off our feet. In the grip of love we do crazy things that don\'t make sense to a logical mind : but this is precisely the point : there is no logic in love... It can take us to our ruin, break families, but it can hardly be resisted.
January 30th, 2026 11:25
Soman Ragavan said:
The word \"gravity\" suits the nature of love. Love pulls and sweeps us off our feet. In the grip of love we do crazy things that don\'t make sense to a logical mind : but this is precisely the point : there is no logic in love... It can take us to our ruin, break families, but it can hardly be resisted.
January 30th, 2026 11:25
Invisible
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is excellent, my friend. It feels like standing inside a thought refusing boundaries…love rendered as force, motion, and music all at once. It carries awe without strain. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is excellent, my friend. It feels like standing inside a thought refusing boundaries…love rendered as force, motion, and music all at once. It carries awe without strain. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 10:00
Invisible
Allie561 said:
Love is such a funny thing. It comes out of nowhere and when we do expect it, it doesn’t show up at all. You captured the details of it perfectly. Great portrayal Soren.
January 30th, 2026 09:50
Allie561 said:
Love is such a funny thing. It comes out of nowhere and when we do expect it, it doesn’t show up at all. You captured the details of it perfectly. Great portrayal Soren.
January 30th, 2026 09:50
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orchidee said:
Boohoo! I rarely get the meaning of anything cryptic - not necessarily meaning only some of your poems! I\'ve not time to work out all the meanings you see, as I\'m busy with all the recipe ideas you gave me for KP. lol.
January 30th, 2026 08:57
orchidee said:
Boohoo! I rarely get the meaning of anything cryptic - not necessarily meaning only some of your poems! I\'ve not time to work out all the meanings you see, as I\'m busy with all the recipe ideas you gave me for KP. lol.
January 30th, 2026 08:57
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Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m terribly sorry (but I\'m always compelled to ask) what is love? The way the term is bandied about around here, then a diagnosis would seem to indicate it is likely infatuation.
January 30th, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m terribly sorry (but I\'m always compelled to ask) what is love? The way the term is bandied about around here, then a diagnosis would seem to indicate it is likely infatuation.
January 30th, 2026 05:10
Invisible
soheil khodaparasti said:
I really like your portrayal of love as both a mechanism and the meaning of existence—a force that transcends everything. The ambiguity in ‘Here nothing becomes everything’ is especially powerful.
January 30th, 2026 04:48
soheil khodaparasti said:
I really like your portrayal of love as both a mechanism and the meaning of existence—a force that transcends everything. The ambiguity in ‘Here nothing becomes everything’ is especially powerful.
January 30th, 2026 04:48
Invisible
Paul Bell said:
Love sure is the most positive force on earth, it can lift you up to the highest height, it can send you down just as quick.
We all want to be on that journey of happiness.
January 30th, 2026 04:15
Paul Bell said:
Love sure is the most positive force on earth, it can lift you up to the highest height, it can send you down just as quick.
We all want to be on that journey of happiness.
January 30th, 2026 04:15
Invisible
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes please, sorrenbarret, you just swept a gal off her feet! Invisible? Anything but!🌹 🌹 🌹
January 30th, 2026 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes please, sorrenbarret, you just swept a gal off her feet! Invisible? Anything but!🌹 🌹 🌹
January 30th, 2026 03:17
Never content
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that soren but I am still here.
Andy
January 30th, 2026 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that soren but I am still here.
Andy
January 30th, 2026 02:18
Never content
Allie561 said:
I like how you included the opposites while also conveying that there’s no in between. Very nice write Soren.
January 30th, 2026 01:35
Allie561 said:
I like how you included the opposites while also conveying that there’s no in between. Very nice write Soren.
January 30th, 2026 01:35
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