Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Holes in our day
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Lost music of the forest
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Lost music of the forest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Lost music of the forest
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
Lost music of the forest
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Shaping
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
Read
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Indigestion
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Shaping
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
Shaping
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this breathes with renewal. The way you shape the day through pruning feels alive with quiet hope, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this breathes with renewal. The way you shape the day through pruning feels alive with quiet hope, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:53
Shaping
God’s Will said:
Oh I like that one. That reminds me of a bit of encouragement I got one day.
. Today
Correct punctuation
October 1st, 2025 13:57
God’s Will said:
Oh I like that one. That reminds me of a bit of encouragement I got one day.
. Today
Correct punctuation
October 1st, 2025 13:57
Gently
2781 said:
Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.
October 1st, 2025 09:01
2781 said:
Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.
October 1st, 2025 09:01
Shaping
arqios said:
Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle metaphor for caring for the mind. It reminds me that letting go of what’s withered isn’t loss; it’s making space for new blooms. A quiet, hopeful reminder that growth often begins in what we clear away. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 07:36
arqios said:
Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle metaphor for caring for the mind. It reminds me that letting go of what’s withered isn’t loss; it’s making space for new blooms. A quiet, hopeful reminder that growth often begins in what we clear away. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 07:36
Shaping
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem conveys the theme of personal growth and renewal through the metaphor of gardening. It emphasizes the importance of pruning away negative thoughts and experiences to foster new growth and creativity in life.
October 1st, 2025 06:58
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem conveys the theme of personal growth and renewal through the metaphor of gardening. It emphasizes the importance of pruning away negative thoughts and experiences to foster new growth and creativity in life.
October 1st, 2025 06:58
Shaping
Michael Edwards said:
From rotting compost to beauty - so well observed
October 1st, 2025 06:56
Michael Edwards said:
From rotting compost to beauty - so well observed
October 1st, 2025 06:56
Indigestion
Keyara S Trotman said:
Which fruits are we referring to? Apples, grapes, oranges, bananas??? Or I’m just talking food into this? This a powerful write. Definitely written out beautifully, it’s rhyme. Fluency is key here and it’s very very splendid word. The title is very well gives familiarity. 🥂✨👏🏻👌🏼
October 1st, 2025 05:03
Keyara S Trotman said:
Which fruits are we referring to? Apples, grapes, oranges, bananas??? Or I’m just talking food into this? This a powerful write. Definitely written out beautifully, it’s rhyme. Fluency is key here and it’s very very splendid word. The title is very well gives familiarity. 🥂✨👏🏻👌🏼
October 1st, 2025 05:03
Shaping
Soman Ragavan said:
True, the compost from the past becomes the fertiliser of today, to make new flowers sprout out. We need to take example on the plant : it is in perpetual motion of renewal, of fighting obstacles around it.
October 1st, 2025 04:26
Soman Ragavan said:
True, the compost from the past becomes the fertiliser of today, to make new flowers sprout out. We need to take example on the plant : it is in perpetual motion of renewal, of fighting obstacles around it.
October 1st, 2025 04:26
No reason
Tom Dylan said:
A fine piece, Soren. The topic and the feel of the poem reminded me of Wordworth\'s Daffodils. Nicely done.
October 1st, 2025 01:57
Tom Dylan said:
A fine piece, Soren. The topic and the feel of the poem reminded me of Wordworth\'s Daffodils. Nicely done.
October 1st, 2025 01:57
Indigestion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this..I see the stolen fruit as metaphor for sin (does not have to be in the eternal, religious sense), guilt turning sour inside, until the body rejects it in a kind of purging forgiveness. A tight, vivid piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Really love this!
September 30th, 2025 17:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this..I see the stolen fruit as metaphor for sin (does not have to be in the eternal, religious sense), guilt turning sour inside, until the body rejects it in a kind of purging forgiveness. A tight, vivid piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Really love this!
September 30th, 2025 17:57
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