Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story tales relating to the untrustworthiness of modern governments.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story tales relating to the untrustworthiness of modern governments.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:45
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Like the fairy tales you report, Soren. The writers are mega rich accumulators of wealth who can make those tales and the characters within move in whichever way they require..
February 19th, 2026 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Like the fairy tales you report, Soren. The writers are mega rich accumulators of wealth who can make those tales and the characters within move in whichever way they require..
February 19th, 2026 19:59
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Allie561 said:
I can sense your frustration in this poem Soren. I do have to agree it seems our government is crumbling due to certain circumstances. I don’t follow politics too much but I know enough to feel there should be a change. Hopefully it comes soon.
February 19th, 2026 18:07
Allie561 said:
I can sense your frustration in this poem Soren. I do have to agree it seems our government is crumbling due to certain circumstances. I don’t follow politics too much but I know enough to feel there should be a change. Hopefully it comes soon.
February 19th, 2026 18:07
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… this is satire turned carnival mirror. The Pied Piper, Bo Peep, the Queen of Hearts… all colliding under that opening indictment. And when you close with “A glass slipper shattered, the mice all scattered with a blunder of the Don’s hand,” the chaos feels even more brilliant. Fierce work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… this is satire turned carnival mirror. The Pied Piper, Bo Peep, the Queen of Hearts… all colliding under that opening indictment. And when you close with “A glass slipper shattered, the mice all scattered with a blunder of the Don’s hand,” the chaos feels even more brilliant. Fierce work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:57
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Neville said:
Ah\' I see what you mean .. full of universal truths I\'m sure .. some things just have to be said, don\'t they .. Neville 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Neville said:
Ah\' I see what you mean .. full of universal truths I\'m sure .. some things just have to be said, don\'t they .. Neville 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Kevin Hulme said:
I repeat what Mark Twain said : \'Diapers and Politicians must be changed regularly , And for the same reason\'. Well Said.
February 19th, 2026 10:38
Kevin Hulme said:
I repeat what Mark Twain said : \'Diapers and Politicians must be changed regularly , And for the same reason\'. Well Said.
February 19th, 2026 10:38
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Lorenz said:
Is it better to have a loud Donald duck than a demonic Goebbels ? I wonder ...
February 19th, 2026 07:41
Lorenz said:
Is it better to have a loud Donald duck than a demonic Goebbels ? I wonder ...
February 19th, 2026 07:41
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Friendship said:
well written. Your poem revolves around the disenchantment with government and authority, characterized as corrupt and self-serving, alongside a commentary on societal apathy and the consequences of blind trust in leadership.
February 19th, 2026 07:15
Friendship said:
well written. Your poem revolves around the disenchantment with government and authority, characterized as corrupt and self-serving, alongside a commentary on societal apathy and the consequences of blind trust in leadership.
February 19th, 2026 07:15
Wonderland becomes Neverland
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Five faves from me. What a poem! Great write 🙏
Greatness lies in making a statement which seems specific yet it is generic enough to be applicable to smilar circumstances. This poem absolutely does this - geographical divide conquerred.
February 19th, 2026 05:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Five faves from me. What a poem! Great write 🙏
Greatness lies in making a statement which seems specific yet it is generic enough to be applicable to smilar circumstances. This poem absolutely does this - geographical divide conquerred.
February 19th, 2026 05:51
Wonderland becomes Neverland
David Wakeling said:
Wow Trump has certainly gotten on your nerves.Your not alone everyone is just holding their breathe waiting for his next stupid statement or action.This poem uses nursery rhymes as metaphors for Trumps stupidity.It is appropriate becasue he behaves like a petulant child with his hand on the big red button.A powerful poem.Masterfully constructed.Let\'s hope Trump disappears
February 19th, 2026 05:17
David Wakeling said:
Wow Trump has certainly gotten on your nerves.Your not alone everyone is just holding their breathe waiting for his next stupid statement or action.This poem uses nursery rhymes as metaphors for Trumps stupidity.It is appropriate becasue he behaves like a petulant child with his hand on the big red button.A powerful poem.Masterfully constructed.Let\'s hope Trump disappears
February 19th, 2026 05:17
Wonderland becomes Neverland
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m not into politics much, so can\'t comment much.
February 19th, 2026 03:37
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m not into politics much, so can\'t comment much.
February 19th, 2026 03:37
Wonderland becomes Neverland
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so true and beautifully put, a fave
February 19th, 2026 03:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so true and beautifully put, a fave
February 19th, 2026 03:22
The gardener
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ve probably seen that man in my past soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2026 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ve probably seen that man in my past soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2026 02:41
Innocence
lunarchloedip said:
yes!
i still actively practise seeing the world in this way. never entirely grew out of the mindset i had growing up and i don\'t intend to either. the clarity and responsibility of adulthood often drowns it out, but i do my best to ensure i don\'t completely put it down. thank you for sharing, i really enjoyed and could relate to this one.
February 18th, 2026 21:51
lunarchloedip said:
yes!
i still actively practise seeing the world in this way. never entirely grew out of the mindset i had growing up and i don\'t intend to either. the clarity and responsibility of adulthood often drowns it out, but i do my best to ensure i don\'t completely put it down. thank you for sharing, i really enjoyed and could relate to this one.
February 18th, 2026 21:51
The gardener
Neville said:
Made me smile no end .. I could just make out an old sepia toned image of my great grandfather .. and so for that & the warm glow, I sincerely thank you squire .. Neville 😎👍
February 18th, 2026 13:10
Neville said:
Made me smile no end .. I could just make out an old sepia toned image of my great grandfather .. and so for that & the warm glow, I sincerely thank you squire .. Neville 😎👍
February 18th, 2026 13:10
The gardener
Lorenz said:
I always seen gardeners as thin and non smokers ...
February 18th, 2026 11:22
Lorenz said:
I always seen gardeners as thin and non smokers ...
February 18th, 2026 11:22
The gardener
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a vivid portrait. The whale-like girth and sunshine disposition give him presence, and the shrinking shadow ties him to the arc of the day. The corn husk cigarette and sweat at dusk anchor him in lived detail. It feels both affectionate and real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a vivid portrait. The whale-like girth and sunshine disposition give him presence, and the shrinking shadow ties him to the arc of the day. The corn husk cigarette and sweat at dusk anchor him in lived detail. It feels both affectionate and real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:17
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You touched upon something, which to the best of my recollection, Leibnitz said. I hold on to that belief. I guess the definition of reality changes drastically when it comes to quantum physics. It\'s too complex for me. So I believe reality and observability are closely related. Having said that, I know I have committed a mistake.
February 18th, 2026 09:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You touched upon something, which to the best of my recollection, Leibnitz said. I hold on to that belief. I guess the definition of reality changes drastically when it comes to quantum physics. It\'s too complex for me. So I believe reality and observability are closely related. Having said that, I know I have committed a mistake.
February 18th, 2026 09:34
The gardener
Rachel Poole said:
I can picture every line you write, like a little movie in my head. Thank you for the read!
February 18th, 2026 09:17
Rachel Poole said:
I can picture every line you write, like a little movie in my head. Thank you for the read!
February 18th, 2026 09:17
The gardener
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is intriguing and awe inspiring to see picture drawn with words. Great write
February 18th, 2026 09:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is intriguing and awe inspiring to see picture drawn with words. Great write
February 18th, 2026 09:16
The gardener
Paul Bell said:
This is me looking out to the garden, thinking.
Someone has to do something.
I need a bloody gardener.
February 18th, 2026 07:54
Paul Bell said:
This is me looking out to the garden, thinking.
Someone has to do something.
I need a bloody gardener.
February 18th, 2026 07:54
The gardener
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful image created here.I can see the gardener. Well constructed poem.The rhyme is amazing.In fsct I see my Grandfather.That\'s how clever this piece is.
February 18th, 2026 05:20
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful image created here.I can see the gardener. Well constructed poem.The rhyme is amazing.In fsct I see my Grandfather.That\'s how clever this piece is.
February 18th, 2026 05:20
The gardener
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A real \'character\', a sort of \'distinguished\' personage.
February 18th, 2026 05:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A real \'character\', a sort of \'distinguished\' personage.
February 18th, 2026 05:19
Four letter words
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, hope, peace and cope for me soren, life is wonderful.
Andy
February 18th, 2026 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, hope, peace and cope for me soren, life is wonderful.
Andy
February 18th, 2026 02:22
Four letter words
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange how the negative words are in bold print, like how a Newspaper would have it.
The Positive so thin like starving people and much ignored.
February 17th, 2026 21:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange how the negative words are in bold print, like how a Newspaper would have it.
The Positive so thin like starving people and much ignored.
February 17th, 2026 21:01
Four letter words
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
History of an old wound
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
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