Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fallen honor
Precious Chukwudi said:
I felt this one. Recognition these days is more about status than substance.
October 20th, 2025 10:35
Precious Chukwudi said:
I felt this one. Recognition these days is more about status than substance.
October 20th, 2025 10:35
Population explosion
Aman 12 said:
an allegory to remember... an utopian rat society ends in communal collapse.
October 20th, 2025 09:11
Aman 12 said:
an allegory to remember... an utopian rat society ends in communal collapse.
October 20th, 2025 09:11
Sonnet to war
Lorenz said:
In my inner padded room I no longer try to understand the workings of the clock ...
October 20th, 2025 08:04
Lorenz said:
In my inner padded room I no longer try to understand the workings of the clock ...
October 20th, 2025 08:04
Sonnet to war
Friendship said:
Well said,Sorenbarrett. The poem \"Sonnet to War\" critiques the disparity between the affluent, who instigate conflicts for personal gain, and the impoverished, who bear the brunt of war. It highlights the exploitation of the underprivileged in the context of warfare and questions the true motivations behind such conflicts. Yet, your poem addresses themes of social injustice, the consequences of war on vulnerable populations, and the hypocrisy of those in power who send others to fight while remaining safe themselves. It also contemplates the moral implications of sacrificing innocent lives for the sake of wealth and political gain.
October 20th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Well said,Sorenbarrett. The poem \"Sonnet to War\" critiques the disparity between the affluent, who instigate conflicts for personal gain, and the impoverished, who bear the brunt of war. It highlights the exploitation of the underprivileged in the context of warfare and questions the true motivations behind such conflicts. Yet, your poem addresses themes of social injustice, the consequences of war on vulnerable populations, and the hypocrisy of those in power who send others to fight while remaining safe themselves. It also contemplates the moral implications of sacrificing innocent lives for the sake of wealth and political gain.
October 20th, 2025 07:17
Sonnet to war
Paul Bell said:
Well put, it\'s like two clowns have an argument, and it can only be settled by millions dying over it.
It would be great if the masses of both sides just got together with the words. Sorry Gov, washing my hair that day, and as for Saturday, football.
October 20th, 2025 05:12
Paul Bell said:
Well put, it\'s like two clowns have an argument, and it can only be settled by millions dying over it.
It would be great if the masses of both sides just got together with the words. Sorry Gov, washing my hair that day, and as for Saturday, football.
October 20th, 2025 05:12
Balance of nature
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Sorren ,
Nature bleeds these colors in drops of rainbows, pools of sunsets and the dark mirror of night where the blind too can see its majesty
Loved these lines...A poem so crips but conveys the meaning in galore..Keep it going poet..
October 20th, 2025 05:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Sorren ,
Nature bleeds these colors in drops of rainbows, pools of sunsets and the dark mirror of night where the blind too can see its majesty
Loved these lines...A poem so crips but conveys the meaning in galore..Keep it going poet..
October 20th, 2025 05:12
Population explosion
Goldfinch60 said:
Stong words soren, we are all becoming rats in a cage nowadays but I still try to think outside the box.
Andy
October 20th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Stong words soren, we are all becoming rats in a cage nowadays but I still try to think outside the box.
Andy
October 20th, 2025 02:11
Beauty and thorns
Settes said:
Very nice thought and well explained. Don\'t interfere if it is not necessary and only done to please yourself.
October 19th, 2025 16:34
Settes said:
Very nice thought and well explained. Don\'t interfere if it is not necessary and only done to please yourself.
October 19th, 2025 16:34
Population explosion
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Billionaires need more consumers...\" Got it in one, Soren.
October 19th, 2025 15:47
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Billionaires need more consumers...\" Got it in one, Soren.
October 19th, 2025 15:47
Population explosion
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Hope I don\'t have to waste another poem telling folk they are not rats, hamsters, gerbils, nor elephants in my pic! lol.
October 19th, 2025 12:59
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Hope I don\'t have to waste another poem telling folk they are not rats, hamsters, gerbils, nor elephants in my pic! lol.
October 19th, 2025 12:59
Population explosion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment...“Too many rats in a cage”...it’s where everything fractures. The image lingers because it isn’t just rats you’re showing us. It’s what happens when compassion has no room to breathe. Very well done, Soren.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2025 11:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment...“Too many rats in a cage”...it’s where everything fractures. The image lingers because it isn’t just rats you’re showing us. It’s what happens when compassion has no room to breathe. Very well done, Soren.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2025 11:15
Balance of nature
William Hromada said:
Nothing like nature to inspire a poem!
October 19th, 2025 07:26
William Hromada said:
Nothing like nature to inspire a poem!
October 19th, 2025 07:26
Population explosion
Paul Bell said:
The world is on the move, and the unease is tangible now.
It\'s not going to end well, especially not in Britain, where the breaking point has been reached.
October 19th, 2025 06:16
Paul Bell said:
The world is on the move, and the unease is tangible now.
It\'s not going to end well, especially not in Britain, where the breaking point has been reached.
October 19th, 2025 06:16
Population explosion
arqios said:
A poem that really hits hard as an allegory, here. The rats effectively become a mirror for us. At first there’s order and care, but once numbers swell, harmony collapses into stress, violence, and sickness. It’s a stark reminder that overpopulation doesn’t just strain resources, it erodes the very bonds that hold a community together. Makes one wonder which parts of our home has the greatest incidence and what should be done about it. 🙏🕊️
October 19th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
A poem that really hits hard as an allegory, here. The rats effectively become a mirror for us. At first there’s order and care, but once numbers swell, harmony collapses into stress, violence, and sickness. It’s a stark reminder that overpopulation doesn’t just strain resources, it erodes the very bonds that hold a community together. Makes one wonder which parts of our home has the greatest incidence and what should be done about it. 🙏🕊️
October 19th, 2025 05:30
Balance of nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words on the beauty of our world soren.
Andy
October 19th, 2025 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words on the beauty of our world soren.
Andy
October 19th, 2025 01:41
Beauty and thorns
Poetic_Princess said:
This poem is great and shares many true ideas.
October 18th, 2025 16:30
Poetic_Princess said:
This poem is great and shares many true ideas.
October 18th, 2025 16:30
Balance of nature
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Yes... One start seeing how beautiful, things are, when the inner beauty shines like radiant of the sun and is well felt.
October 18th, 2025 13:11
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Yes... One start seeing how beautiful, things are, when the inner beauty shines like radiant of the sun and is well felt.
October 18th, 2025 13:11
Balance of nature
Lorenz said:
It\'s a rich range of colors at sunset of souls !
October 18th, 2025 09:24
Lorenz said:
It\'s a rich range of colors at sunset of souls !
October 18th, 2025 09:24
What you want
Aman 12 said:
paralysis of desire...ambition is labour .. a beautiful motivational poem
October 18th, 2025 09:22
Aman 12 said:
paralysis of desire...ambition is labour .. a beautiful motivational poem
October 18th, 2025 09:22
Balance of nature
Friendship said:
This deserves a favorite due to its profound resonance with me, as it articulately conveys a multitude of emotions related to nature. Nature is an integral part of our environment, including recycling and other aspects, and human waste can be converted into remarkable things. Well written, your poem reflects on the vastness and depth of nature, illustrating its beauty through vivid imagery. It highlights how nature\'s gifts—such as rainbows, sunsets, and the night sky—serve to nurture and shelter those in need. The poem also suggests a timeless quality of nature, extending beyond human experience. The poet aims to evoke a sense of gratitude and awareness of nature\'s gifts, encouraging readers to appreciate and respect the environment and its resources.
October 18th, 2025 08:18
Friendship said:
This deserves a favorite due to its profound resonance with me, as it articulately conveys a multitude of emotions related to nature. Nature is an integral part of our environment, including recycling and other aspects, and human waste can be converted into remarkable things. Well written, your poem reflects on the vastness and depth of nature, illustrating its beauty through vivid imagery. It highlights how nature\'s gifts—such as rainbows, sunsets, and the night sky—serve to nurture and shelter those in need. The poem also suggests a timeless quality of nature, extending beyond human experience. The poet aims to evoke a sense of gratitude and awareness of nature\'s gifts, encouraging readers to appreciate and respect the environment and its resources.
October 18th, 2025 08:18
Balance of nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like creation’s own reflection—poetic, reverent, and vast. “The blind too can see its majesty”...that line alone could hang in a cathedral. Masterful work, my friend. We both be on a nature kick this morning! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like creation’s own reflection—poetic, reverent, and vast. “The blind too can see its majesty”...that line alone could hang in a cathedral. Masterful work, my friend. We both be on a nature kick this morning! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:04
What you want
RSM0812 said:
Full of imagery and advice. I thouroughly enjoyed this.
October 18th, 2025 05:25
RSM0812 said:
Full of imagery and advice. I thouroughly enjoyed this.
October 18th, 2025 05:25
Balance of nature
Poetic Licence said:
There is beauty to be found in everything, even in the darkest of places, as human tenant\'s on this planet, I just wish we noticed and protected the natural beauty that is all around us, enjoyed the read
October 18th, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
There is beauty to be found in everything, even in the darkest of places, as human tenant\'s on this planet, I just wish we noticed and protected the natural beauty that is all around us, enjoyed the read
October 18th, 2025 04:24
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