Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Passing shades
Teddy.15 said:
Hopefully not being your last day... Such appreciation of life in this, and yes as you have so poetically written we are all just passing clouds, you have such a positive colour here. . Superb my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:57
Teddy.15 said:
Hopefully not being your last day... Such appreciation of life in this, and yes as you have so poetically written we are all just passing clouds, you have such a positive colour here. . Superb my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:57
Sex has a leak
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, never ever pass a toilet at our age. LOL
Andy
December 7th, 2025 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, never ever pass a toilet at our age. LOL
Andy
December 7th, 2025 02:17
Rose
Aman 12 said:
thorns are security...guarding beauty on rose ...but on cactus...they are the beauty ad identity.
December 6th, 2025 22:50
Aman 12 said:
thorns are security...guarding beauty on rose ...but on cactus...they are the beauty ad identity.
December 6th, 2025 22:50
Sex has a leak
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Absolutely appreciate the way you\'ve manage you entwine two human concepts as almost parallel. At a certain point they both blended so seamlessly you can take it out of context and have it be placed as either one. Brilliant write.
December 6th, 2025 21:40
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Absolutely appreciate the way you\'ve manage you entwine two human concepts as almost parallel. At a certain point they both blended so seamlessly you can take it out of context and have it be placed as either one. Brilliant write.
December 6th, 2025 21:40
It\'s all smoke
Kevin Hulme said:
I was opening the Windows as I read .
Good description.
December 6th, 2025 20:21
Kevin Hulme said:
I was opening the Windows as I read .
Good description.
December 6th, 2025 20:21
Sex has a leak
Kevin Hulme said:
\' Theres nothing like the great relief when busting to go\' as Confucius should have said.
And thats said for the other.
Funny Write.
December 6th, 2025 20:18
Kevin Hulme said:
\' Theres nothing like the great relief when busting to go\' as Confucius should have said.
And thats said for the other.
Funny Write.
December 6th, 2025 20:18
Sex has a leak
Bella Shepard said:
I so glad to see the \"Pee\" get the respect it deserves. You have elevated its true significance, and I will never again take for granted the proximity of a bathroom when needed. Now, if you\'ll excuse me.....
December 6th, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
I so glad to see the \"Pee\" get the respect it deserves. You have elevated its true significance, and I will never again take for granted the proximity of a bathroom when needed. Now, if you\'ll excuse me.....
December 6th, 2025 12:28
It\'s all smoke
gray0328 said:
Well Done Soren my dad smoked a pipe and I remember the smell fondly
December 6th, 2025 12:26
gray0328 said:
Well Done Soren my dad smoked a pipe and I remember the smell fondly
December 6th, 2025 12:26
Sex has a leak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this cracked me up…the whole comparison is wild and somehow makes perfect sense. You ride that rhythm of build and release with such comic timing. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this cracked me up…the whole comparison is wild and somehow makes perfect sense. You ride that rhythm of build and release with such comic timing. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:56
Sex has a leak
Friendship said:
🤔This poem dedicated too much attention to the senior citizen\'s urination process. Somewhat too early in the morning for me!
The poet seems to aim for humor and relatability, using a taboo subject to explore deeper human experiences and desires. By comparing sexual urges to a more mundane biological need. The poet uses the metaphor of needing to urinate to explore the themes of desire, urgency, and relief associated with sexual urges and human intimacy. It draws parallels between the physical need to relieve oneself and the emotional and physical needs associated with sexual experiences.
December 6th, 2025 07:06
Friendship said:
🤔This poem dedicated too much attention to the senior citizen\'s urination process. Somewhat too early in the morning for me!
The poet seems to aim for humor and relatability, using a taboo subject to explore deeper human experiences and desires. By comparing sexual urges to a more mundane biological need. The poet uses the metaphor of needing to urinate to explore the themes of desire, urgency, and relief associated with sexual urges and human intimacy. It draws parallels between the physical need to relieve oneself and the emotional and physical needs associated with sexual experiences.
December 6th, 2025 07:06
Sex has a leak
Paul Bell said:
When a man\'s gotta go, he\'s gotta go.
So go with the flow and you\'ll be in the know.
Remember, sex is just not for Christmas, she said as I decorated the tree.
Seemingly it is just for Christmas as the tree fell on its knees.
December 6th, 2025 07:03
Paul Bell said:
When a man\'s gotta go, he\'s gotta go.
So go with the flow and you\'ll be in the know.
Remember, sex is just not for Christmas, she said as I decorated the tree.
Seemingly it is just for Christmas as the tree fell on its knees.
December 6th, 2025 07:03
Sex has a leak
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. It\'s me sheltered life brings on the swoons. heehee.
December 6th, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. It\'s me sheltered life brings on the swoons. heehee.
December 6th, 2025 03:22
It\'s all smoke
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend…the pipe becomes a portrait here…embers, fog, scent, all circling back to the man himself. It is tender and haunting at the same time. I know that feeling of getting lost in the very things that keep you going…that bowl glowing while the rest fades and fast. You captured that truth with such calm grace. Really beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend…the pipe becomes a portrait here…embers, fog, scent, all circling back to the man himself. It is tender and haunting at the same time. I know that feeling of getting lost in the very things that keep you going…that bowl glowing while the rest fades and fast. You captured that truth with such calm grace. Really beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 10:45
It\'s all smoke
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a thing you don\'t see now, the pipe smoker.
I, too, loved the smell of the pipe, your poem brings it back.
December 5th, 2025 08:56
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a thing you don\'t see now, the pipe smoker.
I, too, loved the smell of the pipe, your poem brings it back.
December 5th, 2025 08:56
It\'s all smoke
Friendship said:
I enjoy your poem, which reminds me of grandpa. Your poem likely aims to evoke nostalgia and appreciation for the ritual of smoking a pipe, exploring its sensory pleasures and the deeper connections it fosters between the individual and their memories or identity. reflects on the sensory experience of smoking a pipe, exploring themes of nostalgia, masculinity, and the ephemeral nature of life. The imagery you painted evokes the ritualistic and meditative aspects of smoking, highlighting both pleasure and transience.
December 5th, 2025 07:38
Friendship said:
I enjoy your poem, which reminds me of grandpa. Your poem likely aims to evoke nostalgia and appreciation for the ritual of smoking a pipe, exploring its sensory pleasures and the deeper connections it fosters between the individual and their memories or identity. reflects on the sensory experience of smoking a pipe, exploring themes of nostalgia, masculinity, and the ephemeral nature of life. The imagery you painted evokes the ritualistic and meditative aspects of smoking, highlighting both pleasure and transience.
December 5th, 2025 07:38
It\'s all smoke
Neilton said:
The imagery is amazing and so is the rhyme !! Beautiful poem soren
December 5th, 2025 07:24
Neilton said:
The imagery is amazing and so is the rhyme !! Beautiful poem soren
December 5th, 2025 07:24
It\'s all smoke
teardrop said:
Great imagery!! You captured th4e pipe and pipe smoker so good. I could picture this as I read it! Excellet write!
December 5th, 2025 05:42
teardrop said:
Great imagery!! You captured th4e pipe and pipe smoker so good. I could picture this as I read it! Excellet write!
December 5th, 2025 05:42
It\'s all smoke
orchidee said:
Good write SB but can\'t see you there among that pipe smoke. lol. I smoke a pipe, not mainly for comfort, but so I can\'t see KP in the fog. lol.
December 5th, 2025 03:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB but can\'t see you there among that pipe smoke. lol. I smoke a pipe, not mainly for comfort, but so I can\'t see KP in the fog. lol.
December 5th, 2025 03:45
Sandy claws
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren, he may be back next year. LOL
Andy
December 5th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren, he may be back next year. LOL
Andy
December 5th, 2025 02:22
Sandy claws
Kevin Hulme said:
Good job it wasn\'t a Komodo Dragon.
Thought it St Nick also. Good Write.
December 4th, 2025 20:32
Kevin Hulme said:
Good job it wasn\'t a Komodo Dragon.
Thought it St Nick also. Good Write.
December 4th, 2025 20:32
Sandy claws
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this earlier? And, my dear friend, the title alone should have caught my eye and sent me in here searching for the Ol\' Jack Skellington, the Pumpkin King himself! This, no doubt, even more of a joy than finding him here! LOL! Well done, Soren. Loved every bit of this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 4th, 2025 17:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this earlier? And, my dear friend, the title alone should have caught my eye and sent me in here searching for the Ol\' Jack Skellington, the Pumpkin King himself! This, no doubt, even more of a joy than finding him here! LOL! Well done, Soren. Loved every bit of this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 4th, 2025 17:17
Sandy claws
Friendship said:
Hahaha. I must say, well written, my friend. Your poem presents a whimsical encounter with a character who appears to blend elements of holiday tradition with fantastical imagery, suggesting themes of surprise, curiosity, and the interplay between the familiar and the strange.
It seems to revolve around a mysterious, scaly creature (reminiscent of a dragon or a fantastical figure) that enters the poet\'s home, introducing an element of the unexpected. The character\'s traits and actions evoke a sense of holiday cheer, possibly linking to the figure of Santa Claus (hence \"Sandy claws\"). This poem serves to entertain and evoke a sense of wonder, inviting readers to explore the boundaries between the familiar and the fantastical during a time often associated with magic and surprise.
December 4th, 2025 05:59
Friendship said:
Hahaha. I must say, well written, my friend. Your poem presents a whimsical encounter with a character who appears to blend elements of holiday tradition with fantastical imagery, suggesting themes of surprise, curiosity, and the interplay between the familiar and the strange.
It seems to revolve around a mysterious, scaly creature (reminiscent of a dragon or a fantastical figure) that enters the poet\'s home, introducing an element of the unexpected. The character\'s traits and actions evoke a sense of holiday cheer, possibly linking to the figure of Santa Claus (hence \"Sandy claws\"). This poem serves to entertain and evoke a sense of wonder, inviting readers to explore the boundaries between the familiar and the fantastical during a time often associated with magic and surprise.
December 4th, 2025 05:59
Sandy claws
Teddy.15 said:
We ha e them here they are small and big, I actually quite adore them. Myself, I don\'t like snakes though, your theatrical life with the wild is highly entertaining, your home must be something very special for all these visits 💜
December 4th, 2025 05:36
Teddy.15 said:
We ha e them here they are small and big, I actually quite adore them. Myself, I don\'t like snakes though, your theatrical life with the wild is highly entertaining, your home must be something very special for all these visits 💜
December 4th, 2025 05:36
Sandy claws
Doggerel Dave said:
Think I prefer the upper floor in a quiet Sydney suburb....
December 4th, 2025 05:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Think I prefer the upper floor in a quiet Sydney suburb....
December 4th, 2025 05:23
Sandy claws
Katie B. said:
Yes, lovely, I thought it was really Santa! Well written, nice rhyme.
December 4th, 2025 04:59
Katie B. said:
Yes, lovely, I thought it was really Santa! Well written, nice rhyme.
December 4th, 2025 04:59
Sandy claws
Paul Bell said:
Monitor lizard or Santa, choices, choices.
I think the monitor lizard would be cheaper to feed.
Do they make good watch dogs, that is the question.
December 4th, 2025 04:27
Paul Bell said:
Monitor lizard or Santa, choices, choices.
I think the monitor lizard would be cheaper to feed.
Do they make good watch dogs, that is the question.
December 4th, 2025 04:27
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