Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Life\'s schooling
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Life\'s schooling
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Life\'s schooling
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Life\'s schooling
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
Life\'s schooling
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite three lines with a fully lived life in between them, Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 9th, 2025 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite three lines with a fully lived life in between them, Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 9th, 2025 03:29
Who\'s the fool
cellinic said:
Rather wise and persuasive... A good and impressive write!
December 9th, 2025 02:58
cellinic said:
Rather wise and persuasive... A good and impressive write!
December 9th, 2025 02:58
Who\'s the fool
Goldfinch60 said:
Showing just how mad the world is at this time soren, well written.
Andy
December 9th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Showing just how mad the world is at this time soren, well written.
Andy
December 9th, 2025 02:15
Who\'s the fool
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Your choice in descriptive sensory words provide not only a lovely read but evokes sensations, I can almost hear these words. Great write Soren.
December 8th, 2025 20:30
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Your choice in descriptive sensory words provide not only a lovely read but evokes sensations, I can almost hear these words. Great write Soren.
December 8th, 2025 20:30
Who\'s the fool
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches me…it says more about survival than a whole stanza could. You’re pairing grit and grace in a way that lingers long after the last line. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches me…it says more about survival than a whole stanza could. You’re pairing grit and grace in a way that lingers long after the last line. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:17
Passing shades
Kevin Hulme said:
This time of year we all think of Loved Ones we\'ve known and lost. Fine Poem.
December 8th, 2025 20:12
Kevin Hulme said:
This time of year we all think of Loved Ones we\'ve known and lost. Fine Poem.
December 8th, 2025 20:12
Who\'s the fool
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written I love the metaphors I can totally tune into this and totally understand what you\'re writing I have the same issues
December 8th, 2025 18:09
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written I love the metaphors I can totally tune into this and totally understand what you\'re writing I have the same issues
December 8th, 2025 18:09
Who\'s the fool
arqios said:
This touched me so much. The dents and the teeth marks as well as the patching of broken eggs. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
This touched me so much. The dents and the teeth marks as well as the patching of broken eggs. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 07:50
Who\'s the fool
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time they locked the mad away, then someone had a bright idea of letting them into the community, but through time they lost them.
Now these mad people run governments and the sane allow them, which gets me wondering whose actually mad.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time they locked the mad away, then someone had a bright idea of letting them into the community, but through time they lost them.
Now these mad people run governments and the sane allow them, which gets me wondering whose actually mad.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Who\'s the fool
Friendship said:
The poem explores the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality. Yet the poet seems to explore the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality.
December 8th, 2025 06:07
Friendship said:
The poem explores the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality. Yet the poet seems to explore the concept of isolation and the perception of madness in a world that often values conformity over individuality. It juxtaposes the innocence and vulnerability of the speaker with the predatory nature of society, questioning who the real fool is in the face of such a harsh reality.
December 8th, 2025 06:07
Who\'s the fool
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m just chatting to this spider, saying, Come indoors and build your web in the lounge!\' lol.
December 8th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m just chatting to this spider, saying, Come indoors and build your web in the lounge!\' lol.
December 8th, 2025 03:28
Passing shades
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we will all pass in time and hopefully enjoyed our time before passing.
Andy
December 8th, 2025 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we will all pass in time and hopefully enjoyed our time before passing.
Andy
December 8th, 2025 02:05
Passing shades
NinjaGirl said:
We\'ll never be at rest...but oh, what adventure awaits! Lovely short poem!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
NinjaGirl said:
We\'ll never be at rest...but oh, what adventure awaits! Lovely short poem!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
Sex has a leak
Dustandlace said:
Sex for men is like taking a quick wizz, almost any toilet will do.
Sex for women is more like launching a rocket into space: the countdown feels long, the alignment has to be perfect, and only a rare few ever get to become astronauts.
very funny read and interesting to see the mans perspective.
December 7th, 2025 19:04
Dustandlace said:
Sex for men is like taking a quick wizz, almost any toilet will do.
Sex for women is more like launching a rocket into space: the countdown feels long, the alignment has to be perfect, and only a rare few ever get to become astronauts.
very funny read and interesting to see the mans perspective.
December 7th, 2025 19:04
Awakening
Dustandlace said:
truths and authenticity are far more beautiful than the cheap plastic shimmery illusions! the shift can be a little scary.
enjoyed this read a lot! (:
December 7th, 2025 18:40
Dustandlace said:
truths and authenticity are far more beautiful than the cheap plastic shimmery illusions! the shift can be a little scary.
enjoyed this read a lot! (:
December 7th, 2025 18:40
Passing shades
Lorenz said:
Who still pays attention to the message of the clouds ? The shadows perhaps...
December 7th, 2025 12:42
Lorenz said:
Who still pays attention to the message of the clouds ? The shadows perhaps...
December 7th, 2025 12:42
Passing shades
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful metaphor that really needs no explaining. Truth, powerful and simple! Well done, my friend! Passing clouds we all are. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful metaphor that really needs no explaining. Truth, powerful and simple! Well done, my friend! Passing clouds we all are. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:08
Passing shades
Soman Ragavan said:
Like clouds, we meet with others, merge with some absorb some, get absorbed by others, split to forge on in our different paths....
December 7th, 2025 08:34
Soman Ragavan said:
Like clouds, we meet with others, merge with some absorb some, get absorbed by others, split to forge on in our different paths....
December 7th, 2025 08:34
Passing shades
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP evaporated to me years ago. She\'s just a mirage to me, as I totally ignore her. Well, I said in a poem I was \'orrible! lol.
December 7th, 2025 08:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP evaporated to me years ago. She\'s just a mirage to me, as I totally ignore her. Well, I said in a poem I was \'orrible! lol.
December 7th, 2025 08:04
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