Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Liberated
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Liberated
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Liberated
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
The circle
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
The circle
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
The circle
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
The circle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:40
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
RSM0812 said:
This is one of my most favorite of your works. Amazing.
March 19th, 2025 07:02
RSM0812 said:
This is one of my most favorite of your works. Amazing.
March 19th, 2025 07:02
The circle
Poetic Licence said:
May I just say simply brilliant,, loved the write
March 19th, 2025 06:54
Poetic Licence said:
May I just say simply brilliant,, loved the write
March 19th, 2025 06:54
The circle
Friendship said:
Touche! A powerful poem, Soren, Your poem \"Ouroboros of Love and Hate\" examines the intricate, interconnected relationship between love and hate, implying that they are two sides of the same coin. The imagery of the ouroboros—a snake consuming its own tail—symbolizes the cyclical nature of these emotions and their eternal connection. Your poem explores themes of desire, consumption, and the duality of human emotions, portraying a relationship where love and hate coexist, each fueling the other, creating an endless cycle that is both destructive and all-consuming. It aims to stimulate thought about the nature of love and hate, encouraging readers to reflect on their experiences and perceptions of these powerful emotions. It uses vivid imagery and metaphor to illustrate the often tangled relationship between these opposing forces.
March 19th, 2025 06:51
Friendship said:
Touche! A powerful poem, Soren, Your poem \"Ouroboros of Love and Hate\" examines the intricate, interconnected relationship between love and hate, implying that they are two sides of the same coin. The imagery of the ouroboros—a snake consuming its own tail—symbolizes the cyclical nature of these emotions and their eternal connection. Your poem explores themes of desire, consumption, and the duality of human emotions, portraying a relationship where love and hate coexist, each fueling the other, creating an endless cycle that is both destructive and all-consuming. It aims to stimulate thought about the nature of love and hate, encouraging readers to reflect on their experiences and perceptions of these powerful emotions. It uses vivid imagery and metaphor to illustrate the often tangled relationship between these opposing forces.
March 19th, 2025 06:51
The circle
David Wakeling said:
Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the fable.Well done
March 19th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the fable.Well done
March 19th, 2025 05:19
The circle
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery is vivid and the exploration of dualities is captivating. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 05:15
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery is vivid and the exploration of dualities is captivating. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 05:15
The circle
Teddy.15 said:
Says a lot about love and hate, forever a grand educator, your poem is magnificent 🌹
March 19th, 2025 04:45
Teddy.15 said:
Says a lot about love and hate, forever a grand educator, your poem is magnificent 🌹
March 19th, 2025 04:45
It burns
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps we will remember when we\'re ready to remember? Otherwise the shock of it might be too much?!
March 18th, 2025 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps we will remember when we\'re ready to remember? Otherwise the shock of it might be too much?!
March 18th, 2025 18:42
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Powerful! Truthful! A well done write!
March 18th, 2025 14:26
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Powerful! Truthful! A well done write!
March 18th, 2025 14:26
It burns
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Thank you for teaching us all something new today! A good write!
March 18th, 2025 14:21
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Thank you for teaching us all something new today! A good write!
March 18th, 2025 14:21
It burns
Friendship said:
A powerful, short, and simple painting, Soren, Your poem revolves around guilt and the struggle for forgiveness. It suggests that our past mistakes and regrets can consume us, likening guilt to a destructive fire. The reference to Lethe—a river in Greek mythology associated with forgetfulness—implies a longing for release from the burdens of the past. Your poem captures the tension between enduring guilt and the hope for redemption. Which we should all learn to do! I am so guilty of this!
March 18th, 2025 08:32
Friendship said:
A powerful, short, and simple painting, Soren, Your poem revolves around guilt and the struggle for forgiveness. It suggests that our past mistakes and regrets can consume us, likening guilt to a destructive fire. The reference to Lethe—a river in Greek mythology associated with forgetfulness—implies a longing for release from the burdens of the past. Your poem captures the tension between enduring guilt and the hope for redemption. Which we should all learn to do! I am so guilty of this!
March 18th, 2025 08:32
It burns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the alluring waters of Lethe. Here\'s hoping! Excellent, my friend! A wonderful poem that speaks truth to me. Guilt, pain, suffering, all those things seem so tempting to forget, but for the beauty and joy one experiences as well. But we have to ask, does the joy and beauty out weight the pain and suffering? Who knows, but maybe, just maybe, not having any memory might be true peace. Boy, this is sounding more and more like Nirvana! LOL! Just let go and cease to be. All the same, my friend, this poem really got me thinking and for that, it gets a major fave. Well done on this! 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the alluring waters of Lethe. Here\'s hoping! Excellent, my friend! A wonderful poem that speaks truth to me. Guilt, pain, suffering, all those things seem so tempting to forget, but for the beauty and joy one experiences as well. But we have to ask, does the joy and beauty out weight the pain and suffering? Who knows, but maybe, just maybe, not having any memory might be true peace. Boy, this is sounding more and more like Nirvana! LOL! Just let go and cease to be. All the same, my friend, this poem really got me thinking and for that, it gets a major fave. Well done on this! 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:29
It burns
Poetic Licence said:
I have learned something today which i didn\'t know, that is always a good thing and i enjoyed the read, thank you
March 18th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
I have learned something today which i didn\'t know, that is always a good thing and i enjoyed the read, thank you
March 18th, 2025 05:32
It burns
David Wakeling said:
A powerful piece that made me think,I think I learned something.Well done
March 18th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
A powerful piece that made me think,I think I learned something.Well done
March 18th, 2025 05:21
It burns
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s something about \'heaping burning coals on an enemies head\', so that they turn from their wrong ways. Meant symbolically.
March 18th, 2025 03:51
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s something about \'heaping burning coals on an enemies head\', so that they turn from their wrong ways. Meant symbolically.
March 18th, 2025 03:51
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