Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The collector
Friendship said:
Nicely write. Your poem explores the theme of collecting and the emotional implications of holding onto things deemed worthless. It seems you suggest a deeper commentary on relationships and the human tendency to cling to memories, objects, or connections that may no longer serve a purpose.
July 6th, 2026 16:33
Friendship said:
Nicely write. Your poem explores the theme of collecting and the emotional implications of holding onto things deemed worthless. It seems you suggest a deeper commentary on relationships and the human tendency to cling to memories, objects, or connections that may no longer serve a purpose.
July 6th, 2026 16:33
The collector
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice comparison between collecting worthless things and staying in an unhealthy relationship.
July 6th, 2026 15:20
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice comparison between collecting worthless things and staying in an unhealthy relationship.
July 6th, 2026 15:20
The collector
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how the seemingly random contents of the cigar box slowly become a portrait of the man who keeps them. By the final line, the objects aren\'t really the subject anymore...they\'ve become a mirror. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how the seemingly random contents of the cigar box slowly become a portrait of the man who keeps them. By the final line, the objects aren\'t really the subject anymore...they\'ve become a mirror. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:06
Touch
Samprikta Paul said:
As we grow up, everything seems to scare slowly as the past is behind yet never left. Well done.
July 6th, 2026 14:10
Samprikta Paul said:
As we grow up, everything seems to scare slowly as the past is behind yet never left. Well done.
July 6th, 2026 14:10
The collector
Paul Bell said:
She always said she would throw me out with the rubbish.
Probably why I hid the bin and recycled her.
July 6th, 2026 13:34
Paul Bell said:
She always said she would throw me out with the rubbish.
Probably why I hid the bin and recycled her.
July 6th, 2026 13:34
Touch
NafisaSB said:
The difference between reality and what was imagined as truth is well Brought out 👌✌️
July 6th, 2026 11:32
NafisaSB said:
The difference between reality and what was imagined as truth is well Brought out 👌✌️
July 6th, 2026 11:32
The collector
arqios said:
Felt poem. Perhaps as with beauty, value lies with the beholder. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 6th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
Felt poem. Perhaps as with beauty, value lies with the beholder. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 6th, 2026 06:34
The collector
Syd said:
I know a few people like the person you\'ve described here Sorenbarret.
Well written - Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:54
Syd said:
I know a few people like the person you\'ve described here Sorenbarret.
Well written - Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:54
The collector
Alex Arnot said:
Feels like the antithesis to the old saying about one man\'s trash. Well written good sir!
July 6th, 2026 01:14
Alex Arnot said:
Feels like the antithesis to the old saying about one man\'s trash. Well written good sir!
July 6th, 2026 01:14
I swear
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
I swear
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
I swear
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
It’s all about control today isn’t it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
It’s all about control today isn’t it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
Change
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Ghost riders
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
I swear
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Taken
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
Ghost riders
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
Ghost riders
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
I swear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
I swear
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
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