Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Passing on
Friendship said:
Your poem functions as a cautionary narrative, prompting the reader to contemplate the merits of patience, the significance of appreciating experiences, and the inexorable progression of time. It inspires introspection regarding the manner in which one elects to live life amidst societal pressures to accelerate.
April 13th, 2025 08:08
Friendship said:
Your poem functions as a cautionary narrative, prompting the reader to contemplate the merits of patience, the significance of appreciating experiences, and the inexorable progression of time. It inspires introspection regarding the manner in which one elects to live life amidst societal pressures to accelerate.
April 13th, 2025 08:08
Passing on
Salvia.S said:
Poignant reminder to cherish the present, as life\'s moments and pursuits can be fleeting. Well written!!!!
April 13th, 2025 07:44
Salvia.S said:
Poignant reminder to cherish the present, as life\'s moments and pursuits can be fleeting. Well written!!!!
April 13th, 2025 07:44
Passing on
David Wakeling said:
This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done
April 13th, 2025 05:31
David Wakeling said:
This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done
April 13th, 2025 05:31
Passing on
Poetic Licence said:
Forgive me as this is more than likely not what you intended it to mean, but to me it comes across as someone who is only interested in themselves and getting to the top as quickly as possible, regardless of cost to himself or others, than when he makes it, it\'s not what he thought it would be and the pleasure is short lived, hence the bullet, whatever it means I have enjoyed reading this write
April 13th, 2025 05:10
Poetic Licence said:
Forgive me as this is more than likely not what you intended it to mean, but to me it comes across as someone who is only interested in themselves and getting to the top as quickly as possible, regardless of cost to himself or others, than when he makes it, it\'s not what he thought it would be and the pleasure is short lived, hence the bullet, whatever it means I have enjoyed reading this write
April 13th, 2025 05:10
Passing on
arqios said:
Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and meaning🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 04:12
arqios said:
Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and meaning🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 04:12
Seasons pass
Goldfinch60 said:
May each season bring us a different joy soren, as do the words in your poem.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
May each season bring us a different joy soren, as do the words in your poem.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:32
Unknot the not
James Michael said:
Enjoyable! You sure do crank ‘em out! Kindness can be a rarity, this site was a war zone a few years ago. I packed my bags and left after three years here as Johnny FN Lawless. This place has returned to a better place.
April 12th, 2025 22:22
James Michael said:
Enjoyable! You sure do crank ‘em out! Kindness can be a rarity, this site was a war zone a few years ago. I packed my bags and left after three years here as Johnny FN Lawless. This place has returned to a better place.
April 12th, 2025 22:22
Seasons pass
James Michael said:
Hard to read with the font, maybe I’ll have an easier time with another.
April 12th, 2025 22:19
James Michael said:
Hard to read with the font, maybe I’ll have an easier time with another.
April 12th, 2025 22:19
Seasons pass
Friendship said:
A beautiful painting , Soren.Your poem masterfully personifies the seasons—winter, spring, summer, and autumn—using breathtaking imagery and metaphor to describe the awe-inspiring transformations occurring in nature throughout the year. You beautifully illustrate how each season brings distinct beauty and characteristics, while also reflecting the passage of time and the changes in the natural world. Your poem may be intended to celebrate the splendor of nature and the profound emotional resonance that changing seasons evoke in human experience, inviting readers to revel in the transformations occurring in the world around them. Your poem is replete with sensory imagery. For example, \"Goose down snow\" and \"gown of roses\" evoke visual and tactile sensations. Metaphors comparing seasons to clothing, such as \"cloud\'s linen case\" and \"Seasonal ice negligee,\" convey beauty and transformation.
April 12th, 2025 08:53
Friendship said:
A beautiful painting , Soren.Your poem masterfully personifies the seasons—winter, spring, summer, and autumn—using breathtaking imagery and metaphor to describe the awe-inspiring transformations occurring in nature throughout the year. You beautifully illustrate how each season brings distinct beauty and characteristics, while also reflecting the passage of time and the changes in the natural world. Your poem may be intended to celebrate the splendor of nature and the profound emotional resonance that changing seasons evoke in human experience, inviting readers to revel in the transformations occurring in the world around them. Your poem is replete with sensory imagery. For example, \"Goose down snow\" and \"gown of roses\" evoke visual and tactile sensations. Metaphors comparing seasons to clothing, such as \"cloud\'s linen case\" and \"Seasonal ice negligee,\" convey beauty and transformation.
April 12th, 2025 08:53
Seasons pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons. Indeed, it may be April, but I woke up with some snow today. It\'ll be gone by the end of the day...but quite apropos for the reading of this poem. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons. Indeed, it may be April, but I woke up with some snow today. It\'ll be gone by the end of the day...but quite apropos for the reading of this poem. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:05
Seasons pass
MDStone said:
Soren,
Loved the way you started and finished in the same season. The circle of life! What beautiful snapshots of Mother Nature told from a lover’s point of view. Loved the font that flowered and flowed like the Négligée. Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have new memories.
April 12th, 2025 07:17
MDStone said:
Soren,
Loved the way you started and finished in the same season. The circle of life! What beautiful snapshots of Mother Nature told from a lover’s point of view. Loved the font that flowered and flowed like the Négligée. Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have new memories.
April 12th, 2025 07:17
Seasons pass
arqios said:
It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated 🥰 poems and this one encompasses all seasons, just wonderful 🕊🙏🏻
April 12th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated 🥰 poems and this one encompasses all seasons, just wonderful 🕊🙏🏻
April 12th, 2025 05:32
Seasons pass
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Filled with delightful metaphors for the seasons.enjoyable read mi amigo
April 12th, 2025 05:30
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Filled with delightful metaphors for the seasons.enjoyable read mi amigo
April 12th, 2025 05:30
Seasons pass
teardrop said:
You covered the seasons to beautifully! Especially loved the \" In a gown of roses, her beauty exposed\" breathtaking. Beautiful write!
April 12th, 2025 04:53
teardrop said:
You covered the seasons to beautifully! Especially loved the \" In a gown of roses, her beauty exposed\" breathtaking. Beautiful write!
April 12th, 2025 04:53
Seasons pass
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the most beautiful way I have ever read of the passing of the seasons, really enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:46
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the most beautiful way I have ever read of the passing of the seasons, really enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:46
Scent of the past
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell is the most relevant of the senses to bring back memories soren.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell is the most relevant of the senses to bring back memories soren.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:55
How soon we forget
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, makes me remember the days when i enjoyed the burning hot sun of my hometown, Chennai, where the weather is hot, hotter and hottest
April 12th, 2025 01:26
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, makes me remember the days when i enjoyed the burning hot sun of my hometown, Chennai, where the weather is hot, hotter and hottest
April 12th, 2025 01:26
Scent of the past
hzugman said:
What a fine combination of thought and scent. You hit a homer with this one.
April 11th, 2025 17:15
hzugman said:
What a fine combination of thought and scent. You hit a homer with this one.
April 11th, 2025 17:15
Scent of the past
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of the senses. My mom loved Hollyhocks.
April 11th, 2025 14:51
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of the senses. My mom loved Hollyhocks.
April 11th, 2025 14:51
Flower
Salvia.S said:
Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!
April 11th, 2025 09:35
Salvia.S said:
Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!
April 11th, 2025 09:35
Scent of the past
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The smell anxiety and anticipation\". Really wonderful write, Soren. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The smell anxiety and anticipation\". Really wonderful write, Soren. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:55
You will argue
spilleronsheet said:
Transient nature of mind…no permanence but the evolution of time….beautiful observation dear poet
April 11th, 2025 07:21
spilleronsheet said:
Transient nature of mind…no permanence but the evolution of time….beautiful observation dear poet
April 11th, 2025 07:21
Scent of the past
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to examine the interplay between memory, scent, and the passage of time, reflecting on how fragrances can evoke nostalgia and influence emotions, thereby intertwining past experiences with present feelings of anxiety and anticipation. The smell of anxiety and anticipation serves as a metaphor for the emotional weight of the present, underscoring how the future can be both exciting and daunting. Soren, your poem also seeks to underscore the significance of scent in shaping our memories and emotions, illustrating how the past informs the present and future, and encouraging readers to consider their own associations with scents and how they evoke personal memories and feelings.
April 11th, 2025 06:27
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to examine the interplay between memory, scent, and the passage of time, reflecting on how fragrances can evoke nostalgia and influence emotions, thereby intertwining past experiences with present feelings of anxiety and anticipation. The smell of anxiety and anticipation serves as a metaphor for the emotional weight of the present, underscoring how the future can be both exciting and daunting. Soren, your poem also seeks to underscore the significance of scent in shaping our memories and emotions, illustrating how the past informs the present and future, and encouraging readers to consider their own associations with scents and how they evoke personal memories and feelings.
April 11th, 2025 06:27
Scent of the past
arqios said:
They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying feelings. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying feelings. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:27
Scent of the past
David Wakeling said:
I like the scents that this poem conjures up. It shows the magic power of poetry.Enjoyable
April 11th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
I like the scents that this poem conjures up. It shows the magic power of poetry.Enjoyable
April 11th, 2025 05:21
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