Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full of quiet awe. You remind us that even storms can cradle us in peace. 🗣️💭🌍🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full of quiet awe. You remind us that even storms can cradle us in peace. 🗣️💭🌍🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:43
Solo climbing
Paul Bell said:
Could be life in a line.
It doesn\'t matter how much you prepare. If the outside force is against you, it\'s against you.
Best laid plans and all that. This is why I delegate.
October 31st, 2025 07:15
Paul Bell said:
Could be life in a line.
It doesn\'t matter how much you prepare. If the outside force is against you, it\'s against you.
Best laid plans and all that. This is why I delegate.
October 31st, 2025 07:15
Rain
arqios said:
I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or threatening. Here the rain feels almost maternal, of wrapping, sheltering, singing you to sleep. That last image of fears turning to “dark ash” really lands, like the storm has burned away the day’s weight and left only quiet. It’s a gentle reminder that sometimes the wildest weather is also the safest place to rest. 🙏🕊️
October 30th, 2025 20:29
arqios said:
I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or threatening. Here the rain feels almost maternal, of wrapping, sheltering, singing you to sleep. That last image of fears turning to “dark ash” really lands, like the storm has burned away the day’s weight and left only quiet. It’s a gentle reminder that sometimes the wildest weather is also the safest place to rest. 🙏🕊️
October 30th, 2025 20:29
Reaper
Kenny O\'Donnell said:
Short but very expressive and introspective. Very nice
October 30th, 2025 15:17
Kenny O\'Donnell said:
Short but very expressive and introspective. Very nice
October 30th, 2025 15:17
Halloween
AuburnScribbler said:
I love the uneasiness of this rhythm structure, that clearly fits the words that are written. Though, from line five, it reads like a killer rap, of which I very much enjoyed.
I agree with what this poem, and previous readers comments, question. With the purity of a certain faith, do the dead appreciate this?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
October 30th, 2025 14:39
AuburnScribbler said:
I love the uneasiness of this rhythm structure, that clearly fits the words that are written. Though, from line five, it reads like a killer rap, of which I very much enjoyed.
I agree with what this poem, and previous readers comments, question. With the purity of a certain faith, do the dead appreciate this?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
October 30th, 2025 14:39
Rain
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the announcement of an impending apocalypse !
(Am I being too pessimistic ?)
October 30th, 2025 11:22
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the announcement of an impending apocalypse !
(Am I being too pessimistic ?)
October 30th, 2025 11:22
Rain
Bustillos said:
That is such a beautiful, optimistic, and romantic poem!
October 30th, 2025 06:25
Bustillos said:
That is such a beautiful, optimistic, and romantic poem!
October 30th, 2025 06:25
Goodbye
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret my heart is with you, no matter how long you have had a special friend, could have been a week or 50 years the point is they were and always will be special. A beautiful write my dear friend. 🌹
October 30th, 2025 05:58
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret my heart is with you, no matter how long you have had a special friend, could have been a week or 50 years the point is they were and always will be special. A beautiful write my dear friend. 🌹
October 30th, 2025 05:58
Enlightenment
Neville said:
For those who might follow me here, take note, for herein there lies truest meaning to questions so oft sought .. In truth we both arrive and depart naked and with nothing owned .. sprinkled with a touch of zen .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍👍
October 30th, 2025 01:54
Neville said:
For those who might follow me here, take note, for herein there lies truest meaning to questions so oft sought .. In truth we both arrive and depart naked and with nothing owned .. sprinkled with a touch of zen .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍👍
October 30th, 2025 01:54
Enlightenment
Kevin Hulme said:
So deep this Poem, and a serious message.
Well Said.
October 29th, 2025 19:55
Kevin Hulme said:
So deep this Poem, and a serious message.
Well Said.
October 29th, 2025 19:55
Enlightenment
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the religious tone of an eco-friendly preacher !
October 29th, 2025 11:07
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the religious tone of an eco-friendly preacher !
October 29th, 2025 11:07
Enlightenment
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The last line - one said to me, \'That idea will never hold water\'. I replied, \'Neither will this sieve that I\'m trying to collect water in!\' Doh! lol.
October 29th, 2025 10:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The last line - one said to me, \'That idea will never hold water\'. I replied, \'Neither will this sieve that I\'m trying to collect water in!\' Doh! lol.
October 29th, 2025 10:12
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh! First comment! Yay! I don\'t mean this in the religious sense, but my friend, I feel the preacher and the poet walking side by side here…you remind us that what we grasp most tightly was never ours to own. Well done and truth.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh! First comment! Yay! I don\'t mean this in the religious sense, but my friend, I feel the preacher and the poet walking side by side here…you remind us that what we grasp most tightly was never ours to own. Well done and truth.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:25
Goodbye
NafisaSB said:
that\'s truly a lament straight from the heart - may his soul rest in peace
October 29th, 2025 07:30
NafisaSB said:
that\'s truly a lament straight from the heart - may his soul rest in peace
October 29th, 2025 07:30
Insomnia of life
NafisaSB said:
I see a sad longing and tiredness - as if fed up with the lies and the deceit around you - many of us do get that feeling sometimes - but I hope that it does not deter you from awakening with hope every new day that dawns..
October 29th, 2025 07:24
NafisaSB said:
I see a sad longing and tiredness - as if fed up with the lies and the deceit around you - many of us do get that feeling sometimes - but I hope that it does not deter you from awakening with hope every new day that dawns..
October 29th, 2025 07:24
Goodbye
drniran said:
Bidding goodbye is the toughest thing to do...and missing to bid the same keeps on pinching in each and every breathe you take.... The weight it carry is really heavy.. Marvelous piece of work.
October 29th, 2025 03:54
drniran said:
Bidding goodbye is the toughest thing to do...and missing to bid the same keeps on pinching in each and every breathe you take.... The weight it carry is really heavy.. Marvelous piece of work.
October 29th, 2025 03:54
Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
This happens so often at our time of life soren but the memories of them will never fail.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
This happens so often at our time of life soren but the memories of them will never fail.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:41
Goodbye
Kevin Hulme said:
I feel this. I never got to say Goodbye to both Parents. A touching Poem.
October 28th, 2025 20:07
Kevin Hulme said:
I feel this. I never got to say Goodbye to both Parents. A touching Poem.
October 28th, 2025 20:07
Goodbye
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SB.
meanwhile me being daft - Erm, now me next poem: \'Hello\'. (heehee)
October 28th, 2025 13:04
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SB.
meanwhile me being daft - Erm, now me next poem: \'Hello\'. (heehee)
October 28th, 2025 13:04
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