Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Succulent
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I can feel so vividly in many of the lines in this text. The place where the line between pain and pleasure can blur. Excellent and very captivating. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:24
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I can feel so vividly in many of the lines in this text. The place where the line between pain and pleasure can blur. Excellent and very captivating. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:24
Succulent
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ohh, I need no succubus while I have KP! lol.
June 9th, 2025 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ohh, I need no succubus while I have KP! lol.
June 9th, 2025 11:12
Succulent
Soman Ragavan said:
We will notice that the cactus is surrounded by spikes and thorns; these guard against some predators. Yet, the flowers are still useful and within reach of creatures like bees and butterflies. Thus, the working of nature ensures that some creatures do get to the flowers.
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June 9th, 2025 10:00
Soman Ragavan said:
We will notice that the cactus is surrounded by spikes and thorns; these guard against some predators. Yet, the flowers are still useful and within reach of creatures like bees and butterflies. Thus, the working of nature ensures that some creatures do get to the flowers.
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June 9th, 2025 10:00
Sparrow
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Sparrow enjoys its Solitude
Seems to love the rain very cool
Soaring rhythms
June 9th, 2025 06:40
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Sparrow enjoys its Solitude
Seems to love the rain very cool
Soaring rhythms
June 9th, 2025 06:40
Succulent
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren. Succulent revolves around the transformative power of beauty and pain, particularly in the context of desire and attraction. The cactus serves as a metaphor for love or desire, showcasing how something that appears alluring and beautiful can also be a catalyst for growth and self-discovery. The subject matter touches on themes of temptation, the liberating consequences of desire, and the wisdom gained from past experiences, suggesting that while beauty can be enticing, it often comes with hidden opportunities for empowerment.
June 9th, 2025 05:40
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren. Succulent revolves around the transformative power of beauty and pain, particularly in the context of desire and attraction. The cactus serves as a metaphor for love or desire, showcasing how something that appears alluring and beautiful can also be a catalyst for growth and self-discovery. The subject matter touches on themes of temptation, the liberating consequences of desire, and the wisdom gained from past experiences, suggesting that while beauty can be enticing, it often comes with hidden opportunities for empowerment.
June 9th, 2025 05:40
Succulent
Poetic Licence said:
Possibly dealing with a devil woman, a seductress who draws you in, sucks you dry then spits you out, nicely crafted write
June 9th, 2025 04:43
Poetic Licence said:
Possibly dealing with a devil woman, a seductress who draws you in, sucks you dry then spits you out, nicely crafted write
June 9th, 2025 04:43
Succulent
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever and thoughtful. Succulent cactus for me is a metaphor for Life itself.In particular it seems to be a descritption of a human relationships. A well crafted poem
June 9th, 2025 04:27
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever and thoughtful. Succulent cactus for me is a metaphor for Life itself.In particular it seems to be a descritption of a human relationships. A well crafted poem
June 9th, 2025 04:27
Years
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will never stop but I always look for the good in life soren, it is there for us but many do not recognise it.
Andy
June 9th, 2025 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will never stop but I always look for the good in life soren, it is there for us but many do not recognise it.
Andy
June 9th, 2025 02:05
The artisan
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice soren
Artisan rhythms nice sculpted metaphor
June 8th, 2025 18:16
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice soren
Artisan rhythms nice sculpted metaphor
June 8th, 2025 18:16
Years
Damaso said:
Oh, beautiful! As always, it captivates me and takes me to beautiful landscapes and an elemental metaphor. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 8th, 2025 09:59
Damaso said:
Oh, beautiful! As always, it captivates me and takes me to beautiful landscapes and an elemental metaphor. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 8th, 2025 09:59
Years
RSM0812 said:
I like how you compared nature to life. We are a reflection of nature and have to cohere to its laws. Great write.
June 8th, 2025 08:46
RSM0812 said:
I like how you compared nature to life. We are a reflection of nature and have to cohere to its laws. Great write.
June 8th, 2025 08:46
Years
Poetic Licence said:
How age takes its toll not just in appearance or physically, but on our remaining hope and dreams as time repidly runs out, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
How age takes its toll not just in appearance or physically, but on our remaining hope and dreams as time repidly runs out, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 08:00
Years
Soman Ragavan said:
The years take their toll, little by little. When we look at pictures of ourselves going back a long time, we refuse to believe that we have changed so much. Yet, age wreaks its havoc little by little. Not only physical features, but mentally too we age.
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June 8th, 2025 07:25
Soman Ragavan said:
The years take their toll, little by little. When we look at pictures of ourselves going back a long time, we refuse to believe that we have changed so much. Yet, age wreaks its havoc little by little. Not only physical features, but mentally too we age.
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June 8th, 2025 07:25
Years
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be evoking reflection on the human condition, particularly the inevitability of aging and the loss of aspirations, prompting readers to confront their feelings about time and hope.
Overall, the poem encapsulates the bittersweet nature of life, capturing both the sorrow of lost dreams and the weight of time’s passage.
June 8th, 2025 05:59
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be evoking reflection on the human condition, particularly the inevitability of aging and the loss of aspirations, prompting readers to confront their feelings about time and hope.
Overall, the poem encapsulates the bittersweet nature of life, capturing both the sorrow of lost dreams and the weight of time’s passage.
June 8th, 2025 05:59
Years
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we till the dust, aching for one more bloom.
June 8th, 2025 05:21
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we till the dust, aching for one more bloom.
June 8th, 2025 05:21
Damaged
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree with.
Well said Soren.
Preconditions would include the removal of much of the human species.....
June 7th, 2025 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree with.
Well said Soren.
Preconditions would include the removal of much of the human species.....
June 7th, 2025 17:46
Damaged
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I said to KP \'If it ain\'t broke; don\'t fix it\'. She replied \'The ball and chain that I locked on your ankle ain\'t broke, so I won\'t fix it, I will leave it on you!\' lol.
June 7th, 2025 12:49
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I said to KP \'If it ain\'t broke; don\'t fix it\'. She replied \'The ball and chain that I locked on your ankle ain\'t broke, so I won\'t fix it, I will leave it on you!\' lol.
June 7th, 2025 12:49
Head of wheat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Damaged
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
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