Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sacrifice, take the hit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphors for selfless sacrifice are excellent. I could feel the blow,, hear the anvil swing, this is a glorious poem with fantastic use of metaphor and imagery! Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphors for selfless sacrifice are excellent. I could feel the blow,, hear the anvil swing, this is a glorious poem with fantastic use of metaphor and imagery! Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 15:49
Sacrifice, take the hit
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret. Most enjoyed this. 🌹
May 4th, 2025 10:56
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret. Most enjoyed this. 🌹
May 4th, 2025 10:56
Sacrifice, take the hit
Friendship said:
Well written,The comparison between a mother’s sacrifice and natural elements illustrates deeper meanings of care and protection.
The poem aims to highlight the importance of recognizing and valuing the sacrifices made by others, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the often-overlooked contributions that sustain communities and relationships.
May 4th, 2025 09:25
Friendship said:
Well written,The comparison between a mother’s sacrifice and natural elements illustrates deeper meanings of care and protection.
The poem aims to highlight the importance of recognizing and valuing the sacrifices made by others, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the often-overlooked contributions that sustain communities and relationships.
May 4th, 2025 09:25
Sacrifice, take the hit
Neilton said:
What a beautifully expressed poem!The rhyme is perfect
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Neilton said:
What a beautifully expressed poem!The rhyme is perfect
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Sacrifice, take the hit
MDStone said:
There are so many ways to protect and preserve. Often it is our own pain that develops us into those roles for others. Becoming bolder, stronger, sharper, selfless… all to try to keep others from accident and pain. A beautiful snapshot of life, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 06:39
MDStone said:
There are so many ways to protect and preserve. Often it is our own pain that develops us into those roles for others. Becoming bolder, stronger, sharper, selfless… all to try to keep others from accident and pain. A beautiful snapshot of life, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 06:39
Sacrifice, take the hit
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate objects suffer for the common good.This could be taken as a metaphor for the human experience.For examples in War time.
May 4th, 2025 05:32
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate objects suffer for the common good.This could be taken as a metaphor for the human experience.For examples in War time.
May 4th, 2025 05:32
Sacrifice, take the hit
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully crafted reflection on selflessness—quiet strength shown through vivid, humble imagery.
May 4th, 2025 03:55
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully crafted reflection on selflessness—quiet strength shown through vivid, humble imagery.
May 4th, 2025 03:55
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words soren, keep kickin\' those butts.
Andy
May 4th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words soren, keep kickin\' those butts.
Andy
May 4th, 2025 01:19
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Friendship said:
Nicely said.Your poem is a hilarious take on life\'s ridiculousness, using humor and colloquial language to show that, sometimes, you have to laugh at the absurdity of it all. It\'s full of over-the-top comparisons and down-to-earth imagery that highlight the quirks of life, the inevitability of aging and death, and the stubbornness of human nature. The subject matter is all about embracing the weirdness of life and finding the humor in our shared human experience. Sometimes a poem\'s mission is to tickle your funny bone while sneakily dropping some knowledge on human nature and life\'s ridiculous moments, all via humor and wacky imagery. Humor\'s like a superhero cape that helps you cope with life\'s absurdities and challenges. This poem is a playful yet poignant romp through life\'s quirks, delivered in a voice and style that\'s all its own.
May 3rd, 2025 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely said.Your poem is a hilarious take on life\'s ridiculousness, using humor and colloquial language to show that, sometimes, you have to laugh at the absurdity of it all. It\'s full of over-the-top comparisons and down-to-earth imagery that highlight the quirks of life, the inevitability of aging and death, and the stubbornness of human nature. The subject matter is all about embracing the weirdness of life and finding the humor in our shared human experience. Sometimes a poem\'s mission is to tickle your funny bone while sneakily dropping some knowledge on human nature and life\'s ridiculous moments, all via humor and wacky imagery. Humor\'s like a superhero cape that helps you cope with life\'s absurdities and challenges. This poem is a playful yet poignant romp through life\'s quirks, delivered in a voice and style that\'s all its own.
May 3rd, 2025 08:50
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today. Thank you so much, my friend! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today. Thank you so much, my friend! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:20
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David Wakeling said:
I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read
May 3rd, 2025 03:29
David Wakeling said:
I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read
May 3rd, 2025 03:29
A lot of wind
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Hands that grasp
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
Acts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
A lot of wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
A lot of wind
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
A lot of wind
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
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