Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Two daughters
Neilton said:
\"Your faults in my blind eyes decay and into dreams melt away\"
What an amazing line ! Your kids are very lucky! Beautiful poem
March 30th, 2025 09:19
Neilton said:
\"Your faults in my blind eyes decay and into dreams melt away\"
What an amazing line ! Your kids are very lucky! Beautiful poem
March 30th, 2025 09:19
Two daughters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Parental love is different, being a parent of two adult daughters, this really resonates. The love is equal and yet different people equal different expressions of that love. This moved me, my friend. A most wonderful write! 🌹👏
March 30th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Parental love is different, being a parent of two adult daughters, this really resonates. The love is equal and yet different people equal different expressions of that love. This moved me, my friend. A most wonderful write! 🌹👏
March 30th, 2025 07:57
Two daughters
MDStone said:
Soren,
Beautiful expression of a father of daughter(s). I have found that the two might even be one but at different times. A parents love and longing for his children’s success and their presence in his life, never wanes.
March 30th, 2025 07:37
MDStone said:
Soren,
Beautiful expression of a father of daughter(s). I have found that the two might even be one but at different times. A parents love and longing for his children’s success and their presence in his life, never wanes.
March 30th, 2025 07:37
Two daughters
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful read of a parents love and dedication to their children, very enjoyable
March 30th, 2025 04:05
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful read of a parents love and dedication to their children, very enjoyable
March 30th, 2025 04:05
Two daughters
arqios said:
That is beautiful to read. One day I shall write about my own brood. 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 03:37
arqios said:
That is beautiful to read. One day I shall write about my own brood. 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 03:37
Lines on the floor
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words come from some amazing places soren.
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words come from some amazing places soren.
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:52
Lines on the floor
NinjaGirl said:
\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing line!
March 29th, 2025 14:34
NinjaGirl said:
\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing line!
March 29th, 2025 14:34
Lines on the floor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A wonderful read, my friend! 🌹
March 29th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A wonderful read, my friend! 🌹
March 29th, 2025 11:21
Lines on the floor
orchidee said:
I make the mess, and KP clears up after me - soot, dust, dirt, etc. lol.
March 29th, 2025 09:38
orchidee said:
I make the mess, and KP clears up after me - soot, dust, dirt, etc. lol.
March 29th, 2025 09:38
Lines on the floor
MDStone said:
Soren,
I love the depth and meaning found here in smoke and ashes. The imagery stirs and connects with the fires of other trees burned into souls ; and like the smell of burning leaves delight the nose, these words delight the soul. Thanks for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 08:41
MDStone said:
Soren,
I love the depth and meaning found here in smoke and ashes. The imagery stirs and connects with the fires of other trees burned into souls ; and like the smell of burning leaves delight the nose, these words delight the soul. Thanks for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 08:41
Lines on the floor
arqios said:
We don’t always think of it that way but books were once forests and reeds and fibres. That just blew my mind away! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 29th, 2025 05:31
arqios said:
We don’t always think of it that way but books were once forests and reeds and fibres. That just blew my mind away! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 29th, 2025 05:31
Lines on the floor
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read while relaxing with me tea, lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read while relaxing with me tea, lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:45
Sweet and bitter
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but the sweetness of cake will always come to us all in time.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but the sweetness of cake will always come to us all in time.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:55
Sweet and bitter
Thomas W Case said:
I li9ke the symbolism and metaphors. Great work.
March 28th, 2025 09:29
Thomas W Case said:
I li9ke the symbolism and metaphors. Great work.
March 28th, 2025 09:29
Sweet and bitter
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An absolute gem. You may laugh but it teansported me to a state of mind when I listen to gothic rock - dark and deep. The contrasts are masterful and they feel absolutely natural - a rare feat.
March 28th, 2025 08:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An absolute gem. You may laugh but it teansported me to a state of mind when I listen to gothic rock - dark and deep. The contrasts are masterful and they feel absolutely natural - a rare feat.
March 28th, 2025 08:10
Sweet and bitter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren, this is a potent little poem that really packs a powerful punch! I love how you explore the theme—how beauty can hide rot, how love and hate blur. Love is just the icing on a much uglier, hate-rich cake. It\'s dark, thoughtful, and layered in such a compact space. Really well done, my friend. 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren, this is a potent little poem that really packs a powerful punch! I love how you explore the theme—how beauty can hide rot, how love and hate blur. Love is just the icing on a much uglier, hate-rich cake. It\'s dark, thoughtful, and layered in such a compact space. Really well done, my friend. 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:46
Never good enough
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Some great lines and perfectly written. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 07:37
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Some great lines and perfectly written. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 07:37
Sweet and bitter
arqios said:
The bit about gold rusting got me quite good as it isn’t physically possible! Good stuff🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:22
arqios said:
The bit about gold rusting got me quite good as it isn’t physically possible! Good stuff🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:22
Sweet and bitter
David Wakeling said:
yes Love is often confused with Lust.This raises some deep questions.Powerful
March 28th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
yes Love is often confused with Lust.This raises some deep questions.Powerful
March 28th, 2025 05:19
Sweet and bitter
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up my experience of marriage very nicely, wonderful write enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:16
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up my experience of marriage very nicely, wonderful write enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:16
Sweet and bitter
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for me to feed KP with. lol.
March 28th, 2025 03:54
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for me to feed KP with. lol.
March 28th, 2025 03:54
Never good enough
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract soren but they can learn to live together in harmony.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract soren but they can learn to live together in harmony.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:22
Poems in the wind
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Old coat
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
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