Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Too warm
Friendship said:
OH, Soren, the extreme heat of summer days, Your poem serves to highlight the discomfort brought on by extreme heat and the human (and animal) response to it, reflecting on the environmental challenges and the reliance on technology, like air conditioning or fans, to cope with such conditions. also can be interpreted as set in the peak of summer, during a particularly sweltering day. Try to stay cool my friend, have a great day,
March 7th, 2025 06:09
Friendship said:
OH, Soren, the extreme heat of summer days, Your poem serves to highlight the discomfort brought on by extreme heat and the human (and animal) response to it, reflecting on the environmental challenges and the reliance on technology, like air conditioning or fans, to cope with such conditions. also can be interpreted as set in the peak of summer, during a particularly sweltering day. Try to stay cool my friend, have a great day,
March 7th, 2025 06:09
Too warm
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Too warm
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Too warm
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
Too warm
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Too warm
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
Blinded by the light
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Truth
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem delves into the subjective nature of art appreciation, highlighting the diverse factors that shape individual perceptions and evaluations of a work of art. It underscores that art interpretation is profoundly personal, influenced by unique experiences, emotions, and perspectives, thereby prompting reflection on the essence of art and the pivotal role of personal experiences, societal influences, and emotional states in art perception and valuation. It invites readers to examine their own emotions and biases when engaging with art, ultimately implying that the true value of art resides in individual interpretation.
March 6th, 2025 20:29
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem delves into the subjective nature of art appreciation, highlighting the diverse factors that shape individual perceptions and evaluations of a work of art. It underscores that art interpretation is profoundly personal, influenced by unique experiences, emotions, and perspectives, thereby prompting reflection on the essence of art and the pivotal role of personal experiences, societal influences, and emotional states in art perception and valuation. It invites readers to examine their own emotions and biases when engaging with art, ultimately implying that the true value of art resides in individual interpretation.
March 6th, 2025 20:29
Never enough
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,Your poem discusses the various attributes people might look for in romantic or platonic relationships, such as looks, trust, communication, and kindness. It ultimately encourages readers to appreciate what they have rather than seeking an unattainable ideal.
March 6th, 2025 20:15
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,Your poem discusses the various attributes people might look for in romantic or platonic relationships, such as looks, trust, communication, and kindness. It ultimately encourages readers to appreciate what they have rather than seeking an unattainable ideal.
March 6th, 2025 20:15
I alone
Friendship said:
Very creative ,Soren,Your poem draws on figures from biblical stories who experienced abandonment, struggle, and ultimately survival, reflecting on the speaker\'s own feelings of being cast aside while also hinting at the power of renewal and hope. Your line breaks serve to create pauses that emphasize the connection between the words and their meanings, allowing the reader to absorb the weight of each figure mentioned. You seem to serve to articulate the speaker\'s feelings of loneliness and survival while exploring the possibility of redemption and rebirth through the lens of shared human and biblical experiences
March 6th, 2025 20:10
Friendship said:
Very creative ,Soren,Your poem draws on figures from biblical stories who experienced abandonment, struggle, and ultimately survival, reflecting on the speaker\'s own feelings of being cast aside while also hinting at the power of renewal and hope. Your line breaks serve to create pauses that emphasize the connection between the words and their meanings, allowing the reader to absorb the weight of each figure mentioned. You seem to serve to articulate the speaker\'s feelings of loneliness and survival while exploring the possibility of redemption and rebirth through the lens of shared human and biblical experiences
March 6th, 2025 20:10
Words and questions
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem explores the weight of unspoken words and unasked questions, suggesting that some truths can haunt us and influence our emotional state long after they are experienced. It implies that confronting painful memories can lead to suffering and despair. and the lasting effects of emotional turmoil, encouraging readers to reflect on their own experiences with unspoken words and unresolved issues.
March 6th, 2025 14:22
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem explores the weight of unspoken words and unasked questions, suggesting that some truths can haunt us and influence our emotional state long after they are experienced. It implies that confronting painful memories can lead to suffering and despair. and the lasting effects of emotional turmoil, encouraging readers to reflect on their own experiences with unspoken words and unresolved issues.
March 6th, 2025 14:22
Panic
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
Blinded by the light
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
Blinded by the light
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
Blinded by the light
Friendship said:
Nicely done, Soren, Your poem explores the paradoxes and contradictions inherent in human perception and belief. It suggests that even when we think we are on solid ground, proper security is elusive, and our understanding of truth and reality can be distorted. It seems to seek to provoke thought about the nature of truth and the complexities of human understanding, encouraging readers to question their own perceptions and beliefs. It serves as a reflection on the challenges of finding clarity in a world filled with contradictions.
March 6th, 2025 06:39
Friendship said:
Nicely done, Soren, Your poem explores the paradoxes and contradictions inherent in human perception and belief. It suggests that even when we think we are on solid ground, proper security is elusive, and our understanding of truth and reality can be distorted. It seems to seek to provoke thought about the nature of truth and the complexities of human understanding, encouraging readers to question their own perceptions and beliefs. It serves as a reflection on the challenges of finding clarity in a world filled with contradictions.
March 6th, 2025 06:39
Blinded by the light
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Blinded by the light
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
Blinded by the light
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Blinded by the light
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
Blinded by the light
arqios said:
Could be sleight of hand, we’re too engrossed at what’s presented to notice the sidelines 🙏🏻🕊
March 6th, 2025 02:48
arqios said:
Could be sleight of hand, we’re too engrossed at what’s presented to notice the sidelines 🙏🏻🕊
March 6th, 2025 02:48
Men today, gods tomorrow
Friendship said:
this was brilliant and well-crafted, Soren, Your presents a vast tapestry of historical, cultural, and intellectual figures, spanning philosophers and scientists to artists and political leaders. The central idea appears to be a celebration of human achievement and diversity, demonstrating the interconnectedness of various disciplines and ideologies throughout history. By juxtaposing names from disparate eras, cultures, and fields, the poem highlights the shared legacy of human thought and creativity, suggesting that the contributions of these individuals form a collective human narrative.
March 5th, 2025 20:21
Friendship said:
this was brilliant and well-crafted, Soren, Your presents a vast tapestry of historical, cultural, and intellectual figures, spanning philosophers and scientists to artists and political leaders. The central idea appears to be a celebration of human achievement and diversity, demonstrating the interconnectedness of various disciplines and ideologies throughout history. By juxtaposing names from disparate eras, cultures, and fields, the poem highlights the shared legacy of human thought and creativity, suggesting that the contributions of these individuals form a collective human narrative.
March 5th, 2025 20:21
The Night
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores the interplay between darkness and light, fear and peace, and the nature of existence beyond the physical realm. It suggests that while suffering and challenges are inevitable during the day, there is solace and serenity to be found in darkness and the unknown. The poem delves into themes of mortality, transcendence, and the mystical experiences that lie beyond the grasp of human understanding. It also serves as a meditation on the nature of existence, encouraging a reconciliation with fear and an embrace of the unknown.
March 5th, 2025 19:22
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores the interplay between darkness and light, fear and peace, and the nature of existence beyond the physical realm. It suggests that while suffering and challenges are inevitable during the day, there is solace and serenity to be found in darkness and the unknown. The poem delves into themes of mortality, transcendence, and the mystical experiences that lie beyond the grasp of human understanding. It also serves as a meditation on the nature of existence, encouraging a reconciliation with fear and an embrace of the unknown.
March 5th, 2025 19:22
No sugar
Friendship said:
an iteresting concept,Soren,Your poem encapsulates a critical perspective on the relationship between technology and reality, inviting the reader to consider the implications of living in a world where the strings of manipulation are not easily seen.
March 5th, 2025 19:14
Friendship said:
an iteresting concept,Soren,Your poem encapsulates a critical perspective on the relationship between technology and reality, inviting the reader to consider the implications of living in a world where the strings of manipulation are not easily seen.
March 5th, 2025 19:14
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