Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ember
arqios said:
Life’s yolk, YES! Our lot is quite a think to deal with from day to day. Just this morning a breakfast egg flew off the “egg perch” in the fridge door, the white splattered against the kitchen counter but the yolk remained whole from the glancing impact; the yolk of the yolk or was that yoke?
October 27th, 2024 05:08
arqios said:
Life’s yolk, YES! Our lot is quite a think to deal with from day to day. Just this morning a breakfast egg flew off the “egg perch” in the fridge door, the white splattered against the kitchen counter but the yolk remained whole from the glancing impact; the yolk of the yolk or was that yoke?
October 27th, 2024 05:08
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have almost made it a ritual for me to read one of your poems after writing a couple. Each read tells me the long path I would need to traverse before becoming better. This time also it was no different. Absolutely loved it.
October 27th, 2024 03:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have almost made it a ritual for me to read one of your poems after writing a couple. Each read tells me the long path I would need to traverse before becoming better. This time also it was no different. Absolutely loved it.
October 27th, 2024 03:30
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest that you neck a trug of tomatoes on a daily basis & when not in season, tinned ones will do the job just as well your Majesty 🍅👍
October 27th, 2024 02:31
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest that you neck a trug of tomatoes on a daily basis & when not in season, tinned ones will do the job just as well your Majesty 🍅👍
October 27th, 2024 02:31
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Goldfinch60 said:
Pee away dear soren, pee away. LOL
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Pee away dear soren, pee away. LOL
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:28
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Funny stuff.
October 26th, 2024 23:43
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Funny stuff.
October 26th, 2024 23:43
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
David Wakeling said:
Certainly a poet having fun.
October 26th, 2024 15:35
David Wakeling said:
Certainly a poet having fun.
October 26th, 2024 15:35
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Thad Wilk said:
👍 👍
Hilarious nursery rhyme
I gotta say!!💯👌
2nd stanza just blew
me away!! 🤣🤣
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 26th, 2024 14:43
Thad Wilk said:
👍 👍
Hilarious nursery rhyme
I gotta say!!💯👌
2nd stanza just blew
me away!! 🤣🤣
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 26th, 2024 14:43
What I left behind
Parisab said:
Hidden messages from nature, for the wise to hear …
October 26th, 2024 10:17
Parisab said:
Hidden messages from nature, for the wise to hear …
October 26th, 2024 10:17
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
arqios said:
That about sums it up in every castle 🏰 to which the king does reign.
October 26th, 2024 06:06
arqios said:
That about sums it up in every castle 🏰 to which the king does reign.
October 26th, 2024 06:06
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Teddy.15 said:
Most amusing dear King 🤣
October 26th, 2024 05:00
Teddy.15 said:
Most amusing dear King 🤣
October 26th, 2024 05:00
Night\'s soliloquy
Accidental Poet said:
Surely a work of poetic art for all to enjoy. Well penned soren. 😉👍
October 26th, 2024 03:20
Accidental Poet said:
Surely a work of poetic art for all to enjoy. Well penned soren. 😉👍
October 26th, 2024 03:20
Night\'s soliloquy
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren reborn to a wonderful future.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren reborn to a wonderful future.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:05
Night\'s soliloquy
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A wonderful treat to
read my friend!! 👍💯
Lovely rhyme, flow
and blend!! 👌
Great word choices
I must say!
Thanks for sharing
with us today!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 25th, 2024 21:55
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A wonderful treat to
read my friend!! 👍💯
Lovely rhyme, flow
and blend!! 👌
Great word choices
I must say!
Thanks for sharing
with us today!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 25th, 2024 21:55
Night\'s soliloquy
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. Night is a double-edged sword. It is a safe refuge but we have to wake soon.I love the ancient references. I like the rhyme.Well done
October 25th, 2024 19:44
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. Night is a double-edged sword. It is a safe refuge but we have to wake soon.I love the ancient references. I like the rhyme.Well done
October 25th, 2024 19:44
Night\'s soliloquy
Neville said:
Incredibly intoxicating sir sorenbarrett .. like sipping from a soporific chalice through a straw .. but even more dreamy .. Neville
October 25th, 2024 05:56
Neville said:
Incredibly intoxicating sir sorenbarrett .. like sipping from a soporific chalice through a straw .. but even more dreamy .. Neville
October 25th, 2024 05:56
Church, through the eyes of a child
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Soren. A fine write.
October 25th, 2024 04:49
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Soren. A fine write.
October 25th, 2024 04:49
Night\'s soliloquy
Teddy.15 said:
I could feel a bit of shakespeare in this and what with your wonderful imagery well, you brought it all to life. Going back in dreams must be a real treat. 🌹
October 25th, 2024 04:31
Teddy.15 said:
I could feel a bit of shakespeare in this and what with your wonderful imagery well, you brought it all to life. Going back in dreams must be a real treat. 🌹
October 25th, 2024 04:31
Church, through the eyes of a child
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:09
Running late
Thad Wilk said:
😆 Haaahahahaaa!
A lucky day for you indeed! 😊
A real hoot, thanks for the read!!! 🤣
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 24th, 2024 19:14
Thad Wilk said:
😆 Haaahahahaaa!
A lucky day for you indeed! 😊
A real hoot, thanks for the read!!! 🤣
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 24th, 2024 19:14
Time flows backward
River123 said:
A superb use of science and emotion perfectly expressed. Thanks for writing it 👍👍
October 24th, 2024 15:40
River123 said:
A superb use of science and emotion perfectly expressed. Thanks for writing it 👍👍
October 24th, 2024 15:40
Church, through the eyes of a child
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Excellent work.
October 24th, 2024 14:53
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Excellent work.
October 24th, 2024 14:53
Church, through the eyes of a child
Neville said:
I imagine this is pretty much exactly as it is and was and will be for so many children .. I know it was for me .. although the old lady was called Mrs. Bull .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 12:41
Neville said:
I imagine this is pretty much exactly as it is and was and will be for so many children .. I know it was for me .. although the old lady was called Mrs. Bull .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 12:41
Trick or treat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Human cruelty on display. Disgusting every time. Thank you so much for writing this! It needs to be heard! Tragic this happened, but beautiful you were there to witness it and raise awareness through art. I often say, beware what you say or how you act, because you never know when you\'ll show up in a poem! LOL! A most excellent, heart-crushing, write. Thank you for sharing!
October 24th, 2024 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Human cruelty on display. Disgusting every time. Thank you so much for writing this! It needs to be heard! Tragic this happened, but beautiful you were there to witness it and raise awareness through art. I often say, beware what you say or how you act, because you never know when you\'ll show up in a poem! LOL! A most excellent, heart-crushing, write. Thank you for sharing!
October 24th, 2024 12:39
Church, through the eyes of a child
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday School gone rong, I kid you not - good laugh which did bring back a memory. Many thanks, Soren.
October 24th, 2024 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday School gone rong, I kid you not - good laugh which did bring back a memory. Many thanks, Soren.
October 24th, 2024 08:32
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