Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Lies of romance
Kevin Hulme said:
I always remember Homer Simpson dreaming of the Land of Chocolate. Nice one .
April 21st, 2025 20:02
Kevin Hulme said:
I always remember Homer Simpson dreaming of the Land of Chocolate. Nice one .
April 21st, 2025 20:02
Foggy morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one brings you there in terms of the imagery, and it is a wonderful metaphor for life, really? How many of us have opportunities to move forward yet are somehow hindered by the fog of yesterday as well as \"what might be\". Stepping out of the fog then, for me, is living in the moment...stepping away from clinging to our past and not over-stressing the future. Powerful write, my friend. Love this for sure. A fave. 🌹👏
April 21st, 2025 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one brings you there in terms of the imagery, and it is a wonderful metaphor for life, really? How many of us have opportunities to move forward yet are somehow hindered by the fog of yesterday as well as \"what might be\". Stepping out of the fog then, for me, is living in the moment...stepping away from clinging to our past and not over-stressing the future. Powerful write, my friend. Love this for sure. A fave. 🌹👏
April 21st, 2025 13:24
Thoughts
maydanae said:
I very much relate to this one. Very nicely said as it captures the desperate and frantic nature of the notorious \"search\" for those little trinkets we always seem to misplace
April 21st, 2025 11:01
maydanae said:
I very much relate to this one. Very nicely said as it captures the desperate and frantic nature of the notorious \"search\" for those little trinkets we always seem to misplace
April 21st, 2025 11:01
Foggy morning
Teddy.15 said:
The physical and mental state are incredibly important in this poem, so too in life. Getting out of bed with good thoughts sounds the easiest thing to do in the world yet for many it has it\'s challenges 🌹 superb imagery and emotions. 💜
April 21st, 2025 07:45
Teddy.15 said:
The physical and mental state are incredibly important in this poem, so too in life. Getting out of bed with good thoughts sounds the easiest thing to do in the world yet for many it has it\'s challenges 🌹 superb imagery and emotions. 💜
April 21st, 2025 07:45
Foggy morning
Tony Grannell said:
A new man, as it were and into a new dawn. This is music to the ears and worth getting up early for. You have a beautiful way with words, so natural and down to earth, and yet composed with a vein of poetry throughout; a most admirable quality. A delight to read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 21st, 2025 05:18
Tony Grannell said:
A new man, as it were and into a new dawn. This is music to the ears and worth getting up early for. You have a beautiful way with words, so natural and down to earth, and yet composed with a vein of poetry throughout; a most admirable quality. A delight to read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 21st, 2025 05:18
Foggy morning
David Wakeling said:
Having the rhyme in the middle gives the work an amazing musical cadence. This would be easy to turn into a song. Sadly the topic is alittle dar\'I see someone recovering from depression or tiredness.Anyway an amazing poem.
April 21st, 2025 05:10
David Wakeling said:
Having the rhyme in the middle gives the work an amazing musical cadence. This would be easy to turn into a song. Sadly the topic is alittle dar\'I see someone recovering from depression or tiredness.Anyway an amazing poem.
April 21st, 2025 05:10
Thoughts
teardrop said:
Been there before. Put them in the ice box once..took days to find. A very enjoyable read though was reading your frustrations I\'m sure most have experienced at one time or another. Yet, you penned it so well.
April 21st, 2025 04:57
teardrop said:
Been there before. Put them in the ice box once..took days to find. A very enjoyable read though was reading your frustrations I\'m sure most have experienced at one time or another. Yet, you penned it so well.
April 21st, 2025 04:57
Foggy morning
teardrop said:
Waking up sucks sometimes especially when in a good dream. You penned a morning wake up so vividly real! I truly enjoyed this read.. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:40
teardrop said:
Waking up sucks sometimes especially when in a good dream. You penned a morning wake up so vividly real! I truly enjoyed this read.. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:40
Lies of romance
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our hearts open soren.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our hearts open soren.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:55
Lies of romance
rrodriguez said:
Your message is one to decipher. Lies can become truths if told often enough. This is a philosophical take on life—history repeats itself, and people continue to be fooled by the demagoguery of crooked leaders. I hope I understood the message correctly. Thank you for sharing.
April 20th, 2025 18:14
rrodriguez said:
Your message is one to decipher. Lies can become truths if told often enough. This is a philosophical take on life—history repeats itself, and people continue to be fooled by the demagoguery of crooked leaders. I hope I understood the message correctly. Thank you for sharing.
April 20th, 2025 18:14
Lies of romance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, intuition is a much needed ingredient, like rich, Belgian chocolate…sadly far too many hearts are not guided by it. Brilliant metaphor, my friend.
April 20th, 2025 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, intuition is a much needed ingredient, like rich, Belgian chocolate…sadly far too many hearts are not guided by it. Brilliant metaphor, my friend.
April 20th, 2025 15:04
Blinded by the light
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
Tough crowd, great poem,
\'Nuff light—you showed \'em.
Black bent, guide all \'em,
Light dark—a poem owe \'em.
Poem paid, truth wrote \'em,
Echo heard, headed off then—
Unless I\'m off, one ahead of \'em.
Hard missleed—I miss often;
If indeed I\'m off by lots, them—
Please forgive my playful poem,
Just here to say: the image you evoked
Through poem echoes this comment window.
April 20th, 2025 11:58
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
Tough crowd, great poem,
\'Nuff light—you showed \'em.
Black bent, guide all \'em,
Light dark—a poem owe \'em.
Poem paid, truth wrote \'em,
Echo heard, headed off then—
Unless I\'m off, one ahead of \'em.
Hard missleed—I miss often;
If indeed I\'m off by lots, them—
Please forgive my playful poem,
Just here to say: the image you evoked
Through poem echoes this comment window.
April 20th, 2025 11:58
Lies of romance
Friendship said:
The innocence of childhood and the fantasy of the Easter bunny are concepts we are taught as children. Your poem explodes with imagination in the harsh reality of life, providing the comfort of escape rooted in dreams and fantasies. It explores the complexities of perception, truth, and the power of imagination, contrasting the harsh realities of life with the soothing solace found in dreams and fantasies. The \"blind heart\" is a metaphor for emotional unawareness or denial. \"Tongue paints alibis\" suggests the act of creating false narratives. You seem to explore the contrast between truth and deception, the power of imagination, and childhood innocence. While truth may be fleeting, lies can endure, emphasizing the importance of dreams and intuition in navigating life\'s complexities.
April 20th, 2025 08:11
Friendship said:
The innocence of childhood and the fantasy of the Easter bunny are concepts we are taught as children. Your poem explodes with imagination in the harsh reality of life, providing the comfort of escape rooted in dreams and fantasies. It explores the complexities of perception, truth, and the power of imagination, contrasting the harsh realities of life with the soothing solace found in dreams and fantasies. The \"blind heart\" is a metaphor for emotional unawareness or denial. \"Tongue paints alibis\" suggests the act of creating false narratives. You seem to explore the contrast between truth and deception, the power of imagination, and childhood innocence. While truth may be fleeting, lies can endure, emphasizing the importance of dreams and intuition in navigating life\'s complexities.
April 20th, 2025 08:11
Redeemer pains through window panes
NafisaSB said:
wonderfully worded - enjoyed reading it. used to read the classics a lot in my youth, then passed on to fiction - now striving to find time to read as wapp and fb messages flow in like a flood daily
April 20th, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
wonderfully worded - enjoyed reading it. used to read the classics a lot in my youth, then passed on to fiction - now striving to find time to read as wapp and fb messages flow in like a flood daily
April 20th, 2025 06:09
Lies of romance
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautifully written.Very well constructed.Enjoyable read
April 20th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautifully written.Very well constructed.Enjoyable read
April 20th, 2025 05:13
Not what it seems
Goldfinch60 said:
Wondefrful words showing the colour that each of them can present to us soren.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wondefrful words showing the colour that each of them can present to us soren.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:48
You will argue
Parisab said:
Coming from your heart, it will land
on the reader’s mind
-it’s tricky to talk about the truth by challenging others to think-your poems are heart felt , so it must do the trick -best on your published book -I’m looking forward to it …
April 19th, 2025 13:58
Parisab said:
Coming from your heart, it will land
on the reader’s mind
-it’s tricky to talk about the truth by challenging others to think-your poems are heart felt , so it must do the trick -best on your published book -I’m looking forward to it …
April 19th, 2025 13:58
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