Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Peace on earth, good will
Parisab said:

Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving messages be received …

December 13th, 2024 15:46

Peace on earth, good will
Neville said:



it is a funny old world isn\'t it .. sad too much of the time .. I doubt that many of those who talk the talk really know what they are talking about or how their actions & inactions impact on others and indeed upon the world in general both directly & indirectly .. and I really do have a thing about trees πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 13th, 2024 10:52

Peace on earth, good will
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 13th, 2024 09:04

Peace on earth, good will
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem that cuts the BS and gets straight to the truth. It\'s good will to \"men\"...but how can there be good will for humans if we fail to show good will to the earth? Provocative and true write! Well done, friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 13th, 2024 08:18

Peace on earth, good will
Teddy.15 said:

I will definitely take a glass of this and say cheers πŸ₯‚ 🌹 beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹

December 13th, 2024 05:53

Peace on earth, good will
orchidee said:

Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.

December 13th, 2024 03:23

Undeserving
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.

Andy

December 13th, 2024 02:16

Once there was a time
rengoku said:

beautifully composed
i sounds like children

December 13th, 2024 00:15

Little bird
rengoku said:

ever so beautiful !!!!!!

December 13th, 2024 00:12

Jewel discarded
rengoku said:

amazing

December 13th, 2024 00:11

Undeserving
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 12th, 2024 13:52

Undeserving
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Soren. A fine write.

December 12th, 2024 09:45

Words of the prophets
vicecream said:

Loooove this one

December 12th, 2024 09:35

Undeserving
vicecream said:

I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them

December 12th, 2024 09:32

Undeserving
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 12th, 2024 07:07

Undeserving
John Prophet said:

Nice work! Enjoyed…

December 12th, 2024 06:38

Undeserving
Caring dove said:

Interesting writing

December 12th, 2024 04:22

Undeserving
Teddy.15 said:

What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹

December 12th, 2024 04:11

Undeserving
Neville said:



Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville πŸ‘

December 12th, 2024 04:10

Undeserving
David Wakeling said:

This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.

December 12th, 2024 03:48

Undeserving
arqios said:

For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.



December 12th, 2024 03:47

Mist
arqios said:

I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!

December 12th, 2024 02:45

Mist
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful imagery soren.

Andy

December 12th, 2024 02:20

Mist
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery. Powerful words.

December 11th, 2024 22:04

Mist
Thad Wilk said:

Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! πŸŒ„ πŸŒ…
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 11th, 2024 21:38

Words of the prophets
RSM0812 said:

Another great write.

December 11th, 2024 09:51

Mist
Neville said:



exquisite ink almost blindingly so .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 11th, 2024 09:30

Mist
Cassie58 said:

Stunning imagery of the sun breaking through the mist at dawn. Have seen that so many times on the river and it really is ghostly in its appearance. A word painting Soren. Just wonderful.

December 11th, 2024 07:57

The perfect poem
NafisaSB said:

TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT\'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY



December 11th, 2024 06:17

Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Even though it is dark and no doubt dreary by me (we in the Northeast US need the rain)…you helped me see the sunrise and got me hungry for breakfast at the same time! Love that description of the sun rays! Well done, Soren!. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 11th, 2024 06:14



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