Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Bearded sonnet
Neville said:
Made me chuckle so ya did .. Here one just for thee sir ..
Shall I grow a beard for thee
A little Shakespeare one perchance
Or if you would I rather
I will sport a Che Guevara
If tho the thought has got ya thinkin
What about an old Abe Lincoln
Just a small one on my chin
Three hairs no more like Hoe Chi Min
Hans Lanseth’s beard was something else
He couldn’t fit it in his house
A Da Vince or Van Dyke maybe
More attractive tho just wait and see ..
August 24th, 2025 08:31
Neville said:
Made me chuckle so ya did .. Here one just for thee sir ..
Shall I grow a beard for thee
A little Shakespeare one perchance
Or if you would I rather
I will sport a Che Guevara
If tho the thought has got ya thinkin
What about an old Abe Lincoln
Just a small one on my chin
Three hairs no more like Hoe Chi Min
Hans Lanseth’s beard was something else
He couldn’t fit it in his house
A Da Vince or Van Dyke maybe
More attractive tho just wait and see ..
August 24th, 2025 08:31
Bearded sonnet
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Bearded Sonnet\" is a powerful exploration of the dynamic relationship between personal identity, societal expectations, and the passage of time, as embodied by the poet\'s beard. It serves as a testament to the transformative power of life experiences, struggles, and individuality, while fearlessly confronting societal norms that often seek to dictate personal appearance. Which explores the growth of the poet\'s beard over the course of a year, using it as a metaphor for the accumulation of memories, emotions, and life experiences. It celebrates themes of pride in one\'s identity, the tension between personal expression and societal pressure, and the resilience that comes from embracing one\'s unique journey. Overall serves as a commentary on the pressure to conform to societal norms regarding appearance and the importance of embracing one’s individuality and life experiences, as embodied by the beard. It challenges the notion of cutting away parts of oneself to fit in, advocating for pride in one’s history and identity.
August 24th, 2025 08:27
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Bearded Sonnet\" is a powerful exploration of the dynamic relationship between personal identity, societal expectations, and the passage of time, as embodied by the poet\'s beard. It serves as a testament to the transformative power of life experiences, struggles, and individuality, while fearlessly confronting societal norms that often seek to dictate personal appearance. Which explores the growth of the poet\'s beard over the course of a year, using it as a metaphor for the accumulation of memories, emotions, and life experiences. It celebrates themes of pride in one\'s identity, the tension between personal expression and societal pressure, and the resilience that comes from embracing one\'s unique journey. Overall serves as a commentary on the pressure to conform to societal norms regarding appearance and the importance of embracing one’s individuality and life experiences, as embodied by the beard. It challenges the notion of cutting away parts of oneself to fit in, advocating for pride in one’s history and identity.
August 24th, 2025 08:27
Bearded sonnet
Jerry Reynolds said:
God read, sorenbarrett. I grew a full beard once. My hair grows so haphazardly. Grows in some places and not in others: darts here and there, and it has a total mind of its own.
August 24th, 2025 08:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
God read, sorenbarrett. I grew a full beard once. My hair grows so haphazardly. Grows in some places and not in others: darts here and there, and it has a total mind of its own.
August 24th, 2025 08:17
Bearded sonnet
Demar Desu said:
I was telling my wife yesterday how I wanted to trim my beard down. Now reading this poem I would rather grow it out. Thanks for the inspiration
August 24th, 2025 03:51
Demar Desu said:
I was telling my wife yesterday how I wanted to trim my beard down. Now reading this poem I would rather grow it out. Thanks for the inspiration
August 24th, 2025 03:51
Bearded sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
I love this! My husband has a beard that\'s going white-grey it\'s beautiful. How very true you facial hair is part of you my friend all that you have weathered and all that you will weather. Such a beautiful sonnet, and absolutely not I would never ever shave father Christmas\'s beard it simply would be him. 💜
August 24th, 2025 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
I love this! My husband has a beard that\'s going white-grey it\'s beautiful. How very true you facial hair is part of you my friend all that you have weathered and all that you will weather. Such a beautiful sonnet, and absolutely not I would never ever shave father Christmas\'s beard it simply would be him. 💜
August 24th, 2025 03:47
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink my friend .. absolutely .. and not a drop of it wasted .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 03:10
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink my friend .. absolutely .. and not a drop of it wasted .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 03:10
Traps
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
August 24th, 2025 01:43
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
August 24th, 2025 01:43
Wind
NinjaGirl said:
Is the wind satan\'s rage or God\'s righteous anger? I really like this poem a lot.
August 24th, 2025 01:42
NinjaGirl said:
Is the wind satan\'s rage or God\'s righteous anger? I really like this poem a lot.
August 24th, 2025 01:42
Seasons
NinjaGirl said:
I love living in a place where I can experience all four seasons! It\'s really such a joy.
August 24th, 2025 01:41
NinjaGirl said:
I love living in a place where I can experience all four seasons! It\'s really such a joy.
August 24th, 2025 01:41
Mirrored pool of Hermes
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know how to explain that I really like it...so there it is.
August 24th, 2025 01:29
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know how to explain that I really like it...so there it is.
August 24th, 2025 01:29
Mirrored pool of Hermes
arqios said:
This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language liquefying into streams that both reveal and distort. What’s upright bends in the reflection, truth and falsehood trading places, while the delicate drag of a quill ferries the remnants of thought into the current, carrying them toward some unseen confluence.
August 23rd, 2025 18:06
arqios said:
This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language liquefying into streams that both reveal and distort. What’s upright bends in the reflection, truth and falsehood trading places, while the delicate drag of a quill ferries the remnants of thought into the current, carrying them toward some unseen confluence.
August 23rd, 2025 18:06
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Keeter C said:
I guess in the end it’s all just words? Nice.
August 23rd, 2025 16:52
Keeter C said:
I guess in the end it’s all just words? Nice.
August 23rd, 2025 16:52
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Wind
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Traps
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Traps
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
What is greatness
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I 👍💯
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I 👍💯
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Traps
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
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