Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Keyara S Trotman said:

Beautiful write, dearest SorenπŸ₯‚, spectacles at your risk. Wonderful words used. Put down on paper, either way greatly expressedπŸ’―

November 9th, 2025 11:23

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Jerry Reynolds said:

This is so much fun, Sorenbarrett. So much fun.

November 9th, 2025 09:20

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Neville said:



That\'s one Hot Potato you just posted here squire .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

November 9th, 2025 08:23

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Paul Bell said:

What is rap all about, said the plumber doing the tap tap tap.
Great dance through life with some innuendo thrown in for effect.
The first dance I learned as a kid was the military two-step, scared me for life.


November 9th, 2025 07:13

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arqios said:

Learnt a lot of these dances in primary school. Those were fun and innocent days. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ•Ί

November 9th, 2025 06:27

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OA Poetry said:

Makes me want to dance, a nice writeπŸ™

November 9th, 2025 03:54

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Teddy.15 said:

lol very cool dear sorrenbarret. 😎 I\'d do the tango with you Sir, and the cha cha 🀣 🌹

November 9th, 2025 03:20

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. KP\'s dancing but it\'s melts her botox. lol.

November 9th, 2025 03:10

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Goldfinch60 said:

Trust seems to be a very rare thing in thios day and age soren.

Andy

November 9th, 2025 01:59

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Dan Williams said:

Almost mysterious, still speaks volumes. Nice.

November 9th, 2025 00:53

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RSM0812 said:



November 8th, 2025 20:01

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RSM0812 said:

Very good imagery. The ying yang of a rose. Nicely written and delivered.

November 8th, 2025 20:01

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 8th, 2025 13:51

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is dark alchemy...love, hunger, and guilt all mirrored in rose and dove. Brutal, honest, and beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 8th, 2025 13:05

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Lorenz said:

Prisoner of love ? what a dreadful fate !

November 8th, 2025 11:32

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Wow, sorenbarrett, Powerful poem.

November 8th, 2025 09:09

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arqios said:

Such a deep dive in its succinctness! Outward gestures of love that in retrospect could have been destructive and may have unforeseen consequences. Powerful stuff. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

November 8th, 2025 07:26

Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Paul Bell said:

Love should come with a health warning.
Roses to begin with, but then the thorns make their appearance.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Never bought that mind you.

November 8th, 2025 06:49

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FrasMac said:



November 8th, 2025 02:46

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FrasMac said:

Yes! So much time spent in little screens when there is so much majesty around us to inspire!

November 8th, 2025 02:46

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Goldfinch60 said:

We all have dreams soren and some of them are very believable.

Andy

November 8th, 2025 02:41

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Kevin Hulme said:

A fine Poem on Dreams and the Waking day. And the difference there-of .

November 7th, 2025 19:57

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RefugeInRain said:

I\'m a little late to this one, but I absolutely adore it. Great write.

November 7th, 2025 13:36

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Bella Shepard said:

To dream well is a gift, especially when in the last flicker it can soften the harsh reality that it allows us to escape from. This poem with its beautiful rhyme and cadence begs to be read aloud as it rolls so smoothly off the tongue. Love it!

November 7th, 2025 13:26

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Wow, Sorenbarrett. That\'s powerful.

November 7th, 2025 08:51

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow. I get this and this certainly is speaking to me right now, my friend. Timely for me. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 7th, 2025 08:39

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Demar Desu said:

Good morning (haven’t slept)

November 7th, 2025 07:02

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arqios said:

Wow, it felt like the moment of leaving behind the illusions of dreams and confronting reality. The shimmering beauty of fantasy fades, replaced by the tarnished, rusted surface of the waking world. It’s about the bittersweet shift from comforting illusions to the harsher truths of everyday life. Fantastic moment in poetry. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

November 7th, 2025 06:07

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Paul Bell said:

Why do people disturb you when you\'re having a good dream?
Why are all my nightmares about the taxman.

November 7th, 2025 04:41

Awakening
Ethan Mikel StAmour said:

Lovely writing I feel calm and entranced just reading it

November 7th, 2025 03:39



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