Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
What schools don\'t teach
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
And there was light
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the beginning of our World.
Sad what we have done to a lot of it.
Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2025 13:39
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the beginning of our World.
Sad what we have done to a lot of it.
Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2025 13:39
Crickets and frogs
Allie561 said:
The imagery in this poem not only painted a picture, but made it feel like oneself was immersed. It’s a very powerful poem yet grounded peacefully. Nice work.
December 24th, 2025 13:13
Allie561 said:
The imagery in this poem not only painted a picture, but made it feel like oneself was immersed. It’s a very powerful poem yet grounded peacefully. Nice work.
December 24th, 2025 13:13
And there was light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a thoughtful meditation on origins, belief, and the human need to name power. You honor the mystery of creation while questioning what we do with that mystery once we touch it. That balance gives the poem its depth. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a thoughtful meditation on origins, belief, and the human need to name power. You honor the mystery of creation while questioning what we do with that mystery once we touch it. That balance gives the poem its depth. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:14
And there was light
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the creation of light and life, emphasizing the sun as a central figure in the genesis of existence. It reflects on humanity\'s relationship with the divine and the natural world, portraying the sun as both a source of life and a deity worshipped by primitive minds.
December 24th, 2025 07:01
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the creation of light and life, emphasizing the sun as a central figure in the genesis of existence. It reflects on humanity\'s relationship with the divine and the natural world, portraying the sun as both a source of life and a deity worshipped by primitive minds.
December 24th, 2025 07:01
And there was light
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, in Charles Wesley\'s hymn \'Hark, the herald angels sing\' a possibly confusing line in some versions is: \'Hail, the Sun of Righteousness\'. Yet it is also in some Bible versions as \'Sun\' (Malachi 4 v.2 in the Old Testament). Then a cross-reference relates it to Luke 1 v.78 - covered in my poem for today. Of course, it doesn\'t mean we should worship the sun.
And - makes sense to create light first - so God could see what he was doing maybe?!
December 24th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yes, in Charles Wesley\'s hymn \'Hark, the herald angels sing\' a possibly confusing line in some versions is: \'Hail, the Sun of Righteousness\'. Yet it is also in some Bible versions as \'Sun\' (Malachi 4 v.2 in the Old Testament). Then a cross-reference relates it to Luke 1 v.78 - covered in my poem for today. Of course, it doesn\'t mean we should worship the sun.
And - makes sense to create light first - so God could see what he was doing maybe?!
December 24th, 2025 03:28
Merry Trumpmess
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren and so very true the way the world is nowadays.
Andy
December 24th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren and so very true the way the world is nowadays.
Andy
December 24th, 2025 02:43
Merry Trumpmess
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This sharp satire masterfully wields holiday themes to critique policy and paranoia. The blend of absurdity and pointed allegory is brilliantly effective. A darkly merry and memorable piece.
December 23rd, 2025 14:34
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This sharp satire masterfully wields holiday themes to critique policy and paranoia. The blend of absurdity and pointed allegory is brilliantly effective. A darkly merry and memorable piece.
December 23rd, 2025 14:34
Merry Trumpmess
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece cuts because it refuses subtlety. The rhymes move fast, the images escalate, and the satire keeps tightening its grip. It’s absurd, yes (so is where we are currently)…but it’s also uncomfortably recognizable. A biting, fearless holiday revolt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece cuts because it refuses subtlety. The rhymes move fast, the images escalate, and the satire keeps tightening its grip. It’s absurd, yes (so is where we are currently)…but it’s also uncomfortably recognizable. A biting, fearless holiday revolt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:41
Merry Trumpmess
Friendship said:
You made me laugh, nicely put. Your poem \"Merry Trumpmess\" critiques contemporary political attitudes toward immigration and cultural traditions, particularly around the Christmas holiday. It presents a satirical perspective on how policies and rhetoric can impact cherished customs and figures associated with the season.
December 23rd, 2025 05:18
Friendship said:
You made me laugh, nicely put. Your poem \"Merry Trumpmess\" critiques contemporary political attitudes toward immigration and cultural traditions, particularly around the Christmas holiday. It presents a satirical perspective on how policies and rhetoric can impact cherished customs and figures associated with the season.
December 23rd, 2025 05:18
Merry Trumpmess
Katie B. said:
Like \"Santa denied a visa is detained.\" Well written as always SB.
December 23rd, 2025 04:05
Katie B. said:
Like \"Santa denied a visa is detained.\" Well written as always SB.
December 23rd, 2025 04:05
Merry Trumpmess
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You seen that fat beardy bloke around?!
December 23rd, 2025 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You seen that fat beardy bloke around?!
December 23rd, 2025 03:10
My nature home
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem to Read in these Winter days when The bloom of Nature and Creatures are asleep.
December 22nd, 2025 19:43
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem to Read in these Winter days when The bloom of Nature and Creatures are asleep.
December 22nd, 2025 19:43
My nature home
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like stepping into a living landscape. The imagery is vivid and abundant, and the closing lines with sound and scent bring it full circle.
December 22nd, 2025 18:00
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like stepping into a living landscape. The imagery is vivid and abundant, and the closing lines with sound and scent bring it full circle.
December 22nd, 2025 18:00
My nature home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gentle, immersive, and deeply restorative. Nature isn’t scenery here…it’s companion, witness, and blessing all at once. The consistency of tone is what makes it linger. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 22nd, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gentle, immersive, and deeply restorative. Nature isn’t scenery here…it’s companion, witness, and blessing all at once. The consistency of tone is what makes it linger. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 22nd, 2025 15:18
My nature home
Katie B. said:
I LOVE POEMS ABOUT NATURE, ESPECIALLY THE BIRDS. THIS PIECE IS EXQUSITE. ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING SB!
December 22nd, 2025 06:41
Katie B. said:
I LOVE POEMS ABOUT NATURE, ESPECIALLY THE BIRDS. THIS PIECE IS EXQUSITE. ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING SB!
December 22nd, 2025 06:41
My nature home
arqios said:
I absolutely love how the walls just seem to melt away in this poem! The imagery of hummingbirds perching in the shower and of fireflies serving as a bedroom light is so whimsical and intimate. It transforms the idea of a \"home\" into a living, breathing sanctuary where the \"shuddering\" of the outside world finally goes quiet. It’s such a beautiful, sun-drenched vision of peace. 🕊️🙏
December 22nd, 2025 06:29
arqios said:
I absolutely love how the walls just seem to melt away in this poem! The imagery of hummingbirds perching in the shower and of fireflies serving as a bedroom light is so whimsical and intimate. It transforms the idea of a \"home\" into a living, breathing sanctuary where the \"shuddering\" of the outside world finally goes quiet. It’s such a beautiful, sun-drenched vision of peace. 🕊️🙏
December 22nd, 2025 06:29
Human beans
Goldfinch60 said:
Too much or too little of many things spoil life soren but there are always ways to move forward into new growth and a better world.
Andy
December 22nd, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Too much or too little of many things spoil life soren but there are always ways to move forward into new growth and a better world.
Andy
December 22nd, 2025 02:29
Human beans
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is sharply observant. There’s a steady accumulation here that makes imbalance feel inevitable rather than accidental. It lands with a quiet heaviness. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is sharply observant. There’s a steady accumulation here that makes imbalance feel inevitable rather than accidental. It lands with a quiet heaviness. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:29
Human beans
Thomas W Case said:
The progression from plant to child works seamlessly.
It makes the poem feel like a living, breathing observation.
December 21st, 2025 09:55
Thomas W Case said:
The progression from plant to child works seamlessly.
It makes the poem feel like a living, breathing observation.
December 21st, 2025 09:55
Human beans
Lorenz said:
In the good old days ,women had children ,men died at war and everyone was eating beans .
Alas ! we have lost that sens of balance ...
December 21st, 2025 09:21
Lorenz said:
In the good old days ,women had children ,men died at war and everyone was eating beans .
Alas ! we have lost that sens of balance ...
December 21st, 2025 09:21
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett
