Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful and really gets one to think about the state of the planet and our pervasively negative effect over it. Wonderful job, Soren! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 15:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful and really gets one to think about the state of the planet and our pervasively negative effect over it. Wonderful job, Soren! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 15:58
Too many
rrodriguez said:
Unfortunately, that\'s what going on in our world. Let\'s do our best in our part of the world we\'re at and be kind to each other...
May 8th, 2025 13:41
rrodriguez said:
Unfortunately, that\'s what going on in our world. Let\'s do our best in our part of the world we\'re at and be kind to each other...
May 8th, 2025 13:41
Too many
Teddy.15 said:
And thank gauld there is only one Donald Trump 🤣 this is so powerful and so very true, over populated with greed, hate and material minds too, not enough compassion or empathy, not enough kindness not enough peace not enough thought for our planet, too much of who needs to be rich and have the best of everything, too much social media and too much internet influencers. But who the hell am I to tell! Fabulous and thank you for allowing me to have a rant I never do 💜
May 8th, 2025 11:03
Teddy.15 said:
And thank gauld there is only one Donald Trump 🤣 this is so powerful and so very true, over populated with greed, hate and material minds too, not enough compassion or empathy, not enough kindness not enough peace not enough thought for our planet, too much of who needs to be rich and have the best of everything, too much social media and too much internet influencers. But who the hell am I to tell! Fabulous and thank you for allowing me to have a rant I never do 💜
May 8th, 2025 11:03
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Lorenz said:
It\'s too late now .Let\'s wait the armaggedon with a serene heart !
May 8th, 2025 08:00
Lorenz said:
It\'s too late now .Let\'s wait the armaggedon with a serene heart !
May 8th, 2025 08:00
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Friendship said:
Well said,Soren.Your poem inspires a sense of urgency around the multitude of interconnected social and environmental issues resulting from overpopulation. It paints a vivid picture of a world transformed by human activity, highlighting opportunities for growth, renewal, and societal advancements. It provokes thought and inspires action regarding the critical challenges faced by humanity, urging readers to reflect on their role in addressing these pressing issues and unlocking a brighter future.
May 8th, 2025 07:48
Friendship said:
Well said,Soren.Your poem inspires a sense of urgency around the multitude of interconnected social and environmental issues resulting from overpopulation. It paints a vivid picture of a world transformed by human activity, highlighting opportunities for growth, renewal, and societal advancements. It provokes thought and inspires action regarding the critical challenges faced by humanity, urging readers to reflect on their role in addressing these pressing issues and unlocking a brighter future.
May 8th, 2025 07:48
Too many
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP says \'Too many meals of sewage\'. I reply \'That\'s all you\'re getting, dear!\' LOL.
May 8th, 2025 07:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP says \'Too many meals of sewage\'. I reply \'That\'s all you\'re getting, dear!\' LOL.
May 8th, 2025 07:40
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Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, rightly highlighting the important issues of today , although I wouldn\'t say it is all down to overpopulation, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, rightly highlighting the important issues of today , although I wouldn\'t say it is all down to overpopulation, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:44
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Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and thought-provoking, highlighting pressing global issues with striking clarity. The rhythm and structure effectively convey the urgency and importance of these concerns. Well done!
May 8th, 2025 05:13
Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and thought-provoking, highlighting pressing global issues with striking clarity. The rhythm and structure effectively convey the urgency and importance of these concerns. Well done!
May 8th, 2025 05:13
Shade
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of the day can be so relaxing but life is so much better when you arise in the morning soren.
Andy
May 8th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of the day can be so relaxing but life is so much better when you arise in the morning soren.
Andy
May 8th, 2025 01:46
Shade
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood. Lovely work!
May 7th, 2025 21:44
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood. Lovely work!
May 7th, 2025 21:44
I thought I knew
Doggerel Dave said:
Great rhymes and rhythm there, Soren.
Moral: Don\'t look back - forward, ever forward?
May 7th, 2025 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Great rhymes and rhythm there, Soren.
Moral: Don\'t look back - forward, ever forward?
May 7th, 2025 19:18
I thought I knew
Kevin Hulme said:
I can understand your frustrations.
And it\'s not only Landscapes that change; but People we loved Change or Leave us. Nice one.
May 7th, 2025 15:55
Kevin Hulme said:
I can understand your frustrations.
And it\'s not only Landscapes that change; but People we loved Change or Leave us. Nice one.
May 7th, 2025 15:55
I thought I knew
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
There was a song once; “pave paradise put up a parking lot.” Great write!
May 7th, 2025 12:42
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
There was a song once; “pave paradise put up a parking lot.” Great write!
May 7th, 2025 12:42
Shade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem, full of depth. This is a wonderful metaphor that can be interpreted in a few very impactful ways. In this, I initially read it as the passing of life to death and, how, death is really providing comfort and relaxation from a long, tiring, but worthy existence. Well done, my friend. Beautiful! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem, full of depth. This is a wonderful metaphor that can be interpreted in a few very impactful ways. In this, I initially read it as the passing of life to death and, how, death is really providing comfort and relaxation from a long, tiring, but worthy existence. Well done, my friend. Beautiful! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 11:02
Shade
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together the transition from day to night, the changing seasons, specifically the vibrant hues of fall, and the profound emotional weight of memory and wisdom that comes with aging. The imagery evokes a sense of hope and renewal, while simultaneously hinting at the comfort found in rest and acceptance at the end of one\'s day.
May 7th, 2025 08:04
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together the transition from day to night, the changing seasons, specifically the vibrant hues of fall, and the profound emotional weight of memory and wisdom that comes with aging. The imagery evokes a sense of hope and renewal, while simultaneously hinting at the comfort found in rest and acceptance at the end of one\'s day.
May 7th, 2025 08:04
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Salvia.S said:
A hauntingly graceful verse—quietly powerful, with a gentle melancholy that lingers.
May 7th, 2025 06:08
Salvia.S said:
A hauntingly graceful verse—quietly powerful, with a gentle melancholy that lingers.
May 7th, 2025 06:08
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David Wakeling said:
As I get older I look forward to sleep more and more. Wonderfully created poem.Strong rhyme.
May 7th, 2025 05:50
David Wakeling said:
As I get older I look forward to sleep more and more. Wonderfully created poem.Strong rhyme.
May 7th, 2025 05:50
Shade
MDStone said:
The seasons with all their feels, changes, and challenges also bring their own special “delight.” So much like life. Thank you, Soren, for the introspection. I felt the coolness of the shadows, the loneliness of darkness coming way too soon. But I also snuggled in tired to a warm bed with a comfy quilt. Now I’m ready for another go of it!
May 7th, 2025 05:16
MDStone said:
The seasons with all their feels, changes, and challenges also bring their own special “delight.” So much like life. Thank you, Soren, for the introspection. I felt the coolness of the shadows, the loneliness of darkness coming way too soon. But I also snuggled in tired to a warm bed with a comfy quilt. Now I’m ready for another go of it!
May 7th, 2025 05:16
Sacrifice, take the hit
Soman Ragavan said:
You have a rare mind that sees hidden things, fleeting occurrences, the connection between things... In short you have vision.
**VISION. A great poet has spiritual insight and can see truths that others do not. Poets have, in moments of vision, the power of understanding, by a kind of instinct, things, their qualities and the relations between them, which ordinary people cannot see. All true poetry is the product of vision or imagination, for it is the expression of it. The poet idealises the real. There is suggestiveness in great poetry. It suggests or implies much more than it says.**
--Wren & Martin : \"HIGH SCHOOL ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION.\" (Revised by Prasada Rao). New Delhi : S. Chand & Co., 1994. (Reprinted 1994). (Full acknowledgements are made).
May 7th, 2025 04:24
Soman Ragavan said:
You have a rare mind that sees hidden things, fleeting occurrences, the connection between things... In short you have vision.
**VISION. A great poet has spiritual insight and can see truths that others do not. Poets have, in moments of vision, the power of understanding, by a kind of instinct, things, their qualities and the relations between them, which ordinary people cannot see. All true poetry is the product of vision or imagination, for it is the expression of it. The poet idealises the real. There is suggestiveness in great poetry. It suggests or implies much more than it says.**
--Wren & Martin : \"HIGH SCHOOL ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION.\" (Revised by Prasada Rao). New Delhi : S. Chand & Co., 1994. (Reprinted 1994). (Full acknowledgements are made).
May 7th, 2025 04:24
Shade
Victor Bolshov said:
Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.
May 7th, 2025 03:49
Victor Bolshov said:
Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.
May 7th, 2025 03:49
I thought I knew
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things change in our lives soren.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things change in our lives soren.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:20
I thought I knew
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is powerful and evocative, effectively capturing the pain of change and loss in familiar places. The imagery is vivid and impactful. Well done!
May 6th, 2025 21:51
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is powerful and evocative, effectively capturing the pain of change and loss in familiar places. The imagery is vivid and impactful. Well done!
May 6th, 2025 21:51
I thought I knew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different. Well done, on this Soren! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different. Well done, on this Soren! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:24
I thought I knew
NinjaGirl said:
People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful write.
May 6th, 2025 18:47
NinjaGirl said:
People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful write.
May 6th, 2025 18:47
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