Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Why me?
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Why me?
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Weak and strong
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Weak and strong
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Weak and strong
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Weak and strong
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Weak and strong
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
The tooth
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
The tooth
arqios said:
This poem hits like a blow to the jaw; visceral, darkly comic, and unapologetically graphic.
It swings from the brutality of a rusty nail to the absurdity of DIY dental surgery,
all while weaving in biblical allusion and a fierce sense of agency.
July 19th, 2025 07:19
arqios said:
This poem hits like a blow to the jaw; visceral, darkly comic, and unapologetically graphic.
It swings from the brutality of a rusty nail to the absurdity of DIY dental surgery,
all while weaving in biblical allusion and a fierce sense of agency.
July 19th, 2025 07:19
I love roses
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written
words are well chosen to express poem so well
nice flow nice to read jim
July 19th, 2025 06:05
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written
words are well chosen to express poem so well
nice flow nice to read jim
July 19th, 2025 06:05
The tooth
Priya Tomar said:
Witty poetry criticized health sector
It blends realism with sharp wit
Well worded....
July 19th, 2025 05:03
Priya Tomar said:
Witty poetry criticized health sector
It blends realism with sharp wit
Well worded....
July 19th, 2025 05:03
Lost art
nami said:
The theater is empty today, but my paint doesn\'t come off. The fire had sculpted me in a shape I\'ve never known. This was beautiful,Soren.
July 19th, 2025 03:03
nami said:
The theater is empty today, but my paint doesn\'t come off. The fire had sculpted me in a shape I\'ve never known. This was beautiful,Soren.
July 19th, 2025 03:03
Light of progress
Goldfinch60 said:
We are only free if we think outside the box and trust our own freedom soren.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
We are only free if we think outside the box and trust our own freedom soren.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:46
Redemption in deception
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Light of progress
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Light of progress
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
I love roses
Joan Reese said:
It made me think of a beautiful woman losing her youth. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:57
Joan Reese said:
It made me think of a beautiful woman losing her youth. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:57
Light of progress
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written beautiful words
nice lovely flow nice to read jim
July 18th, 2025 07:56
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written beautiful words
nice lovely flow nice to read jim
July 18th, 2025 07:56
Light of progress
arqios said:
Reading “light of progress” feels like stepping through time’s shadowed corridors. It begins in a shared darkness; humanity unified in vulnerability, then traces our inventions and inventions’ unintended chains. The poem’s sweep from primal intimacy to modern indoctrination strikes with urgent clarity. It invites us to question whether we can reclaim the tools we’ve forged.🕊️🙏🏻
July 18th, 2025 06:22
arqios said:
Reading “light of progress” feels like stepping through time’s shadowed corridors. It begins in a shared darkness; humanity unified in vulnerability, then traces our inventions and inventions’ unintended chains. The poem’s sweep from primal intimacy to modern indoctrination strikes with urgent clarity. It invites us to question whether we can reclaim the tools we’ve forged.🕊️🙏🏻
July 18th, 2025 06:22
Light of progress
Poetic Licence said:
Deep thinking and meaning in this write reflecting onl civilisations progress or not as may be the case, I also felt alot of references referring to the darker times of the slave trade, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
Deep thinking and meaning in this write reflecting onl civilisations progress or not as may be the case, I also felt alot of references referring to the darker times of the slave trade, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:55
Light of progress
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful filled with wisdom and imagery, you make it sound all so easy to explain in poetic form my dear sorrenbarret and I listen to every word loud and clear 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:17
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful filled with wisdom and imagery, you make it sound all so easy to explain in poetic form my dear sorrenbarret and I listen to every word loud and clear 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:17
Light of progress
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich and vivid imagery with beautiful phraseology amidst an internal rhythmic structure that conveys a multitude of themes exploring the human condition, history, the nature of man & philosophy as well as devastatingly emotionally poignant reflections. Qudos on a beautiful piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:03
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich and vivid imagery with beautiful phraseology amidst an internal rhythmic structure that conveys a multitude of themes exploring the human condition, history, the nature of man & philosophy as well as devastatingly emotionally poignant reflections. Qudos on a beautiful piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:03
Light of progress
Priya Tomar said:
Civilizational progress vs moral regression
Deep philosophy, wisdom in every word
Poetic power highly praiseworthy
Lovely metaphors , well , very lovely
Every word touched my heart
July 18th, 2025 03:31
Priya Tomar said:
Civilizational progress vs moral regression
Deep philosophy, wisdom in every word
Poetic power highly praiseworthy
Lovely metaphors , well , very lovely
Every word touched my heart
July 18th, 2025 03:31
Insignificant
Goldfinch60 said:
We all exist in reality no matter how insignificant we appear to be.
Andy
July 18th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We all exist in reality no matter how insignificant we appear to be.
Andy
July 18th, 2025 01:26
Insignificant
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Deeper into the circle of reality to nothingness and beyond nothingness whatever and wherever that is. It\'s most likely where you asked the question, ... to not exist in reality. Perhaps, no matter how small there is always something smaller. I\'m going to leave it at that because this could drive this old bard mad, that being said, another mind boggling, powerful and excellent poem from your bureau.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Deeper into the circle of reality to nothingness and beyond nothingness whatever and wherever that is. It\'s most likely where you asked the question, ... to not exist in reality. Perhaps, no matter how small there is always something smaller. I\'m going to leave it at that because this could drive this old bard mad, that being said, another mind boggling, powerful and excellent poem from your bureau.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:32
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