Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Goodbye
Settes said:
I really liked your poem. I share your feeling. I felt exactly the same when I lost a friend who was diagnosed with cancel.
November 3rd, 2025 10:24
Settes said:
I really liked your poem. I share your feeling. I felt exactly the same when I lost a friend who was diagnosed with cancel.
November 3rd, 2025 10:24
Near sighted
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Great words. This shows the hubris of only maintaining the home since nothing has yet to hit the doorstep or infiltrate past the white picket fence. Great poem!
November 3rd, 2025 09:59
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Great words. This shows the hubris of only maintaining the home since nothing has yet to hit the doorstep or infiltrate past the white picket fence. Great poem!
November 3rd, 2025 09:59
Solo climbing
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Solo climbing is by no means easy. A very well written piece
November 3rd, 2025 09:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Solo climbing is by no means easy. A very well written piece
November 3rd, 2025 09:56
Thief, priest and engineer
Aman 12 said:
death turned into a punchline. Felt like a mechanical parable.
November 3rd, 2025 07:24
Aman 12 said:
death turned into a punchline. Felt like a mechanical parable.
November 3rd, 2025 07:24
Thief, priest and engineer
Victor Bolshov said:
Oh! Oh!! Beautiful!
As a physicist by education and an engineer by occupation, I have to say:
Warheads and bombs, measured in megatons, for all I know, can be on their way.
Is it the engineers? Or he who rules and steers - to be blamed for this final dismay?
November 3rd, 2025 04:44
Victor Bolshov said:
Oh! Oh!! Beautiful!
As a physicist by education and an engineer by occupation, I have to say:
Warheads and bombs, measured in megatons, for all I know, can be on their way.
Is it the engineers? Or he who rules and steers - to be blamed for this final dismay?
November 3rd, 2025 04:44
What you want
KC said:
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November 3rd, 2025 04:43
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November 3rd, 2025 04:43
Thief, priest and engineer
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This made me think of - there\'s the story of Joseph in Egypt, and a butler and a baker in prison who both have dreams. Joseph interprets their dreams, saying both their heads will be \'lifted up\'. For the butler it meant being restored, \'lifted up\' to his original place. The baker thought the outcome of his dream would be good too, but for him it meant his head was \'lifted up\' from off him, and being put to death!
November 3rd, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This made me think of - there\'s the story of Joseph in Egypt, and a butler and a baker in prison who both have dreams. Joseph interprets their dreams, saying both their heads will be \'lifted up\'. For the butler it meant being restored, \'lifted up\' to his original place. The baker thought the outcome of his dream would be good too, but for him it meant his head was \'lifted up\' from off him, and being put to death!
November 3rd, 2025 03:37
They came
Goldfinch60 said:
I once had a plethora of woodlice allover mine and my neighbours back walls of our houses.
Andy
November 3rd, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I once had a plethora of woodlice allover mine and my neighbours back walls of our houses.
Andy
November 3rd, 2025 02:55
They came
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember a few years back , going into the Kitchen and seeing a large Black Round shape on the Wall. It seemed to move slightly. Realised it was a mass of Ants. Like something from a Stephen King Novel. Still; Nothing on your scale of things. Horrific. And a good Write too.
November 2nd, 2025 21:40
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember a few years back , going into the Kitchen and seeing a large Black Round shape on the Wall. It seemed to move slightly. Realised it was a mass of Ants. Like something from a Stephen King Novel. Still; Nothing on your scale of things. Horrific. And a good Write too.
November 2nd, 2025 21:40
They came
NinjaGirl said:
Oh dear! I hope you were able to keep them all out of the house!
November 2nd, 2025 21:30
NinjaGirl said:
Oh dear! I hope you were able to keep them all out of the house!
November 2nd, 2025 21:30
They came
Lorenz said:
A good title and a thrilling plot for a SF short story !
November 2nd, 2025 14:08
Lorenz said:
A good title and a thrilling plot for a SF short story !
November 2nd, 2025 14:08
Rain
RSM0812 said:
Nicley written. I especially liked the imagery you wrote with the chosen words and rhyme.
November 2nd, 2025 13:11
RSM0812 said:
Nicley written. I especially liked the imagery you wrote with the chosen words and rhyme.
November 2nd, 2025 13:11
They came
Bella Shepard said:
An invasion extraordinaire, told in clever automotive metaphor. Here\'s hoping that you had calamine lotion handy, lol.
November 2nd, 2025 10:45
Bella Shepard said:
An invasion extraordinaire, told in clever automotive metaphor. Here\'s hoping that you had calamine lotion handy, lol.
November 2nd, 2025 10:45
They came
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this piece walks the line between realism and nightmare so deftly…the ants as both swarm and symbol, the intrusion as both memory and omen. It haunts long after reading. As for the real encounter...ouch and wow...they came! Well done, my friend!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this piece walks the line between realism and nightmare so deftly…the ants as both swarm and symbol, the intrusion as both memory and omen. It haunts long after reading. As for the real encounter...ouch and wow...they came! Well done, my friend!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 09:01
They came
Teddy.15 said:
Attack.of the Ants, Oh no! What a site and fright, I once woke up to a thousand baby spiders all over my bedroom in Tuscany, I feel this one deeply
I had to use the hoover! Wonderful read my friend. 🐜
November 2nd, 2025 04:49
Teddy.15 said:
Attack.of the Ants, Oh no! What a site and fright, I once woke up to a thousand baby spiders all over my bedroom in Tuscany, I feel this one deeply
I had to use the hoover! Wonderful read my friend. 🐜
November 2nd, 2025 04:49
Empty
Goldfinch60 said:
That hidden horror can bring so much emotion when it is found soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That hidden horror can bring so much emotion when it is found soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2025 02:16
Empty
Rocky Lagou said:
The way you’ve described this cancerous eating at the human soul is evocative. Very poignant and masterfully written as usual 🤍
November 1st, 2025 09:31
Rocky Lagou said:
The way you’ve described this cancerous eating at the human soul is evocative. Very poignant and masterfully written as usual 🤍
November 1st, 2025 09:31
Empty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time, pain, and pretense erode beneath the skin. It’s elegiac, unsettling, and true. Very well done and, of course, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time, pain, and pretense erode beneath the skin. It’s elegiac, unsettling, and true. Very well done and, of course, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:59
Empty
Lorenz said:
All these words thrown into the season of ghosts that convey the beauty of emptiness ...
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Lorenz said:
All these words thrown into the season of ghosts that convey the beauty of emptiness ...
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Empty
Paul Bell said:
It\'s good to know we\'re all going back to dust.
Makes you want to get out there and conquer the world.
Maybe get breakfast first.
November 1st, 2025 04:24
Paul Bell said:
It\'s good to know we\'re all going back to dust.
Makes you want to get out there and conquer the world.
Maybe get breakfast first.
November 1st, 2025 04:24
Solo climbing
Aman 12 said:
Chalked hand writing on granite..both tense and sparse.
November 1st, 2025 03:54
Aman 12 said:
Chalked hand writing on granite..both tense and sparse.
November 1st, 2025 03:54
Solo climbing
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all watch our steps as we go through life soren.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all watch our steps as we go through life soren.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:57
Solo climbing
Rocky Lagou said:
The sibilance in this poem has me stressing the “s” of every word I’m saying now. It’s lingering ahhh!!! I love it!
November 1st, 2025 01:40
Rocky Lagou said:
The sibilance in this poem has me stressing the “s” of every word I’m saying now. It’s lingering ahhh!!! I love it!
November 1st, 2025 01:40
Solo climbing
Kevin Hulme said:
Reads like a Metaphor for living from day to day.
Good one.
October 31st, 2025 19:39
Kevin Hulme said:
Reads like a Metaphor for living from day to day.
Good one.
October 31st, 2025 19:39
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