Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Blind
Goldfinch60 said:

Within our mo
ind we can see and feel so many things soren but many do not realise this.

Andy

May 24th, 2024 01:26

Blind
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Powerful imagery.

May 23rd, 2024 17:48

Blind
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 23rd, 2024 09:47

Blind
Teddy.15 said:

Stunning dear sorrenbarret simply stunning. šŸŒ¹

May 23rd, 2024 08:59

Blind
2781 said:

;and what will I, if it already be kindled?

May 23rd, 2024 06:20

Smokes
Goldfinch60 said:

You had that youth soren and it brought you to the wonderful place where you are now in your life.

Andy

May 23rd, 2024 01:10

Smokes
Doggerel Dave said:

Memories of my youth, the operative word being lingering. But memories only - I\'m not, and haven\'t for a number of years, regarded them as anything other than that.
Despair? Regret? All that passed a long time ago. Well and truly reconciled now.
Provocative write, Soren - thanks.


May 22nd, 2024 19:50

Smokes
jarcher54 said:

when your fingers go brown, you are savoring every puff down to the fingers... or going filterless? So when the kids bum a butt, do you pretend not to have a light?

May 22nd, 2024 13:16

Smokes
Teddy.15 said:

I\'d like to say I feel sorry for you dear sorrenbarret but I do not šŸ¤£ smoking is a bad nasty smelly habit bad for teeth lungs and all. Hey and growing old, well how lucky are you? I have no sympathy for you today ā¤ļø your healthy wise and hair like father Xmas? What\'s not to love?

May 22nd, 2024 12:16

Smokes
orchidee said:

Fido has his pipe (no tobacco in it) and carpet slippers, sitting by the fire, checking poems for 18+ button. A homely scene, but he barks fiercely if people \'forget\' to mark certain poems 18+. lol.

May 22nd, 2024 05:06

Smokes
2781 said:

There designed to make us sick, with all the chemicals they add.
Keeps their buddies in the pharmaceutical business busy.
Don\'t mind a puff, every now and then.

May 22nd, 2024 05:03

A tale with a tail
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine words soren history can be fascinating but whay we may not realise is that history was written by the victors, what if the losers were right?

Andy

May 22nd, 2024 01:46

A tale with a tail
Mason Vollman said:

A Tale with a Tail, a Poem with a Meaning. Beautiful Write Soren, thee poem got me thinking.šŸ˜Š

May 21st, 2024 14:59

A tale with a tail
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

May 21st, 2024 11:40

A tale with a tail
Doggerel Dave said:

Started off easily enough ā€“ after all, History (which I revere) is the most contradictable of the social sciencesā€¦ā€¦. By the end Iā€™m scratching around in Google to discover who the hell Osiris and Mithra areā€¦.
A rich and educative write, Soren.


May 21st, 2024 09:14

Seasons
Christina8 said:

This is a wonderful poem, yes, we are in the \"perfume of spring\" right now and looking forward to summer. Lovely rhyming words...Christina

May 21st, 2024 08:37

A tale with a tail
Teddy.15 said:

It takes all sorts to make a village, that\'s for sure. Beautiful sorrenbarret how very wise. šŸŒ¹

May 21st, 2024 08:11

A tale with a tail
orchidee said:

And......without KP there\'d be no botox! lol.

May 21st, 2024 04:19

Seasons
Alan R said:

What a beautiful picture you\'ve painted on my head....I am grateful

May 20th, 2024 13:48

Seasons
Teddy.15 said:

Truly beautiful, your imagery and rhyme, sorrenbarret my hairs turning white too, in metaphor for now but white it\'s going. ā¤ļø A stunning walk through your seasons Sir. šŸŒ¹

May 20th, 2024 05:30

Seasons
2781 said:

I am told it\'s a sign of the blessed, to have white hair.

May 20th, 2024 05:24

Opposition in all things
Goldfinch60 said:

Those opposites are always in our lives soren but life teaches us how to deal with them.

Andy

May 20th, 2024 01:42

Opposition in all things
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Excellent work.

May 19th, 2024 15:00

Opposition in all things
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 19th, 2024 09:47

Opposition in all things
Doggerel Dave said:

As you so rightly say, every good, pleasant phenomenon (all Iā€™m focusing on here) has its antithesis, Soren. And what the world at the moment seems to be experiencingā€¦ā€¦
Hell of a rich write once moreā€¦


May 19th, 2024 08:20

Opposition in all things
Teddy.15 said:

Dear sorrenbarret, So truly beautiful, and made me feel peaceful and with much gratitude for what i have, and hopefully continue to have.šŸŒ¹

May 19th, 2024 06:21

Mechanical song
orchidee said:

Are my songs today not the same as yesterday - me singing, that is. Or was my singing always terrible? lol.

May 19th, 2024 02:10

Mechanical song
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren, it is so good to hear proper music played in the notes the artist gives us.
In jazz there is never a wrong note as it is the note you wanted to play at that time!

Andy

May 19th, 2024 01:25

Mechanical song
2781 said:

I don\'t think you can beat acoustic.

May 18th, 2024 19:23

Mechanical song
Mason Vollman said:

So true, even worship songs aren\'t the same today, as they were yesterday, Good write Soren!

May 18th, 2024 18:51



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