Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Watermarks
Kevin Hulme said:
Could do with plenty of Rain at the moment in Europe by all accounts.
Good one.
August 13th, 2025 20:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Could do with plenty of Rain at the moment in Europe by all accounts.
Good one.
August 13th, 2025 20:46
Watermarks
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning metaphor and imagery, yes ditch the old coat and wipe your eyes my dear friend. Gorgeous. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning metaphor and imagery, yes ditch the old coat and wipe your eyes my dear friend. Gorgeous. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:10
Watermarks
MendedFences27 said:
\'Tendrils of rain\" give life to it. As though it was on the attack. That is exactly how it feels. Glad there came a new resolve at the end, but the rain may have other ideas. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2025 12:03
MendedFences27 said:
\'Tendrils of rain\" give life to it. As though it was on the attack. That is exactly how it feels. Glad there came a new resolve at the end, but the rain may have other ideas. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2025 12:03
Watermarks
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I didn\'t buy KP a new coat. I gave her an old boot instead! lol.
She bought a new dress too. I said\' What\'s that old sack you\'re wearing, dear?\' heehee.
August 13th, 2025 11:41
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I didn\'t buy KP a new coat. I gave her an old boot instead! lol.
She bought a new dress too. I said\' What\'s that old sack you\'re wearing, dear?\' heehee.
August 13th, 2025 11:41
Watermarks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just fall…it seeps in, leaves its trace, and refuses to vanish. The rhyme gives it an easy flow, but the truth beneath it lingers heavy. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just fall…it seeps in, leaves its trace, and refuses to vanish. The rhyme gives it an easy flow, but the truth beneath it lingers heavy. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:14
Watermarks
Poetic Licence said:
Oh boy I have bought many new coats over years, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
Oh boy I have bought many new coats over years, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:52
The poet
Neville said:
I know I\'ve said it before but what else is a metaphor if it can\'t be fit snug in a poem and be savoured .. well writ sir S .. N
August 13th, 2025 02:04
Neville said:
I know I\'ve said it before but what else is a metaphor if it can\'t be fit snug in a poem and be savoured .. well writ sir S .. N
August 13th, 2025 02:04
The poet
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, I feel more like a jackass than a horse and my poems are the weight of a ten day journey. But I loved your metaphor and it felt true. Loved, \"A feather from the wing of Pegasus.\" - Phil A.
August 12th, 2025 15:54
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, I feel more like a jackass than a horse and my poems are the weight of a ten day journey. But I loved your metaphor and it felt true. Loved, \"A feather from the wing of Pegasus.\" - Phil A.
August 12th, 2025 15:54
The poet
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I really enjoyed it. I completely agree with this post. Inspiring and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 12th, 2025 12:19
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I really enjoyed it. I completely agree with this post. Inspiring and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 12th, 2025 12:19
Sand in a bottle
Keeter C said:
Yet I still waste the most precious commodity. Very nicely put!
August 12th, 2025 10:56
Keeter C said:
Yet I still waste the most precious commodity. Very nicely put!
August 12th, 2025 10:56
The poet
rebellion_in_sanity said:
From hoofprints it does sing - what a line!
to write it you must live it - another gem.
Great work. 🙏
August 12th, 2025 10:12
rebellion_in_sanity said:
From hoofprints it does sing - what a line!
to write it you must live it - another gem.
Great work. 🙏
August 12th, 2025 10:12
The poet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one rides (pun intended) hard and true. You’ve caught the way a poem takes the reins and won’t let go…how it leaves its mark on you even as it carries you forward. And I have an affinity for Pegasus—that feather line made me grin. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one rides (pun intended) hard and true. You’ve caught the way a poem takes the reins and won’t let go…how it leaves its mark on you even as it carries you forward. And I have an affinity for Pegasus—that feather line made me grin. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:53
The poet
arqios said:
The wife’s last car was christened Pegasus, it was poetry when we motored about on road trips-a suitable parallelism 🙏🏻🕊️
August 12th, 2025 05:25
arqios said:
The wife’s last car was christened Pegasus, it was poetry when we motored about on road trips-a suitable parallelism 🙏🏻🕊️
August 12th, 2025 05:25
The poet
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A very fitting analogy: the equine poet at the trot to canter and finally at the gallop, the last furlong, past the post and the poem complete. A most unusual and engaging poem in your usual gifted style. Very well done, I really enjoyed this one.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:16
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A very fitting analogy: the equine poet at the trot to canter and finally at the gallop, the last furlong, past the post and the poem complete. A most unusual and engaging poem in your usual gifted style. Very well done, I really enjoyed this one.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:16
The poet
Teddy.15 said:
That is just how I would describe yours always, even I get adrenaline when reading them. Funny how your poetry makes my emotions always so heightened and inspired. 🤣 🌹 Lord sorrenbarret 🌹
August 12th, 2025 04:38
Teddy.15 said:
That is just how I would describe yours always, even I get adrenaline when reading them. Funny how your poetry makes my emotions always so heightened and inspired. 🤣 🌹 Lord sorrenbarret 🌹
August 12th, 2025 04:38
Glimpses
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us soren.
Andy
August 12th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us soren.
Andy
August 12th, 2025 01:44
Glimpses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned here…all the sharper for the darkness pressing in. That final image of night’s skin peeling away is a beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned here…all the sharper for the darkness pressing in. That final image of night’s skin peeling away is a beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:30
No choice
SureshG said:
“washed up on a foreign shore”, amazing phrase, declaring one’s arrival, only to disappear
August 11th, 2025 13:05
SureshG said:
“washed up on a foreign shore”, amazing phrase, declaring one’s arrival, only to disappear
August 11th, 2025 13:05
Glimpses
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, an idea for KP and I. As you mention tar, I will tar and feather her! lol.
August 11th, 2025 09:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, an idea for KP and I. As you mention tar, I will tar and feather her! lol.
August 11th, 2025 09:11
Glimpses
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
Glimpses
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
No choice
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
Glimpses
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Glimpses
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Glimpses
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
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