Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
arqios said:
Such a deep dive in its succinctness! Outward gestures of love that in retrospect could have been destructive and may have unforeseen consequences. Powerful stuff. 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 07:26
arqios said:
Such a deep dive in its succinctness! Outward gestures of love that in retrospect could have been destructive and may have unforeseen consequences. Powerful stuff. 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 07:26
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Paul Bell said:
Love should come with a health warning.
Roses to begin with, but then the thorns make their appearance.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Never bought that mind you.
November 8th, 2025 06:49
Paul Bell said:
Love should come with a health warning.
Roses to begin with, but then the thorns make their appearance.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Never bought that mind you.
November 8th, 2025 06:49
No reason
FrasMac said:
Yes! So much time spent in little screens when there is so much majesty around us to inspire!
November 8th, 2025 02:46
FrasMac said:
Yes! So much time spent in little screens when there is so much majesty around us to inspire!
November 8th, 2025 02:46
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have dreams soren and some of them are very believable.
Andy
November 8th, 2025 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have dreams soren and some of them are very believable.
Andy
November 8th, 2025 02:41
Awakening
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on Dreams and the Waking day. And the difference there-of .
November 7th, 2025 19:57
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on Dreams and the Waking day. And the difference there-of .
November 7th, 2025 19:57
Reaper
RefugeInRain said:
I\'m a little late to this one, but I absolutely adore it. Great write.
November 7th, 2025 13:36
RefugeInRain said:
I\'m a little late to this one, but I absolutely adore it. Great write.
November 7th, 2025 13:36
Awakening
Bella Shepard said:
To dream well is a gift, especially when in the last flicker it can soften the harsh reality that it allows us to escape from. This poem with its beautiful rhyme and cadence begs to be read aloud as it rolls so smoothly off the tongue. Love it!
November 7th, 2025 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
To dream well is a gift, especially when in the last flicker it can soften the harsh reality that it allows us to escape from. This poem with its beautiful rhyme and cadence begs to be read aloud as it rolls so smoothly off the tongue. Love it!
November 7th, 2025 13:26
Awakening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. I get this and this certainly is speaking to me right now, my friend. Timely for me. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 7th, 2025 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. I get this and this certainly is speaking to me right now, my friend. Timely for me. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 7th, 2025 08:39
Awakening
arqios said:
Wow, it felt like the moment of leaving behind the illusions of dreams and confronting reality. The shimmering beauty of fantasy fades, replaced by the tarnished, rusted surface of the waking world. It’s about the bittersweet shift from comforting illusions to the harsher truths of everyday life. Fantastic moment in poetry. 🙏🕊️
November 7th, 2025 06:07
arqios said:
Wow, it felt like the moment of leaving behind the illusions of dreams and confronting reality. The shimmering beauty of fantasy fades, replaced by the tarnished, rusted surface of the waking world. It’s about the bittersweet shift from comforting illusions to the harsher truths of everyday life. Fantastic moment in poetry. 🙏🕊️
November 7th, 2025 06:07
Awakening
Paul Bell said:
Why do people disturb you when you\'re having a good dream?
Why are all my nightmares about the taxman.
November 7th, 2025 04:41
Paul Bell said:
Why do people disturb you when you\'re having a good dream?
Why are all my nightmares about the taxman.
November 7th, 2025 04:41
Awakening
Ethan Mikel StAmour said:
Lovely writing I feel calm and entranced just reading it
November 7th, 2025 03:39
Ethan Mikel StAmour said:
Lovely writing I feel calm and entranced just reading it
November 7th, 2025 03:39
Awakening
orchidee said:
Good write A. Some dreams can seem so real. When we wake up, we may say \'aww\' if it was a nice dream, or say \'phew\' in relief, if it was a bad dream.
November 7th, 2025 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write A. Some dreams can seem so real. When we wake up, we may say \'aww\' if it was a nice dream, or say \'phew\' in relief, if it was a bad dream.
November 7th, 2025 03:23
Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, life can change in a moment, and with age it gets slower and more confusing.
Andy
November 7th, 2025 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, life can change in a moment, and with age it gets slower and more confusing.
Andy
November 7th, 2025 02:01
Once
arqios said:
I really liked the way “Once” mixes regret with sharp, surreal images. The shifts from youth and love into satire, presidents on pills, poets with hoses all make it feel like a dream unraveling into absurdity. That final turn with Charon’s coins ties it all back to mortality and wasted chances. It’s raw, witty, and haunting all at once. Thanks for putting it out there. 🙏🕊️
November 6th, 2025 19:06
arqios said:
I really liked the way “Once” mixes regret with sharp, surreal images. The shifts from youth and love into satire, presidents on pills, poets with hoses all make it feel like a dream unraveling into absurdity. That final turn with Charon’s coins ties it all back to mortality and wasted chances. It’s raw, witty, and haunting all at once. Thanks for putting it out there. 🙏🕊️
November 6th, 2025 19:06
Goodbye
PerditaRose said:
This is a beautiful sentiment and a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
November 6th, 2025 17:35
PerditaRose said:
This is a beautiful sentiment and a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
November 6th, 2025 17:35
The bed
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you\'re able to write and even in historical events as time passes no matter whose eyes it sees through very well written
November 6th, 2025 11:15
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you\'re able to write and even in historical events as time passes no matter whose eyes it sees through very well written
November 6th, 2025 11:15
Once
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy trinity, imho. Every stanza bends logic to confession. A hell of a ride, my friend. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy trinity, imho. Every stanza bends logic to confession. A hell of a ride, my friend. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:43
Once
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
Once
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Once
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
The garden
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
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