Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
After the fall
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, the words feel ancient. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2025 08:26
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, the words feel ancient. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2025 08:26
After the fall
Kevin Hulme said:
Not looking forward to Autumn or Winter one bit.
Alas , poor Summer I knew you well.
Good Write.
August 29th, 2025 08:06
Kevin Hulme said:
Not looking forward to Autumn or Winter one bit.
Alas , poor Summer I knew you well.
Good Write.
August 29th, 2025 08:06
Beauty and thorns
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s like a rose. I help her to grow with plenty of fertiliser/manure - for her dinner! heehee. It\'s horrible in our kitchen. lol.
August 29th, 2025 07:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s like a rose. I help her to grow with plenty of fertiliser/manure - for her dinner! heehee. It\'s horrible in our kitchen. lol.
August 29th, 2025 07:36
Beauty and thorns
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00
Beauty and thorns
arqios said:
🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose bare‑handed, drawn by beauty, only to realise we’ve hurt both her and ourselves. A flower cut from her roots can’t thrive; no matter how pretty the vase. True care is letting her bloom and thrive in her natural state. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose bare‑handed, drawn by beauty, only to realise we’ve hurt both her and ourselves. A flower cut from her roots can’t thrive; no matter how pretty the vase. True care is letting her bloom and thrive in her natural state. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2025 05:38
Beauty and thorns
Teddy.15 said:
So very delicate is the rose 🌹 stunning my dear sorrenbarret I especially love your first stanza 🌹 fabulous imagery and incredible emotion throughout 🌹
August 29th, 2025 03:39
Teddy.15 said:
So very delicate is the rose 🌹 stunning my dear sorrenbarret I especially love your first stanza 🌹 fabulous imagery and incredible emotion throughout 🌹
August 29th, 2025 03:39
Beauty and thorns
Lorenz said:
I hate seeing these mutilated flowers dying in the stagnant water of a vase !
August 29th, 2025 03:34
Lorenz said:
I hate seeing these mutilated flowers dying in the stagnant water of a vase !
August 29th, 2025 03:34
After the fall
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a line \"Fingers of ice the maiden does entice, disrobed and raped in disgrace\"...wow and fave
August 29th, 2025 01:15
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a line \"Fingers of ice the maiden does entice, disrobed and raped in disgrace\"...wow and fave
August 29th, 2025 01:15
After the fall
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of loss, transformation, and the cyclical nature of life and death, particularly through the lens of mythological allegory. It juxtaposes the arrival of winter and the desolation it brings with the myth of Persephone, who is taken to the underworld, representing both a literal and metaphorical descent into darkness. Yet you also seem to seek to explore deep emotional truths about the human experience and the inevitability of change, using mythological allusion to provide depth and resonance to the themes of loss and transformation.
August 28th, 2025 12:01
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of loss, transformation, and the cyclical nature of life and death, particularly through the lens of mythological allegory. It juxtaposes the arrival of winter and the desolation it brings with the myth of Persephone, who is taken to the underworld, representing both a literal and metaphorical descent into darkness. Yet you also seem to seek to explore deep emotional truths about the human experience and the inevitability of change, using mythological allusion to provide depth and resonance to the themes of loss and transformation.
August 28th, 2025 12:01
After the fall
orchidee said:
Now, come on spellchecker - is it Fall (e.g. USA) or Autumn (e.g. UK) ?! lol.
August 28th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Now, come on spellchecker - is it Fall (e.g. USA) or Autumn (e.g. UK) ?! lol.
August 28th, 2025 11:11
After the fall
Damaso said:
It\'s incredible how in just a few lines I can find as much reference information as in an entire book. What incredible narrative power. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 28th, 2025 08:42
Damaso said:
It\'s incredible how in just a few lines I can find as much reference information as in an entire book. What incredible narrative power. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 28th, 2025 08:42
Avocado
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic piece. Love the themes and it just flowed beautifully. Nice one. Cheers, Tom.
August 28th, 2025 08:39
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic piece. Love the themes and it just flowed beautifully. Nice one. Cheers, Tom.
August 28th, 2025 08:39
After the fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Winter is definitely not my favorite season and, even now, as I feel the weather cooling down and the sky gettign darker earlier, I can feel the early dread of SAD coming on. Won\'t be in full bloom until after the time change, but yeah. This poem certainly hits hard and I love the Persephone reference. Well done, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2025 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Winter is definitely not my favorite season and, even now, as I feel the weather cooling down and the sky gettign darker earlier, I can feel the early dread of SAD coming on. Won\'t be in full bloom until after the time change, but yeah. This poem certainly hits hard and I love the Persephone reference. Well done, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2025 07:02
After the fall
Teddy.15 said:
You may try all you like to spook me but I love winter, I also love the thought of growing old. 🌹 Superb and yes you are quite a wonderful poetry spiller. 🌹
August 28th, 2025 05:19
Teddy.15 said:
You may try all you like to spook me but I love winter, I also love the thought of growing old. 🌹 Superb and yes you are quite a wonderful poetry spiller. 🌹
August 28th, 2025 05:19
Avocado
Goldfinch60 said:
Never ending fruit through the seeds replanted soren.
Andy
August 28th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Never ending fruit through the seeds replanted soren.
Andy
August 28th, 2025 01:08
Avocado
Paul Bell said:
Just glad they sell fruit in my local store, cos I\'m like death around garden plants.
August 27th, 2025 13:36
Paul Bell said:
Just glad they sell fruit in my local store, cos I\'m like death around garden plants.
August 27th, 2025 13:36
Avocado
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in an orchard of truths…growth, care, timing, and renewal all woven into the cycle. Beautifully captured, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in an orchard of truths…growth, care, timing, and renewal all woven into the cycle. Beautifully captured, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 13:05
Avocado
orchidee said:
Good write SB. ahh, a suggestion for KP\'s pudding - mouldy avocados. lol. Dunno why she complains. I give her all this luxury food. heehee.
August 27th, 2025 12:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. ahh, a suggestion for KP\'s pudding - mouldy avocados. lol. Dunno why she complains. I give her all this luxury food. heehee.
August 27th, 2025 12:11
Avocado
Lorenz said:
Avocado farming poses serious environmental and social problems.Notably through the deplation of groundwater reserves and massive deforestation .
August 27th, 2025 09:05
Lorenz said:
Avocado farming poses serious environmental and social problems.Notably through the deplation of groundwater reserves and massive deforestation .
August 27th, 2025 09:05
Avocado
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Wow!! A beautiful meditation on growth, care and natural cycles all through the metaphor of an avocado tree. Well written!
August 27th, 2025 07:57
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Wow!! A beautiful meditation on growth, care and natural cycles all through the metaphor of an avocado tree. Well written!
August 27th, 2025 07:57
Avocado
Doggerel Dave said:
Viva the avocado In my local store...
Good homage, Soren.
August 27th, 2025 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Viva the avocado In my local store...
Good homage, Soren.
August 27th, 2025 07:42
Avocado
Teddy.15 said:
Succulent and full of colour flavour and wisdom, another gorgeous write, I adore the avocado. You always make me smile whilst reading your poems. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:43
Teddy.15 said:
Succulent and full of colour flavour and wisdom, another gorgeous write, I adore the avocado. You always make me smile whilst reading your poems. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:43
Avocado
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the cycle of life and growth, using the metaphor of an avocado tree to explore themes of love, nurturing, and the natural process of maturation. The poet encompasses the stages of growth—from planting the seed to harvesting the fruit—highlighting the importance of patience, care, and the interconnectedness of nature.
August 27th, 2025 05:08
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the cycle of life and growth, using the metaphor of an avocado tree to explore themes of love, nurturing, and the natural process of maturation. The poet encompasses the stages of growth—from planting the seed to harvesting the fruit—highlighting the importance of patience, care, and the interconnectedness of nature.
August 27th, 2025 05:08
The band
NafisaSB said:
wonderful description of the tiny industrious creature - a job well done, and so beautifully portrayed
August 27th, 2025 00:29
NafisaSB said:
wonderful description of the tiny industrious creature - a job well done, and so beautifully portrayed
August 27th, 2025 00:29
The band
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Though the poem was about bees, I felt it had a wider scope if we took bees as a metaphor- perhaps a quite and beautiful reflection on nature. A picture drawn in the dawn with dews. Perhaps I was wrong.
August 26th, 2025 09:20
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Though the poem was about bees, I felt it had a wider scope if we took bees as a metaphor- perhaps a quite and beautiful reflection on nature. A picture drawn in the dawn with dews. Perhaps I was wrong.
August 26th, 2025 09:20
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