Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Genesis
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
Genesis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Genesis
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Genesis
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
Empty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Rose
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Empty
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Empty
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Rose
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
Empty
Teddy.15 said:
The nest! Oh my dear sorrenbarret what poetic beauty in here, I could feel all the emotion and imagery and all. Superb my dear friend, this one hurts. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:19
Teddy.15 said:
The nest! Oh my dear sorrenbarret what poetic beauty in here, I could feel all the emotion and imagery and all. Superb my dear friend, this one hurts. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:19
Empty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still. Your nest feels like those moments when life moves on without warning… and what remains is the quiet learning to breathe again. Thank you for naming it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still. Your nest feels like those moments when life moves on without warning… and what remains is the quiet learning to breathe again. Thank you for naming it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:51
Empty
Sebastian. said:
This made me visualise the aftermath where for just a moment I could feel the fear, a sight to see that a home now ruined. Very well written!
November 18th, 2025 06:13
Sebastian. said:
This made me visualise the aftermath where for just a moment I could feel the fear, a sight to see that a home now ruined. Very well written!
November 18th, 2025 06:13
Rose
Goldfinch60 said:
I have roses saved from special days back in time soren.
Andy
November 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I have roses saved from special days back in time soren.
Andy
November 18th, 2025 02:22
Where to start
Aman 12 said:
castles in the sky..those lofty aspirations and the gritty survival of life.. so well written.i dont want to call this satire... but a mirror to false optimism.
November 18th, 2025 00:44
Aman 12 said:
castles in the sky..those lofty aspirations and the gritty survival of life.. so well written.i dont want to call this satire... but a mirror to false optimism.
November 18th, 2025 00:44
Assumptions
Aman 12 said:
such a metaphor rich poem flowing like a parable.Daisy can\'t grow oranges, and it\'s not their fault.
November 18th, 2025 00:39
Aman 12 said:
such a metaphor rich poem flowing like a parable.Daisy can\'t grow oranges, and it\'s not their fault.
November 18th, 2025 00:39
Assumptions
FrasMac said:
Yes, another subject close to my heart, being a grandparent of more than one autistic spectrum child. All of them are a gift to us, all of them a blessing, none of them an object to be judged, like an essay or mathematical homework. Thank you for adding to the argument.
November 17th, 2025 14:40
FrasMac said:
Yes, another subject close to my heart, being a grandparent of more than one autistic spectrum child. All of them are a gift to us, all of them a blessing, none of them an object to be judged, like an essay or mathematical homework. Thank you for adding to the argument.
November 17th, 2025 14:40
Rose
Lorenz said:
Rose ( As it right truly be in middle English ( C.1380 )
Al be the rose with thornes kene ,
ful soore it prikketh me ,
yit is hir hewe so fressh on morwe so swete te biholde.
Whan dat a litel wynd hat overblowe hir leefes free ,
the smelle of hire ,in soft air borne,doth mak myn herte bold.
A litel been,y drawen to hir sugre reed ,he taketh flight ,
and leveth nought but bare stalk whan the flour y doun y -falle .
Thus fareth al fairnesse under sonne by day and nyght -
to springe to fade,to dye,such is the worldes alle .
Somtyme I clepe to mynde a rose I kepte ful faire,
presséd bitwix the leves of a book y- bounde in leef .
hir swote odour was agoon ,hir colour al forbare.
but stil it lay ther as a token of joy and of my greef .
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I translate a language that no longer exists .
Middel English is neither old English nor modern english.
It is a shifting border zone full of local variations .
So the translation is never literal .
It consisted of guessing the intention through unstable spelling.
Dear friend ,my best poetic thoughts .
November 17th, 2025 14:09
Lorenz said:
Rose ( As it right truly be in middle English ( C.1380 )
Al be the rose with thornes kene ,
ful soore it prikketh me ,
yit is hir hewe so fressh on morwe so swete te biholde.
Whan dat a litel wynd hat overblowe hir leefes free ,
the smelle of hire ,in soft air borne,doth mak myn herte bold.
A litel been,y drawen to hir sugre reed ,he taketh flight ,
and leveth nought but bare stalk whan the flour y doun y -falle .
Thus fareth al fairnesse under sonne by day and nyght -
to springe to fade,to dye,such is the worldes alle .
Somtyme I clepe to mynde a rose I kepte ful faire,
presséd bitwix the leves of a book y- bounde in leef .
hir swote odour was agoon ,hir colour al forbare.
but stil it lay ther as a token of joy and of my greef .
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I translate a language that no longer exists .
Middel English is neither old English nor modern english.
It is a shifting border zone full of local variations .
So the translation is never literal .
It consisted of guessing the intention through unstable spelling.
Dear friend ,my best poetic thoughts .
November 17th, 2025 14:09
Rose
Keyara S Trotman said:
Lovely write Soren, you stated
“Now mere stalk and hip, seeds of fornication slip from your grip
So under autumn suns, as winter comes, a branch of memory I clip
Pressed between minds pages dried thoughts of past ages.”
There is depth here, this is definitely my favorite. You’ve definitely wrote something spectacular, overall this is a 👏🏻🙌🏼
🥂
November 17th, 2025 13:15
Keyara S Trotman said:
Lovely write Soren, you stated
“Now mere stalk and hip, seeds of fornication slip from your grip
So under autumn suns, as winter comes, a branch of memory I clip
Pressed between minds pages dried thoughts of past ages.”
There is depth here, this is definitely my favorite. You’ve definitely wrote something spectacular, overall this is a 👏🏻🙌🏼
🥂
November 17th, 2025 13:15
Rose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that moment where “seeds of fornication slip from your grip”…that’s the line that stays. Raw, intimate, and perfectly placed. You let nature speak its own truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 17th, 2025 12:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that moment where “seeds of fornication slip from your grip”…that’s the line that stays. Raw, intimate, and perfectly placed. You let nature speak its own truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 17th, 2025 12:52
Rose
Lorenz said:
A text that would be magnificent translated into middle English !
November 17th, 2025 11:22
Lorenz said:
A text that would be magnificent translated into middle English !
November 17th, 2025 11:22
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Sebastian. said:
This really spoke to me for it is what I share as truth.
November 17th, 2025 09:51
Sebastian. said:
This really spoke to me for it is what I share as truth.
November 17th, 2025 09:51
Rose
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve noticed roses turning up a lot lately.
They must be the most sexy and alluring flower in the flower kingdom.
But they have a bad side, and many a protective glove has been pierced.
Still, the memory lingers and would we change that, probably not.
November 17th, 2025 06:29
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve noticed roses turning up a lot lately.
They must be the most sexy and alluring flower in the flower kingdom.
But they have a bad side, and many a protective glove has been pierced.
Still, the memory lingers and would we change that, probably not.
November 17th, 2025 06:29
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