Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Tickles from the past
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.
February 10th, 2025 09:24
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.
February 10th, 2025 09:24
Tickles from the past
Friendship said:
Lovely. You created a profoundly moving painting, Soren. Your poem transcends time, resonating deeply with anyone who has ever experienced love and its intricate complexities. It beautifully captures the intense, often conflicting emotions that arise from love, attachment, and desire.
February 10th, 2025 09:11
Friendship said:
Lovely. You created a profoundly moving painting, Soren. Your poem transcends time, resonating deeply with anyone who has ever experienced love and its intricate complexities. It beautifully captures the intense, often conflicting emotions that arise from love, attachment, and desire.
February 10th, 2025 09:11
Tickles from the past
arqios said:
“The prayer yet to pray” now there is an excellent line ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:38
arqios said:
“The prayer yet to pray” now there is an excellent line ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:38
Tickles from the past
Poetic Licence said:
And all hearts should be treated with care, nicely worded reflective poem, enjoyed the read
February 10th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
And all hearts should be treated with care, nicely worded reflective poem, enjoyed the read
February 10th, 2025 05:30
Tickles from the past
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
Nice And Reflective
February 10th, 2025 04:14
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
Nice And Reflective
February 10th, 2025 04:14
Tickles from the past
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, yes we should never ignore an igling 🌹
February 10th, 2025 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, yes we should never ignore an igling 🌹
February 10th, 2025 03:35
Tickles from the past
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Doh! I used a ticket of the past - it was dated last year. (Did I? lol).
February 10th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Doh! I used a ticket of the past - it was dated last year. (Did I? lol).
February 10th, 2025 03:19
Flocks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those signs fro Nature are always around us soren and they can be hard to interpret so often.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those signs fro Nature are always around us soren and they can be hard to interpret so often.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:00
Flocks
Dan Williams said:
I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of life\'s flow\'. Nice.
February 10th, 2025 01:27
Dan Williams said:
I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of life\'s flow\'. Nice.
February 10th, 2025 01:27
Flocks
NinjaGirl said:
What I love most about this symbolism, is the idea that when the bird flying in the front gets tired from breaking the wind, the other birds let it fall to the back where there is no more wind resistance due to their triangle-shaped flight. It\'s this sense of community, that someone doesn\'t have to be strong for the whole flight--they can be tired, and take a step back.
February 9th, 2025 16:16
NinjaGirl said:
What I love most about this symbolism, is the idea that when the bird flying in the front gets tired from breaking the wind, the other birds let it fall to the back where there is no more wind resistance due to their triangle-shaped flight. It\'s this sense of community, that someone doesn\'t have to be strong for the whole flight--they can be tired, and take a step back.
February 9th, 2025 16:16
Flocks
Neville said:
It’s that time of year again isn’t it .. I can tell I’m going to be watching the sky now for quite some time .. Tis indeed quite lovely 👍
February 9th, 2025 11:33
Neville said:
It’s that time of year again isn’t it .. I can tell I’m going to be watching the sky now for quite some time .. Tis indeed quite lovely 👍
February 9th, 2025 11:33
Flocks
Friendship said:
Nicely put, Soren. Your poem prompts introspection regarding the natural world\'s significance and the subtle messages we often overlook daily. As a reader, it inspires me to contemplate the profound meanings underlying observed phenomena and the vital importance of connection and understanding in life\'s journey. I appreciate how you examine themes of communication and the pursuit of meaning within the natural world, particularly through the metaphor of birds in flight. This raises questions about the messages conveyed by these creatures and the broader significance of their journey.
February 9th, 2025 09:10
Friendship said:
Nicely put, Soren. Your poem prompts introspection regarding the natural world\'s significance and the subtle messages we often overlook daily. As a reader, it inspires me to contemplate the profound meanings underlying observed phenomena and the vital importance of connection and understanding in life\'s journey. I appreciate how you examine themes of communication and the pursuit of meaning within the natural world, particularly through the metaphor of birds in flight. This raises questions about the messages conveyed by these creatures and the broader significance of their journey.
February 9th, 2025 09:10
Flocks
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I try to be \'The Birdman\' to fly away from KP! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:57
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I try to be \'The Birdman\' to fly away from KP! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:57
Flocks
LP2187 said:
A thoughtful poem, nature\'s way of communicating is interesting. I enjoyed the read
February 9th, 2025 05:38
LP2187 said:
A thoughtful poem, nature\'s way of communicating is interesting. I enjoyed the read
February 9th, 2025 05:38
Flocks
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful and how true that nature has its own way of feeling the aura 🌹
February 9th, 2025 05:10
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful and how true that nature has its own way of feeling the aura 🌹
February 9th, 2025 05:10
Flocks
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
Flocks
arqios said:
Always makes me wonder how we in subtle ways respond to the signs around us without even knowing to have been doing so, just like these migratory birds, for millennia to uncharted memory. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:17
arqios said:
Always makes me wonder how we in subtle ways respond to the signs around us without even knowing to have been doing so, just like these migratory birds, for millennia to uncharted memory. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:17
Secret of the hive
Goldfinch60 said:
May that harmony always be in your life soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
May that harmony always be in your life soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:19
Secret of the hive
Doggerel Dave said:
Got this one, I think, Soren (makes a change!) A write I thoroughly enjoyed.
Two small issues:
Never heard of stingless bees before (though the bees I’ve encountered haven’t been unfriendly….)
The communal behaviour is obviously wired in, and it may well be that the addition of reason and independent thought which has bought humanity down!! 🙃
February 8th, 2025 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Got this one, I think, Soren (makes a change!) A write I thoroughly enjoyed.
Two small issues:
Never heard of stingless bees before (though the bees I’ve encountered haven’t been unfriendly….)
The communal behaviour is obviously wired in, and it may well be that the addition of reason and independent thought which has bought humanity down!! 🙃
February 8th, 2025 18:10
Secret of the hive
David Wakeling said:
Ya gotta love bees.Honey makes the hive go round.This is delightful read.I enjoyed reading
February 8th, 2025 15:49
David Wakeling said:
Ya gotta love bees.Honey makes the hive go round.This is delightful read.I enjoyed reading
February 8th, 2025 15:49
Secret of the hive
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, a wonderful message about the power of a community. Thank you for sharing
February 8th, 2025 13:36
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, a wonderful message about the power of a community. Thank you for sharing
February 8th, 2025 13:36
Secret of the hive
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, an extraordinary insect and you have given us the reason why they are also queens. Superb. 🐝 🌹 The richness is right here my friend.
February 8th, 2025 13:19
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, an extraordinary insect and you have given us the reason why they are also queens. Superb. 🐝 🌹 The richness is right here my friend.
February 8th, 2025 13:19
Secret of the hive
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, Your poem masterfully reveals stingless bees\' extraordinary harmony and synergy, showcasing their community-driven spirit and the transformative power of unity over individual pursuits. You illuminate the bees\' unique lifestyle, focusing on the breathtaking beauty of their existence rather than their honey production. You seem to aim to inspire a deeper appreciation for the vital importance of community, cooperation, and the awe-inspiring beauty of life in the natural world, encouraging me as the reader to marvel at the intricate relationships within the ecosystem.
February 8th, 2025 09:48
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, Your poem masterfully reveals stingless bees\' extraordinary harmony and synergy, showcasing their community-driven spirit and the transformative power of unity over individual pursuits. You illuminate the bees\' unique lifestyle, focusing on the breathtaking beauty of their existence rather than their honey production. You seem to aim to inspire a deeper appreciation for the vital importance of community, cooperation, and the awe-inspiring beauty of life in the natural world, encouraging me as the reader to marvel at the intricate relationships within the ecosystem.
February 8th, 2025 09:48
Secret of the hive
Poetic Licence said:
For me a interesting and enjoyable read as there is a lot to admire and learn from the way nature lives and looks after itself. Bees are a wonderful self sufficient community but they are also a dictatorship, with severe punishment for falling out of line. Still a lovely write
February 8th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
For me a interesting and enjoyable read as there is a lot to admire and learn from the way nature lives and looks after itself. Bees are a wonderful self sufficient community but they are also a dictatorship, with severe punishment for falling out of line. Still a lovely write
February 8th, 2025 08:18
Secret of the hive
aDarkerMind said:
the individual will survive....
lets hope one day we will all learn from the harmony of bees.
a most exceptional write Soren.
February 8th, 2025 06:32
aDarkerMind said:
the individual will survive....
lets hope one day we will all learn from the harmony of bees.
a most exceptional write Soren.
February 8th, 2025 06:32
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