Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Rocky Lagou said:
The way you’ve described this cancerous eating at the human soul is evocative. Very poignant and masterfully written as usual 🤍
November 1st, 2025 09:31
Rocky Lagou said:
The way you’ve described this cancerous eating at the human soul is evocative. Very poignant and masterfully written as usual 🤍
November 1st, 2025 09:31
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time, pain, and pretense erode beneath the skin. It’s elegiac, unsettling, and true. Very well done and, of course, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time, pain, and pretense erode beneath the skin. It’s elegiac, unsettling, and true. Very well done and, of course, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:59
Empty
Lorenz said:
All these words thrown into the season of ghosts that convey the beauty of emptiness ...
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Lorenz said:
All these words thrown into the season of ghosts that convey the beauty of emptiness ...
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Empty
Paul Bell said:
It\'s good to know we\'re all going back to dust.
Makes you want to get out there and conquer the world.
Maybe get breakfast first.
November 1st, 2025 04:24
Paul Bell said:
It\'s good to know we\'re all going back to dust.
Makes you want to get out there and conquer the world.
Maybe get breakfast first.
November 1st, 2025 04:24
Solo climbing
Aman 12 said:
Chalked hand writing on granite..both tense and sparse.
November 1st, 2025 03:54
Aman 12 said:
Chalked hand writing on granite..both tense and sparse.
November 1st, 2025 03:54
Solo climbing
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all watch our steps as we go through life soren.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all watch our steps as we go through life soren.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:57
Solo climbing
Rocky Lagou said:
The sibilance in this poem has me stressing the “s” of every word I’m saying now. It’s lingering ahhh!!! I love it!
November 1st, 2025 01:40
Rocky Lagou said:
The sibilance in this poem has me stressing the “s” of every word I’m saying now. It’s lingering ahhh!!! I love it!
November 1st, 2025 01:40
Solo climbing
Kevin Hulme said:
Reads like a Metaphor for living from day to day.
Good one.
October 31st, 2025 19:39
Kevin Hulme said:
Reads like a Metaphor for living from day to day.
Good one.
October 31st, 2025 19:39
Solo climbing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that too…that moment when control gives way, and all that’s left is gravity and grace. You capture it with beautiful precision. Well done, and Happy Halloween, my friend! 🎃👻🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that too…that moment when control gives way, and all that’s left is gravity and grace. You capture it with beautiful precision. Well done, and Happy Halloween, my friend! 🎃👻🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:25
Solo climbing
arqios said:
This one really captures the stark beauty and danger of climbing, Soren; every line feels like it’s balanced on the edge of a slip. I like how the fall at the end isn’t just physical but existential, like disappearing into nothingness. It reads less like a sport and more like a metaphor for taking risks in life where one wrong move can erase everything. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 08:08
arqios said:
This one really captures the stark beauty and danger of climbing, Soren; every line feels like it’s balanced on the edge of a slip. I like how the fall at the end isn’t just physical but existential, like disappearing into nothingness. It reads less like a sport and more like a metaphor for taking risks in life where one wrong move can erase everything. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 08:08
Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full of quiet awe. You remind us that even storms can cradle us in peace. 🗣️💭🌍🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full of quiet awe. You remind us that even storms can cradle us in peace. 🗣️💭🌍🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:43
Solo climbing
Paul Bell said:
Could be life in a line.
It doesn\'t matter how much you prepare. If the outside force is against you, it\'s against you.
Best laid plans and all that. This is why I delegate.
October 31st, 2025 07:15
Paul Bell said:
Could be life in a line.
It doesn\'t matter how much you prepare. If the outside force is against you, it\'s against you.
Best laid plans and all that. This is why I delegate.
October 31st, 2025 07:15
Rain
arqios said:
I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or threatening. Here the rain feels almost maternal, of wrapping, sheltering, singing you to sleep. That last image of fears turning to “dark ash” really lands, like the storm has burned away the day’s weight and left only quiet. It’s a gentle reminder that sometimes the wildest weather is also the safest place to rest. 🙏🕊️
October 30th, 2025 20:29
arqios said:
I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or threatening. Here the rain feels almost maternal, of wrapping, sheltering, singing you to sleep. That last image of fears turning to “dark ash” really lands, like the storm has burned away the day’s weight and left only quiet. It’s a gentle reminder that sometimes the wildest weather is also the safest place to rest. 🙏🕊️
October 30th, 2025 20:29
Reaper
Kenny O\'Donnell said:
Short but very expressive and introspective. Very nice
October 30th, 2025 15:17
Kenny O\'Donnell said:
Short but very expressive and introspective. Very nice
October 30th, 2025 15:17
Halloween
AuburnScribbler said:
I love the uneasiness of this rhythm structure, that clearly fits the words that are written. Though, from line five, it reads like a killer rap, of which I very much enjoyed.
I agree with what this poem, and previous readers comments, question. With the purity of a certain faith, do the dead appreciate this?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
October 30th, 2025 14:39
AuburnScribbler said:
I love the uneasiness of this rhythm structure, that clearly fits the words that are written. Though, from line five, it reads like a killer rap, of which I very much enjoyed.
I agree with what this poem, and previous readers comments, question. With the purity of a certain faith, do the dead appreciate this?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
October 30th, 2025 14:39
Rain
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the announcement of an impending apocalypse !
(Am I being too pessimistic ?)
October 30th, 2025 11:22
Lorenz said:
It sounds like the announcement of an impending apocalypse !
(Am I being too pessimistic ?)
October 30th, 2025 11:22
Rain
Bustillos said:
That is such a beautiful, optimistic, and romantic poem!
October 30th, 2025 06:25
Bustillos said:
That is such a beautiful, optimistic, and romantic poem!
October 30th, 2025 06:25
Goodbye
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret my heart is with you, no matter how long you have had a special friend, could have been a week or 50 years the point is they were and always will be special. A beautiful write my dear friend. 🌹
October 30th, 2025 05:58
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret my heart is with you, no matter how long you have had a special friend, could have been a week or 50 years the point is they were and always will be special. A beautiful write my dear friend. 🌹
October 30th, 2025 05:58
Enlightenment
Neville said:
For those who might follow me here, take note, for herein there lies truest meaning to questions so oft sought .. In truth we both arrive and depart naked and with nothing owned .. sprinkled with a touch of zen .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍👍
October 30th, 2025 01:54
Neville said:
For those who might follow me here, take note, for herein there lies truest meaning to questions so oft sought .. In truth we both arrive and depart naked and with nothing owned .. sprinkled with a touch of zen .. perhaps .. Neville 😎👍👍
October 30th, 2025 01:54
Enlightenment
Kevin Hulme said:
So deep this Poem, and a serious message.
Well Said.
October 29th, 2025 19:55
Kevin Hulme said:
So deep this Poem, and a serious message.
Well Said.
October 29th, 2025 19:55
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