Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The Maid
Soman Ragavan said:
The ageing process is a most striking thing. When you compare someone\'s pictures in old age and in young age, you would never believe the transformation, the wreckage that age creates. The wrinkles come from nowhere, the skin sags.... It has been said that after 50 everything heads south. All things start sagging about us. Perhaps there is a cold logic for the ageing process. Generations have to succeed each other, to make room for new ones. This ensures the survival of the race.
June 13th, 2025 06:24
Soman Ragavan said:
The ageing process is a most striking thing. When you compare someone\'s pictures in old age and in young age, you would never believe the transformation, the wreckage that age creates. The wrinkles come from nowhere, the skin sags.... It has been said that after 50 everything heads south. All things start sagging about us. Perhaps there is a cold logic for the ageing process. Generations have to succeed each other, to make room for new ones. This ensures the survival of the race.
June 13th, 2025 06:24
The Maid
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, SB. In NY, it is 6, and I make my bed when I get up. At least one thing was done successfully today.
June 13th, 2025 06:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, SB. In NY, it is 6, and I make my bed when I get up. At least one thing was done successfully today.
June 13th, 2025 06:01
The Maid
Doggerel Dave said:
Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through what should have been my afternoon nap....đź‘Ť
Faved
June 13th, 2025 05:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through what should have been my afternoon nap....đź‘Ť
Faved
June 13th, 2025 05:47
The Maid
NafisaSB said:
Enjoyed the play on the word made/maid. Nice poem that encompasses the full span of life- fantastic
June 13th, 2025 04:42
NafisaSB said:
Enjoyed the play on the word made/maid. Nice poem that encompasses the full span of life- fantastic
June 13th, 2025 04:42
The Maid
David Wakeling said:
This was clever and fun.Made me smile.Wonderful word play on maid and made.Excellent
June 13th, 2025 04:09
David Wakeling said:
This was clever and fun.Made me smile.Wonderful word play on maid and made.Excellent
June 13th, 2025 04:09
The Maid
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true—
from milk to love to rest, each phase shines through.
June 13th, 2025 03:35
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true—
from milk to love to rest, each phase shines through.
June 13th, 2025 03:35
The secret inside out
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites attract soren. Fine words.
Andy
June 13th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites attract soren. Fine words.
Andy
June 13th, 2025 01:20
Double
Tom Dylan said:
A fine poem on an intriguing topic. The amount of times people encounter the double of people they know. Maybe there is something in it.
June 12th, 2025 06:44
Tom Dylan said:
A fine poem on an intriguing topic. The amount of times people encounter the double of people they know. Maybe there is something in it.
June 12th, 2025 06:44
The secret inside out
Friendship said:
Well done, Soren. Your poem explores the intricate relationship between simplicity and complexity, suggesting that they are interdependent and that one cannot exist without the other. It contemplates the nature of existence, the interplay of light and darkness, and the paradoxes inherent in freedom and restriction. You seem to revolve around philosophical concepts of existence, duality, and the interconnectedness of opposites. It examines how chaos and order, movement and stillness, restriction and freedom coexist and influence one another. Your poem also serves as a meditation on the nature of understanding and perception.
June 12th, 2025 06:31
Friendship said:
Well done, Soren. Your poem explores the intricate relationship between simplicity and complexity, suggesting that they are interdependent and that one cannot exist without the other. It contemplates the nature of existence, the interplay of light and darkness, and the paradoxes inherent in freedom and restriction. You seem to revolve around philosophical concepts of existence, duality, and the interconnectedness of opposites. It examines how chaos and order, movement and stillness, restriction and freedom coexist and influence one another. Your poem also serves as a meditation on the nature of understanding and perception.
June 12th, 2025 06:31
The secret inside out
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very well written, they are not things people would normally see, but when see it laid out like this, it\'s so obvious, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very well written, they are not things people would normally see, but when see it laid out like this, it\'s so obvious, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 04:49
The secret inside out
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a strong exploration of the contrary nature of realty. From simplicity to complexity end with one and many.This is quite a thoughtful approach to this eternal problem. Is reality real or is it made up of unreality.This made me think.Excellent
June 12th, 2025 04:13
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a strong exploration of the contrary nature of realty. From simplicity to complexity end with one and many.This is quite a thoughtful approach to this eternal problem. Is reality real or is it made up of unreality.This made me think.Excellent
June 12th, 2025 04:13
The secret inside out
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Nice Insight on dualities
June 12th, 2025 03:40
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
Nice Insight on dualities
June 12th, 2025 03:40
What you can\'t accept in yourself
John Prophet said:
“ Control seen as a tool to command a world seen as cruel....” so true…..
June 11th, 2025 14:57
John Prophet said:
“ Control seen as a tool to command a world seen as cruel....” so true…..
June 11th, 2025 14:57
What you can\'t accept in yourself
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does destroy lives. Some end up living alone like a hermit. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2025 12:57
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does destroy lives. Some end up living alone like a hermit. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2025 12:57
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Reta said:
Such an interesting structure and a very intriguing read. Well done.
June 11th, 2025 12:13
Reta said:
Such an interesting structure and a very intriguing read. Well done.
June 11th, 2025 12:13
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Damaso said:
\"Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide... ...................it\'s here.\" I have to say, my friend, it shook my head this morning. Thanks so much for sharing. One of my favorites! Cheers
June 11th, 2025 07:42
Damaso said:
\"Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide... ...................it\'s here.\" I have to say, my friend, it shook my head this morning. Thanks so much for sharing. One of my favorites! Cheers
June 11th, 2025 07:42
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Friendship said:
The poem explores the themes of insecurity, distrust, and the cyclical nature of fear and suspicion in human relationships. It delves into how personal insecurities can manifest as distrust towards others, leading to a defensive and often hostile approach to social interactions. You address the internal struggles stemming from a lack of self-acceptance and the resultant inability to trust others. It presents a psychological landscape where fear of abandonment and betrayal drives individuals to act defensively, often leading to isolation and conflict.
June 11th, 2025 06:40
Friendship said:
The poem explores the themes of insecurity, distrust, and the cyclical nature of fear and suspicion in human relationships. It delves into how personal insecurities can manifest as distrust towards others, leading to a defensive and often hostile approach to social interactions. You address the internal struggles stemming from a lack of self-acceptance and the resultant inability to trust others. It presents a psychological landscape where fear of abandonment and betrayal drives individuals to act defensively, often leading to isolation and conflict.
June 11th, 2025 06:40
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Salvia.S said:
Thoughtful and truthful with haunting rhythm. Very well written!
June 11th, 2025 06:04
Salvia.S said:
Thoughtful and truthful with haunting rhythm. Very well written!
June 11th, 2025 06:04
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Poetic Licence said:
A very intriguing write, we have them insecurities some of us in bucket loads, and we should protect ourselves better against them, as they can so easily be our downfall, really enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 04:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very intriguing write, we have them insecurities some of us in bucket loads, and we should protect ourselves better against them, as they can so easily be our downfall, really enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 04:38
What you can\'t accept in yourself
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an interesting new style.It resembles a List of contents of a book. Ranging from Suspicion, insecurity and trust issue and there origins.It is however a little sinister in that it ends with the need for Protection.Fascinating piece.Made me stop and think
June 11th, 2025 04:08
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an interesting new style.It resembles a List of contents of a book. Ranging from Suspicion, insecurity and trust issue and there origins.It is however a little sinister in that it ends with the need for Protection.Fascinating piece.Made me stop and think
June 11th, 2025 04:08
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