Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The bed
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you\'re able to write and even in historical events as time passes no matter whose eyes it sees through very well written
November 6th, 2025 11:15
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you\'re able to write and even in historical events as time passes no matter whose eyes it sees through very well written
November 6th, 2025 11:15
Once
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy trinity, imho. Every stanza bends logic to confession. A hell of a ride, my friend. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy trinity, imho. Every stanza bends logic to confession. A hell of a ride, my friend. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:43
Once
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
ElizabethMoroz said:
Merging the comical with the profound in that signature rhyming disposition , a fave for me and much enjoyed the read, Sincerely, Elizabeth
November 6th, 2025 06:37
Once
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
Just been told my ailment is not life threatening - that means I\'ve got to put up with myself for a few years yet - however this superb surrealist write helps make it worthwhile.
November 6th, 2025 05:20
Once
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Where does life get to?
Yesterday I was young, and now the stairs are attacking me.
Okay, just found an online potion that takes 50 years off you, I\'m sorted.
November 6th, 2025 04:32
The garden
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is changing Soren and the weather is doing so bringing more problems to our world. Fine words.
Andy
November 6th, 2025 02:44
Empty
arqios said:
Oh boy, that’s an excellent makes 5. That’s a terrible slip up on my part. Apologies 🕊️🙏🏻
November 5th, 2025 23:51
arqios said:
Oh boy, that’s an excellent makes 5. That’s a terrible slip up on my part. Apologies 🕊️🙏🏻
November 5th, 2025 23:51
The garden
NinjaGirl said:
\"Born of a man\'s pride\" This is so true, very well-written and such an important message!
November 5th, 2025 20:31
NinjaGirl said:
\"Born of a man\'s pride\" This is so true, very well-written and such an important message!
November 5th, 2025 20:31
They came
arqios said:
Oh my! I hope your foot is doing better. I imagined the retreat indoors was to retrieve cans of bug spray for a Rambo offensive. But that\'s just me. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:52
arqios said:
Oh my! I hope your foot is doing better. I imagined the retreat indoors was to retrieve cans of bug spray for a Rambo offensive. But that\'s just me. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:52
Thief, priest and engineer
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
arqios said:
This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and reason. They make the story feel like a parable, and that final moment where the engineer’s knowledge seals his fate is both ironic and darkly funny. A much enjoyed, sharp little poem that balances history with humour. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:35
Be as
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
arqios said:
Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge. That would bring a flow and calm beauty and grace. Thanks for this superbly thoughtful poem. 🙏🕊️
November 5th, 2025 18:31
The garden
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
arqios said:
The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw and evocative vision! I feel the lamenting of innocence and the critique on what pride and greed have done to our world. 🕊️🙏
November 5th, 2025 18:25
The garden
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the garden of life, enjoyed the write
November 5th, 2025 12:21
The garden
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The world is changing before our eyes. Even in Britain, farmers will complain of overly warm weather, rain at the wrong time.
I think we now realise, what one country does can impact on countries thousand of miles away.
The Amazon rain forest is a prime example, it breathes for us.
November 5th, 2025 07:44
The garden
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, some lovely things too, of what to feed KP. \'Behave, you get worse,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:20
Be as
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder that water brings to all lives.
Andy
November 5th, 2025 02:16
Be as
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently we made up of so much Water.
An enjoyable Read.
November 4th, 2025 19:52
Be as
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
Water is such a fundamental part of human life, very beautiful write!
November 4th, 2025 16:44
Be as
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an exquisite paradox. That single image captures purity and humility both. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:25
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