Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



King of day queen of night
arqios said:

Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Donโ€™t know enough of that science to calculate.

November 3rd, 2024 07:27

King of day queen of night
Teddy.15 said:

One of the finest ever nature poems I\'ve ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

November 3rd, 2024 07:10

King of day queen of night
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting read soren. I like it. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

November 3rd, 2024 05:00

King of day queen of night
Neville said:



Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..

November 3rd, 2024 04:39

Birth of a poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.

Andy

November 3rd, 2024 02:18

Birth of a poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!

November 3rd, 2024 01:22

Birth of a poem
Dan Williams said:

Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. \"Born from mind\'s womb, words lost in menses\" sums that up nicely. Fine work.

November 2nd, 2024 23:38

Birth of a poem
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 2nd, 2024 21:16

Birth of a poem
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! ๐ŸŒž
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

November 2nd, 2024 20:41

Birth of a poem
John Prophet said:

Well done! Nice work.

November 2nd, 2024 17:31

Birth of a poem
David Wakeling said:

This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi amigo

November 2nd, 2024 17:08

Birth of a poem
Neville said:



darn well conceived if you ask me .. Neville

November 2nd, 2024 10:05

Birth of a poem
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 2nd, 2024 09:21

Birth of a poem
arqios said:

Wide is the poetโ€™s scope and larger still is poetryโ€™s reach!

November 2nd, 2024 08:21

Birth of a poem
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

November 2nd, 2024 06:10

Birth of a poem
Teddy.15 said:

The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one

How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.

Superbly crafter dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

November 2nd, 2024 04:50

Glimpses of the past
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful memories soren, they mean so much to us.

Andy

November 2nd, 2024 02:10

Glimpses of the past
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem
and thoughts of the past!! ๐Ÿ‘
Fond mem\'ries that
will forever last!! ๐Ÿ‘
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

November 1st, 2024 10:07

Glimpses of the past
arqios said:

Thatโ€™s the beauty of having made memories! Itโ€™s a stash that can be retrieved at any time and for most occasions ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

November 1st, 2024 07:01

Glimpses of the past
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful poem about the joy of memories. In fact memories are everything. Well done

November 1st, 2024 06:13

Glimpses of the past
Teddy.15 said:

A glimpse of the past, some like me, have the black ink of your sepia, but here I see your mother and a beautiful moment of serenity, what we have up there in our memory box is a miracle, sometimes beautiful other times terrifying. A wonderful theme you have shared this week. ๐ŸŒน

November 1st, 2024 05:03

Bear
Goldfinch60 said:

Luckily there are no bears in the UK soren but there is an advert on TV which is relevant.

https://youtu.be/5gNT0SWf3Ls?si=12bYltztgpzITwcz

Andy

November 1st, 2024 01:50

Bear
Thomas W Case said:

What a picture you paint. Great work.

October 31st, 2024 23:54

Bear
Dan Williams said:

Pretty clever for a consumed soul. Very well done, do I need to add \'as usual\'?

October 31st, 2024 23:46

Bear
MendedFences27 said:

Thank you, Andy

October 31st, 2024 12:13

Bear
Kerry said:

It\'s a real pleasure to discover your poems...and your biography. The only thing I can think of to say is...try riding an ostridge! You\'d be surprised haha

October 31st, 2024 10:10

Sepia dreams
Tom Dylan said:

A really fine write, Soren. Wonderful stuff.

October 31st, 2024 06:53

Bear
Doggerel Dave said:

Can hardly bear to half believe, given your biography, Soren, that your story might bear closer inspectionโ€ฆ.

October 31st, 2024 05:57

Bear
Neville said:


Yep, it doesn\'t bear thinking about .. does it .. you can run, climb and try to hide but that bare behind you is gonna tear ya butt write off in the end .. or even before it .. they aint nuthin like they were back in goldilocks .. ๐Ÿป๐Ÿปโ€โ„๏ธ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿง๐Ÿ‘

October 31st, 2024 05:48

Bear
arqios said:

Quite a horror this entanglement and one which I could not possibly bear!

October 31st, 2024 05:27



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