Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A slow fly
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
A slow fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
A slow fly
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Suicide an twa
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
A slow fly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
A slow fly
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Suicide an twa
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Don\'t mix them up
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
Suicide an twa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
Suicide an twa
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, a love story never to be resolved... Well done, dear friend.
September 16th, 2025 09:32
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, a love story never to be resolved... Well done, dear friend.
September 16th, 2025 09:32
Suicide an twa
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme of this is complicated and artistic in style. It beckons sadness yet companionship. I enjoyed, very much.
September 16th, 2025 09:24
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme of this is complicated and artistic in style. It beckons sadness yet companionship. I enjoyed, very much.
September 16th, 2025 09:24
Suicide an twa
Kevin Hulme said:
Loves a strange old bird. The Intensity can be frightening. Good one.
September 16th, 2025 08:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Loves a strange old bird. The Intensity can be frightening. Good one.
September 16th, 2025 08:30
Suicide an twa
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of love as an intense, often destructive force that can transcend the physical realm, leading to a tragic union in death. It suggests that the strength of their emotional bond drives the lovers to take extreme measures to remain together, viewing death as a means of escaping a world they deem profane. Yet the poet addresses the topic of suicide in the context of a romantic relationship, highlighting how love can lead individuals to make irreversible decisions. It reflects on the pain of separation and the desire for eternal unity, even at the cost of life. The complexities of love and the pain of separation can lead to desperate actions.
September 16th, 2025 08:24
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of love as an intense, often destructive force that can transcend the physical realm, leading to a tragic union in death. It suggests that the strength of their emotional bond drives the lovers to take extreme measures to remain together, viewing death as a means of escaping a world they deem profane. Yet the poet addresses the topic of suicide in the context of a romantic relationship, highlighting how love can lead individuals to make irreversible decisions. It reflects on the pain of separation and the desire for eternal unity, even at the cost of life. The complexities of love and the pain of separation can lead to desperate actions.
September 16th, 2025 08:24
Flowering tree
arqios said:
That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻
September 16th, 2025 08:13
arqios said:
That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Fallen honor
Keyara S Trotman said:
It’s the “ Shit on on our statues” 😂😂😂😂 overall beautifully written and the background is giving
September 16th, 2025 08:11
Keyara S Trotman said:
It’s the “ Shit on on our statues” 😂😂😂😂 overall beautifully written and the background is giving
September 16th, 2025 08:11
Suicide an twa
Teddy.15 said:
As you well know, one of my favourite subjects, and yes I can never make head not tail of it either because each soul has their own definition 🌹 wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 16th, 2025 07:54
Teddy.15 said:
As you well know, one of my favourite subjects, and yes I can never make head not tail of it either because each soul has their own definition 🌹 wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 16th, 2025 07:54
Suicide an twa
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It hits like a teain in full speed. Displaces thoughts, yet slows down one to immerse him into a contemplative silence.
September 16th, 2025 07:46
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It hits like a teain in full speed. Displaces thoughts, yet slows down one to immerse him into a contemplative silence.
September 16th, 2025 07:46
Suicide an twa
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant poem as always! I think myself that love is like a rashomond effect in that it means different things to different people depending on your perspective to the reader this love may same intense but to others including the characters you have wrote it will be understandable!
Great write!
September 16th, 2025 06:27
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant poem as always! I think myself that love is like a rashomond effect in that it means different things to different people depending on your perspective to the reader this love may same intense but to others including the characters you have wrote it will be understandable!
Great write!
September 16th, 2025 06:27
Suicide an twa
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A dark joke - Suicide? Ooh no, it\'ll be bad for me health!\' Heehee.
September 16th, 2025 05:59
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A dark joke - Suicide? Ooh no, it\'ll be bad for me health!\' Heehee.
September 16th, 2025 05:59
Suicide an twa
Paul Bell said:
Love sure can be toxic, and yet the word love doesn\'t convey this.
Probably why the end is eternal. Like it.
September 16th, 2025 04:49
Paul Bell said:
Love sure can be toxic, and yet the word love doesn\'t convey this.
Probably why the end is eternal. Like it.
September 16th, 2025 04:49
Night spells
William Hromada said:
We seem complicated to others, but aren\'t we so simple in expression?
September 16th, 2025 04:37
William Hromada said:
We seem complicated to others, but aren\'t we so simple in expression?
September 16th, 2025 04:37
Lost paper thoughts
William Hromada said:
It seems so much is lost in time.
September 16th, 2025 04:32
William Hromada said:
It seems so much is lost in time.
September 16th, 2025 04:32
Lost paper thoughts
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and just the perfect title.
September 16th, 2025 02:04
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and just the perfect title.
September 16th, 2025 02:04
Waves against a lighthouse
NafisaSB said:
beautiful sentimental and well constructed message. throws light on the feelings shared - fantastic
September 16th, 2025 00:35
NafisaSB said:
beautiful sentimental and well constructed message. throws light on the feelings shared - fantastic
September 16th, 2025 00:35
Fallen honor
NinjaGirl said:
Was not expecting that last line...but it\'s true! What do we care about, really? Well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:51
NinjaGirl said:
Was not expecting that last line...but it\'s true! What do we care about, really? Well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:51
Fallen honor
Keeter C said:
Interesting.
Is it so in a spirit realm?
Or just in the world of matter?
September 15th, 2025 17:45
Keeter C said:
Interesting.
Is it so in a spirit realm?
Or just in the world of matter?
September 15th, 2025 17:45
Fallen honor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There is so much shit on this statue everything is starting to look a greenish-white. LOL! What a fantastic poem, Soren! Fantastic! Wow! 🤩 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There is so much shit on this statue everything is starting to look a greenish-white. LOL! What a fantastic poem, Soren! Fantastic! Wow! 🤩 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:53
Lost paper thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands heavy—the idea of memory’s assassination by fire is devastating. Each line feels like ash still smoldering. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done, my friend!
September 15th, 2025 12:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands heavy—the idea of memory’s assassination by fire is devastating. Each line feels like ash still smoldering. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done, my friend!
September 15th, 2025 12:12
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