Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Poseidon\'s bones
Teddy.15 said:
So very poetic and I\'m going to ask if may be so bold to let me in as I\'m not sparky on this one! π€£
December 16th, 2024 05:15
Teddy.15 said:
So very poetic and I\'m going to ask if may be so bold to let me in as I\'m not sparky on this one! π€£
December 16th, 2024 05:15
Poseidon\'s bones
Neville said:
Holy smoke .. that\'s far from elementary my dear sb .. wot would Moriarty think of thee .. I still have my fathers old un and occasionally sniff on it .. ππ
December 16th, 2024 04:58
Neville said:
Holy smoke .. that\'s far from elementary my dear sb .. wot would Moriarty think of thee .. I still have my fathers old un and occasionally sniff on it .. ππ
December 16th, 2024 04:58
How
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always come out of the shadows into the glory of the light soren.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always come out of the shadows into the glory of the light soren.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:48
How
NinjaGirl said:
The kicker is both are true, but you choose what to see
December 15th, 2024 20:08
NinjaGirl said:
The kicker is both are true, but you choose what to see
December 15th, 2024 20:08
How
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
What can I say
except may you have
many a sunny day, ππ
Great read my friend!!
Rock on! Loved it! ππ΅πΆπΆπΆ
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:02
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
What can I say
except may you have
many a sunny day, ππ
Great read my friend!!
Rock on! Loved it! ππ΅πΆπΆπΆ
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:02
How
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful contradictions. More than one poem here. Fantastic work Soren. Much enjoyed.
December 15th, 2024 13:40
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful contradictions. More than one poem here. Fantastic work Soren. Much enjoyed.
December 15th, 2024 13:40
How
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the sense of duality, imperfections in perfection. Not sure if I got it right. Lovely poem!
December 15th, 2024 09:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the sense of duality, imperfections in perfection. Not sure if I got it right. Lovely poem!
December 15th, 2024 09:39
How
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is both one poem full of juxtaposition, and two separate poems woven into one. I absolutely love this piece. Each poem tells something opposite from the other...and together. π€― Well done, my friend. An easy fave for sure. πΉπ
December 15th, 2024 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is both one poem full of juxtaposition, and two separate poems woven into one. I absolutely love this piece. Each poem tells something opposite from the other...and together. π€― Well done, my friend. An easy fave for sure. πΉπ
December 15th, 2024 07:50
How
Neville said:
Impressively crafted and likewise captivating .. Loved from the off but then .. not sure which visit exactly, maybe my third, it hit me & I was near blinded by their conjoint beauty .. @ leastπ―/π―in my book & truly .. Neville πππ
December 15th, 2024 05:22
Neville said:
Impressively crafted and likewise captivating .. Loved from the off but then .. not sure which visit exactly, maybe my third, it hit me & I was near blinded by their conjoint beauty .. @ leastπ―/π―in my book & truly .. Neville πππ
December 15th, 2024 05:22
How
Teddy.15 said:
Two glorious poems woven in, how very clever πΉ wonderful dear sorrenbarret πΉ
December 15th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Two glorious poems woven in, how very clever πΉ wonderful dear sorrenbarret πΉ
December 15th, 2024 04:51
How
Caring dove said:
Interesting and engaging writing
I liked reading this
December 15th, 2024 03:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting and engaging writing
I liked reading this
December 15th, 2024 03:37
Peace on earth, good will
Doggerel Dave said:
Tree as a symbol, a personification perhaps, of all that many see as a vision and hope for, seems pretty valid Soren. The irony in the last line is not lost on me.
Thanks.
December 14th, 2024 22:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Tree as a symbol, a personification perhaps, of all that many see as a vision and hope for, seems pretty valid Soren. The irony in the last line is not lost on me.
Thanks.
December 14th, 2024 22:42
Fisherman\'s song
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and fisherman\'s song! π π
Eloquently penned my friend!
Made me wanna sing along! π΅ πΆ πΆ
Thanks for sharing, loved it! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:44
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and fisherman\'s song! π π
Eloquently penned my friend!
Made me wanna sing along! π΅ πΆ πΆ
Thanks for sharing, loved it! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:44
Peace on earth, good will
arqios said:
Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the mirror that faces us.... straight in the eye. Sometimes I know we are all of us to blame.
December 14th, 2024 18:34
arqios said:
Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the mirror that faces us.... straight in the eye. Sometimes I know we are all of us to blame.
December 14th, 2024 18:34
Fisherman\'s song
David Wakeling said:
So many vivid images here. So well constructed. A hint of Jesus as well
December 14th, 2024 15:06
David Wakeling said:
So many vivid images here. So well constructed. A hint of Jesus as well
December 14th, 2024 15:06
Fisherman\'s song
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville ππ
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville ππ
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Fisherman\'s song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. πΉπ Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. πΉπ Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
Fisherman\'s song
Teddy.15 said:
Language so very carefully chosen for each image kudos my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
December 14th, 2024 08:54
Teddy.15 said:
Language so very carefully chosen for each image kudos my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
December 14th, 2024 08:54
Fisherman\'s song
rin said:
It was a thought-provoking poem. I may also need to consider what can be seen from the shadows of my thoughts.
December 14th, 2024 04:51
rin said:
It was a thought-provoking poem. I may also need to consider what can be seen from the shadows of my thoughts.
December 14th, 2024 04:51
Peace on earth, good will
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, trees are so important in our lives.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, trees are so important in our lives.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:44
Peace on earth, good will
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I literally had goosebumps. It effortlessly painted a picture of hope. Perhaps, that\'s the need of the day. Yes we are killing nature, but I have hope in her resilience
December 14th, 2024 01:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I literally had goosebumps. It effortlessly painted a picture of hope. Perhaps, that\'s the need of the day. Yes we are killing nature, but I have hope in her resilience
December 14th, 2024 01:35
Mist
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Peace on earth, good will
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! π
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! π
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
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