Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gratitude
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP could do with being grateful. I don\'t understand why she complains. I been very generous, giving her double helpings of sewage for her dinners these days. heehee.
February 15th, 2026 03:33
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP could do with being grateful. I don\'t understand why she complains. I been very generous, giving her double helpings of sewage for her dinners these days. heehee.
February 15th, 2026 03:33
Innocence
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words about the diversity of life soren.
Andy
February 15th, 2026 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words about the diversity of life soren.
Andy
February 15th, 2026 02:49
Innocence
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write, raising rather burning and urgent issues of human existence. best wishes,
February 15th, 2026 01:52
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write, raising rather burning and urgent issues of human existence. best wishes,
February 15th, 2026 01:52
Innocence
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.There is so much here to appreciate.Was there any good.We will never know.I like to think that there was.This is a two sided poem.There are many opposites fiery romance and love that failed,Wishes made and lost.I beleive this poem raises the ultimate questions of contrariness. An enjoyable read .Made me think
February 14th, 2026 19:46
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.There is so much here to appreciate.Was there any good.We will never know.I like to think that there was.This is a two sided poem.There are many opposites fiery romance and love that failed,Wishes made and lost.I beleive this poem raises the ultimate questions of contrariness. An enjoyable read .Made me think
February 14th, 2026 19:46
Innocence
Kevin Hulme said:
Love it. Everything was Magical through a Childhood\'s eyes . And then the Cold Wet Blanket of reality.
February 14th, 2026 10:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Love it. Everything was Magical through a Childhood\'s eyes . And then the Cold Wet Blanket of reality.
February 14th, 2026 10:43
Innocence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s reflection here without bitterness. From Santa nights to first love to belief itself…you trace the arc of innocence with clarity. That final plea to be beguiled again feels vulnerable and brave. It reminds us that wonder is not foolish…it’s human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s reflection here without bitterness. From Santa nights to first love to belief itself…you trace the arc of innocence with clarity. That final plea to be beguiled again feels vulnerable and brave. It reminds us that wonder is not foolish…it’s human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:38
Innocence
Teddy.15 said:
The very eyes of a child, if we are lucky enough to know our innocence as a child many do not. A. Gorgeous poem of reflection. 🌹
February 14th, 2026 08:42
Teddy.15 said:
The very eyes of a child, if we are lucky enough to know our innocence as a child many do not. A. Gorgeous poem of reflection. 🌹
February 14th, 2026 08:42
Innocence
Paul Bell said:
Yes, you\'ve got to get back to childhood where responsibility is left to others.
Now get out there and bag that impossible present all the kids want.
Just realised that present is, just transfer money into my account, bloody weans.
February 14th, 2026 05:51
Paul Bell said:
Yes, you\'ve got to get back to childhood where responsibility is left to others.
Now get out there and bag that impossible present all the kids want.
Just realised that present is, just transfer money into my account, bloody weans.
February 14th, 2026 05:51
Innocence
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to live that magic again, within all the pressures, disillusionments, and responsibilities of being an adult? Great question. And prayer, Soren.
February 14th, 2026 04:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to live that magic again, within all the pressures, disillusionments, and responsibilities of being an adult? Great question. And prayer, Soren.
February 14th, 2026 04:47
Car of rust
Aman 12 said:
everyone gets attached to cars or vehicles of their choice.. they become like companions...not just things... very well written and the rhymes make it sound like a ballad..
February 14th, 2026 01:54
Aman 12 said:
everyone gets attached to cars or vehicles of their choice.. they become like companions...not just things... very well written and the rhymes make it sound like a ballad..
February 14th, 2026 01:54
Tree and the lily
Aman 12 said:
oak and lily stand ins for strength and fragility... this felt like a fable.
February 14th, 2026 01:51
Aman 12 said:
oak and lily stand ins for strength and fragility... this felt like a fable.
February 14th, 2026 01:51
Awakening
David Wakeling said:
Its an amazing poem about an amazing thing sleep.In our sleep where do we go.Is it all fantasy.Is it alll lies.Only the tooth fairy knows.An enjoyable read
February 13th, 2026 22:56
David Wakeling said:
Its an amazing poem about an amazing thing sleep.In our sleep where do we go.Is it all fantasy.Is it alll lies.Only the tooth fairy knows.An enjoyable read
February 13th, 2026 22:56
Tree and the lily
RSM0812 said:
The lillie to me signifies a loved one sick but still with a very acute mind. A liittle car and love goes a long way.
February 13th, 2026 22:06
RSM0812 said:
The lillie to me signifies a loved one sick but still with a very acute mind. A liittle car and love goes a long way.
February 13th, 2026 22:06
Tree and the lily
Doggerel Dave said:
No satisfying some Lilys it seems...Thanks for the warning, Soren.
PS: there was a small matter with Lily.....never mind...
February 13th, 2026 19:43
Doggerel Dave said:
No satisfying some Lilys it seems...Thanks for the warning, Soren.
PS: there was a small matter with Lily.....never mind...
February 13th, 2026 19:43
Tree and the lily
Allie561 said:
A very lovely poem Soren. I liked how the oak represents a stable shade and the lily wants to feel the sun, but maybe with all that sun it would wither away. A good representation of how sometimes to be protected, we have to do things we may not like (at least that’s my interpretation). Great imagery as well, one of my favorites.
February 13th, 2026 18:13
Allie561 said:
A very lovely poem Soren. I liked how the oak represents a stable shade and the lily wants to feel the sun, but maybe with all that sun it would wither away. A good representation of how sometimes to be protected, we have to do things we may not like (at least that’s my interpretation). Great imagery as well, one of my favorites.
February 13th, 2026 18:13
Tree and the lily
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads as fable wrapped in nature. The oak’s shadow becomes both guardian and oppressor, and the lily’s protest adds emotional texture. The shifting shade and the closing plea suggest more beneath the meadow surface. Thoughtful little parable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads as fable wrapped in nature. The oak’s shadow becomes both guardian and oppressor, and the lily’s protest adds emotional texture. The shifting shade and the closing plea suggest more beneath the meadow surface. Thoughtful little parable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:37
Tree and the lily
Soman Ragavan said:
This is like a fable of the French writer La Fontaine. We don\'t know the value of what we have until we lose it.... In four lines the poem has passed a valuable message to all humanity. We prize not what we have until we lose it...
February 13th, 2026 09:07
Soman Ragavan said:
This is like a fable of the French writer La Fontaine. We don\'t know the value of what we have until we lose it.... In four lines the poem has passed a valuable message to all humanity. We prize not what we have until we lose it...
February 13th, 2026 09:07
Tree and the lily
Paul Bell said:
That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.
Wonder if the tree mentioned to the Lily. Don\'t worry you won\'t be here long.
February 13th, 2026 06:23
Paul Bell said:
That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.
Wonder if the tree mentioned to the Lily. Don\'t worry you won\'t be here long.
February 13th, 2026 06:23
Tree and the lily
Teddy.15 said:
How beautiful dear sorrenbarret, Lily\'s are certainly delicate underneath the great oak. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 05:10
Teddy.15 said:
How beautiful dear sorrenbarret, Lily\'s are certainly delicate underneath the great oak. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 05:10
Car of rust
Paul Bell said:
Cars like the woman all go south at some point, and no paint job or overhaul is going to fix it.
Still got the pictures and the memories and that keeps you going.
Do like the smell of new cars, not sure if I could break a new woman in mind you.
February 13th, 2026 04:21
Paul Bell said:
Cars like the woman all go south at some point, and no paint job or overhaul is going to fix it.
Still got the pictures and the memories and that keeps you going.
Do like the smell of new cars, not sure if I could break a new woman in mind you.
February 13th, 2026 04:21
Car of rust
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting attached to a car can happen soren.
Andy
February 13th, 2026 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Getting attached to a car can happen soren.
Andy
February 13th, 2026 02:48
Car of rust
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve just reminded me that there is something to be said for public transport. The picture of you stood beside a heap of metal with your memories is complete, Soren.
February 12th, 2026 17:47
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve just reminded me that there is something to be said for public transport. The picture of you stood beside a heap of metal with your memories is complete, Soren.
February 12th, 2026 17:47
Car of rust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the layered deterioration reads like more than machinery…it feels autobiographical in spirit. The junkyard priest blessing its end, the overheating climb, the unseen lease…all of it builds toward that final line of refusal. Worn down, but still loved. Powerful metaphor, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the layered deterioration reads like more than machinery…it feels autobiographical in spirit. The junkyard priest blessing its end, the overheating climb, the unseen lease…all of it builds toward that final line of refusal. Worn down, but still loved. Powerful metaphor, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:09
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