Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Deep slumber
Teddy.15 said:

A famous spin on life and death and all that\'s inside this sandwich of life. ๐ŸŒน

November 12th, 2025 14:13

Insomnia of life
Luke Bensing said:

thank you!

November 12th, 2025 11:04

Deep slumber
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
BOO! I shout. Now why did I have to come along and wake ya up there?! lol.

November 12th, 2025 10:10

Deep slumber
arqios said:

I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

November 12th, 2025 07:55

Spinoza\'s god
Keyara S Trotman said:

Are there any times that youโ€™ve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren ๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿ’•

November 12th, 2025 06:55

Awakening
rebellion_in_sanity said:

A definite fave.

November 12th, 2025 05:53

Solo climbing
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work

November 12th, 2025 04:34

Deep slumber
Lorenz said:

Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....

November 12th, 2025 04:27

Spinoza\'s god
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. Thanks for sharing.

November 12th, 2025 03:30

Spinoza\'s god
Kevin Hulme said:

I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.

November 11th, 2025 20:08

Spinoza\'s god
Neville said:


The way you have so masterfully captured our unique oneness is not beyond me .. because I feel so much a part of it .. Still, I sincerely hope you get my drift through this brain fog of mine .. and as I anxiously wait to hop on board one of the next incoming waves .. Take care and write on while I\'m taking a break ๐Ÿ˜Žโญโญโญโญโญ๐Ÿ‘

November 11th, 2025 11:35

Glow
Teddy.15 said:

Your spark never fades dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

November 11th, 2025 11:30

Spinoza\'s god
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something larger. Youโ€™ve written the purest form of belonging. That line...โ€œAs each wave falls another beginsโ€...embodies the whole poem for me. Life and spirit, rising and returning, perfectly said, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

November 11th, 2025 09:32

Spinoza\'s god
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

November 11th, 2025 09:23

Glow
NafisaSB said:

I hope you never suffer from writerโ€™s block; but continue to write and share some beautiful poems ๐Ÿ‘

November 11th, 2025 08:41

Spinoza\'s god
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, sorenbarrett.

November 11th, 2025 07:52

Be as
Aman 12 said:

its so difficult to be like water. gentle and fierce at the same time.

November 11th, 2025 06:46

Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Aman 12 said:

love without consent is just a conquest

November 11th, 2025 06:43

Spinoza\'s god
Demar Desu said:

Have you written a poem titled this before?

November 11th, 2025 05:52

Spinoza\'s god
Paul Bell said:

I\'m not too sure Spinoza was wrong in his thinking, everything does point that way.
It\'s just the evolution bit, humans moved a bit too fast in natures garden.

November 11th, 2025 04:42

Spinoza\'s god
orchidee said:

Yes, KP\'s in the air I breathe. Pity it\'s stale and stagnant, and whiffs of botox! heehee. Did you know that Spinoza chappie?

November 11th, 2025 03:29

Glow
Goldfinch60 said:

The light will always come back soren.

Andy

November 11th, 2025 02:19

Perfume of war
PerditaRose said:

Or could this be about WW1? I\'m not up on my history, but that\'s why God made Google. Like I said, it\'s thought-provoking.

November 10th, 2025 21:55

Perfume of war
PerditaRose said:

Your imagery is thought-provoking. It seems to me that you might be vegetarian?

November 10th, 2025 21:41

Glow
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is the art within the artโ€ฆa poem about the breath that keeps poetry alive. Tender, elemental, and quietly brilliant. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ

November 10th, 2025 21:09

Glow
Kevin Hulme said:

A fine Poem on the Writing Process. Enjoyed.

November 10th, 2025 20:17

Glow
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Erm, I\'m not gonna throw the baby out with the bath-water - or rather, I\'m not gonna chuck myself on the bonfire with those leaves, twigs, etc.
This speaks to me, not of burning one\'s poems, but stoking up a fire in our minds maybe, if we\'ve become dry, as in writers block.
KP will have to wait. I can\'t feed her boiled leaves and twigs for supper as I need them for me bonfire! lol.

November 10th, 2025 13:05

Glow
NinjaGirl said:

Taking it very literally-fire is fantastic for inspiration because it is so pretty! I do not know if you have ever written a poem to burn, but if you have not you totally should.

November 10th, 2025 13:04

Relationships, everything has a price
NafisaSB said:

I think it all depends on who the buyer is- where the person is living, and whether itโ€™s bought for use or as a status symbol ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜

November 10th, 2025 12:02

Awakening
NafisaSB said:

Indeed our dreams are more beautiful than the harsh reality we face when we wake up. Beautifully crafted โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘

November 10th, 2025 11:34



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