Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Insignificant
MendedFences27 said:

It\'s impossible to be small enough \" to not exist in reality.\" All one must do is accept reality to become a part of it. Those were my thoughts after reading your poem. It\'s beautiful piece of poetry. I loved it.

July 17th, 2025 12:59

Insignificant
orchidee said:

A lottery ticket win for some becomes ALL the universe to them. Especially if KP wins and shares none with me. Boohoo! lol.

July 17th, 2025 11:22

Insignificant
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

Heart touching words here. Always love your work.

July 17th, 2025 10:09

Mr. Cotter
DLewis88 said:

This is a wonderful poem you\'ve written. I enjoy reading it.

July 17th, 2025 09:24

Insignificant
Salvia.S said:

This is powerful in its simplicity. It captures the feeling of being small in a vast universe with striking, thoughtful imagery. Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘


July 17th, 2025 07:36

Insignificant
arqios said:

Such a beautifully haunting poem; full of cosmic imagery and existential weight! ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

July 17th, 2025 07:30

Insignificant
Friendship said:

A powerful poem, Insignificant. I know this feeling very well - it\'s a feeling that you don\'t belong in this universe, also projected by others onto you. It\'s a feeling of being a ghost and shame. The poem \"Insignificant\" explores themes of existentialism and the feeling of insignificance in the vastness of the universe. It reflects on the smallness of individual existence in comparison to the grand scale of nature and the cosmos. The poet explores notions of identity, worth, and the search for meaning in a world that often makes one feel insignificant. The poet seeks to provoke thought and introspection regarding one\'s identity and the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own significance in a seemingly indifferent universe.

July 17th, 2025 06:05

Insignificant
Tristan Robert Lange said:

๐Ÿคฏ Wow. I mean, I am not going to even add anything to this other than. Wow. ๐Ÿคฏ Seriously deep, with the kind of reflection that causes goosebumps to rise as one gets lost in the cosmos of profundity. Seriously, a beautifully done reflection and a fave. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

July 17th, 2025 05:56

Insignificant
Priya Tomar said:

Very well.
Deep thoughts always find place in your poetry.


July 17th, 2025 04:58

Insignificant
Poetic Licence said:

A puzzle I cannot answer but I sometimes wish, enjoyed the read

July 17th, 2025 04:47

Insignificant
Teddy.15 said:

Brought a tear to my eye, absolutely poetry at its finest ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ’œ

July 17th, 2025 04:13

Insignificant
Demar Desu said:

How important one must be to exist in reality? Good poemโ€ฆit takes one grain to start the beach

July 17th, 2025 03:09

Synchronicity
Goldfinch60 said:

There is a theory that there are infinite timelines soren and that everything we nearly did is in one of those time lines in our other lives.

Andy

July 17th, 2025 01:13

Synchronicity
Kevin Hulme said:

I\'ve being telling Marty this for years: Doc Brown.
Well put.

July 16th, 2025 20:41

Synchronicity
Bella Shepard said:

The simultaneous existence of past, present and future is on the minds of philosophers and scientists these days, as well as poets. We balked when daylight savings time came to be, so now whatever will we do with this conundrum. A delightful and eternaly puzzling write my friend.

July 16th, 2025 12:32

Synchronicity
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. You nailed it.

July 16th, 2025 10:27

Synchronicity
Caring dove said:

The other day I was talking about seeing foxes .. I was out in a cafe talking to my dad and sister , next minute there was a fox outside .. and Asked my sister what that word meant and she said โ€˜ synchronicity โ€˜

Yes Iโ€™ve seen a fox there , one time before .. and can see several in the garden .. where I live



July 16th, 2025 08:06

Synchronicity
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, youโ€™ve taken the blender blade to chronology and somehow blended it into clarity. The way you move through time here...fluid, fragmented, looping...it reminds me of the \"gravity wells\" we create just by living. A stunning piece of metaphysical poetry. Wonderful job, friend. A fave! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

July 16th, 2025 08:02

Synchronicity
Teddy.15 said:

Exquisite and so very true. ๐ŸŒน The poetry on here today has spoken loudly in my heart and it brings me such peace, thank you dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

July 16th, 2025 07:45

Synchronicity
Friendship said:

Your poem \"Synchronicity\" explores the concept of time as a non-linear and cyclical experience, suggesting that past, present, and future are interconnected. It reflects on the limitations of human perception in understanding the vastness of time and existence. You seem to aim to provoke thought about the nature of time and our relationship with it, encouraging readers to consider their place within the continuum of history and existence. It invites reflection on the cyclical nature of life and the inevitability of timeโ€™s passage.

July 16th, 2025 07:15

Double
ElizabethMoroz said:

Love this one - great scientific metaphysical and physical and philosophical exploration conveying concepts so cleverly throughout the piece. This one was a joy to read- your concise ability to deliver complex subject matter with brevity is deeply admirable. Well done again Sir! Sincerely, Elizabeth

July 16th, 2025 07:12

Probability
ElizabethMoroz said:

Rich thematic depth and expansive philosophical inquiry . I love the concept of their being โ€œno yearโ€ in your exploration of time and the human condition. Thankyou this one is soul enriching . Sincerely, Elizabeth

July 16th, 2025 07:08

Visit with a dream
ElizabethMoroz said:

Again such great rhyme in here. I love the turns of phrase you use. Is it indicative of a certain culture or ethnicity pardon my ignorance or is it just colloquial creative expressions that you are using? The abbreviated words really fit the rhyme scheme well and the overall descriptive imagery and warmth in the tonal ideas of the poem had me pondering about friendship and stew & human relationships and the warmth of good hospitality. Thankyou thoroughly enjoyed this composition. Sincerely, Elizabeth

July 16th, 2025 07:04

Synchronicity
Tony Grannell said:

Hello Soren,

Tomorrow never comes and yesterday never goes so how can they exist in the vacuum of a life lived in the spin of a bottle. Once again your brain is working overtime and how we the readers benefit and enjoy the fruits of your toil. Keep it up my, good fellow.

Wishing you the very best,

Tony.

July 16th, 2025 06:17

Synchronicity
Poetic Licence said:

Is this suggestion that time is already allocated and will be what it is destined to be, so no point chasing it, probably not but it\'s an enjoyable puzzle to read

July 16th, 2025 05:28

Equal but not the same
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren about todays complex understanding of sexual identity.

Andy

July 16th, 2025 00:55

Equal but not the same
Tony36 said:

BEAUTIFUL

July 15th, 2025 19:01

What is perfect
Bella Mae Marshall said:

beautiful. simply beautiful poem from start to finish. could read it a hundred times

July 15th, 2025 17:10

Equal but not the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Soren, this is quite clever and complex...riddled with paradox and metaphor, yet rooted in something real. And in it, youโ€™re asking the reader to reimagine strength, purpose, and identity through unconventional forms. Itโ€™s not just wordplay...itโ€™s worldview. Nicely done, my dear friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

July 15th, 2025 14:26

Equal but not the same
Teddy.15 said:

Brave Bravo Bravo. So incredibly poetic and a theme that is so deeply comforting today. We should all accept and be accepted. ๐ŸŒน

July 15th, 2025 11:16



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