Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The way I like it
Teddy.15 said:
I know I was born many years after you dear sorrenbarret but I\'m still old enough to appreciate the simplicity that life once had to offer, love anything that doesn\'t have technology attached! 🌹
January 26th, 2026 04:22
Teddy.15 said:
I know I was born many years after you dear sorrenbarret but I\'m still old enough to appreciate the simplicity that life once had to offer, love anything that doesn\'t have technology attached! 🌹
January 26th, 2026 04:22
From the veins of our fathers
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unseen dangers can be avoided in time soren. Very good words.
Andy
January 26th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unseen dangers can be avoided in time soren. Very good words.
Andy
January 26th, 2026 02:47
From the veins of our fathers
cellinic said:
A serious and well-substantiated write about useful and imminent things! Best wishes, SB!
January 26th, 2026 01:32
cellinic said:
A serious and well-substantiated write about useful and imminent things! Best wishes, SB!
January 26th, 2026 01:32
Poems from the mist
aDarkerMind said:
am even more impressed with this one Soren...
every line a gem my friend.
January 25th, 2026 20:50
aDarkerMind said:
am even more impressed with this one Soren...
every line a gem my friend.
January 25th, 2026 20:50
From the veins of our fathers
aDarkerMind said:
The wind whispers a warning taste in the mouth...
that line alone is worth more than just a favourite.
as impressed as always my friend.
January 25th, 2026 20:28
aDarkerMind said:
The wind whispers a warning taste in the mouth...
that line alone is worth more than just a favourite.
as impressed as always my friend.
January 25th, 2026 20:28
From the veins of our fathers
lunarchloedip said:
this one has a really nice rhythm to it :)
January 25th, 2026 18:36
lunarchloedip said:
this one has a really nice rhythm to it :)
January 25th, 2026 18:36
From the veins of our fathers
Allie561 said:
There are many things we can learn from others including nature. I remember being told that if you could see the lighter sides of leaves, rain would be coming. And I’m sure most of us know the “Red sky at night sailors delight, red sky in morning sailors take warning.” It’s definitely a good idea to pay attention to what’s going on around us. Great poem Soren, you never disappoint.
January 25th, 2026 14:47
Allie561 said:
There are many things we can learn from others including nature. I remember being told that if you could see the lighter sides of leaves, rain would be coming. And I’m sure most of us know the “Red sky at night sailors delight, red sky in morning sailors take warning.” It’s definitely a good idea to pay attention to what’s going on around us. Great poem Soren, you never disappoint.
January 25th, 2026 14:47
From the veins of our fathers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem weaves instinct, nature, and foresight into a single current. From ancestral memory to subtle bodily warning, it reminds us that we are still part of the old rhythms. Quietly prophetic and deeply grounded. Beautiful work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem weaves instinct, nature, and foresight into a single current. From ancestral memory to subtle bodily warning, it reminds us that we are still part of the old rhythms. Quietly prophetic and deeply grounded. Beautiful work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:45
From the veins of our fathers
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really enjoyed reading your sonnet, sorenbarrett. Well crafted.
January 25th, 2026 09:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really enjoyed reading your sonnet, sorenbarrett. Well crafted.
January 25th, 2026 09:03
From the veins of our fathers
Paul Bell said:
I sort of recall our resident weather forecaster telling us there was no hurricane coming.
Then the hurricane hit, and the dogs abuse he got that day, they still talk about it now.
Humans, animals, intelligence, I wonder.
January 25th, 2026 08:52
Paul Bell said:
I sort of recall our resident weather forecaster telling us there was no hurricane coming.
Then the hurricane hit, and the dogs abuse he got that day, they still talk about it now.
Humans, animals, intelligence, I wonder.
January 25th, 2026 08:52
From the veins of our fathers
Thomas W Case said:
This feels ancestral, like knowledge older than language stirring awake.
You tap into instinct here, and it hums with quiet authority.
January 25th, 2026 07:34
Thomas W Case said:
This feels ancestral, like knowledge older than language stirring awake.
You tap into instinct here, and it hums with quiet authority.
January 25th, 2026 07:34
From the veins of our fathers
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the deep connection between humanity and nature, highlighting the instinctual and ancestral knowledge that resides within us. It emphasizes the idea that people possess an innate awareness of their environment, shaped by ancestral experiences and memories.
January 25th, 2026 07:11
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the deep connection between humanity and nature, highlighting the instinctual and ancestral knowledge that resides within us. It emphasizes the idea that people possess an innate awareness of their environment, shaped by ancestral experiences and memories.
January 25th, 2026 07:11
From the veins of our fathers
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now, this rhyme and the one I just put out was a \"coincidence\"! Loved this one, Soren.
January 25th, 2026 06:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now, this rhyme and the one I just put out was a \"coincidence\"! Loved this one, Soren.
January 25th, 2026 06:28
From the veins of our fathers
Soman Ragavan said:
Ants and birds know in advance coming changes of weather. Ants build higher. They also get energetic, hurrying along. Birds get frantic and stock up on food, knowing it might get scarce. Snails can smell coming storms and they climb up walls, avoiding the ground. The higher they rise, the heavier will be the rain, eg during cyclones. I have personally noticed all this around me.
In the US there was a case of a child who was travelling with his parents in the car. Passing in front of a house he said he felt something was wrong in there. Back at home he insisted that they go back and check. It turned out that someone was sick or injured and needed medical help…
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January 25th, 2026 05:51
Soman Ragavan said:
Ants and birds know in advance coming changes of weather. Ants build higher. They also get energetic, hurrying along. Birds get frantic and stock up on food, knowing it might get scarce. Snails can smell coming storms and they climb up walls, avoiding the ground. The higher they rise, the heavier will be the rain, eg during cyclones. I have personally noticed all this around me.
In the US there was a case of a child who was travelling with his parents in the car. Passing in front of a house he said he felt something was wrong in there. Back at home he insisted that they go back and check. It turned out that someone was sick or injured and needed medical help…
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January 25th, 2026 05:51
Poems from the mist
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, that mist will always come round again and again.
Andy
January 25th, 2026 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, that mist will always come round again and again.
Andy
January 25th, 2026 02:55
Poems from the mist
arqios said:
That’s the ideal font size, large print for me all the way 👍🏻🙏🏻
January 24th, 2026 22:03
arqios said:
That’s the ideal font size, large print for me all the way 👍🏻🙏🏻
January 24th, 2026 22:03
Second bow
Aman 12 said:
gentle surrealism..have never heard of rainbow as a collapsing arc...perhaps beauty evaporates.
January 24th, 2026 21:40
Aman 12 said:
gentle surrealism..have never heard of rainbow as a collapsing arc...perhaps beauty evaporates.
January 24th, 2026 21:40
Poems from the mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a strong piece, my friend. The ebb between clarity and obscurity mirrors the inner weather so well, and the image of undrinkable abundance gives the whole piece its emotional gravity. It is contemplative, unresolved, and deeply human. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a strong piece, my friend. The ebb between clarity and obscurity mirrors the inner weather so well, and the image of undrinkable abundance gives the whole piece its emotional gravity. It is contemplative, unresolved, and deeply human. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:10
Poems from the mist
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the ephemeral nature of inspiration and creativity, likened to mist and rain. The poet experiences moments of clarity and confusion, suggesting that creative thoughts can be elusive and difficult to grasp. reflects the relationship between inspiration (the \"cloud\" and \"rain\") and the struggle to capture and refine those ideas (the need for purification and filtration).
January 24th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the ephemeral nature of inspiration and creativity, likened to mist and rain. The poet experiences moments of clarity and confusion, suggesting that creative thoughts can be elusive and difficult to grasp. reflects the relationship between inspiration (the \"cloud\" and \"rain\") and the struggle to capture and refine those ideas (the need for purification and filtration).
January 24th, 2026 08:50
Poems from the mist
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes words are like torrents of rain and the pen rocks.
Most times bang on four in the morning, it forms, and any sensible git would write it down, but you don\'t cos it was so clear.
Don\'t have to tell you the rest. lol
January 24th, 2026 05:58
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes words are like torrents of rain and the pen rocks.
Most times bang on four in the morning, it forms, and any sensible git would write it down, but you don\'t cos it was so clear.
Don\'t have to tell you the rest. lol
January 24th, 2026 05:58
Poems from the mist
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet notes that there is plenty of water but it must be treated before being drunk. “So much water but none I can drink…”
“Water, water everywhere,
Nor any drop to drink…”
--Coleridge (1772-1834) : “The Ancient Mariner.” The mariners were on a boat at sea. They could see plenty of sea water but none that they had to drink.
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January 24th, 2026 04:08
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet notes that there is plenty of water but it must be treated before being drunk. “So much water but none I can drink…”
“Water, water everywhere,
Nor any drop to drink…”
--Coleridge (1772-1834) : “The Ancient Mariner.” The mariners were on a boat at sea. They could see plenty of sea water but none that they had to drink.
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January 24th, 2026 04:08
Poems from the mist
Teddy.15 said:
Just when there\'s one right there puffff, it\'s gone, I always have these moments when I\'m most tired or in bed, I try to think of a word that will remind me of the thoughts in the morning, but actually that doesn\'t work either, my muse can be a bitch but a gal has to sleep, super imagery as always. 🌹
January 24th, 2026 03:52
Teddy.15 said:
Just when there\'s one right there puffff, it\'s gone, I always have these moments when I\'m most tired or in bed, I try to think of a word that will remind me of the thoughts in the morning, but actually that doesn\'t work either, my muse can be a bitch but a gal has to sleep, super imagery as always. 🌹
January 24th, 2026 03:52
Choices
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have been lucky in that I had the love of my life for 38 years before she passed into heaven and then Mary came into my life which has given me another love of my life.
Andy
January 24th, 2026 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have been lucky in that I had the love of my life for 38 years before she passed into heaven and then Mary came into my life which has given me another love of my life.
Andy
January 24th, 2026 02:51
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