Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Freedom
peto said:

Always enjoy reading from your pen soren
\"But it\'s sister passion \" is a stunning line

August 5th, 2026 11:30

State of mind
DLewis88 said:

It\'s wonderful. You did a great job on the writing.

August 5th, 2026 09:51

Freedom
Paul Bell said:

What price is passion if love ebbs away.
What price is freedom if you open your mouth to loud.
What you think you have, in reality you don\'t.

August 5th, 2026 09:01

Freedom
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:

Often, we mistake desire for love, though there are as many kinds of love as there are boundless hearts.
A thought-provoking poem, especially in an age where everything is monetized and bartered...

August 5th, 2026 08:36

Freedom
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 5th, 2026 08:21

Freedom
arqios said:

Some things we strive and gravitate towards but cannot own, ultimately tendered by the currency of passion. And that seems what we daily trade in πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

August 5th, 2026 07:16

Freedom
Demar Desu said:

Loving the rhyme scheme Soren

August 5th, 2026 07:02

Freedom
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll vote for freedom anytime, Soren; but as you say...

On love? No comment.

August 5th, 2026 06:14

Freedom
Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret, yes I agree with this clever write. Passion can indeed be sold but love cannot.

- Syd πŸ„

August 5th, 2026 04:43

Freedom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Most things have a price my friend

August 5th, 2026 03:55

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Neville said:


Ouch\' I know a damned good hit man who owes me a favour .. just shout if you need anything okay ..

August 5th, 2026 01:35

Precarious
boot said:

Cool...I\'m an old fisherman and take it literally

August 4th, 2026 22:34

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Kevin Hulme said:

Is that Brando the Man or one of his Characters?
On a different note: Someone on Television a few years back mentioned that since Peter Falk had a Glass Eye; did that mean the Character of Columbo had a Glass Eye? Was it mentioned?
As usual a Good Write.

August 4th, 2026 18:51

Once upon a playful loss
Nerd said:

So touching I absolutely adore the last line.

August 4th, 2026 15:17

Out of sight
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:

You have a talent of writing so much in less words it\'s amazing. Absolute fav πŸŽ€

August 4th, 2026 15:09

Where
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:

It\'s a lovely poem. Love how you displayed the transition between today and tomorrow. Amazing work πŸŽ€

August 4th, 2026 15:08

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Teddy.15 said:

Life itself embroidered into poetry. Superb 🌹

August 4th, 2026 10:39

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Paul Bell said:

Betrayal\'s a strange one and it always catches you on the hoof.
Enemies you expect and are ready for, but the one beside you who betrays you is ten times worse than your enemy.
Probably why we go through life seeking vengence.

August 4th, 2026 08:55

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a dark and visceral piece, Soren. The devastation reaches far beyond the original violation…affecting trust, recollection, and every hollow attempt at reconciliation afterward. I know that terrain all too well. Outstanding poem, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 4th, 2026 08:13

State of mind
Joseph M Marion said:

This is so unique I pray you don\'t have cancer is what you\'re saying. I would break my heart and I would cry to lose someone I look up to so much

August 4th, 2026 08:12

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
orchidee said:

Good write Marlon, erm, SB. lol.

August 4th, 2026 07:23

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
arqios said:

Betrayal corrupts everything, memory, friendship, perception, etc. Forgiveness in that light becomes a performance that masks rage that never truly dies. Makes one wonder if we have become an angry culture.

August 4th, 2026 06:45

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Thomas W Case said:

This poem feels dark and visceral, weaving betrayal and decay into imagery that refuses to soften its edges. There’s a heavy, almost suffocating intensity here, where guilt and deception take root and grow into something inescapable.

August 4th, 2026 06:29

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Lorenz said:

Hmm...Improvise a table -turning seance with Marlon Brando is a risky business...

August 4th, 2026 06:09

A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

much enjoyed my friend, great descriptions

August 4th, 2026 03:22

Living power
Demar Desu said:

Geez Soren did you let out a fart and got inspired? Great poem old man

August 3rd, 2026 20:50

Living power
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a thought-provoking piece. I love the progression through myth, art, and poetry, all leading to those rare moments when a person seems to become one with their calling. It’s concise, yet it leaves the mind wandering long after the last line. Powerful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 3rd, 2026 17:42

Living power
Kevin Hulme said:

A Soldier turning into God. The ability to choose Life or Death.
The Idea to list People and Occupations to something one step higher was a good one
A fave for sure.


August 3rd, 2026 16:00

Be willing to give what you ask
Mystery\'s Creation said:

Hello.I hope You had a great Weekend and that this finds You well.
GREAT poem,evoking images that few are privy to.😒
You and Yours please have a great,safe,peaceful and cool Night and Week,best of luck to You and They and please continue to illuminate the World with Your talent and creativity.πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

August 3rd, 2026 13:55

Memories
hzugman said:

Very well done!

August 3rd, 2026 10:32

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