Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
I remember
Abhijith EP said:
Hello mr. Sorren I would like to appreciate your efforts in trying encourage budding poets on this site. You are awesome.
September 7th, 2026 06:11
Abhijith EP said:
Hello mr. Sorren I would like to appreciate your efforts in trying encourage budding poets on this site. You are awesome.
September 7th, 2026 06:11
I remember
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
though brief, i attend to the astounding ability of your poetry forged in the crucible of an adept word smith in my humble opinion one of the best scribes online, whose popularity a testament of such talent.
September 7th, 2026 05:54
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
though brief, i attend to the astounding ability of your poetry forged in the crucible of an adept word smith in my humble opinion one of the best scribes online, whose popularity a testament of such talent.
September 7th, 2026 05:54
I remember
Lorenz said:
A bleak picture tinged with the sepia hues of misery...
September 7th, 2026 05:22
Lorenz said:
A bleak picture tinged with the sepia hues of misery...
September 7th, 2026 05:22
I remember
arqios said:
I too have vague memories of a similar scene. Now they could not be revisited even if one wanted to but only in memory and poetry. Thanks for bringing me back. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
September 7th, 2026 04:56
arqios said:
I too have vague memories of a similar scene. Now they could not be revisited even if one wanted to but only in memory and poetry. Thanks for bringing me back. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
September 7th, 2026 04:56
I remember
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a time of basics finely worded
September 7th, 2026 03:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a time of basics finely worded
September 7th, 2026 03:53
Dinner show
Kevin Hulme said:
After reading other Comments: I get the drift of the Poem. Good Write.
September 6th, 2026 19:41
Kevin Hulme said:
After reading other Comments: I get the drift of the Poem. Good Write.
September 6th, 2026 19:41
Forgotten
Jamiano said:
Words at rest while the heat consumes them. Pseudo Poe fancy.Great imaginative function in a poem.
September 6th, 2026 17:45
Jamiano said:
Words at rest while the heat consumes them. Pseudo Poe fancy.Great imaginative function in a poem.
September 6th, 2026 17:45
Dinner show
Friendship said:
I must say this was brilliantly designed. At 1st I thought you were writing about meatloaf for dinner. I hate and despise the look and Taste of meatloaf itself, yet this poem was brilliantly written. Your poem uses a playful, colloquial tone, with familiar names and cultural references (Jack Black, Chris Farley, Zero Mostel) that create a sense of relatability and humor. Words like \"bat out of hell\" and \"seductive nights\" evoke strong imagery and emotion, contributing to the poem\'s lively and whimsical nature.
September 6th, 2026 16:46
Friendship said:
I must say this was brilliantly designed. At 1st I thought you were writing about meatloaf for dinner. I hate and despise the look and Taste of meatloaf itself, yet this poem was brilliantly written. Your poem uses a playful, colloquial tone, with familiar names and cultural references (Jack Black, Chris Farley, Zero Mostel) that create a sense of relatability and humor. Words like \"bat out of hell\" and \"seductive nights\" evoke strong imagery and emotion, contributing to the poem\'s lively and whimsical nature.
September 6th, 2026 16:46
Dinner show
Jabberwocky said:
Everything is better with a pinch of Zero Mostel....
except maybe sex.
September 6th, 2026 14:58
Jabberwocky said:
Everything is better with a pinch of Zero Mostel....
except maybe sex.
September 6th, 2026 14:58
Dinner show
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this cracked me up. You turned a meatloaf recipe into a full-blown pop-culture casserole…and somehow it all cooks together. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this cracked me up. You turned a meatloaf recipe into a full-blown pop-culture casserole…and somehow it all cooks together. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:07
Dinner show
Neville said:
I think I got it the second time around .. well, two out of three aint bad, now is it .. Such a shame poor old Meat was taken way too soon .. Neville 🖤
September 6th, 2026 09:46
Neville said:
I think I got it the second time around .. well, two out of three aint bad, now is it .. Such a shame poor old Meat was taken way too soon .. Neville 🖤
September 6th, 2026 09:46
Dinner show
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn fun mash-up happening here, turning famous names and Meat Loaf song titles into the ingredients, cooking instructions, and aftermath of one hell of a musical meatloaf. The best part is how the recipe keeps escalating until “Paradise by the Dashboard Lights” and “next day’s fights” leave you with something that feels equal parts kitchen disaster, rock concert, and hangover.
September 6th, 2026 07:43
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn fun mash-up happening here, turning famous names and Meat Loaf song titles into the ingredients, cooking instructions, and aftermath of one hell of a musical meatloaf. The best part is how the recipe keeps escalating until “Paradise by the Dashboard Lights” and “next day’s fights” leave you with something that feels equal parts kitchen disaster, rock concert, and hangover.
September 6th, 2026 07:43
Dinner show
Lorenz said:
We feel as if we\'re being pursued by this fascinating musical flavor !
September 6th, 2026 06:59
Lorenz said:
We feel as if we\'re being pursued by this fascinating musical flavor !
September 6th, 2026 06:59
Dinner show
arqios said:
Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double entendre of Meat Loaf.
September 6th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double entendre of Meat Loaf.
September 6th, 2026 06:52
Dinner show
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
methinks thee a genius or like a surgeon where every unspoken work an essential motion that fits the turning of the entire literary theatrical masterpiece.
September 6th, 2026 06:37
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
methinks thee a genius or like a surgeon where every unspoken work an essential motion that fits the turning of the entire literary theatrical masterpiece.
September 6th, 2026 06:37
Dinner show
soheil khodaparasti said:
I have to admit that I could not fully understand the poem initially because it contains so many cultural references. Once I looked into them, however, I realized how clever, intricate, and entertaining the poem is. Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double meaning of “Meat Loaf.” The references to Bat Out of Hell and Paradise by the Dashboard Light, together with the unexpected appearances of Jack Black, Chris Farley, and Zero Mostel, create a wonderfully absurd and playful effect. What initially seemed confusing to me turned out to be a highly imaginative and skillfully constructed piece of wordplay. I especially admire your ability to pack so many layers of meaning and humor into such a seemingly simple poem.
September 6th, 2026 05:07
soheil khodaparasti said:
I have to admit that I could not fully understand the poem initially because it contains so many cultural references. Once I looked into them, however, I realized how clever, intricate, and entertaining the poem is. Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double meaning of “Meat Loaf.” The references to Bat Out of Hell and Paradise by the Dashboard Light, together with the unexpected appearances of Jack Black, Chris Farley, and Zero Mostel, create a wonderfully absurd and playful effect. What initially seemed confusing to me turned out to be a highly imaginative and skillfully constructed piece of wordplay. I especially admire your ability to pack so many layers of meaning and humor into such a seemingly simple poem.
September 6th, 2026 05:07
Dinner show
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Point well made my friend, a good recipe
September 6th, 2026 04:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Point well made my friend, a good recipe
September 6th, 2026 04:21
A friend on wings
Goldfinch60 said:
A fine write about a beautiful insect soren.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
A fine write about a beautiful insect soren.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:56
A friend on wings
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
A friend on wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
A friend on wings
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
A friend on wings
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
A friend on wings
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Busted
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
Time
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
A friend on wings
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
A friend on wings
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
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