Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Precarious
Kevin Hulme said:

This could Sum-Up so many things, not just one. Apply it to whatever you think fit.
Good Write.

July 22nd, 2026 19:29

Precarious
8Blackwidow8 said:

(Before the balance of the pendulum turns over
A silent moment in the eye of a hurricane)

Well put here. I\'m such a fan already.

July 22nd, 2026 15:52

Precarious
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 22nd, 2026 12:30

Precarious
Paul Bell said:

The eye, the only part of the hurricane that\'s calm.
Seems sort of strange with such a destructive force.
A bit like Trump when he\'s sleeping.

July 22nd, 2026 11:15

Precarious
Lorenz said:

My damn autistic perspective is more inspired by the menacing tornado about to strike than the deep metaphor ...Really sorry !

July 22nd, 2026 08:51

Precarious
arqios said:

A dizzying ride for all in our global bedroom community 🙏🏻🕊️

July 22nd, 2026 05:40

Precarious
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I echo Teddys comments

July 22nd, 2026 05:21

Precarious
Teddy.15 said:

You just described every politician of our times 🤣 sorrenbarret your emotional poetry leaves me on the edge for sure. Kudos 🌹

July 22nd, 2026 03:43

Small things
Goldfinch60 said:

As they are from us all soren.

Andy

July 22nd, 2026 01:24

Out of sight
Samprikta Paul said:

Seems like a good memory, good one.

July 22nd, 2026 01:14

Small things
soheil khodaparasti said:

Profound in its simplicity. Unlike the physical traces—skin, hair, sweat, blood, and fingernails—the speaker’s thoughts are intangible fragments of himself that may persist through words or memory.

July 21st, 2026 22:50

Small things
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The mosquito really got me, Soren! Even the little bloodsucking bastards become unwilling archivists…flying off with a tiny piece of our existence. Wonderfully strange and thought-provoking work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 21st, 2026 20:17

Small things
Kevin Hulme said:

As I mentioned somewhere before. Apparently we may be breathing parts of the breath of Caesar. Or Cleopatra.
A good Write.

July 21st, 2026 18:45

Small things
Lorenz said:

we are nothing but this atomic theory within the unfathomable whole ...

July 21st, 2026 11:24

Small things
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 21st, 2026 11:04

Archetype of man
8Blackwidow8 said:

WOW. This is stunning. (His feet resting on a stolen stool of nature he claims as his own).

I love it when men write about men from an objective standpoint. This one is amazing.

July 21st, 2026 11:02

Small things
8Blackwidow8 said:

\"A word rides soundwaves in the wind
Faded thoughts I can\'t rescind\"

I like these lines the most, but the overall poem is beautiful. Well written.

July 21st, 2026 10:08

Small things
Thomas W Case said:

You scatter yourself like dust, and the world keeps every piece whether you mean it or not.
Gritty truth—nothing we are really disappears, it just changes hands.

July 21st, 2026 08:07

Small things
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery!!! Ok sorrenbarret you know I love you, but please less spit left on the pillow please 🤣

July 21st, 2026 07:29

Small things
Paul Bell said:

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
Is that the real end, or do we move in sound.
I suppose if we\'re scattered on earth, we sure move all around.

July 21st, 2026 06:54

Busted
NafisaSB said:

Poignant verse - touches the heart 🤔

July 21st, 2026 06:34

Out of sight
cully45 said:

Short and to the point. Nice one Soren.

July 21st, 2026 05:35

Conditional
Durdica Porobija said:

A parabolic metapoetic poem. How to value weak words and how to diligently nurture them – these seem to me the questions that remain unanswered. These are probably the doubts that haunt conscientious poets.

July 21st, 2026 05:33

Small things
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

definite fav

July 21st, 2026 04:01

No direction
Goldfinch60 said:

Those marks we leave in life can never be forgotten soren.

Andy

July 21st, 2026 00:57

Man
8Blackwidow8 said:

\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\"

This poem is great, and the ending verse really punctuated the whole poem.

July 20th, 2026 17:03

No direction
Kevin Hulme said:

I suppose we are all influenced by People we have met along with the knocks of life.
Good Write.

July 20th, 2026 15:20

No direction
soheil khodaparasti said:

Beautifully expressed. We are shaped by our choices, our actions, and the people around us.

July 20th, 2026 11:30

No direction
Neville said:



very cleva wordsmithing .. I feel like I\'ve just been set free from somewhere between a rock and a hard place .. what a journey that was from raw materials to finished product .. Neville

July 20th, 2026 11:24

No direction
Paul Bell said:

Sometimes we actually forget what is below us, and in reality there\'s millions of years packed in.
It\'s like when someone has modernised an old home, and you only see the real beauty when you expose the walls or the floor.


July 20th, 2026 09:23

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