Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The shape of a tree
Soman Ragavan said:

Making a statue is a brilliant idea Man has come across. It\'s a realistic rendition of what the person looked like. Statues carved out of stone and marble are more striking.

June 14th, 2026 20:37

Excuses
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 14th, 2026 14:12

Excuses
Lorenz said:

Sounds like seasonal laziness !

June 14th, 2026 08:42

Excuses
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, haha, you got me with this one. The excuses just keep piling up higher and higher until they become impossible not to laugh at. There is a lot of playful charm in this piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

June 14th, 2026 07:54

Emotion
NafisaSB said:

As they say the tongue kills faster than a gun- well written ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’

June 14th, 2026 07:42

Excuses
soheil khodaparasti said:

May your speaker one day find a season when neither the weather, nor the hour, nor anything else stands in the way of joy. A delightful and insightful poem.

June 14th, 2026 07:28

Excuses
Thomas W Case said:

Thereโ€™s a sly humor running through thisโ€”every excuse dressed up like principle, every dodge wearing a clean shirt.
It lands because weโ€™ve all heard that voice before, the one that swears itโ€™s willingโ€ฆ just not right now.

June 14th, 2026 07:11

Excuses
arqios said:

An excellent declarative dear friend ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

June 14th, 2026 06:54

Excuses
Friendship said:

Procrastination.

June 14th, 2026 06:49

Excuses
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, enjoyed

June 14th, 2026 03:59

Emotion
cellinic said:

That\'s a very emotional, deep and sincere statement, sometimes a bit provocative). A fave, my friend

June 14th, 2026 01:38

Emotion
Samprikta Paul said:

I love how you expressed various emotions to disruptive effects. Well written.


June 14th, 2026 00:18

Emotion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this really moved me. The progression from pressure to explosion feels painfully familiar, and the imagery captures how destructive words can become when anger takes the wheel. Short, sharp, and impactful. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

June 13th, 2026 22:34

Emotion
Kevin Hulme said:

Basically I\'m Basil Fawlty 24/7. Fine use of Words to describe Anger.

June 13th, 2026 18:53

Emotion
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 13th, 2026 11:32

Emotion
Lorenz said:

emotional addiction can seriously affect your mental health and turn you into poets !

June 13th, 2026 08:23

Emotion
arqios said:

Tempers do flare and even words fuel conflagration! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

June 13th, 2026 07:33

Poetry droppings
NafisaSB said:



June 13th, 2026 06:57

Poetry droppings
NafisaSB said:

Agree wholeheartedly with the topic presented so well in verse ๐Ÿค—

June 13th, 2026 06:57

Emotion
Friendship said:

This poem exudes intense violence and emotion, with the speaker harboring profound animosity, consistently displaying aggression while attempting to belittle others. Nonetheless, it underscores the significance of recognizing the potency of language and the necessity for emotional control to avoid causing harm through our words, serving as a cautionary reflection on the repercussions of letting anger dictate our expressions.

June 13th, 2026 06:54

Softly torn
NafisaSB said:

The duality is simply amazing and yet so true to life. Superb โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ’

June 13th, 2026 06:53

Emotion
Paul Bell said:

This is me on a Monday morning.
The litmus paper is lit leaving the house.
The first explosion comes when the mad neighbour continues part 96 of her life story.
By the time I find the train is cancelled I\'m on the moon.

June 13th, 2026 06:49

Emotion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a most explosive write, much enjoyed my friend

June 13th, 2026 04:36

Emotion
soheil khodaparasti said:

I like the conceptual unity emerging from imagery of pressure, explosion, and injury, which frames language as a physical and violent force.

June 13th, 2026 03:56

Softly torn
arqios said:

The world is moving too fast for me now. Itโ€™s all I can do to hang on and catch a glimpse of what isnโ€™t truly mine.

June 12th, 2026 19:17

Softly torn
Kevin Hulme said:

Seems theres always a down side to every Up.
Or Vise Versa. All works out the same.
Good one.

June 12th, 2026 18:50

Burnt perspectives
Donteatmecows said:

I enjoyed it! the baking analogy was good and i relate with the buyer it has an ick-factor when u find hair in something...it disgusted me out!

June 12th, 2026 16:48

Softly torn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a powerful piece. From roses to silver spoons to that uneasy ride at the end, it all feels like a reminder that every high carries its own risk and every comfort has its edge. That\'s a truth I\'ve bumped into more than once myself. Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

June 12th, 2026 13:06

Softly torn
Lorenz said:

Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?

June 12th, 2026 04:29

Softly torn
RSM0812 said:

Great imagery in few words. Enjoyed the read.

June 12th, 2026 03:46

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