Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
What\'s left
arqios said:
I’ve had my share of sleeping under the table both in play when younger and out of it in many more ways than is fit to remember. It can be said though that it’s always better with sheets🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 15:38
arqios said:
I’ve had my share of sleeping under the table both in play when younger and out of it in many more ways than is fit to remember. It can be said though that it’s always better with sheets🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 15:38
What\'s left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a sharp, stripped-down reflection…burned memories, spent dreams, and that final image of resting beneath a coffin lid table. It’s not subtle…it’s direct, and that’s what gives it its power. It reads like aftermath, not illusion. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a sharp, stripped-down reflection…burned memories, spent dreams, and that final image of resting beneath a coffin lid table. It’s not subtle…it’s direct, and that’s what gives it its power. It reads like aftermath, not illusion. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:47
What\'s left
Waiting for Silence said:
what left is
body without soul
heart without feelings
life without \"LIFE\"
March 24th, 2026 08:45
Waiting for Silence said:
what left is
body without soul
heart without feelings
life without \"LIFE\"
March 24th, 2026 08:45
What\'s left
Thomas W Case said:
The grit sticks to your teeth in this one—ash, cash, cheap wine—like life’s rough edges gnawing at the soul.
Even under that coffin lid, there’s a pulse left, a crooked heartbeat daring to keep counting.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
The grit sticks to your teeth in this one—ash, cash, cheap wine—like life’s rough edges gnawing at the soul.
Even under that coffin lid, there’s a pulse left, a crooked heartbeat daring to keep counting.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
What\'s left
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on... someone\'s....tombstone....☺️
March 24th, 2026 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on... someone\'s....tombstone....☺️
March 24th, 2026 05:11
What\'s left
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m in my 80s and this sure resonates - great write.
March 24th, 2026 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m in my 80s and this sure resonates - great write.
March 24th, 2026 04:34
What\'s left
Atticus_made said:
I can\'t say I fully understand it yet, I haven\'t been in these situations. However, I imagine if I would have been, I would be able to write a better comment! A great poem as always!
March 24th, 2026 03:25
Atticus_made said:
I can\'t say I fully understand it yet, I haven\'t been in these situations. However, I imagine if I would have been, I would be able to write a better comment! A great poem as always!
March 24th, 2026 03:25
Enchou sareta senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a hard question to answer and deal with afterwards.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a hard question to answer and deal with afterwards.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:14
Adrift
NafisaSB said:
what i see is also those who are cut off from the family are buffeted by the waves of life, and washed to a distant shore-spent and truly exhauseted..
March 23rd, 2026 23:24
NafisaSB said:
what i see is also those who are cut off from the family are buffeted by the waves of life, and washed to a distant shore-spent and truly exhauseted..
March 23rd, 2026 23:24
Enchou sareta senryu
Kevin Hulme said:
Could the Child that survived also forgive?
Thought provoking Poem.
March 23rd, 2026 20:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Could the Child that survived also forgive?
Thought provoking Poem.
March 23rd, 2026 20:36
Enchou sareta senryu
Friendship said:
This poem explores the moral and emotional turmoil of a parent faced with an impossible choice: saving one child over another. It delves into the profound guilt and psychological burden that such a decision would impose on any parent.
March 23rd, 2026 17:44
Friendship said:
This poem explores the moral and emotional turmoil of a parent faced with an impossible choice: saving one child over another. It delves into the profound guilt and psychological burden that such a decision would impose on any parent.
March 23rd, 2026 17:44
Enchou sareta senryu
Neville said:
This trilogy is comprised of every loving parents nightmare .. yes, that damned good .. Neville
March 23rd, 2026 13:29
Neville said:
This trilogy is comprised of every loving parents nightmare .. yes, that damned good .. Neville
March 23rd, 2026 13:29
Enchou sareta senryu
Teddy.15 said:
Wow sorrenbarret what a question I\'d actually not save either and die myself. What a week I\'m having! 🌹
March 23rd, 2026 12:49
Teddy.15 said:
Wow sorrenbarret what a question I\'d actually not save either and die myself. What a week I\'m having! 🌹
March 23rd, 2026 12:49
A word not needed
falcon_mn said:
Poem A WORD NOT NEEDED Looks trivial and deep-minded. Childish questions. But a wise child awakens within you. More words are not needed to explain. I like the poem. Thanks!
March 23rd, 2026 12:46
falcon_mn said:
Poem A WORD NOT NEEDED Looks trivial and deep-minded. Childish questions. But a wise child awakens within you. More words are not needed to explain. I like the poem. Thanks!
March 23rd, 2026 12:46
Delicious seeds
falcon_mn said:
I just read your poem - DELICIOUS SEED. I like the mystic wrapped in a choice of words and metaphors you used, as the fine artisan creates the pot to hide unusual experiences. Thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2026 12:34
falcon_mn said:
I just read your poem - DELICIOUS SEED. I like the mystic wrapped in a choice of words and metaphors you used, as the fine artisan creates the pot to hide unusual experiences. Thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2026 12:34
Enchou sareta senryu
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
My kids like to ask me this question and my answers go like i would save the youngest as the bigger one can fend for himself.
Actually in a real case it happened in a tsunami and the mom did let go of her older child keeping the baby in her arms and luckily they were united much later.
Thumbs up for the poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:14
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
My kids like to ask me this question and my answers go like i would save the youngest as the bigger one can fend for himself.
Actually in a real case it happened in a tsunami and the mom did let go of her older child keeping the baby in her arms and luckily they were united much later.
Thumbs up for the poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:14
Enchou sareta senryu
orchidee said:
If it was a rubbish dump with KP and someone else, I would leave KP there every time! lol. Well, dunno why she would complain. She would have the sewage available there and then!
March 23rd, 2026 11:04
orchidee said:
If it was a rubbish dump with KP and someone else, I would leave KP there every time! lol. Well, dunno why she would complain. She would have the sewage available there and then!
March 23rd, 2026 11:04
Enchou sareta senryu
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits heavy…right away it puts you in a place no one wants to be. That weight of the choice doesn’t let up…it just keeps pressing. Well done and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits heavy…right away it puts you in a place no one wants to be. That weight of the choice doesn’t let up…it just keeps pressing. Well done and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:25
Enchou sareta senryu
Lorenz said:
Master are there answers without questions ?
March 23rd, 2026 09:24
Lorenz said:
Master are there answers without questions ?
March 23rd, 2026 09:24
Enchou sareta senryu
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Not a choice one would want to have to make. Good write.
March 23rd, 2026 08:36
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Not a choice one would want to have to make. Good write.
March 23rd, 2026 08:36
Sloth of the present
ann hegg said:
So amazingly real . A poem where reality meets words
March 23rd, 2026 08:13
ann hegg said:
So amazingly real . A poem where reality meets words
March 23rd, 2026 08:13
Enchou sareta senryu
arqios said:
Indeed. How could you choose! Could one be spared that agony?! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 05:31
arqios said:
Indeed. How could you choose! Could one be spared that agony?! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 05:31
Enchou sareta senryu
Prachi Dalvi said:
A dilemma presented nicely in just few words!!
March 23rd, 2026 04:41
Prachi Dalvi said:
A dilemma presented nicely in just few words!!
March 23rd, 2026 04:41
Enchou sareta senryu
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the thought is almost too much to bear
March 23rd, 2026 04:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the thought is almost too much to bear
March 23rd, 2026 04:11
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