Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Bouquet
soheil khodaparasti said:

Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.

July 19th, 2026 02:58

Bouquet
orchidee said:

Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.

July 19th, 2026 01:52

Bouquet
Goldfinch60 said:

That passion will never leave my life soren.

Andy

July 19th, 2026 01:04

Pending storm
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write soren. I hope the storm calms down into beauty and love.

Andy

July 19th, 2026 00:58

Pending storm
Kevin Hulme said:

Like it . And the Mice throw themselves in the Traps. A fave.

July 18th, 2026 18:43

Pending storm
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t believe a word of it, Soren. Found it very entertaining, notwithstanding..

July 18th, 2026 18:28

Pending storm
Teddy.15 said:

LoL ๐Ÿ˜‚ fabulous. ๐ŸŒน Ere if I was her I might swing for you with me handbag ๐Ÿ‘œ lol ๐Ÿคฃ

July 18th, 2026 15:36

Pending storm
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching sign until the entire natural disaster walks through the door. I did not see that turn coming...absolutely hilarious, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ

July 18th, 2026 09:28

Pending storm
orchidee said:

Good write SB. lol.

July 18th, 2026 08:54

Floods and leaks
Syd said:

I love the way leaking pipes become leaking time Sorenbarret.

Nicely written - Syd ๐Ÿ„

July 18th, 2026 06:59

Pending storm
Paul Bell said:

I reckon if you\'ve been married for thirty years, at least twenty of those years were waiting for her to get ready.
The other ten were spent shopping. Is hurricane actually strong enough, maybe nuclear explosion. Okay she\'s ready need to go.


July 18th, 2026 06:38

Pending storm
arqios said:

A that tempest I know do well๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

July 18th, 2026 04:56

Pending storm
Mutley Ravishes said:

Lol! Love it, Soren. Can you write some more of these?!

July 18th, 2026 04:23

Pending storm
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A definite fav

July 18th, 2026 03:44

Man
The Great Kateri said:

The new normal, but why easily accepted? Perhaps because of the \"ease\"?
wonderfully worded, sorren.

July 18th, 2026 03:14

Floods and leaks
Kevin Hulme said:

Time and Tide wait... etc. \'Leaks of ticking dreams\'. Exactly. Good Poem.

July 17th, 2026 18:18

Floods and leaks
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I bought KP a dodgy clock. It only goes tick, never tock! lol.

July 17th, 2026 09:08

Floods and leaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a haunting piece! Time becomes an unstoppable force slowly overtaking everything we hoped would remain. Powerful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 17th, 2026 08:28

Floods and leaks
arqios said:

Much like erosion to the point of an avalanche ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

July 17th, 2026 07:23

Floods and leaks
Soman Ragavan said:

The hourglass symbolises time going by. The hourglass bursting is the end of the existence. Thus, the nightmare.

July 17th, 2026 04:17

Floods and leaks
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve always had a dream to renovate an old villa, here in my area there are many, but it would surely take blood sweat and tears and then time, time has its own plans. What a wonderful poem. ๐ŸŒน

July 17th, 2026 04:10

Floods and leaks
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A catchy piece my friend, much enjoyed

July 17th, 2026 04:01

Busted
Kevin Hulme said:

A Clock running backwards would suggest to me of Something in the Past that was traumatic.
A grim Atmosphere running through this .
Like it.

July 16th, 2026 18:21

Isis
ELIORA said:

I love how tenderness and cosmic wonder intertwine here.

July 16th, 2026 17:48

Busted
arqios said:

The extended metaphorisation is excellently wielded. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 16th, 2026 17:28

Closing time
RSM0812 said:

Great imagery and well written.

July 16th, 2026 16:23

Busted
Friendship said:

Nicely written

July 16th, 2026 15:25

Busted
mylastwrites said:

Another diamond in your collection of gems. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

July 16th, 2026 14:44

Busted
Lorenz said:

The family broom ...that expression terrifies me !

July 16th, 2026 12:05

Busted
hzugman said:

Very nicely done.

July 16th, 2026 12:01

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