Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Excuses
mohammad ali said:
Wonderful dear Soren! So much beautifully composed of meaningful keys to usual excuses, of a fascinating rhythm and tone!
June 16th, 2026 08:02
mohammad ali said:
Wonderful dear Soren! So much beautifully composed of meaningful keys to usual excuses, of a fascinating rhythm and tone!
June 16th, 2026 08:02
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. The words in KP\'s name can be broken down into \'old trout\' - probably! lol.
June 16th, 2026 07:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The words in KP\'s name can be broken down into \'old trout\' - probably! lol.
June 16th, 2026 07:40
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Friendship said:
Well, play with words. Your poem explores themes of confusion, contradiction, and the complexity of existence. It hints at the struggles of communication and understanding in life, suggesting that clarity is often obscured by chaos. Overall, the poet seeks to engage the reader in contemplating the nature of truth, the absurdity of life, and the ways we navigate our emotions and relationships through language. It encourages a deeper reflection on how we express and perceive meaning in a chaotic world.
June 16th, 2026 07:31
Friendship said:
Well, play with words. Your poem explores themes of confusion, contradiction, and the complexity of existence. It hints at the struggles of communication and understanding in life, suggesting that clarity is often obscured by chaos. Overall, the poet seeks to engage the reader in contemplating the nature of truth, the absurdity of life, and the ways we navigate our emotions and relationships through language. It encourages a deeper reflection on how we express and perceive meaning in a chaotic world.
June 16th, 2026 07:31
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a well thought out piece, much enjoyed
June 16th, 2026 06:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a well thought out piece, much enjoyed
June 16th, 2026 06:58
Emotion
Soman Ragavan said:
\"a tongue\'s error\" : indeed, the tongue is one of the most dangerous weapons we have. Plus, what is said flies beyond recall.
June 16th, 2026 04:44
Soman Ragavan said:
\"a tongue\'s error\" : indeed, the tongue is one of the most dangerous weapons we have. Plus, what is said flies beyond recall.
June 16th, 2026 04:44
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Kevin Hulme said:
The Old Flow of Time. Once seen never repeated.
Good Write.
June 15th, 2026 18:22
Kevin Hulme said:
The Old Flow of Time. Once seen never repeated.
Good Write.
June 15th, 2026 18:22
Tree and the lily
spilleronsheet said:
We complaint like push and pull…and loosing it, we crib to have it again….wonderfully penned dear
June 15th, 2026 16:16
spilleronsheet said:
We complaint like push and pull…and loosing it, we crib to have it again….wonderfully penned dear
June 15th, 2026 16:16
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Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and full of wisdom as your poems always are. 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:28
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and full of wisdom as your poems always are. 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:28
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hzugman said:
Good read. As Orwell said in 1984: \"There is no past of solid objects\". The past only \"exists\" in our collective minds and unfortunately is a little bit (or a lot) different for each of us. Also it changes each time we revisit it because we have changed.
June 15th, 2026 13:08
hzugman said:
Good read. As Orwell said in 1984: \"There is no past of solid objects\". The past only \"exists\" in our collective minds and unfortunately is a little bit (or a lot) different for each of us. Also it changes each time we revisit it because we have changed.
June 15th, 2026 13:08
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoy most here is the way wonder and acceptance walk hand in hand. The shifting patterns, the passing moments, and the realization that some visions cannot be recreated all feel deeply human. A short piece, but one that leaves plenty to ponder, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoy most here is the way wonder and acceptance walk hand in hand. The shifting patterns, the passing moments, and the realization that some visions cannot be recreated all feel deeply human. A short piece, but one that leaves plenty to ponder, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:19
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Friendship said:
The configurations within a kaleidoscope are transient, and once a moment has elapsed, they cannot be replicated identically; nevertheless, the impression they create endures perpetually in one\'s memory.
June 15th, 2026 07:28
Friendship said:
The configurations within a kaleidoscope are transient, and once a moment has elapsed, they cannot be replicated identically; nevertheless, the impression they create endures perpetually in one\'s memory.
June 15th, 2026 07:28
The shape of a tree
Soman Ragavan said:
Making a statue is a brilliant idea Man has come across. It\'s a realistic rendition of what the person looked like. Statues carved out of stone and marble are more striking.
June 14th, 2026 20:37
Soman Ragavan said:
Making a statue is a brilliant idea Man has come across. It\'s a realistic rendition of what the person looked like. Statues carved out of stone and marble are more striking.
June 14th, 2026 20:37
Excuses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, haha, you got me with this one. The excuses just keep piling up higher and higher until they become impossible not to laugh at. There is a lot of playful charm in this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, haha, you got me with this one. The excuses just keep piling up higher and higher until they become impossible not to laugh at. There is a lot of playful charm in this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:54
Emotion
NafisaSB said:
As they say the tongue kills faster than a gun- well written 👌🤗💐
June 14th, 2026 07:42
NafisaSB said:
As they say the tongue kills faster than a gun- well written 👌🤗💐
June 14th, 2026 07:42
Excuses
soheil khodaparasti said:
May your speaker one day find a season when neither the weather, nor the hour, nor anything else stands in the way of joy. A delightful and insightful poem.
June 14th, 2026 07:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
May your speaker one day find a season when neither the weather, nor the hour, nor anything else stands in the way of joy. A delightful and insightful poem.
June 14th, 2026 07:28
Excuses
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sly humor running through this—every excuse dressed up like principle, every dodge wearing a clean shirt.
It lands because we’ve all heard that voice before, the one that swears it’s willing… just not right now.
June 14th, 2026 07:11
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sly humor running through this—every excuse dressed up like principle, every dodge wearing a clean shirt.
It lands because we’ve all heard that voice before, the one that swears it’s willing… just not right now.
June 14th, 2026 07:11
Emotion
cellinic said:
That\'s a very emotional, deep and sincere statement, sometimes a bit provocative). A fave, my friend
June 14th, 2026 01:38
cellinic said:
That\'s a very emotional, deep and sincere statement, sometimes a bit provocative). A fave, my friend
June 14th, 2026 01:38
Emotion
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how you expressed various emotions to disruptive effects. Well written.
June 14th, 2026 00:18
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how you expressed various emotions to disruptive effects. Well written.
June 14th, 2026 00:18
Emotion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The progression from pressure to explosion feels painfully familiar, and the imagery captures how destructive words can become when anger takes the wheel. Short, sharp, and impactful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The progression from pressure to explosion feels painfully familiar, and the imagery captures how destructive words can become when anger takes the wheel. Short, sharp, and impactful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:34
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