Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



What to believe
orchidee said:

Good write SB. \'Eat sewage\' I tell KP. lol.

August 10th, 2026 13:04

What to believe
Kevin Hulme said:

Why is it that when you go to the Doctors, the first thing he says is : \'How are you\'? \' Oh I\'m quite well thank you. Thought I\'d come and waste your time and mine\'.
As for your Poem: A fine piece as usual. The graveyards are full of Healthy Eaters.


August 10th, 2026 11:57

What to believe
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest diet is simply to live long enough for yesterday’s forbidden food to become tomorrow’s recommendation. The march from yolks to booze to bacon had me laughing, but that final line brings the whole merry-go-round back to the individual body. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 10th, 2026 10:39

What to believe
Paul Bell said:

The people in the 60s and 70s fried everything.
Then the 80s came, and they healthly killed themselves.
Granny always said that lot would be dead before her.
Seems she was right.

August 10th, 2026 09:12

In a breath
turningpoint said:

we sometimes feel ourlives are teetering on disaster like that
afriend or family member had an accident or is in a hospital my friend soren

August 10th, 2026 08:04

What to believe
2781 said:

Amen.

August 10th, 2026 07:12

What to believe
arqios said:

Very tidal in a way. But to whose ends are these contradictions to benefit in the long run!? 🕊️🙏👏🏻

August 10th, 2026 06:11

What to believe
Lorenz said:

\'\' An apple a day keeps the doctor away...Especially if you aim carefully \'\' ( Winston Churchill )

August 10th, 2026 05:16

What to believe
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

much enjoyed, made me think of my last visit to the doctors

August 10th, 2026 04:37

What to believe
Nerd said:

A lovely piece about health advice. It is so hard these days to take care of yourself let alone stay healthy. We should all take care of ourselves eating foods that make us feel happy.

August 10th, 2026 03:37

What to believe
soheil khodaparasti said:

A wonderfully witty and provocative poem! The closing line is particularly clever, giving the poem a philosophical twist and leaving the reader with something to ponder.

August 10th, 2026 03:30

Living power
Waiting for Silence said:

Good one.

August 10th, 2026 01:30

Values
cully45 said:

Brilliant piece. Nice work. Regards Owen

August 10th, 2026 01:26

In a breath
cellinic said:

Rather a serious and deep write, if we dwell on its meaningful structure, with good poetic form... A fave

August 9th, 2026 22:41

In a breath
Kevin Hulme said:

We\'ve all had these moments in life when something had happened of a terrible Nature.
And replayed it over and over in our minds.
Well Said in your Write.

August 9th, 2026 18:12

In a breath
Nerd said:

Beautiful and terrifying
Great work

August 9th, 2026 16:18

In a breath
Prachi Dalvi said:

A very nice write !!!

August 9th, 2026 09:30

In a breath
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 9th, 2026 08:10

In a breath
Thomas W Case said:

This is a tight, grim little meditation on helplessness, where every image puts life one heartbeat closer to disaster. The final “time’s tar” nails that awful feeling of watching something unfold while knowing you’re already too late to stop it.

August 9th, 2026 07:46

In a breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Whew, Soren...this creates an awful kind of suspended terror. Everything is visibly moving toward disaster, yet time becomes thick and useless precisely when every fraction of a second matters. That sense of being forced to witness what you cannot reach is devastating. Powerful stuff, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 9th, 2026 05:48

In a breath
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I have experienced those terror frozen moments my friend

August 9th, 2026 03:53

In a breath
soheil khodaparasti said:

A haunting and beautifully tense poem. Powerful imagery captures that terrifying instant when danger unfolds faster than we can respond, creating a deeply unsettling emotional atmosphere.

August 9th, 2026 03:43

Betrayal
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words soren (I think I go the name right this time) I sincerely hope all is well.

Andy

August 9th, 2026 02:35

Bouquet
cully45 said:

Very interesting - nice write.

August 9th, 2026 01:18

Betrayal
Soman Ragavan said:

In human stories a stab to the back has always been considered shocking, dishonorable. The victim does not get to see the blow coming. Thus, attacks in the back are frowned upon. It is an experience that the victim will long remember.

August 8th, 2026 22:31

Betrayal
Kevin Hulme said:

You can feel the Anger running through this piece. Good Write.

August 8th, 2026 18:11

Freedom
Donteatmecows said:

lovely! :)

August 8th, 2026 12:48

Betrayal
soheil khodaparasti said:

The dark imagery and sharp language effectively convey the feeling of being deeply hurt and deceived.

August 8th, 2026 11:49

Betrayal
orchidee said:

KP back-stabs me metaphorically, so I do the same to her. lol. And she says to me:\' How come you know such longs words as metaphoric-wotsit? lol.

August 8th, 2026 09:59

Betrayal
Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret. Betrayal will certainly make you feel that way. Cleverly written with great rhyme and flow. Definitely a favourite of mine.

- Syd 🍄

August 8th, 2026 09:08

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