Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Katie B. said:
Rich, vivid imagery of the horizon, cloud and sun. Well crafted. Enjoyable read, Soren.
June 6th, 2026 06:40
Katie B. said:
Rich, vivid imagery of the horizon, cloud and sun. Well crafted. Enjoyable read, Soren.
June 6th, 2026 06:40
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David Wakeling said:
A fascinating poetic journey here from the sky as a raspberry stain to ornage sherbet to Chuang Tzu philosophy.It has it all. Excellent
June 6th, 2026 06:22
David Wakeling said:
A fascinating poetic journey here from the sky as a raspberry stain to ornage sherbet to Chuang Tzu philosophy.It has it all. Excellent
June 6th, 2026 06:22
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Samprikta Paul said:
I was literally imagining a ripe mango, reading this. Well done friend!
June 6th, 2026 01:13
Samprikta Paul said:
I was literally imagining a ripe mango, reading this. Well done friend!
June 6th, 2026 01:13
King of the world
Samprikta Paul said:
It sounds like the government and parents honestly. Well penned my friend.
June 6th, 2026 00:48
Samprikta Paul said:
It sounds like the government and parents honestly. Well penned my friend.
June 6th, 2026 00:48
Vermin
Samprikta Paul said:
Oh my first I laughed reading because I knew how real, and then re-read, remembering the parasites and felt disgusted and frustrated. I have been reading your poems and how well you picked up your tormenting or happy emotions and put them into words. I am in love with your poems and how they have these rhyming words.
June 6th, 2026 00:46
Samprikta Paul said:
Oh my first I laughed reading because I knew how real, and then re-read, remembering the parasites and felt disgusted and frustrated. I have been reading your poems and how well you picked up your tormenting or happy emotions and put them into words. I am in love with your poems and how they have these rhyming words.
June 6th, 2026 00:46
Better than who?
Samprikta Paul said:
I agree with you, every human is yin-yang, has both sides. The degree of something might differ, but we all have it. The same people who watch pornography or pay for it have the gall to question morals and say bad things in front of society.
June 6th, 2026 00:07
Samprikta Paul said:
I agree with you, every human is yin-yang, has both sides. The degree of something might differ, but we all have it. The same people who watch pornography or pay for it have the gall to question morals and say bad things in front of society.
June 6th, 2026 00:07
Choices of when and where
Samprikta Paul said:
Sounds like you just explained life in a few sentences. That\'s a beautiful way to put life, I believe.
June 5th, 2026 23:36
Samprikta Paul said:
Sounds like you just explained life in a few sentences. That\'s a beautiful way to put life, I believe.
June 5th, 2026 23:36
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Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like my Bedroom in Winter.
Cold and Anxious - I can understand that .
A fine way to put it .
June 5th, 2026 19:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like my Bedroom in Winter.
Cold and Anxious - I can understand that .
A fine way to put it .
June 5th, 2026 19:46
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Paul Bell said:
British summer has now stalled and the electric blanket is back on the bed.
\'Somewhere in the world people are complaining of the heat. Not so far from those people, someone is cutting a hole through the ice to catch dinner.
Should have just gone to the supermarket.
June 5th, 2026 10:47
Paul Bell said:
British summer has now stalled and the electric blanket is back on the bed.
\'Somewhere in the world people are complaining of the heat. Not so far from those people, someone is cutting a hole through the ice to catch dinner.
Should have just gone to the supermarket.
June 5th, 2026 10:47
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soheil khodaparasti said:
The vivid portrayal of cold as an invading force creates a powerful sense of inevitability and helplessness. The transformation of the aging body into architecture, the feeling of entrapment, and the obscured vision all suggest emotional desolation. Rich, evocative imagery makes that desolation feel tangible, invasive, and inescapable.
June 5th, 2026 06:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
The vivid portrayal of cold as an invading force creates a powerful sense of inevitability and helplessness. The transformation of the aging body into architecture, the feeling of entrapment, and the obscured vision all suggest emotional desolation. Rich, evocative imagery makes that desolation feel tangible, invasive, and inescapable.
June 5th, 2026 06:46
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. I love how the cold progresses from an external fog to something that invades every layer of the speaker\'s world. The locked muscles, groaning chimney, barred windows, and fogged glass all contribute to a feeling of confinement and endurance. By the end, the gray landscape feels less like a scene and more like a state of being. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. I love how the cold progresses from an external fog to something that invades every layer of the speaker\'s world. The locked muscles, groaning chimney, barred windows, and fogged glass all contribute to a feeling of confinement and endurance. By the end, the gray landscape feels less like a scene and more like a state of being. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:30
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David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Anxiety and cold can both be similiar types of panic.Well written amigo
June 5th, 2026 05:37
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Anxiety and cold can both be similiar types of panic.Well written amigo
June 5th, 2026 05:37
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arqios said:
The colds, the flu and being cold are quite similar in my experience; so I’m somewhat doubly vigilant 🥶 🧊🕊️🙏🏻
June 5th, 2026 04:56
arqios said:
The colds, the flu and being cold are quite similar in my experience; so I’m somewhat doubly vigilant 🥶 🧊🕊️🙏🏻
June 5th, 2026 04:56
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write and a fav, lovely wording
June 5th, 2026 03:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write and a fav, lovely wording
June 5th, 2026 03:36
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Kevin Hulme said:
I always think: \'Every Tyrant gets the Hiccups\'.
Nice one.
June 4th, 2026 18:28
Kevin Hulme said:
I always think: \'Every Tyrant gets the Hiccups\'.
Nice one.
June 4th, 2026 18:28
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Even the prime minister waits for a lorry” is the line that grabbed me. It brings towering status crashing back down to ordinary reality in an instant. That contrast works beautifully throughout the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Even the prime minister waits for a lorry” is the line that grabbed me. It brings towering status crashing back down to ordinary reality in an instant. That contrast works beautifully throughout the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:09
Customer service
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reminds me of flipping radio stations late at night…snatches of songs, stories, scripture, advertisements, and memories all colliding together. It shouldn’t hold together as well as it does, but somehow it creates its own strange logic. Really enjoyed the trip, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reminds me of flipping radio stations late at night…snatches of songs, stories, scripture, advertisements, and memories all colliding together. It shouldn’t hold together as well as it does, but somehow it creates its own strange logic. Really enjoyed the trip, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:06
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Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret I would hope there will never be another crucifixion but as time does have its own circle of sorts one could never know. I hope I never see it, we need an evolutionary hero that can make the world a better race 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret I would hope there will never be another crucifixion but as time does have its own circle of sorts one could never know. I hope I never see it, we need an evolutionary hero that can make the world a better race 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:25
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Lorenz said:
Was christ screwed to the cross ? Now that\'s a unique form of torture !
June 4th, 2026 11:33
Lorenz said:
Was christ screwed to the cross ? Now that\'s a unique form of torture !
June 4th, 2026 11:33
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. You found that missing shoe for Lao Tzu? And that rhymes! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You found that missing shoe for Lao Tzu? And that rhymes! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:45
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Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Different shades of love
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
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David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
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Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
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