Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dinner show
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn fun mash-up happening here, turning famous names and Meat Loaf song titles into the ingredients, cooking instructions, and aftermath of one hell of a musical meatloaf. The best part is how the recipe keeps escalating until “Paradise by the Dashboard Lights” and “next day’s fights” leave you with something that feels equal parts kitchen disaster, rock concert, and hangover.
September 6th, 2026 07:43
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn fun mash-up happening here, turning famous names and Meat Loaf song titles into the ingredients, cooking instructions, and aftermath of one hell of a musical meatloaf. The best part is how the recipe keeps escalating until “Paradise by the Dashboard Lights” and “next day’s fights” leave you with something that feels equal parts kitchen disaster, rock concert, and hangover.
September 6th, 2026 07:43
Dinner show
Lorenz said:
We feel as if we\'re being pursued by this fascinating musical flavor !
September 6th, 2026 06:59
Lorenz said:
We feel as if we\'re being pursued by this fascinating musical flavor !
September 6th, 2026 06:59
Dinner show
arqios said:
Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double entendre of Meat Loaf.
September 6th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double entendre of Meat Loaf.
September 6th, 2026 06:52
Dinner show
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
methinks thee a genius or like a surgeon where every unspoken work an essential motion that fits the turning of the entire literary theatrical masterpiece.
September 6th, 2026 06:37
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
methinks thee a genius or like a surgeon where every unspoken work an essential motion that fits the turning of the entire literary theatrical masterpiece.
September 6th, 2026 06:37
Dinner show
soheil khodaparasti said:
I have to admit that I could not fully understand the poem initially because it contains so many cultural references. Once I looked into them, however, I realized how clever, intricate, and entertaining the poem is. Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double meaning of “Meat Loaf.” The references to Bat Out of Hell and Paradise by the Dashboard Light, together with the unexpected appearances of Jack Black, Chris Farley, and Zero Mostel, create a wonderfully absurd and playful effect. What initially seemed confusing to me turned out to be a highly imaginative and skillfully constructed piece of wordplay. I especially admire your ability to pack so many layers of meaning and humor into such a seemingly simple poem.
September 6th, 2026 05:07
soheil khodaparasti said:
I have to admit that I could not fully understand the poem initially because it contains so many cultural references. Once I looked into them, however, I realized how clever, intricate, and entertaining the poem is. Your masterfulness lies in weaving together food, comedy, popular culture, and music through the double meaning of “Meat Loaf.” The references to Bat Out of Hell and Paradise by the Dashboard Light, together with the unexpected appearances of Jack Black, Chris Farley, and Zero Mostel, create a wonderfully absurd and playful effect. What initially seemed confusing to me turned out to be a highly imaginative and skillfully constructed piece of wordplay. I especially admire your ability to pack so many layers of meaning and humor into such a seemingly simple poem.
September 6th, 2026 05:07
Dinner show
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Point well made my friend, a good recipe
September 6th, 2026 04:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Point well made my friend, a good recipe
September 6th, 2026 04:21
A friend on wings
Goldfinch60 said:
A fine write about a beautiful insect soren.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
A fine write about a beautiful insect soren.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:56
A friend on wings
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
A friend on wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
A friend on wings
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
A friend on wings
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
A friend on wings
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Busted
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
Time
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
A friend on wings
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
A friend on wings
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
A friend on wings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. We have \'pet spiders\' at times. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:48
orchidee said:
Good write SB. We have \'pet spiders\' at times. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:48
A friend on wings
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A friend and a nuisance, good write
September 5th, 2026 04:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A friend and a nuisance, good write
September 5th, 2026 04:37
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the sorrow in the world.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the sorrow in the world.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:05
Desolate
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing that times change and glory will come to us.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing that times change and glory will come to us.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:01
Time
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
Time
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
Desolate
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Closed door
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
A pill when you\'re ill
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
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