Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Used
rrodriguez said:
This is truly revealing. Your poem has a sharp, playful voice that uses humor and discomfort to reveal a deeper truth: we constantly share the world with others, even in ways we rarely think about. The imagery is intentionally provocative, but it works — it reminds the reader that nothing in life is truly “pure” or exclusively ours. It made me think of the many times I travelled and inhaled other people\'s air, and, for that matter, their gas. It made me chuckle at the end. Thanks for sharing it.
September 26th, 2026 11:43
rrodriguez said:
This is truly revealing. Your poem has a sharp, playful voice that uses humor and discomfort to reveal a deeper truth: we constantly share the world with others, even in ways we rarely think about. The imagery is intentionally provocative, but it works — it reminds the reader that nothing in life is truly “pure” or exclusively ours. It made me think of the many times I travelled and inhaled other people\'s air, and, for that matter, their gas. It made me chuckle at the end. Thanks for sharing it.
September 26th, 2026 11:43
The Don
arqios said:
Good one, Soren. My dad usually sharpens his hatchet in plain sight when boys came by to pick up my sisters for dates.
September 26th, 2026 06:24
arqios said:
Good one, Soren. My dad usually sharpens his hatchet in plain sight when boys came by to pick up my sisters for dates.
September 26th, 2026 06:24
The Don
Paul Bell said:
I would be dead. lol
Hope he waited till the old guy died before he divorced her.
September 26th, 2026 05:53
Paul Bell said:
I would be dead. lol
Hope he waited till the old guy died before he divorced her.
September 26th, 2026 05:53
The Don
Neville said:
Great minds think alike .. I said the exact same thing to my son-in-law .. so far all is good ..
September 26th, 2026 04:50
Neville said:
Great minds think alike .. I said the exact same thing to my son-in-law .. so far all is good ..
September 26th, 2026 04:50
The Don
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, I love this write. I hope it works out for them both. He\'ll have to make it work if he\'s marrying the Don\'s daughter. I\'m currently watching Gomorrah in Italian with subtitles. You\'re brilliant poem made me think of this.
- Syd 🍄
September 26th, 2026 04:29
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, I love this write. I hope it works out for them both. He\'ll have to make it work if he\'s marrying the Don\'s daughter. I\'m currently watching Gomorrah in Italian with subtitles. You\'re brilliant poem made me think of this.
- Syd 🍄
September 26th, 2026 04:29
Children
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I felt the warning in this. Raising something does not mean you get to control what it becomes, and that truth can be brutal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I felt the warning in this. Raising something does not mean you get to control what it becomes, and that truth can be brutal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:12
Children
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess we find ourselves halfway between the animal and angelic realms?!
September 25th, 2026 21:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess we find ourselves halfway between the animal and angelic realms?!
September 25th, 2026 21:02
Children
Kevin Hulme said:
\'How sharper than a Serpent\'s Tooth it is to have a thankless child\'. As Shakespeare said.
A good Write on the dark side of Nature.
September 25th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
\'How sharper than a Serpent\'s Tooth it is to have a thankless child\'. As Shakespeare said.
A good Write on the dark side of Nature.
September 25th, 2026 18:40
Children
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
Too true, Soren, it\'s all to do with survival and keeping the balance. The natural world can be as fierce as it is beautiful. I have enjoyed reading this poem, very much so. Well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony
September 25th, 2026 12:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
Too true, Soren, it\'s all to do with survival and keeping the balance. The natural world can be as fierce as it is beautiful. I have enjoyed reading this poem, very much so. Well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony
September 25th, 2026 12:43
Children
Lorenz said:
Brighten up your home with a friendly tyrex that\'s a hit with kids and adults alike !
September 25th, 2026 10:28
Lorenz said:
Brighten up your home with a friendly tyrex that\'s a hit with kids and adults alike !
September 25th, 2026 10:28
Children
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP will set her pet vulture on me if I give her much more sewage. lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP will set her pet vulture on me if I give her much more sewage. lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:44
Children
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A lesson in the cruelty of nature and life
September 25th, 2026 04:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A lesson in the cruelty of nature and life
September 25th, 2026 04:17
Lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve thought about this before too…all the people history never bothered to remember. Sobering as hell when you really sit with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve thought about this before too…all the people history never bothered to remember. Sobering as hell when you really sit with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:18
All or nothing
jarcher54 said:
playful treatment of deep thoughts! You have a gift!
September 24th, 2026 16:42
jarcher54 said:
playful treatment of deep thoughts! You have a gift!
September 24th, 2026 16:42
Lost
Michael A. McGuire said:
Oh they will be preserved. I’m just now posting poems I wrote almost 40
Years ago and all of your comments gave me the inspiration and confidence to try again when I thought my inner Voice was “retired”.
September 24th, 2026 11:04
Michael A. McGuire said:
Oh they will be preserved. I’m just now posting poems I wrote almost 40
Years ago and all of your comments gave me the inspiration and confidence to try again when I thought my inner Voice was “retired”.
September 24th, 2026 11:04
Lost
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this Write. You said it all here .
You\'re correct in all you say . So much talent in the past undiscovered. Forgotten.
A fave .
September 24th, 2026 08:32
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this Write. You said it all here .
You\'re correct in all you say . So much talent in the past undiscovered. Forgotten.
A fave .
September 24th, 2026 08:32
Lost
arqios said:
Imagine, we the ungreat and in future may as well be forgot, just the same. But in the slightest there may be keepers of poetry out there. But I\'ll never personally know.
September 24th, 2026 08:01
arqios said:
Imagine, we the ungreat and in future may as well be forgot, just the same. But in the slightest there may be keepers of poetry out there. But I\'ll never personally know.
September 24th, 2026 08:01
Missing pages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! That small footnote detail got me, Soren...so much of a life ends up tucked into the margins. Powerful, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! That small footnote detail got me, Soren...so much of a life ends up tucked into the margins. Powerful, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:31
Missing pages
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Write on a life being reflected in a Book. 👍
September 23rd, 2026 15:57
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Write on a life being reflected in a Book. 👍
September 23rd, 2026 15:57
Used
gray0328 said:
separation and purity are partial illusions; existence is communion, exchange, and continual transformation. Some of us are more fussy than others. Well Done Soren
September 23rd, 2026 10:55
gray0328 said:
separation and purity are partial illusions; existence is communion, exchange, and continual transformation. Some of us are more fussy than others. Well Done Soren
September 23rd, 2026 10:55
Missing pages
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I don\'t like to write in book in ink. I always use pencil.
Meanwhile, yes, KP was ungrateful. She chucked the book on the fire that I bought her, entitled: \'101 Recipes With Sewage\'. lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:20
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I don\'t like to write in book in ink. I always use pencil.
Meanwhile, yes, KP was ungrateful. She chucked the book on the fire that I bought her, entitled: \'101 Recipes With Sewage\'. lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:20
Missing pages
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautifully put my friend
September 23rd, 2026 08:28
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautifully put my friend
September 23rd, 2026 08:28
Missing pages
arqios said:
Much like our life which is said to be like a book or even there is a book in every one\'s life story. Most wonderful. A definite fave. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 23rd, 2026 08:06
arqios said:
Much like our life which is said to be like a book or even there is a book in every one\'s life story. Most wonderful. A definite fave. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 23rd, 2026 08:06
Used
Neville said:
disgusting maybe but interesting and evidently true .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I suspect I have been completely recycled at least twice before .. N 👍
September 23rd, 2026 02:08
Neville said:
disgusting maybe but interesting and evidently true .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I suspect I have been completely recycled at least twice before .. N 👍
September 23rd, 2026 02:08
Used
Goldfinch60 said:
We all re-use things in our life soren and in my long life I am still here so all is well.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We all re-use things in our life soren and in my long life I am still here so all is well.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:06
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