Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Chicken\'s feathered pen, coward\'s ink that fades
Paul Bell said:
This feels like empty house syndrome, where you talk to someone, but then realise they\'ve gone.
In a way though, this can be quite therapeutic and lift the spirits.
November 7th, 2026 06:17
Paul Bell said:
This feels like empty house syndrome, where you talk to someone, but then realise they\'ve gone.
In a way though, this can be quite therapeutic and lift the spirits.
November 7th, 2026 06:17
Chicken\'s feathered pen, coward\'s ink that fades
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow my friend, enjoyed
November 7th, 2026 04:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow my friend, enjoyed
November 7th, 2026 04:58
Death penalty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it’s easy to laugh at the idea of putting a fly on trial. Then you picture the judge being the same person who’s annoyed enough to bring the charges. The joke gets ugly pretty fast. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it’s easy to laugh at the idea of putting a fly on trial. Then you picture the judge being the same person who’s annoyed enough to bring the charges. The joke gets ugly pretty fast. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:37
Death penalty
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ll swat any Fly: but the Jeff Goldblum kind I\'ll avoid.
Good Write.
November 6th, 2026 16:32
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ll swat any Fly: but the Jeff Goldblum kind I\'ll avoid.
Good Write.
November 6th, 2026 16:32
Death penalty
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem juxtaposes the act of killing a fly with the moral implications of the death penalty, to me, it seems to suggest a contemplation of life and death decisions. It raises questions about instinct, morality, and the consequences of choices, ultimately advocating for mercy and the preservation of life.
November 6th, 2026 13:13
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem juxtaposes the act of killing a fly with the moral implications of the death penalty, to me, it seems to suggest a contemplation of life and death decisions. It raises questions about instinct, morality, and the consequences of choices, ultimately advocating for mercy and the preservation of life.
November 6th, 2026 13:13
Misfit
gray0328 said:
Their judgment may reveal more about their assumptions than about your character. Actions truly speaks louder than words. Well Done Brother
November 6th, 2026 11:27
gray0328 said:
Their judgment may reveal more about their assumptions than about your character. Actions truly speaks louder than words. Well Done Brother
November 6th, 2026 11:27
Death penalty
Gelyn said:
Beneath its playful tone lies a subtle message about choices, consequences, and finding a kinder solution. Sometimes, the wisest way to deal with an unwanted presence is not to eliminate it, but simply to keep it out. A wonderfully witty piece with a thought provoking twist..
Gel
November 6th, 2026 10:23
Gelyn said:
Beneath its playful tone lies a subtle message about choices, consequences, and finding a kinder solution. Sometimes, the wisest way to deal with an unwanted presence is not to eliminate it, but simply to keep it out. A wonderfully witty piece with a thought provoking twist..
Gel
November 6th, 2026 10:23
Death penalty
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren
I think a net is the answer, they seem to be getting faster, evolution at work - the survival of the fastest. LOL. Well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 6th, 2026 08:06
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren
I think a net is the answer, they seem to be getting faster, evolution at work - the survival of the fastest. LOL. Well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 6th, 2026 08:06
Death penalty
orchidee said:
Yes - swat what annoys us. I must continue to regularly swat KP! lol. Many thanks for the reminder. lol.
November 6th, 2026 07:59
orchidee said:
Yes - swat what annoys us. I must continue to regularly swat KP! lol. Many thanks for the reminder. lol.
November 6th, 2026 07:59
Death penalty
Paul Bell said:
If it\'s the blond girl next door making advances, then the slegehammer goes down.
Anything else, the sledgehammer is the weapon of choice.
Granted the brickwork isn\'t great.
November 6th, 2026 05:14
Paul Bell said:
If it\'s the blond girl next door making advances, then the slegehammer goes down.
Anything else, the sledgehammer is the weapon of choice.
Granted the brickwork isn\'t great.
November 6th, 2026 05:14
Death penalty
Teddy.15 said:
I use a tea towel and a swatter, mosquito and blue bottles 🤣
November 6th, 2026 04:34
Teddy.15 said:
I use a tea towel and a swatter, mosquito and blue bottles 🤣
November 6th, 2026 04:34
Misfit
NafisaSB said:
I salute him for standing up for himself- takes courage to stand up for one’s beliefs
November 6th, 2026 03:53
NafisaSB said:
I salute him for standing up for himself- takes courage to stand up for one’s beliefs
November 6th, 2026 03:53
Skating on thin ice of AI
NafisaSB said:
If not being impertinent can I ask what was the comment that inspired this very practical and interesting poem ✌️💐
November 6th, 2026 03:50
NafisaSB said:
If not being impertinent can I ask what was the comment that inspired this very practical and interesting poem ✌️💐
November 6th, 2026 03:50
Death penalty
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I will swat flies, and wasps, and other \'stingers\', but not bumble bees or other insects.
November 6th, 2026 03:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I will swat flies, and wasps, and other \'stingers\', but not bumble bees or other insects.
November 6th, 2026 03:12
Death penalty
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great humour within this piece my friend alongside the title
November 6th, 2026 03:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great humour within this piece my friend alongside the title
November 6th, 2026 03:01
Misfit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what gets me is how easily people can hurt somebody and go home feeling righteous about it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 5th, 2026 23:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what gets me is how easily people can hurt somebody and go home feeling righteous about it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 5th, 2026 23:00
Misfit
Doggerel Dave said:
Noone should doubt your tolerance, generosity and the depth of knowledge you bring with energy and much effort to this table, Soren. Just got one or two blind spots, that\'s all...😂
November 5th, 2026 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Noone should doubt your tolerance, generosity and the depth of knowledge you bring with energy and much effort to this table, Soren. Just got one or two blind spots, that\'s all...😂
November 5th, 2026 18:32
Misfit
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful and thought-provoking poem about individuality, tolerance, and society\'s tendency to reject those who dare to think differently.
November 5th, 2026 12:56
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful and thought-provoking poem about individuality, tolerance, and society\'s tendency to reject those who dare to think differently.
November 5th, 2026 12:56
Misfit
Friendship said:
Your poem feels like a challenge to me: it questions perceptions of faith, morality, and what it means to be human. It reflects on acceptance and the importance of love in a world often ruled by judgment. By presenting a character marginalized for his beliefs, the poem advocates a more inclusive understanding of humanity.
November 5th, 2026 08:33
Friendship said:
Your poem feels like a challenge to me: it questions perceptions of faith, morality, and what it means to be human. It reflects on acceptance and the importance of love in a world often ruled by judgment. By presenting a character marginalized for his beliefs, the poem advocates a more inclusive understanding of humanity.
November 5th, 2026 08:33
Misfit
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t have people like that wandering around, agnostic, bordering on the athiest scale.
He should be dragged back to the pulpit, where Mr\'s Jones helps out behind the scene.
November 5th, 2026 08:19
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t have people like that wandering around, agnostic, bordering on the athiest scale.
He should be dragged back to the pulpit, where Mr\'s Jones helps out behind the scene.
November 5th, 2026 08:19
Misfit
Donteatmecows said:
I loved this! The \"loves children more than grown men\" hit me hard! Well done! Indeed, I perceive this person plus most don\'t fit into God\'s plan.
November 5th, 2026 07:13
Donteatmecows said:
I loved this! The \"loves children more than grown men\" hit me hard! Well done! Indeed, I perceive this person plus most don\'t fit into God\'s plan.
November 5th, 2026 07:13
Misfit
arqios said:
An outlier poem! Something close to my heart. Definitely a Fave 🙌🏻🤩🕊️
November 5th, 2026 06:30
arqios said:
An outlier poem! Something close to my heart. Definitely a Fave 🙌🏻🤩🕊️
November 5th, 2026 06:30
Misfit
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is those People who say they Speak for God. And apply their own Ideas.
And say you must do this or that.
Well Said.
November 5th, 2026 06:30
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is those People who say they Speak for God. And apply their own Ideas.
And say you must do this or that.
Well Said.
November 5th, 2026 06:30
Misfit
Teddy.15 said:
It takes all sorts to make a world, I don\'t personally like judgemental people, I believe we are all different and wouldn\'t it be oh so boring if we were all the same.🌹
November 5th, 2026 05:04
Teddy.15 said:
It takes all sorts to make a world, I don\'t personally like judgemental people, I believe we are all different and wouldn\'t it be oh so boring if we were all the same.🌹
November 5th, 2026 05:04
Misfit
orchidee said:
Ahh, judging by outward appearances? Erm, Like I do to KP, saying \'You\'re looking more lovely and trout-like each day, dear!\' lol. Or those other fish that are similar to trout.
November 5th, 2026 03:28
orchidee said:
Ahh, judging by outward appearances? Erm, Like I do to KP, saying \'You\'re looking more lovely and trout-like each day, dear!\' lol. Or those other fish that are similar to trout.
November 5th, 2026 03:28
Skating on thin ice of AI
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve had my share of fascinating experiences with AI, Soren, along with a few that made me want to pull my hair out! Which is quite an accomplishment, considering I’m bald! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2026 21:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve had my share of fascinating experiences with AI, Soren, along with a few that made me want to pull my hair out! Which is quite an accomplishment, considering I’m bald! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2026 21:51
Skating on thin ice of AI
Kevin Hulme said:
You could Imagine the Creators of AI crying: \'Its alive, Alive\'. Like some Mad Colin Clive.
November 4th, 2026 19:42
Kevin Hulme said:
You could Imagine the Creators of AI crying: \'Its alive, Alive\'. Like some Mad Colin Clive.
November 4th, 2026 19:42
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