Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
No direction
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem recounts how we are formed, moulded by life that goes on around us. It i an inevitable destiny. Even if we live in utter solitude in a desert or a forest, we will still be shaped by what surrounds us. We are locked in the footprints (DNA prints) into which we are forced : \"too late for corrections...\" \"on which people park\" : people park not only on parking lots but on our very bodies... The watery cement only gives little time for others to mould it : when it sets, it is too late. Earth transformed to concrete : the evolution cannot be stopped. We are just cogs in a wheel on which we have no control. When the path becomes a street, it\'s the final nail.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem recounts how we are formed, moulded by life that goes on around us. It i an inevitable destiny. Even if we live in utter solitude in a desert or a forest, we will still be shaped by what surrounds us. We are locked in the footprints (DNA prints) into which we are forced : \"too late for corrections...\" \"on which people park\" : people park not only on parking lots but on our very bodies... The watery cement only gives little time for others to mould it : when it sets, it is too late. Earth transformed to concrete : the evolution cannot be stopped. We are just cogs in a wheel on which we have no control. When the path becomes a street, it\'s the final nail.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
No direction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fascinating piece, Soren! Earth and water become something rigid and utilitarian, yet retain the permanent evidence of every life that crossed them while they were vulnerable. Beautifully conceived, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fascinating piece, Soren! Earth and water become something rigid and utilitarian, yet retain the permanent evidence of every life that crossed them while they were vulnerable. Beautifully conceived, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:42
No direction
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s very old. I call her \'Fossil\' though her botox has ruined even her fossilised appearance. lol.
July 20th, 2026 06:56
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s very old. I call her \'Fossil\' though her botox has ruined even her fossilised appearance. lol.
July 20th, 2026 06:56
Floods and leaks
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing to read with amazing twists on words. Enjoyed!!!
July 20th, 2026 06:53
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing to read with amazing twists on words. Enjoyed!!!
July 20th, 2026 06:53
No direction
arqios said:
This poem gives the feel of one hardened into the shape life gave them before they ever learned to choose their own direction, and now they carry the marks of everyone who walked across them. 🙏🕊️
July 20th, 2026 06:17
arqios said:
This poem gives the feel of one hardened into the shape life gave them before they ever learned to choose their own direction, and now they carry the marks of everyone who walked across them. 🙏🕊️
July 20th, 2026 06:17
No direction
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all leave our mark my friend, good write enjoyed
July 20th, 2026 03:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all leave our mark my friend, good write enjoyed
July 20th, 2026 03:36
Bouquet
Kevin Hulme said:
A Romance gone sour. A good Story told in a few lines. Enjoyed.
July 19th, 2026 18:56
Kevin Hulme said:
A Romance gone sour. A good Story told in a few lines. Enjoyed.
July 19th, 2026 18:56
Bouquet
Thomas W Case said:
Love how you thread romance through decay—those cut flowers feel like vows that knew their own ending.
There’s a quiet sting here, like beauty remembering it was always on borrowed time.
July 19th, 2026 06:58
Thomas W Case said:
Love how you thread romance through decay—those cut flowers feel like vows that knew their own ending.
There’s a quiet sting here, like beauty remembering it was always on borrowed time.
July 19th, 2026 06:58
Bouquet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four lines. Beautifully tragic, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four lines. Beautifully tragic, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:57
Bouquet
Teddy.15 said:
Apt for a quite normal marriage 🤣 with all the ugliness in-between sometimes we forget to keep loves sparks alive! Super write 🌹
July 19th, 2026 05:35
Teddy.15 said:
Apt for a quite normal marriage 🤣 with all the ugliness in-between sometimes we forget to keep loves sparks alive! Super write 🌹
July 19th, 2026 05:35
Bouquet
arqios said:
To my estimation a cut rose has less a chance, all things considered, than one that stays as nature intended attached to its vine. And the metaphor works splendid in intimate human relations. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:29
arqios said:
To my estimation a cut rose has less a chance, all things considered, than one that stays as nature intended attached to its vine. And the metaphor works splendid in intimate human relations. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:29
Bouquet
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the symbol of love, and divorce, well done friend
July 19th, 2026 03:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the symbol of love, and divorce, well done friend
July 19th, 2026 03:43
Bouquet
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.
July 19th, 2026 02:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.
July 19th, 2026 02:58
Bouquet
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.
July 19th, 2026 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.
July 19th, 2026 01:52
Pending storm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren. I hope the storm calms down into beauty and love.
Andy
July 19th, 2026 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren. I hope the storm calms down into beauty and love.
Andy
July 19th, 2026 00:58
Pending storm
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it . And the Mice throw themselves in the Traps. A fave.
July 18th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it . And the Mice throw themselves in the Traps. A fave.
July 18th, 2026 18:43
Pending storm
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t believe a word of it, Soren. Found it very entertaining, notwithstanding..
July 18th, 2026 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t believe a word of it, Soren. Found it very entertaining, notwithstanding..
July 18th, 2026 18:28
Pending storm
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 😂 fabulous. 🌹 Ere if I was her I might swing for you with me handbag 👜 lol 🤣
July 18th, 2026 15:36
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 😂 fabulous. 🌹 Ere if I was her I might swing for you with me handbag 👜 lol 🤣
July 18th, 2026 15:36
Pending storm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching sign until the entire natural disaster walks through the door. I did not see that turn coming...absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 18th, 2026 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching sign until the entire natural disaster walks through the door. I did not see that turn coming...absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 18th, 2026 09:28
Floods and leaks
Syd said:
I love the way leaking pipes become leaking time Sorenbarret.
Nicely written - Syd 🍄
July 18th, 2026 06:59
Syd said:
I love the way leaking pipes become leaking time Sorenbarret.
Nicely written - Syd 🍄
July 18th, 2026 06:59
Pending storm
Paul Bell said:
I reckon if you\'ve been married for thirty years, at least twenty of those years were waiting for her to get ready.
The other ten were spent shopping. Is hurricane actually strong enough, maybe nuclear explosion. Okay she\'s ready need to go.
July 18th, 2026 06:38
Paul Bell said:
I reckon if you\'ve been married for thirty years, at least twenty of those years were waiting for her to get ready.
The other ten were spent shopping. Is hurricane actually strong enough, maybe nuclear explosion. Okay she\'s ready need to go.
July 18th, 2026 06:38
Pending storm
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol! Love it, Soren. Can you write some more of these?!
July 18th, 2026 04:23
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol! Love it, Soren. Can you write some more of these?!
July 18th, 2026 04:23
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