Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Skating on thin ice of AI
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another of mans wonderful ideas, most of which result in disaster
November 4th, 2026 03:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another of mans wonderful ideas, most of which result in disaster
November 4th, 2026 03:30
Falling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Soren. I looked into this after reading your poem, and it’s absolutely devastating. Nine lives lost, including a pilot who was only twenty. I can’t imagine what their loved ones are going through. Praying for all involved and affected by this tragedy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2026 23:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Soren. I looked into this after reading your poem, and it’s absolutely devastating. Nine lives lost, including a pilot who was only twenty. I can’t imagine what their loved ones are going through. Praying for all involved and affected by this tragedy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2026 23:02
Falling
Kevin Hulme said:
Don\'t think I\'d like to hear that Tape. Must be the same listening to Voices on a \'Black Box\'.
And what those People went through in the Planes on 911: Doesn\'t bare thinking about.
A good Write.
November 3rd, 2026 19:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Don\'t think I\'d like to hear that Tape. Must be the same listening to Voices on a \'Black Box\'.
And what those People went through in the Planes on 911: Doesn\'t bare thinking about.
A good Write.
November 3rd, 2026 19:31
Falling
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves to reflect on the fragility of life, the unexpected nature of death, and the haunting memories that remain after such tragedies. It confronts the fear of mortality and the loss of identity in the face of catastrophic events. I still can\'t get her voice out of my head.
November 3rd, 2026 10:52
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves to reflect on the fragility of life, the unexpected nature of death, and the haunting memories that remain after such tragedies. It confronts the fear of mortality and the loss of identity in the face of catastrophic events. I still can\'t get her voice out of my head.
November 3rd, 2026 10:52
Falling
Dev Parth said:
Soren, this left a deep ache in my chest. You captured the sheer, helpless terror of those final seconds so vividly that it took my breath away. The thought of that frantic voice fading into the haunting silence of the sky is utterly devastating. This is a raw, beautiful, and deeply heartbreaking tribute to those nine lost souls. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.
November 3rd, 2026 09:15
Dev Parth said:
Soren, this left a deep ache in my chest. You captured the sheer, helpless terror of those final seconds so vividly that it took my breath away. The thought of that frantic voice fading into the haunting silence of the sky is utterly devastating. This is a raw, beautiful, and deeply heartbreaking tribute to those nine lost souls. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.
November 3rd, 2026 09:15
Falling
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a chilling, almost documentary quality to this, using internal rhyme and rapid-fire phrasing to recreate the terrifying speed of an aircraft disaster, while the fragmented radio communication makes the final moments feel horribly immediate. “Death diagnosed in the voice of a ghost, falling from where angels sing” is the keeper for me, because it brings together the cold technical explanation and the human tragedy, leaving the pilot’s last words hanging somewhere between the investigation and the afterlife.
November 3rd, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a chilling, almost documentary quality to this, using internal rhyme and rapid-fire phrasing to recreate the terrifying speed of an aircraft disaster, while the fragmented radio communication makes the final moments feel horribly immediate. “Death diagnosed in the voice of a ghost, falling from where angels sing” is the keeper for me, because it brings together the cold technical explanation and the human tragedy, leaving the pilot’s last words hanging somewhere between the investigation and the afterlife.
November 3rd, 2026 07:31
Falling
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A disturbing piece my friend, spoken as it is
November 3rd, 2026 05:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A disturbing piece my friend, spoken as it is
November 3rd, 2026 05:05
Falling
Doggerel Dave said:
You gave substance to a news item i heard yesterday. Kudos, Soren.
November 3rd, 2026 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
You gave substance to a news item i heard yesterday. Kudos, Soren.
November 3rd, 2026 04:55
Falling
arqios said:
It’s a chilling thought too how the moment of death is now recorded in many ways and will be a permanent artefact for countless generations to come 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 3rd, 2026 04:40
arqios said:
It’s a chilling thought too how the moment of death is now recorded in many ways and will be a permanent artefact for countless generations to come 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 3rd, 2026 04:40
Water speaks
Kevin Hulme said:
My Grandmother said she saw Frogs fall out the Sky when she was little.
A enjoyable Read.
November 2nd, 2026 19:25
Kevin Hulme said:
My Grandmother said she saw Frogs fall out the Sky when she was little.
A enjoyable Read.
November 2nd, 2026 19:25
Water speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that uncertainty about being addressed gets me...is someone reaching out, or am I hearing what I already fear? Fascinating read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that uncertainty about being addressed gets me...is someone reaching out, or am I hearing what I already fear? Fascinating read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:51
Water speaks
12River34 said:
Superb layout and imagery .
Marvellous work 👏🏻👏🏻.
Thanks
November 2nd, 2026 12:08
12River34 said:
Superb layout and imagery .
Marvellous work 👏🏻👏🏻.
Thanks
November 2nd, 2026 12:08
Water speaks
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Water speaks
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Water speaks
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Water speaks
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Water speaks
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Water speaks
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoy the Double Meaning in this Write. It\'s a bit like a \'Rorschach Test\'. And What Interpretation we get from this. Some Innocent. Some Raunchy. Good Write.
November 1st, 2026 19:57
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoy the Double Meaning in this Write. It\'s a bit like a \'Rorschach Test\'. And What Interpretation we get from this. Some Innocent. Some Raunchy. Good Write.
November 1st, 2026 19:57
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what the fuck did I just read? 🤣🤣🤣 I think you\'ve officially cornered the market on agricultural indecency! Absolutely loved this, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what the fuck did I just read? 🤣🤣🤣 I think you\'ve officially cornered the market on agricultural indecency! Absolutely loved this, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:40
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A fusion poem, Animal Farm blends with The Last Tango in Paris. You were on a fucking roll with this one, what more can I say, but a bucolic bard aroused in his daily toil. An award winner, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:10
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A fusion poem, Animal Farm blends with The Last Tango in Paris. You were on a fucking roll with this one, what more can I say, but a bucolic bard aroused in his daily toil. An award winner, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:10
The snake pit
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cutely written the exact meaning of life very close love it
November 1st, 2026 12:05
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cutely written the exact meaning of life very close love it
November 1st, 2026 12:05
The snake pit
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Soren,
The more one suffers the closer to God, that\'s what the Christian Brothers and Nuns taught me, later on in life I found out that a day without pain is a good day. As your excellent poem points out, death cures all ails, the final day, as it were. So few words and no finer a poem, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:56
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Soren,
The more one suffers the closer to God, that\'s what the Christian Brothers and Nuns taught me, later on in life I found out that a day without pain is a good day. As your excellent poem points out, death cures all ails, the final day, as it were. So few words and no finer a poem, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:56
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