Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Lunacy in a bottle
arqios said:
Firewater! Devil\'s brew. Lolly water, vintner\'s stew.
May 10th, 2026 19:05
arqios said:
Firewater! Devil\'s brew. Lolly water, vintner\'s stew.
May 10th, 2026 19:05
Lunacy in a bottle
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t drink anything stronger than Pop: But then Pop drinks like a Fish..
A fine Poem on the dangers of the Demon Drink.
May 10th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t drink anything stronger than Pop: But then Pop drinks like a Fish..
A fine Poem on the dangers of the Demon Drink.
May 10th, 2026 18:40
Lunacy in a bottle
Teddy.15 said:
Well what\'s your poison? Ah mine is a damn good glass of chianti 🍷
May 10th, 2026 13:39
Teddy.15 said:
Well what\'s your poison? Ah mine is a damn good glass of chianti 🍷
May 10th, 2026 13:39
Enchou sareta senryu
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Neutral view-neutral solutions are actually quite difficult.
May 10th, 2026 12:53
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Neutral view-neutral solutions are actually quite difficult.
May 10th, 2026 12:53
Lunacy in a bottle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…what a vivid rush this is. Wine, dreams, screams, laughter, mud, rainbows…everything feels simultaneously divine and decayed, like a feast happening at the edge of collapse. And somehow you make it playful while still carrying that darker undercurrent beneath it all. For me, alcohol is a demon…so I no longer drink…for others an occasional enjoyment. Too many, in my experience, shift from the latter to the former without ever realizing it until it is too late. Really strong and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 12:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…what a vivid rush this is. Wine, dreams, screams, laughter, mud, rainbows…everything feels simultaneously divine and decayed, like a feast happening at the edge of collapse. And somehow you make it playful while still carrying that darker undercurrent beneath it all. For me, alcohol is a demon…so I no longer drink…for others an occasional enjoyment. Too many, in my experience, shift from the latter to the former without ever realizing it until it is too late. Really strong and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 12:50
Lunacy in a bottle
Neville said:
Splendid little things like this make me feel giddy .. Neville
May 10th, 2026 12:36
Neville said:
Splendid little things like this make me feel giddy .. Neville
May 10th, 2026 12:36
Better than who?
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Questionable food for thought. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:31
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Questionable food for thought. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:31
Lunacy in a bottle
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Lunacy in a bottle
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Lunacy in a bottle
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
Lunacy in a bottle
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
Feelings of loss
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Feelings of loss
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Feelings of loss
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
Feelings of loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Feelings of loss
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Feelings of loss
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Feelings of loss
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
Feelings of loss
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t think people want to think that far ahead, but the inevitable is coming to us all.
Poignant read for football saturday.
May 9th, 2026 05:18
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t think people want to think that far ahead, but the inevitable is coming to us all.
Poignant read for football saturday.
May 9th, 2026 05:18
Death to the king
Teddy.15 said:
None can rely on God nor politicians 🌹 sad truth.
May 9th, 2026 00:48
Teddy.15 said:
None can rely on God nor politicians 🌹 sad truth.
May 9th, 2026 00:48
Death to the king
arqios said:
Partly, it could be conjectured that none are ever taught or trained to be independent thinkers and that in itself can prove very exhausting and as we are socially wired will follow any strong and convincing personality to do all the thinking and deciding for us. But that’s just me🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2026 20:53
arqios said:
Partly, it could be conjectured that none are ever taught or trained to be independent thinkers and that in itself can prove very exhausting and as we are socially wired will follow any strong and convincing personality to do all the thinking and deciding for us. But that’s just me🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2026 20:53
Death to the king
Salvia.S said:
Adam with his own eyes. No king, no Shepherd, no fence between a man and the lion. \"Open eyes to nature instead\"- that line will outlive the thrones. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 20:41
Salvia.S said:
Adam with his own eyes. No king, no Shepherd, no fence between a man and the lion. \"Open eyes to nature instead\"- that line will outlive the thrones. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 20:41
Death to the king
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Hot off the press! 🔥🔥🔥 Adam is an anarchist, indeed. My friend, I connect with that distrust of crowds and systems here...how easily fear and certainty can sweep people together. This feels less like ideology and more like a cry for people to wake up and actually see for themselves again. There’s real urgency in it, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Hot off the press! 🔥🔥🔥 Adam is an anarchist, indeed. My friend, I connect with that distrust of crowds and systems here...how easily fear and certainty can sweep people together. This feels less like ideology and more like a cry for people to wake up and actually see for themselves again. There’s real urgency in it, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:56
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