Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Reminiscing
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Reminiscing
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
Where
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to returnβeach small sound makes you think itβs them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to returnβeach small sound makes you think itβs them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
Reminiscing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Reminiscing
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. ππ»ποΈ
July 31st, 2026 08:00
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. ππ»ποΈ
July 31st, 2026 08:00
Reminiscing
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
Where
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like when a Loved one dies; there\'s a great Hole -Void - left in your life. Good Write.
July 31st, 2026 04:22
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like when a Loved one dies; there\'s a great Hole -Void - left in your life. Good Write.
July 31st, 2026 04:22
Reminiscing
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Reminiscing
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
Where
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Precarious
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Where
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Where
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Where
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. πποΈ
July 30th, 2026 07:28
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. πποΈ
July 30th, 2026 07:28
The walk
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Where
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
Where
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
Growing old
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Scared
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Would it be different
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
The walk
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Poem describing Food as Nature. A fave π
July 29th, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Poem describing Food as Nature. A fave π
July 29th, 2026 18:41
The walk
GenXer Sharon ππ said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
GenXer Sharon ππ said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
The walk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully imaginative write, Soren. Turning the entire landscape into an open-air breakfast is wonderfully playfulβ¦the natural world feels nourishing in every possible way. Excellent work, my friend. ππΏβπ€π
July 29th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully imaginative write, Soren. Turning the entire landscape into an open-air breakfast is wonderfully playfulβ¦the natural world feels nourishing in every possible way. Excellent work, my friend. ππΏβπ€π
July 29th, 2026 08:19
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