Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cycles
NafisaSB said:
a sad but true state of affairs -long for the good old days, when this was not so rampant..
July 9th, 2025 00:15
NafisaSB said:
a sad but true state of affairs -long for the good old days, when this was not so rampant..
July 9th, 2025 00:15
Cycles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint a haunting cycle of suffering and resilience—powerful and raw. A stark reminder of life\'s relentless storms and the slow growth that follows.
July 8th, 2025 13:28
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint a haunting cycle of suffering and resilience—powerful and raw. A stark reminder of life\'s relentless storms and the slow growth that follows.
July 8th, 2025 13:28
Cycles
arqios said:
And sometimes it also seems like a journey in a spin cycle. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:45
arqios said:
And sometimes it also seems like a journey in a spin cycle. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:45
Cycles
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of out any filth, pain, hurt, destruction there will be an opportunity to regrow and regenerate, that not all hope is lost in the darkness, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of out any filth, pain, hurt, destruction there will be an opportunity to regrow and regenerate, that not all hope is lost in the darkness, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:13
Cycles
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a list of the darker objects that exist in life and the human condition. It has a powerful effect on the reader.But in all the filth is a re-birth which is Natures way.Excellent insight mi amigo
July 8th, 2025 04:37
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a list of the darker objects that exist in life and the human condition. It has a powerful effect on the reader.But in all the filth is a re-birth which is Natures way.Excellent insight mi amigo
July 8th, 2025 04:37
At what point?
arqios said:
Your poem walks bravely into the murky territory between tenderness and transgression, exposing how easily care can curdle into control. With spare, potent language and metaphor, you explore how boundary lines blur; how jokes, touches, and love itself can become coercive if misused. The final image, releasing the dove, becomes both a plea and a principle: real love liberates. Rather than offering easy answers, your poem compels us to stay vigilant, asking not just what we do, but why, and at what point we forget to notice the difference.
July 7th, 2025 20:45
arqios said:
Your poem walks bravely into the murky territory between tenderness and transgression, exposing how easily care can curdle into control. With spare, potent language and metaphor, you explore how boundary lines blur; how jokes, touches, and love itself can become coercive if misused. The final image, releasing the dove, becomes both a plea and a principle: real love liberates. Rather than offering easy answers, your poem compels us to stay vigilant, asking not just what we do, but why, and at what point we forget to notice the difference.
July 7th, 2025 20:45
At what point?
Teddy.15 said:
The pushing and shoving and the going a bit to far, human nature and this is truly powerful. I see a lot of wisdom and philosophy of when to know when to let something go! Wonderful write as always
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July 7th, 2025 14:17
Teddy.15 said:
The pushing and shoving and the going a bit to far, human nature and this is truly powerful. I see a lot of wisdom and philosophy of when to know when to let something go! Wonderful write as always
🌹
July 7th, 2025 14:17
At what point?
Jeremy Leach said:
Deeply thoughtful, original and well written. Makes my mind race trying to form opinions on it all, and I like that. The last line about releasing the dove resonates too, because I\'ve known of controlling people and relationships and the best advice is to not ever try to control. Yet many do.
July 7th, 2025 11:51
Jeremy Leach said:
Deeply thoughtful, original and well written. Makes my mind race trying to form opinions on it all, and I like that. The last line about releasing the dove resonates too, because I\'ve known of controlling people and relationships and the best advice is to not ever try to control. Yet many do.
July 7th, 2025 11:51
At what point?
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You go too far, says Fido to me, when I say \'Did KP fall over that cliff, or was she pushed - by me?!\' heehee.
July 7th, 2025 11:09
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You go too far, says Fido to me, when I say \'Did KP fall over that cliff, or was she pushed - by me?!\' heehee.
July 7th, 2025 11:09
At what point?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one lands with weight. 😔 The questions here aren’t rhetorical—they ache for reckoning. Your final line is gentle, but piercing. You found quite the tender edge between truth and restraint. Quietly powerful and a fave, my friend. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one lands with weight. 😔 The questions here aren’t rhetorical—they ache for reckoning. Your final line is gentle, but piercing. You found quite the tender edge between truth and restraint. Quietly powerful and a fave, my friend. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:13
Why me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, my friend…you are either divinely protected or running on borrowed time! 🤣 But seriously, this is sharp—wry, self-aware, and oddly tender beneath it all. That last line? A perfect sting. And somewhere in here, I swear, a fable is trying to take root. Love it! A fave for sure! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, my friend…you are either divinely protected or running on borrowed time! 🤣 But seriously, this is sharp—wry, self-aware, and oddly tender beneath it all. That last line? A perfect sting. And somewhere in here, I swear, a fable is trying to take root. Love it! A fave for sure! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:34
At what point?
Poetic Licence said:
That raises alot of questions and I am sure there are any definite answers, a lot to ponder on this one, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
That raises alot of questions and I am sure there are any definite answers, a lot to ponder on this one, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:31
At what point?
Doggerel Dave said:
Each of those lines could be extended, explored in their own right. You certainly pack \'em in, Soren.
Room there somewhere for thought...
Interest maintained throughout.
July 7th, 2025 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Each of those lines could be extended, explored in their own right. You certainly pack \'em in, Soren.
Room there somewhere for thought...
Interest maintained throughout.
July 7th, 2025 04:48
At what point?
David Wakeling said:
Now this is interesting. It raises some important philosophical questions. Sadly I don\' thave the answers but I enjoyed the journey this poem takes you on. Well done mi amigo
July 7th, 2025 04:23
David Wakeling said:
Now this is interesting. It raises some important philosophical questions. Sadly I don\' thave the answers but I enjoyed the journey this poem takes you on. Well done mi amigo
July 7th, 2025 04:23
Why me?
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are more fortunate than others soren, I have never broken a bone.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are more fortunate than others soren, I have never broken a bone.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:53
Why me?
Doggerel Dave said:
No accounting for it, Soren. My thought when I see a wheelchair just tells me \"there but for a thousandth of an inch go I\"
Much reality in a very neat form.
July 6th, 2025 19:05
Doggerel Dave said:
No accounting for it, Soren. My thought when I see a wheelchair just tells me \"there but for a thousandth of an inch go I\"
Much reality in a very neat form.
July 6th, 2025 19:05
Why me?
MendedFences27 said:
There are all types of good fortune. Some people get discovered and become stars, others work just as hard and never get an audition. If your poem is factual, your good fortune is keeping you alive. I liked your poem. The construction was unique. More importantly, it asks a penetrating question we all wonder about. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 13:31
MendedFences27 said:
There are all types of good fortune. Some people get discovered and become stars, others work just as hard and never get an audition. If your poem is factual, your good fortune is keeping you alive. I liked your poem. The construction was unique. More importantly, it asks a penetrating question we all wonder about. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 13:31
Why me?
Teddy.15 said:
I know someone who died from an allergic reaction to a calabroni which is a big black bee we have here in Italy. You my friend are in the ring of a thousand angels whom protect you from harm. 😇
July 6th, 2025 10:20
Teddy.15 said:
I know someone who died from an allergic reaction to a calabroni which is a big black bee we have here in Italy. You my friend are in the ring of a thousand angels whom protect you from harm. 😇
July 6th, 2025 10:20
Why me?
NafisaSB said:
It seems that you were destined for greater things so a bee sting though very painful should be taken in your stride
A bit on the gloomy side but a good read
July 6th, 2025 10:05
NafisaSB said:
It seems that you were destined for greater things so a bee sting though very painful should be taken in your stride
A bit on the gloomy side but a good read
July 6th, 2025 10:05
What were they thinking?
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes and it\'s usually Rock stars that give their Children silly names as well.
There\'s also people with a famous Name as well . I\'ve met a : Betty Davis, George Best and Paul McCartney. Nice one.
July 6th, 2025 09:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes and it\'s usually Rock stars that give their Children silly names as well.
There\'s also people with a famous Name as well . I\'ve met a : Betty Davis, George Best and Paul McCartney. Nice one.
July 6th, 2025 09:03
Why me?
Bella Shepard said:
The age old question, why? We can analyze all the factors but in the end perhaps it\'s just, because. How can we explain what we can\'t possibly understand. You gave me a really good think over this one. Excellent!
July 6th, 2025 08:32
Bella Shepard said:
The age old question, why? We can analyze all the factors but in the end perhaps it\'s just, because. How can we explain what we can\'t possibly understand. You gave me a really good think over this one. Excellent!
July 6th, 2025 08:32
Why me?
Poetic Licence said:
A question always pondered, is it just pure luck or do some people have something else protecting them, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 06:22
Poetic Licence said:
A question always pondered, is it just pure luck or do some people have something else protecting them, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 06:22
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