Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
You will be offended
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
You will be offended
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
You will be offended
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
You will be offended
David Wakeling said:
I think I was called most of those names when I was young and that was just from my family.Just kidding.It certainly highlights the amount of insults that exist in the English language. A disturding list.
August 24th, 2026 06:49
David Wakeling said:
I think I was called most of those names when I was young and that was just from my family.Just kidding.It certainly highlights the amount of insults that exist in the English language. A disturding list.
August 24th, 2026 06:49
You will be offended
Paul Bell said:
Blast, just got past three, hate that.
When is this rap song coming out, its a hit already.
August 24th, 2026 05:33
Paul Bell said:
Blast, just got past three, hate that.
When is this rap song coming out, its a hit already.
August 24th, 2026 05:33
Out of sight
alan b said:
Your use of the objects to form a relationship to the person is really well done.
August 24th, 2026 05:07
alan b said:
Your use of the objects to form a relationship to the person is really well done.
August 24th, 2026 05:07
Cracks of reality
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe echos of a previous life seeping through.
You read about such things.
A Haunting Read.
August 23rd, 2026 19:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe echos of a previous life seeping through.
You read about such things.
A Haunting Read.
August 23rd, 2026 19:43
Cracks of reality
mylastwrites said:
Your first two words say it. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2026 14:01
mylastwrites said:
Your first two words say it. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2026 14:01
Cracks of reality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what an eerie and powerful piece. It pulled me into a world where memory, identity, and perception no longer obey their boundaries...recognizable and completely alien at once. This one leaves the mind unsteady, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what an eerie and powerful piece. It pulled me into a world where memory, identity, and perception no longer obey their boundaries...recognizable and completely alien at once. This one leaves the mind unsteady, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:53
Cracks of reality
Lorenz said:
welcome to the twilight zone to share a good old bourbon with Rod Seling !
August 23rd, 2026 10:10
Lorenz said:
welcome to the twilight zone to share a good old bourbon with Rod Seling !
August 23rd, 2026 10:10
Cracks of reality
orchidee said:
Good write SB. if it was not so serious, one may say to me \'Since when were you sane? When did it happen that you went insane? From about age 1?\' lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. if it was not so serious, one may say to me \'Since when were you sane? When did it happen that you went insane? From about age 1?\' lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:55
Cracks of reality
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn eerie quality here, like déjà vu stretched into an alternate lifetime where time has folded back on itself. The strongest line for me is “In a second a year reckoned”—it captures that disorienting collapse of time before the final image of sanity drowning through the eyes.
August 23rd, 2026 07:23
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn eerie quality here, like déjà vu stretched into an alternate lifetime where time has folded back on itself. The strongest line for me is “In a second a year reckoned”—it captures that disorienting collapse of time before the final image of sanity drowning through the eyes.
August 23rd, 2026 07:23
Cracks of reality
Paul Bell said:
Feels like being in the care home with dementia, memories coming and going.
Though in saying that, I have been in places where I knew where I was going, and evereything was familar, but it was the first time I had been there.
Walking in someones footsteps.
August 23rd, 2026 05:29
Paul Bell said:
Feels like being in the care home with dementia, memories coming and going.
Though in saying that, I have been in places where I knew where I was going, and evereything was familar, but it was the first time I had been there.
Walking in someones footsteps.
August 23rd, 2026 05:29
Cracks of reality
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like a nightmare or dream. Very powerful images here. Certainly well constructed with the double rhyme. Makes me think
August 23rd, 2026 05:17
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like a nightmare or dream. Very powerful images here. Certainly well constructed with the double rhyme. Makes me think
August 23rd, 2026 05:17
Cracks of reality
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and thought-provoking poem.
August 23rd, 2026 04:50
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and thought-provoking poem.
August 23rd, 2026 04:50
Cracks of reality
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, it speaks to me of alternative dimensions, much enjoyed
August 23rd, 2026 03:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, it speaks to me of alternative dimensions, much enjoyed
August 23rd, 2026 03:31
Cradled
Doggerel Dave said:
Guessing this is you, Soren - don\'t disappoint, please.
(Too well writ to be anywhere else...)
August 22nd, 2026 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Guessing this is you, Soren - don\'t disappoint, please.
(Too well writ to be anywhere else...)
August 22nd, 2026 18:31
Cradled
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP don\'t see these sights cos she\'s too busy being on TV, radio, in the papers, magazines, etc. lol. Well, she see enough sights of old trouts - she just looks in the mirror! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:51
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP don\'t see these sights cos she\'s too busy being on TV, radio, in the papers, magazines, etc. lol. Well, she see enough sights of old trouts - she just looks in the mirror! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:51
Cradled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful escape, Soren. The scenery, solitude, and passing hours create a place that feels both untamed and deeply protective...somewhere I could gladly remain. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful escape, Soren. The scenery, solitude, and passing hours create a place that feels both untamed and deeply protective...somewhere I could gladly remain. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Cradled
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I wouldn\'t mind being there my dear sorrenbarret I wouldn\'t mind being there at all. 🌹
August 22nd, 2026 08:13
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I wouldn\'t mind being there my dear sorrenbarret I wouldn\'t mind being there at all. 🌹
August 22nd, 2026 08:13
Cradled
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
Cradled
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
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