Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Misfit
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

the hypocrisy of religion

November 5th, 2026 04:11

Misfit
orchidee said:

Ahh, judging by outward appearances? Erm, Like I do to KP, saying \'You\'re looking more lovely and trout-like each day, dear!\' lol. Or those other fish that are similar to trout.

November 5th, 2026 03:28

Skating on thin ice of AI
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Iโ€™ve had my share of fascinating experiences with AI, Soren, along with a few that made me want to pull my hair out! Which is quite an accomplishment, considering Iโ€™m bald! ๐Ÿคฃ ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

November 4th, 2026 21:51

Skating on thin ice of AI
Kevin Hulme said:

You could Imagine the Creators of AI crying: \'Its alive, Alive\'. Like some Mad Colin Clive.

November 4th, 2026 19:42

Skating on thin ice of AI
Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, Soren,

I must be honest, I\'m not really up to date with AI, just what I read, those who fear it and those who welcome it though I have read of the many job losses and of how it hacked into other IT networks. As you say, on thin ice, my friend.

All the best,

Tony.

November 4th, 2026 18:08

Falling
Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, Soren,

I saw this awful tragedy on the news - hit the ground like a missile, nine souls vaporised in a moment of horror. Your poem has captured this sad event in sickning detail, must have been very difficult to compose and bravo for doing so, my friend.

All the best,

Tony.

November 4th, 2026 17:12

Skating on thin ice of AI
soheil khodaparasti said:

I like your using thin ice as a metaphor for life\'s uncertainties, hidden dangers, and fragile promises. I also like this wisdom: not everything that appears solid is safe to trust, and sometimes survival depends on knowing when and where to tread carefully.

November 4th, 2026 15:06

Falling
Joseph M Marion said:

I love this story of life and death unfortunately people forget about their nature will always have the last say so very well written I love you my brother

November 4th, 2026 12:56

Skating on thin ice of AI
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I tread on thin ice each time I serve up sewage for KP. Dunno why she complains - plenty of protein in it. lol.

November 4th, 2026 09:42

Skating on thin ice of AI
Doggerel Dave said:

My query was? Which of the several questions I asked of you in the somewhat lenthy dialogue we had to be found here:

https://mypoeticside.com/discussion-461398-poemacomunidad

November 4th, 2026 08:08

The snake pit
falcon_mn said:

Dear poet
Thanks for sharing your poems and thoughts!
Sometimes, when I think, nobody reads poetry; your comment on my poetry appears.
That is great!

November 4th, 2026 07:56

Skating on thin ice of AI
arqios said:

An excellent pick up on Daveโ€™s query ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

November 4th, 2026 07:23

Skating on thin ice of AI
Paul Bell said:

AI is going to do some fantastic things for humans in the right hands.
Sadly, man has a self destruction clause in his DNA, and I\'ve got a feeling, AI will fulfill this destructive prophecy.

November 4th, 2026 07:10

Skating on thin ice of AI
Friendship said:

Well done. Your poem explores the precarious nature of engaging with artificial intelligence, likening it to skating on thin ice. It reflects on the risks and uncertainties associated with technological advancement and the potential consequences of missteps.

November 4th, 2026 06:16

Skating on thin ice of AI
Teddy.15 said:

Fantastic a question I always ask my husband as he is a physicist. He tells me he can make a calculation that would take 6 months by hand into just a few hours. I asked him does he not worry about eventually being less valued for his brains and he said no because even though A. I can do some stuff it had a lot of flaws so actually not so helpful because there were many flaws in the calculation which can only be fixed manually.

November 4th, 2026 05:29

Skating on thin ice of AI
Lorenz said:

I think these so- called A.I are already much smarter than humans !

November 4th, 2026 04:10

Skating on thin ice of AI
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

another of mans wonderful ideas, most of which result in disaster

November 4th, 2026 03:30

Falling
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Jesus, Soren. I looked into this after reading your poem, and itโ€™s absolutely devastating. Nine lives lost, including a pilot who was only twenty. I canโ€™t imagine what their loved ones are going through. Praying for all involved and affected by this tragedy. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

November 3rd, 2026 23:02

Falling
Kevin Hulme said:

Don\'t think I\'d like to hear that Tape. Must be the same listening to Voices on a \'Black Box\'.
And what those People went through in the Planes on 911: Doesn\'t bare thinking about.
A good Write.


November 3rd, 2026 19:31

Falling
Friendship said:

A well-written poem. Your poem serves to reflect on the fragility of life, the unexpected nature of death, and the haunting memories that remain after such tragedies. It confronts the fear of mortality and the loss of identity in the face of catastrophic events. I still can\'t get her voice out of my head.

November 3rd, 2026 10:52

Falling
Dev Parth said:

Soren, this left a deep ache in my chest. You captured the sheer, helpless terror of those final seconds so vividly that it took my breath away. The thought of that frantic voice fading into the haunting silence of the sky is utterly devastating. This is a raw, beautiful, and deeply heartbreaking tribute to those nine lost souls. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.

November 3rd, 2026 09:15

Falling
orchidee said:

A sensitive write SB.

November 3rd, 2026 08:15

Falling
Thomas W Case said:

Thereโ€™s a chilling, almost documentary quality to this, using internal rhyme and rapid-fire phrasing to recreate the terrifying speed of an aircraft disaster, while the fragmented radio communication makes the final moments feel horribly immediate. โ€œDeath diagnosed in the voice of a ghost, falling from where angels singโ€ is the keeper for me, because it brings together the cold technical explanation and the human tragedy, leaving the pilotโ€™s last words hanging somewhere between the investigation and the afterlife.

November 3rd, 2026 07:31

Falling
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A disturbing piece my friend, spoken as it is

November 3rd, 2026 05:05

Falling
Doggerel Dave said:

You gave substance to a news item i heard yesterday. Kudos, Soren.

November 3rd, 2026 04:55

Falling
arqios said:

Itโ€™s a chilling thought too how the moment of death is now recorded in many ways and will be a permanent artefact for countless generations to come ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

November 3rd, 2026 04:40

Falling
Teddy.15 said:

This whole poem is chilling. Gone in a flash. ๐ŸŒน

November 3rd, 2026 04:21

Water speaks
Kevin Hulme said:

My Grandmother said she saw Frogs fall out the Sky when she was little.
A enjoyable Read.

November 2nd, 2026 19:25

Water speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, that uncertainty about being addressed gets me...is someone reaching out, or am I hearing what I already fear? Fascinating read. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

November 2nd, 2026 17:51

Water speaks
GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€ said:

Beautifully written my friend

November 2nd, 2026 13:43

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