Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cold truth
Paul Bell said:
Nature or human, you lose someone close, it\'s devastating.
I always think in the human world, women cope better, but I think that\'s because they know how to use the washing machine.
December 2nd, 2025 10:46
Paul Bell said:
Nature or human, you lose someone close, it\'s devastating.
I always think in the human world, women cope better, but I think that\'s because they know how to use the washing machine.
December 2nd, 2025 10:46
Cold truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really cuts through. You carried that mournful music straight into the final blow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really cuts through. You carried that mournful music straight into the final blow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:42
Cold truth
orchidee said:
A sad tale SB. I\'m not keen on turkey. I find it rather dry.
December 2nd, 2025 10:00
orchidee said:
A sad tale SB. I\'m not keen on turkey. I find it rather dry.
December 2nd, 2025 10:00
Cold truth
Katie B. said:
Lovely, beautiful, majestic. I enjoy reading your work! Lots of night birds in this world.
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
Katie B. said:
Lovely, beautiful, majestic. I enjoy reading your work! Lots of night birds in this world.
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
Cold truth
Friendship said:
This poem is extremely somber. Very melancholic and very disheartening. Your poem explores themes of loss, loneliness, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the sorrowful experience of a night bird mourning the death of its mate and the emptiness that follows. The poet evokes emotions related to loss and highlights the stark realities of nature, reminding readers of the fragility of life and the deep connections that can be severed by death.
December 2nd, 2025 04:03
Friendship said:
This poem is extremely somber. Very melancholic and very disheartening. Your poem explores themes of loss, loneliness, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the sorrowful experience of a night bird mourning the death of its mate and the emptiness that follows. The poet evokes emotions related to loss and highlights the stark realities of nature, reminding readers of the fragility of life and the deep connections that can be severed by death.
December 2nd, 2025 04:03
Cold truth
Aman 12 said:
solitude and grief flow like a dirge..There is something so moving about this poem..i can\'t pinpoint.
December 2nd, 2025 03:42
Aman 12 said:
solitude and grief flow like a dirge..There is something so moving about this poem..i can\'t pinpoint.
December 2nd, 2025 03:42
Mysteries of the mato
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Natures wonder can never be heard in the city soren.
Andy
December 2nd, 2025 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Natures wonder can never be heard in the city soren.
Andy
December 2nd, 2025 02:19
America
kuuumar said:
Hunger for Power and Dominate the worls is dangerous attitude for any country.(The nail of greed sunk deep with the hammer of lust )
Makig profit by destructive Equipments creates only Money and undesirable Hatred.
Well written.
December 1st, 2025 20:03
kuuumar said:
Hunger for Power and Dominate the worls is dangerous attitude for any country.(The nail of greed sunk deep with the hammer of lust )
Makig profit by destructive Equipments creates only Money and undesirable Hatred.
Well written.
December 1st, 2025 20:03
Mysteries of the mato
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I don\'t think I\'ll ever see\' etc. I fine Poem about
Nature and all it\'s drapery. Good Write.
December 1st, 2025 19:18
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I don\'t think I\'ll ever see\' etc. I fine Poem about
Nature and all it\'s drapery. Good Write.
December 1st, 2025 19:18
Mysteries of the mato
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich…the forest as mother, spirit, keeper of old wisdom. Every sound and shadow adds to that living presence. You brought the whole Mato to life. Love it, Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich…the forest as mother, spirit, keeper of old wisdom. Every sound and shadow adds to that living presence. You brought the whole Mato to life. Love it, Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:06
America
PerditaRose said:
Hi Soren,
I saw that this poem was listed in Poems from the community trending this week that Julian emailed today. I\'m guessing this happens fairly frequently and there are others whose poems I have also read. I understand that it\'s about your disgust with our country. I have no issue with that. But I don\'t fully understand what the last line means. Can you explain, or would you rather not, or am I just too dense?
Thanks,
Perdita
***
To brief, who\'s speaking the last line: the \"fly herder\" or the poet? Am I even more dense?
December 1st, 2025 08:30
PerditaRose said:
Hi Soren,
I saw that this poem was listed in Poems from the community trending this week that Julian emailed today. I\'m guessing this happens fairly frequently and there are others whose poems I have also read. I understand that it\'s about your disgust with our country. I have no issue with that. But I don\'t fully understand what the last line means. Can you explain, or would you rather not, or am I just too dense?
Thanks,
Perdita
***
To brief, who\'s speaking the last line: the \"fly herder\" or the poet? Am I even more dense?
December 1st, 2025 08:30
Mysteries of the mato
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem “Mysteries of the Mato” revolves around the deep connection between nature and human experience. It celebrates the rich, mystical qualities of the forest, highlighting its sounds, sights, and the wisdom it holds. The poet captures the beauty and serenity of nature, the spiritual presence of the past, and the nurturing aspects of the earth, while contrasting them with the chaotic and lifeless elements of urban life. Yet your poem serves to remind readers of the importance and beauty of nature, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the natural world and its mysteries, especially in contrast to the chaotic nature of urban living. It invites reflection on the spiritual and nurturing aspects of the environment, suggesting that solace and wisdom can be found in the embrace of nature.
December 1st, 2025 07:10
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem “Mysteries of the Mato” revolves around the deep connection between nature and human experience. It celebrates the rich, mystical qualities of the forest, highlighting its sounds, sights, and the wisdom it holds. The poet captures the beauty and serenity of nature, the spiritual presence of the past, and the nurturing aspects of the earth, while contrasting them with the chaotic and lifeless elements of urban life. Yet your poem serves to remind readers of the importance and beauty of nature, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the natural world and its mysteries, especially in contrast to the chaotic nature of urban living. It invites reflection on the spiritual and nurturing aspects of the environment, suggesting that solace and wisdom can be found in the embrace of nature.
December 1st, 2025 07:10
Mysteries of the mato
arqios said:
Just finished viewing Tom Hanks’ “Here” and now your poem reverberates in the mind and soul. That spirit is past, present, and future!🙏🏻🕊️
December 1st, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
Just finished viewing Tom Hanks’ “Here” and now your poem reverberates in the mind and soul. That spirit is past, present, and future!🙏🏻🕊️
December 1st, 2025 06:54
Mysteries of the mato
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that once upon a time man was part of the forest, and they lived hand in hand.
Did man progress and move on, leaving the forest behind.
It seems as the years have gone by, the forest has kept its dignity, but man has lost his way.
December 1st, 2025 06:49
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that once upon a time man was part of the forest, and they lived hand in hand.
Did man progress and move on, leaving the forest behind.
It seems as the years have gone by, the forest has kept its dignity, but man has lost his way.
December 1st, 2025 06:49
Mysteries of the mato
orchidee said:
A fine write SB, and with skill rhyming the end of lines, and also within the last lines of each verse. Some hymns with longer lines rhyme mid-lines as well as end-lines, which is skilful, I think. KP asks me \'What rhymes with sewage?\' so she can write a poem about what I feed her. lol.
December 1st, 2025 03:54
orchidee said:
A fine write SB, and with skill rhyming the end of lines, and also within the last lines of each verse. Some hymns with longer lines rhyme mid-lines as well as end-lines, which is skilful, I think. KP asks me \'What rhymes with sewage?\' so she can write a poem about what I feed her. lol.
December 1st, 2025 03:54
Foolishness compounded
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, I too wish you well.
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, I too wish you well.
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:18
Awakening
BoxMyHeart said:
The failing of maintaining the fantasy for longer than a dream.
November 30th, 2025 18:09
BoxMyHeart said:
The failing of maintaining the fantasy for longer than a dream.
November 30th, 2025 18:09
Foolishness compounded
Teddy.15 said:
Nursery rhymes with a twist, wonderful and creative. 🌹 🌝 🥄 🐄
November 30th, 2025 12:47
Teddy.15 said:
Nursery rhymes with a twist, wonderful and creative. 🌹 🌝 🥄 🐄
November 30th, 2025 12:47
Foolishness compounded
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is wild in the best way…a playful tumble of language that bends every line back on itself. It’s clever, fast, and full of a sharp wink! Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is wild in the best way…a playful tumble of language that bends every line back on itself. It’s clever, fast, and full of a sharp wink! Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:34
America
NafisaSB said:
This one hits hard as it’s straight from the heart. Bravo. 💐👍
November 30th, 2025 05:34
NafisaSB said:
This one hits hard as it’s straight from the heart. Bravo. 💐👍
November 30th, 2025 05:34
Foolishness compounded
Friendship said:
OH My, what a delightful poem. This poem revolves around the concept of paradox and the playful nature of language. It explores the idea of dual meanings and the absurdity present in everyday phrases and objects. The poet consists of a series of whimsical, imaginative descriptions that juxtapose familiar terms with unexpected associations, highlighting the absurdity and humor in language and life. The poem seems to be crafted for enjoyment and reflection, encouraging readers to consider the quirks of language and the humor inherent in the way we describe our world. Its whimsical nature invites readers to engage with language creatively, provoking thought and laughter.
November 30th, 2025 05:04
Friendship said:
OH My, what a delightful poem. This poem revolves around the concept of paradox and the playful nature of language. It explores the idea of dual meanings and the absurdity present in everyday phrases and objects. The poet consists of a series of whimsical, imaginative descriptions that juxtapose familiar terms with unexpected associations, highlighting the absurdity and humor in language and life. The poem seems to be crafted for enjoyment and reflection, encouraging readers to consider the quirks of language and the humor inherent in the way we describe our world. Its whimsical nature invites readers to engage with language creatively, provoking thought and laughter.
November 30th, 2025 05:04
Falling apart
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we awake is precious soren.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we awake is precious soren.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:22
Falling apart
arqios said:
Sometimes the shredding hurts with all the chafing and scraping. Such is life! 🙏🕊️
November 30th, 2025 01:26
arqios said:
Sometimes the shredding hurts with all the chafing and scraping. Such is life! 🙏🕊️
November 30th, 2025 01:26
Falling apart
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently you can\'t step in the same River twice. And maybe we are not the same person today that was here yesterday.
Aren\'t we dying every day?
Well said.
November 29th, 2025 20:14
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently you can\'t step in the same River twice. And maybe we are not the same person today that was here yesterday.
Aren\'t we dying every day?
Well said.
November 29th, 2025 20:14
At end of day
jorge serra said:
Is a good poem, it was White very well at the end of day, with a truth messsage.
November 29th, 2025 16:34
jorge serra said:
Is a good poem, it was White very well at the end of day, with a truth messsage.
November 29th, 2025 16:34
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