Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Outlived
David Wakeling said:

Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end

May 29th, 2026 05:09

Outlived
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write

May 29th, 2026 03:43

Renewal
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words and descriptions soren.

Andy

May 29th, 2026 01:26

Renewal
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

May 28th, 2026 20:37

Renewal
Kevin Hulme said:

Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .

May 28th, 2026 18:33

Renewal
Teddy.15 said:

Dearest sorrenbarret another beautiful vision. 🌹


May 28th, 2026 14:48

Renewal
orchidee said:

A renewing good write SB.

May 28th, 2026 10:45

Renewal
Paul Bell said:

Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.

May 28th, 2026 08:04

Renewal
arqios said:

This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

May 28th, 2026 07:00

Renewal
Lorenz said:

A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...

May 28th, 2026 04:38

Renewal
David Wakeling said:

Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable

May 28th, 2026 04:37

Renewal
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Most descriptive and much enjoyed

May 28th, 2026 03:30

The shape of a tree
Goldfinch60 said:

There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.

Andy

May 28th, 2026 01:26

The shape of a tree
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes . That last line says alot. Liked.

May 27th, 2026 19:27

The shape of a tree
Syd said:

True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.

- Syd

May 27th, 2026 16:58

The shape of a tree
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful 🌹

May 27th, 2026 15:28

Night\'s bedroom
mohammad ali said:

So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.

May 27th, 2026 14:12

King of the world
Joseph M Marion said:

Love this lot of truth here

May 27th, 2026 11:39

Development
Joseph M Marion said:

I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written

May 27th, 2026 10:49

The shape of a tree
Lorenz said:

A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...

May 27th, 2026 10:15

The shape of a tree
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 27th, 2026 10:06

Little one
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. β€œHe pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

May 27th, 2026 10:02

The shape of a tree
David Wakeling said:

This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo

May 27th, 2026 07:22

The shape of a tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

love the last line my friend

May 27th, 2026 04:07

The chase
NafisaSB said:

Very descriptive- can visualize it πŸ‘Œ

May 27th, 2026 03:16

Little one
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.

Andy

May 27th, 2026 01:44

The chase
Waiting for Silence said:

Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one

May 26th, 2026 23:35

Little one
Waiting for Silence said:

A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!

May 26th, 2026 23:33

Little one
Kevin Hulme said:

That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.

May 26th, 2026 19:34

Little one
soheil khodaparasti said:

A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending β€” a very well-written piece.

May 26th, 2026 14:28

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