Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Once upon a playful loss
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 23rd, 2026 09:38

Once upon a playful loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this really moved me. Growing older so often means developing defenses we never needed at the beginning...and innocence rarely survives without scars. Powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 23rd, 2026 08:30

Precarious
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is one heck of a poem. The tension builds quietly and leaves me holding my breath...waiting for the inevitable shift. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 23rd, 2026 08:04

Once upon a playful loss
Lorenz said:

Let\'s stop growing before it\'s too late !

July 23rd, 2026 07:56

Once upon a playful loss
arqios said:



July 23rd, 2026 07:14

Once upon a playful loss
arqios said:

No one defends us but ourselves even when we at times delegate that to others. 🙏🕊️

July 23rd, 2026 07:13

Once upon a playful loss
Teddy.15 said:

Wow your metaphor is superb, and yes we can all be changed by circumstances, hopefully for the better yet it\'s not always the case. 🌹

July 23rd, 2026 03:29

Once upon a playful loss
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A deep write my friend

July 23rd, 2026 03:26

Precarious
Kevin Hulme said:

This could Sum-Up so many things, not just one. Apply it to whatever you think fit.
Good Write.

July 22nd, 2026 19:29

Precarious
8Blackwidow8 said:

(Before the balance of the pendulum turns over
A silent moment in the eye of a hurricane)

Well put here. I\'m such a fan already.

July 22nd, 2026 15:52

Precarious
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 22nd, 2026 12:30

Precarious
Paul Bell said:

The eye, the only part of the hurricane that\'s calm.
Seems sort of strange with such a destructive force.
A bit like Trump when he\'s sleeping.

July 22nd, 2026 11:15

Precarious
Lorenz said:

My damn autistic perspective is more inspired by the menacing tornado about to strike than the deep metaphor ...Really sorry !

July 22nd, 2026 08:51

Precarious
arqios said:

A dizzying ride for all in our global bedroom community 🙏🏻🕊️

July 22nd, 2026 05:40

Precarious
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I echo Teddys comments

July 22nd, 2026 05:21

Precarious
Teddy.15 said:

You just described every politician of our times 🤣 sorrenbarret your emotional poetry leaves me on the edge for sure. Kudos 🌹

July 22nd, 2026 03:43

Small things
Goldfinch60 said:

As they are from us all soren.

Andy

July 22nd, 2026 01:24

Out of sight
Samprikta Paul said:

Seems like a good memory, good one.

July 22nd, 2026 01:14

Small things
soheil khodaparasti said:

Profound in its simplicity. Unlike the physical traces—skin, hair, sweat, blood, and fingernails—the speaker’s thoughts are intangible fragments of himself that may persist through words or memory.

July 21st, 2026 22:50

Small things
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The mosquito really got me, Soren! Even the little bloodsucking bastards become unwilling archivists…flying off with a tiny piece of our existence. Wonderfully strange and thought-provoking work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 21st, 2026 20:17

Small things
Kevin Hulme said:

As I mentioned somewhere before. Apparently we may be breathing parts of the breath of Caesar. Or Cleopatra.
A good Write.

July 21st, 2026 18:45

Small things
Lorenz said:

we are nothing but this atomic theory within the unfathomable whole ...

July 21st, 2026 11:24

Small things
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 21st, 2026 11:04

Archetype of man
8Blackwidow8 said:

WOW. This is stunning. (His feet resting on a stolen stool of nature he claims as his own).

I love it when men write about men from an objective standpoint. This one is amazing.

July 21st, 2026 11:02

Small things
8Blackwidow8 said:

\"A word rides soundwaves in the wind
Faded thoughts I can\'t rescind\"

I like these lines the most, but the overall poem is beautiful. Well written.

July 21st, 2026 10:08

Small things
Thomas W Case said:

You scatter yourself like dust, and the world keeps every piece whether you mean it or not.
Gritty truth—nothing we are really disappears, it just changes hands.

July 21st, 2026 08:07

Small things
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery!!! Ok sorrenbarret you know I love you, but please less spit left on the pillow please 🤣

July 21st, 2026 07:29

Small things
Paul Bell said:

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
Is that the real end, or do we move in sound.
I suppose if we\'re scattered on earth, we sure move all around.

July 21st, 2026 06:54

Busted
NafisaSB said:

Poignant verse - touches the heart 🤔

July 21st, 2026 06:34

Out of sight
cully45 said:

Short and to the point. Nice one Soren.

July 21st, 2026 05:35

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