Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Spilt criticism
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Decay
Durdica Porobija said:
The fall and ruin of the tree seems like the ruin of the human being, and certainly the ruin of kings. The tragedy of the fall does not refer to the mechanical parts of modern civilization. It is an antithesis that highlights the cold, soulless nature of modern civilization. That is how it seems to me.
May 2nd, 2026 09:45
Durdica Porobija said:
The fall and ruin of the tree seems like the ruin of the human being, and certainly the ruin of kings. The tragedy of the fall does not refer to the mechanical parts of modern civilization. It is an antithesis that highlights the cold, soulless nature of modern civilization. That is how it seems to me.
May 2nd, 2026 09:45
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
orchidee said:
Talking about guns - KP\'s very naughty. She and I play Russian Roulette. But she leaves only ONE chamber empty, and says to me \'You go first, dear!\' lol
May 2nd, 2026 08:19
orchidee said:
Talking about guns - KP\'s very naughty. She and I play Russian Roulette. But she leaves only ONE chamber empty, and says to me \'You go first, dear!\' lol
May 2nd, 2026 08:19
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
arqios said:
A world like that is entirely possible. But who shall police and enforce once everyone has been mutilated? Much food for thought in this here poem dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
arqios said:
A world like that is entirely possible. But who shall police and enforce once everyone has been mutilated? Much food for thought in this here poem dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Teddy.15 said:
lol in a sick world this is hilarious inside my heart my dismay for our world it\'s a very real sadness. A wonderful piece of poetry, politically speaking it\'s getting more like puppet theatre every day. 🌹
May 2nd, 2026 07:20
Teddy.15 said:
lol in a sick world this is hilarious inside my heart my dismay for our world it\'s a very real sadness. A wonderful piece of poetry, politically speaking it\'s getting more like puppet theatre every day. 🌹
May 2nd, 2026 07:20
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve just killed off the human race outright.
Some I would gladly shoot, others, yes they should suffer.
Repeat offenders, just make them politicians.
May 2nd, 2026 07:01
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve just killed off the human race outright.
Some I would gladly shoot, others, yes they should suffer.
Repeat offenders, just make them politicians.
May 2nd, 2026 07:01
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Friendship said:
Your poem presents a provocative critique of justice and punishment, suggesting extreme, physical retributions for various forms of wrongdoing, from murder to dishonesty. It calls into question the nature of justice and societal responses to crime, proposing that the punishment should match the crime in a literal and gruesome way. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 06:43
Friendship said:
Your poem presents a provocative critique of justice and punishment, suggesting extreme, physical retributions for various forms of wrongdoing, from murder to dishonesty. It calls into question the nature of justice and societal responses to crime, proposing that the punishment should match the crime in a literal and gruesome way. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 06:43
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly is old testament.Some thought provoking statements here.I remember a young nurse was murdered and the murderers were put in jail and had colour tv three meals a day.They were better off in jail.I wanted the death penalty brought back.This certainly raises some important issues here .Excellent
May 2nd, 2026 05:24
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly is old testament.Some thought provoking statements here.I remember a young nurse was murdered and the murderers were put in jail and had colour tv three meals a day.They were better off in jail.I wanted the death penalty brought back.This certainly raises some important issues here .Excellent
May 2nd, 2026 05:24
The girl next door
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be sick - that booger! lol. Not that you intended to make us feel queasy.
May 1st, 2026 09:19
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be sick - that booger! lol. Not that you intended to make us feel queasy.
May 1st, 2026 09:19
The girl next door
Doggerel Dave said:
An older woman who knows the ropes - the way to go.
May 1st, 2026 08:22
Doggerel Dave said:
An older woman who knows the ropes - the way to go.
May 1st, 2026 08:22
The girl next door
Lorenz said:
I never had my first kiss .I just stole them all after that...
May 1st, 2026 06:32
Lorenz said:
I never had my first kiss .I just stole them all after that...
May 1st, 2026 06:32
The girl next door
David Wakeling said:
Now this is a fun story.Lucky it wasn\'t in the days of Covid 19. Well constructed and good cadence.Well done
May 1st, 2026 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Now this is a fun story.Lucky it wasn\'t in the days of Covid 19. Well constructed and good cadence.Well done
May 1st, 2026 05:38
The girl next door
Paul Bell said:
That\'ll teach her.
Wonder how many hearts she broke through the years..
May 1st, 2026 03:04
Paul Bell said:
That\'ll teach her.
Wonder how many hearts she broke through the years..
May 1st, 2026 03:04
The girl next door
Teddy.15 said:
lol love the flow the rhyme and the theme, ah the first kiss 💋 must have been magnificent to remember at the ripe age of four 🤣
May 1st, 2026 03:04
Teddy.15 said:
lol love the flow the rhyme and the theme, ah the first kiss 💋 must have been magnificent to remember at the ripe age of four 🤣
May 1st, 2026 03:04
The End
Goldfinch60 said:
But that glow will arise soren and life will return.
Andy
May 1st, 2026 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
But that glow will arise soren and life will return.
Andy
May 1st, 2026 01:20
The End
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the moment of a Death.
As always: a good Write.
April 30th, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the moment of a Death.
As always: a good Write.
April 30th, 2026 18:36
The End
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I could have given my recent \'epic\' poem that title! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I could have given my recent \'epic\' poem that title! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:36
The End
David Wakeling said:
For me life is but a dream.This is well written.I like the rhyme.The metaphor of life as a fire place.I see an after life here as well.Excellent work mi amigo
April 30th, 2026 06:08
David Wakeling said:
For me life is but a dream.This is well written.I like the rhyme.The metaphor of life as a fire place.I see an after life here as well.Excellent work mi amigo
April 30th, 2026 06:08
The End
Friendship said:
Your poem \"The End\" explores the themes of mortality, the fleeting nature of life and memories, and the inevitable conclusion of experiences. It reflects on how stories and moments come to an end, leaving behind only memories and echoes of what once was.
April 30th, 2026 05:07
Friendship said:
Your poem \"The End\" explores the themes of mortality, the fleeting nature of life and memories, and the inevitable conclusion of experiences. It reflects on how stories and moments come to an end, leaving behind only memories and echoes of what once was.
April 30th, 2026 05:07
The End
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Glad I spend my moments reading your poetry until that glow in my eyes dies! Good work Soren
April 30th, 2026 04:27
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Glad I spend my moments reading your poetry until that glow in my eyes dies! Good work Soren
April 30th, 2026 04:27
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