Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Different shades of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a beautiful tension through it…flowers, birds, warmth, shelter…then rushing floods and strangling vines underneath it all. “Life in death to promote” lands as the quiet truth holding the poem together. Excellent write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a beautiful tension through it…flowers, birds, warmth, shelter…then rushing floods and strangling vines underneath it all. “Life in death to promote” lands as the quiet truth holding the poem together. Excellent write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:10
Different shades of love
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like beauty with teeth—everything blooming and breaking at the same time without apology.
There’s a rough truth in it, like nature giving and taking in the same breath and not caring who notices.
May 7th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like beauty with teeth—everything blooming and breaking at the same time without apology.
There’s a rough truth in it, like nature giving and taking in the same breath and not caring who notices.
May 7th, 2026 07:45
Different shades of love
arqios said:
Beautifully penned out thinking and musing. Much enjoyed 🤩✒️🕊️🙏
May 7th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
Beautifully penned out thinking and musing. Much enjoyed 🤩✒️🕊️🙏
May 7th, 2026 06:34
Different shades of love
Katie B. said:
Yes, \"all life does surrender.\" Lovely words spoken here.
May 7th, 2026 05:53
Katie B. said:
Yes, \"all life does surrender.\" Lovely words spoken here.
May 7th, 2026 05:53
Different shades of love
David Wakeling said:
So many strong images here including all the senses.Well done compadre
May 7th, 2026 05:02
David Wakeling said:
So many strong images here including all the senses.Well done compadre
May 7th, 2026 05:02
Different shades of love
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, enjoyed
May 7th, 2026 04:03
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, enjoyed
May 7th, 2026 04:03
Different shades of love
Waiting for Silence said:
good write. Strong philosophical note in the end, emphasizing coexistence of life and decay.
May 7th, 2026 03:52
Waiting for Silence said:
good write. Strong philosophical note in the end, emphasizing coexistence of life and decay.
May 7th, 2026 03:52
Pools
Goldfinch60 said:
Time will always be there for us soren both past and future.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Time will always be there for us soren both past and future.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:43
Pools
arqios said:
Brings me memories of that type of silt that is light and fluffy which settles quite quickly after being disturbed momentarily and the thicker and more buoyant type that creates a muddied milky texture that lasts for hours and hours. 🙏🕊️
May 6th, 2026 20:31
arqios said:
Brings me memories of that type of silt that is light and fluffy which settles quite quickly after being disturbed momentarily and the thicker and more buoyant type that creates a muddied milky texture that lasts for hours and hours. 🙏🕊️
May 6th, 2026 20:31
Pools
Kevin Hulme said:
Having a River as a Metaphor for the Passing of Time was well done. \'You can never step in the same River twice\'. As someone once said.
May 6th, 2026 19:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Having a River as a Metaphor for the Passing of Time was well done. \'You can never step in the same River twice\'. As someone once said.
May 6th, 2026 19:15
Bliss\' home
Joseph M Marion said:
I love all you say beautiful and I agree nice quiet resolute place to die
May 6th, 2026 17:01
Joseph M Marion said:
I love all you say beautiful and I agree nice quiet resolute place to die
May 6th, 2026 17:01
Pools
Salvia.S said:
The river remembers what we try to forget. Very well written!!
May 6th, 2026 08:43
Salvia.S said:
The river remembers what we try to forget. Very well written!!
May 6th, 2026 08:43
Pools
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m searching in the mud for summat for KP\'s dinner. lol.
May 6th, 2026 08:37
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m searching in the mud for summat for KP\'s dinner. lol.
May 6th, 2026 08:37
Pools
Katie B. said:
We don\'t always see the truth and reality of another\'s existence. Well done.
May 6th, 2026 08:24
Katie B. said:
We don\'t always see the truth and reality of another\'s existence. Well done.
May 6th, 2026 08:24
Pools
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really love the philosophical undercurrent running through this piece. The river imagery works beautifully as both memory and identity...constantly changing, constantly carrying things away, yet somehow appearing unchanged to the outside world. And that final line ties the whole meditation together perfectly. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really love the philosophical undercurrent running through this piece. The river imagery works beautifully as both memory and identity...constantly changing, constantly carrying things away, yet somehow appearing unchanged to the outside world. And that final line ties the whole meditation together perfectly. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:02
Pools
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren. Your poem revolves around a stream as a metaphor for life’s journey, memories, and the inevitable decay and renewal that accompany it. Your imagery evokes a sense of nostalgia and reflection on the nature of existence and how we perceive transformation.
May 6th, 2026 06:07
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren. Your poem revolves around a stream as a metaphor for life’s journey, memories, and the inevitable decay and renewal that accompany it. Your imagery evokes a sense of nostalgia and reflection on the nature of existence and how we perceive transformation.
May 6th, 2026 06:07
Pools
David Wakeling said:
An eery feel about this one.It could be a place where good or evil might have happened.Very clever work
May 6th, 2026 05:40
David Wakeling said:
An eery feel about this one.It could be a place where good or evil might have happened.Very clever work
May 6th, 2026 05:40
Pools
Paul Bell said:
The river never asks questions, or portions blame, it just moves the memory on that little bit futher out to sea..
Water is tranquil though, and it does soothe.
May 6th, 2026 04:47
Paul Bell said:
The river never asks questions, or portions blame, it just moves the memory on that little bit futher out to sea..
Water is tranquil though, and it does soothe.
May 6th, 2026 04:47
Pools
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the flow of the river nicely put, good write my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the flow of the river nicely put, good write my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:32
Pools
Teddy.15 said:
Time past and present. Evolution of a soul yet the river stays the same, I find this to be most elegant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 6th, 2026 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
Time past and present. Evolution of a soul yet the river stays the same, I find this to be most elegant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 6th, 2026 04:10
A hand full and an eight second ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Eight seconds is a long time to stay on that bronco soren. LOL
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Eight seconds is a long time to stay on that bronco soren. LOL
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:45
A hand full and an eight second ride
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a handful.
Is the 8 seconds Rule for a Mechanical Bull or a real Bull ?
Good Write.
May 5th, 2026 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a handful.
Is the 8 seconds Rule for a Mechanical Bull or a real Bull ?
Good Write.
May 5th, 2026 19:16
A hand full and an eight second ride
arqios said:
One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to bring the mark down to 5 seconds. 🕊️🙏🙃
May 5th, 2026 19:03
arqios said:
One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to bring the mark down to 5 seconds. 🕊️🙏🙃
May 5th, 2026 19:03
A hand full and an eight second ride
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of her ambitions casting shadows on the sun…powerful. It carries that sense of scale…like she’s larger than anything around her. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of her ambitions casting shadows on the sun…powerful. It carries that sense of scale…like she’s larger than anything around her. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:16
A hand full and an eight second ride
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, much enjoyed
May 5th, 2026 09:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, much enjoyed
May 5th, 2026 09:01
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