Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Soft dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve walked that same inner weather…rain that doesn’t cleanse, only stains. You capture that emotional climate so vividly. Very well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 25th, 2025 10:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve walked that same inner weather…rain that doesn’t cleanse, only stains. You capture that emotional climate so vividly. Very well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 25th, 2025 10:20
Soft dreams
Lorenz said:
It remains me of the \'\'Hotel California \" Where you check in but never check out...
October 25th, 2025 09:19
Lorenz said:
It remains me of the \'\'Hotel California \" Where you check in but never check out...
October 25th, 2025 09:19
Soft dreams
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The last stanza is an example of visceral writing. Perhaps \'liked\' would be inaccurate. May be- \'educational\' is closer to what I felt.
October 25th, 2025 08:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The last stanza is an example of visceral writing. Perhaps \'liked\' would be inaccurate. May be- \'educational\' is closer to what I felt.
October 25th, 2025 08:03
Soft dreams
Paul Bell said:
Where we hide, the mist pass by.
Only time the days ask why.
Locked in an iron room with no way out.
Left only a dream and hopeless doubts.
October 25th, 2025 06:42
Paul Bell said:
Where we hide, the mist pass by.
Only time the days ask why.
Locked in an iron room with no way out.
Left only a dream and hopeless doubts.
October 25th, 2025 06:42
The magic show
rajatbagchi said:
So much can be written on this topic from different perspectives. I liked reading yours!
October 25th, 2025 06:14
rajatbagchi said:
So much can be written on this topic from different perspectives. I liked reading yours!
October 25th, 2025 06:14
Soft dreams
Friendship said:
Your setting is metaphorical, revolving around the mind and emotional landscapes rather than a physical location. The poet seeks to articulate the universal experience of longing for the comfort of dreams while confronting the painful realities of life, resonating with anyone who has felt trapped by their circumstances. Your poem also explores the conflict between dreams and reality, highlighting feelings of disappointment and entrapment. It conveys a sense of longing for the comfort of dreams while grappling with the harsh realities of life. And yet your poem delves into themes of disillusionment, the fragility of dreams, and the psychological struggle of being trapped in one\'s own mind. It portrays the tension between the desire for escape through dreams and the inevitability of confronting painful truths.I must say, this dream is quite disturbing.
October 25th, 2025 05:35
Friendship said:
Your setting is metaphorical, revolving around the mind and emotional landscapes rather than a physical location. The poet seeks to articulate the universal experience of longing for the comfort of dreams while confronting the painful realities of life, resonating with anyone who has felt trapped by their circumstances. Your poem also explores the conflict between dreams and reality, highlighting feelings of disappointment and entrapment. It conveys a sense of longing for the comfort of dreams while grappling with the harsh realities of life. And yet your poem delves into themes of disillusionment, the fragility of dreams, and the psychological struggle of being trapped in one\'s own mind. It portrays the tension between the desire for escape through dreams and the inevitability of confronting painful truths.I must say, this dream is quite disturbing.
October 25th, 2025 05:35
Soft dreams
peto said:
Your word choices in this are superb Soren
An iron room with windows glued shut
Is a great line with vivid imagery
Top notch
October 25th, 2025 04:05
peto said:
Your word choices in this are superb Soren
An iron room with windows glued shut
Is a great line with vivid imagery
Top notch
October 25th, 2025 04:05
Halloween
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, but over the many years I have lived in this house I have never had trick or treaters come to my house.
Andy
October 25th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, but over the many years I have lived in this house I have never had trick or treaters come to my house.
Andy
October 25th, 2025 01:53
Halloween
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one. I used to Hollow out a Turnip also when younger. Now it\'s all Commercial.
When Kids come to the door dressed as Witches; I sometimes would like to answer it as Mathew Hopkins : Witchfinder General. Give THEM a fright.
October 24th, 2025 19:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one. I used to Hollow out a Turnip also when younger. Now it\'s all Commercial.
When Kids come to the door dressed as Witches; I sometimes would like to answer it as Mathew Hopkins : Witchfinder General. Give THEM a fright.
October 24th, 2025 19:01
Halloween
Poetic Licence said:
I really liked the write, but it is just another chance to ring those pennies out of you, thousands of people celebrating something that they have no idea the history off, have a great weekend
October 24th, 2025 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
I really liked the write, but it is just another chance to ring those pennies out of you, thousands of people celebrating something that they have no idea the history off, have a great weekend
October 24th, 2025 13:52
Halloween
Friendship said:
The poem \"Halloween\" delves into the historical roots and transformation of Halloween customs, underscoring the dichotomy between the ancient rituals associated with the holiday and their contemporary interpretations. It examines the interplay of cultural beliefs, spirituality, and the evolution of the celebration over time, encompassing All Hallows\' Eve, the significance of costumes and masks, the tradition of trick-or-treating, and the symbolism of jack-o-lanterns. Furthermore, the poem explores the darker aspects of the holiday, including its connections to mortality and the supernatural.
October 24th, 2025 11:55
Friendship said:
The poem \"Halloween\" delves into the historical roots and transformation of Halloween customs, underscoring the dichotomy between the ancient rituals associated with the holiday and their contemporary interpretations. It examines the interplay of cultural beliefs, spirituality, and the evolution of the celebration over time, encompassing All Hallows\' Eve, the significance of costumes and masks, the tradition of trick-or-treating, and the symbolism of jack-o-lanterns. Furthermore, the poem explores the darker aspects of the holiday, including its connections to mortality and the supernatural.
October 24th, 2025 11:55
Fire, earth, air and water
William Hromada said:
Very nice use of all the elements in nature!
October 24th, 2025 09:24
William Hromada said:
Very nice use of all the elements in nature!
October 24th, 2025 09:24
Halloween
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow! Would it be wrong if I unpacked it as an allegorical poem on desecration of the spirit of Halloween due to commercial gains?
October 24th, 2025 09:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow! Would it be wrong if I unpacked it as an allegorical poem on desecration of the spirit of Halloween due to commercial gains?
October 24th, 2025 09:10
Halloween
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this…faith, folklore, and a flicker of fear braided together. Wonderful job...and yay for Halloween. Sad that today\'s times have limited a lot of the fun that used to be had. Well written.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, love this…faith, folklore, and a flicker of fear braided together. Wonderful job...and yay for Halloween. Sad that today\'s times have limited a lot of the fun that used to be had. Well written.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 08:09
Halloween
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine poem describing KP and her deeds - or \'antics!\' lol. She needs no Halloween masks. Scary enough without them. Is there a shortage of pumpkins apart from Halloween time? lol.
October 24th, 2025 05:31
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine poem describing KP and her deeds - or \'antics!\' lol. She needs no Halloween masks. Scary enough without them. Is there a shortage of pumpkins apart from Halloween time? lol.
October 24th, 2025 05:31
Halloween
peto said:
Sorry
Still laughing at your interaction with Paul
Timely write
Thoroughly enjoyed
October 24th, 2025 04:56
peto said:
Sorry
Still laughing at your interaction with Paul
Timely write
Thoroughly enjoyed
October 24th, 2025 04:56
Halloween
Paul Bell said:
The day for the dead to explain their plight.
Have you noticed the trick or treaters are turning up to your door with card machines now?
What the hell is happening out there.
October 24th, 2025 04:46
Paul Bell said:
The day for the dead to explain their plight.
Have you noticed the trick or treaters are turning up to your door with card machines now?
What the hell is happening out there.
October 24th, 2025 04:46
Halloween
Lorenz said:
A grotesque commercial celebration devoid of all spirituality in which the dead do not participe !
October 24th, 2025 03:49
Lorenz said:
A grotesque commercial celebration devoid of all spirituality in which the dead do not participe !
October 24th, 2025 03:49
Tyrant
Poetic Licence said:
The force and power of nature when unleashed is usually because of something man has done to provoke it or a natural occurrence. The force and power of the tyrant is violently displayed with no provacation except the danger of losing that power. Interesting write z enjoyed the read
October 23rd, 2025 19:21
Poetic Licence said:
The force and power of nature when unleashed is usually because of something man has done to provoke it or a natural occurrence. The force and power of the tyrant is violently displayed with no provacation except the danger of losing that power. Interesting write z enjoyed the read
October 23rd, 2025 19:21
Tyrant
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Tyrant” moves like thunder with a conscience...nature, God, and humanity all collapsing into one figure of control. The storm becomes the empire, the empire becomes the storm, and only after destruction does it whisper absolution: “Punishment death, the dead forgiven.” 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
October 23rd, 2025 18:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Tyrant” moves like thunder with a conscience...nature, God, and humanity all collapsing into one figure of control. The storm becomes the empire, the empire becomes the storm, and only after destruction does it whisper absolution: “Punishment death, the dead forgiven.” 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
October 23rd, 2025 18:47
Tyrant
Paul Bell said:
Some they say, you know he\'s coming like a hurricane, let\'s get running.
But once let in, the end is nigh, it\'s time to die.
October 23rd, 2025 14:08
Paul Bell said:
Some they say, you know he\'s coming like a hurricane, let\'s get running.
But once let in, the end is nigh, it\'s time to die.
October 23rd, 2025 14:08
Insomnia of life
drniran said:
Simple yet so complicated
Obvious but not duplicated
...Marvelous piece of work
October 23rd, 2025 10:50
drniran said:
Simple yet so complicated
Obvious but not duplicated
...Marvelous piece of work
October 23rd, 2025 10:50
Insomnia of life
William Hromada said:
I get this, have had problems up to a few nights ago!!!
October 23rd, 2025 10:22
William Hromada said:
I get this, have had problems up to a few nights ago!!!
October 23rd, 2025 10:22
Tyrant
Friendship said:
Well-written, Soren Barrett, the poem \"Tyrant\" explores themes of power, oppression, and the consequential impacts of climate change. It portrays a tyrannical force—possibly a metaphor for nature or authority—exerting control through violent imagery. The subject matter reflects the intersection of human conflict and environmental devastation, suggesting that both can lead to suffering and death. Yet your poem is to provoke thought about the consequences of neglecting both the planet and the structures of power that govern human relations, urging readers to recognize the interconnectedness of these challenges
October 23rd, 2025 08:04
Friendship said:
Well-written, Soren Barrett, the poem \"Tyrant\" explores themes of power, oppression, and the consequential impacts of climate change. It portrays a tyrannical force—possibly a metaphor for nature or authority—exerting control through violent imagery. The subject matter reflects the intersection of human conflict and environmental devastation, suggesting that both can lead to suffering and death. Yet your poem is to provoke thought about the consequences of neglecting both the planet and the structures of power that govern human relations, urging readers to recognize the interconnectedness of these challenges
October 23rd, 2025 08:04
Tyrant
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren I did enjoy reading this here. Your correlations with lightning and thunder is an exact. Amazing written.
You’ve stated “ With hurricane breath orders given Punishment death, the dead forgiven”
I’d have to say, your play on words here is intriguing. I, well for me, it’s like it reeled me in. For me this line of my favorite or choosing it’s a “audience pull” it’s giving that feel.
🥂👏🏻 Overall beautiful with every word. A daunting write. 💯
October 23rd, 2025 06:54
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren I did enjoy reading this here. Your correlations with lightning and thunder is an exact. Amazing written.
You’ve stated “ With hurricane breath orders given Punishment death, the dead forgiven”
I’d have to say, your play on words here is intriguing. I, well for me, it’s like it reeled me in. For me this line of my favorite or choosing it’s a “audience pull” it’s giving that feel.
🥂👏🏻 Overall beautiful with every word. A daunting write. 💯
October 23rd, 2025 06:54
Tyrant
Lorenz said:
A fierce rainy west wind sweeps across the Flatlands .Scorpio already knocking at the door !
October 23rd, 2025 03:42
Lorenz said:
A fierce rainy west wind sweeps across the Flatlands .Scorpio already knocking at the door !
October 23rd, 2025 03:42
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