Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
We are all one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
We are all one
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Adrift
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
We are all one
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
We are all one
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Cuts
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Cuts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
Spilt criticism
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
A word not needed
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
We come and go
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Us
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Greatness
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
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