Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dark and visceral piece, Soren. The devastation reaches far beyond the original violation…affecting trust, recollection, and every hollow attempt at reconciliation afterward. I know that terrain all too well. Outstanding poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dark and visceral piece, Soren. The devastation reaches far beyond the original violation…affecting trust, recollection, and every hollow attempt at reconciliation afterward. I know that terrain all too well. Outstanding poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:13
State of mind
Joseph M Marion said:
This is so unique I pray you don\'t have cancer is what you\'re saying. I would break my heart and I would cry to lose someone I look up to so much
August 4th, 2026 08:12
Joseph M Marion said:
This is so unique I pray you don\'t have cancer is what you\'re saying. I would break my heart and I would cry to lose someone I look up to so much
August 4th, 2026 08:12
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
orchidee said:
Good write Marlon, erm, SB. lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:23
orchidee said:
Good write Marlon, erm, SB. lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:23
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
arqios said:
Betrayal corrupts everything, memory, friendship, perception, etc. Forgiveness in that light becomes a performance that masks rage that never truly dies. Makes one wonder if we have become an angry culture.
August 4th, 2026 06:45
arqios said:
Betrayal corrupts everything, memory, friendship, perception, etc. Forgiveness in that light becomes a performance that masks rage that never truly dies. Makes one wonder if we have become an angry culture.
August 4th, 2026 06:45
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels dark and visceral, weaving betrayal and decay into imagery that refuses to soften its edges. There’s a heavy, almost suffocating intensity here, where guilt and deception take root and grow into something inescapable.
August 4th, 2026 06:29
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels dark and visceral, weaving betrayal and decay into imagery that refuses to soften its edges. There’s a heavy, almost suffocating intensity here, where guilt and deception take root and grow into something inescapable.
August 4th, 2026 06:29
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
Lorenz said:
Hmm...Improvise a table -turning seance with Marlon Brando is a risky business...
August 4th, 2026 06:09
Lorenz said:
Hmm...Improvise a table -turning seance with Marlon Brando is a risky business...
August 4th, 2026 06:09
A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed my friend, great descriptions
August 4th, 2026 03:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed my friend, great descriptions
August 4th, 2026 03:22
Living power
Demar Desu said:
Geez Soren did you let out a fart and got inspired? Great poem old man
August 3rd, 2026 20:50
Demar Desu said:
Geez Soren did you let out a fart and got inspired? Great poem old man
August 3rd, 2026 20:50
Living power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thought-provoking piece. I love the progression through myth, art, and poetry, all leading to those rare moments when a person seems to become one with their calling. It’s concise, yet it leaves the mind wandering long after the last line. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thought-provoking piece. I love the progression through myth, art, and poetry, all leading to those rare moments when a person seems to become one with their calling. It’s concise, yet it leaves the mind wandering long after the last line. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:42
Living power
Kevin Hulme said:
A Soldier turning into God. The ability to choose Life or Death.
The Idea to list People and Occupations to something one step higher was a good one
A fave for sure.
August 3rd, 2026 16:00
Kevin Hulme said:
A Soldier turning into God. The ability to choose Life or Death.
The Idea to list People and Occupations to something one step higher was a good one
A fave for sure.
August 3rd, 2026 16:00
Be willing to give what you ask
Mystery\'s Creation said:
Hello.I hope You had a great Weekend and that this finds You well.
GREAT poem,evoking images that few are privy to.😢
You and Yours please have a great,safe,peaceful and cool Night and Week,best of luck to You and They and please continue to illuminate the World with Your talent and creativity.😊😁😎👍
August 3rd, 2026 13:55
Mystery\'s Creation said:
Hello.I hope You had a great Weekend and that this finds You well.
GREAT poem,evoking images that few are privy to.😢
You and Yours please have a great,safe,peaceful and cool Night and Week,best of luck to You and They and please continue to illuminate the World with Your talent and creativity.😊😁😎👍
August 3rd, 2026 13:55
Living power
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP thinks she is immortal, but grows more OLD trout-like each day. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 08:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP thinks she is immortal, but grows more OLD trout-like each day. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 08:27
Living power
soheil khodaparasti said:
How beautifully you use mythology as a metaphor for those moments when ordinary people transcend themselves, expressing the idea that true greatness comes from fully embodying one\'s purpose, and that achievements reached in this way become unforgettable.
One word about you: your human warmth shines through not only in your poems but also in your comments. That makes you something rare today—a genuinely caring human being. I noticed this in your response to a poem that lacked imagery; your own comment was rich with imagery, making your criticism both instructive and creative. At times, it seems that you write poems not merely as an outlet for your emotional burdens or inner conflicts, but from a deep sense of responsibility toward others. That, to me, is a rare and admirable quality.
August 3rd, 2026 05:43
soheil khodaparasti said:
How beautifully you use mythology as a metaphor for those moments when ordinary people transcend themselves, expressing the idea that true greatness comes from fully embodying one\'s purpose, and that achievements reached in this way become unforgettable.
One word about you: your human warmth shines through not only in your poems but also in your comments. That makes you something rare today—a genuinely caring human being. I noticed this in your response to a poem that lacked imagery; your own comment was rich with imagery, making your criticism both instructive and creative. At times, it seems that you write poems not merely as an outlet for your emotional burdens or inner conflicts, but from a deep sense of responsibility toward others. That, to me, is a rare and admirable quality.
August 3rd, 2026 05:43
Living power
Paul Bell said:
Take the bow while you can, it will only be a brief time in life.
How many times have we said to ourselves. I was there when it happened.
August 3rd, 2026 04:05
Paul Bell said:
Take the bow while you can, it will only be a brief time in life.
How many times have we said to ourselves. I was there when it happened.
August 3rd, 2026 04:05
Living power
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well put my friend, the pinnacle
August 3rd, 2026 03:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well put my friend, the pinnacle
August 3rd, 2026 03:22
Memories
Kevin Hulme said:
Even some of Histories most Evil Dictators had Mothers and Friends Drooling over them.
\'Oh , Such a Lovely Baby\'. 🍼👶
Good One.
August 2nd, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Even some of Histories most Evil Dictators had Mothers and Friends Drooling over them.
\'Oh , Such a Lovely Baby\'. 🍼👶
Good One.
August 2nd, 2026 18:33
Memories
Lorenz said:
I could write a poem called \'\' lost memories \'\'...But I don\'t rememeber anymore ...
August 2nd, 2026 12:23
Lorenz said:
I could write a poem called \'\' lost memories \'\'...But I don\'t rememeber anymore ...
August 2nd, 2026 12:23
Memories
Paul Bell said:
Bloody children, it\'s like they\'re born on the Monday and by Friday they want the car keys, car, money, and don\'t wait up for me I\'ll not be back tonight.
Okay, just realised that was me.
August 2nd, 2026 10:41
Paul Bell said:
Bloody children, it\'s like they\'re born on the Monday and by Friday they want the car keys, car, money, and don\'t wait up for me I\'ll not be back tonight.
Okay, just realised that was me.
August 2nd, 2026 10:41
The collector
Cini Dasan said:
All of us have that box of worthless things, worthless relationships but we still hold on to them.. Sometimes it gives us hurt but sometimes it does love us a little.
August 2nd, 2026 08:46
Cini Dasan said:
All of us have that box of worthless things, worthless relationships but we still hold on to them.. Sometimes it gives us hurt but sometimes it does love us a little.
August 2nd, 2026 08:46
Memories
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep and thoughtful piece my friend and a fav
August 2nd, 2026 07:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep and thoughtful piece my friend and a fav
August 2nd, 2026 07:26
Memories
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels raw and unflinching, tracing the arc from tenderness and creation into something more strained and disillusioned. The contrast between nurturing imagery and the harder emotional turn at the end gives it a powerful, almost unsettling resonance.
August 2nd, 2026 07:19
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels raw and unflinching, tracing the arc from tenderness and creation into something more strained and disillusioned. The contrast between nurturing imagery and the harder emotional turn at the end gives it a powerful, almost unsettling resonance.
August 2nd, 2026 07:19
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Soren. That sharp reversal from complete devotion to cold entitlement hits terribly hard...especially because I have seen families arrive at precisely this kind of estrangement. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 07:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Soren. That sharp reversal from complete devotion to cold entitlement hits terribly hard...especially because I have seen families arrive at precisely this kind of estrangement. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 07:00
Memories
soheil khodaparasti said:
A celebration of motherhood while reflecting on the sacrifices of parenthood and the pain of love that may end in distance or rejection.
August 2nd, 2026 05:36
soheil khodaparasti said:
A celebration of motherhood while reflecting on the sacrifices of parenthood and the pain of love that may end in distance or rejection.
August 2nd, 2026 05:36
Memories
Salvia.S said:
The way you captured love, time, and change in so few lines is incredible. Beautifully written!
August 2nd, 2026 05:06
Salvia.S said:
The way you captured love, time, and change in so few lines is incredible. Beautifully written!
August 2nd, 2026 05:06
Weaving
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever piece. It reminds me of a work place slogan (I mean this a compliment really, even though I detest work place slogans. I hope you get what I mean) \"Don\'t let your yesterday ruin today!\"
Excellent writing as always 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 02:12
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever piece. It reminds me of a work place slogan (I mean this a compliment really, even though I detest work place slogans. I hope you get what I mean) \"Don\'t let your yesterday ruin today!\"
Excellent writing as always 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 02:12
The walk
FrasMac said:
Now that paints a picture very eloquently. Love the descriptions you\'ve chosen so much that I want to be there!
August 2nd, 2026 01:47
FrasMac said:
Now that paints a picture very eloquently. Love the descriptions you\'ve chosen so much that I want to be there!
August 2nd, 2026 01:47
Weaving
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we all sew a new day each day.
Andy
August 2nd, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we all sew a new day each day.
Andy
August 2nd, 2026 01:09
Weaving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a beautifully woven piece. The garment becomes more than clothing…it becomes memory itself, stitched together from joy, loss, and everything in between. Those hidden knots and the lingering itch make the metaphor feel especially human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a beautifully woven piece. The garment becomes more than clothing…it becomes memory itself, stitched together from joy, loss, and everything in between. Those hidden knots and the lingering itch make the metaphor feel especially human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:38
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