Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A friend on wings
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Aerodynamics worth noting. Helicopters so primitive by comparison.
Clear visuals came through Soren.
September 5th, 2026 20:31
A friend on wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful piece, Soren. The dragonfly becomes this wonderfully cheeky little houseguest, stopping by for a meal, issuing mosquito warnings, and apparently deciding he likes the neighborhood. Charming stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:14
Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. There’s something unsettling about making time feel almost physical…something that can be cut into, exposed, and broken apart. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:42
A friend on wings
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
Kevin Hulme said:
I can Imagine this Poem with Illustrations and Children reading it.
A fave.
September 5th, 2026 19:03
A friend on wings
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
A whimsical encounter filled with wonder and unexpected friendship, brought to life through charming personification.
September 5th, 2026 15:26
A friend on wings
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Neville said:
Beautiful but deadly aint they .. I sure wouldn\'t want to be a fly on the wall in your house .. it would be safer to just bug it 🐛🐜🪲🐞🦗🪳🕷️🦟🪰👍
September 5th, 2026 13:50
Busted
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
rrodriguez said:
Your poem carries a powerful sense of darkness and reflection. The imagery of time running backward and shadows like ink is striking. It reads like a portrait of someone wrestling with memory and inner heaviness. Very evocative.
September 5th, 2026 10:45
Time
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange thing Time. Can\'t feel or see it. Except in Old Photographs of yourself, and you can see it\'s Handy work done.
Good Write.
September 5th, 2026 10:26
A friend on wings
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
Paul Bell said:
Mosquitos have finally reached Britain now that we\'re a hot country.
New diseases on the horizon.
Just thinking, maybe a squadron of dragon flies is what we need.
September 5th, 2026 08:14
A friend on wings
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
arqios said:
Interesting! I’ve only ever seen dragonflies nibble on grass. Never thought what their diet consisted of 👍🏻🤩🕊️
September 5th, 2026 08:08
A friend on wings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. We have \'pet spiders\' at times. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:48
orchidee said:
Good write SB. We have \'pet spiders\' at times. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:48
A friend on wings
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A friend and a nuisance, good write
September 5th, 2026 04:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A friend and a nuisance, good write
September 5th, 2026 04:37
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the sorrow in the world.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the sorrow in the world.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:05
Desolate
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing that times change and glory will come to us.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing that times change and glory will come to us.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:01
Time
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
Time
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
Desolate
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Closed door
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
A pill when you\'re ill
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
Desolate
Kevin Hulme said:
This is apparently, a sign of things to come.
The unfeeling Winter . A good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 10:39
Kevin Hulme said:
This is apparently, a sign of things to come.
The unfeeling Winter . A good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 10:39
Desolate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Soren. Every image deepens the cold isolation until the ending quietly reveals that renewal has been preserved beneath the barrenness...bleak, vivid, and ultimately hopeful. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Soren. Every image deepens the cold isolation until the ending quietly reveals that renewal has been preserved beneath the barrenness...bleak, vivid, and ultimately hopeful. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:34
Values
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Isn\'t poetic license great? Nice word play.
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Isn\'t poetic license great? Nice word play.
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Desolate
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way there\'s two loves.
The love that dies through time.
The love that goes to sleep through winter but comes alive in the spring.
September 3rd, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way there\'s two loves.
The love that dies through time.
The love that goes to sleep through winter but comes alive in the spring.
September 3rd, 2026 07:44
Desolate
soheil khodaparasti said:
Hauntingly beautiful—where love lies frozen, waiting for spring to breathe again.
September 3rd, 2026 03:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
Hauntingly beautiful—where love lies frozen, waiting for spring to breathe again.
September 3rd, 2026 03:29
Desolate
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Love like buses, one after another
September 3rd, 2026 03:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Love like buses, one after another
September 3rd, 2026 03:25
A pill when you\'re ill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a blistering piece, Soren! You tear into the machinery that monetizes sickness while the people needing help are pushed further beneath it…angry, relentless, and painfully relevant. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a blistering piece, Soren! You tear into the machinery that monetizes sickness while the people needing help are pushed further beneath it…angry, relentless, and painfully relevant. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:40
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