Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Called on high
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A tender write nature at its core
August 31st, 2026 04:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A tender write nature at its core
August 31st, 2026 04:32
The creek
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, my friend. You take the life of a creek and turn it into something almost tragic…clean at the beginning, then gradually burdened by everything poured into it along the way. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, my friend. You take the life of a creek and turn it into something almost tragic…clean at the beginning, then gradually burdened by everything poured into it along the way. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:46
Betrayal
rrodriguez said:
Soren, your poem is raw, with real energy and emotional force. The internal rhyme scheme gives it a strong rhythm and a kind of spoken-word intensity. Betrayal can be cruel and brutal.
August 30th, 2026 20:33
rrodriguez said:
Soren, your poem is raw, with real energy and emotional force. The internal rhyme scheme gives it a strong rhythm and a kind of spoken-word intensity. Betrayal can be cruel and brutal.
August 30th, 2026 20:33
The creek
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful write SB. Even in this modern world, with all its scientific knowledge we somehow can\'t accomplish the simple task of keeping nature pure of our waste. Why do we not have treatment facilities to clean the water supply. We pollute the rivers, lakes, and oceans knowingly. Yet, nothing is done. God save us!
August 30th, 2026 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful write SB. Even in this modern world, with all its scientific knowledge we somehow can\'t accomplish the simple task of keeping nature pure of our waste. Why do we not have treatment facilities to clean the water supply. We pollute the rivers, lakes, and oceans knowingly. Yet, nothing is done. God save us!
August 30th, 2026 16:40
The creek
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful write. Like so many things in the world today. Something starts out good and ends up bad. Very nice.
August 30th, 2026 13:01
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful write. Like so many things in the world today. Something starts out good and ends up bad. Very nice.
August 30th, 2026 13:01
The creek
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how pure water running past factories somehow get polluted.
Water companies in Britain are notorious for discharging sewage into rivers killing fish.
All down to profit, no one ever gets charged, brutal.
August 30th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how pure water running past factories somehow get polluted.
Water companies in Britain are notorious for discharging sewage into rivers killing fish.
All down to profit, no one ever gets charged, brutal.
August 30th, 2026 11:30
The creek
Kevin Hulme said:
I fine Poem on how we can screw-up something as Pure and so important as Water.
A fave.
August 30th, 2026 11:20
Kevin Hulme said:
I fine Poem on how we can screw-up something as Pure and so important as Water.
A fave.
August 30th, 2026 11:20
The creek
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It turned a bit sh....umthing! An old Carry On film joke there. lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:58
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It turned a bit sh....umthing! An old Carry On film joke there. lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:58
Forgotten
rrodriguez said:
I hope my poems will serve as fertilizer for the mind,
and if, in the end, they are dumped upon a heap of manure,
may they at least nourish something
before they are forgotten.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
August 30th, 2026 07:50
rrodriguez said:
I hope my poems will serve as fertilizer for the mind,
and if, in the end, they are dumped upon a heap of manure,
may they at least nourish something
before they are forgotten.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
August 30th, 2026 07:50
The creek
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reminder that nature may begin with purity, but what we pour into it becomes its story.
August 30th, 2026 07:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reminder that nature may begin with purity, but what we pour into it becomes its story.
August 30th, 2026 07:27
The creek
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn effective life metaphor here, watching pristine spring water become polluted as it passes through human civilization. The final turn is simple but bitter—the river didn’t choose to become dirty; everything it encountered along the way left its mark.
August 30th, 2026 06:42
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn effective life metaphor here, watching pristine spring water become polluted as it passes through human civilization. The final turn is simple but bitter—the river didn’t choose to become dirty; everything it encountered along the way left its mark.
August 30th, 2026 06:42
The creek
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem traces the life cycle of a water source, from a clean spring to a polluted river, symbolizing nature’s broader degradation from societal neglect and pollution. Thank you for sharing.
August 30th, 2026 06:35
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem traces the life cycle of a water source, from a clean spring to a polluted river, symbolizing nature’s broader degradation from societal neglect and pollution. Thank you for sharing.
August 30th, 2026 06:35
The creek
arqios said:
Can stand in for life’s innocence to fulfilment or corruption, or of interpersonal relationships like friendship, love, or associative collaboration even. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 30th, 2026 05:03
arqios said:
Can stand in for life’s innocence to fulfilment or corruption, or of interpersonal relationships like friendship, love, or associative collaboration even. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 30th, 2026 05:03
Values that cost nothing
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret this is wonderful. In imagery and emotion. 🌹
August 30th, 2026 00:34
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret this is wonderful. In imagery and emotion. 🌹
August 30th, 2026 00:34
Values that cost nothing
Dan Williams said:
I wish I could find the at least half full glass that you seem to possess. This inquiry is innocent, edging toward naive. Thats just me though. Nice work as usual.
August 29th, 2026 23:26
Dan Williams said:
I wish I could find the at least half full glass that you seem to possess. This inquiry is innocent, edging toward naive. Thats just me though. Nice work as usual.
August 29th, 2026 23:26
Values that cost nothing
Kevin Hulme said:
One of the finest sounds to me is a Child laughing. And so happy at play.
A lovely Poem.
August 29th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
One of the finest sounds to me is a Child laughing. And so happy at play.
A lovely Poem.
August 29th, 2026 19:21
It really happened
rrodriguez said:
This is funny. I enjoyed it and chuckled...
August 29th, 2026 16:26
rrodriguez said:
This is funny. I enjoyed it and chuckled...
August 29th, 2026 16:26
Values that cost nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This speaks directly to what I value most, Soren. A small act of love can reach places that wealth and power never will. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This speaks directly to what I value most, Soren. A small act of love can reach places that wealth and power never will. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:53
Values that cost nothing
Neville said:
Sublimely rendered on the wettest day of 2026 so far .. Still, it put a smile on this old fella\'s face that\'ll likely last at least until tea time .. Neville
August 29th, 2026 07:13
Neville said:
Sublimely rendered on the wettest day of 2026 so far .. Still, it put a smile on this old fella\'s face that\'ll likely last at least until tea time .. Neville
August 29th, 2026 07:13
Values that cost nothing
arqios said:
It feels like even in the non-child’s world this would still applies. Pardon the randomness of this response, friend🙏🏻🕊️
August 29th, 2026 06:32
arqios said:
It feels like even in the non-child’s world this would still applies. Pardon the randomness of this response, friend🙏🏻🕊️
August 29th, 2026 06:32
Values that cost nothing
Jabberwocky said:
\",paint a smile on a child\'s face\"
I like that.
I\'m going to try and do that today, while my children are still children.
What a wonderful thing you have inspired!
Thanks
August 29th, 2026 04:38
Jabberwocky said:
\",paint a smile on a child\'s face\"
I like that.
I\'m going to try and do that today, while my children are still children.
What a wonderful thing you have inspired!
Thanks
August 29th, 2026 04:38
Values that cost nothing
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautiful and tender. The imagery of planting a kiss in sorrow and nurturing it with an embrace is especially powerful—a touching reflection on love, innocence, and the lengths we go to protect a child’s smile.
August 29th, 2026 04:32
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautiful and tender. The imagery of planting a kiss in sorrow and nurturing it with an embrace is especially powerful—a touching reflection on love, innocence, and the lengths we go to protect a child’s smile.
August 29th, 2026 04:32
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