Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell of a poem, Soren! The worst part is how easily people can be intimidated into accepting injustice as normal. And those profiting from it have every reason to keep the game going. Quite a world we live in, eh? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2026 20:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell of a poem, Soren! The worst part is how easily people can be intimidated into accepting injustice as normal. And those profiting from it have every reason to keep the game going. Quite a world we live in, eh? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2026 20:57
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Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s always Winners and losers in life.
Rich and Poor.
Good Write.
November 12th, 2026 20:19
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s always Winners and losers in life.
Rich and Poor.
Good Write.
November 12th, 2026 20:19
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Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret, superb my friend. 🌹
November 12th, 2026 14:41
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret, superb my friend. 🌹
November 12th, 2026 14:41
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Paul Bell said:
A fool and his money are easily parted.
In saying that, everyday we get fleeced by someone.
Threats get the attention, the rubber hose gets the result.
November 12th, 2026 12:15
Paul Bell said:
A fool and his money are easily parted.
In saying that, everyday we get fleeced by someone.
Threats get the attention, the rubber hose gets the result.
November 12th, 2026 12:15
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Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Loved it and the flow was great too.
November 12th, 2026 11:43
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Loved it and the flow was great too.
November 12th, 2026 11:43
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Lorenz said:
Guys pocket the cash and make a run !
November 12th, 2026 10:30
Lorenz said:
Guys pocket the cash and make a run !
November 12th, 2026 10:30
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arqios said:
A wager is always a temptation even for non-gamblers, could be saying more about human nature there! 👍🏻🕊️
November 12th, 2026 05:46
arqios said:
A wager is always a temptation even for non-gamblers, could be saying more about human nature there! 👍🏻🕊️
November 12th, 2026 05:46
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed my friend
November 12th, 2026 04:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed my friend
November 12th, 2026 04:17
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP says to me \'Why these foul deals? Why sewage for me every day?! I reply \'Protein for you, dear!\' lol. Aww, she is ungrateful. lol.
November 12th, 2026 03:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP says to me \'Why these foul deals? Why sewage for me every day?! I reply \'Protein for you, dear!\' lol. Aww, she is ungrateful. lol.
November 12th, 2026 03:53
In the back
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, this is delightfully twisted! LOL! 🤣 I think we need to establish a Department of Cognitive Sanitation. Although, knowing bureaucracy, they\'d probably fail their own inspection! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2026 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, this is delightfully twisted! LOL! 🤣 I think we need to establish a Department of Cognitive Sanitation. Although, knowing bureaucracy, they\'d probably fail their own inspection! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2026 22:20
In the back
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Brains in a Can\' brings up an Image of Einstein on the Toilet.
Either way: a good Write.
November 11th, 2026 16:06
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Brains in a Can\' brings up an Image of Einstein on the Toilet.
Either way: a good Write.
November 11th, 2026 16:06
In the back
Syd said:
My favourite dish Sorenbarret 😂
Nicely written.
- Syd 🍄
November 11th, 2026 15:28
Syd said:
My favourite dish Sorenbarret 😂
Nicely written.
- Syd 🍄
November 11th, 2026 15:28
In the back
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
I\'m not sure why it reminded me of botulism in canned food, which nowadays seems oddly fashionable with people injecting expensive Botox to puff up their faces. This piece is very amusing; it made me smile.
November 11th, 2026 15:17
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
I\'m not sure why it reminded me of botulism in canned food, which nowadays seems oddly fashionable with people injecting expensive Botox to puff up their faces. This piece is very amusing; it made me smile.
November 11th, 2026 15:17
In the back
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
A canned brain seeping into poetry. The big question, who was the guest? I must admit, I did enjoy this one, unique as it is and well worth the read.
All the best, my friend,
Tony.
November 11th, 2026 14:02
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
A canned brain seeping into poetry. The big question, who was the guest? I must admit, I did enjoy this one, unique as it is and well worth the read.
All the best, my friend,
Tony.
November 11th, 2026 14:02
Passing storms
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
To wait out the storm and fear its violence and how welcomed is the aftermath and all a part of the one: the natural world in all its moods. Rendered forth with your usual flair, my friend. A joy to read.
All the best,
Tony.
November 11th, 2026 12:36
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
To wait out the storm and fear its violence and how welcomed is the aftermath and all a part of the one: the natural world in all its moods. Rendered forth with your usual flair, my friend. A joy to read.
All the best,
Tony.
November 11th, 2026 12:36
In the back
Dog days said:
Mr. Sorren, this really reminds of the William Carlos Williams poem about a glass bottle in some abandoned place. I think it was a nice thing to let the object do most of the talking, opens the interpretation alot.
November 11th, 2026 07:33
Dog days said:
Mr. Sorren, this really reminds of the William Carlos Williams poem about a glass bottle in some abandoned place. I think it was a nice thing to let the object do most of the talking, opens the interpretation alot.
November 11th, 2026 07:33
In the back
marissa said:
There’s so many ways to interpret this,it really has made me think,i will definitely share this poem with a friend.Great writer!
November 11th, 2026 07:26
marissa said:
There’s so many ways to interpret this,it really has made me think,i will definitely share this poem with a friend.Great writer!
November 11th, 2026 07:26
Misfit
RSM0812 said:
This poem is uniquely remarkable. The writing is sound and the the lesson of acceptance is proven elegantly. Nice write and a fav.
November 11th, 2026 06:58
RSM0812 said:
This poem is uniquely remarkable. The writing is sound and the the lesson of acceptance is proven elegantly. Nice write and a fav.
November 11th, 2026 06:58
In the back
Paul Bell said:
I suppose if we sat down and pondered on our tinned food, we would realise, chicken soup is just the title.
I always wondered if the workers in the food factories ate their own produce.
Maybe ignorance is bliss.
November 11th, 2026 05:24
Paul Bell said:
I suppose if we sat down and pondered on our tinned food, we would realise, chicken soup is just the title.
I always wondered if the workers in the food factories ate their own produce.
Maybe ignorance is bliss.
November 11th, 2026 05:24
In the back
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well we know they are not Einstein\'s 🤣 what fabulous imagery and a surprise ending. So wonderful. 🌹
November 11th, 2026 04:49
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well we know they are not Einstein\'s 🤣 what fabulous imagery and a surprise ending. So wonderful. 🌹
November 11th, 2026 04:49
In the back
Lorenz said:
A canned brain as Christmas gift for Hannibal Lecter !
November 11th, 2026 04:07
Lorenz said:
A canned brain as Christmas gift for Hannibal Lecter !
November 11th, 2026 04:07
In the back
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an entertaining piece my friend
November 11th, 2026 04:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an entertaining piece my friend
November 11th, 2026 04:05
In the back
orchidee said:
Nope, I\'ve not killed off KP, cos that\'s not her brains. She not got any! lol. If I only have 3 brain cells, what\'s she got?! heehee.
November 11th, 2026 03:23
orchidee said:
Nope, I\'ve not killed off KP, cos that\'s not her brains. She not got any! lol. If I only have 3 brain cells, what\'s she got?! heehee.
November 11th, 2026 03:23
The call of a buzzard
Butter said:
A rather gruesome sight for that sad onlooker. Though they may join the herd of corpses themselves. Well done!
November 11th, 2026 00:45
Butter said:
A rather gruesome sight for that sad onlooker. Though they may join the herd of corpses themselves. Well done!
November 11th, 2026 00:45
Passing storms
Kevin Hulme said:
Every Cloud has a Silver lining maybe.
The Bad times won\'t last forever even.
Good Write.
November 10th, 2026 17:27
Kevin Hulme said:
Every Cloud has a Silver lining maybe.
The Bad times won\'t last forever even.
Good Write.
November 10th, 2026 17:27
Passing storms
Thomas W Case said:
This is a vivid, almost mythological rendering of a thunderstorm, where the language moves with the violence of the weather and then settles into the quiet cycle of nature’s renewal.
“As solid hail melts in the gale, it dissolves in the mist of a kiss” is the keeper for me, because it transforms something harsh and destructive into something delicate, showing the strange beauty in nature’s constant changing.
November 10th, 2026 09:43
Thomas W Case said:
This is a vivid, almost mythological rendering of a thunderstorm, where the language moves with the violence of the weather and then settles into the quiet cycle of nature’s renewal.
“As solid hail melts in the gale, it dissolves in the mist of a kiss” is the keeper for me, because it transforms something harsh and destructive into something delicate, showing the strange beauty in nature’s constant changing.
November 10th, 2026 09:43
Passing storms
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I can get so caught up in what’s happening right now that I forget how quickly the whole damn sky can change. I’m glad I stayed with this one to the end. Thanks, my friend. ⛈️⚒️🖤🙏
November 10th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I can get so caught up in what’s happening right now that I forget how quickly the whole damn sky can change. I’m glad I stayed with this one to the end. Thanks, my friend. ⛈️⚒️🖤🙏
November 10th, 2026 09:11
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