Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Some day
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
Some day
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
Fire, earth, air and water
Lorenz said:
I hope to remain ageless for eternity ! Happy gemini cricket !
October 6th, 2025 11:18
Lorenz said:
I hope to remain ageless for eternity ! Happy gemini cricket !
October 6th, 2025 11:18
Some day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from cosmic collapse to quiet human irony…the light gone, the world spent, and yet rebirth hums beneath it. You captured the end as transformation. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from cosmic collapse to quiet human irony…the light gone, the world spent, and yet rebirth hums beneath it. You captured the end as transformation. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 10:57
Some day
2781 said:
Until then, what more should a man do, but eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour.
October 6th, 2025 09:21
2781 said:
Until then, what more should a man do, but eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour.
October 6th, 2025 09:21
Some day
Friendship said:
A bit of a brain twister for me this morning, yet a unique way of writing! Your poem revolves around the inevitability of change and decay in love and life. It reflects on the transient nature of passion and the eventual fading of light, both literally and metaphorically. The poem suggests a cycle of destruction and rebirth, highlighting how memories and experiences can be reinterpreted over time. Yet your poem serves as a reminder to readers of the impermanence of love and the inevitability of change. It encourages reflection on personal experiences and how individuals adapt and redefine themselves in the face of loss.
October 6th, 2025 07:22
Friendship said:
A bit of a brain twister for me this morning, yet a unique way of writing! Your poem revolves around the inevitability of change and decay in love and life. It reflects on the transient nature of passion and the eventual fading of light, both literally and metaphorically. The poem suggests a cycle of destruction and rebirth, highlighting how memories and experiences can be reinterpreted over time. Yet your poem serves as a reminder to readers of the impermanence of love and the inevitability of change. It encourages reflection on personal experiences and how individuals adapt and redefine themselves in the face of loss.
October 6th, 2025 07:22
Some day
Paul Bell said:
That some day seems to be getting closer and closer.
Even the bucket list has done a runner.
Do traffic wardens turn to toilet paper, maiden of gold, writing out my ticket.
That\'s when you know life doesn\'t stop.
October 6th, 2025 04:42
Paul Bell said:
That some day seems to be getting closer and closer.
Even the bucket list has done a runner.
Do traffic wardens turn to toilet paper, maiden of gold, writing out my ticket.
That\'s when you know life doesn\'t stop.
October 6th, 2025 04:42
Fire, earth, air and water
Goldfinch60 said:
We are born into that life soren and must always do the best we can.
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We are born into that life soren and must always do the best we can.
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:20
Fire, earth, air and water
Neville said:
This would appear to have pretty much got the lot, it sure covers all the bases .. it ticks all the write boxes 😎⭐👍👍
October 5th, 2025 11:10
Neville said:
This would appear to have pretty much got the lot, it sure covers all the bases .. it ticks all the write boxes 😎⭐👍👍
October 5th, 2025 11:10
Fire, earth, air and water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elemental! Love it! Soren, this breathes like an ancient incantation — fire and soil, dream and hunger intertwined. You captured the sacred metaphor between birth and becoming perfectly. Excellent and a must fave for me, my friend (which is, admittedly, pretty much all of yours. What can I say, I\'m a fan! 🤣) 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 5th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elemental! Love it! Soren, this breathes like an ancient incantation — fire and soil, dream and hunger intertwined. You captured the sacred metaphor between birth and becoming perfectly. Excellent and a must fave for me, my friend (which is, admittedly, pretty much all of yours. What can I say, I\'m a fan! 🤣) 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 5th, 2025 07:57
Fire, earth, air and water
Poetic Licence said:
The questioning of destiny and do our parents help shaped it, probably whether that be good or bad, but if there no parent\'s, is it just destiny anyway, enjoyed my Sunday read
October 5th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
The questioning of destiny and do our parents help shaped it, probably whether that be good or bad, but if there no parent\'s, is it just destiny anyway, enjoyed my Sunday read
October 5th, 2025 06:02
Fire, earth, air and water
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of the four classical elements—fire, earth, air, and water—and reflects on the duality of human existence, contrasting dreams and poverty, life and death, and the roles of parents in shaping destiny.
October 5th, 2025 05:46
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of the four classical elements—fire, earth, air, and water—and reflects on the duality of human existence, contrasting dreams and poverty, life and death, and the roles of parents in shaping destiny.
October 5th, 2025 05:46
Fire, earth, air and water
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
To an old dog
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
To an old dog
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
To an old dog
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a lovely piece. Loyal dog, misunderstood friend, poetic fog...those four-legged, furry companions in our lives who stay true despite everything. Grateful for this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Makes me think of my ol\' dog, Chloe. Just passed in May. 😢
October 4th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a lovely piece. Loyal dog, misunderstood friend, poetic fog...those four-legged, furry companions in our lives who stay true despite everything. Grateful for this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Makes me think of my ol\' dog, Chloe. Just passed in May. 😢
October 4th, 2025 08:34
Lost music of the forest
Favour Rubyson Kharnaior said:
Beautiful balance of doubt and wonder.
October 4th, 2025 08:16
Favour Rubyson Kharnaior said:
Beautiful balance of doubt and wonder.
October 4th, 2025 08:16
To an old dog
Friendship said:
Well written, Sorenbarrett. Your poem is about a dog, loyalty, and misunderstanding, but I think it\'s more about the transformative power of human connection, highlighting how misunderstandings can arise from differing perspectives, and how we can sometimes misinterpret things. Apparently, you miss the person you were corresponding with, and you hold no grudges. Still, instead, you\'re extending an olive branch, letting that person know it was all just a big misunderstanding, and you genuinely desire to rekindle your friendship.
October 4th, 2025 07:58
Friendship said:
Well written, Sorenbarrett. Your poem is about a dog, loyalty, and misunderstanding, but I think it\'s more about the transformative power of human connection, highlighting how misunderstandings can arise from differing perspectives, and how we can sometimes misinterpret things. Apparently, you miss the person you were corresponding with, and you hold no grudges. Still, instead, you\'re extending an olive branch, letting that person know it was all just a big misunderstanding, and you genuinely desire to rekindle your friendship.
October 4th, 2025 07:58
To an old dog
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
To an old dog
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
To an old dog
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Holes in our day
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Degrees
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
Lost music of the forest
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
Holes in our day
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
Holes in our day
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Holes in our day
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
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