Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Bath in a cloud
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Flock
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
Flock
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
Flock
Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Flock
David Wakeling said:
This has so much to consider.We sell ourselves to bondage.Life certainly feels that way at times. Retreating like sheep when the wolves are at the door.An amazing piece here compadre
June 10th, 2026 06:14
David Wakeling said:
This has so much to consider.We sell ourselves to bondage.Life certainly feels that way at times. Retreating like sheep when the wolves are at the door.An amazing piece here compadre
June 10th, 2026 06:14
Bath in a cloud
Kevin Hulme said:
Never been in a Turkish Bath. Probably never been in a Bath for that matter. But reading Playboy years back was quite Hot.
June 9th, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Never been in a Turkish Bath. Probably never been in a Bath for that matter. But reading Playboy years back was quite Hot.
June 9th, 2026 18:50
Bath in a cloud
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a vivid, almost tactile intensity in this—like weather becoming a body, and the body becoming weather in return.
And what lands most is that movement from obscurity into clarity… as if the fog isn’t just hiding things, but gently preparing them to be seen.
June 9th, 2026 18:10
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a vivid, almost tactile intensity in this—like weather becoming a body, and the body becoming weather in return.
And what lands most is that movement from obscurity into clarity… as if the fog isn’t just hiding things, but gently preparing them to be seen.
June 9th, 2026 18:10
Bath in a cloud
Paul Bell said:
Tried the Turkish bath once, where after sweating the impurities out, one was then advised to jump into a freezing pool.
Don\'t know what one was the worst.
Naked people are not nice to watch, beats me why they have nudists beaches.
June 9th, 2026 14:35
Paul Bell said:
Tried the Turkish bath once, where after sweating the impurities out, one was then advised to jump into a freezing pool.
Don\'t know what one was the worst.
Naked people are not nice to watch, beats me why they have nudists beaches.
June 9th, 2026 14:35
Look closer
Durdica Porobija said:
This poem, based on chiasmus and antitheses, is very playful. And it certainly shows that distances are significantly closer than we think. Sort of.
June 9th, 2026 13:44
Durdica Porobija said:
This poem, based on chiasmus and antitheses, is very playful. And it certainly shows that distances are significantly closer than we think. Sort of.
June 9th, 2026 13:44
Look closer
Durdica Porobija said:
This song, based on chiasm and antithesis, is very playful. Moreover, it shows that absolute opposites are closer than we think, that one arises from the other. Something like that.
June 9th, 2026 13:41
Durdica Porobija said:
This song, based on chiasm and antithesis, is very playful. Moreover, it shows that absolute opposites are closer than we think, that one arises from the other. Something like that.
June 9th, 2026 13:41
Bath in a cloud
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. I\'ve got a date with a sauna later myself & I\'m gonna leave her squeaky clean .. Neville
June 9th, 2026 12:52
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. I\'ve got a date with a sauna later myself & I\'m gonna leave her squeaky clean .. Neville
June 9th, 2026 12:52
Bath in a cloud
David Wakeling said:
For me this is an adventure in a Turkish sauna bath. An imaginative work.So well constructed amigo.An interesting read
June 9th, 2026 05:13
David Wakeling said:
For me this is an adventure in a Turkish sauna bath. An imaginative work.So well constructed amigo.An interesting read
June 9th, 2026 05:13
Bath in a cloud
Mirela said:
nice line: In a misty disguise one hides from probing eyes
June 9th, 2026 03:03
Mirela said:
nice line: In a misty disguise one hides from probing eyes
June 9th, 2026 03:03
Unrepented
Mirela said:
Oh I love this line: With gluttony my eyes devour the beauty of each blooming flower. I think we are all drawn to the ephemeral beauty of flowers.
June 9th, 2026 02:54
Mirela said:
Oh I love this line: With gluttony my eyes devour the beauty of each blooming flower. I think we are all drawn to the ephemeral beauty of flowers.
June 9th, 2026 02:54
Look closer
NafisaSB said:
this duality is the spice of life, and it is what makes it interesting...well said...
June 8th, 2026 23:45
NafisaSB said:
this duality is the spice of life, and it is what makes it interesting...well said...
June 8th, 2026 23:45
Markings
Kevin Hulme said:
I always noticed that all the Baddies in old films had a Beard - usually a Goate. While the Hero was clean shaven. The Sheriff of Nottingham and Robin Hood . Ming the Merciless and Flash Gordon. A good Write as always.
June 8th, 2026 19:25
Kevin Hulme said:
I always noticed that all the Baddies in old films had a Beard - usually a Goate. While the Hero was clean shaven. The Sheriff of Nottingham and Robin Hood . Ming the Merciless and Flash Gordon. A good Write as always.
June 8th, 2026 19:25
Markings
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, I can\'t think of many poems I\'ve read about beards. This is by far the best. It\'s an awesome stand alone poem on it\'s own. Bravo 👏 👏
- Syd
June 8th, 2026 14:43
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, I can\'t think of many poems I\'ve read about beards. This is by far the best. It\'s an awesome stand alone poem on it\'s own. Bravo 👏 👏
- Syd
June 8th, 2026 14:43
Markings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me smile. There is a playful curiosity running through the entire poem...part teasing inquiry, part philosophical reflection, and part affectionate roast of the humble beard. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me smile. There is a playful curiosity running through the entire poem...part teasing inquiry, part philosophical reflection, and part affectionate roast of the humble beard. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
Markings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I grow a beard to disguise myself from KP. lol.
June 8th, 2026 09:07
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I grow a beard to disguise myself from KP. lol.
June 8th, 2026 09:07
Markings
Lorenz said:
Every morning I shave.So I \'ll look presentable in hell for my appointment with Dr Freud ...
June 8th, 2026 08:48
Lorenz said:
Every morning I shave.So I \'ll look presentable in hell for my appointment with Dr Freud ...
June 8th, 2026 08:48
Markings
peto said:
Ha
Fashion statement or cover up
Not so sure
But I am gonna shave now just in case
Enjoy how you write soren
June 8th, 2026 08:38
peto said:
Ha
Fashion statement or cover up
Not so sure
But I am gonna shave now just in case
Enjoy how you write soren
June 8th, 2026 08:38
Markings
arqios said:
It’s like a white picket fence that frames (again that word) and detracts as well as girds; to my mind & practice 🙏🏻🕊️
June 8th, 2026 07:34
arqios said:
It’s like a white picket fence that frames (again that word) and detracts as well as girds; to my mind & practice 🙏🏻🕊️
June 8th, 2026 07:34
Markings
David Wakeling said:
Beards are tricky.Frued said it was a cover up but covering up what.This poem has more suggestions than Frued ever did, Some people are too lazy to shave.Well constructed poem.Enjoyable read
June 8th, 2026 06:50
David Wakeling said:
Beards are tricky.Frued said it was a cover up but covering up what.This poem has more suggestions than Frued ever did, Some people are too lazy to shave.Well constructed poem.Enjoyable read
June 8th, 2026 06:50
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