Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Trash to ash
Butter said:
Okay I enjoyed this poem. I like stories told in very few words. It allows the reader to think about what is being told. :3 tho I am way to stupid to understand what is being said.
Also I just read your bio and I literally don’t know if to take it seriously?
Cause like the accordion is the best instrument.
August 15th, 2026 23:04
Butter said:
Okay I enjoyed this poem. I like stories told in very few words. It allows the reader to think about what is being told. :3 tho I am way to stupid to understand what is being said.
Also I just read your bio and I literally don’t know if to take it seriously?
Cause like the accordion is the best instrument.
August 15th, 2026 23:04
The home
Soman Ragavan said:
Thee French say \"Qui vivra verra.\" Literal translation : He who lives will see. As time goes by we see things breaking down around us. It applies to life itself and relationships.
August 15th, 2026 21:16
Soman Ragavan said:
Thee French say \"Qui vivra verra.\" Literal translation : He who lives will see. As time goes by we see things breaking down around us. It applies to life itself and relationships.
August 15th, 2026 21:16
Today and yesterday
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently Dancers started to separate when \'The Twist\' came about.
I love the Old Movies with people like Cary Grant or William Holden dancing with some Babe.
How it used to be. Before this Modern Nonsense. A fine Poem.
August 15th, 2026 19:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently Dancers started to separate when \'The Twist\' came about.
I love the Old Movies with people like Cary Grant or William Holden dancing with some Babe.
How it used to be. Before this Modern Nonsense. A fine Poem.
August 15th, 2026 19:30
Today and yesterday
mylastwrites said:
Sometimes loves dance doesn\'t last forever. It falters like we do as humans. Very enjoyable poem. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.
August 15th, 2026 16:24
mylastwrites said:
Sometimes loves dance doesn\'t last forever. It falters like we do as humans. Very enjoyable poem. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.
August 15th, 2026 16:24
Today and yesterday
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You\'ve guessed the tile of my next poem: \'Tomorrow!\' lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:20
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You\'ve guessed the tile of my next poem: \'Tomorrow!\' lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:20
Today and yesterday
hzugman said:
So sad. Hinting at what could have been. Nice poem!
August 15th, 2026 10:49
hzugman said:
So sad. Hinting at what could have been. Nice poem!
August 15th, 2026 10:49
Today and yesterday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one really lands. There’s a sadness here about how closeness can disappear even when people are still technically sharing the same space. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one really lands. There’s a sadness here about how closeness can disappear even when people are still technically sharing the same space. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:13
Today and yesterday
arqios said:
A moving poem that traces the shift form intimacy to estrangement. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 15th, 2026 06:39
arqios said:
A moving poem that traces the shift form intimacy to estrangement. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 15th, 2026 06:39
Today and yesterday
Syd said:
Love is such a strange dance that can easily grow cold. Nicely written Sorenbarret.
- Syd 🍄
August 15th, 2026 06:31
Syd said:
Love is such a strange dance that can easily grow cold. Nicely written Sorenbarret.
- Syd 🍄
August 15th, 2026 06:31
Today and yesterday
Paul Bell said:
The balloons and the glitter in the beginning, life is rosey.
Sadly, life does what it does, the love turns to indifference, and intimacy is a tired look.
Better off with a dog, cheaper too.
August 15th, 2026 05:55
Paul Bell said:
The balloons and the glitter in the beginning, life is rosey.
Sadly, life does what it does, the love turns to indifference, and intimacy is a tired look.
Better off with a dog, cheaper too.
August 15th, 2026 05:55
Today and yesterday
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant critique of the fragility and changing nature of intimacy and human connection—not only in modern relationships, but perhaps in relationships throughout history. It reminded me of a sentence often attributed to Honore de Balzac: “Love is the dawn of marriage, and marriage the sunset of love.”
August 15th, 2026 04:05
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant critique of the fragility and changing nature of intimacy and human connection—not only in modern relationships, but perhaps in relationships throughout history. It reminded me of a sentence often attributed to Honore de Balzac: “Love is the dawn of marriage, and marriage the sunset of love.”
August 15th, 2026 04:05
Today and yesterday
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nice touch with the dance floor my friend enjoyed read
August 15th, 2026 03:57
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nice touch with the dance floor my friend enjoyed read
August 15th, 2026 03:57
Trash to ash
Goldfinch60 said:
That defoliation will never stop soren but we can but hope.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That defoliation will never stop soren but we can but hope.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:43
Trash to ash
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems that everything goes to dust eventually:
Even ourselves.
An enjoyable Read.
August 14th, 2026 18:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems that everything goes to dust eventually:
Even ourselves.
An enjoyable Read.
August 14th, 2026 18:28
Corrosion
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
What I love most is its cursive!! Elegant and beautiful!
August 14th, 2026 14:10
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
What I love most is its cursive!! Elegant and beautiful!
August 14th, 2026 14:10
Right off the shelf
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
I like authenticity myself! A wonderful written poem!
August 14th, 2026 14:07
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
I like authenticity myself! A wonderful written poem!
August 14th, 2026 14:07
Trash to ash
Lorenz said:
We are nothing but micro plastified sinnrs who will atone in a black hole !
August 14th, 2026 10:08
Lorenz said:
We are nothing but micro plastified sinnrs who will atone in a black hole !
August 14th, 2026 10:08
Trash to ash
soheil khodaparasti said:
A stark meditation on the cycle of pollution, death, and renewal. The ending is really interesting, contrasting the defiled body with the pure spirit and showing the difference between earthly life and heaven.
August 14th, 2026 10:06
soheil khodaparasti said:
A stark meditation on the cycle of pollution, death, and renewal. The ending is really interesting, contrasting the defiled body with the pure spirit and showing the difference between earthly life and heaven.
August 14th, 2026 10:06
Trash to ash
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I connect with the way this looks at transformation without making it clean or comforting. Sometimes what becomes fertile again first has to pass through something ugly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I connect with the way this looks at transformation without making it clean or comforting. Sometimes what becomes fertile again first has to pass through something ugly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Trash to ash
Paul Bell said:
Plastic, it must be the most dangerous material in the world.
Most of it coming from one country, most of it going into landfill.
Probably every fish swimming has digested it, and every human eating that fish likewise.
August 14th, 2026 08:14
Paul Bell said:
Plastic, it must be the most dangerous material in the world.
Most of it coming from one country, most of it going into landfill.
Probably every fish swimming has digested it, and every human eating that fish likewise.
August 14th, 2026 08:14
The home
Neville said:
while once the very hub & centrepiece .. now, not even in the frame .. how times change eh\' & not always for the better by a long chalk .. Neville
August 14th, 2026 01:24
Neville said:
while once the very hub & centrepiece .. now, not even in the frame .. how times change eh\' & not always for the better by a long chalk .. Neville
August 14th, 2026 01:24
The home
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing that relationships can fail but they can also strengthen when that kitchen is used all the time.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing that relationships can fail but they can also strengthen when that kitchen is used all the time.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:07
The home
antra.coree said:
Nicely described, once warm kitchen can turn into neglected cold one
August 13th, 2026 21:00
antra.coree said:
Nicely described, once warm kitchen can turn into neglected cold one
August 13th, 2026 21:00
The home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully atmospheric piece, Soren. You make this forgotten corner of a home feel almost lonely…time, disuse, and deterioration quietly doing their work. It brought back memories of old houses where the years seemed visible everywhere you looked. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully atmospheric piece, Soren. You make this forgotten corner of a home feel almost lonely…time, disuse, and deterioration quietly doing their work. It brought back memories of old houses where the years seemed visible everywhere you looked. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:42
The home
Kevin Hulme said:
The fire reminds me of my Grandmother\'s Kitchen. She had a Coal Fire . Much Warmer than Gas or Electric. A Real fire.
A good Write.
August 13th, 2026 19:19
Kevin Hulme said:
The fire reminds me of my Grandmother\'s Kitchen. She had a Coal Fire . Much Warmer than Gas or Electric. A Real fire.
A good Write.
August 13th, 2026 19:19
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