Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gingerbread men
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
Night\'s bedroom
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Pools
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
Night\'s bedroom
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Night\'s bedroom
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Night\'s bedroom
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
Night\'s bedroom
Marek said:
I really enjoyed reading this one, Soren. It presented me with clear imagery from the beginning and it also spoke to me. I like nature poetry and this one puts a grotesque ending to what might have been a beautiful sunny day (that you maybe missed, according to your earlier comment). Thank you for putting it in words, and nice work putting it in my minds eye.
May 16th, 2026 13:57
Marek said:
I really enjoyed reading this one, Soren. It presented me with clear imagery from the beginning and it also spoke to me. I like nature poetry and this one puts a grotesque ending to what might have been a beautiful sunny day (that you maybe missed, according to your earlier comment). Thank you for putting it in words, and nice work putting it in my minds eye.
May 16th, 2026 13:57
Night\'s bedroom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a rain-soaked elegy for the fading day. Mist, blurred hills, muffled birdsong, muddy pools, and dimming light all gather into a richly textured atmosphere of quiet natural sorrow. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a rain-soaked elegy for the fading day. Mist, blurred hills, muffled birdsong, muddy pools, and dimming light all gather into a richly textured atmosphere of quiet natural sorrow. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Night\'s bedroom
Neville said:
For some reason or reasons, I just couldn\'t stop the smile upon my reading - Stillness of breath in day\'s death as sky pulls down the shades .. excellent .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 08:39
Neville said:
For some reason or reasons, I just couldn\'t stop the smile upon my reading - Stillness of breath in day\'s death as sky pulls down the shades .. excellent .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 08:39
Night\'s bedroom
Friendship said:
Lovely write. Your poem captures the transition from day to night. I like how you illustrate the melancholic beauty of nature as daylight fades and darkness envelops the landscape. It evokes feelings of sadness and introspection, emphasizing the emotional depth of this quiet time.
May 16th, 2026 07:46
Friendship said:
Lovely write. Your poem captures the transition from day to night. I like how you illustrate the melancholic beauty of nature as daylight fades and darkness envelops the landscape. It evokes feelings of sadness and introspection, emphasizing the emotional depth of this quiet time.
May 16th, 2026 07:46
Night\'s bedroom
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful yet ominous images here.I like the use of adjectives to strengthen the vision.A well constructed view that the storm is coming
May 16th, 2026 07:12
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful yet ominous images here.I like the use of adjectives to strengthen the vision.A well constructed view that the storm is coming
May 16th, 2026 07:12
Night\'s bedroom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most descriptive write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 04:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most descriptive write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 04:09
Unrepented
Neville said:
It\'s a jungle out there & despite being surrounded by both internal & external conflict & constraining & compelling forces, I for one have thus far survived .. but it isn\'t easy, is it .. thanks so much for the ride .. sorenbarrett .. I now plan on cancelling my next safari in favour of spending some quality time deep in my own bunker .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 03:07
Neville said:
It\'s a jungle out there & despite being surrounded by both internal & external conflict & constraining & compelling forces, I for one have thus far survived .. but it isn\'t easy, is it .. thanks so much for the ride .. sorenbarrett .. I now plan on cancelling my next safari in favour of spending some quality time deep in my own bunker .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 03:07
Unrepented
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes we are Raging against the Storm, trying to be heard. Good Write.
May 15th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes we are Raging against the Storm, trying to be heard. Good Write.
May 15th, 2026 18:31
Unrepented
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Unrepented
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
Unrepented
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has the feel of a moral self-examination filtered through nature and metaphor. Doves, hawks, dams, storms, flowers, justice in a cage…everything circles around the difficulty of remaining compassionate without becoming hardened. Strong and thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has the feel of a moral self-examination filtered through nature and metaphor. Doves, hawks, dams, storms, flowers, justice in a cage…everything circles around the difficulty of remaining compassionate without becoming hardened. Strong and thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:40
Unrepented
David Wakeling said:
This certainly digs deep for emotions. All the deadly sins are covered here.There is a sense of despair that quite understandable.An interesting work amigo
May 15th, 2026 06:15
David Wakeling said:
This certainly digs deep for emotions. All the deadly sins are covered here.There is a sense of despair that quite understandable.An interesting work amigo
May 15th, 2026 06:15
Unrepented
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, and a great message, much enjoyed
May 15th, 2026 02:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, and a great message, much enjoyed
May 15th, 2026 02:41
Falling down
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is magnificently minimal and delightfully quirky 🤣 The bouncing rhyme and wordplay keep it light, but there’s still a sly little moral caution sitting underneath the humor. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is magnificently minimal and delightfully quirky 🤣 The bouncing rhyme and wordplay keep it light, but there’s still a sly little moral caution sitting underneath the humor. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:22
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