Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Biblical metaphor
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, may that sun always shine on you.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, may that sun always shine on you.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:54
Biblical metaphor
Neilton said:
This poem was so cleverly structured,I have no words! Always in awe of your work here!! Amazed as always
March 26th, 2026 02:32
Neilton said:
This poem was so cleverly structured,I have no words! Always in awe of your work here!! Amazed as always
March 26th, 2026 02:32
Biblical metaphor
Kevin Hulme said:
So many References to the Bible and more.
All threaded together these things.
A good Write.
March 25th, 2026 19:55
Kevin Hulme said:
So many References to the Bible and more.
All threaded together these things.
A good Write.
March 25th, 2026 19:55
Biblical metaphor
Neville said:
I think this is very clever indeed .. I was forced to attend Sunday School as a kid .. I think that helped me make my mind up to follow a distinctly different path .. still bloomin clever tho\' ya poem mate, not me .. Neville
March 25th, 2026 10:59
Neville said:
I think this is very clever indeed .. I was forced to attend Sunday School as a kid .. I think that helped me make my mind up to follow a distinctly different path .. still bloomin clever tho\' ya poem mate, not me .. Neville
March 25th, 2026 10:59
Biblical metaphor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a tapestry…Eden, Moses, Cain and Abel, Osiris…all woven into a single thread of origin, exile, and transformation. It doesn’t try to separate them…it lets them echo into each other. And that closing turn toward the rising sun gives it a sense of continuation…not ending, but cycle. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a tapestry…Eden, Moses, Cain and Abel, Osiris…all woven into a single thread of origin, exile, and transformation. It doesn’t try to separate them…it lets them echo into each other. And that closing turn toward the rising sun gives it a sense of continuation…not ending, but cycle. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:38
Biblical metaphor
Lorenz said:
The message of the old testament is itself linked to earlier Sumerian texts that were adapted to suit the purpose .
Reinterprated legends that were used to promote monotheism .
March 25th, 2026 09:05
Lorenz said:
The message of the old testament is itself linked to earlier Sumerian texts that were adapted to suit the purpose .
Reinterprated legends that were used to promote monotheism .
March 25th, 2026 09:05
Biblical metaphor
Katie B. said:
I am often not sure how to comment on your poems. They are masterful and intricate but I\'m not always able to derive meaning. I guess I\'m saying they are over my head. I always enjoy trying to decipher. Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:58
Katie B. said:
I am often not sure how to comment on your poems. They are masterful and intricate but I\'m not always able to derive meaning. I guess I\'m saying they are over my head. I always enjoy trying to decipher. Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:58
Biblical metaphor
arqios said:
Stunning how there are thought processes in similar topics such as this in different times, cultures, languages, philosophies, etc. 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:36
arqios said:
Stunning how there are thought processes in similar topics such as this in different times, cultures, languages, philosophies, etc. 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:36
Biblical metaphor
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m not into mythology myself.
March 25th, 2026 04:07
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m not into mythology myself.
March 25th, 2026 04:07
Biblical metaphor
Teddy.15 said:
As the season of reincarnation is once again upon us, wishing you a very peaceful and happy time dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 25th, 2026 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
As the season of reincarnation is once again upon us, wishing you a very peaceful and happy time dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 25th, 2026 03:25
What\'s left
Kevin Hulme said:
# Always look on the Bright side of life#
A short poem, but so much said.
Enjoyed.
March 24th, 2026 20:12
Kevin Hulme said:
# Always look on the Bright side of life#
A short poem, but so much said.
Enjoyed.
March 24th, 2026 20:12
What\'s left
arqios said:
I’ve had my share of sleeping under the table both in play when younger and out of it in many more ways than is fit to remember. It can be said though that it’s always better with sheets🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 15:38
arqios said:
I’ve had my share of sleeping under the table both in play when younger and out of it in many more ways than is fit to remember. It can be said though that it’s always better with sheets🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 15:38
What\'s left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a sharp, stripped-down reflection…burned memories, spent dreams, and that final image of resting beneath a coffin lid table. It’s not subtle…it’s direct, and that’s what gives it its power. It reads like aftermath, not illusion. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a sharp, stripped-down reflection…burned memories, spent dreams, and that final image of resting beneath a coffin lid table. It’s not subtle…it’s direct, and that’s what gives it its power. It reads like aftermath, not illusion. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:47
What\'s left
Waiting for Silence said:
what left is
body without soul
heart without feelings
life without \"LIFE\"
March 24th, 2026 08:45
Waiting for Silence said:
what left is
body without soul
heart without feelings
life without \"LIFE\"
March 24th, 2026 08:45
What\'s left
Thomas W Case said:
The grit sticks to your teeth in this one—ash, cash, cheap wine—like life’s rough edges gnawing at the soul.
Even under that coffin lid, there’s a pulse left, a crooked heartbeat daring to keep counting.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
The grit sticks to your teeth in this one—ash, cash, cheap wine—like life’s rough edges gnawing at the soul.
Even under that coffin lid, there’s a pulse left, a crooked heartbeat daring to keep counting.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
What\'s left
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on... someone\'s....tombstone....☺️
March 24th, 2026 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on... someone\'s....tombstone....☺️
March 24th, 2026 05:11
What\'s left
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m in my 80s and this sure resonates - great write.
March 24th, 2026 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m in my 80s and this sure resonates - great write.
March 24th, 2026 04:34
What\'s left
Atticus_made said:
I can\'t say I fully understand it yet, I haven\'t been in these situations. However, I imagine if I would have been, I would be able to write a better comment! A great poem as always!
March 24th, 2026 03:25
Atticus_made said:
I can\'t say I fully understand it yet, I haven\'t been in these situations. However, I imagine if I would have been, I would be able to write a better comment! A great poem as always!
March 24th, 2026 03:25
Enchou sareta senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a hard question to answer and deal with afterwards.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a hard question to answer and deal with afterwards.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:14
Adrift
NafisaSB said:
what i see is also those who are cut off from the family are buffeted by the waves of life, and washed to a distant shore-spent and truly exhauseted..
March 23rd, 2026 23:24
NafisaSB said:
what i see is also those who are cut off from the family are buffeted by the waves of life, and washed to a distant shore-spent and truly exhauseted..
March 23rd, 2026 23:24
Enchou sareta senryu
Kevin Hulme said:
Could the Child that survived also forgive?
Thought provoking Poem.
March 23rd, 2026 20:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Could the Child that survived also forgive?
Thought provoking Poem.
March 23rd, 2026 20:36
Enchou sareta senryu
Friendship said:
This poem explores the moral and emotional turmoil of a parent faced with an impossible choice: saving one child over another. It delves into the profound guilt and psychological burden that such a decision would impose on any parent.
March 23rd, 2026 17:44
Friendship said:
This poem explores the moral and emotional turmoil of a parent faced with an impossible choice: saving one child over another. It delves into the profound guilt and psychological burden that such a decision would impose on any parent.
March 23rd, 2026 17:44
Enchou sareta senryu
Neville said:
This trilogy is comprised of every loving parents nightmare .. yes, that damned good .. Neville
March 23rd, 2026 13:29
Neville said:
This trilogy is comprised of every loving parents nightmare .. yes, that damned good .. Neville
March 23rd, 2026 13:29
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