Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Reminiscing
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Reminiscing
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
Where
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Precarious
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Where
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Where
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Where
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. 🙏🕊️
July 30th, 2026 07:28
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. 🙏🕊️
July 30th, 2026 07:28
The walk
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Where
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
Where
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
Growing old
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Scared
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Would it be different
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
The walk
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
The walk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully imaginative write, Soren. Turning the entire landscape into an open-air breakfast is wonderfully playful…the natural world feels nourishing in every possible way. Excellent work, my friend. 🌄🌿☕🖤🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully imaginative write, Soren. Turning the entire landscape into an open-air breakfast is wonderfully playful…the natural world feels nourishing in every possible way. Excellent work, my friend. 🌄🌿☕🖤🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:19
The walk
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful place.Exellently discribed.I was transported there
July 29th, 2026 04:59
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful place.Exellently discribed.I was transported there
July 29th, 2026 04:59
The walk
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, metaphor of mother nature I could see the whole scene, sorrenbarret if you ever decide to have a small workshop I would join immediately, forever inspiring dear friend. 🌹
July 29th, 2026 04:17
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, metaphor of mother nature I could see the whole scene, sorrenbarret if you ever decide to have a small workshop I would join immediately, forever inspiring dear friend. 🌹
July 29th, 2026 04:17
The walk
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully written.
\"Morning\'s buttered sun\" and \"light\'s honey\" are striking images.
July 29th, 2026 04:00
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully written.
\"Morning\'s buttered sun\" and \"light\'s honey\" are striking images.
July 29th, 2026 04:00
The walk
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great picture painted here my friend
July 29th, 2026 03:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great picture painted here my friend
July 29th, 2026 03:50
Precarious
NafisaSB said:
That’s the trickiest part and the most challenging. Well represented 👌
July 29th, 2026 03:13
NafisaSB said:
That’s the trickiest part and the most challenging. Well represented 👌
July 29th, 2026 03:13
Would it be different
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a poem. The questions move between humor, intimacy, mortality, and moral consequence...revealing an entire web of lives transformed simply because one person existed. Outstanding work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a poem. The questions move between humor, intimacy, mortality, and moral consequence...revealing an entire web of lives transformed simply because one person existed. Outstanding work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:54
Would it be different
Kevin Hulme said:
This is a Subject that I constantly muse over.
Many years ago My Nephew who was aged 6, died of a Tumour. The Following year my Sister give birth to a Girl, Who is now Married and has Family of her own. And I often think of the Girl who never married my Nephew . And the Children who weren\'t born. And If my Niece wasn\'t born: her Husband would be Married to someone else. And of course the Children would be different. When I was a Baby: I nearly died in a Accident. So you wouldn\'t be reading this. All the Songs Buddy Holly never wrote. Interesting stuff. And you described it well. A fave.
July 28th, 2026 18:58
Kevin Hulme said:
This is a Subject that I constantly muse over.
Many years ago My Nephew who was aged 6, died of a Tumour. The Following year my Sister give birth to a Girl, Who is now Married and has Family of her own. And I often think of the Girl who never married my Nephew . And the Children who weren\'t born. And If my Niece wasn\'t born: her Husband would be Married to someone else. And of course the Children would be different. When I was a Baby: I nearly died in a Accident. So you wouldn\'t be reading this. All the Songs Buddy Holly never wrote. Interesting stuff. And you described it well. A fave.
July 28th, 2026 18:58
State of mind
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Positive state of mind is the perfect balm for cancer patients. I know, because I have been there. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 17:28
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Positive state of mind is the perfect balm for cancer patients. I know, because I have been there. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 17:28
Would it be different
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, inspiring waking up the muse with such questions of reflection. Isn\'t it all so damn fascinating. 🌹
July 28th, 2026 16:52
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, inspiring waking up the muse with such questions of reflection. Isn\'t it all so damn fascinating. 🌹
July 28th, 2026 16:52
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