Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Weaving
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. The weaving metaphor vividly captures how our past becomes part of who we are today. I was especially struck by the image of the hidden knots and the \"itch of memory\'s wool,\" a powerful reminder that unresolved experiences continue to shape us in quiet, often unseen ways. The closing line leaves a lasting impression, suggesting that we all wear a garment woven from the fragments of our past, whether we realize it or not.
August 1st, 2026 03:02
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. The weaving metaphor vividly captures how our past becomes part of who we are today. I was especially struck by the image of the hidden knots and the \"itch of memory\'s wool,\" a powerful reminder that unresolved experiences continue to shape us in quiet, often unseen ways. The closing line leaves a lasting impression, suggesting that we all wear a garment woven from the fragments of our past, whether we realize it or not.
August 1st, 2026 03:02
Weaving
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I have an allergy to wool almost made me scratch
August 1st, 2026 02:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I have an allergy to wool almost made me scratch
August 1st, 2026 02:47
Reminiscing
cellinic said:
A good reflection, deep and overwhelming, a fave, my friend
July 31st, 2026 17:54
cellinic said:
A good reflection, deep and overwhelming, a fave, my friend
July 31st, 2026 17:54
Reminiscing
peto said:
Excellent soren
Took me back to when we had a 9 planet solar system
And 5 continents
July 31st, 2026 11:41
peto said:
Excellent soren
Took me back to when we had a 9 planet solar system
And 5 continents
July 31st, 2026 11:41
Reminiscing
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Reminiscing
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
Where
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to return—each small sound makes you think it’s them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to return—each small sound makes you think it’s them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
Reminiscing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Reminiscing
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 31st, 2026 08:00
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 31st, 2026 08:00
Reminiscing
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
Where
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like when a Loved one dies; there\'s a great Hole -Void - left in your life. Good Write.
July 31st, 2026 04:22
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like when a Loved one dies; there\'s a great Hole -Void - left in your life. Good Write.
July 31st, 2026 04:22
Reminiscing
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Paul Bell said:
What the hell happened.
You fly the British flag in Britain, you probably get arrested.
The world has gone to hell, and there\'s no way back now.
I now identify as a roick.
July 31st, 2026 03:58
Reminiscing
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful reflection on how time shapes our memories and values.
July 31st, 2026 03:38
Where
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really hit me hard. I know the exhaustion of holding emotional space for someone whose continued absence eventually becomes its own answer. That movement from expectation to self-preservation is quiet, painful, and deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:03
Precarious
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Relational open verse, done the right way. Too many toss a word salad onto the page. It must be evocative. Joseph Conrad once said \"Art carries its justification in every line.\"
July 30th, 2026 09:43
Where
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing how you can spend all day thinking about doing something, even nearly doing it, but not quite.
I can convince myself that it can wait. For tomorrow\'s another day.
July 30th, 2026 08:21
Where
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Lorenz said:
Always put off cleaning out the closet until tomorrow -that way ,hope remains !
July 30th, 2026 08:03
Where
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. 🙏🕊️
July 30th, 2026 07:28
arqios said:
Absence is absolutely haunting and eroding hope and decaying into resignation until the point of acceptance and letting go. 🙏🕊️
July 30th, 2026 07:28
The walk
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Durdica Porobija said:
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That\'s how that poem sounds to me.
July 30th, 2026 03:55
Where
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting portrait of absence, unfulfilled expectation, and fading hope.
July 30th, 2026 03:16
Where
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I got KP to clean the closet and locked her in there for a while. Well, she kept on about her appearances on TV, radio, in magazines, everywhere! lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:38
Growing old
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Donteatmecows said:
A beautiful narrative life-cycle poem, catching different aspects of life in fragments that hits the reader. It seems to evoke a very American childhood-to-old-age nostalgia. Well done!
July 30th, 2026 01:02
Scared
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Donteatmecows said:
I enjoyed this! I liked the rhyme style....man, fear is a bitch for certain, I imagine a tough guy saying to the law...\"Get the fuck out from under your mother\'s skirts you coward!\" LMFAO well done
July 29th, 2026 22:16
Would it be different
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
peto said:
It\'s a wonderful life
Absolutely stunning write
July 29th, 2026 19:18
The walk
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
July 29th, 2026 15:24
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