Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
In a breath
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight, grim little meditation on helplessness, where every image puts life one heartbeat closer to disaster. The final “time’s tar” nails that awful feeling of watching something unfold while knowing you’re already too late to stop it.
August 9th, 2026 07:46
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight, grim little meditation on helplessness, where every image puts life one heartbeat closer to disaster. The final “time’s tar” nails that awful feeling of watching something unfold while knowing you’re already too late to stop it.
August 9th, 2026 07:46
In a breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Soren...this creates an awful kind of suspended terror. Everything is visibly moving toward disaster, yet time becomes thick and useless precisely when every fraction of a second matters. That sense of being forced to witness what you cannot reach is devastating. Powerful stuff, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Soren...this creates an awful kind of suspended terror. Everything is visibly moving toward disaster, yet time becomes thick and useless precisely when every fraction of a second matters. That sense of being forced to witness what you cannot reach is devastating. Powerful stuff, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:48
In a breath
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have experienced those terror frozen moments my friend
August 9th, 2026 03:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have experienced those terror frozen moments my friend
August 9th, 2026 03:53
In a breath
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and beautifully tense poem. Powerful imagery captures that terrifying instant when danger unfolds faster than we can respond, creating a deeply unsettling emotional atmosphere.
August 9th, 2026 03:43
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and beautifully tense poem. Powerful imagery captures that terrifying instant when danger unfolds faster than we can respond, creating a deeply unsettling emotional atmosphere.
August 9th, 2026 03:43
Betrayal
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren (I think I go the name right this time) I sincerely hope all is well.
Andy
August 9th, 2026 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren (I think I go the name right this time) I sincerely hope all is well.
Andy
August 9th, 2026 02:35
Betrayal
Soman Ragavan said:
In human stories a stab to the back has always been considered shocking, dishonorable. The victim does not get to see the blow coming. Thus, attacks in the back are frowned upon. It is an experience that the victim will long remember.
August 8th, 2026 22:31
Soman Ragavan said:
In human stories a stab to the back has always been considered shocking, dishonorable. The victim does not get to see the blow coming. Thus, attacks in the back are frowned upon. It is an experience that the victim will long remember.
August 8th, 2026 22:31
Betrayal
Kevin Hulme said:
You can feel the Anger running through this piece. Good Write.
August 8th, 2026 18:11
Kevin Hulme said:
You can feel the Anger running through this piece. Good Write.
August 8th, 2026 18:11
Betrayal
soheil khodaparasti said:
The dark imagery and sharp language effectively convey the feeling of being deeply hurt and deceived.
August 8th, 2026 11:49
soheil khodaparasti said:
The dark imagery and sharp language effectively convey the feeling of being deeply hurt and deceived.
August 8th, 2026 11:49
Betrayal
orchidee said:
KP back-stabs me metaphorically, so I do the same to her. lol. And she says to me:\' How come you know such longs words as metaphoric-wotsit? lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
KP back-stabs me metaphorically, so I do the same to her. lol. And she says to me:\' How come you know such longs words as metaphoric-wotsit? lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:59
Betrayal
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. Betrayal will certainly make you feel that way. Cleverly written with great rhyme and flow. Definitely a favourite of mine.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:08
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. Betrayal will certainly make you feel that way. Cleverly written with great rhyme and flow. Definitely a favourite of mine.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:08
Betrayal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite! The violence fits the emotional brutality of betrayal perfectly...especially that bitter sweetness given to the act of cheating itself. Short, vicious, and straight to the wound. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite! The violence fits the emotional brutality of betrayal perfectly...especially that bitter sweetness given to the act of cheating itself. Short, vicious, and straight to the wound. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:44
Betrayal
Lorenz said:
Oblivion passes and tosses these betrayals into the shredder of memory and they are recycled into poetry ...
August 8th, 2026 04:34
Lorenz said:
Oblivion passes and tosses these betrayals into the shredder of memory and they are recycled into poetry ...
August 8th, 2026 04:34
Corrosion
Doggerel Dave said:
Should have got in earlier, but now it has already been said: \'painterly\' fits perfectly.
August 7th, 2026 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Should have got in earlier, but now it has already been said: \'painterly\' fits perfectly.
August 7th, 2026 19:26
Corrosion
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine discriptive write. An Impressionist Painting in Words.
August 7th, 2026 18:27
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine discriptive write. An Impressionist Painting in Words.
August 7th, 2026 18:27
Corrosion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what a beautifully painted piece. Everything feels textured and tactile, from that corroded evening through the dunes and into the intimacy of night. By the end, darkness isn’t emptiness at all...it’s a revelation. Absolutely loved this, my friend! And they are clearly giving you cooler font choices than me! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what a beautifully painted piece. Everything feels textured and tactile, from that corroded evening through the dunes and into the intimacy of night. By the end, darkness isn’t emptiness at all...it’s a revelation. Absolutely loved this, my friend! And they are clearly giving you cooler font choices than me! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:34
Corrosion
Paul Bell said:
Two views on the contrasting day as the earth turns.
Maybe a woman walking in and out of someones life.
Tomorrow brings a different view.
August 7th, 2026 05:34
Paul Bell said:
Two views on the contrasting day as the earth turns.
Maybe a woman walking in and out of someones life.
Tomorrow brings a different view.
August 7th, 2026 05:34
Corrosion
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a profound paradox: daylight reveals what is visible, while night reveals what is hidden.
August 7th, 2026 03:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a profound paradox: daylight reveals what is visible, while night reveals what is hidden.
August 7th, 2026 03:47
It really happened
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren but unfortunately is so true nowadays.
Andy
August 7th, 2026 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren but unfortunately is so true nowadays.
Andy
August 7th, 2026 01:03
It really happened
mylastwrites said:
Nice write. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 17:13
mylastwrites said:
Nice write. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 17:13
It really happened
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Read. Nice Rhythm to it.
The reverse happened back in the Eighties.
My Mother died November 6th 1988.
One year later : November 6th, she got Mail saying she had to do Jury Service..
Couldn\'t make it up.
August 6th, 2026 16:06
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Read. Nice Rhythm to it.
The reverse happened back in the Eighties.
My Mother died November 6th 1988.
One year later : November 6th, she got Mail saying she had to do Jury Service..
Couldn\'t make it up.
August 6th, 2026 16:06
It really happened
Moonstruck_1310 said:
Great work I really had fun reading it you sure have a way with words 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:42
Moonstruck_1310 said:
Great work I really had fun reading it you sure have a way with words 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:42
It really happened
Paul Bell said:
It seems in this world proving you are dead is tricky.
Now, trying to prove you\'re not dead seems even trickier.
This is usually when the help desk phone the police on you for impersonating a dead person.
August 6th, 2026 14:34
Paul Bell said:
It seems in this world proving you are dead is tricky.
Now, trying to prove you\'re not dead seems even trickier.
This is usually when the help desk phone the police on you for impersonating a dead person.
August 6th, 2026 14:34
It really happened
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of the time frame here; are you able to blame this on AI, or was this older and the work of a bored seat polishing pen pusher?
Entertaining write, Soren.
August 6th, 2026 09:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of the time frame here; are you able to blame this on AI, or was this older and the work of a bored seat polishing pen pusher?
Entertaining write, Soren.
August 6th, 2026 09:03
It really happened
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this had me laughing! I felt the frustration of getting trapped inside a system whose records carry more authority than the living person disputing them. That deliciously dark payoff lands perfectly. And I believe the title! Of course it really happened! Of course! Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this had me laughing! I felt the frustration of getting trapped inside a system whose records carry more authority than the living person disputing them. That deliciously dark payoff lands perfectly. And I believe the title! Of course it really happened! Of course! Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
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