Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Markings
peto said:
Ha
Fashion statement or cover up
Not so sure
But I am gonna shave now just in case
Enjoy how you write soren
June 8th, 2026 08:38
peto said:
Ha
Fashion statement or cover up
Not so sure
But I am gonna shave now just in case
Enjoy how you write soren
June 8th, 2026 08:38
Markings
arqios said:
Itโs like a white picket fence that frames (again that word) and detracts as well as girds; to my mind & practice ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 8th, 2026 07:34
arqios said:
Itโs like a white picket fence that frames (again that word) and detracts as well as girds; to my mind & practice ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 8th, 2026 07:34
Markings
David Wakeling said:
Beards are tricky.Frued said it was a cover up but covering up what.This poem has more suggestions than Frued ever did, Some people are too lazy to shave.Well constructed poem.Enjoyable read
June 8th, 2026 06:50
David Wakeling said:
Beards are tricky.Frued said it was a cover up but covering up what.This poem has more suggestions than Frued ever did, Some people are too lazy to shave.Well constructed poem.Enjoyable read
June 8th, 2026 06:50
Different shades of love
Samprikta Paul said:
While reading, a sudden thought arouse love seems like the 5 elements of earth, which also needs 5 senses to keep it going. Well written.
June 8th, 2026 02:26
Samprikta Paul said:
While reading, a sudden thought arouse love seems like the 5 elements of earth, which also needs 5 senses to keep it going. Well written.
June 8th, 2026 02:26
Archetype of man
Samprikta Paul said:
This is so well written that I felt disgusted by the idea of men, whereas the word \'lust\' made me uncomfortable.
June 7th, 2026 23:58
Samprikta Paul said:
This is so well written that I felt disgusted by the idea of men, whereas the word \'lust\' made me uncomfortable.
June 7th, 2026 23:58
The chase
Samprikta Paul said:
It sounds like such fun writing, I would love recieting this to my kids if I had any. Well written
June 7th, 2026 23:52
Samprikta Paul said:
It sounds like such fun writing, I would love recieting this to my kids if I had any. Well written
June 7th, 2026 23:52
Good guy
Kevin Hulme said:
Interesting Background to the Poem.
\'None so strange as Folk\', as they say.
June 7th, 2026 18:20
Kevin Hulme said:
Interesting Background to the Poem.
\'None so strange as Folk\', as they say.
June 7th, 2026 18:20
Good guy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. What stays with me is that this isn\'t simply a poem about contradiction...it\'s about a real encounter with someone who challenged easy assumptions. Your note about the landlord adds tremendous weight because the kindness wasn\'t theoretical. You experienced it directly, then later learned the rest of the story. The result is a poem that refuses simple answers and asks us to wrestle with the complexity of human beings. Powerful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
June 7th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. What stays with me is that this isn\'t simply a poem about contradiction...it\'s about a real encounter with someone who challenged easy assumptions. Your note about the landlord adds tremendous weight because the kindness wasn\'t theoretical. You experienced it directly, then later learned the rest of the story. The result is a poem that refuses simple answers and asks us to wrestle with the complexity of human beings. Powerful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
June 7th, 2026 09:05
Good guy
arqios said:
Makes one reconsider what contemporary Robin Hooding is like๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 7th, 2026 07:33
arqios said:
Makes one reconsider what contemporary Robin Hooding is like๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 7th, 2026 07:33
Good guy
Thomas W Case said:
Thereโs a hard paradox hereโdark trades wrapped around a strange, undeniable grace.
Feels like a man split in twoโฆ sinner by his deeds, but savior in the moments that mattered.
June 7th, 2026 06:50
Thomas W Case said:
Thereโs a hard paradox hereโdark trades wrapped around a strange, undeniable grace.
Feels like a man split in twoโฆ sinner by his deeds, but savior in the moments that mattered.
June 7th, 2026 06:50
Good guy
Paul Bell said:
Some people see the job they\'re doing as their job.
Is it outside the law, probably, does that mean they\'ll screw you in business, seems not.
A bit of Robin Hood me thinks, which beats the used car saleman anytime.
June 7th, 2026 05:41
Paul Bell said:
Some people see the job they\'re doing as their job.
Is it outside the law, probably, does that mean they\'ll screw you in business, seems not.
A bit of Robin Hood me thinks, which beats the used car saleman anytime.
June 7th, 2026 05:41
Good guy
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a powerful biography of a\"good guy\" who did some not so good things.But aren\'t we all a bit like that.A mixture of good and not so good.There is a lot to think about in this one.Welll done compadre
June 7th, 2026 05:39
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a powerful biography of a\"good guy\" who did some not so good things.But aren\'t we all a bit like that.A mixture of good and not so good.There is a lot to think about in this one.Welll done compadre
June 7th, 2026 05:39
Good guy
teardrop said:
Never judge someone. Maybe he was doing so good drug dealing, he didn\'t need the rent but needed the house rented.. lol haha. Great write!
June 7th, 2026 05:11
teardrop said:
Never judge someone. Maybe he was doing so good drug dealing, he didn\'t need the rent but needed the house rented.. lol haha. Great write!
June 7th, 2026 05:11
Good guy
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Any more food ideas for KP? Variations on her sewage diet?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Any more food ideas for KP? Variations on her sewage diet?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:19
Good guy
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An excellent and powerful write my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An excellent and powerful write my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:09
Good guy
Teddy.15 said:
Personally I believe that the ugliest people in the world were actually nurtured by the very good ones, and those less fortunate and with more experience of the ugliest up bringing are the kindest. That is what I have observed in my life. ๐น
June 7th, 2026 04:04
Teddy.15 said:
Personally I believe that the ugliest people in the world were actually nurtured by the very good ones, and those less fortunate and with more experience of the ugliest up bringing are the kindest. That is what I have observed in my life. ๐น
June 7th, 2026 04:04
Next day
Kevin Hulme said:
The Butterfly Dream is one of those Readings
that puts your Brain in a tangle.
Like a Tree falling in a Wood, and no ones around: Does it make a noise?
A good Write again.
June 6th, 2026 19:24
Kevin Hulme said:
The Butterfly Dream is one of those Readings
that puts your Brain in a tangle.
Like a Tree falling in a Wood, and no ones around: Does it make a noise?
A good Write again.
June 6th, 2026 19:24
Next day
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary poetry every last line. Wonderful sorrenbarret and how I do love philosophy ๐น
June 6th, 2026 17:00
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary poetry every last line. Wonderful sorrenbarret and how I do love philosophy ๐น
June 6th, 2026 17:00
Customer service
RSM0812 said:
Very deep. Lots of good refrences. Enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2026 15:16
RSM0812 said:
Very deep. Lots of good refrences. Enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2026 15:16
Next day
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the guy who punches you in the face resonates more than the guy who lectures you to death with flannel.
June 6th, 2026 11:52
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the guy who punches you in the face resonates more than the guy who lectures you to death with flannel.
June 6th, 2026 11:52
Next day
orchidee said:
I\'m back again - or until another blip cuts me off again. Good write SB.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
orchidee said:
I\'m back again - or until another blip cuts me off again. Good write SB.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
Next day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to something I\'ve always appreciated in contemplative writing...the idea that insight often arrives through experience rather than explanation. The poem captures that beautifully. Sometimes a single moment reveals more than a hundred lectures ever could. Powerful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
June 6th, 2026 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to something I\'ve always appreciated in contemplative writing...the idea that insight often arrives through experience rather than explanation. The poem captures that beautifully. Sometimes a single moment reveals more than a hundred lectures ever could. Powerful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
June 6th, 2026 08:27
Next day
Katie B. said:
Rich, vivid imagery of the horizon, cloud and sun. Well crafted. Enjoyable read, Soren.
June 6th, 2026 06:40
Katie B. said:
Rich, vivid imagery of the horizon, cloud and sun. Well crafted. Enjoyable read, Soren.
June 6th, 2026 06:40
Next day
David Wakeling said:
A fascinating poetic journey here from the sky as a raspberry stain to ornage sherbet to Chuang Tzu philosophy.It has it all. Excellent
June 6th, 2026 06:22
David Wakeling said:
A fascinating poetic journey here from the sky as a raspberry stain to ornage sherbet to Chuang Tzu philosophy.It has it all. Excellent
June 6th, 2026 06:22
Development
Samprikta Paul said:
I was literally imagining a ripe mango, reading this. Well done friend!
June 6th, 2026 01:13
Samprikta Paul said:
I was literally imagining a ripe mango, reading this. Well done friend!
June 6th, 2026 01:13
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