Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Lunacy in a bottle
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Lunacy in a bottle
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Lunacy in a bottle
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
Lunacy in a bottle
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
Feelings of loss
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Feelings of loss
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Feelings of loss
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
Feelings of loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Feelings of loss
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Feelings of loss
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Feelings of loss
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
Feelings of loss
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t think people want to think that far ahead, but the inevitable is coming to us all.
Poignant read for football saturday.
May 9th, 2026 05:18
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t think people want to think that far ahead, but the inevitable is coming to us all.
Poignant read for football saturday.
May 9th, 2026 05:18
Death to the king
Teddy.15 said:
None can rely on God nor politicians 🌹 sad truth.
May 9th, 2026 00:48
Teddy.15 said:
None can rely on God nor politicians 🌹 sad truth.
May 9th, 2026 00:48
Death to the king
arqios said:
Partly, it could be conjectured that none are ever taught or trained to be independent thinkers and that in itself can prove very exhausting and as we are socially wired will follow any strong and convincing personality to do all the thinking and deciding for us. But that’s just me🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2026 20:53
arqios said:
Partly, it could be conjectured that none are ever taught or trained to be independent thinkers and that in itself can prove very exhausting and as we are socially wired will follow any strong and convincing personality to do all the thinking and deciding for us. But that’s just me🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2026 20:53
Death to the king
Salvia.S said:
Adam with his own eyes. No king, no Shepherd, no fence between a man and the lion. \"Open eyes to nature instead\"- that line will outlive the thrones. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 20:41
Salvia.S said:
Adam with his own eyes. No king, no Shepherd, no fence between a man and the lion. \"Open eyes to nature instead\"- that line will outlive the thrones. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 20:41
Death to the king
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Hot off the press! 🔥🔥🔥 Adam is an anarchist, indeed. My friend, I connect with that distrust of crowds and systems here...how easily fear and certainty can sweep people together. This feels less like ideology and more like a cry for people to wake up and actually see for themselves again. There’s real urgency in it, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Hot off the press! 🔥🔥🔥 Adam is an anarchist, indeed. My friend, I connect with that distrust of crowds and systems here...how easily fear and certainty can sweep people together. This feels less like ideology and more like a cry for people to wake up and actually see for themselves again. There’s real urgency in it, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:56
Death to the king
Paul Bell said:
Why do the masses follow lunitics.
Does there come a point when there\'s no choice.
Democracy you would think was safe, but we see ICE running amock in America, people in Britain getting jailed for offensive remarks.
I think we\'re all going off the cliff.
May 8th, 2026 09:00
Paul Bell said:
Why do the masses follow lunitics.
Does there come a point when there\'s no choice.
Democracy you would think was safe, but we see ICE running amock in America, people in Britain getting jailed for offensive remarks.
I think we\'re all going off the cliff.
May 8th, 2026 09:00
Death to the king
Demar Desu said:
Take care Soren, great poem… even a king wants their life just as much as the ant. May life continue for the best
May 8th, 2026 07:06
Demar Desu said:
Take care Soren, great poem… even a king wants their life just as much as the ant. May life continue for the best
May 8th, 2026 07:06
Death to the king
David Wakeling said:
A complex appeal to return to Nature.The world as it is is unacceptible.Certainly makes the reader sit up and think
May 8th, 2026 04:44
David Wakeling said:
A complex appeal to return to Nature.The world as it is is unacceptible.Certainly makes the reader sit up and think
May 8th, 2026 04:44
Different shades of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love with Nature is a fabulous place to be soren.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love with Nature is a fabulous place to be soren.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:45
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