Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Somthin jus a little human
HerTime said:
I love this. Humans so easily forget that we aren’t meant to be able to do it all.
Loved the AI reference.
March 9th, 2026 22:00
HerTime said:
I love this. Humans so easily forget that we aren’t meant to be able to do it all.
Loved the AI reference.
March 9th, 2026 22:00
Fragile
Sami Mulaj said:
excellent poem, I read it several times with pleasure!
March 9th, 2026 19:49
Sami Mulaj said:
excellent poem, I read it several times with pleasure!
March 9th, 2026 19:49
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Kevin Hulme said:
Seems everything is double edged in one way or another.
Well put.
March 9th, 2026 18:19
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems everything is double edged in one way or another.
Well put.
March 9th, 2026 18:19
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Doggerel Dave said:
The curse relieves stress and motivates evasive or corrective action? Is there room for a couple more stanzas there , Soren?
March 9th, 2026 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
The curse relieves stress and motivates evasive or corrective action? Is there room for a couple more stanzas there , Soren?
March 9th, 2026 16:25
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a meditation on perspective…how quickly we resent the very things that once served us well. The sun, the storm, even the flat tire after miles of faithful work…each image quietly reframes frustration into gratitude. It’s simple, reflective, and leaves a lasting thought behind. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a meditation on perspective…how quickly we resent the very things that once served us well. The sun, the storm, even the flat tire after miles of faithful work…each image quietly reframes frustration into gratitude. It’s simple, reflective, and leaves a lasting thought behind. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:28
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arqios said:
I think we should, forgiveness all around, we need it ourselves, none of us perfect 🙏🏻🕊️
March 9th, 2026 06:18
arqios said:
I think we should, forgiveness all around, we need it ourselves, none of us perfect 🙏🏻🕊️
March 9th, 2026 06:18
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David Wakeling said:
This is thoughful. Why do people curse inanimate objects . It is a fault we have because the Sun the hammer and the storm are not listening.A very powerful poem.Made me think
March 9th, 2026 05:18
David Wakeling said:
This is thoughful. Why do people curse inanimate objects . It is a fault we have because the Sun the hammer and the storm are not listening.A very powerful poem.Made me think
March 9th, 2026 05:18
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Awam said:
so beautifully wise.. life happens and we have to go through all of it
March 9th, 2026 04:52
Awam said:
so beautifully wise.. life happens and we have to go through all of it
March 9th, 2026 04:52
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP prepares dinner sometimes. She says to me some words not needed: \'More sewage, dear?\' lol.
March 9th, 2026 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP prepares dinner sometimes. She says to me some words not needed: \'More sewage, dear?\' lol.
March 9th, 2026 03:23
Somthin jus a little human
Goldfinch60 said:
If we were all perfect we would have nothing for which to aim in life soren. Very good and very true write.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
If we were all perfect we would have nothing for which to aim in life soren. Very good and very true write.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:47
Somthin jus a little human
Doggerel Dave said:
You’ve certainly joined company with some widespread cultural beliefs here, Soren and reworked some familiar ideas in this very pleasing piece: patina, an imperfection in a middle eastern carpet (only God is perfect) and the Japanese celebration of pottery breakages in decorative repairs. You are in good standing
March 8th, 2026 16:12
Doggerel Dave said:
You’ve certainly joined company with some widespread cultural beliefs here, Soren and reworked some familiar ideas in this very pleasing piece: patina, an imperfection in a middle eastern carpet (only God is perfect) and the Japanese celebration of pottery breakages in decorative repairs. You are in good standing
March 8th, 2026 16:12
Somthin jus a little human
orchidee said:
Oh I dunno. AI can be helpful with giving some information, I find.
March 8th, 2026 14:01
orchidee said:
Oh I dunno. AI can be helpful with giving some information, I find.
March 8th, 2026 14:01
Somthin jus a little human
Allie561 said:
Wonderful poem Soren, yes it does relate to the one I published. Imperfections can be beautiful and you described that perfectly. I liked how you included robotic parts, it’s a good reminder of how strange it is when something lacks imperfection.
March 8th, 2026 12:08
Allie561 said:
Wonderful poem Soren, yes it does relate to the one I published. Imperfections can be beautiful and you described that perfectly. I liked how you included robotic parts, it’s a good reminder of how strange it is when something lacks imperfection.
March 8th, 2026 12:08
Somthin jus a little human
Neville said:
My goodness, how I like the cut of your jib sir .. so very much up my alley .. Neville 😎👍
March 8th, 2026 09:42
Neville said:
My goodness, how I like the cut of your jib sir .. so very much up my alley .. Neville 😎👍
March 8th, 2026 09:42
Somthin jus a little human
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me smile…there’s something deeply true in celebrating the scratches and dents instead of hiding them. That last turn toward the beauty of being a little awry really lands. A wonderfully human piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me smile…there’s something deeply true in celebrating the scratches and dents instead of hiding them. That last turn toward the beauty of being a little awry really lands. A wonderfully human piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:21
Somthin jus a little human
David Wakeling said:
yes perfection is over-rated and frankly just OCD and unachievable. I have always been happy with my old shoes and 10 year old jumper that still fits.A great poem well constructed.
March 8th, 2026 06:15
David Wakeling said:
yes perfection is over-rated and frankly just OCD and unachievable. I have always been happy with my old shoes and 10 year old jumper that still fits.A great poem well constructed.
March 8th, 2026 06:15
Somthin jus a little human
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem revolves around the value of imperfection and the beauty found in flaws. You emphasize how human experiences, marked by imperfections, resonate more deeply than the sterile perfection often sought in art and life. Yet the poem celebrates authenticity and the stories embedded in our imperfections, suggesting that these elements create connections among individuals.
March 8th, 2026 06:03
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem revolves around the value of imperfection and the beauty found in flaws. You emphasize how human experiences, marked by imperfections, resonate more deeply than the sterile perfection often sought in art and life. Yet the poem celebrates authenticity and the stories embedded in our imperfections, suggesting that these elements create connections among individuals.
March 8th, 2026 06:03
Fragile
Awam said:
\'an anchor of mass chained to an ankle of glass” what a way to describe human fragility.
March 8th, 2026 05:29
Awam said:
\'an anchor of mass chained to an ankle of glass” what a way to describe human fragility.
March 8th, 2026 05:29
My friend
Kevin Hulme said:
Could have been me ; Early 70s . \'Get your Hair cut Boy\'. From Hippy to Ronald McDonald. An enjoyable Poem.
March 7th, 2026 21:27
Kevin Hulme said:
Could have been me ; Early 70s . \'Get your Hair cut Boy\'. From Hippy to Ronald McDonald. An enjoyable Poem.
March 7th, 2026 21:27
My friend
Sami Khelifa said:
What a wild and witty ride—I love how Billy’s defiance finally found its home in poetry
March 7th, 2026 20:41
Sami Khelifa said:
What a wild and witty ride—I love how Billy’s defiance finally found its home in poetry
March 7th, 2026 20:41
My friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quite the ride. Billy’s rebellious spirit leaps off the page…each twist more outrageous than the last. The whole piece carries that mischievous energy of someone refusing to be boxed in. What a character you’ve brought to life here, I presume based off of a real person. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quite the ride. Billy’s rebellious spirit leaps off the page…each twist more outrageous than the last. The whole piece carries that mischievous energy of someone refusing to be boxed in. What a character you’ve brought to life here, I presume based off of a real person. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:52
My friend
Friendship said:
Your poem is exquisitely crafted, masterfully focusing on the transformative themes of rebellion and individuality, profoundly explored through the powerful lens of personal appearance and courageous nonconformity to authority, as vividly embodied by Billy\'s distinctive hairstyle, which stands as a potent beacon of resistance to societal norms. The narrative unfolds a triumphant series of declarations between Billy and authority figures, underscoring the unyielding tension between unbridled personal autonomy and institutional control.
March 7th, 2026 08:39
Friendship said:
Your poem is exquisitely crafted, masterfully focusing on the transformative themes of rebellion and individuality, profoundly explored through the powerful lens of personal appearance and courageous nonconformity to authority, as vividly embodied by Billy\'s distinctive hairstyle, which stands as a potent beacon of resistance to societal norms. The narrative unfolds a triumphant series of declarations between Billy and authority figures, underscoring the unyielding tension between unbridled personal autonomy and institutional control.
March 7th, 2026 08:39
My friend
arqios said:
There is a Billy out there somewhere, probably in every village and town. Brings colour to life 🙏🏻🕊️
March 7th, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
There is a Billy out there somewhere, probably in every village and town. Brings colour to life 🙏🏻🕊️
March 7th, 2026 07:10
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