Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Outlived
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
Outlived
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
Renewal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Renewal
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Renewal
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Renewal
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
Renewal
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Renewal
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
The shape of a tree
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
The shape of a tree
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Night\'s bedroom
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
Development
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
The shape of a tree
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Little one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
The shape of a tree
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
The shape of a tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
Little one
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
The chase
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
Little one
Waiting for Silence said:
A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!
May 26th, 2026 23:33
Waiting for Silence said:
A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!
May 26th, 2026 23:33
Little one
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Little one
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
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