Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Out of style
Thomas W Case said:
This has a sharp, cynical pulse, taking aim at a culture that markets desire while starving people of damn compassion. The rhyme drives the argument forward like a machine, and the final image of shiny people becoming disposable trash hits hard.
August 11th, 2026 06:40
Thomas W Case said:
This has a sharp, cynical pulse, taking aim at a culture that markets desire while starving people of damn compassion. The rhyme drives the argument forward like a machine, and the final image of shiny people becoming disposable trash hits hard.
August 11th, 2026 06:40
Out of style
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a perfect summing up my friend
August 11th, 2026 06:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a perfect summing up my friend
August 11th, 2026 06:38
Out of style
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lust, perhaps the greatest messenger or our present times? I just posted a rhyme on this too!
August 11th, 2026 05:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lust, perhaps the greatest messenger or our present times? I just posted a rhyme on this too!
August 11th, 2026 05:22
Out of style
arqios said:
When things that should matter no longer do, it makes me wonder if poems and poetry are among the throw-away variety of stuff. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:12
arqios said:
When things that should matter no longer do, it makes me wonder if poems and poetry are among the throw-away variety of stuff. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:12
Out of style
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful critique of a culture that often confuses passion and physical attraction with genuine love and compassion. I like especially the comparison between the way people and relationships can be treated as commodities and the way disposable consumer goods are valued, used, and eventually discarded.
August 11th, 2026 03:59
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful critique of a culture that often confuses passion and physical attraction with genuine love and compassion. I like especially the comparison between the way people and relationships can be treated as commodities and the way disposable consumer goods are valued, used, and eventually discarded.
August 11th, 2026 03:59
It really happened
NafisaSB said:
Unbelievable and yet it does happen- and in our land sometimes the dead turn up to vote in the garb of one who does not have a card🤔😔
August 11th, 2026 03:35
NafisaSB said:
Unbelievable and yet it does happen- and in our land sometimes the dead turn up to vote in the garb of one who does not have a card🤔😔
August 11th, 2026 03:35
What to believe
Teddy.15 said:
So they say, this is so true I always follow the advice of the Italian oldies because they look fabulous. 🌹
August 11th, 2026 02:42
Teddy.15 said:
So they say, this is so true I always follow the advice of the Italian oldies because they look fabulous. 🌹
August 11th, 2026 02:42
It really happened
boot said:
Haha...my mom collected dad\'s pension for twenty years after he passed
August 10th, 2026 23:04
boot said:
Haha...my mom collected dad\'s pension for twenty years after he passed
August 10th, 2026 23:04
What to believe
mylastwrites said:
Funny, entertaining but oh so factual. You nailed what they don\'t know. Thoughts to ponder. Well done.
August 10th, 2026 14:56
mylastwrites said:
Funny, entertaining but oh so factual. You nailed what they don\'t know. Thoughts to ponder. Well done.
August 10th, 2026 14:56
What to believe
Kevin Hulme said:
Why is it that when you go to the Doctors, the first thing he says is : \'How are you\'? \' Oh I\'m quite well thank you. Thought I\'d come and waste your time and mine\'.
As for your Poem: A fine piece as usual. The graveyards are full of Healthy Eaters.
August 10th, 2026 11:57
Kevin Hulme said:
Why is it that when you go to the Doctors, the first thing he says is : \'How are you\'? \' Oh I\'m quite well thank you. Thought I\'d come and waste your time and mine\'.
As for your Poem: A fine piece as usual. The graveyards are full of Healthy Eaters.
August 10th, 2026 11:57
What to believe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest diet is simply to live long enough for yesterday’s forbidden food to become tomorrow’s recommendation. The march from yolks to booze to bacon had me laughing, but that final line brings the whole merry-go-round back to the individual body. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest diet is simply to live long enough for yesterday’s forbidden food to become tomorrow’s recommendation. The march from yolks to booze to bacon had me laughing, but that final line brings the whole merry-go-round back to the individual body. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:39
What to believe
Paul Bell said:
The people in the 60s and 70s fried everything.
Then the 80s came, and they healthly killed themselves.
Granny always said that lot would be dead before her.
Seems she was right.
August 10th, 2026 09:12
Paul Bell said:
The people in the 60s and 70s fried everything.
Then the 80s came, and they healthly killed themselves.
Granny always said that lot would be dead before her.
Seems she was right.
August 10th, 2026 09:12
In a breath
turningpoint said:
we sometimes feel ourlives are teetering on disaster like that
afriend or family member had an accident or is in a hospital my friend soren
August 10th, 2026 08:04
turningpoint said:
we sometimes feel ourlives are teetering on disaster like that
afriend or family member had an accident or is in a hospital my friend soren
August 10th, 2026 08:04
What to believe
arqios said:
Very tidal in a way. But to whose ends are these contradictions to benefit in the long run!? 🕊️🙏👏🏻
August 10th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
Very tidal in a way. But to whose ends are these contradictions to benefit in the long run!? 🕊️🙏👏🏻
August 10th, 2026 06:11
What to believe
Lorenz said:
\'\' An apple a day keeps the doctor away...Especially if you aim carefully \'\' ( Winston Churchill )
August 10th, 2026 05:16
Lorenz said:
\'\' An apple a day keeps the doctor away...Especially if you aim carefully \'\' ( Winston Churchill )
August 10th, 2026 05:16
What to believe
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed, made me think of my last visit to the doctors
August 10th, 2026 04:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed, made me think of my last visit to the doctors
August 10th, 2026 04:37
What to believe
Nerd said:
A lovely piece about health advice. It is so hard these days to take care of yourself let alone stay healthy. We should all take care of ourselves eating foods that make us feel happy.
August 10th, 2026 03:37
Nerd said:
A lovely piece about health advice. It is so hard these days to take care of yourself let alone stay healthy. We should all take care of ourselves eating foods that make us feel happy.
August 10th, 2026 03:37
What to believe
soheil khodaparasti said:
A wonderfully witty and provocative poem! The closing line is particularly clever, giving the poem a philosophical twist and leaving the reader with something to ponder.
August 10th, 2026 03:30
soheil khodaparasti said:
A wonderfully witty and provocative poem! The closing line is particularly clever, giving the poem a philosophical twist and leaving the reader with something to ponder.
August 10th, 2026 03:30
In a breath
cellinic said:
Rather a serious and deep write, if we dwell on its meaningful structure, with good poetic form... A fave
August 9th, 2026 22:41
cellinic said:
Rather a serious and deep write, if we dwell on its meaningful structure, with good poetic form... A fave
August 9th, 2026 22:41
In a breath
Kevin Hulme said:
We\'ve all had these moments in life when something had happened of a terrible Nature.
And replayed it over and over in our minds.
Well Said in your Write.
August 9th, 2026 18:12
Kevin Hulme said:
We\'ve all had these moments in life when something had happened of a terrible Nature.
And replayed it over and over in our minds.
Well Said in your Write.
August 9th, 2026 18:12
In a breath
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight, grim little meditation on helplessness, where every image puts life one heartbeat closer to disaster. The final “time’s tar” nails that awful feeling of watching something unfold while knowing you’re already too late to stop it.
August 9th, 2026 07:46
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight, grim little meditation on helplessness, where every image puts life one heartbeat closer to disaster. The final “time’s tar” nails that awful feeling of watching something unfold while knowing you’re already too late to stop it.
August 9th, 2026 07:46
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