Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Man
soheil khodaparasti said:
Selling our freedom for comfort comes at a cost: we gradually diminish ourselves. As our emotional world narrows, it is only natural that emojis become our most fluent language of emotion.
July 7th, 2026 07:59
soheil khodaparasti said:
Selling our freedom for comfort comes at a cost: we gradually diminish ourselves. As our emotional world narrows, it is only natural that emojis become our most fluent language of emotion.
July 7th, 2026 07:59
Man
Thomas W Case said:
Thereโs a strong pulse of longing running through thisโlike a quiet grief for something traded away piece by piece. The structure of contrasts works well; each line feels like a small bargain struck, comfort gained but something vital surrendered.
July 7th, 2026 07:50
Thomas W Case said:
Thereโs a strong pulse of longing running through thisโlike a quiet grief for something traded away piece by piece. The structure of contrasts works well; each line feels like a small bargain struck, comfort gained but something vital surrendered.
July 7th, 2026 07:50
Man
Teddy.15 said:
We have sold our freedom for comfort.
Bowing to the bully of a brave new world.
Sad ๐ข but so true and it\'s all thanks to those who allow the power.
Did you know ironically in Italy Diesel now cost more than petrol,
July 7th, 2026 03:36
Teddy.15 said:
We have sold our freedom for comfort.
Bowing to the bully of a brave new world.
Sad ๐ข but so true and it\'s all thanks to those who allow the power.
Did you know ironically in Italy Diesel now cost more than petrol,
July 7th, 2026 03:36
Man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Bully is indeed the word my friend, a definite fav
July 7th, 2026 02:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Bully is indeed the word my friend, a definite fav
July 7th, 2026 02:56
I swear
cully45 said:
Thanks ffor your kind comments it means a lot.- Regards Owen
July 7th, 2026 01:48
cully45 said:
Thanks ffor your kind comments it means a lot.- Regards Owen
July 7th, 2026 01:48
The collector
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have alot of Worthless things hidden away somewhere.
I always find it Amazing when some Priceless piece of Art or Manuscript is found in a Attic or Drawer. Like it.
July 6th, 2026 18:35
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have alot of Worthless things hidden away somewhere.
I always find it Amazing when some Priceless piece of Art or Manuscript is found in a Attic or Drawer. Like it.
July 6th, 2026 18:35
The collector
Friendship said:
Nicely write. Your poem explores the theme of collecting and the emotional implications of holding onto things deemed worthless. It seems you suggest a deeper commentary on relationships and the human tendency to cling to memories, objects, or connections that may no longer serve a purpose.
July 6th, 2026 16:33
Friendship said:
Nicely write. Your poem explores the theme of collecting and the emotional implications of holding onto things deemed worthless. It seems you suggest a deeper commentary on relationships and the human tendency to cling to memories, objects, or connections that may no longer serve a purpose.
July 6th, 2026 16:33
The collector
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice comparison between collecting worthless things and staying in an unhealthy relationship.
July 6th, 2026 15:20
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice comparison between collecting worthless things and staying in an unhealthy relationship.
July 6th, 2026 15:20
The collector
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how the seemingly random contents of the cigar box slowly become a portrait of the man who keeps them. By the final line, the objects aren\'t really the subject anymore...they\'ve become a mirror. Beautiful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 6th, 2026 15:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how the seemingly random contents of the cigar box slowly become a portrait of the man who keeps them. By the final line, the objects aren\'t really the subject anymore...they\'ve become a mirror. Beautiful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 6th, 2026 15:06
Touch
Samprikta Paul said:
As we grow up, everything seems to scare slowly as the past is behind yet never left. Well done.
July 6th, 2026 14:10
Samprikta Paul said:
As we grow up, everything seems to scare slowly as the past is behind yet never left. Well done.
July 6th, 2026 14:10
The collector
Paul Bell said:
She always said she would throw me out with the rubbish.
Probably why I hid the bin and recycled her.
July 6th, 2026 13:34
Paul Bell said:
She always said she would throw me out with the rubbish.
Probably why I hid the bin and recycled her.
July 6th, 2026 13:34
Touch
NafisaSB said:
The difference between reality and what was imagined as truth is well Brought out ๐โ๏ธ
July 6th, 2026 11:32
NafisaSB said:
The difference between reality and what was imagined as truth is well Brought out ๐โ๏ธ
July 6th, 2026 11:32
The collector
arqios said:
Felt poem. Perhaps as with beauty, value lies with the beholder. ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
July 6th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
Felt poem. Perhaps as with beauty, value lies with the beholder. ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
July 6th, 2026 06:34
The collector
Syd said:
I know a few people like the person you\'ve described here Sorenbarret.
Well written - Syd ๐
July 6th, 2026 04:54
Syd said:
I know a few people like the person you\'ve described here Sorenbarret.
Well written - Syd ๐
July 6th, 2026 04:54
The collector
Alex Arnot said:
Feels like the antithesis to the old saying about one man\'s trash. Well written good sir!
July 6th, 2026 01:14
Alex Arnot said:
Feels like the antithesis to the old saying about one man\'s trash. Well written good sir!
July 6th, 2026 01:14
I swear
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
I swear
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
I swear
GenXer Sharon ๐๐ said:
Itโs all about control today isnโt it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
GenXer Sharon ๐๐ said:
Itโs all about control today isnโt it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
Change
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Ghost riders
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of itโlike a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of itโlike a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
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