Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
You are everything
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This could be about a spirit - our own spirit - or the Holy Spirit, or all of these, I would say.
May 11th, 2026 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This could be about a spirit - our own spirit - or the Holy Spirit, or all of these, I would say.
May 11th, 2026 11:12
You are everything
Paul Bell said:
Feels like a special woman, one who left her mark and her presence.
Quite a reflective poem, the memories linger.
May 11th, 2026 09:18
Paul Bell said:
Feels like a special woman, one who left her mark and her presence.
Quite a reflective poem, the memories linger.
May 11th, 2026 09:18
You are everything
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful tribute and personification of someone well admired.Forf mr it represents the Holy spirit but it could be different things for different readers
May 11th, 2026 06:53
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful tribute and personification of someone well admired.Forf mr it represents the Holy spirit but it could be different things for different readers
May 11th, 2026 06:53
You are everything
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely piece, much enjoyed
May 11th, 2026 05:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely piece, much enjoyed
May 11th, 2026 05:10
Lunacy in a bottle
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no Rioja in it soren so I will not be drinking it. LOL
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no Rioja in it soren so I will not be drinking it. LOL
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:13
Lunacy in a bottle
arqios said:
Firewater! Devil\'s brew. Lolly water, vintner\'s stew.
May 10th, 2026 19:05
arqios said:
Firewater! Devil\'s brew. Lolly water, vintner\'s stew.
May 10th, 2026 19:05
Lunacy in a bottle
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t drink anything stronger than Pop: But then Pop drinks like a Fish..
A fine Poem on the dangers of the Demon Drink.
May 10th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t drink anything stronger than Pop: But then Pop drinks like a Fish..
A fine Poem on the dangers of the Demon Drink.
May 10th, 2026 18:40
Lunacy in a bottle
Teddy.15 said:
Well what\'s your poison? Ah mine is a damn good glass of chianti 🍷
May 10th, 2026 13:39
Teddy.15 said:
Well what\'s your poison? Ah mine is a damn good glass of chianti 🍷
May 10th, 2026 13:39
Enchou sareta senryu
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Neutral view-neutral solutions are actually quite difficult.
May 10th, 2026 12:53
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Neutral view-neutral solutions are actually quite difficult.
May 10th, 2026 12:53
Lunacy in a bottle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…what a vivid rush this is. Wine, dreams, screams, laughter, mud, rainbows…everything feels simultaneously divine and decayed, like a feast happening at the edge of collapse. And somehow you make it playful while still carrying that darker undercurrent beneath it all. For me, alcohol is a demon…so I no longer drink…for others an occasional enjoyment. Too many, in my experience, shift from the latter to the former without ever realizing it until it is too late. Really strong and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 12:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…what a vivid rush this is. Wine, dreams, screams, laughter, mud, rainbows…everything feels simultaneously divine and decayed, like a feast happening at the edge of collapse. And somehow you make it playful while still carrying that darker undercurrent beneath it all. For me, alcohol is a demon…so I no longer drink…for others an occasional enjoyment. Too many, in my experience, shift from the latter to the former without ever realizing it until it is too late. Really strong and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 12:50
Lunacy in a bottle
Neville said:
Splendid little things like this make me feel giddy .. Neville
May 10th, 2026 12:36
Neville said:
Splendid little things like this make me feel giddy .. Neville
May 10th, 2026 12:36
Better than who?
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Questionable food for thought. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:31
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Questionable food for thought. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:31
Lunacy in a bottle
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Friendship said:
This poet speaks as the Devil\'s Advocate,
This poem revolves around the duality of alcohol—its ability to bring, simultaneously leading to chaos and madness. encompasses the intoxicating effects of wine and other alcoholic beverages, exploring themes of escapism, revelry, and the darker aspects of indulgence.
The words you used are vivid and evocative, employing a mix of contrasting imagery. Phrases such as \"Satan\'s blood,\" \"liquid laughter of fools,\" and \"naked screams\" suggest a tumultuous relationship with alcohol, highlighting both the euphoric and destructive aspects.
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Lunacy in a bottle
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a toast poured straight from the gutter and the heavens at once—sweet rot and shine tangled together.
There’s a wild pulse in it, like laughter that knows it might turn on you before the night’s through.
May 10th, 2026 07:30
Lunacy in a bottle
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
David Wakeling said:
Alcohol is a killer. Such a sad life depending on the bottle.Very strong feelings here
May 10th, 2026 06:17
Lunacy in a bottle
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write though I do like a drink
May 10th, 2026 04:07
Feelings of loss
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard when a loved one dies, I know!
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:49
Feelings of loss
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a whole lot of \'War and Peace\' in those few lines. So much depth that is this living business.
Well written.
May 9th, 2026 19:17
Feelings of loss
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
arqios said:
Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:59
Feelings of loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this hit me immediately. So few words, yet it opens such a massive emotional space between inevitability and attachment. Quietly devastating, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 9th, 2026 15:54
Feelings of loss
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve seen this close up and very personally this year, you make an excellent point but we haven\'t been there just yet and as a person who is staying it\'s so damn painful too, which I why your title is perfection. Thank you you have calmed my grief in a few words. 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:10
Feelings of loss
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Neville said:
Short, sweet & very much to the point .. succinctly put & spot on .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 07:28
Feelings of loss
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
David Wakeling said:
Yes a good philosophical question.For me saying good bye is hard as you say but not impossible.
May 9th, 2026 05:54
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