Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Durdica Porobija said:
A parabolic metapoetic poem. How to value weak words and how to diligently nurture them – these seem to me the questions that remain unanswered. These are probably the doubts that haunt conscientious poets.
July 21st, 2026 05:33
Durdica Porobija said:
A parabolic metapoetic poem. How to value weak words and how to diligently nurture them – these seem to me the questions that remain unanswered. These are probably the doubts that haunt conscientious poets.
July 21st, 2026 05:33
No direction
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks we leave in life can never be forgotten soren.
Andy
July 21st, 2026 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks we leave in life can never be forgotten soren.
Andy
July 21st, 2026 00:57
Man
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\"
This poem is great, and the ending verse really punctuated the whole poem.
July 20th, 2026 17:03
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\"
This poem is great, and the ending verse really punctuated the whole poem.
July 20th, 2026 17:03
No direction
Kevin Hulme said:
I suppose we are all influenced by People we have met along with the knocks of life.
Good Write.
July 20th, 2026 15:20
Kevin Hulme said:
I suppose we are all influenced by People we have met along with the knocks of life.
Good Write.
July 20th, 2026 15:20
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soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully expressed. We are shaped by our choices, our actions, and the people around us.
July 20th, 2026 11:30
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully expressed. We are shaped by our choices, our actions, and the people around us.
July 20th, 2026 11:30
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Neville said:
very cleva wordsmithing .. I feel like I\'ve just been set free from somewhere between a rock and a hard place .. what a journey that was from raw materials to finished product .. Neville
July 20th, 2026 11:24
Neville said:
very cleva wordsmithing .. I feel like I\'ve just been set free from somewhere between a rock and a hard place .. what a journey that was from raw materials to finished product .. Neville
July 20th, 2026 11:24
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Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we actually forget what is below us, and in reality there\'s millions of years packed in.
It\'s like when someone has modernised an old home, and you only see the real beauty when you expose the walls or the floor.
July 20th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we actually forget what is below us, and in reality there\'s millions of years packed in.
It\'s like when someone has modernised an old home, and you only see the real beauty when you expose the walls or the floor.
July 20th, 2026 09:23
No direction
Soman Ragavan said:
In the song of Elton John “Sacrifice” : “In final act, we lose direction...\"
July 20th, 2026 09:17
Soman Ragavan said:
In the song of Elton John “Sacrifice” : “In final act, we lose direction...\"
July 20th, 2026 09:17
No direction
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem recounts how we are formed, moulded by life that goes on around us. It i an inevitable destiny. Even if we live in utter solitude in a desert or a forest, we will still be shaped by what surrounds us. We are locked in the footprints (DNA prints) into which we are forced : \"too late for corrections...\" \"on which people park\" : people park not only on parking lots but on our very bodies... The watery cement only gives little time for others to mould it : when it sets, it is too late. Earth transformed to concrete : the evolution cannot be stopped. We are just cogs in a wheel on which we have no control. When the path becomes a street, it\'s the final nail.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem recounts how we are formed, moulded by life that goes on around us. It i an inevitable destiny. Even if we live in utter solitude in a desert or a forest, we will still be shaped by what surrounds us. We are locked in the footprints (DNA prints) into which we are forced : \"too late for corrections...\" \"on which people park\" : people park not only on parking lots but on our very bodies... The watery cement only gives little time for others to mould it : when it sets, it is too late. Earth transformed to concrete : the evolution cannot be stopped. We are just cogs in a wheel on which we have no control. When the path becomes a street, it\'s the final nail.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fascinating piece, Soren! Earth and water become something rigid and utilitarian, yet retain the permanent evidence of every life that crossed them while they were vulnerable. Beautifully conceived, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fascinating piece, Soren! Earth and water become something rigid and utilitarian, yet retain the permanent evidence of every life that crossed them while they were vulnerable. Beautifully conceived, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:42
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s very old. I call her \'Fossil\' though her botox has ruined even her fossilised appearance. lol.
July 20th, 2026 06:56
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s very old. I call her \'Fossil\' though her botox has ruined even her fossilised appearance. lol.
July 20th, 2026 06:56
Floods and leaks
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing to read with amazing twists on words. Enjoyed!!!
July 20th, 2026 06:53
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing to read with amazing twists on words. Enjoyed!!!
July 20th, 2026 06:53
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arqios said:
This poem gives the feel of one hardened into the shape life gave them before they ever learned to choose their own direction, and now they carry the marks of everyone who walked across them. 🙏🕊️
July 20th, 2026 06:17
arqios said:
This poem gives the feel of one hardened into the shape life gave them before they ever learned to choose their own direction, and now they carry the marks of everyone who walked across them. 🙏🕊️
July 20th, 2026 06:17
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all leave our mark my friend, good write enjoyed
July 20th, 2026 03:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all leave our mark my friend, good write enjoyed
July 20th, 2026 03:36
Bouquet
Kevin Hulme said:
A Romance gone sour. A good Story told in a few lines. Enjoyed.
July 19th, 2026 18:56
Kevin Hulme said:
A Romance gone sour. A good Story told in a few lines. Enjoyed.
July 19th, 2026 18:56
Bouquet
Thomas W Case said:
Love how you thread romance through decay—those cut flowers feel like vows that knew their own ending.
There’s a quiet sting here, like beauty remembering it was always on borrowed time.
July 19th, 2026 06:58
Thomas W Case said:
Love how you thread romance through decay—those cut flowers feel like vows that knew their own ending.
There’s a quiet sting here, like beauty remembering it was always on borrowed time.
July 19th, 2026 06:58
Bouquet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four lines. Beautifully tragic, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four lines. Beautifully tragic, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:57
Bouquet
Teddy.15 said:
Apt for a quite normal marriage 🤣 with all the ugliness in-between sometimes we forget to keep loves sparks alive! Super write 🌹
July 19th, 2026 05:35
Teddy.15 said:
Apt for a quite normal marriage 🤣 with all the ugliness in-between sometimes we forget to keep loves sparks alive! Super write 🌹
July 19th, 2026 05:35
Bouquet
arqios said:
To my estimation a cut rose has less a chance, all things considered, than one that stays as nature intended attached to its vine. And the metaphor works splendid in intimate human relations. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:29
arqios said:
To my estimation a cut rose has less a chance, all things considered, than one that stays as nature intended attached to its vine. And the metaphor works splendid in intimate human relations. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:29
Bouquet
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the symbol of love, and divorce, well done friend
July 19th, 2026 03:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the symbol of love, and divorce, well done friend
July 19th, 2026 03:43
Bouquet
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.
July 19th, 2026 02:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.
July 19th, 2026 02:58
Bouquet
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.
July 19th, 2026 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.
July 19th, 2026 01:52
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