Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Adrift
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Broken, beat, and sore. It coincides to a small degree in my last poem where I mentioned facing life’s struggles alone and how the world tells us we must prove ourselves or our worth. Always love your writing. Beautifully written and beautifully received.
March 30th, 2026 07:30
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Broken, beat, and sore. It coincides to a small degree in my last poem where I mentioned facing life’s struggles alone and how the world tells us we must prove ourselves or our worth. Always love your writing. Beautifully written and beautifully received.
March 30th, 2026 07:30
Dreams of yesterday
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into themes of memory, love, and the passage of time. It discusses how past experiences, especially those tied to love, continue to influence the poet\'s present emotional state, creating a contrast between what was and what is.
March 30th, 2026 05:33
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into themes of memory, love, and the passage of time. It discusses how past experiences, especially those tied to love, continue to influence the poet\'s present emotional state, creating a contrast between what was and what is.
March 30th, 2026 05:33
Dreams of yesterday
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all have these dreams, nice write
March 30th, 2026 03:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We all have these dreams, nice write
March 30th, 2026 03:32
Tree and the lily
Hadley said:
A wonderful poem, Sorenbarrett. It seems to send the message of never being able to act correctly and to never be able to please all. Such a deep meaning said in such a peaceful manner.
March 29th, 2026 22:52
Hadley said:
A wonderful poem, Sorenbarrett. It seems to send the message of never being able to act correctly and to never be able to please all. Such a deep meaning said in such a peaceful manner.
March 29th, 2026 22:52
Stories
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of the divine and the mundane, exploring themes of faith, legacy, and the human condition. The poet reflects on the life of a figure who embodies both mystery and history, likely referencing Christ, and critiques how society interprets and transforms this figure into a product of culture and commercialism.
March 29th, 2026 16:27
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of the divine and the mundane, exploring themes of faith, legacy, and the human condition. The poet reflects on the life of a figure who embodies both mystery and history, likely referencing Christ, and critiques how society interprets and transforms this figure into a product of culture and commercialism.
March 29th, 2026 16:27
Stories
Teddy.15 said:
Love the thought of the Angel lyrics. This is gorgeous 🌹
March 29th, 2026 14:24
Teddy.15 said:
Love the thought of the Angel lyrics. This is gorgeous 🌹
March 29th, 2026 14:24
Stories
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, Hosanna now, then a few days later, Crucify. I think there must have been some of the same people in both crowds, even if not exactly the same two crowds.
March 29th, 2026 11:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, Hosanna now, then a few days later, Crucify. I think there must have been some of the same people in both crowds, even if not exactly the same two crowds.
March 29th, 2026 11:29
Stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a sharp edge running through this that I really respect. The imagery doesn’t hold back, especially in those moments where history and interpretation collide. It’s unsettling in the right way…makes you sit with it. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a sharp edge running through this that I really respect. The imagery doesn’t hold back, especially in those moments where history and interpretation collide. It’s unsettling in the right way…makes you sit with it. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:38
Stories
Thomas W Case said:
This is raw and jagged, like history scribbled in margins no one dares read twice.
I feel the grit beneath the holy, the weight of applause and silence pressed together—dark and alive.
March 29th, 2026 08:25
Thomas W Case said:
This is raw and jagged, like history scribbled in margins no one dares read twice.
I feel the grit beneath the holy, the weight of applause and silence pressed together—dark and alive.
March 29th, 2026 08:25
Ritual
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Soren! “altars of enamel” is the line that locks in for me. It reframes everything…suddenly teeth aren’t just functional, they’re ceremonial, almost sacred and violent at once. That image carries the whole piece forward with intensity. Great piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Soren! “altars of enamel” is the line that locks in for me. It reframes everything…suddenly teeth aren’t just functional, they’re ceremonial, almost sacred and violent at once. That image carries the whole piece forward with intensity. Great piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:26
Ritual
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this great well written You make hygiene sound good and fun
March 28th, 2026 09:21
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this great well written You make hygiene sound good and fun
March 28th, 2026 09:21
Ritual
Katie B. said:
Clever! You are referring to teeth and having them cleaned? A fave.
March 28th, 2026 06:17
Katie B. said:
Clever! You are referring to teeth and having them cleaned? A fave.
March 28th, 2026 06:17
Ritual
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'ve never seen a tooth poem more finely polished 🤣
March 28th, 2026 05:03
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'ve never seen a tooth poem more finely polished 🤣
March 28th, 2026 05:03
Ritual
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I put on my false smile when I serve up sewage for KP and say to her: \'It\'s good for you, dear; dunno why you complain; I always give you double helpings!\' heehee.
March 28th, 2026 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I put on my false smile when I serve up sewage for KP and say to her: \'It\'s good for you, dear; dunno why you complain; I always give you double helpings!\' heehee.
March 28th, 2026 03:22
Rich men
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for many soren but there are still good people out there but we never hear about them.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for many soren but there are still good people out there but we never hear about them.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:50
Rich men
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange the association of Wealth to Cigars.
Never tried Cigars : But I\'d give Wealth a try.
Very discriptive Poem.
March 27th, 2026 19:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange the association of Wealth to Cigars.
Never tried Cigars : But I\'d give Wealth a try.
Very discriptive Poem.
March 27th, 2026 19:26
Rich men
arqios said:
That was indeed the image and sensory feel of rich men we were instilled with🙏🏻🕊️
March 27th, 2026 19:18
arqios said:
That was indeed the image and sensory feel of rich men we were instilled with🙏🏻🕊️
March 27th, 2026 19:18
Rich men
orchidee said:
Doh! KP says to me: \'Yep, I\'m burning up your paper money with rolling my cigars. Dunno why you complain? Doesn\'t it say somewhere: \'Don\'t store up treasure on earth, where moth and rust corrupt it? I\'m only trying to keep you from becoming greedily rich!\'
And yet all that\'s in my wallet is moths, each time I open it now. lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Doh! KP says to me: \'Yep, I\'m burning up your paper money with rolling my cigars. Dunno why you complain? Doesn\'t it say somewhere: \'Don\'t store up treasure on earth, where moth and rust corrupt it? I\'m only trying to keep you from becoming greedily rich!\'
And yet all that\'s in my wallet is moths, each time I open it now. lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:59
Rich men
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of wealth, indulgence, and the sensory experience of excess. It subtly critiques the hedonistic lifestyle of the wealthy, illustrating how they revel in their luxuries—represented by cigars and money—while also hinting at the emptiness behind such indulgence.
March 27th, 2026 09:49
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of wealth, indulgence, and the sensory experience of excess. It subtly critiques the hedonistic lifestyle of the wealthy, illustrating how they revel in their luxuries—represented by cigars and money—while also hinting at the emptiness behind such indulgence.
March 27th, 2026 09:49
Rich men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this balances allure and critique… the atmosphere draws you in, but the imagery exposes what’s beneath it. That final turn leaves a strong impression. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this balances allure and critique… the atmosphere draws you in, but the imagery exposes what’s beneath it. That final turn leaves a strong impression. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:19
Rich men
Katie B. said:
Love it Soren! \"Intoxicating perfume of burning cash\" excellent.
March 27th, 2026 07:57
Katie B. said:
Love it Soren! \"Intoxicating perfume of burning cash\" excellent.
March 27th, 2026 07:57
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