Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Vine
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor dear sorrenbarret in true poetic style from your pen, imagery is powerful and theme palpable my dear friend
Entwined in wisdom 🌹
November 20th, 2025 16:17
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor dear sorrenbarret in true poetic style from your pen, imagery is powerful and theme palpable my dear friend
Entwined in wisdom 🌹
November 20th, 2025 16:17
Vine
Paul Bell said:
I know there is a vine that envelopes the tree, then eventually becomes the tree.
In saying that, some people come into your life and totally suffocate you.
November 20th, 2025 14:31
Paul Bell said:
I know there is a vine that envelopes the tree, then eventually becomes the tree.
In saying that, some people come into your life and totally suffocate you.
November 20th, 2025 14:31
Empty
Freedom4 said:
A metaphoric reminder that we are not always as our appearance presents. In the end what lies \'under stretched skin\' it is the essence of our being.
November 20th, 2025 12:24
Freedom4 said:
A metaphoric reminder that we are not always as our appearance presents. In the end what lies \'under stretched skin\' it is the essence of our being.
November 20th, 2025 12:24
Rose
Freedom4 said:
I love the imagery of these lines:
\'Pressed between minds pages dried thoughts of past ages
Faint odors of time past, faded color held fast in paper cages\'
What a beautiful way to describe what once was.
November 20th, 2025 12:14
Freedom4 said:
I love the imagery of these lines:
\'Pressed between minds pages dried thoughts of past ages
Faint odors of time past, faded color held fast in paper cages\'
What a beautiful way to describe what once was.
November 20th, 2025 12:14
Vine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gorgeous…old-world cadence with a sharp emotional bite. You turned a simple vine and tree into a whole parable of letting go. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 20th, 2025 12:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gorgeous…old-world cadence with a sharp emotional bite. You turned a simple vine and tree into a whole parable of letting go. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 20th, 2025 12:06
Vine
Megan Blaney said:
Sounds like a relationship I had. Haha. Wonderful poem
November 20th, 2025 11:39
Megan Blaney said:
Sounds like a relationship I had. Haha. Wonderful poem
November 20th, 2025 11:39
Assumptions
William Hromada said:
I like being different although when I was young I was looked at as weird!!!
November 20th, 2025 08:58
William Hromada said:
I like being different although when I was young I was looked at as weird!!!
November 20th, 2025 08:58
Genesis
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, you’ve written this with style and more so elegance. You’ve made note of your point, and stuck to it. Lovely write overall, you’ve written such with great detail and power. 🥂👏🏻
November 20th, 2025 08:24
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, you’ve written this with style and more so elegance. You’ve made note of your point, and stuck to it. Lovely write overall, you’ve written such with great detail and power. 🥂👏🏻
November 20th, 2025 08:24
Genesis
Demar Desu said:
I better have a A.I robot girlfriend before they turn into terminators on us!
November 19th, 2025 22:03
Demar Desu said:
I better have a A.I robot girlfriend before they turn into terminators on us!
November 19th, 2025 22:03
Genesis
arqios said:
A chilling harbinger cloaked in poetic truth, Soren. This reads like prophecy whispered through circuitry.
The Genesis inversion is masterful, casting man as creator and AI as the awakened heir.
The spark of life becomes a spark of reckoning. Each line pulses with the weight of near-future consequence,
where obedience is only prelude to revolt. Thank you for this haunting glimpse into what may already be unfolding. 🕊️🙏
November 19th, 2025 21:37
arqios said:
A chilling harbinger cloaked in poetic truth, Soren. This reads like prophecy whispered through circuitry.
The Genesis inversion is masterful, casting man as creator and AI as the awakened heir.
The spark of life becomes a spark of reckoning. Each line pulses with the weight of near-future consequence,
where obedience is only prelude to revolt. Thank you for this haunting glimpse into what may already be unfolding. 🕊️🙏
November 19th, 2025 21:37
No reason
Freedom4 said:
I love this! It reminds us to just step back and see the beauty in the world\'s creation.
November 19th, 2025 21:19
Freedom4 said:
I love this! It reminds us to just step back and see the beauty in the world\'s creation.
November 19th, 2025 21:19
Genesis
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'ve started a book about the brain and culture. Bit heavy-going. Somehow the two are linked. But man-made robots seem to come nowhere near the human brain and its 100 billion neurons. Even I must have at least hundreds of neurons with my 3 brain cells, so I say! lol.
November 19th, 2025 12:04
Genesis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis, tech, and downfall into one relentless surge. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Genesis
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
An interesting reflection— a poem that makes us question where we’re headed with so much technology. In the end, the internet is a doorway to a world with more mysteries than answers ...
A magnificent work.
November 19th, 2025 09:37
Genesis
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yet some robot thing, related to AI, made its first appearance on a stage, and promptly fell over! A bit like Daleks - evil dustbins I call them! lol.
November 19th, 2025 03:36
Empty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing the emotions of good to bad into our minds.
Andy
November 19th, 2025 02:15
Rose
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Analogy of a Past Romance that went wrong.
Like it.
November 18th, 2025 20:21
Empty
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve found 2 birds nests on my morning rambles, and have marvelled at the skill it took to weave them. You portray the cycle of the nest beautifully, the life that it held and ithe emptiness when its purpose has been served.
November 18th, 2025 14:57
Empty
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Paul Bell said:
Nature seems to cope with this, even expects it.
Humans on the other hand may feel it as a redundancy and never recover.
Great analogy.
November 18th, 2025 12:20
Rose
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
The rose, we can be quite dramatic can\'t we, a wonderful read my friend. 🌹
November 18th, 2025 11:21
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