Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Hazard
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem reveals how words can both wound and illuminate, and the risks poets face in exposing themselves—yet they write anyway, using the act to express their truths and transform pain into something that endures beyond criticism.
January 2nd, 2026 04:14
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem reveals how words can both wound and illuminate, and the risks poets face in exposing themselves—yet they write anyway, using the act to express their truths and transform pain into something that endures beyond criticism.
January 2nd, 2026 04:14
Hazard
orchidee said:
On hazards, a nasty poet on another site commented on lots of poems - \'I don\'t care much for this poem!\' They may have hounded him off the site with a \'good riddance!\'
January 2nd, 2026 02:59
orchidee said:
On hazards, a nasty poet on another site commented on lots of poems - \'I don\'t care much for this poem!\' They may have hounded him off the site with a \'good riddance!\'
January 2nd, 2026 02:59
Freedom in chains
Dan Williams said:
Imagery abounds and while generally moody, ends on slight optimism. Nice.
January 2nd, 2026 02:05
Dan Williams said:
Imagery abounds and while generally moody, ends on slight optimism. Nice.
January 2nd, 2026 02:05
Freedom in chains
Kevin Hulme said:
Freedom: a Wonderful thing , but those Invisible Chains . Well said.
January 1st, 2026 20:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Freedom: a Wonderful thing , but those Invisible Chains . Well said.
January 1st, 2026 20:33
Freedom in chains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, a wonderfully roaming meditation on distance, memory, and endurance. You let landscape, weather, and inner compass speak together, and the result feels honest and unforced. By the end, the road isn’t just travel…it’s persistence. Strong work and Happy New Year to you my friend! The journey continues!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, a wonderfully roaming meditation on distance, memory, and endurance. You let landscape, weather, and inner compass speak together, and the result feels honest and unforced. By the end, the road isn’t just travel…it’s persistence. Strong work and Happy New Year to you my friend! The journey continues!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:36
Freedom in chains
Thomas W Case said:
The push and pull between open space and lingering memory is striking — vivid, grounded, and quietly aching.
January 1st, 2026 09:36
Thomas W Case said:
The push and pull between open space and lingering memory is striking — vivid, grounded, and quietly aching.
January 1st, 2026 09:36
Freedom in chains
Friendship said:
I must say Well written, Sorenbarrett. A poem with so many emotions.
The imagery you painted of nature, travel, and introspection. The Poet conveys a sense of displacement, evoking both the beauty of the natural world and the pain of separation from loved ones.
The poet has so many emotions. \"Freedom in Chains\" explores the tension between a yearning for freedom and the feelings of confinement and longing for home. It reflects on the emotional landscape of a wanderer who grapples with feelings of isolation while also seeking solace and connection. To me, your poem expresses the inner conflict of seeking freedom while dealing with the emotional weight of distance and memory. It serves as a meditation on the complexities of the human experience, particularly related to place, identity, and relationships.
January 1st, 2026 08:51
Friendship said:
I must say Well written, Sorenbarrett. A poem with so many emotions.
The imagery you painted of nature, travel, and introspection. The Poet conveys a sense of displacement, evoking both the beauty of the natural world and the pain of separation from loved ones.
The poet has so many emotions. \"Freedom in Chains\" explores the tension between a yearning for freedom and the feelings of confinement and longing for home. It reflects on the emotional landscape of a wanderer who grapples with feelings of isolation while also seeking solace and connection. To me, your poem expresses the inner conflict of seeking freedom while dealing with the emotional weight of distance and memory. It serves as a meditation on the complexities of the human experience, particularly related to place, identity, and relationships.
January 1st, 2026 08:51
Freedom in chains
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Dunno why you complain, KP says to me. There\'s freedom in chains - that ball and chain I\'ve put on your ankle, and thrown the key away to the chain! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:33
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Dunno why you complain, KP says to me. There\'s freedom in chains - that ball and chain I\'ve put on your ankle, and thrown the key away to the chain! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:33
Freedom in chains
Soman Ragavan said:
“so far from home” is intriguing... Is the country you are living now your motherland ?... If it is not, then there is a longing for the homeland.
“so alone...” : this is the fate of poets. Even in a multitude we feel alone...
“torn between us two...” : plaints of a relationship....
“rootless within...” : also the fate of poets. Nobody and nothing completes the poet.
“weary feet...” : the poet is a traveller, a wanderer...
“solace to find...” : the perpetual search for happiness that exists in the poet.
“searching for slumber sweet...” : the restless soul seeks peace and sleep. Tired of wandering.
“so long the road...” : another lament of a tired soul.
“songbird tweet...” : comparison with a songbird; the same search for a soul that will complete oneself.
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January 1st, 2026 07:53
Soman Ragavan said:
“so far from home” is intriguing... Is the country you are living now your motherland ?... If it is not, then there is a longing for the homeland.
“so alone...” : this is the fate of poets. Even in a multitude we feel alone...
“torn between us two...” : plaints of a relationship....
“rootless within...” : also the fate of poets. Nobody and nothing completes the poet.
“weary feet...” : the poet is a traveller, a wanderer...
“solace to find...” : the perpetual search for happiness that exists in the poet.
“searching for slumber sweet...” : the restless soul seeks peace and sleep. Tired of wandering.
“so long the road...” : another lament of a tired soul.
“songbird tweet...” : comparison with a songbird; the same search for a soul that will complete oneself.
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January 1st, 2026 07:53
Freedom in chains
Teddy.15 said:
What a stunning way to bring in the new year Reminiscing with a heart full of love. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret just beautiful ❤️
January 1st, 2026 06:59
Teddy.15 said:
What a stunning way to bring in the new year Reminiscing with a heart full of love. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret just beautiful ❤️
January 1st, 2026 06:59
Freedom in chains
soheil khodaparasti said:
Th poem\'s seen and felt landscapes reveal the tension between freedom and loneliness. Great job!
January 1st, 2026 06:19
soheil khodaparasti said:
Th poem\'s seen and felt landscapes reveal the tension between freedom and loneliness. Great job!
January 1st, 2026 06:19
Freedom in chains
arqios said:
Our peace of mind is our real freedom in our life🙏🏻🕊️
January 1st, 2026 05:54
arqios said:
Our peace of mind is our real freedom in our life🙏🏻🕊️
January 1st, 2026 05:54
Nothing of nothing
Aman 12 said:
feels like a breath on cold glass.art survies for long...
January 1st, 2026 03:38
Aman 12 said:
feels like a breath on cold glass.art survies for long...
January 1st, 2026 03:38
Kobe beef
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I hear your whisper through the static and steel,
your words bruise the comfort I was fed to believe—
if this is slaughter, then your poem taught me to feel.
December 31st, 2025 21:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I hear your whisper through the static and steel,
your words bruise the comfort I was fed to believe—
if this is slaughter, then your poem taught me to feel.
December 31st, 2025 21:57
Kobe beef
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s terrible to see groups if People all together and not speaking; just staring at a Phone screen. Well said in your Poem.
December 31st, 2025 21:50
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s terrible to see groups if People all together and not speaking; just staring at a Phone screen. Well said in your Poem.
December 31st, 2025 21:50
Guilt by association
Kevin Hulme said:
One thing leads to another. Insightful.
December 31st, 2025 20:27
Kevin Hulme said:
One thing leads to another. Insightful.
December 31st, 2025 20:27
Kobe beef
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed this and agree on all fronts. Your talent amazes me. Have you been published frequently? Do you have books? And yes, I do read poetry. My fave, William Stafford.
December 31st, 2025 13:00
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed this and agree on all fronts. Your talent amazes me. Have you been published frequently? Do you have books? And yes, I do read poetry. My fave, William Stafford.
December 31st, 2025 13:00
What schools don\'t teach
Rachel Poole said:
I just had this conversation with a neighbor yesterday. Not one soul was born to hate...it is a behavior that is sadly taught. We adults should take a lesson or 2 in kindness and compassion from children. Great read!
December 31st, 2025 09:50
Rachel Poole said:
I just had this conversation with a neighbor yesterday. Not one soul was born to hate...it is a behavior that is sadly taught. We adults should take a lesson or 2 in kindness and compassion from children. Great read!
December 31st, 2025 09:50
Kobe beef
Rachel Poole said:
Clever way of expressing the monotony of the world today. I enjoy your writing style!
December 31st, 2025 09:47
Rachel Poole said:
Clever way of expressing the monotony of the world today. I enjoy your writing style!
December 31st, 2025 09:47
Kobe beef
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now-Now, sorenbarrett. I resemble those remarks. Before we put collective pistols to our heads, Happy New Year and Happy writing in 2026.
December 31st, 2025 09:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now-Now, sorenbarrett. I resemble those remarks. Before we put collective pistols to our heads, Happy New Year and Happy writing in 2026.
December 31st, 2025 09:23
Kobe beef
soheil khodaparasti said:
You are right; trading awareness for comfort and becoming less human is what today\'s world suffer from. Very nice.
December 31st, 2025 09:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
You are right; trading awareness for comfort and becoming less human is what today\'s world suffer from. Very nice.
December 31st, 2025 09:21
Kobe beef
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a bleak and necessary observation. You move from personal isolation to cultural consumption without losing coherence, and that final image indicts complacency more than cruelty. It’s a lament and a warning at once. Strong work. Happy New Year to you and your family, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a bleak and necessary observation. You move from personal isolation to cultural consumption without losing coherence, and that final image indicts complacency more than cruelty. It’s a lament and a warning at once. Strong work. Happy New Year to you and your family, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 08:58
Kobe beef
Friendship said:
You portray the world with human-like qualities, describing it as \"deaf,\" \"blind,\" and having \"hearts too hard to feel,\" which amplifies the sense of isolation. Indeed, some people do become desensitized to beauty and treat others poorly due to their own bitterness. The metaphor of consuming Kobe beef highlights the superficial nature of certain pleasures. Your poem offers a critique of modern society\'s detachment from meaningful art and experiences, arguing that people prioritize consumerism and technology over deeper understanding.
December 31st, 2025 08:48
Friendship said:
You portray the world with human-like qualities, describing it as \"deaf,\" \"blind,\" and having \"hearts too hard to feel,\" which amplifies the sense of isolation. Indeed, some people do become desensitized to beauty and treat others poorly due to their own bitterness. The metaphor of consuming Kobe beef highlights the superficial nature of certain pleasures. Your poem offers a critique of modern society\'s detachment from meaningful art and experiences, arguing that people prioritize consumerism and technology over deeper understanding.
December 31st, 2025 08:48
Kobe beef
arqios said:
Wagyu poets and Kobe poems - makes me sad, the reality at poets’ state and the condition of readership in our time and day 🕊️🙏🏻
December 31st, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
Wagyu poets and Kobe poems - makes me sad, the reality at poets’ state and the condition of readership in our time and day 🕊️🙏🏻
December 31st, 2025 07:48
Guilt by association
Dan Williams said:
Brief but eloquent. \"Beware friends you keep, with whom you sleep, in their shadow you live\" hits me where I live. Nice work.
December 31st, 2025 04:26
Dan Williams said:
Brief but eloquent. \"Beware friends you keep, with whom you sleep, in their shadow you live\" hits me where I live. Nice work.
December 31st, 2025 04:26
Kobe beef
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m charmed by this because your soul is everywhere on this poem, we have the same thoughts today although your talents are far greater in creative poetry than mine, always humbled and most truly honoured to take away something I\'ve read, putting it in my little pocket of reflection and inspiration. My dear sorrenbarret thank you. 🌹
December 31st, 2025 03:30
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m charmed by this because your soul is everywhere on this poem, we have the same thoughts today although your talents are far greater in creative poetry than mine, always humbled and most truly honoured to take away something I\'ve read, putting it in my little pocket of reflection and inspiration. My dear sorrenbarret thank you. 🌹
December 31st, 2025 03:30
Guilt by association
Goldfinch60 said:
Always give respect soren and hate will soon be dispelled.
Andy
December 31st, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Always give respect soren and hate will soon be dispelled.
Andy
December 31st, 2025 02:50
Guilt by association
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a steady dismantling of moral comfort. You line up everyday images until association itself becomes the verdict. By the time we reach that final warning, it doesn’t accuse…it instructs. Strong, thoughtful work. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a steady dismantling of moral comfort. You line up everyday images until association itself becomes the verdict. By the time we reach that final warning, it doesn’t accuse…it instructs. Strong, thoughtful work. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:50
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