Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Skating on thin ice of AI
arqios said:
An excellent pick up on Dave’s query 👍🏻🕊️
November 4th, 2026 07:23
arqios said:
An excellent pick up on Dave’s query 👍🏻🕊️
November 4th, 2026 07:23
Skating on thin ice of AI
Paul Bell said:
AI is going to do some fantastic things for humans in the right hands.
Sadly, man has a self destruction clause in his DNA, and I\'ve got a feeling, AI will fulfill this destructive prophecy.
November 4th, 2026 07:10
Paul Bell said:
AI is going to do some fantastic things for humans in the right hands.
Sadly, man has a self destruction clause in his DNA, and I\'ve got a feeling, AI will fulfill this destructive prophecy.
November 4th, 2026 07:10
Skating on thin ice of AI
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem explores the precarious nature of engaging with artificial intelligence, likening it to skating on thin ice. It reflects on the risks and uncertainties associated with technological advancement and the potential consequences of missteps.
November 4th, 2026 06:16
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem explores the precarious nature of engaging with artificial intelligence, likening it to skating on thin ice. It reflects on the risks and uncertainties associated with technological advancement and the potential consequences of missteps.
November 4th, 2026 06:16
Skating on thin ice of AI
Teddy.15 said:
Fantastic a question I always ask my husband as he is a physicist. He tells me he can make a calculation that would take 6 months by hand into just a few hours. I asked him does he not worry about eventually being less valued for his brains and he said no because even though A. I can do some stuff it had a lot of flaws so actually not so helpful because there were many flaws in the calculation which can only be fixed manually.
November 4th, 2026 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
Fantastic a question I always ask my husband as he is a physicist. He tells me he can make a calculation that would take 6 months by hand into just a few hours. I asked him does he not worry about eventually being less valued for his brains and he said no because even though A. I can do some stuff it had a lot of flaws so actually not so helpful because there were many flaws in the calculation which can only be fixed manually.
November 4th, 2026 05:29
Skating on thin ice of AI
Lorenz said:
I think these so- called A.I are already much smarter than humans !
November 4th, 2026 04:10
Lorenz said:
I think these so- called A.I are already much smarter than humans !
November 4th, 2026 04:10
Skating on thin ice of AI
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another of mans wonderful ideas, most of which result in disaster
November 4th, 2026 03:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another of mans wonderful ideas, most of which result in disaster
November 4th, 2026 03:30
Falling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Soren. I looked into this after reading your poem, and it’s absolutely devastating. Nine lives lost, including a pilot who was only twenty. I can’t imagine what their loved ones are going through. Praying for all involved and affected by this tragedy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2026 23:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Soren. I looked into this after reading your poem, and it’s absolutely devastating. Nine lives lost, including a pilot who was only twenty. I can’t imagine what their loved ones are going through. Praying for all involved and affected by this tragedy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2026 23:02
Falling
Kevin Hulme said:
Don\'t think I\'d like to hear that Tape. Must be the same listening to Voices on a \'Black Box\'.
And what those People went through in the Planes on 911: Doesn\'t bare thinking about.
A good Write.
November 3rd, 2026 19:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Don\'t think I\'d like to hear that Tape. Must be the same listening to Voices on a \'Black Box\'.
And what those People went through in the Planes on 911: Doesn\'t bare thinking about.
A good Write.
November 3rd, 2026 19:31
Falling
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves to reflect on the fragility of life, the unexpected nature of death, and the haunting memories that remain after such tragedies. It confronts the fear of mortality and the loss of identity in the face of catastrophic events. I still can\'t get her voice out of my head.
November 3rd, 2026 10:52
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves to reflect on the fragility of life, the unexpected nature of death, and the haunting memories that remain after such tragedies. It confronts the fear of mortality and the loss of identity in the face of catastrophic events. I still can\'t get her voice out of my head.
November 3rd, 2026 10:52
Falling
Dev Parth said:
Soren, this left a deep ache in my chest. You captured the sheer, helpless terror of those final seconds so vividly that it took my breath away. The thought of that frantic voice fading into the haunting silence of the sky is utterly devastating. This is a raw, beautiful, and deeply heartbreaking tribute to those nine lost souls. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.
November 3rd, 2026 09:15
Dev Parth said:
Soren, this left a deep ache in my chest. You captured the sheer, helpless terror of those final seconds so vividly that it took my breath away. The thought of that frantic voice fading into the haunting silence of the sky is utterly devastating. This is a raw, beautiful, and deeply heartbreaking tribute to those nine lost souls. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.
November 3rd, 2026 09:15
Falling
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a chilling, almost documentary quality to this, using internal rhyme and rapid-fire phrasing to recreate the terrifying speed of an aircraft disaster, while the fragmented radio communication makes the final moments feel horribly immediate. “Death diagnosed in the voice of a ghost, falling from where angels sing” is the keeper for me, because it brings together the cold technical explanation and the human tragedy, leaving the pilot’s last words hanging somewhere between the investigation and the afterlife.
November 3rd, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a chilling, almost documentary quality to this, using internal rhyme and rapid-fire phrasing to recreate the terrifying speed of an aircraft disaster, while the fragmented radio communication makes the final moments feel horribly immediate. “Death diagnosed in the voice of a ghost, falling from where angels sing” is the keeper for me, because it brings together the cold technical explanation and the human tragedy, leaving the pilot’s last words hanging somewhere between the investigation and the afterlife.
November 3rd, 2026 07:31
Falling
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A disturbing piece my friend, spoken as it is
November 3rd, 2026 05:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A disturbing piece my friend, spoken as it is
November 3rd, 2026 05:05
Falling
Doggerel Dave said:
You gave substance to a news item i heard yesterday. Kudos, Soren.
November 3rd, 2026 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
You gave substance to a news item i heard yesterday. Kudos, Soren.
November 3rd, 2026 04:55
Falling
arqios said:
It’s a chilling thought too how the moment of death is now recorded in many ways and will be a permanent artefact for countless generations to come 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 3rd, 2026 04:40
arqios said:
It’s a chilling thought too how the moment of death is now recorded in many ways and will be a permanent artefact for countless generations to come 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 3rd, 2026 04:40
Water speaks
Kevin Hulme said:
My Grandmother said she saw Frogs fall out the Sky when she was little.
A enjoyable Read.
November 2nd, 2026 19:25
Kevin Hulme said:
My Grandmother said she saw Frogs fall out the Sky when she was little.
A enjoyable Read.
November 2nd, 2026 19:25
Water speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that uncertainty about being addressed gets me...is someone reaching out, or am I hearing what I already fear? Fascinating read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that uncertainty about being addressed gets me...is someone reaching out, or am I hearing what I already fear? Fascinating read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:51
Water speaks
12River34 said:
Superb layout and imagery .
Marvellous work 👏🏻👏🏻.
Thanks
November 2nd, 2026 12:08
12River34 said:
Superb layout and imagery .
Marvellous work 👏🏻👏🏻.
Thanks
November 2nd, 2026 12:08
Water speaks
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Water speaks
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Water speaks
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Water speaks
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Water speaks
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Water speaks
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
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