Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Renewal
orchidee said:

A renewing good write SB.

May 28th, 2026 10:45

Renewal
Paul Bell said:

Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.

May 28th, 2026 08:04

Renewal
arqios said:

This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏

May 28th, 2026 07:00

Renewal
Lorenz said:

A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...

May 28th, 2026 04:38

Renewal
David Wakeling said:

Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable

May 28th, 2026 04:37

Renewal
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Most descriptive and much enjoyed

May 28th, 2026 03:30

The shape of a tree
Goldfinch60 said:

There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.

Andy

May 28th, 2026 01:26

The shape of a tree
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes . That last line says alot. Liked.

May 27th, 2026 19:27

The shape of a tree
Syd said:

True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.

- Syd

May 27th, 2026 16:58

The shape of a tree
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful 🌹

May 27th, 2026 15:28

Night\'s bedroom
mohammad ali said:

So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.

May 27th, 2026 14:12

King of the world
Joseph M Marion said:

Love this lot of truth here

May 27th, 2026 11:39

Development
Joseph M Marion said:

I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written

May 27th, 2026 10:49

The shape of a tree
Lorenz said:

A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...

May 27th, 2026 10:15

The shape of a tree
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 27th, 2026 10:06

Little one
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 27th, 2026 10:02

The shape of a tree
David Wakeling said:

This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo

May 27th, 2026 07:22

The shape of a tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

love the last line my friend

May 27th, 2026 04:07

The chase
NafisaSB said:

Very descriptive- can visualize it 👌

May 27th, 2026 03:16

Little one
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.

Andy

May 27th, 2026 01:44

The chase
Waiting for Silence said:

Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one

May 26th, 2026 23:35

Little one
Waiting for Silence said:

A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!

May 26th, 2026 23:33

Little one
Kevin Hulme said:

That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.

May 26th, 2026 19:34

Little one
soheil khodaparasti said:

A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.

May 26th, 2026 14:28

Little one
Neville said:



Ouch, it seems there was more than just little old me that neva saw that coming .. 👍

May 26th, 2026 13:01

Little one
Paul Bell said:

Nature and the life she provides, or doesn\'t in some cases.
We see nature at work, but we probably don\'t see the darkside of it.
The finch won\'t survive without its mother, but maybe feed another.
That\'s nature in the raw, unassuming, moving on.

May 26th, 2026 11:44

Little one
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 26th, 2026 10:00

Little one
Lorenz said:

Nature is just in its ruthless way.Only humans no longer respect its laws .

May 26th, 2026 09:27

Little one
Katie B. said:

The swallow of a cruel world. We can often be oblivious, naively expecting the best out of our fellow man. Well written and thoughtfully crafted.

May 26th, 2026 08:59

Little one
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a tender ache in this—the smallness of that finch against a world that doesn’t pause for him.
And that ending lands quiet and cold… nature moving on, even when something fragile disappears into it.

May 26th, 2026 07:15

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