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David Wakeling said:
This was an enjoyable read .I loved the platters singing,Mack the night and Blue Moon is still one of my favourite songs.The ending is a little sad but all good things come to an end.Great journey here
June 3rd, 2026 04:45
David Wakeling said:
This was an enjoyable read .I loved the platters singing,Mack the night and Blue Moon is still one of my favourite songs.The ending is a little sad but all good things come to an end.Great journey here
June 3rd, 2026 04:45
Nervous
JAINESH.D said:
The imagery in this piece is wonderfully vivid. Framing the wind as a plow carving through the .field of sky. instantly sets a grand, turbulent stage. What resonates most, however, is the striking contrast between the grand scale of nature and the intimate vulnerability of the leaf. The line \'clings with umbilical stem\' perfectly captures that visceral, instinctual resistance to change and the anxiety of being replaced. A beautifully poignant meditation on transitions.
June 2nd, 2026 22:47
JAINESH.D said:
The imagery in this piece is wonderfully vivid. Framing the wind as a plow carving through the .field of sky. instantly sets a grand, turbulent stage. What resonates most, however, is the striking contrast between the grand scale of nature and the intimate vulnerability of the leaf. The line \'clings with umbilical stem\' perfectly captures that visceral, instinctual resistance to change and the anxiety of being replaced. A beautifully poignant meditation on transitions.
June 2nd, 2026 22:47
Look closer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. I love how the poem refuses to let anything stand alone...every quality carries its counterpart within it. The repeated structure gives it the feel of a philosophical chant, inviting the reader to look beyond easy categories and closer at the tensions that shape our lives. Thought-provoking and elegantly crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. I love how the poem refuses to let anything stand alone...every quality carries its counterpart within it. The repeated structure gives it the feel of a philosophical chant, inviting the reader to look beyond easy categories and closer at the tensions that shape our lives. Thought-provoking and elegantly crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:32
Look closer
antra.coree said:
So true, if we search for bad in good their will be
If we search darkness in light there will be!
Nicely done 👍🏻
June 2nd, 2026 19:59
antra.coree said:
So true, if we search for bad in good their will be
If we search darkness in light there will be!
Nicely done 👍🏻
June 2nd, 2026 19:59
Look closer
Lorenz said:
A fascinating step into the realm of the pataphysical dualism !
June 2nd, 2026 09:20
Lorenz said:
A fascinating step into the realm of the pataphysical dualism !
June 2nd, 2026 09:20
Look closer
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly does make for some wonderful word play.Lots to think about here.I always admire the internal and initial rhyme.Well done compadre
June 2nd, 2026 06:53
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly does make for some wonderful word play.Lots to think about here.I always admire the internal and initial rhyme.Well done compadre
June 2nd, 2026 06:53
Look closer
Friendship said:
Your writing had me thinking. I may not have understood it, but here\'s my take. Your poem explores the duality and interconnectedness of opposites in life. The poet suggests that courage can emerge from fear, strength from weakness, light from darkness, and right from wrong. The central idea is that opposites are not merely distinct but interdependent and often coexist in complex relationships. I noticed a similarity between your poem and something I wrote yesterday; it was quite thought-provoking. Your work has its merits, and I\'m grateful for the share.
June 2nd, 2026 06:46
Friendship said:
Your writing had me thinking. I may not have understood it, but here\'s my take. Your poem explores the duality and interconnectedness of opposites in life. The poet suggests that courage can emerge from fear, strength from weakness, light from darkness, and right from wrong. The central idea is that opposites are not merely distinct but interdependent and often coexist in complex relationships. I noticed a similarity between your poem and something I wrote yesterday; it was quite thought-provoking. Your work has its merits, and I\'m grateful for the share.
June 2nd, 2026 06:46
Blood money
Goldfinch60 said:
Such little things can create huge problems soren.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such little things can create huge problems soren.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:47
Blood money
Kevin Hulme said:
The Leaflet you get in a Box of Pills that say : \'Side Effects\' is like \'War and Peace\'.
I\'m on some at the moment and are giving me Stomach ache. I\'m like John Hurt in \'Alien\'.
Well written.
June 1st, 2026 20:39
Kevin Hulme said:
The Leaflet you get in a Box of Pills that say : \'Side Effects\' is like \'War and Peace\'.
I\'m on some at the moment and are giving me Stomach ache. I\'m like John Hurt in \'Alien\'.
Well written.
June 1st, 2026 20:39
Blood money
Friendship said:
Well written; the truth was said. Your poem discusses the commercialization of health care, emphasizing the negative consequences of pharmaceuticals. It reflects on the widespread use of medications that may cause more harm than good, illustrating a sense of betrayal between healthcare providers and patients.
June 1st, 2026 18:19
Friendship said:
Well written; the truth was said. Your poem discusses the commercialization of health care, emphasizing the negative consequences of pharmaceuticals. It reflects on the widespread use of medications that may cause more harm than good, illustrating a sense of betrayal between healthcare providers and patients.
June 1st, 2026 18:19
Blood money
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite. The relentless rhythm gives it the feeling of an indictment...one charge after another, each building on the last. Whether one agrees with every conclusion or not, the frustration and distrust come through loud and clear. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite. The relentless rhythm gives it the feeling of an indictment...one charge after another, each building on the last. Whether one agrees with every conclusion or not, the frustration and distrust come through loud and clear. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:54
Archetype of man
Zelda Vanrooyen said:
Wowww the words and the message it conveys..well written
June 1st, 2026 13:15
Zelda Vanrooyen said:
Wowww the words and the message it conveys..well written
June 1st, 2026 13:15
Little one
NafisaSB said:
Can imagine the little one’s plight and fright- you have described his trauma so amazingly
June 1st, 2026 10:02
NafisaSB said:
Can imagine the little one’s plight and fright- you have described his trauma so amazingly
June 1st, 2026 10:02
Blood money
David Wakeling said:
This raises a problems with the medical profession.What ever medicine they give has side effects.Often the side effects are worse than the ailment.this is so cleverly done in the poem. I admire the internal rhyming.You have truly become a master at that skill.Well done amigo
June 1st, 2026 05:44
David Wakeling said:
This raises a problems with the medical profession.What ever medicine they give has side effects.Often the side effects are worse than the ailment.this is so cleverly done in the poem. I admire the internal rhyming.You have truly become a master at that skill.Well done amigo
June 1st, 2026 05:44
Blood money
arqios said:
Ingeniously braided together, Soren. Most thoroughly enjoyed🕊️🙏
June 1st, 2026 05:09
arqios said:
Ingeniously braided together, Soren. Most thoroughly enjoyed🕊️🙏
June 1st, 2026 05:09
Better than who?
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is reflective, as indicated by a series of rhetorical questions. A rhetorical question is a stylistic figure of thought. In addition, these questions are accumulated. Accumulation is also a stylistic figure that develops the proliferation of discourse, analytical details in your poem, all in order to shatter the imagined image of one\'s own goodness as opposed to the evil of other people. It is elaborated and a biblical reference: Do not judge, or you too will be judged!
June 1st, 2026 02:42
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is reflective, as indicated by a series of rhetorical questions. A rhetorical question is a stylistic figure of thought. In addition, these questions are accumulated. Accumulation is also a stylistic figure that develops the proliferation of discourse, analytical details in your poem, all in order to shatter the imagined image of one\'s own goodness as opposed to the evil of other people. It is elaborated and a biblical reference: Do not judge, or you too will be judged!
June 1st, 2026 02:42
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