Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Glow
NinjaGirl said:
Taking it very literally-fire is fantastic for inspiration because it is so pretty! I do not know if you have ever written a poem to burn, but if you have not you totally should.
November 10th, 2025 13:04
NinjaGirl said:
Taking it very literally-fire is fantastic for inspiration because it is so pretty! I do not know if you have ever written a poem to burn, but if you have not you totally should.
November 10th, 2025 13:04
Relationships, everything has a price
NafisaSB said:
I think it all depends on who the buyer is- where the person is living, and whether it’s bought for use or as a status symbol 🤔😁
November 10th, 2025 12:02
NafisaSB said:
I think it all depends on who the buyer is- where the person is living, and whether it’s bought for use or as a status symbol 🤔😁
November 10th, 2025 12:02
Awakening
NafisaSB said:
Indeed our dreams are more beautiful than the harsh reality we face when we wake up. Beautifully crafted ✌️👏
November 10th, 2025 11:34
NafisaSB said:
Indeed our dreams are more beautiful than the harsh reality we face when we wake up. Beautifully crafted ✌️👏
November 10th, 2025 11:34
Glow
arqios said:
A daily challenge if there be one, to pay attention to inspiration when it sparks, with participative listening which in turn fuels the flame of the inspiring else it disappears. Perhaps even to strengthen the mind stretching it and flexing so as to gather thoughts which by nature tend to stray. They also burn away the blockages that keep writing from happening. Very relatable, Soren 🙏🕊️
November 10th, 2025 07:36
arqios said:
A daily challenge if there be one, to pay attention to inspiration when it sparks, with participative listening which in turn fuels the flame of the inspiring else it disappears. Perhaps even to strengthen the mind stretching it and flexing so as to gather thoughts which by nature tend to stray. They also burn away the blockages that keep writing from happening. Very relatable, Soren 🙏🕊️
November 10th, 2025 07:36
Glow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Can you be a writer and never have writer\'s block? Is writer\'s block a rite of passage?
On the eve of the morrow
I write of sorrow
The last words of both lines rhyme. It must be a poem. I read somewhere that\'s a couplet.
I bet someone will dig around in that and find a nugget to believe in. Happy writing.
November 10th, 2025 07:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Can you be a writer and never have writer\'s block? Is writer\'s block a rite of passage?
On the eve of the morrow
I write of sorrow
The last words of both lines rhyme. It must be a poem. I read somewhere that\'s a couplet.
I bet someone will dig around in that and find a nugget to believe in. Happy writing.
November 10th, 2025 07:33
Glow
Lorenz said:
.Throw all these vanities and yourself onto the pyre and be sanctified !
November 10th, 2025 07:32
Lorenz said:
.Throw all these vanities and yourself onto the pyre and be sanctified !
November 10th, 2025 07:32
Glow
Paul Bell said:
My writer\'s block usually ends at four in the morning, and I\'m sure it\'s some ploy to drive me nuts getting it down.
November 10th, 2025 06:35
Paul Bell said:
My writer\'s block usually ends at four in the morning, and I\'m sure it\'s some ploy to drive me nuts getting it down.
November 10th, 2025 06:35
Boogie
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Heck yes!!! I concur! I love to dance...it\'s so damn defiant and liberating. And, I confess, I am watching Dancing with the Stars, but that is neither here nor there. Wonderful poem that still has my feet tapping. What a neat way to include all those dances too! Loved it, Soren! 🌹🖤🤣🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Heck yes!!! I concur! I love to dance...it\'s so damn defiant and liberating. And, I confess, I am watching Dancing with the Stars, but that is neither here nor there. Wonderful poem that still has my feet tapping. What a neat way to include all those dances too! Loved it, Soren! 🌹🖤🤣🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:42
Boogie
Bella Shepard said:
You have my toes tapping, even without music. In my younger days I danced in recitals and loved every minute. In my older days I danced the night away at high school reunions, and could hardly get out of bed the next morning. You capture the magic of dancing in every style, cultural and generational, and I thank you for the memories you\'ve stirred.
November 9th, 2025 11:58
Bella Shepard said:
You have my toes tapping, even without music. In my younger days I danced in recitals and loved every minute. In my older days I danced the night away at high school reunions, and could hardly get out of bed the next morning. You capture the magic of dancing in every style, cultural and generational, and I thank you for the memories you\'ve stirred.
November 9th, 2025 11:58
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Keyara S Trotman said:
Beautiful write, dearest Soren🥂, spectacles at your risk. Wonderful words used. Put down on paper, either way greatly expressed💯
November 9th, 2025 11:23
Keyara S Trotman said:
Beautiful write, dearest Soren🥂, spectacles at your risk. Wonderful words used. Put down on paper, either way greatly expressed💯
November 9th, 2025 11:23
Boogie
Neville said:
That\'s one Hot Potato you just posted here squire .. Neville 😎👍
November 9th, 2025 08:23
Neville said:
That\'s one Hot Potato you just posted here squire .. Neville 😎👍
November 9th, 2025 08:23
Boogie
Paul Bell said:
What is rap all about, said the plumber doing the tap tap tap.
Great dance through life with some innuendo thrown in for effect.
The first dance I learned as a kid was the military two-step, scared me for life.
November 9th, 2025 07:13
Paul Bell said:
What is rap all about, said the plumber doing the tap tap tap.
Great dance through life with some innuendo thrown in for effect.
The first dance I learned as a kid was the military two-step, scared me for life.
November 9th, 2025 07:13
Boogie
arqios said:
Learnt a lot of these dances in primary school. Those were fun and innocent days. 🕊️🙏🕺
November 9th, 2025 06:27
arqios said:
Learnt a lot of these dances in primary school. Those were fun and innocent days. 🕊️🙏🕺
November 9th, 2025 06:27
Boogie
Teddy.15 said:
lol very cool dear sorrenbarret. 😎 I\'d do the tango with you Sir, and the cha cha 🤣 🌹
November 9th, 2025 03:20
Teddy.15 said:
lol very cool dear sorrenbarret. 😎 I\'d do the tango with you Sir, and the cha cha 🤣 🌹
November 9th, 2025 03:20
Boogie
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s dancing but it\'s melts her botox. lol.
November 9th, 2025 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s dancing but it\'s melts her botox. lol.
November 9th, 2025 03:10
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust seems to be a very rare thing in thios day and age soren.
Andy
November 9th, 2025 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust seems to be a very rare thing in thios day and age soren.
Andy
November 9th, 2025 01:59
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Dan Williams said:
Almost mysterious, still speaks volumes. Nice.
November 9th, 2025 00:53
Dan Williams said:
Almost mysterious, still speaks volumes. Nice.
November 9th, 2025 00:53
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
RSM0812 said:
Very good imagery. The ying yang of a rose. Nicely written and delivered.
November 8th, 2025 20:01
RSM0812 said:
Very good imagery. The ying yang of a rose. Nicely written and delivered.
November 8th, 2025 20:01
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is dark alchemy...love, hunger, and guilt all mirrored in rose and dove. Brutal, honest, and beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2025 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is dark alchemy...love, hunger, and guilt all mirrored in rose and dove. Brutal, honest, and beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2025 13:05
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Lorenz said:
Prisoner of love ? what a dreadful fate !
November 8th, 2025 11:32
Lorenz said:
Prisoner of love ? what a dreadful fate !
November 8th, 2025 11:32
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, sorenbarrett, Powerful poem.
November 8th, 2025 09:09
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, sorenbarrett, Powerful poem.
November 8th, 2025 09:09
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
arqios said:
Such a deep dive in its succinctness! Outward gestures of love that in retrospect could have been destructive and may have unforeseen consequences. Powerful stuff. 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 07:26
arqios said:
Such a deep dive in its succinctness! Outward gestures of love that in retrospect could have been destructive and may have unforeseen consequences. Powerful stuff. 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 07:26
Wasn\'t then but guilty now
Paul Bell said:
Love should come with a health warning.
Roses to begin with, but then the thorns make their appearance.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Never bought that mind you.
November 8th, 2025 06:49
Paul Bell said:
Love should come with a health warning.
Roses to begin with, but then the thorns make their appearance.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Never bought that mind you.
November 8th, 2025 06:49
No reason
FrasMac said:
Yes! So much time spent in little screens when there is so much majesty around us to inspire!
November 8th, 2025 02:46
FrasMac said:
Yes! So much time spent in little screens when there is so much majesty around us to inspire!
November 8th, 2025 02:46
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have dreams soren and some of them are very believable.
Andy
November 8th, 2025 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have dreams soren and some of them are very believable.
Andy
November 8th, 2025 02:41
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