Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Awaiting
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP awaits eagerly (?) her next helping of sewage, dished up by me! lol. Well, I tell her it\'s got lots of protein in it. Dunno why she complains, while Fido and I have roast dinners. lol.
September 19th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, KP awaits eagerly (?) her next helping of sewage, dished up by me! lol. Well, I tell her it\'s got lots of protein in it. Dunno why she complains, while Fido and I have roast dinners. lol.
September 19th, 2026 09:57
Awaiting
Friendship said:
Your poem portrays the emotional state of a host waiting for a visitor (death) that has been delayed, reflecting the tension between hope and resignation.
September 19th, 2026 09:12
Friendship said:
Your poem portrays the emotional state of a host waiting for a visitor (death) that has been delayed, reflecting the tension between hope and resignation.
September 19th, 2026 09:12
Awaiting
arqios said:
Having lived with elders two generations up have brought such feelings and intersections. Sometimes I sit at a table and part of me waits... for them that have gone and for my own passing on.
September 19th, 2026 07:30
arqios said:
Having lived with elders two generations up have brought such feelings and intersections. Sometimes I sit at a table and part of me waits... for them that have gone and for my own passing on.
September 19th, 2026 07:30
Awaiting
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we are all waiting. The Kettle is on.
Tea Cups laid out. No message in my inbox.
But he\'s a busy Man . Probably in Traffic.
A fine write here and a fave.
September 19th, 2026 07:23
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we are all waiting. The Kettle is on.
Tea Cups laid out. No message in my inbox.
But he\'s a busy Man . Probably in Traffic.
A fine write here and a fave.
September 19th, 2026 07:23
Awaiting
Paul Bell said:
Some appointments you don\'t want to keep, but you know at some point you will.
Sadly we all pay the piper in the end.
September 19th, 2026 06:22
Paul Bell said:
Some appointments you don\'t want to keep, but you know at some point you will.
Sadly we all pay the piper in the end.
September 19th, 2026 06:22
What is left
rrodriguez said:
I like it. The aphoristic quality—flame, beam, embers, cinders, smoke, cloak, glory, heat, ash—gives the poem an architectural coherence. Indeed, fame, from blazing brilliance to fading ash, captures the reality of the matter.
September 19th, 2026 06:05
rrodriguez said:
I like it. The aphoristic quality—flame, beam, embers, cinders, smoke, cloak, glory, heat, ash—gives the poem an architectural coherence. Indeed, fame, from blazing brilliance to fading ash, captures the reality of the matter.
September 19th, 2026 06:05
Awaiting
Lorenz said:
We\'ll always be on time for the appointment even if we\'re asleep...
September 19th, 2026 04:18
Lorenz said:
We\'ll always be on time for the appointment even if we\'re asleep...
September 19th, 2026 04:18
That\'s how it is
Donteatmecows said:
remembering a past time when social life was different for people and the prices of goods were different...very nice write
September 19th, 2026 00:26
Donteatmecows said:
remembering a past time when social life was different for people and the prices of goods were different...very nice write
September 19th, 2026 00:26
That\'s how it is
Jabberwocky said:
Lol. Not all the fun I liked when I was young was necessarily legal.
But I get you\'re meaning.
For a world of atheists and agnostics we\'ve certainly become very Presbyterian!
September 18th, 2026 13:02
Jabberwocky said:
Lol. Not all the fun I liked when I was young was necessarily legal.
But I get you\'re meaning.
For a world of atheists and agnostics we\'ve certainly become very Presbyterian!
September 18th, 2026 13:02
That\'s how it is
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels like somebody rifling through an old drawer and finding one thing they wish they hadn’t. And wow...remember those days? A fave for sure, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels like somebody rifling through an old drawer and finding one thing they wish they hadn’t. And wow...remember those days? A fave for sure, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 09:52
That\'s how it is
Paul Bell said:
Those were the days.
Then the bureacrats got involved, and a simple, how are you doing became like the inquisition.
This is why all my neighbours have six foot fences separating them from each other. We want privacy at all costs.
Then they die and nobody notices for about a year afterwards.
September 18th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
Those were the days.
Then the bureacrats got involved, and a simple, how are you doing became like the inquisition.
This is why all my neighbours have six foot fences separating them from each other. We want privacy at all costs.
Then they die and nobody notices for about a year afterwards.
September 18th, 2026 09:23
That\'s how it is
Friendship said:
Your statement brings the past into the present, suggesting that modern life has become more complicated and more expensive.
September 18th, 2026 08:53
Friendship said:
Your statement brings the past into the present, suggesting that modern life has become more complicated and more expensive.
September 18th, 2026 08:53
That\'s how it is
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write here. The thing that gets me is \'Trigger Warnings\' before a Television Programme that I watched when little. \'Unsuitable for Younger Viewers\'. etc.
As for Complementing Women: Your walking on Eggshells. A fave.
September 18th, 2026 07:57
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write here. The thing that gets me is \'Trigger Warnings\' before a Television Programme that I watched when little. \'Unsuitable for Younger Viewers\'. etc.
As for Complementing Women: Your walking on Eggshells. A fave.
September 18th, 2026 07:57
That\'s how it is
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Perfectly summed up my friend
September 18th, 2026 03:13
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Perfectly summed up my friend
September 18th, 2026 03:13
Candy Bars
maydanae said:
The way you describe a fling turned foe is quite amusing; as much subtlety in this poem as there are coco beans in white chocolate, certainly a fun read
September 17th, 2026 22:13
maydanae said:
The way you describe a fling turned foe is quite amusing; as much subtlety in this poem as there are coco beans in white chocolate, certainly a fun read
September 17th, 2026 22:13
Cracked
Kevin Hulme said:
Like those faces at the end of \'Raiders of the lost Ark\'.
Janus springs to mind.
September 17th, 2026 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Like those faces at the end of \'Raiders of the lost Ark\'.
Janus springs to mind.
September 17th, 2026 19:16
Time
Durdica Porobija said:
A contemplative poem—even a philosophical one. There is a philosophy of time. The coldness between two heartbeats that you managed to observe is chilling. Powerfully moving!
September 17th, 2026 13:58
Durdica Porobija said:
A contemplative poem—even a philosophical one. There is a philosophy of time. The coldness between two heartbeats that you managed to observe is chilling. Powerfully moving!
September 17th, 2026 13:58
Freedom
Durdica Porobija said:
Freedom and love—two precious values that often elude us. Well done!
September 17th, 2026 13:10
Durdica Porobija said:
Freedom and love—two precious values that often elude us. Well done!
September 17th, 2026 13:10
Cracked
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly written, Soren. I love how the description shifts from personal appearance into the deterioration of an entire structure...as though the person has spent years holding himself together with whatever was available. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly written, Soren. I love how the description shifts from personal appearance into the deterioration of an entire structure...as though the person has spent years holding himself together with whatever was available. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:28
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