Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Too late
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece, much enjoyed
September 1st, 2026 03:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece, much enjoyed
September 1st, 2026 03:22
Called on high
Kevin Hulme said:
Now that Summer is packing it\'s Bags, ready for its Journey South: I\'ll miss the Smells of the Countryside. Especially from the Trees.
A fine Poem as usual.
August 31st, 2026 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Now that Summer is packing it\'s Bags, ready for its Journey South: I\'ll miss the Smells of the Countryside. Especially from the Trees.
A fine Poem as usual.
August 31st, 2026 19:37
Called on high
soheil khodaparasti said:
What a beautifully sensory piece. You make the fragrance feel almost tangible, as though the scent of the angel trumpets carries the speaker beyond ordinary experience and into something close to transcendence. I especially love the contrast between all the other intoxicating pleasures you mention and the realization that none of them can compare with something so simple and entirely natural. There is a wonderful sense of surrender to the night air, as if for a moment the world has offered you exactly what you needed.
August 31st, 2026 12:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
What a beautifully sensory piece. You make the fragrance feel almost tangible, as though the scent of the angel trumpets carries the speaker beyond ordinary experience and into something close to transcendence. I especially love the contrast between all the other intoxicating pleasures you mention and the realization that none of them can compare with something so simple and entirely natural. There is a wonderful sense of surrender to the night air, as if for a moment the world has offered you exactly what you needed.
August 31st, 2026 12:47
Called on high
peto said:
A brilliant write on a natural high
Tried the rest
Found the best
I won\'t lie I had to look up druther
Fits perfectly as I expected it would
A special one here Soren
August 31st, 2026 11:12
peto said:
A brilliant write on a natural high
Tried the rest
Found the best
I won\'t lie I had to look up druther
Fits perfectly as I expected it would
A special one here Soren
August 31st, 2026 11:12
Values that cost nothing
hzugman said:
Well written poem about what really matters. Nice job!
August 31st, 2026 08:56
hzugman said:
Well written poem about what really matters. Nice job!
August 31st, 2026 08:56
Called on high
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I connect with this deeply. There are moments in nature that hit with a force no substance can reproduce...a scent, a sound, a night breeze, and suddenly you are somewhere else entirely. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I connect with this deeply. There are moments in nature that hit with a force no substance can reproduce...a scent, a sound, a night breeze, and suddenly you are somewhere else entirely. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:35
Called on high
Doggerel Dave said:
Well you convinced me, Soren. And here I was, this entry to be a complaint that I, deprived of an olfactory experience you were prepared to boast about from the depths of the Brazilian rainforest, did not sit well with me.
Retracted. Bunnings, Our giant local supplier carries brugmansia if that be the same vegetation. Might have a spot for one, Means evicting an old established geranium, but will give the whole enterprise active consideration…
Goes without saying, it was an enjoyable write.
August 31st, 2026 08:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Well you convinced me, Soren. And here I was, this entry to be a complaint that I, deprived of an olfactory experience you were prepared to boast about from the depths of the Brazilian rainforest, did not sit well with me.
Retracted. Bunnings, Our giant local supplier carries brugmansia if that be the same vegetation. Might have a spot for one, Means evicting an old established geranium, but will give the whole enterprise active consideration…
Goes without saying, it was an enjoyable write.
August 31st, 2026 08:24
Called on high
Paul Bell said:
Every illegal substance in the world will lift you up put you down empty your pockets and turn you around.
Though as you say, nature provides it free, it gives you a lift, benifits your health, and leaves a lasting effect on you.
A win, win you could say.
August 31st, 2026 05:51
Paul Bell said:
Every illegal substance in the world will lift you up put you down empty your pockets and turn you around.
Though as you say, nature provides it free, it gives you a lift, benifits your health, and leaves a lasting effect on you.
A win, win you could say.
August 31st, 2026 05:51
Called on high
arqios said:
Flora and fauna, botanics in this case, brings on a certain high. Even the trumpets are called by celestial ascribing. Much enjoyed. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 31st, 2026 05:39
arqios said:
Flora and fauna, botanics in this case, brings on a certain high. Even the trumpets are called by celestial ascribing. Much enjoyed. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 31st, 2026 05:39
Called on high
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret,
The best things in life certainly are free. You\'ve expressed this here beautifully. All those expensive intoxicating drugs being trumped by Trumpet Honey... I love that phrase, by the way. I wish I had a porch, deckchair and some angel trumpets of my own.
Brilliantly written, my friend.
- Syd 🍄
August 31st, 2026 05:28
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret,
The best things in life certainly are free. You\'ve expressed this here beautifully. All those expensive intoxicating drugs being trumped by Trumpet Honey... I love that phrase, by the way. I wish I had a porch, deckchair and some angel trumpets of my own.
Brilliantly written, my friend.
- Syd 🍄
August 31st, 2026 05:28
Called on high
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A tender write nature at its core
August 31st, 2026 04:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A tender write nature at its core
August 31st, 2026 04:32
The creek
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, my friend. You take the life of a creek and turn it into something almost tragic…clean at the beginning, then gradually burdened by everything poured into it along the way. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, my friend. You take the life of a creek and turn it into something almost tragic…clean at the beginning, then gradually burdened by everything poured into it along the way. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:46
Betrayal
rrodriguez said:
Soren, your poem is raw, with real energy and emotional force. The internal rhyme scheme gives it a strong rhythm and a kind of spoken-word intensity. Betrayal can be cruel and brutal.
August 30th, 2026 20:33
rrodriguez said:
Soren, your poem is raw, with real energy and emotional force. The internal rhyme scheme gives it a strong rhythm and a kind of spoken-word intensity. Betrayal can be cruel and brutal.
August 30th, 2026 20:33
The creek
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful write SB. Even in this modern world, with all its scientific knowledge we somehow can\'t accomplish the simple task of keeping nature pure of our waste. Why do we not have treatment facilities to clean the water supply. We pollute the rivers, lakes, and oceans knowingly. Yet, nothing is done. God save us!
August 30th, 2026 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful write SB. Even in this modern world, with all its scientific knowledge we somehow can\'t accomplish the simple task of keeping nature pure of our waste. Why do we not have treatment facilities to clean the water supply. We pollute the rivers, lakes, and oceans knowingly. Yet, nothing is done. God save us!
August 30th, 2026 16:40
The creek
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful write. Like so many things in the world today. Something starts out good and ends up bad. Very nice.
August 30th, 2026 13:01
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful write. Like so many things in the world today. Something starts out good and ends up bad. Very nice.
August 30th, 2026 13:01
The creek
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how pure water running past factories somehow get polluted.
Water companies in Britain are notorious for discharging sewage into rivers killing fish.
All down to profit, no one ever gets charged, brutal.
August 30th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how pure water running past factories somehow get polluted.
Water companies in Britain are notorious for discharging sewage into rivers killing fish.
All down to profit, no one ever gets charged, brutal.
August 30th, 2026 11:30
The creek
Kevin Hulme said:
I fine Poem on how we can screw-up something as Pure and so important as Water.
A fave.
August 30th, 2026 11:20
Kevin Hulme said:
I fine Poem on how we can screw-up something as Pure and so important as Water.
A fave.
August 30th, 2026 11:20
The creek
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It turned a bit sh....umthing! An old Carry On film joke there. lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:58
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It turned a bit sh....umthing! An old Carry On film joke there. lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:58
Forgotten
rrodriguez said:
I hope my poems will serve as fertilizer for the mind,
and if, in the end, they are dumped upon a heap of manure,
may they at least nourish something
before they are forgotten.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
August 30th, 2026 07:50
rrodriguez said:
I hope my poems will serve as fertilizer for the mind,
and if, in the end, they are dumped upon a heap of manure,
may they at least nourish something
before they are forgotten.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
August 30th, 2026 07:50
The creek
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reminder that nature may begin with purity, but what we pour into it becomes its story.
August 30th, 2026 07:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reminder that nature may begin with purity, but what we pour into it becomes its story.
August 30th, 2026 07:27
The creek
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn effective life metaphor here, watching pristine spring water become polluted as it passes through human civilization. The final turn is simple but bitter—the river didn’t choose to become dirty; everything it encountered along the way left its mark.
August 30th, 2026 06:42
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn effective life metaphor here, watching pristine spring water become polluted as it passes through human civilization. The final turn is simple but bitter—the river didn’t choose to become dirty; everything it encountered along the way left its mark.
August 30th, 2026 06:42
The creek
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem traces the life cycle of a water source, from a clean spring to a polluted river, symbolizing nature’s broader degradation from societal neglect and pollution. Thank you for sharing.
August 30th, 2026 06:35
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem traces the life cycle of a water source, from a clean spring to a polluted river, symbolizing nature’s broader degradation from societal neglect and pollution. Thank you for sharing.
August 30th, 2026 06:35
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