Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Closed door
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Closed door
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
Closed door
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Closed door
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
Forgotten
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
Closed door
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
Closed door
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Closed door
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
You will be offended
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
Closed door
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
You will be offended
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
You will be offended
mylastwrites said:
The incredible power of words. Probably caused more hurts than actual physical assaults. Where we live lets you write those words without repercussions. Some things just have to be said. I like how you ended it.
August 24th, 2026 12:42
mylastwrites said:
The incredible power of words. Probably caused more hurts than actual physical assaults. Where we live lets you write those words without repercussions. Some things just have to be said. I like how you ended it.
August 24th, 2026 12:42
You will be offended
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise I had upset ya, for ya to spout this tirade at me! lol.
Or - very naughty of me - Ahhh, a poem to recite to KP every day! lol. Noooo, I mustn\'t be that dreadful.
August 24th, 2026 08:48
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise I had upset ya, for ya to spout this tirade at me! lol.
Or - very naughty of me - Ahhh, a poem to recite to KP every day! lol. Noooo, I mustn\'t be that dreadful.
August 24th, 2026 08:48
You will be offended
Kevin Hulme said:
Ever thought of Writing Greeting Cards?
Nurse the Smelling Salts please.
A powerful Write. ✍️👍
August 24th, 2026 08:25
Kevin Hulme said:
Ever thought of Writing Greeting Cards?
Nurse the Smelling Salts please.
A powerful Write. ✍️👍
August 24th, 2026 08:25
You will be offended
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
You will be offended
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
You will be offended
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
You will be offended
David Wakeling said:
I think I was called most of those names when I was young and that was just from my family.Just kidding.It certainly highlights the amount of insults that exist in the English language. A disturding list.
August 24th, 2026 06:49
David Wakeling said:
I think I was called most of those names when I was young and that was just from my family.Just kidding.It certainly highlights the amount of insults that exist in the English language. A disturding list.
August 24th, 2026 06:49
You will be offended
Paul Bell said:
Blast, just got past three, hate that.
When is this rap song coming out, its a hit already.
August 24th, 2026 05:33
Paul Bell said:
Blast, just got past three, hate that.
When is this rap song coming out, its a hit already.
August 24th, 2026 05:33
Out of sight
alan b said:
Your use of the objects to form a relationship to the person is really well done.
August 24th, 2026 05:07
alan b said:
Your use of the objects to form a relationship to the person is really well done.
August 24th, 2026 05:07
Cracks of reality
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe echos of a previous life seeping through.
You read about such things.
A Haunting Read.
August 23rd, 2026 19:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe echos of a previous life seeping through.
You read about such things.
A Haunting Read.
August 23rd, 2026 19:43
Cracks of reality
mylastwrites said:
Your first two words say it. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2026 14:01
mylastwrites said:
Your first two words say it. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2026 14:01
Cracks of reality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what an eerie and powerful piece. It pulled me into a world where memory, identity, and perception no longer obey their boundaries...recognizable and completely alien at once. This one leaves the mind unsteady, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what an eerie and powerful piece. It pulled me into a world where memory, identity, and perception no longer obey their boundaries...recognizable and completely alien at once. This one leaves the mind unsteady, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:53
Cracks of reality
Lorenz said:
welcome to the twilight zone to share a good old bourbon with Rod Seling !
August 23rd, 2026 10:10
Lorenz said:
welcome to the twilight zone to share a good old bourbon with Rod Seling !
August 23rd, 2026 10:10
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