Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cracks of reality
Paul Bell said:
Feels like being in the care home with dementia, memories coming and going.
Though in saying that, I have been in places where I knew where I was going, and evereything was familar, but it was the first time I had been there.
Walking in someones footsteps.
August 23rd, 2026 05:29
Paul Bell said:
Feels like being in the care home with dementia, memories coming and going.
Though in saying that, I have been in places where I knew where I was going, and evereything was familar, but it was the first time I had been there.
Walking in someones footsteps.
August 23rd, 2026 05:29
Cracks of reality
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like a nightmare or dream. Very powerful images here. Certainly well constructed with the double rhyme. Makes me think
August 23rd, 2026 05:17
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like a nightmare or dream. Very powerful images here. Certainly well constructed with the double rhyme. Makes me think
August 23rd, 2026 05:17
Cracks of reality
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and thought-provoking poem.
August 23rd, 2026 04:50
soheil khodaparasti said:
A haunting and thought-provoking poem.
August 23rd, 2026 04:50
Cracks of reality
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, it speaks to me of alternative dimensions, much enjoyed
August 23rd, 2026 03:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, it speaks to me of alternative dimensions, much enjoyed
August 23rd, 2026 03:31
Cradled
Doggerel Dave said:
Guessing this is you, Soren - don\'t disappoint, please.
(Too well writ to be anywhere else...)
August 22nd, 2026 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Guessing this is you, Soren - don\'t disappoint, please.
(Too well writ to be anywhere else...)
August 22nd, 2026 18:31
Cradled
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP don\'t see these sights cos she\'s too busy being on TV, radio, in the papers, magazines, etc. lol. Well, she see enough sights of old trouts - she just looks in the mirror! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:51
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP don\'t see these sights cos she\'s too busy being on TV, radio, in the papers, magazines, etc. lol. Well, she see enough sights of old trouts - she just looks in the mirror! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:51
Cradled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful escape, Soren. The scenery, solitude, and passing hours create a place that feels both untamed and deeply protective...somewhere I could gladly remain. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful escape, Soren. The scenery, solitude, and passing hours create a place that feels both untamed and deeply protective...somewhere I could gladly remain. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Cradled
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I wouldn\'t mind being there my dear sorrenbarret I wouldn\'t mind being there at all. 🌹
August 22nd, 2026 08:13
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I wouldn\'t mind being there my dear sorrenbarret I wouldn\'t mind being there at all. 🌹
August 22nd, 2026 08:13
Cradled
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
Cradled
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
Unrepented
Poeticdiplo said:
A selfish dove fighting
When doves are symbols of peace
For justice that outta be free
But now is chained in a cage of greed
While the sounds of war steal
The river, the dam and ant!
A splendid and beautiful and sad reflection of our world. Thank you.
August 22nd, 2026 00:05
Poeticdiplo said:
A selfish dove fighting
When doves are symbols of peace
For justice that outta be free
But now is chained in a cage of greed
While the sounds of war steal
The river, the dam and ant!
A splendid and beautiful and sad reflection of our world. Thank you.
August 22nd, 2026 00:05
Quiet suffering
arqios said:
Blame is indeed the destructive force in community. We were always reminded that the accusing finger when pointed, leaves the other three pointing to self. And quiet suffering doesn\'t stay quiet forever!
August 21st, 2026 20:02
arqios said:
Blame is indeed the destructive force in community. We were always reminded that the accusing finger when pointed, leaves the other three pointing to self. And quiet suffering doesn\'t stay quiet forever!
August 21st, 2026 20:02
Quiet suffering
David Wakeling said:
Quite a description of nature at its worst here. Yet it ends.I always learn from your poems.Great work amigo.
August 21st, 2026 19:27
David Wakeling said:
Quite a description of nature at its worst here. Yet it ends.I always learn from your poems.Great work amigo.
August 21st, 2026 19:27
Quiet suffering
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of those fools in Parliament. Blaming each other for all our Ills.
And it\'s us: Joe Public picking up the pieces.
Good Write.
August 21st, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of those fools in Parliament. Blaming each other for all our Ills.
And it\'s us: Joe Public picking up the pieces.
Good Write.
August 21st, 2026 18:41
Quiet suffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Quiet suffering
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Quiet suffering
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
Quiet suffering
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Quiet suffering
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Quiet suffering
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
Quiet suffering
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
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