Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Black Widow
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I might swoon at the last line! heehee.
October 19th, 2026 08:16
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I might swoon at the last line! heehee.
October 19th, 2026 08:16
Black Widow
Friendship said:
Well done, you use the metaphor of the black widow spider—known for its lethal mating habits—to illustrate how some women may manipulate and dominate men in relationships, leading to their downfall.
October 19th, 2026 05:40
Friendship said:
Well done, you use the metaphor of the black widow spider—known for its lethal mating habits—to illustrate how some women may manipulate and dominate men in relationships, leading to their downfall.
October 19th, 2026 05:40
Black Widow
Paul Bell said:
It just shows you what guys do for sex.
In saying that, big Mary did the same.
Mind you, friends like that, who needs enemies.
October 19th, 2026 04:28
Paul Bell said:
It just shows you what guys do for sex.
In saying that, big Mary did the same.
Mind you, friends like that, who needs enemies.
October 19th, 2026 04:28
Black Widow
Lorenz said:
This amorous courtier is always that willing prey at the moment of fatal desire ...
October 19th, 2026 03:48
Lorenz said:
This amorous courtier is always that willing prey at the moment of fatal desire ...
October 19th, 2026 03:48
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the astronomy connection really spoke to me. We\'re looking at stars that might not even exist anymore, yet their light is still reaching us. Makes you wonder how much of our existence works the same way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the astronomy connection really spoke to me. We\'re looking at stars that might not even exist anymore, yet their light is still reaching us. Makes you wonder how much of our existence works the same way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:24
Missing pages
Joseph M Marion said:
I can sort of put this up against what\'s happening politically very well written
October 18th, 2026 18:42
Joseph M Marion said:
I can sort of put this up against what\'s happening politically very well written
October 18th, 2026 18:42
Time
Joseph M Marion said:
You are definitely the master of deception I love this
October 18th, 2026 18:39
Joseph M Marion said:
You are definitely the master of deception I love this
October 18th, 2026 18:39
Residue
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this this is very well written and very true very good
October 18th, 2026 18:37
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this this is very well written and very true very good
October 18th, 2026 18:37
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
Kevin Hulme said:
There will be a Star or Planet Light Years away, Where within our Own light reaching it : We are still young . Or just Born. And all our Lost Family still alive.
We at this Moment are a Subject for future Historians to Ponder over.
Good Write.
October 18th, 2026 18:12
Kevin Hulme said:
There will be a Star or Planet Light Years away, Where within our Own light reaching it : We are still young . Or just Born. And all our Lost Family still alive.
We at this Moment are a Subject for future Historians to Ponder over.
Good Write.
October 18th, 2026 18:12
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
Paul Bell said:
Well summed up.
We are all but memories.
In the past, and in the future past.
Bound to be some star with my name on it.
October 18th, 2026 13:22
Paul Bell said:
Well summed up.
We are all but memories.
In the past, and in the future past.
Bound to be some star with my name on it.
October 18th, 2026 13:22
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
orchidee said:
Good write SB. My thanks to you knows no bounds - suggesting something else I should give to KP, in the title of your poem. lol. Dunno why she complains. heehee.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB. My thanks to you knows no bounds - suggesting something else I should give to KP, in the title of your poem. lol. Dunno why she complains. heehee.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
arqios said:
Holding is almost always fleeting. For a while we’ve also hang up the flowers upside down to dry.
October 18th, 2026 06:35
arqios said:
Holding is almost always fleeting. For a while we’ve also hang up the flowers upside down to dry.
October 18th, 2026 06:35
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
How insignificant we are in the scale of things, a fav
October 18th, 2026 04:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
How insignificant we are in the scale of things, a fav
October 18th, 2026 04:20
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
Teddy.15 said:
A most beautiful prescription 🌹 💐
October 18th, 2026 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
A most beautiful prescription 🌹 💐
October 18th, 2026 04:13
Cheese
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for this Soren - one of a triad of staples on the proteinaceous side of my diet which include unadulterated crunchy peanut butter and yoghurt (plain.)
October 17th, 2026 19:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for this Soren - one of a triad of staples on the proteinaceous side of my diet which include unadulterated crunchy peanut butter and yoghurt (plain.)
October 17th, 2026 19:13
Cheese
Kevin Hulme said:
Not really keen on Cheese so erm ...
But John Cleese\'s Family name is Cheese. But his Father changed it , because it was embarrassing. Which has nothing to do with the Poem, So I\'ll just sign off.
A good Write though.
October 17th, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Not really keen on Cheese so erm ...
But John Cleese\'s Family name is Cheese. But his Father changed it , because it was embarrassing. Which has nothing to do with the Poem, So I\'ll just sign off.
A good Write though.
October 17th, 2026 18:52
Cheese
rrodriguez said:
And I was just about to get a piece of cheese from the fridge! Really! What a wonderfully imaginative and provocative piece! You take something as ordinary as cheese and transform it into an amusing exploration of its origins, textures, and peculiarities. Your creativity and playful use of language make this a delightfully unconventional read!
October 17th, 2026 18:00
rrodriguez said:
And I was just about to get a piece of cheese from the fridge! Really! What a wonderfully imaginative and provocative piece! You take something as ordinary as cheese and transform it into an amusing exploration of its origins, textures, and peculiarities. Your creativity and playful use of language make this a delightfully unconventional read!
October 17th, 2026 18:00
Cheese
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As a vegetarian, Soren, I’d appreciate you leaving a few foods I can eat without an existential crisis. LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As a vegetarian, Soren, I’d appreciate you leaving a few foods I can eat without an existential crisis. LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:30
Cheese
Lorenz said:
A quip by general de Gaulle .
\'\' How do you want to govern a country where there are 258 varieties of cheese ? \'\'
October 17th, 2026 10:32
Lorenz said:
A quip by general de Gaulle .
\'\' How do you want to govern a country where there are 258 varieties of cheese ? \'\'
October 17th, 2026 10:32
Cheese
orchidee said:
Our two cats like a little cheese at times! lol. Good write SB.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
orchidee said:
Our two cats like a little cheese at times! lol. Good write SB.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
Cheese
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A platter of dairy delights presented by our omnivore beasts of the field and a poet with a penchant for the stuff. Raised on cheese myself and still love it as I do this poem.
Bon appetite, my friend,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 10:02
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A platter of dairy delights presented by our omnivore beasts of the field and a poet with a penchant for the stuff. Raised on cheese myself and still love it as I do this poem.
Bon appetite, my friend,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 10:02
Cheese
Donteatmecows said:
very fun read about a food I think many enjoy, maybe one day I should work in a cheese factory, the mother\'s milk was a nice touch....but I promise im not like Homelander
October 17th, 2026 09:42
Donteatmecows said:
very fun read about a food I think many enjoy, maybe one day I should work in a cheese factory, the mother\'s milk was a nice touch....but I promise im not like Homelander
October 17th, 2026 09:42
Cheese
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 🤣 although I am a huge fan of cheese and here in Italy we have a devine choice including Pecorino, Gorgonzola and Mozzarella di bufala your poem has somewhat turned my stomache, I can see it smell it and a frown to finish. Great fun. 🧀
October 17th, 2026 09:17
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 🤣 although I am a huge fan of cheese and here in Italy we have a devine choice including Pecorino, Gorgonzola and Mozzarella di bufala your poem has somewhat turned my stomache, I can see it smell it and a frown to finish. Great fun. 🧀
October 17th, 2026 09:17
Residue
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A ruderal bloom of verse out of the ashes of life in another fine poem from your quill. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:52
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A ruderal bloom of verse out of the ashes of life in another fine poem from your quill. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:52
Cheese
Paul Bell said:
Life belongs to the strongest it seems.
I suppose some will say, God put the animals out there for us to eat.
He might have backtracked with experimenting on them though.
The chain of life as we see it.
October 17th, 2026 05:31
Paul Bell said:
Life belongs to the strongest it seems.
I suppose some will say, God put the animals out there for us to eat.
He might have backtracked with experimenting on them though.
The chain of life as we see it.
October 17th, 2026 05:31
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