Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Eden had no fences until man came
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I give KP maggoty apples. lol.
December 28th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I give KP maggoty apples. lol.
December 28th, 2025 03:24
Dark passion
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, just showing the fine line in life.
Andy
December 28th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, just showing the fine line in life.
Andy
December 28th, 2025 02:43
Dark passion
Thomas W Case said:
Dark, raw, and unflinching — this pulls you straight into the shadowed edges of experience. The imagery is haunting, yet strangely intimate. Powerful work.
December 27th, 2025 18:34
Thomas W Case said:
Dark, raw, and unflinching — this pulls you straight into the shadowed edges of experience. The imagery is haunting, yet strangely intimate. Powerful work.
December 27th, 2025 18:34
Dark passion
MendedFences27 said:
Making \"love\" to the \"dark shadow\" of \"Life\" \"each breath\" \"between being and death\". Such a dark concept, I wasn\'t sure if it was real. I question the choice but accept it as a way to continue existence. A dark presentation of a chosen existence filled with sexual innuendo and suspense. I loved the woven in rhymes. - Phil A.
December 27th, 2025 15:54
MendedFences27 said:
Making \"love\" to the \"dark shadow\" of \"Life\" \"each breath\" \"between being and death\". Such a dark concept, I wasn\'t sure if it was real. I question the choice but accept it as a way to continue existence. A dark presentation of a chosen existence filled with sexual innuendo and suspense. I loved the woven in rhymes. - Phil A.
December 27th, 2025 15:54
Cold truth
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
The most touching poem I’ve read this week. This is a masterpiece, skillfully and emotionally crafted. Sorrow and pain, joy and happiness, are not exclusive to human, but universal for all life. I\'m reminded of a fundamental scientific truth: the cell is the basic unit of life.
December 27th, 2025 12:50
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
The most touching poem I’ve read this week. This is a masterpiece, skillfully and emotionally crafted. Sorrow and pain, joy and happiness, are not exclusive to human, but universal for all life. I\'m reminded of a fundamental scientific truth: the cell is the basic unit of life.
December 27th, 2025 12:50
Dark passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fearless meditation on desire entangled with death. You refuse metaphor as a shield and let the imagery do its unsettling work. The result is visceral, uncomfortable, and honest in a way that lingers long after the last line. Strong, strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fearless meditation on desire entangled with death. You refuse metaphor as a shield and let the imagery do its unsettling work. The result is visceral, uncomfortable, and honest in a way that lingers long after the last line. Strong, strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:58
Dark passion
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahhh, so you\'ve spent a bit of time with KP? heehee. I won\'t be jealous - I can\'t get rid of her! lol.
December 27th, 2025 06:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahhh, so you\'ve spent a bit of time with KP? heehee. I won\'t be jealous - I can\'t get rid of her! lol.
December 27th, 2025 06:18
Dark passion
arqios said:
Life begins in a kind of brightness, but time inevitably scours that early clarity. All the while, the earth waits with its steady, unarguable finality. Set against that stillness, our existence becomes a brief flare that is intense, vivid, and astonishing precisely because it burns for so little time. In that contrast between our momentary blaze and the long quiet that follows, human experience finds its sharpness and its strange beauty.
December 27th, 2025 06:10
arqios said:
Life begins in a kind of brightness, but time inevitably scours that early clarity. All the while, the earth waits with its steady, unarguable finality. Set against that stillness, our existence becomes a brief flare that is intense, vivid, and astonishing precisely because it burns for so little time. In that contrast between our momentary blaze and the long quiet that follows, human experience finds its sharpness and its strange beauty.
December 27th, 2025 06:10
Dark passion
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully captures the profound dance between life and death, revealing a captivating bond with mortality that inspires and fascinates. It presents death as a mystical companion, highlighting a deep yet complex connection that sparks both wonder and reverence. This dynamic seems to orbit around the themes of love, passion, and the transience of life. The intriguing charm of the unknown and the inevitable destiny of mortality are woven together, portraying death not as something to be dreaded but as something to be welcomed and understood.
December 27th, 2025 05:47
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully captures the profound dance between life and death, revealing a captivating bond with mortality that inspires and fascinates. It presents death as a mystical companion, highlighting a deep yet complex connection that sparks both wonder and reverence. This dynamic seems to orbit around the themes of love, passion, and the transience of life. The intriguing charm of the unknown and the inevitable destiny of mortality are woven together, portraying death not as something to be dreaded but as something to be welcomed and understood.
December 27th, 2025 05:47
Dark passion
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a haunting embrace of mortality, where desire and decay become one. Your words dance on the knife\'s edge between ecstasy and oblivion. Profoundly dark and captivating.
December 27th, 2025 03:04
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a haunting embrace of mortality, where desire and decay become one. Your words dance on the knife\'s edge between ecstasy and oblivion. Profoundly dark and captivating.
December 27th, 2025 03:04
Nothing of nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may disappear but they will always be in our minds soren.
Andy
December 27th, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may disappear but they will always be in our minds soren.
Andy
December 27th, 2025 02:42
Nothing of nothing
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on how Moments are Lost and never retrieved. It makes you realise the Importance of Photograpy to capture those times.
December 26th, 2025 21:05
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on how Moments are Lost and never retrieved. It makes you realise the Importance of Photograpy to capture those times.
December 26th, 2025 21:05
Nothing of nothing
arqios said:
And again you’ve spoken my heart exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
December 26th, 2025 17:15
arqios said:
And again you’ve spoken my heart exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
December 26th, 2025 17:15
Nothing of nothing
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2025 16:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarrett. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2025 16:48
What schools don\'t teach
Allie561 said:
Wow, your poetry is always so insightful but I particularly enjoyed this one! Nice work as always!
December 26th, 2025 13:31
Allie561 said:
Wow, your poetry is always so insightful but I particularly enjoyed this one! Nice work as always!
December 26th, 2025 13:31
Nothing of nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a meditation on time, loss, and the fragility of record. You let smoke, ash, ink, and ice all speak the same quiet truth. Nothing announces itself, yet everything fades. Strong, thoughtful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a meditation on time, loss, and the fragility of record. You let smoke, ash, ink, and ice all speak the same quiet truth. Nothing announces itself, yet everything fades. Strong, thoughtful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Nothing of nothing
Friendship said:
This poem explores the ephemeral nature of memory, art, and existence. It reflects on how fleeting moments and thoughts can be easily forgotten or lost over time, ultimately becoming \"nothing\" as they drift away, much like smoke.
December 26th, 2025 07:30
Friendship said:
This poem explores the ephemeral nature of memory, art, and existence. It reflects on how fleeting moments and thoughts can be easily forgotten or lost over time, ultimately becoming \"nothing\" as they drift away, much like smoke.
December 26th, 2025 07:30
Nothing of nothing
cellinic said:
A very deep and imaginative reflection on one of the innermost perceived subjects, lovely)
December 26th, 2025 06:34
cellinic said:
A very deep and imaginative reflection on one of the innermost perceived subjects, lovely)
December 26th, 2025 06:34
Nothing of nothing
Katie B. said:
Lovely and so well written. Always a pleasure to read your work.
December 26th, 2025 03:48
Katie B. said:
Lovely and so well written. Always a pleasure to read your work.
December 26th, 2025 03:48
Nothing of nothing
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. I\'m still horrible, no good will to KP this season nor any season - ahh, an idea for Christmas present for her - nothing of nothing! heehee.
Dunno why she complained yesterday. I gave her something, I suppose - triple helping of sewage for Christmas dinner. This is too kind of me, yes?! lol.
December 26th, 2025 03:14
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. I\'m still horrible, no good will to KP this season nor any season - ahh, an idea for Christmas present for her - nothing of nothing! heehee.
Dunno why she complained yesterday. I gave her something, I suppose - triple helping of sewage for Christmas dinner. This is too kind of me, yes?! lol.
December 26th, 2025 03:14
What schools don\'t teach
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It may happen more in Church-related Schools - values of unselfishness, etc - though in some non-church schools too.
December 25th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It may happen more in Church-related Schools - values of unselfishness, etc - though in some non-church schools too.
December 25th, 2025 11:11
What schools don\'t teach
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully illuminates the significance of imparting timeless values like compassion, cooperation, and selflessness, far surpassing the fleeting allure of competition and materialism in education, thereby paving the way for a society that truly embodies empathy and justice. You eloquently advocate for a paradigm shift in our educational priorities, underscoring the vital importance of kindness, community, and wisdom in fostering a brighter future for generations to come.
December 25th, 2025 07:57
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully illuminates the significance of imparting timeless values like compassion, cooperation, and selflessness, far surpassing the fleeting allure of competition and materialism in education, thereby paving the way for a society that truly embodies empathy and justice. You eloquently advocate for a paradigm shift in our educational priorities, underscoring the vital importance of kindness, community, and wisdom in fostering a brighter future for generations to come.
December 25th, 2025 07:57
What schools don\'t teach
Katie B. said:
I totally agree with you and wish things were different. we need to raise human beings, compassionate and caring. Loved it!!! Impeccable as always.
December 25th, 2025 07:39
Katie B. said:
I totally agree with you and wish things were different. we need to raise human beings, compassionate and caring. Loved it!!! Impeccable as always.
December 25th, 2025 07:39
What schools don\'t teach
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, yes children could teach us a lot
December 25th, 2025 04:10
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