Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wandering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow calling the body back to its origin. You captured that mythic pull with real elegance. Beautiful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow calling the body back to its origin. You captured that mythic pull with real elegance. Beautiful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:08
Wandering
Paul Bell said:
Wonder how many have wandered the land, then ran back to mum.
Let me back in, mum, I don\'t like it out there.
Mind you, I wanted back in when I realised after the first day of primery school I had to go back the next day.
December 11th, 2025 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Wonder how many have wandered the land, then ran back to mum.
Let me back in, mum, I don\'t like it out there.
Mind you, I wanted back in when I realised after the first day of primery school I had to go back the next day.
December 11th, 2025 06:51
Wandering
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. You wandered lonely as a cloud there? lol.
December 11th, 2025 03:42
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. You wandered lonely as a cloud there? lol.
December 11th, 2025 03:42
Aisle twenty four
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun words soren, it may affect some people who suffer from hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia. LOL
Andy
December 11th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun words soren, it may affect some people who suffer from hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia. LOL
Andy
December 11th, 2025 02:21
Life\'s schooling
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
There is harmony in such a short write, I like it a lot. Nicely done SorenB.
December 10th, 2025 22:39
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
There is harmony in such a short write, I like it a lot. Nicely done SorenB.
December 10th, 2025 22:39
Aisle twenty four
NinjaGirl said:
What a fun write! At least you\'re brave enough to ask the clerk!
December 10th, 2025 21:14
NinjaGirl said:
What a fun write! At least you\'re brave enough to ask the clerk!
December 10th, 2025 21:14
Aisle twenty four
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. Very Funny. Great stuff.
December 10th, 2025 20:07
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. Very Funny. Great stuff.
December 10th, 2025 20:07
It\'s all smoke
E.J. Waling said:
Always loved a pipe back in the day. Nice write!
December 10th, 2025 19:33
E.J. Waling said:
Always loved a pipe back in the day. Nice write!
December 10th, 2025 19:33
Life\'s schooling
Kevin Hulme said:
And still learning all the time.
Fine Three lines.
December 10th, 2025 10:28
Kevin Hulme said:
And still learning all the time.
Fine Three lines.
December 10th, 2025 10:28
Aisle twenty four
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching, the clerk falling apart under all the whatchamacallits. It’s playful, quick, and perfectly delivered. Loved this one, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching, the clerk falling apart under all the whatchamacallits. It’s playful, quick, and perfectly delivered. Loved this one, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:45
Aisle twenty four
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that store laughing.
December 10th, 2025 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that store laughing.
December 10th, 2025 06:16
Aisle twenty four
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
Aisle twenty four
Katie B. said:
Loved it! Clever write. Thanks for sharing your talent!
December 10th, 2025 05:57
Katie B. said:
Loved it! Clever write. Thanks for sharing your talent!
December 10th, 2025 05:57
Aisle twenty four
Friendship said:
Well executed, this morning\'s challenge was somewhat perplexing, yet the display of humor was commendable.
The poem revolves around the humorous and frustrating experience of trying to find a specific item in a large store, underscoring the challenges of communication and the absurdity of language. The speaker\'s repeated attempts to describe an item using various colloquial terms highlight the confusion that can arise when people use different words for the same object. Your poem likely aims to highlight the humor in miscommunication and the quirks of language, as well as the relatable experience of navigating a large store and the frustrations that can arise from it.
December 10th, 2025 05:46
Friendship said:
Well executed, this morning\'s challenge was somewhat perplexing, yet the display of humor was commendable.
The poem revolves around the humorous and frustrating experience of trying to find a specific item in a large store, underscoring the challenges of communication and the absurdity of language. The speaker\'s repeated attempts to describe an item using various colloquial terms highlight the confusion that can arise when people use different words for the same object. Your poem likely aims to highlight the humor in miscommunication and the quirks of language, as well as the relatable experience of navigating a large store and the frustrations that can arise from it.
December 10th, 2025 05:46
Aisle twenty four
Paul Bell said:
Reminds of the days when you needed to buy condoms, but for some reason you left with soap, shampoo, chewing gum, everything apart from the coveted condoms. Still, I did smell nice.
December 10th, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Reminds of the days when you needed to buy condoms, but for some reason you left with soap, shampoo, chewing gum, everything apart from the coveted condoms. Still, I did smell nice.
December 10th, 2025 04:16
Life\'s schooling
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I\'m told) legislated the first in the world (I\'m told) ban on social media for children under the age of 16. The world (I\'m told) is watching and may, (I\'m told) follow suit. Fair warning? Hate to see you left high and dry without at least some form of contingency plan, Soren......
December 10th, 2025 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I\'m told) legislated the first in the world (I\'m told) ban on social media for children under the age of 16. The world (I\'m told) is watching and may, (I\'m told) follow suit. Fair warning? Hate to see you left high and dry without at least some form of contingency plan, Soren......
December 10th, 2025 01:10
Solo climbing
Durdica Porobija said:
In my opinion, the poem is allegorical and depicts the risky human journey towards meaning or a goal. Falling into an abyss can signify the loss of illusions or death itself. A sensitive, empathetic poem towards human destiny.
December 9th, 2025 14:46
Durdica Porobija said:
In my opinion, the poem is allegorical and depicts the risky human journey towards meaning or a goal. Falling into an abyss can signify the loss of illusions or death itself. A sensitive, empathetic poem towards human destiny.
December 9th, 2025 14:46
Life\'s schooling
Lorenz said:
\" cultivate your Kindergarten ! \'\' Says the master !
December 9th, 2025 12:37
Lorenz said:
\" cultivate your Kindergarten ! \'\' Says the master !
December 9th, 2025 12:37
Life\'s schooling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch! It\'s the like the one-liner of poems, but not cliché in the slightest! Brilliance! Oh...and congrats on graduating! 🤣 All jokes aside, this is absolutely a fave, dear Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch! It\'s the like the one-liner of poems, but not cliché in the slightest! Brilliance! Oh...and congrats on graduating! 🤣 All jokes aside, this is absolutely a fave, dear Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 10:28
Life\'s schooling
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Paul Bell said:
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
December 9th, 2025 10:18
Life\'s schooling
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Friendship said:
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
December 9th, 2025 07:09
Life\'s schooling
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Katie B. said:
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
December 9th, 2025 07:02
Life\'s schooling
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
arqios said:
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
December 9th, 2025 05:23
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