Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Enlightenment
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Enlightenment
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Enlightenment
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
Adrift
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Adrift
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Baby
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Adrift
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Adrift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Miricale
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
Adrift
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the personification of the plight of drift-wood as if we should show some sympathy.Very enjoyable read compadre
March 17th, 2026 07:08
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the personification of the plight of drift-wood as if we should show some sympathy.Very enjoyable read compadre
March 17th, 2026 07:08
Adrift
arqios said:
Truly felt, like driftwood at the mercy of the elements. Excellent metaphors🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2026 06:46
arqios said:
Truly felt, like driftwood at the mercy of the elements. Excellent metaphors🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2026 06:46
Delicious seeds
NafisaSB said:
The forbidden sweets are always more tempting and yet so corrosive; but yes dons memories are sweet indeed
Enjoyed the message
March 16th, 2026 23:45
NafisaSB said:
The forbidden sweets are always more tempting and yet so corrosive; but yes dons memories are sweet indeed
Enjoyed the message
March 16th, 2026 23:45
Vengeance
Teddy.15 said:
lol superb my dear sorrenbarret you paint such a wonderful and humorous picture 🌹
March 16th, 2026 15:04
Teddy.15 said:
lol superb my dear sorrenbarret you paint such a wonderful and humorous picture 🌹
March 16th, 2026 15:04
Vengeance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wickedly clever piece…part dark fairy tale, part revenge myth. The transformation of the lover into the biting fly is such a striking idea, and the image of him rising again from the flames keeps the whole story locked in that endless cycle of consequence. It’s grim, imaginative, and very much your style. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wickedly clever piece…part dark fairy tale, part revenge myth. The transformation of the lover into the biting fly is such a striking idea, and the image of him rising again from the flames keeps the whole story locked in that endless cycle of consequence. It’s grim, imaginative, and very much your style. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:45
Vengeance
Friendship said:
Your poem posed a notable challenge in its writing style. The themes of jealousy, revenge, and the cyclical nature of love and punishment are thoroughly explored in your work. You illustrate how jealousy can lead to destructive actions, resulting in an endless cycle of vengeance that ultimately harms both parties. On the other hand, the poem functions as a cautionary tale regarding the destructive nature of jealousy and the futility of revenge, emphasizing the emotional turmoil that can stem from betrayal. It prompts readers to contemplate the consequences of their actions and the cyclical nature of love and jealousy.
March 16th, 2026 06:31
Friendship said:
Your poem posed a notable challenge in its writing style. The themes of jealousy, revenge, and the cyclical nature of love and punishment are thoroughly explored in your work. You illustrate how jealousy can lead to destructive actions, resulting in an endless cycle of vengeance that ultimately harms both parties. On the other hand, the poem functions as a cautionary tale regarding the destructive nature of jealousy and the futility of revenge, emphasizing the emotional turmoil that can stem from betrayal. It prompts readers to contemplate the consequences of their actions and the cyclical nature of love and jealousy.
March 16th, 2026 06:31
A word not needed
Carmen Luca said:
The message I get from between the lines is: acceptance and perspective. You never stated it - such a great skill.
March 16th, 2026 05:55
Carmen Luca said:
The message I get from between the lines is: acceptance and perspective. You never stated it - such a great skill.
March 16th, 2026 05:55
Vengeance
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is very clever.It hits home with me because my marriage broke up and my X didn\'t get along with the boyfriend.A lot to think about in this master work.Certainly well constructed.Great work amigo
March 16th, 2026 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is very clever.It hits home with me because my marriage broke up and my X didn\'t get along with the boyfriend.A lot to think about in this master work.Certainly well constructed.Great work amigo
March 16th, 2026 05:19
Vengeance
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Sounds like KP buzzing around and annoying me daily. lol.
March 16th, 2026 03:16
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Sounds like KP buzzing around and annoying me daily. lol.
March 16th, 2026 03:16
Miricale
Goldfinch60 said:
Tress are magnificent soren and if they could talk they could tell such wonderful stories.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Tress are magnificent soren and if they could talk they could tell such wonderful stories.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:07
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