Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Heaven\'s rain
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love how small details become profound here; very meditative and reflective.
September 28th, 2025 12:10
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love how small details become profound here; very meditative and reflective.
September 28th, 2025 12:10
Gently
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Stunning writing — death is a sad part of life, dark
This piece is lyrical, and unforgettable. Beautifully written.
September 28th, 2025 12:00
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Stunning writing — death is a sad part of life, dark
This piece is lyrical, and unforgettable. Beautifully written.
September 28th, 2025 12:00
Nature
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautiful and powerful words, the imagery of nature and humanity here is striking.
September 28th, 2025 11:54
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautiful and powerful words, the imagery of nature and humanity here is striking.
September 28th, 2025 11:54
Nature
Keyara S Trotman said:
Soren lovely written out🥂💯
You’ve written as is “ A person coerced by their wild hunger and thirst
Cuts the grass hair nature owns, build their house of her bones
They drink from her veins, make omelets of her brains dispersed
Breaking their mother\'s skin so thin, then steal all that she owns”
Spectacular 👏🏻👌🏻 what I do get from this is the horrific or maybe so vampire type of vibe, whether you were going for such, that which I don’t know your preference.
Overall 🥂🥂🥂👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
September 28th, 2025 09:54
Keyara S Trotman said:
Soren lovely written out🥂💯
You’ve written as is “ A person coerced by their wild hunger and thirst
Cuts the grass hair nature owns, build their house of her bones
They drink from her veins, make omelets of her brains dispersed
Breaking their mother\'s skin so thin, then steal all that she owns”
Spectacular 👏🏻👌🏻 what I do get from this is the horrific or maybe so vampire type of vibe, whether you were going for such, that which I don’t know your preference.
Overall 🥂🥂🥂👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
September 28th, 2025 09:54
Nature
Paul Bell said:
Nature provides plenty, but man always wants more than plenty.
Natures garden it seems is an acre of land, but even that will get taken.
September 28th, 2025 08:47
Paul Bell said:
Nature provides plenty, but man always wants more than plenty.
Natures garden it seems is an acre of land, but even that will get taken.
September 28th, 2025 08:47
Gently
William Hromada said:
Oh so quiet it can slip in. Sometimes it just rips you apart. Beautiful put…..
September 28th, 2025 08:40
William Hromada said:
Oh so quiet it can slip in. Sometimes it just rips you apart. Beautiful put…..
September 28th, 2025 08:40
Nature
Salvia.S said:
This beautifully illustrates the struggle between nature\'s purity & human intrusion, with striking imagery & emotion.Very well written!!!
September 28th, 2025 05:14
Salvia.S said:
This beautifully illustrates the struggle between nature\'s purity & human intrusion, with striking imagery & emotion.Very well written!!!
September 28th, 2025 05:14
Gently
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, death cannot be avoided but it can come and be wonderful.
Andy
September 28th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, death cannot be avoided but it can come and be wonderful.
Andy
September 28th, 2025 01:08
Gently
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows, whispering lullabies, planting dreams in stone. You’ve written the paradox with such quiet power, Soren. Beautifully done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows, whispering lullabies, planting dreams in stone. You’ve written the paradox with such quiet power, Soren. Beautifully done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:53
Nuts
Paul Bell said:
Yes, who has the right to kill.
Is it a nation who decides, the soldier who does his duty.
Somewhere inbetween theres always a leader, usually old, and always deluded, but still mamages to mobilise thousands to their death.
September 27th, 2025 06:32
Paul Bell said:
Yes, who has the right to kill.
Is it a nation who decides, the soldier who does his duty.
Somewhere inbetween theres always a leader, usually old, and always deluded, but still mamages to mobilise thousands to their death.
September 27th, 2025 06:32
Gently
Michael Edwards said:
Now this has got to be one of the best I\'ve read in some time. I will print it out and keep it with my collection.
September 27th, 2025 04:37
Michael Edwards said:
Now this has got to be one of the best I\'ve read in some time. I will print it out and keep it with my collection.
September 27th, 2025 04:37
Nuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting in a late-night debate where the lines between sense and madness blur. You pull it off brilliantly, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting in a late-night debate where the lines between sense and madness blur. You pull it off brilliantly, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:05
Night images
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful words, Soren. You really paint the picture. Nicely done.
September 26th, 2025 04:25
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful words, Soren. You really paint the picture. Nicely done.
September 26th, 2025 04:25
Nuts
Lorenz said:
Who decides who will be good or evil ?
Neither god nor the devil...
September 26th, 2025 03:33
Lorenz said:
Who decides who will be good or evil ?
Neither god nor the devil...
September 26th, 2025 03:33
Night images
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren leading to a place of complete composure.
Andy
September 26th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren leading to a place of complete composure.
Andy
September 26th, 2025 01:26
Night images
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece floats between dream and shadow…the rainbow shards, the tunnels of the mind, time sifting into eternity. It’s haunting, layered, and beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2025 16:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece floats between dream and shadow…the rainbow shards, the tunnels of the mind, time sifting into eternity. It’s haunting, layered, and beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2025 16:25
Night images
Friendship said:
This poem explores the interplay between time, dreams, and perception. It delves into the experience of altered states of consciousness, where reality blurs into dreams, and the passage of time becomes fluid. The imagery evokes a sense of introspection and transformation, suggesting that the mind’s journey through darkness and dreams can reveal hidden truths.
September 25th, 2025 08:34
Friendship said:
This poem explores the interplay between time, dreams, and perception. It delves into the experience of altered states of consciousness, where reality blurs into dreams, and the passage of time becomes fluid. The imagery evokes a sense of introspection and transformation, suggesting that the mind’s journey through darkness and dreams can reveal hidden truths.
September 25th, 2025 08:34
Night images
arqios said:
Your poem feels like a meditation on the strange alchemy of night; how silence, memory, and dream reshape the mind into something both fragile and infinite.
September 25th, 2025 07:25
arqios said:
Your poem feels like a meditation on the strange alchemy of night; how silence, memory, and dream reshape the mind into something both fragile and infinite.
September 25th, 2025 07:25
Ghosts
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking piece with some great imagery. Nicely done.
September 25th, 2025 02:25
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking piece with some great imagery. Nicely done.
September 25th, 2025 02:25
Degrees
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow love this one.. beautifully written.
September 24th, 2025 17:21
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow love this one.. beautifully written.
September 24th, 2025 17:21
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