Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sonnett of an old man
whats write for me said:
Wow, that creates visceral visuals. Such strong prose.
February 14th, 2025 17:34
whats write for me said:
Wow, that creates visceral visuals. Such strong prose.
February 14th, 2025 17:34
All loss
David Wakeling said:
That\'s life it can be hard work being alone and getting old. Clever rhyming in the middle of the line.I think Sylvia Plath experimented with that style.Well done
February 14th, 2025 15:36
David Wakeling said:
That\'s life it can be hard work being alone and getting old. Clever rhyming in the middle of the line.I think Sylvia Plath experimented with that style.Well done
February 14th, 2025 15:36
Naive
whats write for me said:
Excellent verse, life is like a vapor, disappearing before our very eyes. The way it moves, mixing with the threads of other\'s lives.
February 14th, 2025 13:35
whats write for me said:
Excellent verse, life is like a vapor, disappearing before our very eyes. The way it moves, mixing with the threads of other\'s lives.
February 14th, 2025 13:35
All loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sadly, this is where I am this morning, this week, this month, this year. The past couple of years. Well done, Soren. For me, Valentine\'s Day is depressing at best, so this was the read I needed! 🌹👏🙏❤️
February 14th, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sadly, this is where I am this morning, this week, this month, this year. The past couple of years. Well done, Soren. For me, Valentine\'s Day is depressing at best, so this was the read I needed! 🌹👏🙏❤️
February 14th, 2025 09:55
Carpe diem without conscience
2781 said:
You paint my picture, but I finally found my conscience.
February 14th, 2025 06:07
2781 said:
You paint my picture, but I finally found my conscience.
February 14th, 2025 06:07
All loss
Poetic Licence said:
Hits all the nails on the head, for some this is a very painful and sad day, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
Hits all the nails on the head, for some this is a very painful and sad day, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 05:41
All loss
Neville said:
All loss and no gain, makes for one helluva lot of pain .. and likewise, Jack a dull, or very dead boy .. p.s. no Jacks were harmed during the typing .. and very impressive it was too sorenbarrett 😎👍
February 14th, 2025 04:37
Neville said:
All loss and no gain, makes for one helluva lot of pain .. and likewise, Jack a dull, or very dead boy .. p.s. no Jacks were harmed during the typing .. and very impressive it was too sorenbarrett 😎👍
February 14th, 2025 04:37
All loss
Teddy.15 said:
Well aren\'t you a bundle of joy this valentine\'s ? 🤣 My dear sorrenbarret I felt every last pain and solitude I love being alone but that\'s when i choose, so your poems hits hard that some don\'t have a choice for many reasons and helplessness and hopelessness I know very well. 🌹 Beautiful captured as always. 🌹
February 14th, 2025 04:35
Teddy.15 said:
Well aren\'t you a bundle of joy this valentine\'s ? 🤣 My dear sorrenbarret I felt every last pain and solitude I love being alone but that\'s when i choose, so your poems hits hard that some don\'t have a choice for many reasons and helplessness and hopelessness I know very well. 🌹 Beautiful captured as always. 🌹
February 14th, 2025 04:35
Bonsai
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
A Tree Still Remains Itself
Nice Reflective Rhythms
February 14th, 2025 04:34
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
A Tree Still Remains Itself
Nice Reflective Rhythms
February 14th, 2025 04:34
Naive
Goldfinch60 said:
Love and truth are still with me soren even at my age.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Love and truth are still with me soren even at my age.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:21
Naive
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Soren. A long term relationship is a serious challenge, isn\'t it? There is the idea of becoming a monk/nun in order to awaken. But then, in a relationship, there can be a priest and priestess working together.
February 13th, 2025 19:31
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Soren. A long term relationship is a serious challenge, isn\'t it? There is the idea of becoming a monk/nun in order to awaken. But then, in a relationship, there can be a priest and priestess working together.
February 13th, 2025 19:31
Naive
hzugman said:
Nice poem. And through it all we see what we expect to see and if we\'re really lucky what we see is what really is.
February 13th, 2025 10:42
hzugman said:
Nice poem. And through it all we see what we expect to see and if we\'re really lucky what we see is what really is.
February 13th, 2025 10:42
Naive
RSM0812 said:
I especially like \"a floating ash cloak\". Great read.
February 13th, 2025 09:25
RSM0812 said:
I especially like \"a floating ash cloak\". Great read.
February 13th, 2025 09:25
Naive
NinjaGirl said:
You really are the champion of imagery! This is amazing! And the vocabulary too, fantastic! Easy favorite, most beautifully written!
February 13th, 2025 09:20
NinjaGirl said:
You really are the champion of imagery! This is amazing! And the vocabulary too, fantastic! Easy favorite, most beautifully written!
February 13th, 2025 09:20
Naive
teardrop said:
Great concept and beautiful metaphors! Thank you for the read.
February 13th, 2025 08:46
teardrop said:
Great concept and beautiful metaphors! Thank you for the read.
February 13th, 2025 08:46
Naive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetic license is what is brilliant about poetry. Like changing truth, indeed. Employ away! 🤣 This poem speaks to the sort of disillusionment that comes with age and experience, revealing that youthful idyllic notions of love and truth are simplistic and that reality is more complex and semper mutans or ever-changing (Whenever I can use Latin 😜). This really hits home for me and, i would imagine, many of us who find ourselves middle-aged (or younger or older) and realizing that our youthful ideals didn\'t really turn out as expected. We were all young and naive once! So, this piece is brilliant and 💯 relatable! Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetic license is what is brilliant about poetry. Like changing truth, indeed. Employ away! 🤣 This poem speaks to the sort of disillusionment that comes with age and experience, revealing that youthful idyllic notions of love and truth are simplistic and that reality is more complex and semper mutans or ever-changing (Whenever I can use Latin 😜). This really hits home for me and, i would imagine, many of us who find ourselves middle-aged (or younger or older) and realizing that our youthful ideals didn\'t really turn out as expected. We were all young and naive once! So, this piece is brilliant and 💯 relatable! Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 08:08
Naive
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, Soren, your poem illuminates the transcendent power of love and truth, revealing that both are precious and subject to growth over time. It contemplates how our understanding of these concepts can evolve with wisdom and experience, and you seem to reflect on the transformative nature of love and truth.
February 13th, 2025 07:43
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, Soren, your poem illuminates the transcendent power of love and truth, revealing that both are precious and subject to growth over time. It contemplates how our understanding of these concepts can evolve with wisdom and experience, and you seem to reflect on the transformative nature of love and truth.
February 13th, 2025 07:43
Naive
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is masked by wearing a floating ash cloak, that is a wonderful line. When we are young we are Naive and inexperienced in the harsh reality`s of life, so it is easy to be deceived by what we want to believe, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is masked by wearing a floating ash cloak, that is a wonderful line. When we are young we are Naive and inexperienced in the harsh reality`s of life, so it is easy to be deceived by what we want to believe, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 06:13
Naive
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a match made in Disney land.This poem made me think
February 13th, 2025 05:08
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a match made in Disney land.This poem made me think
February 13th, 2025 05:08
Naive
arqios said:
Wow, from slipping to disappearing to dissipating to disguising… like a slippery slope.”Ghostly deceptions,” indeed 🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 03:39
arqios said:
Wow, from slipping to disappearing to dissipating to disguising… like a slippery slope.”Ghostly deceptions,” indeed 🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 03:39
Naive
orchidee said:
I gave KP an old coat covered in ash for her birthday! lol.
February 13th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
I gave KP an old coat covered in ash for her birthday! lol.
February 13th, 2025 03:20
Naive
Teddy.15 said:
I have been writing about my first love for most of 30 years, that young open blinded moment is a must and I would never ever take it back, it taught me more than most of what I now know about love, your title is perfect, I would say to these young go live your love. A beautiful honest portrait of what in fact is love. 🌹 Wonderful.
February 13th, 2025 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
I have been writing about my first love for most of 30 years, that young open blinded moment is a must and I would never ever take it back, it taught me more than most of what I now know about love, your title is perfect, I would say to these young go live your love. A beautiful honest portrait of what in fact is love. 🌹 Wonderful.
February 13th, 2025 03:17
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