Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Turn out the lights
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write carefully placing opposites together, highlighting many ways the world and us need to change, otherwise there will be only one answer to the question asked, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write carefully placing opposites together, highlighting many ways the world and us need to change, otherwise there will be only one answer to the question asked, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:27
Turn out the lights
David Wakeling said:
Wow creation or devastation? What a choice. This is a powerful poem that explores the many ways that the world should undergo change. Many strange opposites are placed together here. I enjoyed reading it. It made me think at every line. Well done compadre
July 4th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow creation or devastation? What a choice. This is a powerful poem that explores the many ways that the world should undergo change. Many strange opposites are placed together here. I enjoyed reading it. It made me think at every line. Well done compadre
July 4th, 2025 04:25
Slumbering light
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Slumbering light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Slumbering light
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
Slumbering light
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Slumbering light
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Slumbering light
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Slumbering light
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Slumbering light
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Slumbering light
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
I love roses
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
I love roses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
I love roses
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
I love roses
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
I love roses
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
I love roses
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
I love roses
Teddy.15 said:
With much more than one meaning here, as I am also a woman, I find this deeply profound there is something truly special about a rose and you have given it a pedestal 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 04:11
Teddy.15 said:
With much more than one meaning here, as I am also a woman, I find this deeply profound there is something truly special about a rose and you have given it a pedestal 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 04:11
I love roses
Caring dove said:
Really nice writing and with a nice flow to your words .. tho it’s sad when we see a flower not looking ‘ happy ‘ like they might do in summer or spring
July 2nd, 2025 03:30
Caring dove said:
Really nice writing and with a nice flow to your words .. tho it’s sad when we see a flower not looking ‘ happy ‘ like they might do in summer or spring
July 2nd, 2025 03:30
Little bird
Goldfinch60 said:
That feather is o important for the memory in life soren.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That feather is o important for the memory in life soren.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:42
Now
Funmiwrites said:
Indeed we became what we are, while searching for what we didn\'t have.
July 2nd, 2025 00:43
Funmiwrites said:
Indeed we became what we are, while searching for what we didn\'t have.
July 2nd, 2025 00:43
Little bird
David Wakeling said:
The one that got away. Still there isn\'t any bitterness here.Happy for the time had.A deep metaphor of a significant reklationship.Enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 19:24
David Wakeling said:
The one that got away. Still there isn\'t any bitterness here.Happy for the time had.A deep metaphor of a significant reklationship.Enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 19:24
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