Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Before we knew better
InTylerWeTrust said:
I love the line : \"Defeating dragons, they fly where no one dies.\"
It, to me, signifies strongly that state of nostalgia or memory that never dies. It\'s with us forever. Like captured in time, almost. I\'m not finding the right words to explain what I mean, sorry 😂
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing your talent with the world!
May 12th, 2025 03:47
InTylerWeTrust said:
I love the line : \"Defeating dragons, they fly where no one dies.\"
It, to me, signifies strongly that state of nostalgia or memory that never dies. It\'s with us forever. Like captured in time, almost. I\'m not finding the right words to explain what I mean, sorry 😂
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing your talent with the world!
May 12th, 2025 03:47
Weeds grow
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only plants in the wrong place soren.
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only plants in the wrong place soren.
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:23
Weeds grow
John Prophet said:
I’ve met some people like this.😉 Nice write ✍️
John
May 11th, 2025 21:27
John Prophet said:
I’ve met some people like this.😉 Nice write ✍️
John
May 11th, 2025 21:27
Before we knew better
Kiprotich Langat said:
Take me back to my childhood. This is a great piece.
May 11th, 2025 13:09
Kiprotich Langat said:
Take me back to my childhood. This is a great piece.
May 11th, 2025 13:09
Weeds grow
Teddy.15 said:
Wow overwhelming power, how sad that something so innocent could grow so ugly, a superb piece of poetry and metaphor. 🌹
May 11th, 2025 11:47
Teddy.15 said:
Wow overwhelming power, how sad that something so innocent could grow so ugly, a superb piece of poetry and metaphor. 🌹
May 11th, 2025 11:47
Weeds grow
MendedFences27 said:
SB, always the greatest threat to my gardening skills. I hate weeds. I pull them out and squirt in some weed killer, and they still come back with a friend.
May 11th, 2025 09:52
MendedFences27 said:
SB, always the greatest threat to my gardening skills. I hate weeds. I pull them out and squirt in some weed killer, and they still come back with a friend.
May 11th, 2025 09:52
Weeds grow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is both true literally and a brilliant metaphor for the mind. O, it really works well as a metaphor for a number of things. Brilliant. Instant fave. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is both true literally and a brilliant metaphor for the mind. O, it really works well as a metaphor for a number of things. Brilliant. Instant fave. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:42
Weeds grow
Tony Grannell said:
Many\'s the time down on my hands and knees pulling up these accursed plants - and they just kept sprouting to no end. Invaders, indeed. A keen gardener/poet wrote this one. Well cultivated, Soren.
Do take care now,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 07:22
Tony Grannell said:
Many\'s the time down on my hands and knees pulling up these accursed plants - and they just kept sprouting to no end. Invaders, indeed. A keen gardener/poet wrote this one. Well cultivated, Soren.
Do take care now,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 07:22
Weeds grow
MDStone said:
Made me think back on the tiring work of weeding my own gardens or beds. Yet for all the back breaking work, there is the produce, the bloom, the beauty. Unfortunately, one can only admire it for but a moment, then must be back to the work of tending it, lest it be overgrown. Thank You, Soren.
May 11th, 2025 07:05
MDStone said:
Made me think back on the tiring work of weeding my own gardens or beds. Yet for all the back breaking work, there is the produce, the bloom, the beauty. Unfortunately, one can only admire it for but a moment, then must be back to the work of tending it, lest it be overgrown. Thank You, Soren.
May 11th, 2025 07:05
Weeds grow
Friendship said:
The poem celebrates the resilience of love and relationships as they face the challenges of destructive forces. It employs the metaphor of a garden to represent the beauty and growth of love, while the weeds symbolize the obstacles that must be overcome to preserve its sanctity.
May 11th, 2025 06:51
Friendship said:
The poem celebrates the resilience of love and relationships as they face the challenges of destructive forces. It employs the metaphor of a garden to represent the beauty and growth of love, while the weeds symbolize the obstacles that must be overcome to preserve its sanctity.
May 11th, 2025 06:51
Weeds grow
Hollow Enigma said:
I like this alot because i felt the rythm change as the chaos insude. thanyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:57
Hollow Enigma said:
I like this alot because i felt the rythm change as the chaos insude. thanyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:57
Weeds grow
Salvia.S said:
This poem really shows the struggle of trying to keep a garden nice when weeds keep taking over. It makes you feel how hard it is to get rid of the weeds and keep caring for the garden. It’s a strong way to show persistence. Well written!!!
May 11th, 2025 05:37
Salvia.S said:
This poem really shows the struggle of trying to keep a garden nice when weeds keep taking over. It makes you feel how hard it is to get rid of the weeds and keep caring for the garden. It’s a strong way to show persistence. Well written!!!
May 11th, 2025 05:37
Weeds grow
David Wakeling said:
I read this as a metaphor for love and or war. Very deep and clever.Enjoyable
May 11th, 2025 03:56
David Wakeling said:
I read this as a metaphor for love and or war. Very deep and clever.Enjoyable
May 11th, 2025 03:56
Weeds grow
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write that applies to everything, why are the weeds in life more difficult to get rid of then the roses, enjoyed my Sunday read
May 11th, 2025 03:53
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write that applies to everything, why are the weeds in life more difficult to get rid of then the roses, enjoyed my Sunday read
May 11th, 2025 03:53
Weeds grow
arqios said:
There are all sorts of weeds in every type of garden, much like gremlins to machines and mechanical devices, not able to be totally rid off. 🙏🏻🕊
May 11th, 2025 03:33
arqios said:
There are all sorts of weeds in every type of garden, much like gremlins to machines and mechanical devices, not able to be totally rid off. 🙏🏻🕊
May 11th, 2025 03:33
Before we knew better
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that innocence stayed with us in all our lives soren.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that innocence stayed with us in all our lives soren.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:23
Before we knew better
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this. Brought me back to those innocent days and pondering exactly when they flew away with, instead of fighting, another dragon. Well done, my friend! From the heavens, Draco shines down. Well done. A fave. 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this. Brought me back to those innocent days and pondering exactly when they flew away with, instead of fighting, another dragon. Well done, my friend! From the heavens, Draco shines down. Well done. A fave. 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:27
Before we knew better
Salvia.S said:
What a beautiful and imaginative piece!!!! Well done!!
May 10th, 2025 11:19
Salvia.S said:
What a beautiful and imaginative piece!!!! Well done!!
May 10th, 2025 11:19
Before we knew better
YourUglyBoy said:
Innocence is the answer! Such a nice reflection on innocence and the power of it. We need to stop forgetting our childlike nature in the complexities of life.
May 10th, 2025 10:05
YourUglyBoy said:
Innocence is the answer! Such a nice reflection on innocence and the power of it. We need to stop forgetting our childlike nature in the complexities of life.
May 10th, 2025 10:05
Before we knew better
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, coming from your deep understanding of the mind I think this is wonderfully powerful, although we could argue this, I doubt any baby in a pram would smile at Trump, just to say LoL 🤣
May 10th, 2025 09:57
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, coming from your deep understanding of the mind I think this is wonderfully powerful, although we could argue this, I doubt any baby in a pram would smile at Trump, just to say LoL 🤣
May 10th, 2025 09:57
Before we knew better
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the timeless themes of innocence, imagination, and the transformative journey from childhood to adulthood. It beautifully captures the essence of dreaming, the unbridled joy of childhood experiences, and the poignant loss of innocence that accompanies growth. Your poem serves as a poignant reminder of the breathtaking beauty and magic of childhood, juxtaposed with the inevitable loss of innocence that comes with aging, inspiring us to cherish imagination and joy in our lives.For some reason, life seems so beautiful and effortless as a child, and it\'s amazing how that innocence can inspire us as adults to appreciate life\'s simple joys. I cherish the memories of my childhood.
May 10th, 2025 08:16
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the timeless themes of innocence, imagination, and the transformative journey from childhood to adulthood. It beautifully captures the essence of dreaming, the unbridled joy of childhood experiences, and the poignant loss of innocence that accompanies growth. Your poem serves as a poignant reminder of the breathtaking beauty and magic of childhood, juxtaposed with the inevitable loss of innocence that comes with aging, inspiring us to cherish imagination and joy in our lives.For some reason, life seems so beautiful and effortless as a child, and it\'s amazing how that innocence can inspire us as adults to appreciate life\'s simple joys. I cherish the memories of my childhood.
May 10th, 2025 08:16
Before we knew better
Tony Grannell said:
A truely delightful little verse, petite in its innocence, as if written by a child, so convincing its wholeheartedness. Just lovely.
All the best,
Tony.
May 10th, 2025 07:32
Tony Grannell said:
A truely delightful little verse, petite in its innocence, as if written by a child, so convincing its wholeheartedness. Just lovely.
All the best,
Tony.
May 10th, 2025 07:32
Before we knew better
John Prophet said:
Innocence lost… so true. Well said.
John
May 10th, 2025 06:15
John Prophet said:
Innocence lost… so true. Well said.
John
May 10th, 2025 06:15
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