Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wood table
Lorenz said:
That sounds like some good old sayings full of folk wisdom !
December 15th, 2025 09:43
Lorenz said:
That sounds like some good old sayings full of folk wisdom !
December 15th, 2025 09:43
Wood table
Friendship said:
The poem explores the transformation of trees from their natural state into man-made objects, highlighting the duality of nature’s beauty and the pain of its exploitation. It reflects on the lifecycle of trees, the consequences of human intervention, and the eventual decay that all living things must face.
December 15th, 2025 08:33
Friendship said:
The poem explores the transformation of trees from their natural state into man-made objects, highlighting the duality of nature’s beauty and the pain of its exploitation. It reflects on the lifecycle of trees, the consequences of human intervention, and the eventual decay that all living things must face.
December 15th, 2025 08:33
Wood table
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands as a meditation on what we take and what remains. The tree feels less like an object here and more like a life translated into use, memory, and erasure. There’s a quiet reckoning in that. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 15th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands as a meditation on what we take and what remains. The tree feels less like an object here and more like a life translated into use, memory, and erasure. There’s a quiet reckoning in that. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 15th, 2025 08:25
Wood table
Paul Bell said:
Nature sure looks after us, from feeding us, to shelter, even giving us the table to eat off.
But you\'re right, why would we destroy this gift. Stupid man.
December 15th, 2025 06:40
Paul Bell said:
Nature sure looks after us, from feeding us, to shelter, even giving us the table to eat off.
But you\'re right, why would we destroy this gift. Stupid man.
December 15th, 2025 06:40
Wood table
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. KP\'s got a wooden head - nothing in it! lol.
December 15th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. KP\'s got a wooden head - nothing in it! lol.
December 15th, 2025 03:24
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Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a \'Dystopian\' Novel waiting to be Wrote. Frightening!
December 14th, 2025 20:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a \'Dystopian\' Novel waiting to be Wrote. Frightening!
December 14th, 2025 20:03
Birds
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful I read this a few times dear sorrenbarret, powerful and very timely in your last words today. 🌹
December 14th, 2025 13:15
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful I read this a few times dear sorrenbarret, powerful and very timely in your last words today. 🌹
December 14th, 2025 13:15
Birds
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Some of us humans might be feather-brained! lol.
December 14th, 2025 11:14
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Some of us humans might be feather-brained! lol.
December 14th, 2025 11:14
Birds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a striking metaphor…the birds already inhabiting the sky we claim to seek, while we remain earthbound, harvesting and justifying. You let the image speak without preaching. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a striking metaphor…the birds already inhabiting the sky we claim to seek, while we remain earthbound, harvesting and justifying. You let the image speak without preaching. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:07
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, and so true
December 14th, 2025 08:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, and so true
December 14th, 2025 08:44
Birds
Friendship said:
Indeed, birds are remarkably intelligent and often underestimated creatures. I had the pleasure of owning an Amazon Yellow Nape parrot for nearly 40 years, until one day, a thief stole him from my yard while I was cleaning his 8\' cage in the house cage. My bird was exceptionally intelligent, capable of singing, requesting food, talking, and mimicking various sounds. To me, birds are the most loyal and faithful companions globally. I deeply miss my bird, Coco, whom I raised from birth and cared for by hand for the first three weeks of his life. He matured into a stunning bird. Unfortunately, I\'m accustomed to people taking things from me, and it pains me to have lost him. Someone came and stole him in his traveling cage.
December 14th, 2025 07:52
Friendship said:
Indeed, birds are remarkably intelligent and often underestimated creatures. I had the pleasure of owning an Amazon Yellow Nape parrot for nearly 40 years, until one day, a thief stole him from my yard while I was cleaning his 8\' cage in the house cage. My bird was exceptionally intelligent, capable of singing, requesting food, talking, and mimicking various sounds. To me, birds are the most loyal and faithful companions globally. I deeply miss my bird, Coco, whom I raised from birth and cared for by hand for the first three weeks of his life. He matured into a stunning bird. Unfortunately, I\'m accustomed to people taking things from me, and it pains me to have lost him. Someone came and stole him in his traveling cage.
December 14th, 2025 07:52
Birds
arqios said:
The demise of the dodo still shocks me! excellent read. 🙏🕊️🤩
December 14th, 2025 06:05
arqios said:
The demise of the dodo still shocks me! excellent read. 🙏🕊️🤩
December 14th, 2025 06:05
Birds
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem about birds written in such poetic and whimsical way!! Truly truly enjoyed it!!
December 14th, 2025 03:48
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem about birds written in such poetic and whimsical way!! Truly truly enjoyed it!!
December 14th, 2025 03:48
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Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, those in power who could do something about the problems just do not care.
Andy
December 14th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, those in power who could do something about the problems just do not care.
Andy
December 14th, 2025 02:21
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cellinic said:
Environmental, societal and other burning problems are touched upon and examined thoroughly in this piece of work. Emotionally and poetically it resembles rap genre, generally speaking - a thorough philosophic reflection on urgent subjects...
December 13th, 2025 21:02
cellinic said:
Environmental, societal and other burning problems are touched upon and examined thoroughly in this piece of work. Emotionally and poetically it resembles rap genre, generally speaking - a thorough philosophic reflection on urgent subjects...
December 13th, 2025 21:02
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Doggerel Dave said:
Well placed Soren: Metaphor free, coherent – I’ll give you a big✔️for that alone. Now I could enjoyably debate nearly every other line there, but will settle on one for now as the larger project is not really suited to the MPS format.
Hot topic – how often do you see orchi jump up and down like that? But let’s maintain a steady course. Eugenics was openly discussed by notable people and other worthies in the thirties, and the debate only ground to a halt with the event of Hitler and WW2. But to cut to the chase: Who would have the power, the authority and how would it work in practice when and how, given there are gene/cultural lines the world could well do without?
Up for a further chat on that or anything else you feel particularly pleased or satisfied with at a time and place of your choosing.
December 13th, 2025 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Well placed Soren: Metaphor free, coherent – I’ll give you a big✔️for that alone. Now I could enjoyably debate nearly every other line there, but will settle on one for now as the larger project is not really suited to the MPS format.
Hot topic – how often do you see orchi jump up and down like that? But let’s maintain a steady course. Eugenics was openly discussed by notable people and other worthies in the thirties, and the debate only ground to a halt with the event of Hitler and WW2. But to cut to the chase: Who would have the power, the authority and how would it work in practice when and how, given there are gene/cultural lines the world could well do without?
Up for a further chat on that or anything else you feel particularly pleased or satisfied with at a time and place of your choosing.
December 13th, 2025 20:28
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Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Tremendous.
December 13th, 2025 18:21
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Tremendous.
December 13th, 2025 18:21
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Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of tecno nor robots, I like the human touch 🤖 a great price of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2025 16:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of tecno nor robots, I like the human touch 🤖 a great price of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2025 16:16
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that turn where people become “only mouths to feed” really struck me…it shows how quickly human worth gets reduced when value is measured purely by productivity. Excellent job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that turn where people become “only mouths to feed” really struck me…it shows how quickly human worth gets reduced when value is measured purely by productivity. Excellent job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:56
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orchidee said:
A quiz now. Ooh! Fill in the blank - Since when was [name of a human being] intelligent?! lol.
December 13th, 2025 12:19
orchidee said:
A quiz now. Ooh! Fill in the blank - Since when was [name of a human being] intelligent?! lol.
December 13th, 2025 12:19
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orchidee said:
Don\'t worry! I read that human brains - well some of us(!) are vastly more intelligent than robots. Did I just grow one more brain cell, making 4 in total now? You too?! heehee.
December 13th, 2025 11:58
orchidee said:
Don\'t worry! I read that human brains - well some of us(!) are vastly more intelligent than robots. Did I just grow one more brain cell, making 4 in total now? You too?! heehee.
December 13th, 2025 11:58
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Lorenz said:
\'Brave new world that has such great intelligences in it !
December 13th, 2025 10:52
Lorenz said:
\'Brave new world that has such great intelligences in it !
December 13th, 2025 10:52
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Okay, Soren. I found your poem. On the money!
Now, how about if all this misery is feeding something else? Something that has no intention of \"dying\" anytime soon?
December 13th, 2025 07:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
Okay, Soren. I found your poem. On the money!
Now, how about if all this misery is feeding something else? Something that has no intention of \"dying\" anytime soon?
December 13th, 2025 07:09
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Friendship said:
This poem explores the distressing consequences of overpopulation and the potential repercussions of technological advancements, particularly artificial intelligence, which raises ethical concerns about human worth, the economy, and the societal future if jobs become redundant and resources are limited. The poet appears to tackle problems such as poverty, dependency, the role of technology, genetic superiority, and societal decline, envisioning a dire situation where the marginalized are considered disposable, resulting in a dystopian outlook of a future where only the \'best\' thrive.
December 13th, 2025 05:25
Friendship said:
This poem explores the distressing consequences of overpopulation and the potential repercussions of technological advancements, particularly artificial intelligence, which raises ethical concerns about human worth, the economy, and the societal future if jobs become redundant and resources are limited. The poet appears to tackle problems such as poverty, dependency, the role of technology, genetic superiority, and societal decline, envisioning a dire situation where the marginalized are considered disposable, resulting in a dystopian outlook of a future where only the \'best\' thrive.
December 13th, 2025 05:25
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Paul Bell said:
Suppose all the AI robots got together and realised humans were just useless beings.
How long before they just got rid of us. You see it with the drones in Ukraine, we\'re a step nearer to oblivion
December 13th, 2025 04:56
Paul Bell said:
Suppose all the AI robots got together and realised humans were just useless beings.
How long before they just got rid of us. You see it with the drones in Ukraine, we\'re a step nearer to oblivion
December 13th, 2025 04:56
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orchidee said:
Me again! I\'m reading a bit on the environment and nutrients in rivers, lakes, etc. It seems there can be too many nutrients in some waters, that works adversely to some species of flora and fauna - called eutrophy = \'Well-fed\'. Or eutrophication. That\'s all my 3 brain cells used up, saying that word!
December 13th, 2025 03:33
orchidee said:
Me again! I\'m reading a bit on the environment and nutrients in rivers, lakes, etc. It seems there can be too many nutrients in some waters, that works adversely to some species of flora and fauna - called eutrophy = \'Well-fed\'. Or eutrophication. That\'s all my 3 brain cells used up, saying that word!
December 13th, 2025 03:33
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s horrible eugenics, who wish for some of those things towards the end of the poem. They set themselves up as judges, or gods even (or even God maybe). saying, yes, let\'s dispose of the \'rubbish\', \'sub-standard\' humans. Even if they succeeded, they themselves would be left, and THEY might see themselves as the \'rubbish\'. Though they would be caught up in their hypocrisy and see themselves as the superior ones. Eugenics is evil, I say.
That\'s a lot of thinking, Fido says, and advises me to have a lay down and rest now. lol.
December 13th, 2025 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s horrible eugenics, who wish for some of those things towards the end of the poem. They set themselves up as judges, or gods even (or even God maybe). saying, yes, let\'s dispose of the \'rubbish\', \'sub-standard\' humans. Even if they succeeded, they themselves would be left, and THEY might see themselves as the \'rubbish\'. Though they would be caught up in their hypocrisy and see themselves as the superior ones. Eugenics is evil, I say.
That\'s a lot of thinking, Fido says, and advises me to have a lay down and rest now. lol.
December 13th, 2025 03:30
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