Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Cuts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
Spilt criticism
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
Vipassana said:
To piss on one\'s life freely opened in a journal, is flushing tears down the mouth of a dirty urinal
great I opine
March 19th, 2026 01:21
A word not needed
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
Vipassana said:
I wonder all the time about the things we give a negative meaning to, especially in the arts. Like rain in pop songs. pigs have gotten a bad rep, and on and on it goes.
March 19th, 2026 01:15
We come and go
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Vipassana said:
We are dust from a distant star
In a universe where there is no near or far
love that.
March 19th, 2026 01:11
Us
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Vipassana said:
I wrote a poem about the same subject--more or less. Mine is humorous but just as bleak, I think.
March 19th, 2026 01:03
Greatness
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Vipassana said:
Are human values all that count all others we can discount--there\'s the rub.
Nature will always be, a far greater force than humanity--until we destroy it.
All the best to you, sir.
March 19th, 2026 00:59
Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Enlightenment
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Enlightenment
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Enlightenment
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
Adrift
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Adrift
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
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