Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The Mark
Lorenz said:
This reminds me of certain delightful cursed poets of the 19th century !
December 12th, 2025 11:50
Lorenz said:
This reminds me of certain delightful cursed poets of the 19th century !
December 12th, 2025 11:50
The Mark
orchidee said:
KP\'s kennel is like that. I keep her in it, while Fido has a fur-lined kennel with carpet, and every luxury. lol.
December 12th, 2025 11:26
orchidee said:
KP\'s kennel is like that. I keep her in it, while Fido has a fur-lined kennel with carpet, and every luxury. lol.
December 12th, 2025 11:26
The Mark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp and unsettling…the careful probing, the hidden rot, the moment where fixing becomes unraveling. The ending drops like the roof itself. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 09:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp and unsettling…the careful probing, the hidden rot, the moment where fixing becomes unraveling. The ending drops like the roof itself. Powerful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 09:48
The Mark
Friendship said:
One of my favorites is well-written, illustrating the cycle of life and how we slowly decay.
Your poem \"The Mark\" revolves around decay, deterioration, and the consequences of neglect over time. It metaphorically explores how structural decay—represented by a rotting beam and a disintegrating wall—mirrors the inevitable decline of human constructs and perhaps even human life. The poet delves into physical decay, using the imagery of a house falling apart to evoke deeper themes of vulnerability, loss, and the fragility of existence.
December 12th, 2025 08:34
Friendship said:
One of my favorites is well-written, illustrating the cycle of life and how we slowly decay.
Your poem \"The Mark\" revolves around decay, deterioration, and the consequences of neglect over time. It metaphorically explores how structural decay—represented by a rotting beam and a disintegrating wall—mirrors the inevitable decline of human constructs and perhaps even human life. The poet delves into physical decay, using the imagery of a house falling apart to evoke deeper themes of vulnerability, loss, and the fragility of existence.
December 12th, 2025 08:34
The Mark
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there - squatting was never romantic or easy.
December 12th, 2025 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there - squatting was never romantic or easy.
December 12th, 2025 06:50
The Mark
PerditaRose said:
I generally don\'t try to interpret poems to others. But your representation of how the attempted renovation of an old house revealed its weaknesses and ultimately destroyed it really resonated with me. When we did some changes to our first home (built very early in the nineteen hundres) it revealed the metal lath under the plaster - \"A wall disrobed, naked and bare skeleton.\" We also encountered some surprises - \"corrupted column revealed\". I\'m a very literal person. So, I apologize, if I\'ve missed \"the mark.\" I know there must be more to your poem than that. Needless to say, I enjoyed your poem.
December 12th, 2025 04:22
PerditaRose said:
I generally don\'t try to interpret poems to others. But your representation of how the attempted renovation of an old house revealed its weaknesses and ultimately destroyed it really resonated with me. When we did some changes to our first home (built very early in the nineteen hundres) it revealed the metal lath under the plaster - \"A wall disrobed, naked and bare skeleton.\" We also encountered some surprises - \"corrupted column revealed\". I\'m a very literal person. So, I apologize, if I\'ve missed \"the mark.\" I know there must be more to your poem than that. Needless to say, I enjoyed your poem.
December 12th, 2025 04:22
The Mark
Teddy.15 said:
Oh dear, sounds like a very bad day at the dentist.. 🌹 fabulous imagery and emotion dearest sorrenbarret ouch 🌹
December 12th, 2025 03:50
Teddy.15 said:
Oh dear, sounds like a very bad day at the dentist.. 🌹 fabulous imagery and emotion dearest sorrenbarret ouch 🌹
December 12th, 2025 03:50
Wandering
Aman 12 said:
meditation on return.... is like waves dancing..filled with awe.
December 12th, 2025 02:36
Aman 12 said:
meditation on return.... is like waves dancing..filled with awe.
December 12th, 2025 02:36
Wandering
Goldfinch60 said:
We wander through life in so many ways soren, may they all end up in that wondrous place.
Andy
December 12th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We wander through life in so many ways soren, may they all end up in that wondrous place.
Andy
December 12th, 2025 02:26
Wandering
Kevin Hulme said:
I get that we would like to get back to Simpler days . Childhood maybe before things got \'Crazy\'. As always , Well Said.
December 11th, 2025 20:24
Kevin Hulme said:
I get that we would like to get back to Simpler days . Childhood maybe before things got \'Crazy\'. As always , Well Said.
December 11th, 2025 20:24
Wandering
Doggerel Dave said:
I confess to that almost mystical pull exerted over me when close by the ocean sometimes. Forceful.
December 11th, 2025 17:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I confess to that almost mystical pull exerted over me when close by the ocean sometimes. Forceful.
December 11th, 2025 17:09
Wandering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow calling the body back to its origin. You captured that mythic pull with real elegance. Beautiful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow calling the body back to its origin. You captured that mythic pull with real elegance. Beautiful work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:08
Wandering
Paul Bell said:
Wonder how many have wandered the land, then ran back to mum.
Let me back in, mum, I don\'t like it out there.
Mind you, I wanted back in when I realised after the first day of primery school I had to go back the next day.
December 11th, 2025 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Wonder how many have wandered the land, then ran back to mum.
Let me back in, mum, I don\'t like it out there.
Mind you, I wanted back in when I realised after the first day of primery school I had to go back the next day.
December 11th, 2025 06:51
Wandering
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. You wandered lonely as a cloud there? lol.
December 11th, 2025 03:42
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. You wandered lonely as a cloud there? lol.
December 11th, 2025 03:42
Aisle twenty four
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun words soren, it may affect some people who suffer from hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia. LOL
Andy
December 11th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun words soren, it may affect some people who suffer from hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia. LOL
Andy
December 11th, 2025 02:21
Life\'s schooling
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
There is harmony in such a short write, I like it a lot. Nicely done SorenB.
December 10th, 2025 22:39
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
There is harmony in such a short write, I like it a lot. Nicely done SorenB.
December 10th, 2025 22:39
Aisle twenty four
NinjaGirl said:
What a fun write! At least you\'re brave enough to ask the clerk!
December 10th, 2025 21:14
NinjaGirl said:
What a fun write! At least you\'re brave enough to ask the clerk!
December 10th, 2025 21:14
Aisle twenty four
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. Very Funny. Great stuff.
December 10th, 2025 20:07
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. Very Funny. Great stuff.
December 10th, 2025 20:07
It\'s all smoke
E.J. Waling said:
Always loved a pipe back in the day. Nice write!
December 10th, 2025 19:33
E.J. Waling said:
Always loved a pipe back in the day. Nice write!
December 10th, 2025 19:33
Life\'s schooling
Kevin Hulme said:
And still learning all the time.
Fine Three lines.
December 10th, 2025 10:28
Kevin Hulme said:
And still learning all the time.
Fine Three lines.
December 10th, 2025 10:28
Aisle twenty four
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching, the clerk falling apart under all the whatchamacallits. It’s playful, quick, and perfectly delivered. Loved this one, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching, the clerk falling apart under all the whatchamacallits. It’s playful, quick, and perfectly delivered. Loved this one, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:45
Aisle twenty four
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that store laughing.
December 10th, 2025 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that store laughing.
December 10th, 2025 06:16
Aisle twenty four
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
Teddy.15 said:
I do this on a daily basis lol 🤣 your language here is not only terrifically funny but brilliantly worded, loved this. 🌹
December 10th, 2025 06:12
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