Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ponderings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
Good taste
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
Ponderings
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Ponderings
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
Ponderings
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
Ponderings
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
Ponderings
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Blackness\' light
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Unknot the not
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Footprints on a beaten path
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
Blackness\' light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Blackness\' light
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
Blackness\' light
David Wakeling said:
i think this is a wonderful powerful poem.So well constructed and meaningful.Enjoyed reading. Enlightening (pun intended)
April 30th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
i think this is a wonderful powerful poem.So well constructed and meaningful.Enjoyed reading. Enlightening (pun intended)
April 30th, 2025 04:49
Footprints on a beaten path
Goldfinch60 said:
We all leave footprints from our lives soren.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
We all leave footprints from our lives soren.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:23
Footprints on a beaten path
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been reflecting on much lately. An excellent write, my friend, and all too true. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been reflecting on much lately. An excellent write, my friend, and all too true. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:01
Footprints on a beaten path
Thomas W Case said:
Well done, my friend. Excellent.
April 29th, 2025 11:02
Thomas W Case said:
Well done, my friend. Excellent.
April 29th, 2025 11:02
Footprints on a beaten path
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully reminds both poets and readers of the profound impact of poetry that extends far beyond immediate recognition, highlighting the significance of the emotional and intellectual connections that art so powerfully forges. It reflects on the inspiring idea that while individual poets may fade into obscurity, their work can continue to resonate in ways that are often unrecognized, leaving a lasting legacy. The entire poem functions as a metaphor for the poet\'s role as a tool and the enduring legacy of their work.
April 29th, 2025 10:11
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully reminds both poets and readers of the profound impact of poetry that extends far beyond immediate recognition, highlighting the significance of the emotional and intellectual connections that art so powerfully forges. It reflects on the inspiring idea that while individual poets may fade into obscurity, their work can continue to resonate in ways that are often unrecognized, leaving a lasting legacy. The entire poem functions as a metaphor for the poet\'s role as a tool and the enduring legacy of their work.
April 29th, 2025 10:11
Footprints on a beaten path
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I shall feed KP embers and fag-ash! lol.
April 29th, 2025 08:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I shall feed KP embers and fag-ash! lol.
April 29th, 2025 08:36
Footprints on a beaten path
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How very true this is. A beautiful piece my friend
April 29th, 2025 07:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How very true this is. A beautiful piece my friend
April 29th, 2025 07:14
Footprints on a beaten path
Lorenz said:
Our words are messages engraved on the wall of time
destined to become questioning for a next future.
April 29th, 2025 05:21
Lorenz said:
Our words are messages engraved on the wall of time
destined to become questioning for a next future.
April 29th, 2025 05:21
Footprints on a beaten path
David Wakeling said:
A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and past poets.Enjoyable
April 29th, 2025 05:17
David Wakeling said:
A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and past poets.Enjoyable
April 29th, 2025 05:17
Footprints on a beaten path
Salvia.S said:
Your poem shows how poets may be forgotten, but their words can still touch people in the future, even if no one remembers where they came from. Very well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 05:16
Salvia.S said:
Your poem shows how poets may be forgotten, but their words can still touch people in the future, even if no one remembers where they came from. Very well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 05:16
Unknot the not
Victor Bolshov said:
Nicely said! Somehow it brought this line from Nietsche: \"You great star! What would your happiness be, had you not those for whom you shine?\"
April 29th, 2025 04:31
Victor Bolshov said:
Nicely said! Somehow it brought this line from Nietsche: \"You great star! What would your happiness be, had you not those for whom you shine?\"
April 29th, 2025 04:31
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