Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Why?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
Why?
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren. Different cultures have such differing ways.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren. Different cultures have such differing ways.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:12
Styles
David Hopkins said:
Such perfect simplicity!
This is so far one of my favorites…
September 6th, 2025 14:45
David Hopkins said:
Such perfect simplicity!
This is so far one of my favorites…
September 6th, 2025 14:45
Why?
orchidee said:
Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he replied \'Why?\' to everything, question or not. lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:39
orchidee said:
Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he replied \'Why?\' to everything, question or not. lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:39
Why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul, eyes, and words together as our most revealing touch really struck me. Strong piece, my friend. And a great question to title it. Why? Indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2025 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul, eyes, and words together as our most revealing touch really struck me. Strong piece, my friend. And a great question to title it. Why? Indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2025 10:14
Why?
Friendship said:
Well written, the eyes are the reflections of our inner selves that we carry with us.
The \"soul undressed in our eyes\" serves as a metaphor for emotional transparency and honesty in a relationship. To me, this poem captures the essence of love as a complex interplay of vulnerability and connection, using evocative language and a fluid structure that enhances its emotional depth.
September 6th, 2025 07:58
Friendship said:
Well written, the eyes are the reflections of our inner selves that we carry with us.
The \"soul undressed in our eyes\" serves as a metaphor for emotional transparency and honesty in a relationship. To me, this poem captures the essence of love as a complex interplay of vulnerability and connection, using evocative language and a fluid structure that enhances its emotional depth.
September 6th, 2025 07:58
Why?
Teddy.15 said:
Yes we are not born into any type culture by choice, and those women who have no say in the beauty of their beings or any say in education truly is a poor point of any culture in my humble opinion. A great theme sad for those who are imprisoned by their own culture which they cannot escape nor embrace. Kudos. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 07:32
Teddy.15 said:
Yes we are not born into any type culture by choice, and those women who have no say in the beauty of their beings or any say in education truly is a poor point of any culture in my humble opinion. A great theme sad for those who are imprisoned by their own culture which they cannot escape nor embrace. Kudos. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 07:32
Why?
arqios said:
We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and tolerated while shock effect is somewhat of a weapon and a comeback.
September 6th, 2025 06:10
arqios said:
We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and tolerated while shock effect is somewhat of a weapon and a comeback.
September 6th, 2025 06:10
Why?
Keyara S Trotman said:
“Our souls undressed in our eyes” this a beautiful line here. Gives volume. I love that there some depth to this 👌🏻 “fluid exchange” this sounds quite interesting. When you say “fluid exchange”, raw very raw overall this poem is intimate, If that is what’s supposed to be given here! Lovelyyy 👏🏻
September 6th, 2025 04:33
Keyara S Trotman said:
“Our souls undressed in our eyes” this a beautiful line here. Gives volume. I love that there some depth to this 👌🏻 “fluid exchange” this sounds quite interesting. When you say “fluid exchange”, raw very raw overall this poem is intimate, If that is what’s supposed to be given here! Lovelyyy 👏🏻
September 6th, 2025 04:33
Fear myths of the unknown
gray0328 said:
This hit home Soren thank you for sharing
September 6th, 2025 03:57
gray0328 said:
This hit home Soren thank you for sharing
September 6th, 2025 03:57
Styles
NinjaGirl said:
\"Beauty goes naked\" I was NOT expecting that! I\'d say I\'m comfort according to your poem! Good work as always!
September 5th, 2025 14:21
NinjaGirl said:
\"Beauty goes naked\" I was NOT expecting that! I\'d say I\'m comfort according to your poem! Good work as always!
September 5th, 2025 14:21
Styles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then strips it back...comfort worn in, deceit dressed up, arrogance trying too hard, and beauty just showing up plain...no need for clothing or hiding away. Simple, clear, and sharp. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then strips it back...comfort worn in, deceit dressed up, arrogance trying too hard, and beauty just showing up plain...no need for clothing or hiding away. Simple, clear, and sharp. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:52
Styles
Friendship said:
Well-written, but the only thing is you painted an image that I cannot get out of my head of a naked poet, a little bit disturbing, as the first image in my head for the morning, but well said. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of authenticity versus superficiality. It suggests that true comfort and identity are often found in simplicity, while societal constructs like deceit, arrogance, and beauty are frequently adorned with artificial embellishments.
September 5th, 2025 09:01
Friendship said:
Well-written, but the only thing is you painted an image that I cannot get out of my head of a naked poet, a little bit disturbing, as the first image in my head for the morning, but well said. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of authenticity versus superficiality. It suggests that true comfort and identity are often found in simplicity, while societal constructs like deceit, arrogance, and beauty are frequently adorned with artificial embellishments.
September 5th, 2025 09:01
Avocado
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This is beautifully written. Avocados are delicious.
September 5th, 2025 08:37
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This is beautifully written. Avocados are delicious.
September 5th, 2025 08:37
Styles
orchidee said:
I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed such a state. It put me off me dinner for a month. Well, put me off fish anyway, as she\'s an old trout. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:47
orchidee said:
I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed such a state. It put me off me dinner for a month. Well, put me off fish anyway, as she\'s an old trout. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:47
Styles
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this as a woman I feel the last line so much. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 5th, 2025 06:05
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this as a woman I feel the last line so much. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 5th, 2025 06:05
Fear myths of the unknown
NafisaSB said:
may be a safe bet, but it would be great to have the strength to fly free - it would open up a beautiful world full of lovely surprises...
September 5th, 2025 01:20
NafisaSB said:
may be a safe bet, but it would be great to have the strength to fly free - it would open up a beautiful world full of lovely surprises...
September 5th, 2025 01:20
Fear myths of the unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren with so much truth in them.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren with so much truth in them.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:03
Fear myths of the unknown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still cling to…brutal, unflinching truth. That image of dogs still loving those that beat them really hit hard. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still cling to…brutal, unflinching truth. That image of dogs still loving those that beat them really hit hard. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:06
Fear myths of the unknown
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love it.
September 4th, 2025 14:34
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love it.
September 4th, 2025 14:34
Fear myths of the unknown
Keeter C said:
Deep. A statement on socialism or communism? Or a statement on those who would give up freedoms for security? Nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:44
Keeter C said:
Deep. A statement on socialism or communism? Or a statement on those who would give up freedoms for security? Nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:44
Fear myths of the unknown
NinjaGirl said:
We crave safety so much that we don\'t realize what we\'re sacrificing to get it. The price of a government for sure. Well done, and an easy favorite!
September 4th, 2025 11:08
NinjaGirl said:
We crave safety so much that we don\'t realize what we\'re sacrificing to get it. The price of a government for sure. Well done, and an easy favorite!
September 4th, 2025 11:08
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