Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
How soon we forget
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my friend. I so get this and relate to in so many ways. This is that type of poem that enters the soul and speaks to the person where they are. Wonderful job on this! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my friend. I so get this and relate to in so many ways. This is that type of poem that enters the soul and speaks to the person where they are. Wonderful job on this! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 09:39
How soon we forget
Accidental Poet said:
With every season comes new ways to appreciate life. There\'s something for everyone. 😉👍
April 8th, 2025 09:03
Accidental Poet said:
With every season comes new ways to appreciate life. There\'s something for everyone. 😉👍
April 8th, 2025 09:03
How soon we forget
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
For me this seemed a multi layered poem where there is more than what meets the eyes. It seemed an unfolding of a period perhaps a day though at the same time it could be a week month or season. As each cycle opens it ends only into new beginnings.Each grain of sand in the hourglass is renewed again. I enjoyed the read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 08:58
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
For me this seemed a multi layered poem where there is more than what meets the eyes. It seemed an unfolding of a period perhaps a day though at the same time it could be a week month or season. As each cycle opens it ends only into new beginnings.Each grain of sand in the hourglass is renewed again. I enjoyed the read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 08:58
You will argue
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of the momentum of change and transformation. Something starts small, like someone coughing in a crowd. Then it turns into a brawl. You are an amazing writer.
April 8th, 2025 06:50
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of the momentum of change and transformation. Something starts small, like someone coughing in a crowd. Then it turns into a brawl. You are an amazing writer.
April 8th, 2025 06:50
How soon we forget
Poetic Licence said:
Each season has different memories and meanings to different people, a change in seasons can also see a change in some people, as I always feel emotions and feeling better are linked to seasons of nature, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Each season has different memories and meanings to different people, a change in seasons can also see a change in some people, as I always feel emotions and feeling better are linked to seasons of nature, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:59
How soon we forget
MDStone said:
Soren,
How soon we forget, indeed. Always thinking that another season is better than the one we are in now. Forgetting the hardships of that season at the altar of the season we face now. Failing to see the good days of this season for the clouded memories of “the good old days.” It’s time to stop the madness and enjoy the moments of right here and right now. Thanks for stirring my heart and thought towards the present.
April 8th, 2025 05:30
MDStone said:
Soren,
How soon we forget, indeed. Always thinking that another season is better than the one we are in now. Forgetting the hardships of that season at the altar of the season we face now. Failing to see the good days of this season for the clouded memories of “the good old days.” It’s time to stop the madness and enjoy the moments of right here and right now. Thanks for stirring my heart and thought towards the present.
April 8th, 2025 05:30
How soon we forget
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of human memory and emotion, emphasizing how seasonal experiences shape our perceptions and feelings. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences with the seasons and the memories they evoke.
Overall, your poem seems to capture the interplay between warmth and cold, both physically and emotionally, inviting contemplation on how these elements shape our lives and memories
April 8th, 2025 03:51
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of human memory and emotion, emphasizing how seasonal experiences shape our perceptions and feelings. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences with the seasons and the memories they evoke.
Overall, your poem seems to capture the interplay between warmth and cold, both physically and emotionally, inviting contemplation on how these elements shape our lives and memories
April 8th, 2025 03:51
How soon we forget
arqios said:
Now that is where the circuits jumble and fry, only to return to that state once the overpowering present stimuli leaves 🕊️🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
Now that is where the circuits jumble and fry, only to return to that state once the overpowering present stimuli leaves 🕊️🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 03:49
How soon we forget
Demar Desu said:
Ah you too find yourself writing poems early in the morning late into the night
April 8th, 2025 03:21
Demar Desu said:
Ah you too find yourself writing poems early in the morning late into the night
April 8th, 2025 03:21
You will argue
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned soren. It\'s a fine line between positive and negative. But in choosing, will define who you are. 😉👍
April 7th, 2025 11:00
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned soren. It\'s a fine line between positive and negative. But in choosing, will define who you are. 😉👍
April 7th, 2025 11:00
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
DEBIH MARTIN said:
make your world, feel your mind with your space, feel it with truth and love and love what is real and never fades
April 7th, 2025 10:54
DEBIH MARTIN said:
make your world, feel your mind with your space, feel it with truth and love and love what is real and never fades
April 7th, 2025 10:54
You will argue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In a world that keeps insisting on the supposed reality of \"black and white\" in just about every facet, including morals, politics, race, religion, etc., it is hard to see any of that through the ashen misty gray that surrounds us 24/7, 365. Well done. An instant fave!
April 7th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In a world that keeps insisting on the supposed reality of \"black and white\" in just about every facet, including morals, politics, race, religion, etc., it is hard to see any of that through the ashen misty gray that surrounds us 24/7, 365. Well done. An instant fave!
April 7th, 2025 09:23
You will argue
Demar Desu said:
Good poem… I like to think there’s a breathe and then there’s no breathe… there’s times we choose to breathe and there’s times we are on auto pilot… I choose to love all the time until it’s auto pilot
April 7th, 2025 07:00
Demar Desu said:
Good poem… I like to think there’s a breathe and then there’s no breathe… there’s times we choose to breathe and there’s times we are on auto pilot… I choose to love all the time until it’s auto pilot
April 7th, 2025 07:00
You will argue
Friendship said:
The poem delves into philosophical inquiries about truth, morality, and human behavior, using contrasting concepts to highlight the complexity and fluidity of these themes. It explores the ambiguity of truth and morality, suggesting that perceptions are subjective and that dichotomies such as right/wrong, love/hate, and existence/nothingness are not as clear-cut as they appear. The poet raises questions about the nature of human experience and the transformations that shape our understanding of reality.
April 7th, 2025 06:01
Friendship said:
The poem delves into philosophical inquiries about truth, morality, and human behavior, using contrasting concepts to highlight the complexity and fluidity of these themes. It explores the ambiguity of truth and morality, suggesting that perceptions are subjective and that dichotomies such as right/wrong, love/hate, and existence/nothingness are not as clear-cut as they appear. The poet raises questions about the nature of human experience and the transformations that shape our understanding of reality.
April 7th, 2025 06:01
You will argue
Teddy.15 said:
All us living humans have our own truth and our own thoughts, we don\'t always have to agree, I find this most definitely thought provoking, my right can also be your wrong. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 04:25
Teddy.15 said:
All us living humans have our own truth and our own thoughts, we don\'t always have to agree, I find this most definitely thought provoking, my right can also be your wrong. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 04:25
You will argue
Poetic Licence said:
That reads like going for an interview and being asked a load of questions that none of them you can answer, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
That reads like going for an interview and being asked a load of questions that none of them you can answer, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 04:16
You will argue
arqios said:
Unless we learn to move and navigate the grey, there really isn’t any black or white 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:46
arqios said:
Unless we learn to move and navigate the grey, there really isn’t any black or white 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:46
Unknot the not
Goldfinch60 said:
All things that we wish to do in our lives soren, and many that I have already achieved.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
All things that we wish to do in our lives soren, and many that I have already achieved.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:21
Unknot the not
RSM0812 said:
How do you come up with stuff like that? Lol I think this was really well done.
April 6th, 2025 13:10
RSM0812 said:
How do you come up with stuff like that? Lol I think this was really well done.
April 6th, 2025 13:10
Unknot the not
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Now I\'m busy not smelling flowers, not holding a child, etc, etc. In which case - busy doing nothing! lol.
April 6th, 2025 10:49
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Now I\'m busy not smelling flowers, not holding a child, etc, etc. In which case - busy doing nothing! lol.
April 6th, 2025 10:49
Unknot the not
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned soren. For it is what we do and don\'t do in life that can be our biggest mistakes and regrets. 🤔
April 6th, 2025 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned soren. For it is what we do and don\'t do in life that can be our biggest mistakes and regrets. 🤔
April 6th, 2025 08:39
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