Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Pests
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
Car of rust
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Tree and the lily
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
Innocence
Vipassana said:
lovely. disillusion as one ages is indeed - The charm of magic taken from one\'s eyes, now seen as nothing but a hoodwinker\'s lies.
February 16th, 2026 20:58
Vipassana said:
lovely. disillusion as one ages is indeed - The charm of magic taken from one\'s eyes, now seen as nothing but a hoodwinker\'s lies.
February 16th, 2026 20:58
Black spot
Kevin Hulme said:
Anything that kills a Rose is a scurge. Well Said.
February 16th, 2026 20:53
Kevin Hulme said:
Anything that kills a Rose is a scurge. Well Said.
February 16th, 2026 20:53
Gratitude
Vipassana said:
really nicely rendered---all the ambiguity and irony and sadness of fear and conditioning (A freed canary returns to its cage). and I like the way it moves relentlessly forward. well done, sir.
February 16th, 2026 20:50
Vipassana said:
really nicely rendered---all the ambiguity and irony and sadness of fear and conditioning (A freed canary returns to its cage). and I like the way it moves relentlessly forward. well done, sir.
February 16th, 2026 20:50
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Vipassana said:
really nice!
all and nothing is real---indeed.
February 16th, 2026 20:38
Vipassana said:
really nice!
all and nothing is real---indeed.
February 16th, 2026 20:38
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Allie561 said:
A wonderful write Soren. The metaphors and imagery in this poem are very strong, I can imagine what it would feel like to be one.
February 16th, 2026 13:48
Allie561 said:
A wonderful write Soren. The metaphors and imagery in this poem are very strong, I can imagine what it would feel like to be one.
February 16th, 2026 13:48
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you wonder, with human beings, we don\'t really belong here, yet we come and go, so it is quite possible we don\'t go far.
Returning to a hot country when I come back.
February 16th, 2026 09:31
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you wonder, with human beings, we don\'t really belong here, yet we come and go, so it is quite possible we don\'t go far.
Returning to a hot country when I come back.
February 16th, 2026 09:31
Car of rust
Jeremy Leach said:
Love it and the imagery is clear in my mind. And the feeling. Very well put together and written.
February 16th, 2026 08:54
Jeremy Leach said:
Love it and the imagery is clear in my mind. And the feeling. Very well put together and written.
February 16th, 2026 08:54
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Jeremy Leach said:
Very thoughtfully put and plays with deep mysteries that resonate with me. Well written too and it\'s refreshingly different.
February 16th, 2026 08:49
Jeremy Leach said:
Very thoughtfully put and plays with deep mysteries that resonate with me. Well written too and it\'s refreshingly different.
February 16th, 2026 08:49
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Demar Desu said:
You are well educated and it shows in your writings; great job
February 16th, 2026 08:45
Demar Desu said:
You are well educated and it shows in your writings; great job
February 16th, 2026 08:45
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
arqios said:
From Einstein to Planck; excellent, Soren🕊️🙏🏻
February 16th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
From Einstein to Planck; excellent, Soren🕊️🙏🏻
February 16th, 2026 06:52
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Lorenz said:
Trenscendental inspiration !
February 16th, 2026 06:28
Lorenz said:
Trenscendental inspiration !
February 16th, 2026 06:28
What we hold inside
David Wakeling said:
This is a clever metaphor. Most metaphors drown the meaning but this enhances the meaning.The idea of human relationships being like the honey bee is great. I found this to be thoughtful and deeply meant.
February 16th, 2026 05:16
David Wakeling said:
This is a clever metaphor. Most metaphors drown the meaning but this enhances the meaning.The idea of human relationships being like the honey bee is great. I found this to be thoughtful and deeply meant.
February 16th, 2026 05:16
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully written, especially the imagery, where being, light, and time all dissolve together.
February 16th, 2026 04:04
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully written, especially the imagery, where being, light, and time all dissolve together.
February 16th, 2026 04:04
Gratitude
Aman 12 said:
fear overrides gratitude, instinct overrides reason.Bite of freedom is what everyone wants.
February 16th, 2026 02:58
Aman 12 said:
fear overrides gratitude, instinct overrides reason.Bite of freedom is what everyone wants.
February 16th, 2026 02:58
Gratitude
Goldfinch60 said:
All these things happen in life soren but we must let them happen as we can learn from them, good write.
Andy
February 16th, 2026 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
All these things happen in life soren but we must let them happen as we can learn from them, good write.
Andy
February 16th, 2026 02:48
One, two, three, four....five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten
William Hromada said:
Saddening
February 15th, 2026 20:31
William Hromada said:
Saddening
February 15th, 2026 20:31
Second bow
Kevin Hulme said:
Some of life\'s pleasures are fleeting, but stay etched in the Memory. Good Write.
February 15th, 2026 20:02
Kevin Hulme said:
Some of life\'s pleasures are fleeting, but stay etched in the Memory. Good Write.
February 15th, 2026 20:02
Gratitude
Allie561 said:
We seem quick to bite when we don’t fully understand what someone’s intention is. I hope for myself that I can take the time to think before I act. Very lovely poem Soren.
February 15th, 2026 12:38
Allie561 said:
We seem quick to bite when we don’t fully understand what someone’s intention is. I hope for myself that I can take the time to think before I act. Very lovely poem Soren.
February 15th, 2026 12:38
Gratitude
Lorenz said:
I like crocs because they have the merit of being predicable !
February 15th, 2026 12:23
Lorenz said:
I like crocs because they have the merit of being predicable !
February 15th, 2026 12:23
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