Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A lot of wind
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
A lot of wind
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
A lot of wind
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
A lot of wind
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Blackness\' light
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Good taste
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Ponderings
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Ponderings
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Ponderings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
Good taste
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
Ponderings
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Ponderings
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
Ponderings
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
Ponderings
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
Ponderings
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Blackness\' light
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Unknot the not
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Footprints on a beaten path
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
Blackness\' light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Blackness\' light
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
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