Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Years
Poetic Licence said:
How age takes its toll not just in appearance or physically, but on our remaining hope and dreams as time repidly runs out, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
How age takes its toll not just in appearance or physically, but on our remaining hope and dreams as time repidly runs out, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 08:00
Years
Soman Ragavan said:
The years take their toll, little by little. When we look at pictures of ourselves going back a long time, we refuse to believe that we have changed so much. Yet, age wreaks its havoc little by little. Not only physical features, but mentally too we age.
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June 8th, 2025 07:25
Soman Ragavan said:
The years take their toll, little by little. When we look at pictures of ourselves going back a long time, we refuse to believe that we have changed so much. Yet, age wreaks its havoc little by little. Not only physical features, but mentally too we age.
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June 8th, 2025 07:25
Years
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be evoking reflection on the human condition, particularly the inevitability of aging and the loss of aspirations, prompting readers to confront their feelings about time and hope.
Overall, the poem encapsulates the bittersweet nature of life, capturing both the sorrow of lost dreams and the weight of time’s passage.
June 8th, 2025 05:59
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be evoking reflection on the human condition, particularly the inevitability of aging and the loss of aspirations, prompting readers to confront their feelings about time and hope.
Overall, the poem encapsulates the bittersweet nature of life, capturing both the sorrow of lost dreams and the weight of time’s passage.
June 8th, 2025 05:59
Years
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we till the dust, aching for one more bloom.
June 8th, 2025 05:21
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we till the dust, aching for one more bloom.
June 8th, 2025 05:21
Damaged
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree with.
Well said Soren.
Preconditions would include the removal of much of the human species.....
June 7th, 2025 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree with.
Well said Soren.
Preconditions would include the removal of much of the human species.....
June 7th, 2025 17:46
Damaged
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I said to KP \'If it ain\'t broke; don\'t fix it\'. She replied \'The ball and chain that I locked on your ankle ain\'t broke, so I won\'t fix it, I will leave it on you!\' lol.
June 7th, 2025 12:49
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I said to KP \'If it ain\'t broke; don\'t fix it\'. She replied \'The ball and chain that I locked on your ankle ain\'t broke, so I won\'t fix it, I will leave it on you!\' lol.
June 7th, 2025 12:49
Head of wheat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Damaged
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
Damaged
Friendship said:
This poem invites me to embark on a transformative journey of self-discovery, exploring the vast potential of human capability, and the profound interconnectedness between humanity and the natural world, inspiring a deeper understanding of the dynamic interplay between damage, healing, and growth.
June 7th, 2025 07:18
Friendship said:
This poem invites me to embark on a transformative journey of self-discovery, exploring the vast potential of human capability, and the profound interconnectedness between humanity and the natural world, inspiring a deeper understanding of the dynamic interplay between damage, healing, and growth.
June 7th, 2025 07:18
Damaged
Poetic Licence said:
Nature has abilities we will never have to survive and adapt over time and repair the damage we cause to it, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Nature has abilities we will never have to survive and adapt over time and repair the damage we cause to it, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 06:39
Damaged
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, nature creates wonders of a kind that humans cannot match. We can only admire them.
June 7th, 2025 04:48
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, nature creates wonders of a kind that humans cannot match. We can only admire them.
June 7th, 2025 04:48
Damaged
David Wakeling said:
Indeed a short and sweet portrayal of the need to repair the damage in our lives and the human limitations we endure.
June 7th, 2025 04:23
David Wakeling said:
Indeed a short and sweet portrayal of the need to repair the damage in our lives and the human limitations we endure.
June 7th, 2025 04:23
Head of wheat
Teddy.15 said:
This just makes me smile it\'s stunning, your poetry is truly breathtaking dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 7th, 2025 02:13
Teddy.15 said:
This just makes me smile it\'s stunning, your poetry is truly breathtaking dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 7th, 2025 02:13
Head of wheat
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful and meaning poem. Well written!
June 7th, 2025 01:18
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful and meaning poem. Well written!
June 7th, 2025 01:18
Head of wheat
Goldfinch60 said:
Life grows in all soren and will always do so.
Andy
June 7th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Life grows in all soren and will always do so.
Andy
June 7th, 2025 01:16
Habit or addiction
Salvia.S said:
This poem makes us think about when something is simply a pleasure and when it turns into a problem. Well done!
June 7th, 2025 01:15
Salvia.S said:
This poem makes us think about when something is simply a pleasure and when it turns into a problem. Well done!
June 7th, 2025 01:15
Weeds grow
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
I really like this flow and I\'ve been in my yard all spring so far and it resonates :).
June 7th, 2025 00:28
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
I really like this flow and I\'ve been in my yard all spring so far and it resonates :).
June 7th, 2025 00:28
Redemption in deception
James Michael said:
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to the eye. Something like that from a book I read.
June 6th, 2025 22:13
James Michael said:
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to the eye. Something like that from a book I read.
June 6th, 2025 22:13
Head of wheat
Damaso said:
What a beautiful text, so full of wisdom. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
June 6th, 2025 16:44
Damaso said:
What a beautiful text, so full of wisdom. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
June 6th, 2025 16:44
Head of wheat
MendedFences27 said:
From the seed planted to the bread baked. The life cycle rolls along. A very clever poem. Also, liked your rhyme scheme. Phil A.
June 6th, 2025 15:55
MendedFences27 said:
From the seed planted to the bread baked. The life cycle rolls along. A very clever poem. Also, liked your rhyme scheme. Phil A.
June 6th, 2025 15:55
Recognition
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful- enjoyed the flow of words as much as the scene depicted 👌💐
June 6th, 2025 12:08
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful- enjoyed the flow of words as much as the scene depicted 👌💐
June 6th, 2025 12:08
Habit or addiction
Kevin Hulme said:
As Oscar Wilde said: \'I can resist everything except Temptation\'. Good Write.
June 6th, 2025 08:44
Kevin Hulme said:
As Oscar Wilde said: \'I can resist everything except Temptation\'. Good Write.
June 6th, 2025 08:44
Head of wheat
Poetic Licence said:
Lifes cycle in all its glory, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:41
Poetic Licence said:
Lifes cycle in all its glory, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:41
Head of wheat
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth, death, and rebirth in golden grain. A divine dance of sacrifice, sustenance, and sacred design.
June 6th, 2025 04:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth, death, and rebirth in golden grain. A divine dance of sacrifice, sustenance, and sacred design.
June 6th, 2025 04:54
Head of wheat
David Wakeling said:
I see the great Australian staple \"wheat\". This explores the planting and growth and the miracle of natural growth.Excellent poem.I really enjoyed reading.
June 6th, 2025 04:06
David Wakeling said:
I see the great Australian staple \"wheat\". This explores the planting and growth and the miracle of natural growth.Excellent poem.I really enjoyed reading.
June 6th, 2025 04:06
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