Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The character of a man
Teddy.15 said:
This is a beautiful reminder of humanity which should be no different between humans and animals, takes a lot for some to find empathy and compassion. sorrenbarret I\'m off to limbo in any case somewhere in the middle, maybe I will be able to see Heaven and Hell? How much fun that would be. 🌹
August 5th, 2025 06:24
Teddy.15 said:
This is a beautiful reminder of humanity which should be no different between humans and animals, takes a lot for some to find empathy and compassion. sorrenbarret I\'m off to limbo in any case somewhere in the middle, maybe I will be able to see Heaven and Hell? How much fun that would be. 🌹
August 5th, 2025 06:24
Servitude
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I was going to highlight the third and fourth verses but that shadows too much of the rest of this fine piece. Heartfelt, almost grieving. \"water to wine and wine to frothing milk\" fresh and clever. Again, wow!
August 5th, 2025 01:45
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I was going to highlight the third and fourth verses but that shadows too much of the rest of this fine piece. Heartfelt, almost grieving. \"water to wine and wine to frothing milk\" fresh and clever. Again, wow!
August 5th, 2025 01:45
Servitude
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is vast, like a portrait of an entire era.
It leads us through the dawn of time, along dusty roads and fields violated by civilization —
and brings us to an abandoned church,
where the human essence stands bare.
It is not the reader who enters the poem —
the poem enters the reader and leaves its mark.
Powerful and unforgettable.
August 4th, 2025 13:24
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is vast, like a portrait of an entire era.
It leads us through the dawn of time, along dusty roads and fields violated by civilization —
and brings us to an abandoned church,
where the human essence stands bare.
It is not the reader who enters the poem —
the poem enters the reader and leaves its mark.
Powerful and unforgettable.
August 4th, 2025 13:24
Servitude
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Though if related to Neetsch - can\'t even spell him. lol - I steer clear of him. He even looks shifty in his pics.
August 4th, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Though if related to Neetsch - can\'t even spell him. lol - I steer clear of him. He even looks shifty in his pics.
August 4th, 2025 10:40
Servitude
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful poem, sorrenbarrette. One that needs to be read more than a few times.
August 4th, 2025 07:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful poem, sorrenbarrette. One that needs to be read more than a few times.
August 4th, 2025 07:12
Servitude
jim56 said:
hi this is master class writing at its best
is so powerful imagery totally amazing
words used expresses your poem brilliantly
flows beauifully amazing write
should be proud of yourself well done jim
August 4th, 2025 07:05
jim56 said:
hi this is master class writing at its best
is so powerful imagery totally amazing
words used expresses your poem brilliantly
flows beauifully amazing write
should be proud of yourself well done jim
August 4th, 2025 07:05
Servitude
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"Servitude\" explores themes of oppression, labor, and the relationship between the master and the enslaved. It delves into the history of servitude, highlighting the exploitation of both land and people. The imagery used suggests a contrast between the beauty of nature and the harsh realities of human abuse, symbolizing the loss of innocence and the violence inflicted by colonialism and slavery. The poem culminates in the realization that both master and slave are ultimately connected through their shared humanity and suffering.
The poet aims to shed light on the injustices of servitude, to provoke thought on the connections between oppressor and oppressed, and to encourage reflection on humanity\'s shared suffering and the impact of history on present realities.
August 4th, 2025 05:57
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"Servitude\" explores themes of oppression, labor, and the relationship between the master and the enslaved. It delves into the history of servitude, highlighting the exploitation of both land and people. The imagery used suggests a contrast between the beauty of nature and the harsh realities of human abuse, symbolizing the loss of innocence and the violence inflicted by colonialism and slavery. The poem culminates in the realization that both master and slave are ultimately connected through their shared humanity and suffering.
The poet aims to shed light on the injustices of servitude, to provoke thought on the connections between oppressor and oppressed, and to encourage reflection on humanity\'s shared suffering and the impact of history on present realities.
August 4th, 2025 05:57
Servitude
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to procrastinate, just simply say wonderful write, pleasure to read
August 4th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to procrastinate, just simply say wonderful write, pleasure to read
August 4th, 2025 05:52
Tick tock
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
You preen time exquisitely with a flock of words alighting on a branch of a profoundly beautiful poem. I love this one, very much so.
Your friend and fellow poet,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:45
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
You preen time exquisitely with a flock of words alighting on a branch of a profoundly beautiful poem. I love this one, very much so.
Your friend and fellow poet,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:45
Servitude
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guvnor, you are indeed the Guv\'nor .. I didn\'t see that one coming .. Neville
August 4th, 2025 04:41
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guvnor, you are indeed the Guv\'nor .. I didn\'t see that one coming .. Neville
August 4th, 2025 04:41
Servitude
Lorenz said:
Nietszche himself is invited to your séance table !
So sprach Sorenbarrett der Prophet !
August 4th, 2025 03:48
Lorenz said:
Nietszche himself is invited to your séance table !
So sprach Sorenbarrett der Prophet !
August 4th, 2025 03:48
Servitude
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, I think you have just shared a lifetime of talent in one piece of outstanding poetry, I am not only in awe, but overwhelmed by the pure extraordinary imagery, your title gives a lot in this poem, powerful and brilliant, for me it\'s almost the finest battle between all that is pure and beautiful and all that is evil. That\'s just my take on this. Superb piece my friend wonderful ending too. This poem needs the fresh air to breathe. 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:32
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, I think you have just shared a lifetime of talent in one piece of outstanding poetry, I am not only in awe, but overwhelmed by the pure extraordinary imagery, your title gives a lot in this poem, powerful and brilliant, for me it\'s almost the finest battle between all that is pure and beautiful and all that is evil. That\'s just my take on this. Superb piece my friend wonderful ending too. This poem needs the fresh air to breathe. 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:32
Old closet
Firefall said:
Your words really capture that nostalgic feeling. Beautiful poem.
August 3rd, 2025 16:47
Firefall said:
Your words really capture that nostalgic feeling. Beautiful poem.
August 3rd, 2025 16:47
Tick tock
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times and was intrigued by this allusion to time, and how it taunts us. It is the riddle of life, Excellent!
August 3rd, 2025 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times and was intrigued by this allusion to time, and how it taunts us. It is the riddle of life, Excellent!
August 3rd, 2025 12:22
Tick tock
RSM0812 said:
Boggled my brain a bit but i rather liked and appreciated this write. It dances on your tongue like honey if u say it out loud. Lol
August 3rd, 2025 07:25
RSM0812 said:
Boggled my brain a bit but i rather liked and appreciated this write. It dances on your tongue like honey if u say it out loud. Lol
August 3rd, 2025 07:25
Roots
peto said:
I\'ve read and re_read this several times soren
It is fascinating
All from a seed fighting the odds to survive
Becomes a magnificent oak
That becomes a home for the feller to start a family
Then I think his coffin is made from it
And new seeds begin.. weed/tree line
Could be completely wrong here
Hence my late comment
Just get a vibe about how everything is connected
I\'m rambling a bit so will leave it there
Either way it is a great poem with plenty to think about
August 3rd, 2025 06:22
peto said:
I\'ve read and re_read this several times soren
It is fascinating
All from a seed fighting the odds to survive
Becomes a magnificent oak
That becomes a home for the feller to start a family
Then I think his coffin is made from it
And new seeds begin.. weed/tree line
Could be completely wrong here
Hence my late comment
Just get a vibe about how everything is connected
I\'m rambling a bit so will leave it there
Either way it is a great poem with plenty to think about
August 3rd, 2025 06:22
Tick tock
arqios said:
This poem is rich with layered metaphor; time as both tormentor and muse, language as bloodletting and balm. It dances between clarity and obscurity, daring the reader to chase meaning while warning that meaning may be a mirage. I love how it challenges interpretation while rewarding immersion.
August 3rd, 2025 05:55
arqios said:
This poem is rich with layered metaphor; time as both tormentor and muse, language as bloodletting and balm. It dances between clarity and obscurity, daring the reader to chase meaning while warning that meaning may be a mirage. I love how it challenges interpretation while rewarding immersion.
August 3rd, 2025 05:55
Tick tock
Poetic Licence said:
Instant understanding would nice sometimes, but I enjoy having to test my nouse trying to work it out , like this read. An interesting and enjoyable read
August 3rd, 2025 05:33
Poetic Licence said:
Instant understanding would nice sometimes, but I enjoy having to test my nouse trying to work it out , like this read. An interesting and enjoyable read
August 3rd, 2025 05:33
Tick tock
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos on the style and if this should be the last song then what a way to drop the curtains. Superb as always dear sorrenbarret the king of poetry in my eyes. 🌹
August 3rd, 2025 05:17
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos on the style and if this should be the last song then what a way to drop the curtains. Superb as always dear sorrenbarret the king of poetry in my eyes. 🌹
August 3rd, 2025 05:17
Roots
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder of life over time.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the wonder of life over time.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:51
Roots
ElizabethMoroz said:
There is so much skill here involving weaving such a distinct narrative ending with again such poetic ethereal wisdom. The imagery is beautiful and is it iambic octameter? Or close. Im probably wrong here. Regardless the rhyme structure is so enchanting. I am such an earnest fan of your writing Sir. I look forward to the next piece. Elizabeth
August 2nd, 2025 20:41
ElizabethMoroz said:
There is so much skill here involving weaving such a distinct narrative ending with again such poetic ethereal wisdom. The imagery is beautiful and is it iambic octameter? Or close. Im probably wrong here. Regardless the rhyme structure is so enchanting. I am such an earnest fan of your writing Sir. I look forward to the next piece. Elizabeth
August 2nd, 2025 20:41
Roots
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If we reap what we sow, as surely we do, there\'s no hope for me, cos I married KP! lol.
August 2nd, 2025 13:37
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If we reap what we sow, as surely we do, there\'s no hope for me, cos I married KP! lol.
August 2nd, 2025 13:37
Frigid conversation
Paul Ramnora said:
I still I can\'t believe that the poem is so \'short\'...; yet, comes across as being extremely powerful.
It kind of makes me think that anybody could choose their own style of poem...be it one line/two lines/three lines/four...;
and, just make that into being their own strict rule...; then, build up going from there...by writing more and more such poems;
eventually, one hopes one would be a \'master\' of such a style.
August 2nd, 2025 09:51
Paul Ramnora said:
I still I can\'t believe that the poem is so \'short\'...; yet, comes across as being extremely powerful.
It kind of makes me think that anybody could choose their own style of poem...be it one line/two lines/three lines/four...;
and, just make that into being their own strict rule...; then, build up going from there...by writing more and more such poems;
eventually, one hopes one would be a \'master\' of such a style.
August 2nd, 2025 09:51
Frigid conversation
Paul Ramnora said:
Wow! Remarkable writing...had to read that, twice...very strong stuff. ;-)
August 2nd, 2025 09:47
Paul Ramnora said:
Wow! Remarkable writing...had to read that, twice...very strong stuff. ;-)
August 2nd, 2025 09:47
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