Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You touched upon something, which to the best of my recollection, Leibnitz said. I hold on to that belief. I guess the definition of reality changes drastically when it comes to quantum physics. It\'s too complex for me. So I believe reality and observability are closely related. Having said that, I know I have committed a mistake.
February 18th, 2026 09:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You touched upon something, which to the best of my recollection, Leibnitz said. I hold on to that belief. I guess the definition of reality changes drastically when it comes to quantum physics. It\'s too complex for me. So I believe reality and observability are closely related. Having said that, I know I have committed a mistake.
February 18th, 2026 09:34
The gardener
Rachel P said:
I can picture every line you write, like a little movie in my head. Thank you for the read!
February 18th, 2026 09:17
Rachel P said:
I can picture every line you write, like a little movie in my head. Thank you for the read!
February 18th, 2026 09:17
The gardener
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is intriguing and awe inspiring to see picture drawn with words. Great write
February 18th, 2026 09:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is intriguing and awe inspiring to see picture drawn with words. Great write
February 18th, 2026 09:16
The gardener
Paul Bell said:
This is me looking out to the garden, thinking.
Someone has to do something.
I need a bloody gardener.
February 18th, 2026 07:54
Paul Bell said:
This is me looking out to the garden, thinking.
Someone has to do something.
I need a bloody gardener.
February 18th, 2026 07:54
The gardener
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful image created here.I can see the gardener. Well constructed poem.The rhyme is amazing.In fsct I see my Grandfather.That\'s how clever this piece is.
February 18th, 2026 05:20
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful image created here.I can see the gardener. Well constructed poem.The rhyme is amazing.In fsct I see my Grandfather.That\'s how clever this piece is.
February 18th, 2026 05:20
The gardener
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A real \'character\', a sort of \'distinguished\' personage.
February 18th, 2026 05:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A real \'character\', a sort of \'distinguished\' personage.
February 18th, 2026 05:19
Four letter words
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, hope, peace and cope for me soren, life is wonderful.
Andy
February 18th, 2026 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, hope, peace and cope for me soren, life is wonderful.
Andy
February 18th, 2026 02:22
Four letter words
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange how the negative words are in bold print, like how a Newspaper would have it.
The Positive so thin like starving people and much ignored.
February 17th, 2026 21:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange how the negative words are in bold print, like how a Newspaper would have it.
The Positive so thin like starving people and much ignored.
February 17th, 2026 21:01
Four letter words
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
History of an old wound
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
Gratitude
William Hromada said:
Animals show greater gratitude than most humans.
February 17th, 2026 17:18
William Hromada said:
Animals show greater gratitude than most humans.
February 17th, 2026 17:18
Four letter words
Tonya Titus said:
This says it all. What gives life & power to these words is humanity\'s greatest power - choice.
February 17th, 2026 13:06
Tonya Titus said:
This says it all. What gives life & power to these words is humanity\'s greatest power - choice.
February 17th, 2026 13:06
Four letter words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is deceptively simple. The four-letter pairings set the stakes fast, and “braided rope” makes the tension tangible. Then you widen the whole thing with microscope and telescope…constriction versus expansion. A tight structure with a clean, thoughtful finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is deceptively simple. The four-letter pairings set the stakes fast, and “braided rope” makes the tension tangible. Then you widen the whole thing with microscope and telescope…constriction versus expansion. A tight structure with a clean, thoughtful finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:47
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard…there’s a vastness in it that feels both dizzying and calm at the same time. You don’t just question time…you dissolve it. That final line lands like a quiet detonation. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard…there’s a vastness in it that feels both dizzying and calm at the same time. You don’t just question time…you dissolve it. That final line lands like a quiet detonation. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:07
Four letter words
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I got a 6 letter word for KP. Well, a 4 letter word too. They are: Menu - Sewage. heehee. You knew I would say that!
February 17th, 2026 07:56
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I got a 6 letter word for KP. Well, a 4 letter word too. They are: Menu - Sewage. heehee. You knew I would say that!
February 17th, 2026 07:56
Four letter words
Paul Bell said:
Love and hate being the most powerful.
Betrayal brings them both into focus and this is when the words really show their true meaning.
Maybe not take the ex for a coffee now.
February 17th, 2026 07:49
Paul Bell said:
Love and hate being the most powerful.
Betrayal brings them both into focus and this is when the words really show their true meaning.
Maybe not take the ex for a coffee now.
February 17th, 2026 07:49
Four letter words
Thomas W Case said:
this twists like barbed wire around the heart—sharp, relentless, and honest.
I see the rope pulling tight, yet somehow your words still let light slip through the cracks.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
this twists like barbed wire around the heart—sharp, relentless, and honest.
I see the rope pulling tight, yet somehow your words still let light slip through the cracks.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Four letter words
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An example of economy of words. Enjoyed the read very much- every word earned it\'s place.
February 17th, 2026 06:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An example of economy of words. Enjoyed the read very much- every word earned it\'s place.
February 17th, 2026 06:10
Four letter words
David Wakeling said:
Words are certainly powerful.They can destroy a person or build them up.This list would take a lifetime to analyse.Certainly enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
Words are certainly powerful.They can destroy a person or build them up.This list would take a lifetime to analyse.Certainly enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2026 05:09
Pests
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
Car of rust
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Tree and the lily
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
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