Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Lost paper thoughts
Bashirah Asuku said:

I love the way u wrote this poem

September 29th, 2025 07:04

Forgiveness
Bashirah Asuku said:

Wow ๐Ÿ˜ฒ nice

September 29th, 2025 07:03

Heaven\'s rain
Bashirah Asuku said:

Nicely written I like the poem

September 29th, 2025 07:02

No reason
Lorenz said:

We are all animals encaged behind sulfuric bars that the dark poetry of our condition inspires...

September 29th, 2025 06:51

No reason
Paul Bell said:

Yes, as we run about at a hundred miles an hour, nature patiently gets on with her work.
Sometimes we need to slow down to appreciate it.

September 29th, 2025 05:59

Gently
Tom Dylan said:

A fine, thought-provoking write, Soren. Nicely done.

September 29th, 2025 04:38

No reason
Soman Ragavan said:

Nature has the knack to grow back when battered. Overgrowth will resume after destruction by others. Thus, nature will reproduce its majesty for us to see.

September 29th, 2025 03:16

Nature
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature is there for us all to enjoy in so many ways soren.

Andy

September 29th, 2025 01:11

Gently
NafisaSB said:

such a tender and beautiful representation of a grim reality
- kudos

September 28th, 2025 23:56

Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is raw and unflinching. The imagery of taking from the earthโ€ฆher bones, her veinsโ€ฆlands heavy with truth. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 28th, 2025 16:25

Nature
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ohhh, thanks for more recipe ideas for KP here too! lol.

September 28th, 2025 13:01

Nature
shadowbones said:

Reminds me of the doors

September 28th, 2025 12:37

Ghosts
Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

This is a beautifully atmospheric piece it evokes subtle movement and the passage of time with a calm, reflective tone.

September 28th, 2025 12:12

Heaven\'s rain
Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

I love how small details become profound here; very meditative and reflective.

September 28th, 2025 12:10

Nuts
Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

Wow, powerful words. Nicely done.

September 28th, 2025 12:04

Gently
Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

Stunning writing โ€” death is a sad part of life, dark
This piece is lyrical, and unforgettable. Beautifully written.

September 28th, 2025 12:00

Nature
Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

Beautiful and powerful words, the imagery of nature and humanity here is striking.

September 28th, 2025 11:54

Nature
Keyara S Trotman said:

Soren lovely written out๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿ’ฏ
Youโ€™ve written as is โ€œ A person coerced by their wild hunger and thirst
Cuts the grass hair nature owns, build their house of her bones
They drink from her veins, make omelets of her brains dispersed
Breaking their mother\'s skin so thin, then steal all that she ownsโ€
Spectacular ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป what I do get from this is the horrific or maybe so vampire type of vibe, whether you were going for such, that which I donโ€™t know your preference.
Overall ๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป


September 28th, 2025 09:54

Nature
Paul Bell said:

Nature provides plenty, but man always wants more than plenty.
Natures garden it seems is an acre of land, but even that will get taken.

September 28th, 2025 08:47

Gently
William Hromada said:

Oh so quiet it can slip in. Sometimes it just rips you apart. Beautiful putโ€ฆ..

September 28th, 2025 08:40

Gently
RSM0812 said:

Very descriptive with amazing imagery. Well done.

September 28th, 2025 08:21

Nature
Salvia.S said:

This beautifully illustrates the struggle between nature\'s purity & human intrusion, with striking imagery & emotion.Very well written!!!


September 28th, 2025 05:14

Gently
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, death cannot be avoided but it can come and be wonderful.

Andy

September 28th, 2025 01:08

Degrees
NafisaSB said:

so sad and yet so true!!!

September 28th, 2025 00:14

Gently
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 27th, 2025 09:05

Gently
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows, whispering lullabies, planting dreams in stone. Youโ€™ve written the paradox with such quiet power, Soren. Beautifully done, Soren. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 27th, 2025 07:53

Nuts
Paul Bell said:

Yes, who has the right to kill.
Is it a nation who decides, the soldier who does his duty.
Somewhere inbetween theres always a leader, usually old, and always deluded, but still mamages to mobilise thousands to their death.

September 27th, 2025 06:32

Gently
Michael Edwards said:

Now this has got to be one of the best I\'ve read in some time. I will print it out and keep it with my collection.

September 27th, 2025 04:37

Nuts
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very true words soren.

Andy

September 27th, 2025 00:55

Nuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Reading this felt like sitting in a late-night debate where the lines between sense and madness blur. You pull it off brilliantly, my friend. A fave! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 26th, 2025 09:05

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