Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Mutley Ravishes said:
So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s the spirit!
March 5th, 2025 18:21
Mutley Ravishes said:
So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s the spirit!
March 5th, 2025 18:21
Nuts
Neville said:
There’s a hell of a lot here that reminds me of me .. some of which I am happy about but others I would much rather forget .. I think it is great and can see why so many people have faved it .. Neville 😎👍
March 5th, 2025 15:53
Neville said:
There’s a hell of a lot here that reminds me of me .. some of which I am happy about but others I would much rather forget .. I think it is great and can see why so many people have faved it .. Neville 😎👍
March 5th, 2025 15:53
Nuts
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. We are all crazy. Love the alliteration in this piece.
March 5th, 2025 13:18
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. We are all crazy. Love the alliteration in this piece.
March 5th, 2025 13:18
Nuts
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ve got to have some sort of adventure in life, right? I love this, I\'d say chaotic crazy!
March 5th, 2025 12:43
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ve got to have some sort of adventure in life, right? I love this, I\'d say chaotic crazy!
March 5th, 2025 12:43
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RSM0812 said:
By far the best written poem on this sight for months. I completely take off my hat to you for this one. It\'s put professionally and elegantly with a perfect voice. This is hands down my favorite. I appreciate your work.
March 5th, 2025 11:45
RSM0812 said:
By far the best written poem on this sight for months. I completely take off my hat to you for this one. It\'s put professionally and elegantly with a perfect voice. This is hands down my favorite. I appreciate your work.
March 5th, 2025 11:45
Nuts
Friendship said:
Powerful Poem, Soren, your poem is a treasure trove of vivid imagery, painting breathtaking scenes like \"wadded white water\" and \"made my bed with snakes.\" These images evoke a profound sense of the speaker\'s turbulent life, inspiring us to reflect on our own journeys. The \"wasp nest\" serves as a powerful metaphor for self-inflicted pain or conflict, illuminating the complexity of self-discovery. The phrase \"others thought me odd\" gives a sense of external judgment, highlighting societal perceptions of normalcy and encouraging us to embrace our individuality. The rhythm adds a melodic quality to the poem, uplifting our spirits. Soren, sometimes we get caught up in our own little world and never realize how others are rising above their struggles in life and just need our empathy and understanding, and most of all, knowing that their feelings are truly valid.
March 5th, 2025 10:01
Friendship said:
Powerful Poem, Soren, your poem is a treasure trove of vivid imagery, painting breathtaking scenes like \"wadded white water\" and \"made my bed with snakes.\" These images evoke a profound sense of the speaker\'s turbulent life, inspiring us to reflect on our own journeys. The \"wasp nest\" serves as a powerful metaphor for self-inflicted pain or conflict, illuminating the complexity of self-discovery. The phrase \"others thought me odd\" gives a sense of external judgment, highlighting societal perceptions of normalcy and encouraging us to embrace our individuality. The rhythm adds a melodic quality to the poem, uplifting our spirits. Soren, sometimes we get caught up in our own little world and never realize how others are rising above their struggles in life and just need our empathy and understanding, and most of all, knowing that their feelings are truly valid.
March 5th, 2025 10:01
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Poetic Licence said:
Without risks nothing gained, I think a little crazy is certainly better than insanity, loved the read
March 5th, 2025 07:04
Poetic Licence said:
Without risks nothing gained, I think a little crazy is certainly better than insanity, loved the read
March 5th, 2025 07:04
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MDStone said:
You know the old saying… “You don’t have to be crazy to belong here… but it helps.” Isn’t it true that a little “crazy” helps you stay sane. Thanks for the fun, Soren, enjoyed the read.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
MDStone said:
You know the old saying… “You don’t have to be crazy to belong here… but it helps.” Isn’t it true that a little “crazy” helps you stay sane. Thanks for the fun, Soren, enjoyed the read.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
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arqios said:
Had a season or so of such living, much like many a young adult in the 50s, 60s, and even the 70s. Calls to mind such names as McQueen, Dean, Brando, etc. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:15
arqios said:
Had a season or so of such living, much like many a young adult in the 50s, 60s, and even the 70s. Calls to mind such names as McQueen, Dean, Brando, etc. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:15
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David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on yourself but the resolution is clever.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on yourself but the resolution is clever.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:09
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Cassie58 said:
A risk taker I would say and without that some opportunities would slip by and be lost forever. This is such a fun poem and I love that a little crazy can keep you sane. Now setting yourself on fire, now that’s a different league altogether. I will admit to talking to God before I found out he wasn’t listening:) Much enjoyed sorenbarrett. Happy Wednesday.
March 5th, 2025 04:43
Cassie58 said:
A risk taker I would say and without that some opportunities would slip by and be lost forever. This is such a fun poem and I love that a little crazy can keep you sane. Now setting yourself on fire, now that’s a different league altogether. I will admit to talking to God before I found out he wasn’t listening:) Much enjoyed sorenbarrett. Happy Wednesday.
March 5th, 2025 04:43
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Teddy.15 said:
Well I\'d say you are perfectly normal then. 🤣 How wonderfully written, I\'d say we were definitely two peas in a pod. 💜 Fabulous humour and imagery. Chuckled all the way 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
March 5th, 2025 04:39
Teddy.15 said:
Well I\'d say you are perfectly normal then. 🤣 How wonderfully written, I\'d say we were definitely two peas in a pod. 💜 Fabulous humour and imagery. Chuckled all the way 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
March 5th, 2025 04:39
Webs of words
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words of the past can be so meaningful.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words of the past can be so meaningful.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:43
Webs of words
Cassie58 said:
A põem of sad reflection. I very much admire the references to Greek mythology and the imagery surrounding those cobwebs is captivating. A wonderful poem Sorenbarrett.
March 5th, 2025 01:20
Cassie58 said:
A põem of sad reflection. I very much admire the references to Greek mythology and the imagery surrounding those cobwebs is captivating. A wonderful poem Sorenbarrett.
March 5th, 2025 01:20
Night visitor
Firefall said:
Wow! Powerful words. This poem is meant to speak aloud.
March 4th, 2025 16:02
Firefall said:
Wow! Powerful words. This poem is meant to speak aloud.
March 4th, 2025 16:02
Webs of words
David Wakeling said:
The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
March 4th, 2025 15:54
David Wakeling said:
The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
March 4th, 2025 15:54
Webs of words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a masterful weaving of myth and metaphor. You’ve spun a \"web of words\" that captures the essence of poetry, punishment, and the lingering threads of memory. The way you’ve connected Arachne’s tale to the poet’s craft is brilliant, my friend! Your final stanzas weave vivid designs of memories clinging like cobwebs, once intricate patterns now broken and floating. I resonate with that...a powerfully evocative reflection on the fragility of our past and the stories we tell. Beautifully crafted, my friend. This gets a fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a masterful weaving of myth and metaphor. You’ve spun a \"web of words\" that captures the essence of poetry, punishment, and the lingering threads of memory. The way you’ve connected Arachne’s tale to the poet’s craft is brilliant, my friend! Your final stanzas weave vivid designs of memories clinging like cobwebs, once intricate patterns now broken and floating. I resonate with that...a powerfully evocative reflection on the fragility of our past and the stories we tell. Beautifully crafted, my friend. This gets a fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:15
Webs of words
Poetic Licence said:
A story of reflection the Greek way!!, beautifully written and some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:04
Poetic Licence said:
A story of reflection the Greek way!!, beautifully written and some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:04
Webs of words
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together classical mythology and personal reflection, transforming the story of Arachne into a powerful exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. By drawing on this myth, you convey a sense of longing for lost connections and past relationships, while also illuminating the human capacity for resilience and growth. The imagery of webs and threads skillfully symbolizes the fragility and beauty of memories, highlighting the importance of embracing our experiences and learning from them. Your work inspires empathy and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on the transformative power of memory and the impact of lost connections on our lives. How can we harness the emotional weight of our memories to fuel positive change and growth?
March 4th, 2025 07:30
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together classical mythology and personal reflection, transforming the story of Arachne into a powerful exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. By drawing on this myth, you convey a sense of longing for lost connections and past relationships, while also illuminating the human capacity for resilience and growth. The imagery of webs and threads skillfully symbolizes the fragility and beauty of memories, highlighting the importance of embracing our experiences and learning from them. Your work inspires empathy and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on the transformative power of memory and the impact of lost connections on our lives. How can we harness the emotional weight of our memories to fuel positive change and growth?
March 4th, 2025 07:30
Webs of words
MDStone said:
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Wow! Soren, that’s all I can say is WOW. Great wording and writing. I hung there suspended on threads of the web, remembering. Thanks for sharing this great piece of art.
March 4th, 2025 06:38
MDStone said:
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Wow! Soren, that’s all I can say is WOW. Great wording and writing. I hung there suspended on threads of the web, remembering. Thanks for sharing this great piece of art.
March 4th, 2025 06:38
Webs of words
Salvia.S said:
Wow!!!
A beautiful and emotional exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. The way you weave together mythology and personal reflection is truly captivating.
Well written.
March 4th, 2025 05:35
Salvia.S said:
Wow!!!
A beautiful and emotional exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. The way you weave together mythology and personal reflection is truly captivating.
Well written.
March 4th, 2025 05:35
Webs of words
arqios said:
Brings to life how the ancients envisioned their world and time that they lived in. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:42
arqios said:
Brings to life how the ancients envisioned their world and time that they lived in. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:42
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Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 so very beautiful. 🌹
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 so very beautiful. 🌹
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Webs of words
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I find Greek mythology stories eccentric, weird, horrific too in places. They are surely only myths. There are some horrible things in some of the stories.
March 4th, 2025 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I find Greek mythology stories eccentric, weird, horrific too in places. They are surely only myths. There are some horrible things in some of the stories.
March 4th, 2025 03:23
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Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true soren, when will they ever learn!
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true soren, when will they ever learn!
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:01
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NafisaSB said:
so many unsung heroes - we salute this noble band
thanks for translating and sharing
March 4th, 2025 00:12
NafisaSB said:
so many unsung heroes - we salute this noble band
thanks for translating and sharing
March 4th, 2025 00:12
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