Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Poems in the wind
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Old coat
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
Never good enough
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This could really be read into any dysfunctional relationship. A dysfunctional parent/child relationship came to mind when I read the words, \"Your observations shun corrections begun my errors become your regret\". But, it need not be a parent/child relationship. It could be a dysfunctional relationship between a couple (married or otherwise), or any other relationship. I love the way the poem starts...feeling very disjointed and yet, reminiscent of Yoda! To me, that is profound because something disjointed hardly seems wise (Yoda), and yet there is an inherent wisdom in the disjointed words. Whether the Yoda bit was intentional, it is how it hit me at least by the second half of the first line. Anywho, really love this. Yoda says, \"From me, a favorite this is. Yes, hmmm.\" 🌹👏
March 27th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This could really be read into any dysfunctional relationship. A dysfunctional parent/child relationship came to mind when I read the words, \"Your observations shun corrections begun my errors become your regret\". But, it need not be a parent/child relationship. It could be a dysfunctional relationship between a couple (married or otherwise), or any other relationship. I love the way the poem starts...feeling very disjointed and yet, reminiscent of Yoda! To me, that is profound because something disjointed hardly seems wise (Yoda), and yet there is an inherent wisdom in the disjointed words. Whether the Yoda bit was intentional, it is how it hit me at least by the second half of the first line. Anywho, really love this. Yoda says, \"From me, a favorite this is. Yes, hmmm.\" 🌹👏
March 27th, 2025 07:46
Never good enough
MDStone said:
So often what draws us together is that we are different and then what drives us apart is that we are different. Well done, dear Poet.
March 27th, 2025 06:29
MDStone said:
So often what draws us together is that we are different and then what drives us apart is that we are different. Well done, dear Poet.
March 27th, 2025 06:29
Never good enough
Lorenz said:
\'\' Two side of one coin ,born twins of a same mother \'\'
For the mercurian I am this sentence is a mental delight ! \'\'
March 27th, 2025 06:24
Lorenz said:
\'\' Two side of one coin ,born twins of a same mother \'\'
For the mercurian I am this sentence is a mental delight ! \'\'
March 27th, 2025 06:24
Never good enough
arqios said:
Reminds me of shoulder angel and devil and a host of other things. Very engaging read! 🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
Reminds me of shoulder angel and devil and a host of other things. Very engaging read! 🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:27
Never good enough
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of never living up to someone\'s expectations be a parent or partner, no matter what you do or how hard you try it will never be enough, lovely write
March 27th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of never living up to someone\'s expectations be a parent or partner, no matter what you do or how hard you try it will never be enough, lovely write
March 27th, 2025 05:00
Never good enough
David Wakeling said:
This reminds me of a dysfunctional couple who are capable of complimenting each other but end up competing with each other .The end result is literally hopeless. A Powerful poem well constructed
March 27th, 2025 04:57
David Wakeling said:
This reminds me of a dysfunctional couple who are capable of complimenting each other but end up competing with each other .The end result is literally hopeless. A Powerful poem well constructed
March 27th, 2025 04:57
History according to the administration
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somehow it reminded me of Another Brick in the Wall
March 27th, 2025 03:54
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somehow it reminded me of Another Brick in the Wall
March 27th, 2025 03:54
Poems in the wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words will always flow in the ether.
Andy
March 27th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words will always flow in the ether.
Andy
March 27th, 2025 01:45
Hands that grasp
NafisaSB said:
i agree with your views on jealousy as well as forgiveness. gives us thought for soul searching
March 26th, 2025 23:34
NafisaSB said:
i agree with your views on jealousy as well as forgiveness. gives us thought for soul searching
March 26th, 2025 23:34
History according to the administration
Doggerel Dave said:
A poetic newscast which has filled in some detail I missed because the pace is too great...Keep up the good work, Soren.
March 26th, 2025 22:05
Doggerel Dave said:
A poetic newscast which has filled in some detail I missed because the pace is too great...Keep up the good work, Soren.
March 26th, 2025 22:05
Where all things meet
Friendship said:
your poem explores the intersection of science and emotion, emphasizing how something as simple and seemingly mundane as a drop of dew can embody complex scientific principles while also evoking deep emotional and spiritual responses. It suggests that beauty and profound truths can be found in the most ordinary aspects of nature.
March 26th, 2025 19:40
Friendship said:
your poem explores the intersection of science and emotion, emphasizing how something as simple and seemingly mundane as a drop of dew can embody complex scientific principles while also evoking deep emotional and spiritual responses. It suggests that beauty and profound truths can be found in the most ordinary aspects of nature.
March 26th, 2025 19:40
Intelligence
Friendship said:
this poem revolves around the arrogance of humanity in considering itself superior to other species. It critiques the self-serving nature of humans who create standards to measure superiority while ignoring their flaws and the consequences of their actions. The subject matter delves into themes of arrogance, hypocrisy, and the flawed nature of judgment.
March 26th, 2025 19:35
Friendship said:
this poem revolves around the arrogance of humanity in considering itself superior to other species. It critiques the self-serving nature of humans who create standards to measure superiority while ignoring their flaws and the consequences of their actions. The subject matter delves into themes of arrogance, hypocrisy, and the flawed nature of judgment.
March 26th, 2025 19:35
Sayings
Friendship said:
this poem explores the juxtaposition of curiosity and its consequences, as well as the complexities of human life, choices, and fate. It tackles serious themes such as life, death, and the moral implications of decisions, particularly in the context of abortion and the resulting societal judgments.
March 26th, 2025 19:28
Friendship said:
this poem explores the juxtaposition of curiosity and its consequences, as well as the complexities of human life, choices, and fate. It tackles serious themes such as life, death, and the moral implications of decisions, particularly in the context of abortion and the resulting societal judgments.
March 26th, 2025 19:28
History according to the administration
Jan bach said:
This is so true. It\'s worrying but so accurate. It would be good to reach a wider audience.
March 26th, 2025 14:45
Jan bach said:
This is so true. It\'s worrying but so accurate. It would be good to reach a wider audience.
March 26th, 2025 14:45
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Accidental Poet said:
In essence, his way, or the highway. Well penned soren. It\'s like we\'re in The Twilight Zone or The Outer Limits. It just keeps getting weirder and weirder every day. Next, he\'ll be declaring himself as God. 🙄
March 26th, 2025 12:34
Accidental Poet said:
In essence, his way, or the highway. Well penned soren. It\'s like we\'re in The Twilight Zone or The Outer Limits. It just keeps getting weirder and weirder every day. Next, he\'ll be declaring himself as God. 🙄
March 26th, 2025 12:34
History according to the administration
RSM0812 said:
This is the best modern political poem I\'ve read in my life. 100%. I\'m honestly astounded by it.
March 26th, 2025 11:27
RSM0812 said:
This is the best modern political poem I\'ve read in my life. 100%. I\'m honestly astounded by it.
March 26th, 2025 11:27
Poems in the wind
Lorenz said:
Simply written with a princely elegance ! A fave + !
March 26th, 2025 10:43
Lorenz said:
Simply written with a princely elegance ! A fave + !
March 26th, 2025 10:43
Poems in the wind
cellinic said:
Very nice, versed in very poetic and quite enigmatic manner
March 26th, 2025 07:36
cellinic said:
Very nice, versed in very poetic and quite enigmatic manner
March 26th, 2025 07:36
Poems in the wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I am glad you are putting your poetry out there for people to read. This piece is highly relatable to me and all of us who take up the craft. ✍️ There is a sadness to this, as well as a hope. The sadness: We go from more being prominent in a way (e.g. paid teachers or preachers...positions of respect and reverence)...to sharing our ideas for free, only read by those who come across our words. Perhaps a more limited reach...barring the few whose reach soar. The hope: that what we are doing will carry on well beyond us. The formal roles we had were actually far more limiting than the freedom to pen words that will go beyond minds and reach hearts, perhaps generations from now even. So, I see both sides to this one and, while they are distinct, they are not separate. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
March 26th, 2025 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I am glad you are putting your poetry out there for people to read. This piece is highly relatable to me and all of us who take up the craft. ✍️ There is a sadness to this, as well as a hope. The sadness: We go from more being prominent in a way (e.g. paid teachers or preachers...positions of respect and reverence)...to sharing our ideas for free, only read by those who come across our words. Perhaps a more limited reach...barring the few whose reach soar. The hope: that what we are doing will carry on well beyond us. The formal roles we had were actually far more limiting than the freedom to pen words that will go beyond minds and reach hearts, perhaps generations from now even. So, I see both sides to this one and, while they are distinct, they are not separate. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
March 26th, 2025 07:35
Poems in the wind
Poetic Licence said:
At first read it appears a sad write, then I look at the poetry you write and that would not happen unless you had a variety of experiences, as they say every cloud has a silver lining and yours is your wonderful poetry, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
At first read it appears a sad write, then I look at the poetry you write and that would not happen unless you had a variety of experiences, as they say every cloud has a silver lining and yours is your wonderful poetry, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:14
Poems in the wind
arqios said:
And those words have met up with ours on the updraft across oceans and land forms🕊🙏🏻
March 26th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
And those words have met up with ours on the updraft across oceans and land forms🕊🙏🏻
March 26th, 2025 05:27
Poems in the wind
MDStone said:
The best lessons and often the most received sermons come out of life’s fractured pieces constructed by a wordsmith into a fine piece of stained glass. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:25
MDStone said:
The best lessons and often the most received sermons come out of life’s fractured pieces constructed by a wordsmith into a fine piece of stained glass. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:25
Poems in the wind
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a conclusion to come to. Perhaps the answer my friend is blowing in the wind. There is a sadness here.But that is Poetry
March 26th, 2025 05:23
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a conclusion to come to. Perhaps the answer my friend is blowing in the wind. There is a sadness here.But that is Poetry
March 26th, 2025 05:23
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