Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Mud on the floor
orchidee said:
Godo write SB. My own version of line 3 is \'A woman in dust held together by botox\'. Heehee. Guess who I mean. It\'s terrible of me - I give her even more publicity, mentioning her. lol.
September 11th, 2025 11:05
orchidee said:
Godo write SB. My own version of line 3 is \'A woman in dust held together by botox\'. Heehee. Guess who I mean. It\'s terrible of me - I give her even more publicity, mentioning her. lol.
September 11th, 2025 11:05
Mud on the floor
Teddy.15 said:
Dust being the word of this day, so very dignified my dear sorrenbarrett, a poem of great significance. Kudos on your poetic talents. 🌹
September 11th, 2025 04:17
Teddy.15 said:
Dust being the word of this day, so very dignified my dear sorrenbarrett, a poem of great significance. Kudos on your poetic talents. 🌹
September 11th, 2025 04:17
Sand in a bottle
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren simple and elegant✨👏🏻 this is giving baby feverrrr!!! You said “Crawling in circles twice a day
No one can stop it from running”
This entire piece is just cuteness overloaded. For me it’s just adoration. Now I’m not sure if your aim was to make it give baby fever but this is this is the “I have no words to say poem” it’s short n sweet.
Sending poetic energy ✨❤️
September 11th, 2025 03:31
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren simple and elegant✨👏🏻 this is giving baby feverrrr!!! You said “Crawling in circles twice a day
No one can stop it from running”
This entire piece is just cuteness overloaded. For me it’s just adoration. Now I’m not sure if your aim was to make it give baby fever but this is this is the “I have no words to say poem” it’s short n sweet.
Sending poetic energy ✨❤️
September 11th, 2025 03:31
Why?
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Soren,
Loved these lines..
It our most intimate touch
Fluid exchange in love\'s clutch
Intimate moments captured well and sometimes wonder only a poet can express it beautifully not touching the vulgar line...
September 11th, 2025 01:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Soren,
Loved these lines..
It our most intimate touch
Fluid exchange in love\'s clutch
Intimate moments captured well and sometimes wonder only a poet can express it beautifully not touching the vulgar line...
September 11th, 2025 01:30
Flowering tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, beautifully written…petals drifting, blossoms fading, fruit carrying what endures. It’s tender, ephemeral, and profoundly true of life itself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, beautifully written…petals drifting, blossoms fading, fruit carrying what endures. It’s tender, ephemeral, and profoundly true of life itself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:32
Flowering tree
Friendship said:
The poem explores the fleeting nature of beauty and life, using the imagery of peach blossoms to symbolize the transient moments that bring joy and nourishment. It reflects on the inevitability of change, the cycle of life, and the delicate balance between beauty and decay. The blossoms serve as a metaphor for life\'s ephemeral experiences, suggesting that while beauty is short-lived, it ultimately contributes to growth and renewal.
September 10th, 2025 14:11
Friendship said:
The poem explores the fleeting nature of beauty and life, using the imagery of peach blossoms to symbolize the transient moments that bring joy and nourishment. It reflects on the inevitability of change, the cycle of life, and the delicate balance between beauty and decay. The blossoms serve as a metaphor for life\'s ephemeral experiences, suggesting that while beauty is short-lived, it ultimately contributes to growth and renewal.
September 10th, 2025 14:11
Flowering tree
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful cycle of nature is wrapped up in glorius imagery in this poem, I could wander here forever. Exquisite!
September 10th, 2025 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful cycle of nature is wrapped up in glorius imagery in this poem, I could wander here forever. Exquisite!
September 10th, 2025 12:47
Left behind
Malcolm Gladwin said:
What a nice write and so many likes , I didn\'t know there were so many people on this site , amazing ! Very talent dear friend
September 10th, 2025 12:44
Malcolm Gladwin said:
What a nice write and so many likes , I didn\'t know there were so many people on this site , amazing ! Very talent dear friend
September 10th, 2025 12:44
Little armor
Aman 12 said:
A charming blend of fun facts and clever rhymes. I am amazed by the poems you write. This one was educational and entertaining.
September 10th, 2025 09:59
Aman 12 said:
A charming blend of fun facts and clever rhymes. I am amazed by the poems you write. This one was educational and entertaining.
September 10th, 2025 09:59
To spill one\'s guts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in every line. The finale with the poet’s bowels turned out hits like a confession carved in blood. Seriously loved that ending! Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in every line. The finale with the poet’s bowels turned out hits like a confession carved in blood. Seriously loved that ending! Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:34
Flowering tree
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Nature is peculiar in that nothing lasts forever and yet it\'s always there and as always in its four poetic forms - the seasons, especially so, your peach tree. A lovely poem of life, death and rebirth. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 10th, 2025 08:41
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Nature is peculiar in that nothing lasts forever and yet it\'s always there and as always in its four poetic forms - the seasons, especially so, your peach tree. A lovely poem of life, death and rebirth. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 10th, 2025 08:41
To spill one\'s guts
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some great lines, Soren. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2025 06:06
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some great lines, Soren. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2025 06:06
Flowering tree
cellinic said:
Spectacular imagery and impressive line of associations! Best wishes,
September 10th, 2025 04:05
cellinic said:
Spectacular imagery and impressive line of associations! Best wishes,
September 10th, 2025 04:05
To spill one\'s guts
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, showing poems come from everywhere.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, showing poems come from everywhere.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:52
To spill one\'s guts
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! There is sometimes just such a strong burning to tell someone, anyone, what we think and feel.
September 9th, 2025 19:49
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! There is sometimes just such a strong burning to tell someone, anyone, what we think and feel.
September 9th, 2025 19:49
To spill one\'s guts
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , a powerful way of explaining the process of writing a poem.
Nice one.
September 9th, 2025 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , a powerful way of explaining the process of writing a poem.
Nice one.
September 9th, 2025 18:45
Fear myths of the unknown
Sami Mulaj said:
A wonderful poem, one that will remain indelibly etched in your mind!
September 9th, 2025 12:06
Sami Mulaj said:
A wonderful poem, one that will remain indelibly etched in your mind!
September 9th, 2025 12:06
To spill one\'s guts
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
A poet\'s art laid bare in three powerful stanzas. Skin, bone and innards without apology as the truth demands. Excellent, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 11:00
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
A poet\'s art laid bare in three powerful stanzas. Skin, bone and innards without apology as the truth demands. Excellent, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 11:00
To spill one\'s guts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
September 9th, 2025 10:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
September 9th, 2025 10:57
Father, God, nation
Keeter C said:
Let’s hope he leads into battle, woe the day we go it alone. Very nice.
September 9th, 2025 09:05
Keeter C said:
Let’s hope he leads into battle, woe the day we go it alone. Very nice.
September 9th, 2025 09:05
To spill one\'s guts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"\"Allegories painted on the edge of time\". Memorable work👍👋
September 9th, 2025 08:47
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"\"Allegories painted on the edge of time\". Memorable work👍👋
September 9th, 2025 08:47
To spill one\'s guts
2781 said:
Reminds me of that scripture-
But I say unto you, That every idle word that men shall speak, they shall give account thereof in the day of judgement.
September 9th, 2025 08:33
2781 said:
Reminds me of that scripture-
But I say unto you, That every idle word that men shall speak, they shall give account thereof in the day of judgement.
September 9th, 2025 08:33
To spill one\'s guts
Friendship said:
Well said, this poem explores the tumultuous relationship between creativity and madness, emphasizing how deep emotional experiences and existential struggles can lead to profound artistic expression. It suggests that truth often arises from pain and conflict, and that the act of writing poetry is a visceral and transformative process.
September 9th, 2025 08:22
Friendship said:
Well said, this poem explores the tumultuous relationship between creativity and madness, emphasizing how deep emotional experiences and existential struggles can lead to profound artistic expression. It suggests that truth often arises from pain and conflict, and that the act of writing poetry is a visceral and transformative process.
September 9th, 2025 08:22
To spill one\'s guts
Teddy.15 said:
Some what hard to chew some of your imagery today 🤣 what an excellent piece. Every poets truth. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
Some what hard to chew some of your imagery today 🤣 what an excellent piece. Every poets truth. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 05:16
No worries
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren and they can be very true but not in my case with my Mary.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren and they can be very true but not in my case with my Mary.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:16
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