Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
You will argue
mya said:
I love the feeling of uncertainty in this, and the questions with no easy answers are so thought provoking too!! amazing piece.
April 17th, 2025 14:30
mya said:
I love the feeling of uncertainty in this, and the questions with no easy answers are so thought provoking too!! amazing piece.
April 17th, 2025 14:30
Muse\'s blood
Friendship said:
I needed to read this 3 times to truly appreciate the profound meaning behind your painting, because it resonated with me in 3 different ways. I always strive to uncover the purpose of a painting, and this is the beautiful purpose I discovered in your poem today. The use of \'caisson\' and \'basin\' serves as powerful metaphors for the poetโs mind and creative well, suggesting a deep reservoir of inspiration. Your poem explores the intrinsic relationship between life experiences and the creation of poetry, revealing how emotions and passions flow like rivers, influencing the poet\'s work. The imagery of a \'drain\' and \'sink\' signifies the struggles and challenges of expressing feelings, while the mention of the \'Muse\' indicates the source of inspiration. Ultimately, the poem reflects the continuous, often tumultuous, process of translating life\'s complexities into art. The poem\'s purpose is to convey the idea that poetry is a vital expression of lifeโs experiences, and that creating art often involves navigating through deep emotional currents. The poet seeks to articulate the messy, beautiful process of transforming personal turmoil into artistic expression.
April 17th, 2025 09:00
Friendship said:
I needed to read this 3 times to truly appreciate the profound meaning behind your painting, because it resonated with me in 3 different ways. I always strive to uncover the purpose of a painting, and this is the beautiful purpose I discovered in your poem today. The use of \'caisson\' and \'basin\' serves as powerful metaphors for the poetโs mind and creative well, suggesting a deep reservoir of inspiration. Your poem explores the intrinsic relationship between life experiences and the creation of poetry, revealing how emotions and passions flow like rivers, influencing the poet\'s work. The imagery of a \'drain\' and \'sink\' signifies the struggles and challenges of expressing feelings, while the mention of the \'Muse\' indicates the source of inspiration. Ultimately, the poem reflects the continuous, often tumultuous, process of translating life\'s complexities into art. The poem\'s purpose is to convey the idea that poetry is a vital expression of lifeโs experiences, and that creating art often involves navigating through deep emotional currents. The poet seeks to articulate the messy, beautiful process of transforming personal turmoil into artistic expression.
April 17th, 2025 09:00
Muse\'s blood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my inner and outer worlds and connect with others in the world around me. It has been a blessing to me beyond all compare. Well done in expressing that so eloquently, Soren. ๐น๐
April 17th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my inner and outer worlds and connect with others in the world around me. It has been a blessing to me beyond all compare. Well done in expressing that so eloquently, Soren. ๐น๐
April 17th, 2025 08:37
Muse\'s blood
Poetic Licence said:
Writing is what keeps me slightly connected to the normal world, and has been the only outlet i have ever felt comfortable in saying i feel, loved the read
April 17th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Writing is what keeps me slightly connected to the normal world, and has been the only outlet i have ever felt comfortable in saying i feel, loved the read
April 17th, 2025 06:18
Muse\'s blood
David Wakeling said:
Well-constructed, with the trademark middle rhyme. A tribute to poesy. Well done mi amigo
April 17th, 2025 05:29
David Wakeling said:
Well-constructed, with the trademark middle rhyme. A tribute to poesy. Well done mi amigo
April 17th, 2025 05:29
Muse\'s blood
MDStone said:
I find it therapeutic to write and read. Itโs like a piece of art. Created Uniquely by oneโs craft of constructing felt experiences that are common to all. Thoughts, feelings, art that flow from the very soul. Well done, Soren.
April 17th, 2025 04:56
MDStone said:
I find it therapeutic to write and read. Itโs like a piece of art. Created Uniquely by oneโs craft of constructing felt experiences that are common to all. Thoughts, feelings, art that flow from the very soul. Well done, Soren.
April 17th, 2025 04:56
Redeemer pains through window panes
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, more things that I didn\'t know.
An dy
April 17th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, more things that I didn\'t know.
An dy
April 17th, 2025 01:48
Scent of the past
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Intelligently written. A poem about past and future which one has no control over one or the other.
April 16th, 2025 13:18
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Intelligently written. A poem about past and future which one has no control over one or the other.
April 16th, 2025 13:18
Who died and made you God
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
A powerful message. Well written and stated.
April 16th, 2025 12:56
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
A powerful message. Well written and stated.
April 16th, 2025 12:56
Redeemer pains through window panes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem from you on Osiris. Another wonderful poem from Mourgana on Odin? I clearly missed the memo today on powerful gods that start with O! A most wonderful piece, my friend. ๐น๐
April 16th, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem from you on Osiris. Another wonderful poem from Mourgana on Odin? I clearly missed the memo today on powerful gods that start with O! A most wonderful piece, my friend. ๐น๐
April 16th, 2025 07:27
Redeemer pains through window panes
arqios said:
Brings to life all that ancient history and lore๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 16th, 2025 05:47
arqios said:
Brings to life all that ancient history and lore๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 16th, 2025 05:47
Redeemer pains through window panes
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful poem with imagery to spare.I like the references.I think I always learn something new from your poems.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:25
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful poem with imagery to spare.I like the references.I think I always learn something new from your poems.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:25
Redeemer pains through window panes
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting read for me at this time of year, more looking up for me, a little more knowledge gained, beautifully written and enjoyed
April 16th, 2025 04:52
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting read for me at this time of year, more looking up for me, a little more knowledge gained, beautifully written and enjoyed
April 16th, 2025 04:52
Who died and made you God
NafisaSB said:
so true - beauty does lie in the eye of the beholder, and many a time, only the outward manifestations are noticed - the inner beauty is overlooked.
beautiful piece of work
April 16th, 2025 02:51
NafisaSB said:
so true - beauty does lie in the eye of the beholder, and many a time, only the outward manifestations are noticed - the inner beauty is overlooked.
beautiful piece of work
April 16th, 2025 02:51
Who died and made you God
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within our bodies soren the outside that is seen can mean nothing.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within our bodies soren the outside that is seen can mean nothing.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:26
Who died and made you God
orchidee said:
Good write A. There is suffering, sickness, etc, in life, as we know. But one wanted to impress a religious person, and said, \'Oh, I\'ve suffered greatly\'. The reply they got was:\' To what wonderful degree of ecstasy have you been exalted to, that you compare your sufferings to St Paul and his \'thorn in the flesh?!\' (usually taken to mean some painful physical ailment - a book had 4 chapters on it!).
April 15th, 2025 09:23
orchidee said:
Good write A. There is suffering, sickness, etc, in life, as we know. But one wanted to impress a religious person, and said, \'Oh, I\'ve suffered greatly\'. The reply they got was:\' To what wonderful degree of ecstasy have you been exalted to, that you compare your sufferings to St Paul and his \'thorn in the flesh?!\' (usually taken to mean some painful physical ailment - a book had 4 chapters on it!).
April 15th, 2025 09:23
Who died and made you God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Beauty is more than just skin deep\", or so the saying goes. And it is truth. In fact, the reverse is quite true as well: true ugliness is never a mere surface appearance. I have met some \"beautiful\" people who turned out quite ugly. When one comes to see the person for who they are, not just what they look like, that is when one can tell the true beauty or ugliness of a person. A most profound and true write, Soren. Well done! ๐น๐
April 15th, 2025 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Beauty is more than just skin deep\", or so the saying goes. And it is truth. In fact, the reverse is quite true as well: true ugliness is never a mere surface appearance. I have met some \"beautiful\" people who turned out quite ugly. When one comes to see the person for who they are, not just what they look like, that is when one can tell the true beauty or ugliness of a person. A most profound and true write, Soren. Well done! ๐น๐
April 15th, 2025 08:02
Who died and made you God
MDStone said:
Ah, Soren, you have done it again. You have strummed across the strings of my heart. To love the human being is to look past all of the superficial, to look into the real depths of heart and soul. Thank you for sharing such a needed message.
April 15th, 2025 07:04
MDStone said:
Ah, Soren, you have done it again. You have strummed across the strings of my heart. To love the human being is to look past all of the superficial, to look into the real depths of heart and soul. Thank you for sharing such a needed message.
April 15th, 2025 07:04
Who died and made you God
Friendship said:
I was a bit amused by the title for Holy Week.Your poem delves into the dichotomies between beauty and ugliness, truth and deception, and societal notions of worth, implying that external appearances can conceal deeper truths. It suggests that judgments based on superficial qualities can lead to overlooking inherent value. You appear to prompt introspection and encourage readers to transcend surface-level appearances, advocating for a more nuanced understanding of beauty and worth in both themselves and others. Furthermore, it underscores the perils of jealousy and superficial judgments that can result in misunderstanding and disconnection.
April 15th, 2025 06:28
Friendship said:
I was a bit amused by the title for Holy Week.Your poem delves into the dichotomies between beauty and ugliness, truth and deception, and societal notions of worth, implying that external appearances can conceal deeper truths. It suggests that judgments based on superficial qualities can lead to overlooking inherent value. You appear to prompt introspection and encourage readers to transcend surface-level appearances, advocating for a more nuanced understanding of beauty and worth in both themselves and others. Furthermore, it underscores the perils of jealousy and superficial judgments that can result in misunderstanding and disconnection.
April 15th, 2025 06:28
Who died and made you God
arqios said:
Those that pull of a pretty cry-face could probably fool the rest of us but the pain and hurt is always real. ๐๐ป๐
April 15th, 2025 05:36
arqios said:
Those that pull of a pretty cry-face could probably fool the rest of us but the pain and hurt is always real. ๐๐ป๐
April 15th, 2025 05:36
Who died and made you God
David Wakeling said:
A powerful well constructed piece.There is certainly some anger here.Very emotional write.Well done
April 15th, 2025 05:33
David Wakeling said:
A powerful well constructed piece.There is certainly some anger here.Very emotional write.Well done
April 15th, 2025 05:33
Who died and made you God
Poetic Licence said:
Real beauty is within and often passed by or discarded, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 04:43
Poetic Licence said:
Real beauty is within and often passed by or discarded, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 04:43
Differences
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so wonderful in life soren and has always been that way in my life, I am very lucky.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so wonderful in life soren and has always been that way in my life, I am very lucky.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:56
Differences
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that the abuse of sexual energy is at the root of mankind\'s suffering. It\'s been claimed that is what caused mankind\'s fall and ejection from Eden. Taking a bite of the apple.
Great write, Soren
April 14th, 2025 20:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that the abuse of sexual energy is at the root of mankind\'s suffering. It\'s been claimed that is what caused mankind\'s fall and ejection from Eden. Taking a bite of the apple.
Great write, Soren
April 14th, 2025 20:00
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