Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Not too smart
Doggerel Dave said:
😆🤣Indeed - pertinent question presented in rhymic form, Sir.
July 11th, 2025 05:41
Doggerel Dave said:
😆🤣Indeed - pertinent question presented in rhymic form, Sir.
July 11th, 2025 05:41
Lost art
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of the past will lead us to a good place in our life soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of the past will lead us to a good place in our life soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:42
Lost art
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one, SB. I guess poetry is safe from falling and shattering, and can still be considered as art. Do we remember every poem we write? I don\'t think so, but my memory is less sharp than it should be. Your \'lump of clay\' can be a poem as well as a life. We mold many things in life, from art and such, to ourselves and our children. Hopefully we achieve some success. A very thoughtful poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one, SB. I guess poetry is safe from falling and shattering, and can still be considered as art. Do we remember every poem we write? I don\'t think so, but my memory is less sharp than it should be. Your \'lump of clay\' can be a poem as well as a life. We mold many things in life, from art and such, to ourselves and our children. Hopefully we achieve some success. A very thoughtful poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:55
Lost art
Damaso said:
I don\'t see where I authorized my mind to be taken over like this. I felt like someone was spying on me, even fearing the possibility of learning more. Brilliant, yet dark. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:28
Damaso said:
I don\'t see where I authorized my mind to be taken over like this. I felt like someone was spying on me, even fearing the possibility of learning more. Brilliant, yet dark. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:28
Lost art
arqios said:
The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more preferable than statues being pulled off their base. Got me thinking 🤔 hard🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:51
arqios said:
The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more preferable than statues being pulled off their base. Got me thinking 🤔 hard🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:51
Lost art
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The molding, the warping, the eventual shattering—it’s all there, silently devastating. The line, “maybe it doesn’t matter”, hit me like a whisper at the edge of forgetting. You sculpted something incredibly haunting and memorable here. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
July 10th, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The molding, the warping, the eventual shattering—it’s all there, silently devastating. The line, “maybe it doesn’t matter”, hit me like a whisper at the edge of forgetting. You sculpted something incredibly haunting and memorable here. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
July 10th, 2025 08:56
Lost art
Soman Ragavan said:
The mind is always transforming things around us. \"into what we will them to be\" : we shape experiences, etc. to suit us. What stays in memory for very long turns indeed to rock -- resisting changes.
July 10th, 2025 08:26
Soman Ragavan said:
The mind is always transforming things around us. \"into what we will them to be\" : we shape experiences, etc. to suit us. What stays in memory for very long turns indeed to rock -- resisting changes.
July 10th, 2025 08:26
Lost art
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as how we mould ourselves over time, or how we think we do, believing that over time we have changed, but that is not always the case, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:29
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as how we mould ourselves over time, or how we think we do, believing that over time we have changed, but that is not always the case, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:29
Lost art
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It can be taken two ways.The life of a clay staue and the life of a Man.I could be wrong but that\'s how I saw it on first reading. Enjoyable read either way
July 10th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It can be taken two ways.The life of a clay staue and the life of a Man.I could be wrong but that\'s how I saw it on first reading. Enjoyable read either way
July 10th, 2025 04:25
A vision
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but new life will come from all that you have written about.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but new life will come from all that you have written about.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:20
Cycles
Tony Grannell said:
The never ending vices and crimes of man whilst sowing the seeds of wrath in filth for the next generation, as with all previous generations. A good and true kick in the stomach poem, to the point with deft pronouncements of raw honesty. Excellent.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 11:58
Tony Grannell said:
The never ending vices and crimes of man whilst sowing the seeds of wrath in filth for the next generation, as with all previous generations. A good and true kick in the stomach poem, to the point with deft pronouncements of raw honesty. Excellent.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 11:58
A vision
MendedFences27 said:
What goes around comes around, and we all pay for out transgressions eventually. The world is full of enough blame to go around.
Loved the rhyming. Always ending with a rose is good idea. S3 L4 is a warning to us all. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:53
MendedFences27 said:
What goes around comes around, and we all pay for out transgressions eventually. The world is full of enough blame to go around.
Loved the rhyming. Always ending with a rose is good idea. S3 L4 is a warning to us all. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:53
A vision
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger, and glimpses of fractured light. 😔 The images cut sharp, but it’s the rhythm beneath it all that kept me swaying with each stanza. That final rose? Rootless, spined, and enshrined—it lingers. Well crafted, my friend. 🌹👏 A fave!
July 9th, 2025 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger, and glimpses of fractured light. 😔 The images cut sharp, but it’s the rhythm beneath it all that kept me swaying with each stanza. That final rose? Rootless, spined, and enshrined—it lingers. Well crafted, my friend. 🌹👏 A fave!
July 9th, 2025 10:43
A vision
Bella Shepard said:
This stream of consciousness flows brilliantly from beginning to end, as carries us along upon each ripple of reflection. Loved it!
July 9th, 2025 09:40
Bella Shepard said:
This stream of consciousness flows brilliantly from beginning to end, as carries us along upon each ripple of reflection. Loved it!
July 9th, 2025 09:40
A vision
The ScarletBard said:
Each line of this poem makes you think in a totally different way..
A totally different feeling, a different aspect of life.
Has to be the most thought provoking write I have ever seen..
Stunning pice
July 9th, 2025 09:13
The ScarletBard said:
Each line of this poem makes you think in a totally different way..
A totally different feeling, a different aspect of life.
Has to be the most thought provoking write I have ever seen..
Stunning pice
July 9th, 2025 09:13
Cycles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one hits with that heavy, grim rhythm—like boots trudging through the mud of it all. But the last line...that cracked it wide open for me. Rain into tilth—you always know where to plant the hope, even if it comes caked in ash. A well written poem, my friend. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one hits with that heavy, grim rhythm—like boots trudging through the mud of it all. But the last line...that cracked it wide open for me. Rain into tilth—you always know where to plant the hope, even if it comes caked in ash. A well written poem, my friend. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 08:43
A vision
Tony Grannell said:
It\'s like reading the social history of an agrarian life, the darker side, that is. A personal experience and perhaps recalling the words of the father/grandfather\'s generation; history and the present melding together reliving the pains, regrets, loss and sorrows of a life lived and one\'s desire to have, who ever will listen to, accept this. I always enjoy your poems, very much so but this one is outstanding. Very well done, Soren, accolades galore.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 08:26
Tony Grannell said:
It\'s like reading the social history of an agrarian life, the darker side, that is. A personal experience and perhaps recalling the words of the father/grandfather\'s generation; history and the present melding together reliving the pains, regrets, loss and sorrows of a life lived and one\'s desire to have, who ever will listen to, accept this. I always enjoy your poems, very much so but this one is outstanding. Very well done, Soren, accolades galore.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 08:26
A vision
Poetic Licence said:
From a belly full to an empty soul thats quite a journey for someone to take, reads like memories sparked from images in an old photo album, very nicely written
July 9th, 2025 07:27
Poetic Licence said:
From a belly full to an empty soul thats quite a journey for someone to take, reads like memories sparked from images in an old photo album, very nicely written
July 9th, 2025 07:27
A vision
David Wakeling said:
This is very well constructed.Rhymes in different places in the text is refreshing mii amigo.Makes it enjoyable to read. It takes the reade on a wild journey from a full belly and an empty soul to a rose cut and spined.It is a complex poem.I really enjoyed reading well done.
July 9th, 2025 04:26
David Wakeling said:
This is very well constructed.Rhymes in different places in the text is refreshing mii amigo.Makes it enjoyable to read. It takes the reade on a wild journey from a full belly and an empty soul to a rose cut and spined.It is a complex poem.I really enjoyed reading well done.
July 9th, 2025 04:26
Cycles
Goldfinch60 said:
May thay new life be filled with peae and love soren.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May thay new life be filled with peae and love soren.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:23
Cycles
NafisaSB said:
a sad but true state of affairs -long for the good old days, when this was not so rampant..
July 9th, 2025 00:15
NafisaSB said:
a sad but true state of affairs -long for the good old days, when this was not so rampant..
July 9th, 2025 00:15
Cycles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint a haunting cycle of suffering and resilience—powerful and raw. A stark reminder of life\'s relentless storms and the slow growth that follows.
July 8th, 2025 13:28
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint a haunting cycle of suffering and resilience—powerful and raw. A stark reminder of life\'s relentless storms and the slow growth that follows.
July 8th, 2025 13:28
Cycles
arqios said:
And sometimes it also seems like a journey in a spin cycle. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:45
arqios said:
And sometimes it also seems like a journey in a spin cycle. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:45
Cycles
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of out any filth, pain, hurt, destruction there will be an opportunity to regrow and regenerate, that not all hope is lost in the darkness, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of out any filth, pain, hurt, destruction there will be an opportunity to regrow and regenerate, that not all hope is lost in the darkness, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:13
Cycles
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a list of the darker objects that exist in life and the human condition. It has a powerful effect on the reader.But in all the filth is a re-birth which is Natures way.Excellent insight mi amigo
July 8th, 2025 04:37
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a list of the darker objects that exist in life and the human condition. It has a powerful effect on the reader.But in all the filth is a re-birth which is Natures way.Excellent insight mi amigo
July 8th, 2025 04:37
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