Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Wind
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Salvia.S said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Salvia.S said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Traps
Salvia.S said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Salvia.S said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Traps
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
What is greatness
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I 👍💯
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I 👍💯
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Traps
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
Traps
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Traps
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
Traps
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sonnet soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ByqYEzugleE?si=DJoutTLBuEXk7-Rw
August 22nd, 2025 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sonnet soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ByqYEzugleE?si=DJoutTLBuEXk7-Rw
August 22nd, 2025 01:27
Wind
arqios said:
Whisper to roar
Roots torn wide
Her fury spent
Sighs can\'t hide
August 21st, 2025 18:37
arqios said:
Whisper to roar
Roots torn wide
Her fury spent
Sighs can\'t hide
August 21st, 2025 18:37
Wind
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great poem, sorenbarrett, very timely. We are waiting on an angry wind today and tomorrow.
August 21st, 2025 08:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great poem, sorenbarrett, very timely. We are waiting on an angry wind today and tomorrow.
August 21st, 2025 08:13
Wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mariah named, and Mariah sung...your wind becomes voice, lament, and judgment all at once. This is mythic writing, brother. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mariah named, and Mariah sung...your wind becomes voice, lament, and judgment all at once. This is mythic writing, brother. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:07
Wind
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wind\" revolves around the duality of nature\'s forces—its beauty and gentleness contrasted with its destructive power. The wind is personified as an overwhelming force that commands respect and submission from all living beings, symbolizing both the inevitability of nature\'s fury and the fragility of existence. The Poet includes themes of destruction, reverence, and the cyclical nature of life and death. You appear to be seeking to elicit an emotional response regarding humanity\'s relationship with nature, underscoring both reverence and fear in the face of natural forces. It serves as a contemplation on the inevitability of destruction and the cycle of life
August 21st, 2025 06:43
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wind\" revolves around the duality of nature\'s forces—its beauty and gentleness contrasted with its destructive power. The wind is personified as an overwhelming force that commands respect and submission from all living beings, symbolizing both the inevitability of nature\'s fury and the fragility of existence. The Poet includes themes of destruction, reverence, and the cyclical nature of life and death. You appear to be seeking to elicit an emotional response regarding humanity\'s relationship with nature, underscoring both reverence and fear in the face of natural forces. It serves as a contemplation on the inevitability of destruction and the cycle of life
August 21st, 2025 06:43
Wind
Teddy.15 said:
Waves of mounting torment in screams bewail
Rage long dormant from heaving breast to rail
Rooted trees give way to its brutal force
Bringing old giants to their knees in its course
With souch grace you do write, this is beautiful in Italy we call the wind \"il vento\" it\'s also a beautiful word. Stunning my friend. Such emotion and imagery. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
Waves of mounting torment in screams bewail
Rage long dormant from heaving breast to rail
Rooted trees give way to its brutal force
Bringing old giants to their knees in its course
With souch grace you do write, this is beautiful in Italy we call the wind \"il vento\" it\'s also a beautiful word. Stunning my friend. Such emotion and imagery. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 05:06
Seasons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. You captured the cycle...death, rest, and rebirth—in language both delicate and vivid. Well crafted, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. You captured the cycle...death, rest, and rebirth—in language both delicate and vivid. Well crafted, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:56
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