Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Panic
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
Blinded by the light
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
Blinded by the light
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
Blinded by the light
Friendship said:
Nicely done, Soren, Your poem explores the paradoxes and contradictions inherent in human perception and belief. It suggests that even when we think we are on solid ground, proper security is elusive, and our understanding of truth and reality can be distorted. It seems to seek to provoke thought about the nature of truth and the complexities of human understanding, encouraging readers to question their own perceptions and beliefs. It serves as a reflection on the challenges of finding clarity in a world filled with contradictions.
March 6th, 2025 06:39
Friendship said:
Nicely done, Soren, Your poem explores the paradoxes and contradictions inherent in human perception and belief. It suggests that even when we think we are on solid ground, proper security is elusive, and our understanding of truth and reality can be distorted. It seems to seek to provoke thought about the nature of truth and the complexities of human understanding, encouraging readers to question their own perceptions and beliefs. It serves as a reflection on the challenges of finding clarity in a world filled with contradictions.
March 6th, 2025 06:39
Blinded by the light
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Blinded by the light
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
Blinded by the light
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Blinded by the light
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
Blinded by the light
arqios said:
Could be sleight of hand, we’re too engrossed at what’s presented to notice the sidelines 🙏🏻🕊
March 6th, 2025 02:48
arqios said:
Could be sleight of hand, we’re too engrossed at what’s presented to notice the sidelines 🙏🏻🕊
March 6th, 2025 02:48
Men today, gods tomorrow
Friendship said:
this was brilliant and well-crafted, Soren, Your presents a vast tapestry of historical, cultural, and intellectual figures, spanning philosophers and scientists to artists and political leaders. The central idea appears to be a celebration of human achievement and diversity, demonstrating the interconnectedness of various disciplines and ideologies throughout history. By juxtaposing names from disparate eras, cultures, and fields, the poem highlights the shared legacy of human thought and creativity, suggesting that the contributions of these individuals form a collective human narrative.
March 5th, 2025 20:21
Friendship said:
this was brilliant and well-crafted, Soren, Your presents a vast tapestry of historical, cultural, and intellectual figures, spanning philosophers and scientists to artists and political leaders. The central idea appears to be a celebration of human achievement and diversity, demonstrating the interconnectedness of various disciplines and ideologies throughout history. By juxtaposing names from disparate eras, cultures, and fields, the poem highlights the shared legacy of human thought and creativity, suggesting that the contributions of these individuals form a collective human narrative.
March 5th, 2025 20:21
The Night
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores the interplay between darkness and light, fear and peace, and the nature of existence beyond the physical realm. It suggests that while suffering and challenges are inevitable during the day, there is solace and serenity to be found in darkness and the unknown. The poem delves into themes of mortality, transcendence, and the mystical experiences that lie beyond the grasp of human understanding. It also serves as a meditation on the nature of existence, encouraging a reconciliation with fear and an embrace of the unknown.
March 5th, 2025 19:22
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores the interplay between darkness and light, fear and peace, and the nature of existence beyond the physical realm. It suggests that while suffering and challenges are inevitable during the day, there is solace and serenity to be found in darkness and the unknown. The poem delves into themes of mortality, transcendence, and the mystical experiences that lie beyond the grasp of human understanding. It also serves as a meditation on the nature of existence, encouraging a reconciliation with fear and an embrace of the unknown.
March 5th, 2025 19:22
No sugar
Friendship said:
an iteresting concept,Soren,Your poem encapsulates a critical perspective on the relationship between technology and reality, inviting the reader to consider the implications of living in a world where the strings of manipulation are not easily seen.
March 5th, 2025 19:14
Friendship said:
an iteresting concept,Soren,Your poem encapsulates a critical perspective on the relationship between technology and reality, inviting the reader to consider the implications of living in a world where the strings of manipulation are not easily seen.
March 5th, 2025 19:14
Nuts
Mutley Ravishes said:
So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s the spirit!
March 5th, 2025 18:21
Mutley Ravishes said:
So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s the spirit!
March 5th, 2025 18:21
Nuts
Neville said:
There’s a hell of a lot here that reminds me of me .. some of which I am happy about but others I would much rather forget .. I think it is great and can see why so many people have faved it .. Neville 😎👍
March 5th, 2025 15:53
Neville said:
There’s a hell of a lot here that reminds me of me .. some of which I am happy about but others I would much rather forget .. I think it is great and can see why so many people have faved it .. Neville 😎👍
March 5th, 2025 15:53
Nuts
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. We are all crazy. Love the alliteration in this piece.
March 5th, 2025 13:18
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. We are all crazy. Love the alliteration in this piece.
March 5th, 2025 13:18
Nuts
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ve got to have some sort of adventure in life, right? I love this, I\'d say chaotic crazy!
March 5th, 2025 12:43
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ve got to have some sort of adventure in life, right? I love this, I\'d say chaotic crazy!
March 5th, 2025 12:43
Do you know?
RSM0812 said:
By far the best written poem on this sight for months. I completely take off my hat to you for this one. It\'s put professionally and elegantly with a perfect voice. This is hands down my favorite. I appreciate your work.
March 5th, 2025 11:45
RSM0812 said:
By far the best written poem on this sight for months. I completely take off my hat to you for this one. It\'s put professionally and elegantly with a perfect voice. This is hands down my favorite. I appreciate your work.
March 5th, 2025 11:45
Nuts
Friendship said:
Powerful Poem, Soren, your poem is a treasure trove of vivid imagery, painting breathtaking scenes like \"wadded white water\" and \"made my bed with snakes.\" These images evoke a profound sense of the speaker\'s turbulent life, inspiring us to reflect on our own journeys. The \"wasp nest\" serves as a powerful metaphor for self-inflicted pain or conflict, illuminating the complexity of self-discovery. The phrase \"others thought me odd\" gives a sense of external judgment, highlighting societal perceptions of normalcy and encouraging us to embrace our individuality. The rhythm adds a melodic quality to the poem, uplifting our spirits. Soren, sometimes we get caught up in our own little world and never realize how others are rising above their struggles in life and just need our empathy and understanding, and most of all, knowing that their feelings are truly valid.
March 5th, 2025 10:01
Friendship said:
Powerful Poem, Soren, your poem is a treasure trove of vivid imagery, painting breathtaking scenes like \"wadded white water\" and \"made my bed with snakes.\" These images evoke a profound sense of the speaker\'s turbulent life, inspiring us to reflect on our own journeys. The \"wasp nest\" serves as a powerful metaphor for self-inflicted pain or conflict, illuminating the complexity of self-discovery. The phrase \"others thought me odd\" gives a sense of external judgment, highlighting societal perceptions of normalcy and encouraging us to embrace our individuality. The rhythm adds a melodic quality to the poem, uplifting our spirits. Soren, sometimes we get caught up in our own little world and never realize how others are rising above their struggles in life and just need our empathy and understanding, and most of all, knowing that their feelings are truly valid.
March 5th, 2025 10:01
Nuts
Poetic Licence said:
Without risks nothing gained, I think a little crazy is certainly better than insanity, loved the read
March 5th, 2025 07:04
Poetic Licence said:
Without risks nothing gained, I think a little crazy is certainly better than insanity, loved the read
March 5th, 2025 07:04
Nuts
MDStone said:
You know the old saying… “You don’t have to be crazy to belong here… but it helps.” Isn’t it true that a little “crazy” helps you stay sane. Thanks for the fun, Soren, enjoyed the read.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
MDStone said:
You know the old saying… “You don’t have to be crazy to belong here… but it helps.” Isn’t it true that a little “crazy” helps you stay sane. Thanks for the fun, Soren, enjoyed the read.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
Nuts
arqios said:
Had a season or so of such living, much like many a young adult in the 50s, 60s, and even the 70s. Calls to mind such names as McQueen, Dean, Brando, etc. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:15
arqios said:
Had a season or so of such living, much like many a young adult in the 50s, 60s, and even the 70s. Calls to mind such names as McQueen, Dean, Brando, etc. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:15
Nuts
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on yourself but the resolution is clever.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on yourself but the resolution is clever.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:09
Nuts
Cassie58 said:
A risk taker I would say and without that some opportunities would slip by and be lost forever. This is such a fun poem and I love that a little crazy can keep you sane. Now setting yourself on fire, now that’s a different league altogether. I will admit to talking to God before I found out he wasn’t listening:) Much enjoyed sorenbarrett. Happy Wednesday.
March 5th, 2025 04:43
Cassie58 said:
A risk taker I would say and without that some opportunities would slip by and be lost forever. This is such a fun poem and I love that a little crazy can keep you sane. Now setting yourself on fire, now that’s a different league altogether. I will admit to talking to God before I found out he wasn’t listening:) Much enjoyed sorenbarrett. Happy Wednesday.
March 5th, 2025 04:43
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