Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Trapped
orchidee said:

Why, yes, it is about marriage too - me and KP. I will have to chew me leg off then, to get free from this ball and chain she has tied to it, and thrown away the key! lol.
Dunno how else I\'m gonna get free. Could drag me leg down to the locksmiths and get another key made.
Why does it only happen to me - these mad adventures?! lol.

June 22nd, 2024 15:07

Trapped
Teddy.15 said:

Oh I see 🤣 for a moment I thought this was a poem about marriage 🤣 we have nutria here but I confess I had to Google Muskrat, seems they are quite similar. What a poetic piece of brilliance. 🌹

June 22nd, 2024 08:19

Lost images
Teddy.15 said:

Slumberbashing at its finest dearest sorrenbarret, where would we be if we couldn\'t dream. 🌹 Beautiful.

June 22nd, 2024 05:29

Lost images
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren.

Andy

June 22nd, 2024 01:49

Lost images
Bella Shepard said:

I had to read this twice aloud, taking in each beautiful line, a rhyming pattern smooth as silk. The images you conjure, breathtaking. This is a true work of art my friend!

June 21st, 2024 09:02

Lost images
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 21st, 2024 08:48

The machine
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true soren but not in my world, I still speak to people face to face.

Andy

June 21st, 2024 01:42

The machine
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, it is embryonic, Soren. I really enjoyed this – you make your justified reservations very clear. But there is hope. Some folks are detoxifying from their smart phones, eschewing social media.
I haven’t read ‘Brave New World’ for over sixty years; I must give it another go…..


June 20th, 2024 21:17

The machine
Teddy.15 said:

I never use the word hate but if I did it would be for technology. It\'s ruined the world and brought Pandora back from the dead. Yet there are some nice reasons to have it. A superb discussion from your wonderful lines. 🌹

June 20th, 2024 17:17

The machine
MLHnow said:

Love this poem!
I t is valuable for us to consider ourselves in the bigger picture and so removed from our natural connections

June 20th, 2024 16:11

The machine
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

June 20th, 2024 13:30

The machine
2781 said:

It\'s a beast.

June 20th, 2024 09:31

The machine
orchidee said:

I\'m controlled by an old trout KP! lol.

June 20th, 2024 08:10

The machine
Mutley Ravishes said:

Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those years ago

June 20th, 2024 07:14

Smoke of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Dreams come from very many palces soren.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:28

Smoke of dreams
Cassie58 said:

Visually stunning in its movement and unpredictability. Beautifully penned stanzas sorenbarrett.

June 19th, 2024 23:44

Smoke of dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 19th, 2024 11:31

Smoke of dreams
Teddy.15 said:

Burning dreams up in smoke, don\'t we all relate to that dearest sorrenbarret. Brilliant lines as they always are and a wonderful ending from what I remember. Authentic beauty in this poem. 🌹

June 19th, 2024 10:17

Smoke of dreams
2781 said:

Purging the dross?

June 19th, 2024 05:45

Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write soren.

Andy

June 19th, 2024 01:10

Imagination
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. You make the scene come alive.

June 18th, 2024 15:11

Imagination
Alan R said:

Ah that bittersweet!

June 18th, 2024 13:21

Imagination
2781 said:

I feel the frustration.

June 18th, 2024 08:03

Imagination
Doggerel Dave said:

So let\'s misinterpret, Soren - not every hot randy coupling is smooth and easy.....😓💦

June 18th, 2024 07:51

Imagination
orchidee said:

Fido warned me about anything \'hot\' - real or imaginary - in my poem for today! lol.

June 18th, 2024 05:05

Best friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren showing the love that can exist between us and dogs.

Andy

June 18th, 2024 01:45

Best friend
2781 said:

God spelt backwards

June 17th, 2024 19:18

Best friend
Teddy.15 said:

Dearest sorrenbarret charming and so full of wisdom, just because one may be old we still have feelings, and we always deserve love, animals the same. 🌹

June 17th, 2024 15:33

Best friend
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful reminder of the loyalty and unconditional love you can receive from a four legged friend. My dog Solo is amazing. Lovely , warming write sorenbarrett. All the best.

June 17th, 2024 11:07

Best friend
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Man\'s best friend.

June 17th, 2024 10:16



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