Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Point of view
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 11th, 2024 09:49

Point of view
orchidee said:

Yes - and also:
KP - Mrs Botox to me; some sort of \'superstar\' to others! lol.

August 11th, 2024 09:37

Point of view
2781 said:

True, but God searches the heart.

August 11th, 2024 09:01

Darker than black
aDarkerMind said:

a pain I know only too well Soren.

a very impressive write
and I enjoyed every word.

August 11th, 2024 08:36

Point of view
Teddy.15 said:

How very true we all see what we want to through our eyes indeed we all have our own point of view. Nicely done my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

August 11th, 2024 07:44

Point of view
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, precisely Soren. Perception is never neutral, always dependent on POV (Point Of View).Again, neatly poetical, concise.

August 11th, 2024 06:50

Darker than black
Cassie58 said:

A poem of deep loss. Dreams can bring a short lived comfort until reality punches in with the morning light. So poetically expressed and felt deeply. Lovely work.

August 11th, 2024 03:23

Darker than black
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine emotive words soren.

Andy

August 11th, 2024 01:35

Darker than black
Dan Williams said:

I really like the way you use the minimum of words to get your mood across. My dreams don\'t always dissolve. Nice.

August 11th, 2024 00:00

Darker than black
Thad Wilk said:

A very poignant 😢
and emotional write!!
Loss can become
most unbearable
In the night!
Eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 10th, 2024 17:18

Funny Weed
HolesInMyJeans said:

I don’t know where you are but if you ever want to light one up, message me.

August 10th, 2024 16:52

Darker than black
HolesInMyJeans said:

Your rhyming is exquisite

August 10th, 2024 16:49

One in all, all in one
HolesInMyJeans said:

Very good

August 10th, 2024 16:47

Darker than black
orchidee said:

I\'m gonna play a game with KP now.
Toss a coin 100 times. She guesses heads every time; I guess tails every time.
I will win every time. She doesn\'t know the coin has two tails! heehee.

August 10th, 2024 12:14

Darker than black
Bella Shepard said:

The pain of unbearable loss is so tangible in your words, finding comfort only in the unconscious state of dreams. Unbeliveably sad, and yearning for what will never be.
Wonderfully versed my friend.

August 10th, 2024 10:02

Darker than black
Neville said:



this is like breaking bad but only a damned sight better .. and I loved breaking bad .. write on sb .. Neville


August 10th, 2024 08:07

Darker than black
Teddy.15 said:

Darken than black, superb dreams of someone dearly dearly missed. It\'s when we wake up that it\'s more painful 🌹

August 10th, 2024 07:14

Darker than black
Doggerel Dave said:

The pain of separation... But when sleep and the nonexistent possibilities leave you, and the pain returns, the need to confront....So well pinned, Soren.

August 10th, 2024 06:30

Old fashioned political correctness
rebellion_in_sanity said:

WOW - excuse me for the brevity, but \'wow\' filled my mind when I finished reading the poem

August 10th, 2024 06:13

Darker than black
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I had a strange sensation of experiencing something which was raw and primitive yet artistic and eerily beautiful. Please do correct me if I missed the essence of the poem.

August 10th, 2024 06:07

Old fashioned political correctness
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:23

One in all, all in one
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren but I am sure that light will get brighter.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:09

Old fashioned political correctness
Dan Williams said:

Being kind of hard on the vultures dogs, pigs and chickens, eh? The message stands though.

August 9th, 2024 23:43

One in all, all in one
Dan Williams said:

Are you cranking out these gems every day? Amazing.

August 9th, 2024 23:33

One in all, all in one
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem
thought provoking
and true all the above! 🤔
Sugar and salt,
a great
possibility when
It comes to love! ❤️
Awesome read indeed, much enjoyed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 9th, 2024 22:03

One in all, all in one
Doggerel Dave said:

I think that\'s definitely chemistry. Or perhaps complementary. A well polished little gem, Soren.

August 9th, 2024 21:22

One in all, all in one
Cassie58 said:

Left and Right, two wings of the same bird. I saw this quote today. Your poem reminded me. Also opposites attract. Really like what you have penned here.

August 9th, 2024 20:35

One in all, all in one
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Great poem Soren, it really makes you think.

August 9th, 2024 15:41

One in all, all in one
2781 said:

The last line grabs me.

August 9th, 2024 10:05

Old fashioned political correctness
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 9th, 2024 09:35



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