Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Where is the rhyme?
arqios said:
I\'ve seen a first word rhyme posted and it was quite interesting. This being the second!
November 15th, 2022 07:31
arqios said:
I\'ve seen a first word rhyme posted and it was quite interesting. This being the second!
November 15th, 2022 07:31
I alone
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve created something very unique with this rhyming pattern, and it should have a name. I read it aloud, placing emphasis on the first word of each line, and the result was quite intriguing. Will there be more? Hope so.
November 13th, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve created something very unique with this rhyming pattern, and it should have a name. I read it aloud, placing emphasis on the first word of each line, and the result was quite intriguing. Will there be more? Hope so.
November 13th, 2022 14:26
I alone
arqios said:
A profound weaving Soren. Truly moved by this and on a Sunday as well!
November 13th, 2022 07:39
arqios said:
A profound weaving Soren. Truly moved by this and on a Sunday as well!
November 13th, 2022 07:39
Mea Culpa
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyming pattern and cadence of this piece, it makes me want to read it aloud in one breath. It\'s energy is palpable and truly serves to enhance the emotion of a painful relationship. Well done dear friend!
November 12th, 2022 13:44
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyming pattern and cadence of this piece, it makes me want to read it aloud in one breath. It\'s energy is palpable and truly serves to enhance the emotion of a painful relationship. Well done dear friend!
November 12th, 2022 13:44
Go!
Bella Shepard said:
I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself singing it. A great way to refresh!
November 12th, 2022 12:23
Bella Shepard said:
I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself singing it. A great way to refresh!
November 12th, 2022 12:23
Amare
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:19
Amare
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:18
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:18
Amare
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Amare
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
Amare
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
Truth
Bella Shepard said:
You have expressed so beautifully, that truth is in the eye of the beholder. The last two lines are such a wonderful summation. You have weaved this poem so well, and the truth is that it\'s a definite fav.
November 9th, 2022 16:00
Bella Shepard said:
You have expressed so beautifully, that truth is in the eye of the beholder. The last two lines are such a wonderful summation. You have weaved this poem so well, and the truth is that it\'s a definite fav.
November 9th, 2022 16:00
Truth
arqios said:
What is true and being truthful is quite nuanced more so when applied to human interaction and is something assailed or corrupted when injustice and unrighteousness is committed.
November 9th, 2022 09:05
arqios said:
What is true and being truthful is quite nuanced more so when applied to human interaction and is something assailed or corrupted when injustice and unrighteousness is committed.
November 9th, 2022 09:05
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so welcome
November 9th, 2022 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so welcome
November 9th, 2022 08:36
Truth
dusk arising said:
to thine own self be true before all others.
truth is a much undervalued commodity.
November 9th, 2022 08:27
dusk arising said:
to thine own self be true before all others.
truth is a much undervalued commodity.
November 9th, 2022 08:27
Eridu
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you my friend for this piece of history, I\'ve learned something new which I love to do. Our world is built upon the civilizations that came before us, and it is fitting that we honor them. You have done this beautifully and I have truly enjoyed this wonderful lesson!
November 7th, 2022 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you my friend for this piece of history, I\'ve learned something new which I love to do. Our world is built upon the civilizations that came before us, and it is fitting that we honor them. You have done this beautifully and I have truly enjoyed this wonderful lesson!
November 7th, 2022 14:06
Eridu
arqios said:
This is the new frontier, the beginnings of civilisation now erased by centuries of forgetfulness.
November 7th, 2022 09:24
arqios said:
This is the new frontier, the beginnings of civilisation now erased by centuries of forgetfulness.
November 7th, 2022 09:24
Go!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gosh i wanted to edit typos then it got deleted so i retype:
I said Yeah taking it out and ranting in poetry is better than taking it out live on people so this was an enjoyable sarcastic snubbing and sort of venting. Thumbs up.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 14:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gosh i wanted to edit typos then it got deleted so i retype:
I said Yeah taking it out and ranting in poetry is better than taking it out live on people so this was an enjoyable sarcastic snubbing and sort of venting. Thumbs up.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 14:23
Go!
arqios said:
What has occurred Soren? Hope all is well else it’s going, going, gone.
November 6th, 2022 06:56
arqios said:
What has occurred Soren? Hope all is well else it’s going, going, gone.
November 6th, 2022 06:56
Go!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m off; I\'m a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....
November 6th, 2022 06:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m off; I\'m a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....
November 6th, 2022 06:17
Go!
orchidee said:
You mean me?!
What have I done to upset you? Why all this aggro? Do I have to go? Can I stay?! heehee.
November 6th, 2022 03:11
orchidee said:
You mean me?!
What have I done to upset you? Why all this aggro? Do I have to go? Can I stay?! heehee.
November 6th, 2022 03:11
English
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot be more glad, given its almost universal use everywhere, that English is my native tongue. My heart goes out to all for whom it is a second language.
Despite that, let me tell ya that without spellchecker and the word processer embodied within my PC, I would be a useless illiterate slob.
November 5th, 2022 08:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot be more glad, given its almost universal use everywhere, that English is my native tongue. My heart goes out to all for whom it is a second language.
Despite that, let me tell ya that without spellchecker and the word processer embodied within my PC, I would be a useless illiterate slob.
November 5th, 2022 08:05
Mea Culpa
arqios said:
Perhaps not to the 3rd to the last line but the postponement is real. And the reasons aren\'t always the logical kind. TFS Soren.
November 5th, 2022 00:33
arqios said:
Perhaps not to the 3rd to the last line but the postponement is real. And the reasons aren\'t always the logical kind. TFS Soren.
November 5th, 2022 00:33
Tree
L. B. Mek said:
I have always found trees to be calming
knowing how many, stood and reached their fingers, to feel
that connection
thereby surpassing our finite perspective of life,
and so your image of tree as friend resonates with me..
a wonderful read, thank you
November 4th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
I have always found trees to be calming
knowing how many, stood and reached their fingers, to feel
that connection
thereby surpassing our finite perspective of life,
and so your image of tree as friend resonates with me..
a wonderful read, thank you
November 4th, 2022 03:50
Poetic relationship
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, i can so relate
there\'s a hint of the poetic, in most relationships
even those disasters we try to forget..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 4th, 2022 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, i can so relate
there\'s a hint of the poetic, in most relationships
even those disasters we try to forget..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 4th, 2022 03:43
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