Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Timeless task
onepauly said:

we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.

June 29th, 2017 20:43

Timeless task
malubotelho said:

It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.

June 29th, 2017 20:22

Timeless task
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels sometimes when I write, like a surfer who caught the perfect wave.

June 29th, 2017 19:21

Timeless task
kevin browne said:

I think you just proved your point very indeed. leave those unwanted on board thought well alone and get on with your life. great write with reflecting thoughts.

June 29th, 2017 14:37

Indication
onepauly said:

the direction you are going now is just fine.

June 28th, 2017 19:27

Indication
malubotelho said:

Such beautiful way of writing. Thanks

June 28th, 2017 11:02

Indication
Poetic Dan said:

Cheers buddy

June 28th, 2017 08:39

Indication
Mello said:

Good poem dude.

June 28th, 2017 08:33

Mirror mirror
RAJ NANDY said:

WELL COMPOSED ! -Raj

June 27th, 2017 22:37

Mirror mirror
onepauly said:

the mirror of truth speaks for all mankind. from way back in those days

June 27th, 2017 19:28

Mirror mirror
FredPeyer said:

You say you are \"just telling your life story\". Happy are we who can write and express ourselves. I do feel sorry for people who cannot get anything on paper and have to internalize everything.

June 27th, 2017 19:10

Mirror mirror
kevin browne said:

then allow your own reflection to shine out to others and show them the love this world needs. quite a sentimental piece with strong feelings of inner thought and expression. good work, my friend.

June 27th, 2017 14:42

Mirror mirror
malubotelho said:

Very beautiful.

June 27th, 2017 13:37

Ma
Heather T said:

Sounds like this honorable lady was often the anchor in a storm. Lovely, the way you\'ve brought her to remembrance here.

June 26th, 2017 07:43

From where I stand
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write One day we will perhaps \'Give Peace a Chance\'.

June 26th, 2017 00:06

From where I stand
malubotelho said:

It can be achieved if more than 50% of us open our eyes 👀. I have my mind open but shame on me, I close my eyes to something\'s so I cannot get hurt.

June 25th, 2017 21:34

From where I stand
Poetic Dan said:

Why thank you Squire
I believe the unattainable
Is achievable
As you delightfully put it
Homonym that is love

I\'ll keep that one ;)


June 25th, 2017 08:37

Inspired by all
Heather T said:

Awesome sauce. Many parts of a greater Whole meeting on one unique plane.

June 23rd, 2017 15:46

Balance
onepauly said:

we are still growing up

June 22nd, 2017 18:06

Grandmother
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 21st, 2017 17:23

Boundaries of reality
kevin browne said:

let the orchestra begin. beautifully written and solid.

June 21st, 2017 15:14

Dan gets it
Poetic Dan said:

I love how easy your words sit with me now, compared to the first time. You are truly helping feel a transition happening to a new reality tunnel ;)

June 20th, 2017 15:58

Boundaries of reality
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you squire.

June 19th, 2017 07:39

Fofinha
Augustus said:

I like the survival kit. Poem too.

June 18th, 2017 12:49

Bad dunker
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah sublime in brevity. Great wording. Thumbs up.

June 14th, 2017 02:27

Bad dunker
Jeff said:

Lol...nice write...but i have to agree its definitely different lol

June 13th, 2017 09:00

Good dunker
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. The timing has to be spot on when dunking.

June 13th, 2017 00:30

My goal
swingline said:

I see this is about your family . It could extend to everyone as well . Hopefully it will .

June 11th, 2017 07:54

Moving on
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write and very true.

June 8th, 2017 08:12

Write what you feel
Goldfinch60 said:

Always write what you feel. Good write.

June 5th, 2017 00:02



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