Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing your wisdom, dear poet..
\'envisioned synthesis of self cultivated sincerity
amongst this life of survival choices
between chaos and solemnity
is by its very nature: an ideal so hard to master..
but within breathe, is a promise that allows us to strive
and find a path to make that impossible dream
a realised portrait of that self
we painted into existence
one - overcome brush stroke, at a time\'..
April 12th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing your wisdom, dear poet..
\'envisioned synthesis of self cultivated sincerity
amongst this life of survival choices
between chaos and solemnity
is by its very nature: an ideal so hard to master..
but within breathe, is a promise that allows us to strive
and find a path to make that impossible dream
a realised portrait of that self
we painted into existence
one - overcome brush stroke, at a time\'..
April 12th, 2021 04:23
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is now part of you Dan so you can now go forward into your wonderful life with happiness and love.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is now part of you Dan so you can now go forward into your wonderful life with happiness and love.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:18
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
Caring dove said:
It’s nice that you share a video ... 🙂spirit animals ! The description of the badger sounds nice ! I need to be braver .
April 11th, 2021 03:52
Caring dove said:
It’s nice that you share a video ... 🙂spirit animals ! The description of the badger sounds nice ! I need to be braver .
April 11th, 2021 03:52
May every petal be a step
Goldfinch60 said:
So pleased about your news and your words show how wonderful your life will be.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So pleased about your news and your words show how wonderful your life will be.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:08
May every petal be a step
Michael Edwards said:
Great news - really pleased for you. And a fine write too.
April 9th, 2021 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Great news - really pleased for you. And a fine write too.
April 9th, 2021 14:20
May every petal be a step
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words . 🙂🙂 this is definitely one of the best I’ve read from you ,
Lovely words
April 9th, 2021 09:15
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words . 🙂🙂 this is definitely one of the best I’ve read from you ,
Lovely words
April 9th, 2021 09:15
May every petal be a step
L. B. Mek said:
\'I think it may be true when they say, this feeling can conquer all
The only requirements is time mixed nurture and letting go\'..
such a great line
insightful in its potential for universally accessible, interpretation..
glad to read your good news, happy for you my friend
thanks for sharing
April 9th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'I think it may be true when they say, this feeling can conquer all
The only requirements is time mixed nurture and letting go\'..
such a great line
insightful in its potential for universally accessible, interpretation..
glad to read your good news, happy for you my friend
thanks for sharing
April 9th, 2021 05:37
Give anything but hate
L. B. Mek said:
conveying message of acceptance and patience
emphatic volition - expressed with imaginative brevity
utilising abstract to depict actuality
as more choice
than that narrow heritage of circumstance
we like to hide behind,
a wonderful write my friend!
old refreshed with the new, always our avenue
for gifted horizons with a hopeful view...
April 6th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
conveying message of acceptance and patience
emphatic volition - expressed with imaginative brevity
utilising abstract to depict actuality
as more choice
than that narrow heritage of circumstance
we like to hide behind,
a wonderful write my friend!
old refreshed with the new, always our avenue
for gifted horizons with a hopeful view...
April 6th, 2021 04:07
Better to of loved just pick those pieces up
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pop on yesterday to read posts and got inspired as always...\'
that\'s the wonder of this wonderful MPS community you\'ve all helped cultivate,
it\'s such a rare gift of inclusivity
in these challenging times of weaponised - diversity
by separatist mindsets to unity, within humanity!..
a wonderful read as always, dear poet
April 5th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pop on yesterday to read posts and got inspired as always...\'
that\'s the wonder of this wonderful MPS community you\'ve all helped cultivate,
it\'s such a rare gift of inclusivity
in these challenging times of weaponised - diversity
by separatist mindsets to unity, within humanity!..
a wonderful read as always, dear poet
April 5th, 2021 04:59
Give anything but hate
Michael Edwards said:
I love it - one of your very best.
April 5th, 2021 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
I love it - one of your very best.
April 5th, 2021 03:32
Give anything but hate
Doggerel Dave said:
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems before, haven\'t you? :-)
April 5th, 2021 02:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems before, haven\'t you? :-)
April 5th, 2021 02:12
Give anything but hate
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan.
\"SMILE, IT CONFUSES PEOPLE!\"
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan.
\"SMILE, IT CONFUSES PEOPLE!\"
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:38
Better to of loved just pick those pieces up
Goldfinch60 said:
Two souls as one is real love Dan.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Two souls as one is real love Dan.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:15
Better to of loved just pick those pieces up
SureshG said:
So memorable, so well said
April 4th, 2021 06:49
SureshG said:
So memorable, so well said
April 4th, 2021 06:49
Better to of loved just pick those pieces up
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece filled with gems dear Dan - souls interconnecting brings bountiful blessings.
April 4th, 2021 06:22
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece filled with gems dear Dan - souls interconnecting brings bountiful blessings.
April 4th, 2021 06:22
All in a word....
Goldfinch60 said:
You have really found your way into a great life with your wife and baby making it so wonderful. You can only move forward now in love and happiness.
Andy
April 3rd, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
You have really found your way into a great life with your wife and baby making it so wonderful. You can only move forward now in love and happiness.
Andy
April 3rd, 2021 00:35
All in a word....
A.H. Browning said:
“Life, was first and wife is best, this is all nothing but a never-ending test”
Nice write.
Love that.
Kindest Regards,
AH Browning.
April 2nd, 2021 18:06
A.H. Browning said:
“Life, was first and wife is best, this is all nothing but a never-ending test”
Nice write.
Love that.
Kindest Regards,
AH Browning.
April 2nd, 2021 18:06
Side by side
AuburnScribbler said:
A really nice message here Poetic Dan, and beautifully delivered.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
March 29th, 2021 07:33
AuburnScribbler said:
A really nice message here Poetic Dan, and beautifully delivered.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
March 29th, 2021 07:33
Side by side
L. B. Mek said:
\'For mistakes can be made but always forgiven
If you hide no emotions and come back to equilibrium\'..
indeed, truth will out!
that\'s that blinked-truth, between you and that reflection in the mirror,
you acknowledge your truth and that reflection gets ever clearer..
March 29th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'For mistakes can be made but always forgiven
If you hide no emotions and come back to equilibrium\'..
indeed, truth will out!
that\'s that blinked-truth, between you and that reflection in the mirror,
you acknowledge your truth and that reflection gets ever clearer..
March 29th, 2021 05:15
Co creation is the only way
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we owe our first breath to their last sipped sigh\'s of regret,
as those before us, we too deserve to strive and cement this legacy of continuity for humanity, however trivial our pages entry..
very true words my friend, a reassuring read
March 29th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we owe our first breath to their last sipped sigh\'s of regret,
as those before us, we too deserve to strive and cement this legacy of continuity for humanity, however trivial our pages entry..
very true words my friend, a reassuring read
March 29th, 2021 04:45
Side by side
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
I\'m all confused. lol. Am I \'Me, Myself, or I\'? I might be all three of those guys. I bet they are one and the same guy!
March 29th, 2021 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
I\'m all confused. lol. Am I \'Me, Myself, or I\'? I might be all three of those guys. I bet they are one and the same guy!
March 29th, 2021 02:00
Side by side
Caring dove said:
Nice words 🙂 I need that , more confidence in who I am ,
I’m glad you are feeling confident 🙂
It’s difficult when we feel unsure of ourselves
March 29th, 2021 01:31
Caring dove said:
Nice words 🙂 I need that , more confidence in who I am ,
I’m glad you are feeling confident 🙂
It’s difficult when we feel unsure of ourselves
March 29th, 2021 01:31
Co creation is the only way
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Dan and the picture is so wonderful in showing your child the glory of the wild world in all its forms.
Andy
March 29th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Dan and the picture is so wonderful in showing your child the glory of the wild world in all its forms.
Andy
March 29th, 2021 00:44
Inside every living being
dusk arising said:
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown. Writing poetry does that for people if they put their heart into it and you have truly put your heart into your words. We can all clearly see that Dan.
It\'s great to see you acknowledging that there will be down periods and that you are preparing yourself with new gained self knowledge and faith for those times if and when they arise.
On a side note, I have really enjoyed seeing the videos of your daughters progress as she grows. It will be joyous to watch her character developing.
March 28th, 2021 17:35
dusk arising said:
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown. Writing poetry does that for people if they put their heart into it and you have truly put your heart into your words. We can all clearly see that Dan.
It\'s great to see you acknowledging that there will be down periods and that you are preparing yourself with new gained self knowledge and faith for those times if and when they arise.
On a side note, I have really enjoyed seeing the videos of your daughters progress as she grows. It will be joyous to watch her character developing.
March 28th, 2021 17:35
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