Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Mothering matters
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Dan. I am so gad that you are in your obviously natural place in your life. It can now only get better - well done.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Dan. I am so gad that you are in your obviously natural place in your life. It can now only get better - well done.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:40
Mothering matters
Olivia. said:
Really beautiful and thoughtful words! Fantastic x
March 18th, 2021 18:20
Olivia. said:
Really beautiful and thoughtful words! Fantastic x
March 18th, 2021 18:20
Mental health matters to me
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just because we give it a name does it really explain\'..
you said it all in that first line dear empathetic poet..
although I appreciate the rhyme (lobotomy), maybe its unhealthy to forget the past wholly,
because then we also lose: the lessons to be gained, my talented friend
March 15th, 2021 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just because we give it a name does it really explain\'..
you said it all in that first line dear empathetic poet..
although I appreciate the rhyme (lobotomy), maybe its unhealthy to forget the past wholly,
because then we also lose: the lessons to be gained, my talented friend
March 15th, 2021 06:15
Mental health matters to me
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have ups downs, good times and bad ones but each of them we have gotten through and each future moment we go into shows that our life is working well for each of us.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have ups downs, good times and bad ones but each of them we have gotten through and each future moment we go into shows that our life is working well for each of us.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:27
Mental health matters to me
dusk arising said:
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know there is something within us which needs to cry out. We use these words to mine for the centres of our toubled minds. We are lucky because we know there is that need to express something wrong inside. Lucky? ..yes indeed.... those who are carrying something unusual or wrong inside but cannot realise it is there are not so fortunate. Instead of fine words, such as yours today, they physically carry out actions which can be harmful to themselves, others and all of us.
Mental health is a major issue for each of us in our journey, each an individual unique path, through life.
Dan, if we are to be judged on the content and achievements of our life\'s span, then surely the most significant facets will be not how high we jumped but how high we had to crawl to overcome the obstacles life presented and then, highest of all - how we reached out our hand to ease the burden of others along their path.
March 14th, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know there is something within us which needs to cry out. We use these words to mine for the centres of our toubled minds. We are lucky because we know there is that need to express something wrong inside. Lucky? ..yes indeed.... those who are carrying something unusual or wrong inside but cannot realise it is there are not so fortunate. Instead of fine words, such as yours today, they physically carry out actions which can be harmful to themselves, others and all of us.
Mental health is a major issue for each of us in our journey, each an individual unique path, through life.
Dan, if we are to be judged on the content and achievements of our life\'s span, then surely the most significant facets will be not how high we jumped but how high we had to crawl to overcome the obstacles life presented and then, highest of all - how we reached out our hand to ease the burden of others along their path.
March 14th, 2021 06:19
Mental health matters to me
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony in our lives .
Mental health matters ..
I still have some issues which I need to resolve . Trauma is difficult and so is mental health issues ... i understand.
Good piece of writing here 🙂
To rise above everything that hurts us .. we all need to do that
I especially like your last verse
March 14th, 2021 04:33
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony in our lives .
Mental health matters ..
I still have some issues which I need to resolve . Trauma is difficult and so is mental health issues ... i understand.
Good piece of writing here 🙂
To rise above everything that hurts us .. we all need to do that
I especially like your last verse
March 14th, 2021 04:33
Opinions are not irrelevant
dusk arising said:
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53
dusk arising said:
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem ) trees are beautiful
March 13th, 2021 13:14
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem ) trees are beautiful
March 13th, 2021 13:14
Opinions are not irrelevant
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write Dan. Things scatter in the light that’s for sure.
March 13th, 2021 09:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write Dan. Things scatter in the light that’s for sure.
March 13th, 2021 09:24
Opinions are not irrelevant
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words once more Dan, the trouble with lying is that you need to remember what lie you told to who. Speaking the truth is so much easier.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words once more Dan, the trouble with lying is that you need to remember what lie you told to who. Speaking the truth is so much easier.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 02:57
You are wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all go our own way in this life, if we all went the same way it would get awfully crowded.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all go our own way in this life, if we all went the same way it would get awfully crowded.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:25
Our stories matter
L. B. Mek said:
tempered delivery of impassioned honesty,
wonderfully raw and proud..
a great read! dear talented poet
March 12th, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
tempered delivery of impassioned honesty,
wonderfully raw and proud..
a great read! dear talented poet
March 12th, 2021 06:01
Our stories matter
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a summary of all you ever wanted to say in one place. I admired it...you will be coming back to write more, won\'t you? Not your final effort here, is it?
March 11th, 2021 20:30
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a summary of all you ever wanted to say in one place. I admired it...you will be coming back to write more, won\'t you? Not your final effort here, is it?
March 11th, 2021 20:30
Recognise and connect
L. B. Mek said:
I find it profound that you\'re spreading the teachings of patience in your picture and its relation to the meaningful concept of self-discovery in your words, symbiotic in its distillation of realised, self worth..
a great share my friend,
as always so happy to read of your continued success in achieving and Maintaining, life\'s fruits of self-planted, fulfilment
March 9th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
I find it profound that you\'re spreading the teachings of patience in your picture and its relation to the meaningful concept of self-discovery in your words, symbiotic in its distillation of realised, self worth..
a great share my friend,
as always so happy to read of your continued success in achieving and Maintaining, life\'s fruits of self-planted, fulfilment
March 9th, 2021 05:48
Recognise and connect
Goldfinch60 said:
That good life is there for us all and you have certainly found it now.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That good life is there for us all and you have certainly found it now.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:25
Recognise and connect
FredPeyer said:
You said it well Dan. Now let\'s look for that place!!!
March 8th, 2021 11:45
FredPeyer said:
You said it well Dan. Now let\'s look for that place!!!
March 8th, 2021 11:45
We are all a hero to someone
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have heroes in our life who we have looked up to and we too may have been heroes to others.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have heroes in our life who we have looked up to and we too may have been heroes to others.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:14
We are all a hero to someone
FredPeyer said:
I once was a hero to my kids when they were little. It has all been downhill since then. But now they accept me the way I am, which is fine with me.
March 7th, 2021 16:20
FredPeyer said:
I once was a hero to my kids when they were little. It has all been downhill since then. But now they accept me the way I am, which is fine with me.
March 7th, 2021 16:20
We are all a hero to someone
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s a fun one, Dan.
Killer second line - definitely tickled my sense of humour.
Hopeful third - I do hope that\'s true for absolutely everyone.....
March 7th, 2021 03:15
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s a fun one, Dan.
Killer second line - definitely tickled my sense of humour.
Hopeful third - I do hope that\'s true for absolutely everyone.....
March 7th, 2021 03:15
Don\'t disc me wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you know that you are on the right track in your life.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you know that you are on the right track in your life.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:20
Don\'t disc me wrong
FredPeyer said:
I like this poem, Dan. You are so right that we all give out these vibes, sometimes unaware, sometimes on purpose. Good words of advise!
March 6th, 2021 10:50
FredPeyer said:
I like this poem, Dan. You are so right that we all give out these vibes, sometimes unaware, sometimes on purpose. Good words of advise!
March 6th, 2021 10:50
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