Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Signals
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful words Dan and really delightful video - so glad I caught this inspiring post.
March 19th, 2021 17:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful words Dan and really delightful video - so glad I caught this inspiring post.
March 19th, 2021 17:11
Emotions
Caring dove said:
Well expressed ... “ a heavy heart but still strong “ some of us go through so much and feel so much sadness yet we endure it and we come through it .,, I especially love your last verse
March 19th, 2021 11:07
Caring dove said:
Well expressed ... “ a heavy heart but still strong “ some of us go through so much and feel so much sadness yet we endure it and we come through it .,, I especially love your last verse
March 19th, 2021 11:07
Signals
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is up to us, to reflect and learn the unspoken words, that neither child nor dog can explain.
There is no such thing as bad behaviour... just a misunderstanding or miscommunication, which leads to a lack of trust in what we are doing.\'
wise words to contemplate and meditate on those self-giving qualities like restraint and patience required of us,
when we take on those burdensome: but oh so rewarding titles, of nurturer\'s or guardian\'s..
wonderful words dear poet, personally I can\'t recall commenting to this poem before, either way, a write imbued with such timeless sentiment\'s and messages should be reposted time and again
March 19th, 2021 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is up to us, to reflect and learn the unspoken words, that neither child nor dog can explain.
There is no such thing as bad behaviour... just a misunderstanding or miscommunication, which leads to a lack of trust in what we are doing.\'
wise words to contemplate and meditate on those self-giving qualities like restraint and patience required of us,
when we take on those burdensome: but oh so rewarding titles, of nurturer\'s or guardian\'s..
wonderful words dear poet, personally I can\'t recall commenting to this poem before, either way, a write imbued with such timeless sentiment\'s and messages should be reposted time and again
March 19th, 2021 06:46
Mothering matters
L. B. Mek said:
how uncompromisingly brave and full of impassioned words of gratitude, penned: not out of guilt or some sense of timely duty,
but born of admiration and a need to express appreciation for all those subtle acts of love and support they instinctively imbue into our daily lives..
such a brilliant dedication my friend!
a write I wish I had the ability to pen myself
March 19th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
how uncompromisingly brave and full of impassioned words of gratitude, penned: not out of guilt or some sense of timely duty,
but born of admiration and a need to express appreciation for all those subtle acts of love and support they instinctively imbue into our daily lives..
such a brilliant dedication my friend!
a write I wish I had the ability to pen myself
March 19th, 2021 05:11
Mothering matters
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Dan. I am so gad that you are in your obviously natural place in your life. It can now only get better - well done.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Dan. I am so gad that you are in your obviously natural place in your life. It can now only get better - well done.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:40
Mothering matters
Olivia. said:
Really beautiful and thoughtful words! Fantastic x
March 18th, 2021 18:20
Olivia. said:
Really beautiful and thoughtful words! Fantastic x
March 18th, 2021 18:20
Mental health matters to me
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just because we give it a name does it really explain\'..
you said it all in that first line dear empathetic poet..
although I appreciate the rhyme (lobotomy), maybe its unhealthy to forget the past wholly,
because then we also lose: the lessons to be gained, my talented friend
March 15th, 2021 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just because we give it a name does it really explain\'..
you said it all in that first line dear empathetic poet..
although I appreciate the rhyme (lobotomy), maybe its unhealthy to forget the past wholly,
because then we also lose: the lessons to be gained, my talented friend
March 15th, 2021 06:15
Mental health matters to me
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have ups downs, good times and bad ones but each of them we have gotten through and each future moment we go into shows that our life is working well for each of us.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have ups downs, good times and bad ones but each of them we have gotten through and each future moment we go into shows that our life is working well for each of us.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:27
Mental health matters to me
dusk arising said:
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know there is something within us which needs to cry out. We use these words to mine for the centres of our toubled minds. We are lucky because we know there is that need to express something wrong inside. Lucky? ..yes indeed.... those who are carrying something unusual or wrong inside but cannot realise it is there are not so fortunate. Instead of fine words, such as yours today, they physically carry out actions which can be harmful to themselves, others and all of us.
Mental health is a major issue for each of us in our journey, each an individual unique path, through life.
Dan, if we are to be judged on the content and achievements of our life\'s span, then surely the most significant facets will be not how high we jumped but how high we had to crawl to overcome the obstacles life presented and then, highest of all - how we reached out our hand to ease the burden of others along their path.
March 14th, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know there is something within us which needs to cry out. We use these words to mine for the centres of our toubled minds. We are lucky because we know there is that need to express something wrong inside. Lucky? ..yes indeed.... those who are carrying something unusual or wrong inside but cannot realise it is there are not so fortunate. Instead of fine words, such as yours today, they physically carry out actions which can be harmful to themselves, others and all of us.
Mental health is a major issue for each of us in our journey, each an individual unique path, through life.
Dan, if we are to be judged on the content and achievements of our life\'s span, then surely the most significant facets will be not how high we jumped but how high we had to crawl to overcome the obstacles life presented and then, highest of all - how we reached out our hand to ease the burden of others along their path.
March 14th, 2021 06:19
Mental health matters to me
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony in our lives .
Mental health matters ..
I still have some issues which I need to resolve . Trauma is difficult and so is mental health issues ... i understand.
Good piece of writing here 🙂
To rise above everything that hurts us .. we all need to do that
I especially like your last verse
March 14th, 2021 04:33
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony in our lives .
Mental health matters ..
I still have some issues which I need to resolve . Trauma is difficult and so is mental health issues ... i understand.
Good piece of writing here 🙂
To rise above everything that hurts us .. we all need to do that
I especially like your last verse
March 14th, 2021 04:33
Opinions are not irrelevant
dusk arising said:
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53
dusk arising said:
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem ) trees are beautiful
March 13th, 2021 13:14
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem ) trees are beautiful
March 13th, 2021 13:14
Opinions are not irrelevant
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write Dan. Things scatter in the light that’s for sure.
March 13th, 2021 09:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write Dan. Things scatter in the light that’s for sure.
March 13th, 2021 09:24
Opinions are not irrelevant
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words once more Dan, the trouble with lying is that you need to remember what lie you told to who. Speaking the truth is so much easier.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words once more Dan, the trouble with lying is that you need to remember what lie you told to who. Speaking the truth is so much easier.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 02:57
You are wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all go our own way in this life, if we all went the same way it would get awfully crowded.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all go our own way in this life, if we all went the same way it would get awfully crowded.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:25
Our stories matter
L. B. Mek said:
tempered delivery of impassioned honesty,
wonderfully raw and proud..
a great read! dear talented poet
March 12th, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
tempered delivery of impassioned honesty,
wonderfully raw and proud..
a great read! dear talented poet
March 12th, 2021 06:01
Our stories matter
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a summary of all you ever wanted to say in one place. I admired it...you will be coming back to write more, won\'t you? Not your final effort here, is it?
March 11th, 2021 20:30
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a summary of all you ever wanted to say in one place. I admired it...you will be coming back to write more, won\'t you? Not your final effort here, is it?
March 11th, 2021 20:30
Recognise and connect
L. B. Mek said:
I find it profound that you\'re spreading the teachings of patience in your picture and its relation to the meaningful concept of self-discovery in your words, symbiotic in its distillation of realised, self worth..
a great share my friend,
as always so happy to read of your continued success in achieving and Maintaining, life\'s fruits of self-planted, fulfilment
March 9th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
I find it profound that you\'re spreading the teachings of patience in your picture and its relation to the meaningful concept of self-discovery in your words, symbiotic in its distillation of realised, self worth..
a great share my friend,
as always so happy to read of your continued success in achieving and Maintaining, life\'s fruits of self-planted, fulfilment
March 9th, 2021 05:48
Recognise and connect
Goldfinch60 said:
That good life is there for us all and you have certainly found it now.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That good life is there for us all and you have certainly found it now.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:25
Recognise and connect
FredPeyer said:
You said it well Dan. Now let\'s look for that place!!!
March 8th, 2021 11:45
FredPeyer said:
You said it well Dan. Now let\'s look for that place!!!
March 8th, 2021 11:45
We are all a hero to someone
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have heroes in our life who we have looked up to and we too may have been heroes to others.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have heroes in our life who we have looked up to and we too may have been heroes to others.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:14
We are all a hero to someone
FredPeyer said:
I once was a hero to my kids when they were little. It has all been downhill since then. But now they accept me the way I am, which is fine with me.
March 7th, 2021 16:20
FredPeyer said:
I once was a hero to my kids when they were little. It has all been downhill since then. But now they accept me the way I am, which is fine with me.
March 7th, 2021 16:20
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