Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Shuffle and flow
SureshG said:

There is beauty and happiness in the simplest of action, as you have so poetically declared here.

July 9th, 2021 12:57

Shuffle and flow
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
worded truth, from first to last
and that\'s no exaggeration, my friend
life-affirmingly: Brilliant!

July 9th, 2021 04:06

Shuffle and flow
Goldfinch60 said:

\"to be you is the greatest gift you\'ll ever get. \" So very true Dan, we must always be thankful for that gift.

Andy

July 9th, 2021 01:14

Shuffle and flow
Poetic Dan said:

https://youtube.com/shorts/iM9lsVBFRe0?feature=share

July 9th, 2021 00:46

Longboards & You
Doggerel Dave said:

I really like the happiness in your poem/song, Dan.
Ashamed to say though, I\'m not quite sure exactly what longboards are..?
Your video> Great head scarf - reminds me of the TV show Survivor - any connection? ๐Ÿ˜Š

July 8th, 2021 18:16

Longboards & You
L. B. Mek said:

\'Putting light in the dark
The day they entered my heart
Grounded by a hand\'..
you have such a way of getting
to that core nucleus of worded veracity
in all the wisdom you imbue
within every write, I read from you...
thank you!
dear Poet: sincerely

July 8th, 2021 05:10

Longboards & You
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light get brighter every day Dan.

Andy

July 8th, 2021 02:57

Blown away what else can I say
Accidental Poet said:

A wonderful gesture from a loving daughter Dan. Your pride is showing in your daughter\'s and your own words. ; )

July 2nd, 2021 08:42

Blown away what else can I say
L. B. Mek said:

\'Making strangers become friends and fear disappear
Leaving only inspiration in the atmosphere
In hope the voices reconnects our souls to become clear\'..
what an empowering mantra of Life
simply beautiful!
remember, being busy: is in-itself a blessing
thank you for sharing

July 2nd, 2021 05:02

Blown away what else can I say
Caring dove said:

Really like this ... Dan ๐Ÿ™‚nice to see your poems again

July 2nd, 2021 04:53

Blown away what else can I say
orchidee said:

A fine write and video Dan.

July 2nd, 2021 04:11

Blown away what else can I say
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words and beautiful song from your lovely daughter Dan.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 02:49

Surrendering to the moments
Neville said:


It seems to me Dan you are a survivor .. moved on and grown .. brilliant post by the way .............

Neville :)

June 30th, 2021 08:48

Surrendering to the moments
dusk arising said:

You\'ve come a long way to find that now you too can float and probably always could have done. You clicked a switch inside yourself. How? You wroye it out of your system..... its the poets way.

June 26th, 2021 07:47

Surrendering to the moments
Accidental Poet said:

Life is a roller coaster ride Dan. We reinvent ourselves as needed. Always strive to be who your heart tells you to be. Great write here Dan. ; )

June 26th, 2021 07:36

Surrendering to the moments
Goldfinch60 said:

The place you are Dan is so much better than the one you used to be in. We all have up and down moments but the ups always outweigh the downs.

Andy

June 26th, 2021 00:55

Surrendering to the moments
Saxon Crow said:

Totally get where you\'re coming from Dan. We are the embodiment of kaleidoscope! Ive learnt to accept this about myself amd have become pretty comfortable with it to the point where i content being whoever or whatever I am at that moment.
Great poem mate.

June 26th, 2021 00:19

My first dog blog
L. B. Mek said:

\'I\'m no longer afraid
to make mine more known, pushing
past any judgement, criticism or going unnoticed .
All things help growth,
I can\'t stop what I started.\'
missed your voice, lately
so I went hunting and uncovered this gem
I think this may be where it all started
hopefully it will gift you a reminder
on those busy days, when you haven\'t time enough
to take a second to realise: you\'re doing
something you have a passion for
one of those rare gifts of life, we take for granted
far, too often..
hope all is well, dear poet


June 17th, 2021 03:19

Water is life, so is my poetic side
Saxon Crow said:

Can totally relatw to this Dan. Im off to wales too! Leaving tomorrow for a week. Where abouts you heading?

June 3rd, 2021 01:32

Water is life, so is my poetic side
myself and me said:

Beautifully penned.

June 2nd, 2021 16:13

Water is life, so is my poetic side
Doggerel Dave said:

Your life seems pretty full and interesting, Dan. Your lines very positive with a pulse. A life pulse, I think.

June 2nd, 2021 06:50

Water is life, so is my poetic side
Goldfinch60 said:

And so you should be proud, the journey you have made over the last few years is so uplifting and you have shown it to us all. Keep moving forward with the joy, wonder and love that is now with you.

Andy

June 2nd, 2021 00:59

Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
L. B. Mek said:

\'I\'ve made all my choices but moments
never stay the same,
to adapt and keep moving forward
is our spirit\'s main aim.\'
such a great line, happy to read your good news, congrats!

May 11th, 2021 04:16

Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
Goldfinch60 said:

She is a beautiful young lady Dan and with you showing her the way to be free within herself she is going to have wonderful life - that is a tribute to you Dan showing how far you have come in your life as well.

Andy

May 11th, 2021 00:21

Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
AuburnScribbler said:

Love the message here Poetic Dan, a nourishing and undying wish, masterful written down.

Bravo, and I hope all is well.

May 10th, 2021 10:06

Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
dusk arising said:

When does the learning stop.... never. And amazing that one so young becomes the teacher too. She\'s growing up lovely Dan.

May 10th, 2021 09:21

Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot
L. B. Mek said:

\'If we don\'t have the energy to back up what we think we know, then to them we may as well know nothing at all.

For instinctively driven beings understand this kind of knowledge is deeply home grown, nothing can take away what you already know.\'
such, life-Affirmingly empowering wisdom
you choose to share, dear Poet
humbly, I thank you!
(that\'s such a bad-ass pic as well
I counted five Trusting, submissive
brethren\'s and sisters of this: existence Experience
by your side
that\'s my definition of living the Dream
my friend, so happy for you
keep strong!)

May 10th, 2021 04:57

Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot
Poetic Dan said:

https://youtube.com/shorts/nS6WYOGV2wo?feature=share

If you\'re interested lol

May 9th, 2021 02:54

My little slice of heaven
jarcher54 said:

The other night my 31-year-old daughter texted me that, as she was finishing up her thesis at 3 am, she missed the days when she was a school girl and the two of us night owls worked quietly--she on her homework, me on my legal stuff--side by side at the kitchen table. I admit it made me cry.

May 9th, 2021 00:32

My little slice of heaven
dusk arising said:

Really good to read how your mind at peace has come to love the everday things around you.
What a different man you have become since you first showed us your enquiring mind at work on MPS Dan.
You are the living proof of the phrase \"I wrote a change into my life\".
THere are many days ahead, where will changes end?

May 8th, 2021 12:38



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