Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Enough is enough
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Enough is enough
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . It’s upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . It’s upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Enough is enough
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Enough is enough
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. I’m so glad to know that you’ll never give up.
“memories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.”
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessings…
“Let your crew set you free”…
Look at your latest blessing…she’s a sight to behold. You’re looking at the future…guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do it…YES YOU CAN…YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so glad to read your poetry…now that I’m able to again.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. I’m so glad to know that you’ll never give up.
“memories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.”
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessings…
“Let your crew set you free”…
Look at your latest blessing…she’s a sight to behold. You’re looking at the future…guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do it…YES YOU CAN…YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so glad to read your poetry…now that I’m able to again.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Enough is enough
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
Homemade scarf
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words relieve the pain in your arm, over the years I have known you you have relieved other hard times through poetry so you know that you can relieve this as well.
Sending healing thoughts to you Dan.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words relieve the pain in your arm, over the years I have known you you have relieved other hard times through poetry so you know that you can relieve this as well.
Sending healing thoughts to you Dan.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:16
Homemade scarf
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.
July 16th, 2021 21:49
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.
July 16th, 2021 21:49
Homemade scarf
Neville said:
these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..
July 16th, 2021 16:25
Neville said:
these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..
July 16th, 2021 16:25
Homemade scarf
Saxon Crow said:
I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!
July 16th, 2021 14:18
Saxon Crow said:
I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!
July 16th, 2021 14:18
Homemade scarf
SureshG said:
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain
Hope the remedy is found soon
July 16th, 2021 12:33
SureshG said:
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain
Hope the remedy is found soon
July 16th, 2021 12:33
Homemade scarf
Thekkinkkattil said:
May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world
July 16th, 2021 07:39
Thekkinkkattil said:
May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world
July 16th, 2021 07:39
Homemade scarf
L. B. Mek said:
with this poetic tool of self-expression
you\'ve been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)
July 16th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
with this poetic tool of self-expression
you\'ve been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)
July 16th, 2021 06:32
Homemade scarf
Caring dove said:
Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .
Nice poem ))
July 16th, 2021 05:40
Caring dove said:
Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .
Nice poem ))
July 16th, 2021 05:40
Homemade scarf
dusk arising said:
Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
July 16th, 2021 05:26
dusk arising said:
Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
July 16th, 2021 05:26
You know it
SureshG said:
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.
July 15th, 2021 12:10
SureshG said:
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.
July 15th, 2021 12:10
You know it
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊
July 13th, 2021 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊
July 13th, 2021 19:29
You know it
Goldfinch60 said:
Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:50
All risks are worth it in the end
SureshG said:
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable
July 13th, 2021 12:41
SureshG said:
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable
July 13th, 2021 12:41
All risks are worth it in the end
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
\'I don\'t even venture back, unless
I\'m grounded before!\'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read
July 13th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
\'I don\'t even venture back, unless
I\'m grounded before!\'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read
July 13th, 2021 04:40
All risks are worth it in the end
myself and me said:
Absolutely. She is such an angel.
July 12th, 2021 22:50
myself and me said:
Absolutely. She is such an angel.
July 12th, 2021 22:50
All risks are worth it in the end
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:23
All risks are worth it in the end
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:23
Don\'t play in the park if you lack the art!
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words both written and spoken Dan, some people have no idea of respecting living things, when I walk by My River I see many dogs and most of them are free and happy, the odd one is kept on a lead but most are free to roam. The other day I as surrounded by four greyhounds all wanting me to stroke them, one of them had only one front leg but was still able to run around happily with the others and there owners smiling and laughing with them - and me.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words both written and spoken Dan, some people have no idea of respecting living things, when I walk by My River I see many dogs and most of them are free and happy, the odd one is kept on a lead but most are free to roam. The other day I as surrounded by four greyhounds all wanting me to stroke them, one of them had only one front leg but was still able to run around happily with the others and there owners smiling and laughing with them - and me.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:54
We all have darkness
myself and me said:
Some was engulfed by the darkness, those who find the light survived. Thank you for sharing.
July 10th, 2021 21:59
myself and me said:
Some was engulfed by the darkness, those who find the light survived. Thank you for sharing.
July 10th, 2021 21:59
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