Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational
AlitaOpal said:

Well put and ditto.. I too have gone through a dark tunnel with mine only to realise the situation only brings us closer.. Love to you and your wife ❤️

February 24th, 2021 17:27

Thankful to nature everyday
Caring dove said:

Nature is lovely . I might be having a sad day and a little bird might make me smile ... even if just a little .

Nice poem 🙂

February 24th, 2021 17:16

Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational
Caring dove said:

Short but interesting writing . I liked it .

February 24th, 2021 17:13

Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational
Jerry Reynolds said:

Hopeful write, Dan.

February 24th, 2021 14:54

Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational
Neville said:

this has got to be one of your very best to date ... not only a brill little poem but one that contains a whole lot of insight and truth ..... write on brother Dan .........................Neville

February 24th, 2021 13:40

Both are part of the whole, rational or irrational
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

February 24th, 2021 11:17

This changed my life
FredPeyer said:

I guess, since I am a \'Lefty\', I never had tension in my life! :-)

February 20th, 2021 11:24

This changed my life
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good lesson there, Dan.

February 20th, 2021 10:08

This changed my life
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

February 20th, 2021 03:19

This changed my life
Goldfinch60 said:

You have come such a long way Dan and now you are in that wonderful place for which you have been aiming, may your life be filled with the joy and love that you have earned.

Andy

February 20th, 2021 03:08

This changed my life
dusk arising said:

You have a very relaxing tone to your voice this morning and with the gulls i can hear in the background you really capture the air of a salty old sea dog passing on pearls of wisdom whilst he sits on the quayside mending his nets.


February 20th, 2021 02:24

Two heads are better than one when love becomes higher than us
FredPeyer said:

Great write Dan, now if we could only recognize that \'higher purpose\'. Some of us do, some of us still struggle.

February 19th, 2021 11:19

Two heads are better than one when love becomes higher than us
L. B. Mek said:

so great to read you\'re beginning to come out on the other side of what\'s been a turbulent time, happy for you my friend..
this was another wonderful read, loved the title\'s wordplay with your picture, indeed:
\'on our parent\'s shoulders
we lucky few, grew
to dream, of aspirational stars
once, so seemingly
far beyond: our grasp\'

February 19th, 2021 06:50

Two heads are better than one when love becomes higher than us
orchidee said:

Good write and clip Dan.

February 19th, 2021 03:12

Two heads are better than one when love becomes higher than us
Goldfinch60 said:

That inner child is within all of us and can lead us into the wonder of life that is now with you Dan.

Andy

February 19th, 2021 02:35

I wrote my worries away
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

February 11th, 2021 04:17

I wrote my worries away
Goldfinch60 said:

The freedom that has become you Dan will only get brighter as each day progresses.

Andy

February 10th, 2021 01:19

Short & Sweet as life should be
AlitaOpal said:

I heard life was a play and the one we call God plays all the parts.. Why not? Make it up as you go along.. isn\'t that what life is? We are forever improvising aren\'t we?

February 9th, 2021 20:31

I wrote my worries away
AlitaOpal said:

All in a nutshell! Indeed let yourself be free! Wonderful piece ❣️

February 9th, 2021 19:38

I wrote my worries away
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

February 9th, 2021 13:39

I wrote my worries away
dusk arising said:

I used to walk in the gutter, eyes cast down until i wrote myself onto high pavements and looked life in the eye.

Being poetic is the best self therapy i know. And what a great bunch of helpers and healers you meet along your path.

February 9th, 2021 13:23

Short & Sweet as life should be
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Excellent Dan that\'s what happens when you open one door... Just like life Great thoughts today Bravo

February 9th, 2021 04:17

Short & Sweet as life should be
Goldfinch60 said:

God words Dan, that guidance is leading you to some wonderful places.

Andy

February 9th, 2021 01:15

Short & Sweet as life should be
FredPeyer said:

Gorgeous picture, and I am not talking about you Dan! But I guess you make up for that face with that beautiful poem of yours!

February 8th, 2021 15:54

Short & Sweet as life should be
orchidee said:

Good write Dan. That\'s me short and sweet comment!

February 8th, 2021 08:48

Short & Sweet as life should be
dusk arising said:

conversation between two old pals
\'What happened to your blues mate\'
..... \'I became a poet and wrote them out of my life\'

Your inner god gave you the guidance, it\'s served you well.

February 8th, 2021 08:06

Short & Sweet as life should be
L. B. Mek said:

\'Between the beats and the silence
We all become aware of guidance\'
sublime demonstration of insightful poetry my friend, what a talent you\'ve been gifted, keep that faith - in yourself, refreshed:
\'may that pen
never cease
while your pulsed beat, drums
proud - to the melody
of your life\'s symphony...
a great write!

February 8th, 2021 06:54

Short & Sweet as life should be
Fay Slimm. said:

First class reflections on life where minds matter if hearts hear -- I love the fun-faced family picture - and the inspirational rhyming too - thanks Dan for sharing it with us.

February 8th, 2021 06:32

Thankful to nature everyday
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m shivering just watching, lol
a good read my friend

February 8th, 2021 05:17

Thankful to nature everyday
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature is so important in our lives, even if we fall the glory of nature can be seen to be closer.

Andy

February 8th, 2021 01:25



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