Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Ramblings of who I am
L. B. Mek said:
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour pattern, that needs redirection or modification with guidance. This way we know it\'s the pack that we can rely on, to keep the structure moving forward in trust you feel in the connection for respect.\'
imagine, what progression towards unifying acceptance
we human\'s would make, if we too: had no ego
to check, at friendship\'s - swivelling door...
(such a great message, you always choose to share dear poet
thank you, sincerely!) and you know, for me
Poetry\'s artistry is so much - more, than form or rhythmic flow
it exists in the veracity of integrity - we imbue
within each white-flag of paced - breath
between, those inked words of truth
we can\'t ever: fake!
May 3rd, 2021 08:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour pattern, that needs redirection or modification with guidance. This way we know it\'s the pack that we can rely on, to keep the structure moving forward in trust you feel in the connection for respect.\'
imagine, what progression towards unifying acceptance
we human\'s would make, if we too: had no ego
to check, at friendship\'s - swivelling door...
(such a great message, you always choose to share dear poet
thank you, sincerely!) and you know, for me
Poetry\'s artistry is so much - more, than form or rhythmic flow
it exists in the veracity of integrity - we imbue
within each white-flag of paced - breath
between, those inked words of truth
we can\'t ever: fake!
May 3rd, 2021 08:03
Ramblings of who I am
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Dan, ALL life should be given true respect.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Dan, ALL life should be given true respect.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:05
Not a poem but life in motion
L. B. Mek said:
\'when student and teacher are one in the same.
We can slowly understand
that we are all trying as best as we can\'..
wise words, dear poet! and a quirky read - for me
\'just feeling that initial - stillness, of connection
between me and another of nature\'s blessed creatures
takes me into realms of profound serenity, to know
my pulse resonates: with the heart of an animal
so distinctly alien to myself, and yet
so amazingly synced, to that core
of all that I am...\'
April 26th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'when student and teacher are one in the same.
We can slowly understand
that we are all trying as best as we can\'..
wise words, dear poet! and a quirky read - for me
\'just feeling that initial - stillness, of connection
between me and another of nature\'s blessed creatures
takes me into realms of profound serenity, to know
my pulse resonates: with the heart of an animal
so distinctly alien to myself, and yet
so amazingly synced, to that core
of all that I am...\'
April 26th, 2021 05:33
Not a poem but life in motion
Doggerel Dave said:
In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan.
Given your \'comment from author\' my mind repeatedly flipped, asking was this the viewpoint of the dog or your view of yourself expressed here?
Amusing though , as mentioned above.
April 25th, 2021 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan.
Given your \'comment from author\' my mind repeatedly flipped, asking was this the viewpoint of the dog or your view of yourself expressed here?
Amusing though , as mentioned above.
April 25th, 2021 19:49
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Just an aside, when we moved into our current house one box was not unpacked for 13 years! LOL
April 19th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Just an aside, when we moved into our current house one box was not unpacked for 13 years! LOL
April 19th, 2021 00:37
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come up from the valley into which you had fallen and are now rising into that wonderful new life which will get better each moment.
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come up from the valley into which you had fallen and are now rising into that wonderful new life which will get better each moment.
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:36
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
rosiedm said:
Lovely I like the 3rd and last verse most
April 18th, 2021 18:09
rosiedm said:
Lovely I like the 3rd and last verse most
April 18th, 2021 18:09
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful piece of poetic advice here Poetic Dan, bravo and I hope that all is well.
April 18th, 2021 11:43
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful piece of poetic advice here Poetic Dan, bravo and I hope that all is well.
April 18th, 2021 11:43
Out of my mind to find my heart
Doggerel Dave said:
You will get through, Dan: You have insight and reason - you know what is going on.
Take very good care of yourself.
April 17th, 2021 08:44
Doggerel Dave said:
You will get through, Dan: You have insight and reason - you know what is going on.
Take very good care of yourself.
April 17th, 2021 08:44
Out of my mind to find my heart
Caring dove said:
Finding your centre is important . It’s sometimes difficult to do that isn’t it ....
But we can find a way . Meditation can help
April 17th, 2021 04:19
Caring dove said:
Finding your centre is important . It’s sometimes difficult to do that isn’t it ....
But we can find a way . Meditation can help
April 17th, 2021 04:19
Out of my mind to find my heart
Caring dove said:
This is very expressive ! An engaging read ,
I’m assuming your scared of the sea / water
It’s helpful to feel grounded ... fear definitely ungrounds us
April 17th, 2021 04:03
Caring dove said:
This is very expressive ! An engaging read ,
I’m assuming your scared of the sea / water
It’s helpful to feel grounded ... fear definitely ungrounds us
April 17th, 2021 04:03
Out of my mind to find my heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Think back of the challenges that you have conquered and you know that you have the strength of character to conquer this one with your partner and child waiting there to be with you forever in your new wonderful world.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Think back of the challenges that you have conquered and you know that you have the strength of character to conquer this one with your partner and child waiting there to be with you forever in your new wonderful world.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 02:23
She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, that\'s a great title my friend!
everything else reads as a dose of worded - comforting warmth,
a small glimpse of all the good, we have to offer each other: if we would only take the time to recognise the power we waste, when perpetuating
our broken society\'s penchant for divisive, anger and hate
April 15th, 2021 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, that\'s a great title my friend!
everything else reads as a dose of worded - comforting warmth,
a small glimpse of all the good, we have to offer each other: if we would only take the time to recognise the power we waste, when perpetuating
our broken society\'s penchant for divisive, anger and hate
April 15th, 2021 03:13
She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
No you are NOT already there, Dan -the evidence to be found in your comments to the side.
April 14th, 2021 07:45
Doggerel Dave said:
No you are NOT already there, Dan -the evidence to be found in your comments to the side.
April 14th, 2021 07:45
She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother nature can cure so many trials in our lives.
Wonderful video - I wonder if the stones all tasted the same?
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother nature can cure so many trials in our lives.
Wonderful video - I wonder if the stones all tasted the same?
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:52
She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry
Poetic Dan said:
https://youtube.com/shorts/gEGdnTq0L4k?feature=share
I really don\'t know why some won\'t play!!
April 13th, 2021 15:07
Poetic Dan said:
https://youtube.com/shorts/gEGdnTq0L4k?feature=share
I really don\'t know why some won\'t play!!
April 13th, 2021 15:07
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing your wisdom, dear poet..
\'envisioned synthesis of self cultivated sincerity
amongst this life of survival choices
between chaos and solemnity
is by its very nature: an ideal so hard to master..
but within breathe, is a promise that allows us to strive
and find a path to make that impossible dream
a realised portrait of that self
we painted into existence
one - overcome brush stroke, at a time\'..
April 12th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing your wisdom, dear poet..
\'envisioned synthesis of self cultivated sincerity
amongst this life of survival choices
between chaos and solemnity
is by its very nature: an ideal so hard to master..
but within breathe, is a promise that allows us to strive
and find a path to make that impossible dream
a realised portrait of that self
we painted into existence
one - overcome brush stroke, at a time\'..
April 12th, 2021 04:23
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is now part of you Dan so you can now go forward into your wonderful life with happiness and love.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is now part of you Dan so you can now go forward into your wonderful life with happiness and love.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:18
I may stutter on my words but healing I deserve
Caring dove said:
It’s nice that you share a video ... 🙂spirit animals ! The description of the badger sounds nice ! I need to be braver .
April 11th, 2021 03:52
Caring dove said:
It’s nice that you share a video ... 🙂spirit animals ! The description of the badger sounds nice ! I need to be braver .
April 11th, 2021 03:52
May every petal be a step
Goldfinch60 said:
So pleased about your news and your words show how wonderful your life will be.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So pleased about your news and your words show how wonderful your life will be.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:08
May every petal be a step
Michael Edwards said:
Great news - really pleased for you. And a fine write too.
April 9th, 2021 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Great news - really pleased for you. And a fine write too.
April 9th, 2021 14:20
May every petal be a step
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words . 🙂🙂 this is definitely one of the best I’ve read from you ,
Lovely words
April 9th, 2021 09:15
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words . 🙂🙂 this is definitely one of the best I’ve read from you ,
Lovely words
April 9th, 2021 09:15
May every petal be a step
L. B. Mek said:
\'I think it may be true when they say, this feeling can conquer all
The only requirements is time mixed nurture and letting go\'..
such a great line
insightful in its potential for universally accessible, interpretation..
glad to read your good news, happy for you my friend
thanks for sharing
April 9th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'I think it may be true when they say, this feeling can conquer all
The only requirements is time mixed nurture and letting go\'..
such a great line
insightful in its potential for universally accessible, interpretation..
glad to read your good news, happy for you my friend
thanks for sharing
April 9th, 2021 05:37
Give anything but hate
L. B. Mek said:
conveying message of acceptance and patience
emphatic volition - expressed with imaginative brevity
utilising abstract to depict actuality
as more choice
than that narrow heritage of circumstance
we like to hide behind,
a wonderful write my friend!
old refreshed with the new, always our avenue
for gifted horizons with a hopeful view...
April 6th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
conveying message of acceptance and patience
emphatic volition - expressed with imaginative brevity
utilising abstract to depict actuality
as more choice
than that narrow heritage of circumstance
we like to hide behind,
a wonderful write my friend!
old refreshed with the new, always our avenue
for gifted horizons with a hopeful view...
April 6th, 2021 04:07
Better to of loved just pick those pieces up
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pop on yesterday to read posts and got inspired as always...\'
that\'s the wonder of this wonderful MPS community you\'ve all helped cultivate,
it\'s such a rare gift of inclusivity
in these challenging times of weaponised - diversity
by separatist mindsets to unity, within humanity!..
a wonderful read as always, dear poet
April 5th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pop on yesterday to read posts and got inspired as always...\'
that\'s the wonder of this wonderful MPS community you\'ve all helped cultivate,
it\'s such a rare gift of inclusivity
in these challenging times of weaponised - diversity
by separatist mindsets to unity, within humanity!..
a wonderful read as always, dear poet
April 5th, 2021 04:59
Give anything but hate
Michael Edwards said:
I love it - one of your very best.
April 5th, 2021 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
I love it - one of your very best.
April 5th, 2021 03:32
Give anything but hate
Doggerel Dave said:
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems before, haven\'t you? :-)
April 5th, 2021 02:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems before, haven\'t you? :-)
April 5th, 2021 02:12
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