Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Surrendering to the moments
Saxon Crow said:
Totally get where you\'re coming from Dan. We are the embodiment of kaleidoscope! Ive learnt to accept this about myself amd have become pretty comfortable with it to the point where i content being whoever or whatever I am at that moment.
Great poem mate.
June 26th, 2021 00:19
Saxon Crow said:
Totally get where you\'re coming from Dan. We are the embodiment of kaleidoscope! Ive learnt to accept this about myself amd have become pretty comfortable with it to the point where i content being whoever or whatever I am at that moment.
Great poem mate.
June 26th, 2021 00:19
My first dog blog
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m no longer afraid
to make mine more known, pushing
past any judgement, criticism or going unnoticed .
All things help growth,
I can\'t stop what I started.\'
missed your voice, lately
so I went hunting and uncovered this gem
I think this may be where it all started
hopefully it will gift you a reminder
on those busy days, when you haven\'t time enough
to take a second to realise: you\'re doing
something you have a passion for
one of those rare gifts of life, we take for granted
far, too often..
hope all is well, dear poet
June 17th, 2021 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m no longer afraid
to make mine more known, pushing
past any judgement, criticism or going unnoticed .
All things help growth,
I can\'t stop what I started.\'
missed your voice, lately
so I went hunting and uncovered this gem
I think this may be where it all started
hopefully it will gift you a reminder
on those busy days, when you haven\'t time enough
to take a second to realise: you\'re doing
something you have a passion for
one of those rare gifts of life, we take for granted
far, too often..
hope all is well, dear poet
June 17th, 2021 03:19
Water is life, so is my poetic side
Saxon Crow said:
Can totally relatw to this Dan. Im off to wales too! Leaving tomorrow for a week. Where abouts you heading?
June 3rd, 2021 01:32
Saxon Crow said:
Can totally relatw to this Dan. Im off to wales too! Leaving tomorrow for a week. Where abouts you heading?
June 3rd, 2021 01:32
Water is life, so is my poetic side
Doggerel Dave said:
Your life seems pretty full and interesting, Dan. Your lines very positive with a pulse. A life pulse, I think.
June 2nd, 2021 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Your life seems pretty full and interesting, Dan. Your lines very positive with a pulse. A life pulse, I think.
June 2nd, 2021 06:50
Water is life, so is my poetic side
Goldfinch60 said:
And so you should be proud, the journey you have made over the last few years is so uplifting and you have shown it to us all. Keep moving forward with the joy, wonder and love that is now with you.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
And so you should be proud, the journey you have made over the last few years is so uplifting and you have shown it to us all. Keep moving forward with the joy, wonder and love that is now with you.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:59
Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve made all my choices but moments
never stay the same,
to adapt and keep moving forward
is our spirit\'s main aim.\'
such a great line, happy to read your good news, congrats!
May 11th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve made all my choices but moments
never stay the same,
to adapt and keep moving forward
is our spirit\'s main aim.\'
such a great line, happy to read your good news, congrats!
May 11th, 2021 04:16
Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
Goldfinch60 said:
She is a beautiful young lady Dan and with you showing her the way to be free within herself she is going to have wonderful life - that is a tribute to you Dan showing how far you have come in your life as well.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
She is a beautiful young lady Dan and with you showing her the way to be free within herself she is going to have wonderful life - that is a tribute to you Dan showing how far you have come in your life as well.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:21
Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
AuburnScribbler said:
Love the message here Poetic Dan, a nourishing and undying wish, masterful written down.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:06
AuburnScribbler said:
Love the message here Poetic Dan, a nourishing and undying wish, masterful written down.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:06
Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates.
dusk arising said:
When does the learning stop.... never. And amazing that one so young becomes the teacher too. She\'s growing up lovely Dan.
May 10th, 2021 09:21
dusk arising said:
When does the learning stop.... never. And amazing that one so young becomes the teacher too. She\'s growing up lovely Dan.
May 10th, 2021 09:21
Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot
L. B. Mek said:
\'If we don\'t have the energy to back up what we think we know, then to them we may as well know nothing at all.
For instinctively driven beings understand this kind of knowledge is deeply home grown, nothing can take away what you already know.\'
such, life-Affirmingly empowering wisdom
you choose to share, dear Poet
humbly, I thank you!
(that\'s such a bad-ass pic as well
I counted five Trusting, submissive
brethren\'s and sisters of this: existence Experience
by your side
that\'s my definition of living the Dream
my friend, so happy for you
keep strong!)
May 10th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'If we don\'t have the energy to back up what we think we know, then to them we may as well know nothing at all.
For instinctively driven beings understand this kind of knowledge is deeply home grown, nothing can take away what you already know.\'
such, life-Affirmingly empowering wisdom
you choose to share, dear Poet
humbly, I thank you!
(that\'s such a bad-ass pic as well
I counted five Trusting, submissive
brethren\'s and sisters of this: existence Experience
by your side
that\'s my definition of living the Dream
my friend, so happy for you
keep strong!)
May 10th, 2021 04:57
Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot
Poetic Dan said:
https://youtube.com/shorts/nS6WYOGV2wo?feature=share
If you\'re interested lol
May 9th, 2021 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
https://youtube.com/shorts/nS6WYOGV2wo?feature=share
If you\'re interested lol
May 9th, 2021 02:54
My little slice of heaven
jarcher54 said:
The other night my 31-year-old daughter texted me that, as she was finishing up her thesis at 3 am, she missed the days when she was a school girl and the two of us night owls worked quietly--she on her homework, me on my legal stuff--side by side at the kitchen table. I admit it made me cry.
May 9th, 2021 00:32
jarcher54 said:
The other night my 31-year-old daughter texted me that, as she was finishing up her thesis at 3 am, she missed the days when she was a school girl and the two of us night owls worked quietly--she on her homework, me on my legal stuff--side by side at the kitchen table. I admit it made me cry.
May 9th, 2021 00:32
My little slice of heaven
dusk arising said:
Really good to read how your mind at peace has come to love the everday things around you.
What a different man you have become since you first showed us your enquiring mind at work on MPS Dan.
You are the living proof of the phrase \"I wrote a change into my life\".
THere are many days ahead, where will changes end?
May 8th, 2021 12:38
dusk arising said:
Really good to read how your mind at peace has come to love the everday things around you.
What a different man you have become since you first showed us your enquiring mind at work on MPS Dan.
You are the living proof of the phrase \"I wrote a change into my life\".
THere are many days ahead, where will changes end?
May 8th, 2021 12:38
My little slice of heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Your kid\'s a little character, Dan. Easy to see how well you go together.
The words which hang there for me are \'a home, a hug, no hunger or fear.\' Well done mate - it covers the whole thing.
May 8th, 2021 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Your kid\'s a little character, Dan. Easy to see how well you go together.
The words which hang there for me are \'a home, a hug, no hunger or fear.\' Well done mate - it covers the whole thing.
May 8th, 2021 05:21
My little slice of heaven
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful life you are into now Dan, you are now settled for ever in a place of love.
Great video.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 04:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful life you are into now Dan, you are now settled for ever in a place of love.
Great video.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 04:44
My little slice of heaven
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂” when we let the spirits of the universe see we’re all animals inside , looking for nothing more than a home , a hug “ love those lines . Their both so important
May 8th, 2021 03:24
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂” when we let the spirits of the universe see we’re all animals inside , looking for nothing more than a home , a hug “ love those lines . Their both so important
May 8th, 2021 03:24
Back on top or bottom, who knows! Let the music flow
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, with such a memorable last line
May 7th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, with such a memorable last line
May 7th, 2021 06:10
Back on top or bottom, who knows! Let the music flow
Goldfinch60 said:
Being with children can teach us such a lot from their unblemished minds.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Being with children can teach us such a lot from their unblemished minds.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:49
Back on top or bottom, who knows! Let the music flow
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, children teach adults as much as adults teach children. Excellent write Dan ; ) AP.
May 6th, 2021 18:28
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, children teach adults as much as adults teach children. Excellent write Dan ; ) AP.
May 6th, 2021 18:28
Ramblings of who I am
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem and i was esp admiring the wagging stanza, well said.! And yes all life deserves respect. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 6th, 2021 14:48
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem and i was esp admiring the wagging stanza, well said.! And yes all life deserves respect. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 6th, 2021 14:48
Ramblings of who I am
L. B. Mek said:
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour pattern, that needs redirection or modification with guidance. This way we know it\'s the pack that we can rely on, to keep the structure moving forward in trust you feel in the connection for respect.\'
imagine, what progression towards unifying acceptance
we human\'s would make, if we too: had no ego
to check, at friendship\'s - swivelling door...
(such a great message, you always choose to share dear poet
thank you, sincerely!) and you know, for me
Poetry\'s artistry is so much - more, than form or rhythmic flow
it exists in the veracity of integrity - we imbue
within each white-flag of paced - breath
between, those inked words of truth
we can\'t ever: fake!
May 3rd, 2021 08:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour pattern, that needs redirection or modification with guidance. This way we know it\'s the pack that we can rely on, to keep the structure moving forward in trust you feel in the connection for respect.\'
imagine, what progression towards unifying acceptance
we human\'s would make, if we too: had no ego
to check, at friendship\'s - swivelling door...
(such a great message, you always choose to share dear poet
thank you, sincerely!) and you know, for me
Poetry\'s artistry is so much - more, than form or rhythmic flow
it exists in the veracity of integrity - we imbue
within each white-flag of paced - breath
between, those inked words of truth
we can\'t ever: fake!
May 3rd, 2021 08:03
Ramblings of who I am
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Dan, ALL life should be given true respect.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Dan, ALL life should be given true respect.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:05
Not a poem but life in motion
L. B. Mek said:
\'when student and teacher are one in the same.
We can slowly understand
that we are all trying as best as we can\'..
wise words, dear poet! and a quirky read - for me
\'just feeling that initial - stillness, of connection
between me and another of nature\'s blessed creatures
takes me into realms of profound serenity, to know
my pulse resonates: with the heart of an animal
so distinctly alien to myself, and yet
so amazingly synced, to that core
of all that I am...\'
April 26th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'when student and teacher are one in the same.
We can slowly understand
that we are all trying as best as we can\'..
wise words, dear poet! and a quirky read - for me
\'just feeling that initial - stillness, of connection
between me and another of nature\'s blessed creatures
takes me into realms of profound serenity, to know
my pulse resonates: with the heart of an animal
so distinctly alien to myself, and yet
so amazingly synced, to that core
of all that I am...\'
April 26th, 2021 05:33
Not a poem but life in motion
Doggerel Dave said:
In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan.
Given your \'comment from author\' my mind repeatedly flipped, asking was this the viewpoint of the dog or your view of yourself expressed here?
Amusing though , as mentioned above.
April 25th, 2021 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan.
Given your \'comment from author\' my mind repeatedly flipped, asking was this the viewpoint of the dog or your view of yourself expressed here?
Amusing though , as mentioned above.
April 25th, 2021 19:49
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Just an aside, when we moved into our current house one box was not unpacked for 13 years! LOL
April 19th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Just an aside, when we moved into our current house one box was not unpacked for 13 years! LOL
April 19th, 2021 00:37
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come up from the valley into which you had fallen and are now rising into that wonderful new life which will get better each moment.
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come up from the valley into which you had fallen and are now rising into that wonderful new life which will get better each moment.
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:36
Sunday vibe to leave the past behind
rosiedm said:
Lovely I like the 3rd and last verse most
April 18th, 2021 18:09
rosiedm said:
Lovely I like the 3rd and last verse most
April 18th, 2021 18:09
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