Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Co creation is the only way
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Dan.

March 28th, 2021 06:35

Co creation is the only way
Caring dove said:

Nice words ๐Ÿ™‚

March 28th, 2021 03:55

Co creation is the only way
Poetic Dan said:

Well every time I edit the video the same thing happens... maybe it\'s what you get from doing it all in your phone!

https://youtube.com/shorts/KXP_6HwlxLA

March 28th, 2021 03:17

Inside every living being
dusk arising said:

Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown. Writing poetry does that for people if they put their heart into it and you have truly put your heart into your words. We can all clearly see that Dan.

It\'s great to see you acknowledging that there will be down periods and that you are preparing yourself with new gained self knowledge and faith for those times if and when they arise.

On a side note, I have really enjoyed seeing the videos of your daughters progress as she grows. It will be joyous to watch her character developing.

March 27th, 2021 07:06

Inside every living being
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Dan.

March 27th, 2021 02:44

Inside every living being
Goldfinch60 said:

That lesson will never be forgotten Dan you have come to far to forget it.

Andy

March 27th, 2021 01:34

Inside every living being
jarcher54 said:

This picture is a treasure, a poem in itself. Growing up I liked two things above all... being on horseback, and climbing trees! Finding the friend in every living soul is a fine mantra!

March 26th, 2021 23:26

Music moves body, mind and soul. Let it flow
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Dan, music is my life.

โ€œLife isnโ€™t about waiting for the storm to passโ€ฆ Itโ€™s about learning to dance in the rain.โ€

March 26th, 2021 01:34

Boundaries of reality
Caring dove said:

โ€œ when you truly fall you break from within โ€œ Iโ€™ve certainly felt this before . Itโ€™s like your feeling broken and so wounded within . Not a good feeling at all . Itโ€™s difficult facing a reality we struggle to Understand .

A deep but well written poem .

March 25th, 2021 13:21

We are all more than enough
L. B. Mek said:

my feeble scribbling talents fail me, so I\'ll lean on true genius to express, what your words conveyed:
\'When old age shall this generation waste,
Thou shalt remain, in midst of other woe
Than ours, {a \'friend\' to man}, to whom thou say\'st,
\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\"
from \'Ode on a Grecian Urn\' by John Keats
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542

March 25th, 2021 05:39

Music moves body, mind and soul. Let it flow
Caring dove said:

Love this ... nice fun words ! โ€œ nothing can stop the crown to the soul โ€œ great line here

March 25th, 2021 04:13

We are all more than enough
Fay Slimm. said:

\"To be authentic\" - yes and that \"inner child\" is important to recognize such a positive and upbuilding read - - loved the pics of your family Dan. -

March 25th, 2021 03:37

We are all more than enough
Caring dove said:

Why canโ€™t we be whoever we want to be ... although sometimes feels difficult . Just good to be true to ourselves .

A nice piece of writing ๐Ÿ™‚

March 24th, 2021 05:08

We are all more than enough
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Taking everyday as a precious gift\" is so very true Dan, every day is so precious.
Lovely young one Dan.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 02:49

We are all more than enough
orchidee said:

A fine write and bonny pics Dan! Can\'t see the clip.....

March 24th, 2021 02:44

Soul serenity
Doggerel Dave said:

There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\" which makes me wish I\'d known it just after leaving school with very poor exam results... Oh well, better late than never!

March 23rd, 2021 07:15

Soul serenity
L. B. Mek said:

yup, so very true
great sentiment\'s
as always!

March 23rd, 2021 05:12

Soul serenity
Goldfinch60 said:

In the time I\'ve know you Dan your dreams are being fulfilled and you will have new bigger dreams come to you and I know that you can achieve them all.

Andy

March 23rd, 2021 04:40

Soul serenity
Caring dove said:

Our essence ... our highest self โ€œโ€ that is who we are .

March 23rd, 2021 03:01

Soul serenity
Caring dove said:

โ€œ our journey is written jn the stars once we remember who we are โ€œ great line , Dan ๐Ÿ™‚ maybe true .

March 23rd, 2021 02:57

When life moves fast so does our triggers
L. B. Mek said:

\'overlooked to overbooked\'..
even as a featherweight friend bonded by poetic appreciation alone, that title hinting at the greener pasture\'s you\'re currently journeying is such an uplifting read,
thanks for sharing your exuberance for life, dear poet
but beware of those unforeseen tremors that like to bump-us from our comfortable perches

March 22nd, 2021 06:58

Temptations
L. B. Mek said:

\'No tests on paper created this art! Our journey is writing in the stars, once we remember who we are!\'..
we mostly engage, to experience through others or to glean, something we feel is missing from within..
then sometimes, we simply share an appreciation for the choice wording of impassioned wordsmith\'s
who in return, simply share those nuggets excavated from the trials: they overcome

March 22nd, 2021 05:08

When life moves fast so does our triggers
orchidee said:

There are deja vu feelings too - bit of French there! lol.
I\'m not into \'vibes\' that much, but they have some influence, I think.

March 22nd, 2021 03:02

When life moves fast so does our triggers
Goldfinch60 said:

Home is certainly where the heart is and you have found your home of peace and love.

Andy

March 22nd, 2021 01:42

When life moves fast so does our triggers
FredPeyer said:

P D you can tell her that I was listening, or rather reading. And you are so right, home does not have to be a physical place.

March 21st, 2021 21:07

When life moves fast so does our triggers
Caring dove said:

Itโ€™s difficult when we face certain feelings again .

Good last line โ€œ home is where the heart is โ€œ

March 21st, 2021 17:11

Wings expanded, so did my heart
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem ๐Ÿ™‚

March 20th, 2021 08:08

I am what I say I am
Caring dove said:

Dogs are beautiful as are many animals . Nicely expressed , Dan ๐Ÿ™‚

March 20th, 2021 02:29

Recognise and connect
Caring dove said:

โ€œ safe place to find us โ€œ so true . We all need to feel a sense of safety within and in our lives .

Lovely last line btw

March 20th, 2021 02:26

Signals
Goldfinch60 said:

Miscommunication can cause so much frustration in life, we need to really listen to people to understand them and all would be much better.
Good words Dan and a fabulous video showing such understanding.

Andy

March 20th, 2021 01:28



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