Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Co creation is the only way
Poetic Dan said:
Well every time I edit the video the same thing happens... maybe it\'s what you get from doing it all in your phone!
https://youtube.com/shorts/KXP_6HwlxLA
March 28th, 2021 03:17
Poetic Dan said:
Well every time I edit the video the same thing happens... maybe it\'s what you get from doing it all in your phone!
https://youtube.com/shorts/KXP_6HwlxLA
March 28th, 2021 03:17
Inside every living being
dusk arising said:
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown. Writing poetry does that for people if they put their heart into it and you have truly put your heart into your words. We can all clearly see that Dan.
It\'s great to see you acknowledging that there will be down periods and that you are preparing yourself with new gained self knowledge and faith for those times if and when they arise.
On a side note, I have really enjoyed seeing the videos of your daughters progress as she grows. It will be joyous to watch her character developing.
March 27th, 2021 07:06
dusk arising said:
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown. Writing poetry does that for people if they put their heart into it and you have truly put your heart into your words. We can all clearly see that Dan.
It\'s great to see you acknowledging that there will be down periods and that you are preparing yourself with new gained self knowledge and faith for those times if and when they arise.
On a side note, I have really enjoyed seeing the videos of your daughters progress as she grows. It will be joyous to watch her character developing.
March 27th, 2021 07:06
Inside every living being
Goldfinch60 said:
That lesson will never be forgotten Dan you have come to far to forget it.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That lesson will never be forgotten Dan you have come to far to forget it.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:34
Inside every living being
jarcher54 said:
This picture is a treasure, a poem in itself. Growing up I liked two things above all... being on horseback, and climbing trees! Finding the friend in every living soul is a fine mantra!
March 26th, 2021 23:26
jarcher54 said:
This picture is a treasure, a poem in itself. Growing up I liked two things above all... being on horseback, and climbing trees! Finding the friend in every living soul is a fine mantra!
March 26th, 2021 23:26
Music moves body, mind and soul. Let it flow
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, music is my life.
โLife isnโt about waiting for the storm to passโฆ Itโs about learning to dance in the rain.โ
March 26th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, music is my life.
โLife isnโt about waiting for the storm to passโฆ Itโs about learning to dance in the rain.โ
March 26th, 2021 01:34
Boundaries of reality
Caring dove said:
โ when you truly fall you break from within โ Iโve certainly felt this before . Itโs like your feeling broken and so wounded within . Not a good feeling at all . Itโs difficult facing a reality we struggle to Understand .
A deep but well written poem .
March 25th, 2021 13:21
Caring dove said:
โ when you truly fall you break from within โ Iโve certainly felt this before . Itโs like your feeling broken and so wounded within . Not a good feeling at all . Itโs difficult facing a reality we struggle to Understand .
A deep but well written poem .
March 25th, 2021 13:21
We are all more than enough
L. B. Mek said:
my feeble scribbling talents fail me, so I\'ll lean on true genius to express, what your words conveyed:
\'When old age shall this generation waste,
Thou shalt remain, in midst of other woe
Than ours, {a \'friend\' to man}, to whom thou say\'st,
\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\"
from \'Ode on a Grecian Urn\' by John Keats
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542
March 25th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
my feeble scribbling talents fail me, so I\'ll lean on true genius to express, what your words conveyed:
\'When old age shall this generation waste,
Thou shalt remain, in midst of other woe
Than ours, {a \'friend\' to man}, to whom thou say\'st,
\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\"
from \'Ode on a Grecian Urn\' by John Keats
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542
March 25th, 2021 05:39
Music moves body, mind and soul. Let it flow
Caring dove said:
Love this ... nice fun words ! โ nothing can stop the crown to the soul โ great line here
March 25th, 2021 04:13
Caring dove said:
Love this ... nice fun words ! โ nothing can stop the crown to the soul โ great line here
March 25th, 2021 04:13
We are all more than enough
Fay Slimm. said:
\"To be authentic\" - yes and that \"inner child\" is important to recognize such a positive and upbuilding read - - loved the pics of your family Dan. -
March 25th, 2021 03:37
Fay Slimm. said:
\"To be authentic\" - yes and that \"inner child\" is important to recognize such a positive and upbuilding read - - loved the pics of your family Dan. -
March 25th, 2021 03:37
We are all more than enough
Caring dove said:
Why canโt we be whoever we want to be ... although sometimes feels difficult . Just good to be true to ourselves .
A nice piece of writing ๐
March 24th, 2021 05:08
Caring dove said:
Why canโt we be whoever we want to be ... although sometimes feels difficult . Just good to be true to ourselves .
A nice piece of writing ๐
March 24th, 2021 05:08
We are all more than enough
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Taking everyday as a precious gift\" is so very true Dan, every day is so precious.
Lovely young one Dan.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Taking everyday as a precious gift\" is so very true Dan, every day is so precious.
Lovely young one Dan.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 02:49
We are all more than enough
orchidee said:
A fine write and bonny pics Dan! Can\'t see the clip.....
March 24th, 2021 02:44
orchidee said:
A fine write and bonny pics Dan! Can\'t see the clip.....
March 24th, 2021 02:44
Soul serenity
Doggerel Dave said:
There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\" which makes me wish I\'d known it just after leaving school with very poor exam results... Oh well, better late than never!
March 23rd, 2021 07:15
Doggerel Dave said:
There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\" which makes me wish I\'d known it just after leaving school with very poor exam results... Oh well, better late than never!
March 23rd, 2021 07:15
Soul serenity
Goldfinch60 said:
In the time I\'ve know you Dan your dreams are being fulfilled and you will have new bigger dreams come to you and I know that you can achieve them all.
Andy
March 23rd, 2021 04:40
Goldfinch60 said:
In the time I\'ve know you Dan your dreams are being fulfilled and you will have new bigger dreams come to you and I know that you can achieve them all.
Andy
March 23rd, 2021 04:40
Soul serenity
Caring dove said:
Our essence ... our highest self โโ that is who we are .
March 23rd, 2021 03:01
Caring dove said:
Our essence ... our highest self โโ that is who we are .
March 23rd, 2021 03:01
Soul serenity
Caring dove said:
โ our journey is written jn the stars once we remember who we are โ great line , Dan ๐ maybe true .
March 23rd, 2021 02:57
Caring dove said:
โ our journey is written jn the stars once we remember who we are โ great line , Dan ๐ maybe true .
March 23rd, 2021 02:57
When life moves fast so does our triggers
L. B. Mek said:
\'overlooked to overbooked\'..
even as a featherweight friend bonded by poetic appreciation alone, that title hinting at the greener pasture\'s you\'re currently journeying is such an uplifting read,
thanks for sharing your exuberance for life, dear poet
but beware of those unforeseen tremors that like to bump-us from our comfortable perches
March 22nd, 2021 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'overlooked to overbooked\'..
even as a featherweight friend bonded by poetic appreciation alone, that title hinting at the greener pasture\'s you\'re currently journeying is such an uplifting read,
thanks for sharing your exuberance for life, dear poet
but beware of those unforeseen tremors that like to bump-us from our comfortable perches
March 22nd, 2021 06:58
Temptations
L. B. Mek said:
\'No tests on paper created this art! Our journey is writing in the stars, once we remember who we are!\'..
we mostly engage, to experience through others or to glean, something we feel is missing from within..
then sometimes, we simply share an appreciation for the choice wording of impassioned wordsmith\'s
who in return, simply share those nuggets excavated from the trials: they overcome
March 22nd, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'No tests on paper created this art! Our journey is writing in the stars, once we remember who we are!\'..
we mostly engage, to experience through others or to glean, something we feel is missing from within..
then sometimes, we simply share an appreciation for the choice wording of impassioned wordsmith\'s
who in return, simply share those nuggets excavated from the trials: they overcome
March 22nd, 2021 05:08
When life moves fast so does our triggers
orchidee said:
There are deja vu feelings too - bit of French there! lol.
I\'m not into \'vibes\' that much, but they have some influence, I think.
March 22nd, 2021 03:02
orchidee said:
There are deja vu feelings too - bit of French there! lol.
I\'m not into \'vibes\' that much, but they have some influence, I think.
March 22nd, 2021 03:02
When life moves fast so does our triggers
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is certainly where the heart is and you have found your home of peace and love.
Andy
March 22nd, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is certainly where the heart is and you have found your home of peace and love.
Andy
March 22nd, 2021 01:42
When life moves fast so does our triggers
FredPeyer said:
P D you can tell her that I was listening, or rather reading. And you are so right, home does not have to be a physical place.
March 21st, 2021 21:07
FredPeyer said:
P D you can tell her that I was listening, or rather reading. And you are so right, home does not have to be a physical place.
March 21st, 2021 21:07
When life moves fast so does our triggers
Caring dove said:
Itโs difficult when we face certain feelings again .
Good last line โ home is where the heart is โ
March 21st, 2021 17:11
Caring dove said:
Itโs difficult when we face certain feelings again .
Good last line โ home is where the heart is โ
March 21st, 2021 17:11
I am what I say I am
Caring dove said:
Dogs are beautiful as are many animals . Nicely expressed , Dan ๐
March 20th, 2021 02:29
Caring dove said:
Dogs are beautiful as are many animals . Nicely expressed , Dan ๐
March 20th, 2021 02:29
Recognise and connect
Caring dove said:
โ safe place to find us โ so true . We all need to feel a sense of safety within and in our lives .
Lovely last line btw
March 20th, 2021 02:26
Caring dove said:
โ safe place to find us โ so true . We all need to feel a sense of safety within and in our lives .
Lovely last line btw
March 20th, 2021 02:26
Signals
Goldfinch60 said:
Miscommunication can cause so much frustration in life, we need to really listen to people to understand them and all would be much better.
Good words Dan and a fabulous video showing such understanding.
Andy
March 20th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Miscommunication can cause so much frustration in life, we need to really listen to people to understand them and all would be much better.
Good words Dan and a fabulous video showing such understanding.
Andy
March 20th, 2021 01:28
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