Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Purpose to express and reason to share
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
Purpose to express and reason to share
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
Itās OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
Itās OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
Best seat in the house
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be blessed with a presence
so pure
we instinctively: should renounce
All the information
drowning out the beauty, captured in time\'..
Beautiful, dear Poet
a verse of wholehearted, poetic veracity!
thank yo for sharing, my friend
July 22nd, 2021 02:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be blessed with a presence
so pure
we instinctively: should renounce
All the information
drowning out the beauty, captured in time\'..
Beautiful, dear Poet
a verse of wholehearted, poetic veracity!
thank yo for sharing, my friend
July 22nd, 2021 02:11
Best seat in the house
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan and a wonderful video, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan and a wonderful video, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:39
Best seat in the house
Neville said:
not just clever but wise words methinks ... :)
July 21st, 2021 15:16
Neville said:
not just clever but wise words methinks ... :)
July 21st, 2021 15:16
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on you, Dan. As a pure, practical journey which sounds like it will take you on a long adventure within your self.
July 21st, 2021 01:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on you, Dan. As a pure, practical journey which sounds like it will take you on a long adventure within your self.
July 21st, 2021 01:13
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Goldfinch60 said:
Those breaths in harmony with peace can bring such wonder into your body.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those breaths in harmony with peace can bring such wonder into your body.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:31
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything
Breath is nothing
But when you breathe
I wonder, where does it come from and where does it go to.
Cool poem Dan
July 20th, 2021 14:01
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything
Breath is nothing
But when you breathe
I wonder, where does it come from and where does it go to.
Cool poem Dan
July 20th, 2021 14:01
Avoiding no more ready to explore
SureshG said:
Just hold on to it tight, and keep posting such poems.
July 20th, 2021 12:35
SureshG said:
Just hold on to it tight, and keep posting such poems.
July 20th, 2021 12:35
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Neville said:
I just knew there was someone out there who would help ..
a lotta folk dont realise the impact faulty breathing can have on the feelings we experience like anxiety anger etc etc and vica versa .......... :)
July 20th, 2021 11:16
Neville said:
I just knew there was someone out there who would help ..
a lotta folk dont realise the impact faulty breathing can have on the feelings we experience like anxiety anger etc etc and vica versa .......... :)
July 20th, 2021 11:16
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Goldfinch60 said:
It will forever be so in your life Dan, you have found that great place in you life and are sharing it with those you love.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
It will forever be so in your life Dan, you have found that great place in you life and are sharing it with those you love.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 00:45
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
SureshG said:
Your poem reflects the love and devotion you have found, to steal you to happier times.
July 19th, 2021 12:53
SureshG said:
Your poem reflects the love and devotion you have found, to steal you to happier times.
July 19th, 2021 12:53
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Caring dove said:
Lovely words Dan š I like your mention of pearls and your soul . Very nice poem
July 19th, 2021 12:36
Caring dove said:
Lovely words Dan š I like your mention of pearls and your soul . Very nice poem
July 19th, 2021 12:36
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
L. B. Mek said:
\'With beauty so raw
able
to shake my core\'..
that\'s nature\'s greatest gift
cherish it, dear poet
for all it\'s worth, thereby insuring
you were a: worthy recipient
from the very start...
July 19th, 2021 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'With beauty so raw
able
to shake my core\'..
that\'s nature\'s greatest gift
cherish it, dear poet
for all it\'s worth, thereby insuring
you were a: worthy recipient
from the very start...
July 19th, 2021 06:58
Enough is enough
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beams of poetic light,\'
ain\'t that just MPS, in four words!
a wonderfully raw and brave write
thanks for sharing your journey with us, dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beams of poetic light,\'
ain\'t that just MPS, in four words!
a wonderfully raw and brave write
thanks for sharing your journey with us, dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:54
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
L. B. Mek said:
\'The boy looked puzzled and said \" What, like a Baloo?\"
No more like the magic
you have inside of you!\'
\'The question was never should or shouldn\'t we race
The answer was what did it mean
to feel alive in the first place\'..
(tap dancing - into, that evergreen
childlike state - we cherish
in those \'bare necessities\', of our life\'s
complicatedly - simple: choices...)
a great write, dear point
you\'ve got my feet, tapping away
and, a long forgotten smile
visiting my face;
I love Baloo, and all he stands for
and will always cherish
that zest for gaiety - the great Kipling, introduced
to us, at such a young age...
July 19th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'The boy looked puzzled and said \" What, like a Baloo?\"
No more like the magic
you have inside of you!\'
\'The question was never should or shouldn\'t we race
The answer was what did it mean
to feel alive in the first place\'..
(tap dancing - into, that evergreen
childlike state - we cherish
in those \'bare necessities\', of our life\'s
complicatedly - simple: choices...)
a great write, dear point
you\'ve got my feet, tapping away
and, a long forgotten smile
visiting my face;
I love Baloo, and all he stands for
and will always cherish
that zest for gaiety - the great Kipling, introduced
to us, at such a young age...
July 19th, 2021 06:50
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Saxon Crow said:
I feel the same about my little one. She shows me magic everyday
July 19th, 2021 06:18
Saxon Crow said:
I feel the same about my little one. She shows me magic everyday
July 19th, 2021 06:18
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
dusk arising said:
Let it be and reap the beauty of peace of mind.
July 19th, 2021 04:30
dusk arising said:
Let it be and reap the beauty of peace of mind.
July 19th, 2021 04:30
Enough is enough
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is now behind you, you have come such a long way in to a better life Dan, keep moving forward into that better life.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is now behind you, you have come such a long way in to a better life Dan, keep moving forward into that better life.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:07
Enough is enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It\'s all said already - in your own words, \'enough is enough\", so from now on it will surely be: forward ever forward.
PS: that skateboard video> I\'m trying to write a piece on the seaside right now after that but it is very slow - can you beat me to the draw?
July 18th, 2021 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It\'s all said already - in your own words, \'enough is enough\", so from now on it will surely be: forward ever forward.
PS: that skateboard video> I\'m trying to write a piece on the seaside right now after that but it is very slow - can you beat me to the draw?
July 18th, 2021 18:36
Enough is enough
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Enough is enough
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . Itās upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . Itās upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Enough is enough
Accidental Poet said:
Though never far behind, the past is just the past. What you\'ve learned from that past is your fuel for a better future. You\'re a man, and a proud man at that. Look around you, see all the strength the builds you strong. And a great write too. ; )
July 18th, 2021 10:24
Accidental Poet said:
Though never far behind, the past is just the past. What you\'ve learned from that past is your fuel for a better future. You\'re a man, and a proud man at that. Look around you, see all the strength the builds you strong. And a great write too. ; )
July 18th, 2021 10:24
Enough is enough
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Enough is enough
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. Iām so glad to know that youāll never give up.
āmemories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.ā
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessingsā¦
āLet your crew set you freeāā¦
Look at your latest blessingā¦sheās a sight to behold. Youāre looking at the futureā¦guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do itā¦YES YOU CANā¦YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
Iām so glad to read your poetryā¦now that Iām able to again.
Lauraš»
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. Iām so glad to know that youāll never give up.
āmemories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.ā
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessingsā¦
āLet your crew set you freeāā¦
Look at your latest blessingā¦sheās a sight to behold. Youāre looking at the futureā¦guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do itā¦YES YOU CANā¦YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
Iām so glad to read your poetryā¦now that Iām able to again.
Lauraš»
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Enough is enough
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
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