Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Snails a Snail
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing your wonder of life with loved ones is so glorious, that is something I miss.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing your wonder of life with loved ones is so glorious, that is something I miss.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 01:44
Snails a Snail
Caring dove said:
! “ a snail is a snail “ , “ the beauty of particles dancing in the air “ especially like those words .
Nice read 🙂
July 24th, 2021 01:25
Caring dove said:
! “ a snail is a snail “ , “ the beauty of particles dancing in the air “ especially like those words .
Nice read 🙂
July 24th, 2021 01:25
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is wonderful and for you to share your life is even better, thank you.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is wonderful and for you to share your life is even better, thank you.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:18
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Thekkinkkattil said:
friendship is the sweetest flower in the garden of love
July 23rd, 2021 23:52
Thekkinkkattil said:
friendship is the sweetest flower in the garden of love
July 23rd, 2021 23:52
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Saxon Crow said:
Legend friend that you are
Shine so bright you poetic star
July 23rd, 2021 13:59
Saxon Crow said:
Legend friend that you are
Shine so bright you poetic star
July 23rd, 2021 13:59
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Accidental Poet said:
Never give up if you can feel that inner beat, as together we make this place pretty sweet! I\'ll agree with that Dan. And Happy Friday to you also. ; )
July 23rd, 2021 12:07
Accidental Poet said:
Never give up if you can feel that inner beat, as together we make this place pretty sweet! I\'ll agree with that Dan. And Happy Friday to you also. ; )
July 23rd, 2021 12:07
Purpose to express and reason to share
Poetic Dan said:
Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I\'m guaranteed to grow old!
A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe
Keep being you buddy!
July 23rd, 2021 10:10
Poetic Dan said:
Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I\'m guaranteed to grow old!
A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe
Keep being you buddy!
July 23rd, 2021 10:10
Purpose to express and reason to share
L. B. Mek said:
\'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth\'..
always admire your playfulness, and remember
here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
without having to delete and repost, but
that\'s not the point of your words today, my friend
in fact, this is a battle cry you\'ve penned
for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
and so, we too
will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
and shout proudly, as one:
\'there\'s no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
when we\'re connecting with those impassioned
words of a writer, determined
to infuse each syllable we read, with
that instinctively recognisable quality
of empathetic integrity
and pure poetic majesty, to express
relatable - comforting, emotional ques
in those poetic safe spaces, between
our inked letters\'
(personally, its a privilege to read
your courageous heart
in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
to convey a little more hope
and compassionate, appeasement
into this chaotic world, we call home)
July 23rd, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth\'..
always admire your playfulness, and remember
here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
without having to delete and repost, but
that\'s not the point of your words today, my friend
in fact, this is a battle cry you\'ve penned
for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
and so, we too
will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
and shout proudly, as one:
\'there\'s no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
when we\'re connecting with those impassioned
words of a writer, determined
to infuse each syllable we read, with
that instinctively recognisable quality
of empathetic integrity
and pure poetic majesty, to express
relatable - comforting, emotional ques
in those poetic safe spaces, between
our inked letters\'
(personally, its a privilege to read
your courageous heart
in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
to convey a little more hope
and compassionate, appeasement
into this chaotic world, we call home)
July 23rd, 2021 04:36
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan 🙂 happy Friday to you too ! I hope you have a nice day ) lovely words here . I can’t say I have many friends .... well who I spend time with , I have my twin sister and a few people I might talk to online ...
Your lucky to be able to make friends 🙂 I hope your ok today .
I like it on this site and I feel like it’s a kind supportive place
July 23rd, 2021 02:56
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan 🙂 happy Friday to you too ! I hope you have a nice day ) lovely words here . I can’t say I have many friends .... well who I spend time with , I have my twin sister and a few people I might talk to online ...
Your lucky to be able to make friends 🙂 I hope your ok today .
I like it on this site and I feel like it’s a kind supportive place
July 23rd, 2021 02:56
Purpose to express and reason to share
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 01:06
Purpose to express and reason to share
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
‘have plenty of depth’.
Never feel ‘degraded’…
Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.
Laura🌻
July 22nd, 2021 15:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
‘have plenty of depth’.
Never feel ‘degraded’…
Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.
Laura🌻
July 22nd, 2021 15:30
Purpose to express and reason to share
Saxon Crow said:
Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww
July 22nd, 2021 13:31
Saxon Crow said:
Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww
July 22nd, 2021 13:31
Purpose to express and reason to share
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
Purpose to express and reason to share
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
Best seat in the house
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be blessed with a presence
so pure
we instinctively: should renounce
All the information
drowning out the beauty, captured in time\'..
Beautiful, dear Poet
a verse of wholehearted, poetic veracity!
thank yo for sharing, my friend
July 22nd, 2021 02:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be blessed with a presence
so pure
we instinctively: should renounce
All the information
drowning out the beauty, captured in time\'..
Beautiful, dear Poet
a verse of wholehearted, poetic veracity!
thank yo for sharing, my friend
July 22nd, 2021 02:11
Best seat in the house
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan and a wonderful video, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan and a wonderful video, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:39
Best seat in the house
Neville said:
not just clever but wise words methinks ... :)
July 21st, 2021 15:16
Neville said:
not just clever but wise words methinks ... :)
July 21st, 2021 15:16
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on you, Dan. As a pure, practical journey which sounds like it will take you on a long adventure within your self.
July 21st, 2021 01:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on you, Dan. As a pure, practical journey which sounds like it will take you on a long adventure within your self.
July 21st, 2021 01:13
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Goldfinch60 said:
Those breaths in harmony with peace can bring such wonder into your body.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those breaths in harmony with peace can bring such wonder into your body.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:31
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything
Breath is nothing
But when you breathe
I wonder, where does it come from and where does it go to.
Cool poem Dan
July 20th, 2021 14:01
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything
Breath is nothing
But when you breathe
I wonder, where does it come from and where does it go to.
Cool poem Dan
July 20th, 2021 14:01
Avoiding no more ready to explore
SureshG said:
Just hold on to it tight, and keep posting such poems.
July 20th, 2021 12:35
SureshG said:
Just hold on to it tight, and keep posting such poems.
July 20th, 2021 12:35
Avoiding no more ready to explore
Neville said:
I just knew there was someone out there who would help ..
a lotta folk dont realise the impact faulty breathing can have on the feelings we experience like anxiety anger etc etc and vica versa .......... :)
July 20th, 2021 11:16
Neville said:
I just knew there was someone out there who would help ..
a lotta folk dont realise the impact faulty breathing can have on the feelings we experience like anxiety anger etc etc and vica versa .......... :)
July 20th, 2021 11:16
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Goldfinch60 said:
It will forever be so in your life Dan, you have found that great place in you life and are sharing it with those you love.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
It will forever be so in your life Dan, you have found that great place in you life and are sharing it with those you love.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 00:45
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
SureshG said:
Your poem reflects the love and devotion you have found, to steal you to happier times.
July 19th, 2021 12:53
SureshG said:
Your poem reflects the love and devotion you have found, to steal you to happier times.
July 19th, 2021 12:53
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Caring dove said:
Lovely words Dan 🙂 I like your mention of pearls and your soul . Very nice poem
July 19th, 2021 12:36
Caring dove said:
Lovely words Dan 🙂 I like your mention of pearls and your soul . Very nice poem
July 19th, 2021 12:36
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
L. B. Mek said:
\'With beauty so raw
able
to shake my core\'..
that\'s nature\'s greatest gift
cherish it, dear poet
for all it\'s worth, thereby insuring
you were a: worthy recipient
from the very start...
July 19th, 2021 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'With beauty so raw
able
to shake my core\'..
that\'s nature\'s greatest gift
cherish it, dear poet
for all it\'s worth, thereby insuring
you were a: worthy recipient
from the very start...
July 19th, 2021 06:58
Enough is enough
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beams of poetic light,\'
ain\'t that just MPS, in four words!
a wonderfully raw and brave write
thanks for sharing your journey with us, dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beams of poetic light,\'
ain\'t that just MPS, in four words!
a wonderfully raw and brave write
thanks for sharing your journey with us, dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:54
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
L. B. Mek said:
\'The boy looked puzzled and said \" What, like a Baloo?\"
No more like the magic
you have inside of you!\'
\'The question was never should or shouldn\'t we race
The answer was what did it mean
to feel alive in the first place\'..
(tap dancing - into, that evergreen
childlike state - we cherish
in those \'bare necessities\', of our life\'s
complicatedly - simple: choices...)
a great write, dear point
you\'ve got my feet, tapping away
and, a long forgotten smile
visiting my face;
I love Baloo, and all he stands for
and will always cherish
that zest for gaiety - the great Kipling, introduced
to us, at such a young age...
July 19th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'The boy looked puzzled and said \" What, like a Baloo?\"
No more like the magic
you have inside of you!\'
\'The question was never should or shouldn\'t we race
The answer was what did it mean
to feel alive in the first place\'..
(tap dancing - into, that evergreen
childlike state - we cherish
in those \'bare necessities\', of our life\'s
complicatedly - simple: choices...)
a great write, dear point
you\'ve got my feet, tapping away
and, a long forgotten smile
visiting my face;
I love Baloo, and all he stands for
and will always cherish
that zest for gaiety - the great Kipling, introduced
to us, at such a young age...
July 19th, 2021 06:50
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
Saxon Crow said:
I feel the same about my little one. She shows me magic everyday
July 19th, 2021 06:18
Saxon Crow said:
I feel the same about my little one. She shows me magic everyday
July 19th, 2021 06:18
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