Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Pearls of my world (Short & sweet)
dusk arising said:
Let it be and reap the beauty of peace of mind.
July 19th, 2021 04:30
dusk arising said:
Let it be and reap the beauty of peace of mind.
July 19th, 2021 04:30
Enough is enough
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is now behind you, you have come such a long way in to a better life Dan, keep moving forward into that better life.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is now behind you, you have come such a long way in to a better life Dan, keep moving forward into that better life.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:07
Enough is enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It\'s all said already - in your own words, \'enough is enough\", so from now on it will surely be: forward ever forward.
PS: that skateboard video> I\'m trying to write a piece on the seaside right now after that but it is very slow - can you beat me to the draw?
July 18th, 2021 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It\'s all said already - in your own words, \'enough is enough\", so from now on it will surely be: forward ever forward.
PS: that skateboard video> I\'m trying to write a piece on the seaside right now after that but it is very slow - can you beat me to the draw?
July 18th, 2021 18:36
Enough is enough
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Saxon Crow said:
Dan awesome expression here. I\'m not going to share my opinion with you because it\'s already there in your poem.
July 18th, 2021 16:09
Enough is enough
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . It’s upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . It’s upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
July 18th, 2021 12:17
Enough is enough
Accidental Poet said:
Though never far behind, the past is just the past. What you\'ve learned from that past is your fuel for a better future. You\'re a man, and a proud man at that. Look around you, see all the strength the builds you strong. And a great write too. ; )
July 18th, 2021 10:24
Accidental Poet said:
Though never far behind, the past is just the past. What you\'ve learned from that past is your fuel for a better future. You\'re a man, and a proud man at that. Look around you, see all the strength the builds you strong. And a great write too. ; )
July 18th, 2021 10:24
Enough is enough
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Neville said:
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just :)
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Enough is enough
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. I’m so glad to know that you’ll never give up.
“memories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.”
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessings…
“Let your crew set you free”…
Look at your latest blessing…she’s a sight to behold. You’re looking at the future…guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do it…YES YOU CAN…YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so glad to read your poetry…now that I’m able to again.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. I’m so glad to know that you’ll never give up.
“memories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.”
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessings…
“Let your crew set you free”…
Look at your latest blessing…she’s a sight to behold. You’re looking at the future…guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do it…YES YOU CAN…YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so glad to read your poetry…now that I’m able to again.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 05:48
Enough is enough
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today\'s man or yesterday\'s problems.
July 18th, 2021 04:34
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alive in the first place starts us on a path and on that path we need to learn, when we get older and little boys ask us questions, they may question our own life but as we move on in life the easier it becomes and we know that those questions will eventually show us the way to the better things in our lives.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:29
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
myself and me said:
\"what did it mean to feel alive in the first place\"
A tough question takes life long to answer.
July 17th, 2021 21:17
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
Saxon Crow said:
The more aware we become of who we are and the more loving and accepting of self, the more aware, loving and accepting we are of others. We are all one brother
July 17th, 2021 14:26
I write to give myself life (careful it\'s long)
Accidental Poet said:
Provocative write Dan. Life not always easy for little boys to understand, but instilling the groundwork within them at a young age will help them later on in life. Well written Dan. ; )
July 17th, 2021 07:44
Accidental Poet said:
Provocative write Dan. Life not always easy for little boys to understand, but instilling the groundwork within them at a young age will help them later on in life. Well written Dan. ; )
July 17th, 2021 07:44
Homemade scarf
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words relieve the pain in your arm, over the years I have known you you have relieved other hard times through poetry so you know that you can relieve this as well.
Sending healing thoughts to you Dan.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words relieve the pain in your arm, over the years I have known you you have relieved other hard times through poetry so you know that you can relieve this as well.
Sending healing thoughts to you Dan.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:16
Homemade scarf
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.
July 16th, 2021 21:49
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.
July 16th, 2021 21:49
Homemade scarf
Neville said:
these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..
July 16th, 2021 16:25
Neville said:
these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..
July 16th, 2021 16:25
Homemade scarf
Saxon Crow said:
I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!
July 16th, 2021 14:18
Saxon Crow said:
I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!
July 16th, 2021 14:18
Homemade scarf
SureshG said:
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain
Hope the remedy is found soon
July 16th, 2021 12:33
SureshG said:
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain
Hope the remedy is found soon
July 16th, 2021 12:33
Homemade scarf
Thekkinkkattil said:
May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world
July 16th, 2021 07:39
Thekkinkkattil said:
May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world
July 16th, 2021 07:39
Homemade scarf
L. B. Mek said:
with this poetic tool of self-expression
you\'ve been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)
July 16th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
with this poetic tool of self-expression
you\'ve been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)
July 16th, 2021 06:32
Homemade scarf
Caring dove said:
Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .
Nice poem ))
July 16th, 2021 05:40
Caring dove said:
Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .
Nice poem ))
July 16th, 2021 05:40
Homemade scarf
dusk arising said:
Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
July 16th, 2021 05:26
dusk arising said:
Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
July 16th, 2021 05:26
You know it
SureshG said:
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.
July 15th, 2021 12:10
SureshG said:
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.
July 15th, 2021 12:10
You know it
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊
July 13th, 2021 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊
July 13th, 2021 19:29
You know it
Goldfinch60 said:
Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:50
All risks are worth it in the end
SureshG said:
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable
July 13th, 2021 12:41
SureshG said:
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable
July 13th, 2021 12:41
All risks are worth it in the end
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
\'I don\'t even venture back, unless
I\'m grounded before!\'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read
July 13th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
\'I don\'t even venture back, unless
I\'m grounded before!\'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read
July 13th, 2021 04:40
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