Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Homemade scarf
myself and me said:

Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.

July 16th, 2021 21:49

Homemade scarf
Neville said:


these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..

July 16th, 2021 16:25

Homemade scarf
Saxon Crow said:

I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!

July 16th, 2021 14:18

Homemade scarf
SureshG said:

I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain

Hope the remedy is found soon

July 16th, 2021 12:33

Homemade scarf
Thekkinkkattil said:

May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world

July 16th, 2021 07:39

Homemade scarf
L. B. Mek said:

with this poetic tool of self-expression
you\'ve been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)

July 16th, 2021 06:32

Homemade scarf
Caring dove said:

Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .

Nice poem ))

July 16th, 2021 05:40

Homemade scarf
dusk arising said:

Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.

July 16th, 2021 05:26

You know it
SureshG said:

I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.

July 15th, 2021 12:10

You know it
myself and me said:

Now I know. A poetic way to live life.

July 13th, 2021 21:40

You know it
Doggerel Dave said:

I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊


July 13th, 2021 19:29

You know it
Goldfinch60 said:

Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.

Andy

July 13th, 2021 14:50

You know it
Caring dove said:

Great poem , Dan 🙂

July 13th, 2021 14:39

You know it
aDarkerMind said:

you are a poet Dan.
I know it!

July 13th, 2021 14:24

All risks are worth it in the end
SureshG said:

When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable

July 13th, 2021 12:41

All risks are worth it in the end
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
\'I don\'t even venture back, unless
I\'m grounded before!\'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read

July 13th, 2021 04:40

All risks are worth it in the end
myself and me said:

Absolutely. She is such an angel.

July 12th, 2021 22:50

All risks are worth it in the end
Goldfinch60 said:

Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.

Andy

July 12th, 2021 15:23

All risks are worth it in the end
Goldfinch60 said:

Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.

Andy

July 12th, 2021 15:23

Don\'t play in the park if you lack the art!
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words both written and spoken Dan, some people have no idea of respecting living things, when I walk by My River I see many dogs and most of them are free and happy, the odd one is kept on a lead but most are free to roam. The other day I as surrounded by four greyhounds all wanting me to stroke them, one of them had only one front leg but was still able to run around happily with the others and there owners smiling and laughing with them - and me.

Andy

July 12th, 2021 00:54

Don\'t play in the park if you lack the art!
Accidental Poet said:

Very interesting write and video Dan. I enjoyed the read and watch. ; )

July 11th, 2021 06:32

We all have darkness
myself and me said:

Some was engulfed by the darkness, those who find the light survived. Thank you for sharing.

July 10th, 2021 21:59

We all have darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

That light is always there Dan and I know that you have found that light switch.

Andy

July 10th, 2021 15:11

We all have darkness
dusk arising said:

The negatives from those formative years lurks within me and still manifests with a sense of being unworthy. I know where you are coming from.

July 10th, 2021 13:02

We all have darkness
Neville said:



It dont take a genius to see that \'We all have darkness\' was written from the heart ..

A little bit of insight can go a very long way when ya write and post it Dan ... I think it was Dylan said Always carry a spare light bulb with ya ................Take care mate ..

Neville


July 10th, 2021 12:13

We all have darkness
SureshG said:

The expression of pain, suffering, torture and plea is so clearly visible even in their eyes, that makes the inhumane behavior that much more cruel, that your words have brought to light.

July 10th, 2021 11:33

We all have darkness
Accidental Poet said:

No animal deserves the abuse and disrespect of uncaring humans. Well penned Dan. ; )

July 10th, 2021 07:56

We all have darkness
Doggerel Dave said:

I certainly have stopped by, Dan – I cannot tell a lie.
That little lady – amazing. I have really bad balance (always have) and therefore nothing but admiration for her.
‘Wish I could say the same of you – exploiting poor dumb animals to provide your locomotion…. 😊
Great little video made me nostalgic for those British seaside towns… Also admired your written piece – the way you have used your past very negative experiences to give you insights into what abuse can do to all living creatures – including dogs and humans.


July 10th, 2021 04:01

We all have darkness
Caring dove said:

Trauma can have such an ongoing affect , sometimes .., I understand as I’ve been through a lot of it . We can say I am worthy ... but underneath that there’s those critical thoughts sometimes ...

A well expressed piece of writing , Dan )

July 10th, 2021 03:21

Shuffle and flow
Saxon Crow said:

That\'s all we are ever meant to be brother. Well said

July 9th, 2021 13:31



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