Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
5am rambling thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
The positive power that you have have found over recent times will be the strength that you now have to live your life in a great ways despite the obstacles that come your way Dan.
Your life WILL be good.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The positive power that you have have found over recent times will be the strength that you now have to live your life in a great ways despite the obstacles that come your way Dan.
Your life WILL be good.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:17
5am rambling thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.\'
I would suggest some 75% of sincere Poetry may began with these thoughts you\'ve versed so accessibly: relatable.
A wonderful write dear Poet,
I\'m sorry you\'re experiencing one of life\'s \'sharp slaps\' of fate.
Still, I have faith in the wisdom you exemplify within your rhymes of shared solace,
I\'m certain you possess the ability to unfurl realisable avenues for managing this obstacles before you,
and I look forward to reading the fruits they will yield, once you\'ve found that safe place to land,
if I you permit me to share my two scents worth of \'learned through mistake\' - insight:
remember to share a simple joke or pick a flower or simply offer a hug, to that treasured someone(s) by your side
even in the most challenging of times, for in simply appreciating the gift - that is their presence in your life,
you will remind yourself - that yes their may still be worse to come,
but still, you possess some treasures other\'s can only dream of...
keep the faith my friend, sing your song even in the face of that bleak that threatens to swallow you whole: sing it loud and unashamedly Proud!
January 8th, 2021 08:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.\'
I would suggest some 75% of sincere Poetry may began with these thoughts you\'ve versed so accessibly: relatable.
A wonderful write dear Poet,
I\'m sorry you\'re experiencing one of life\'s \'sharp slaps\' of fate.
Still, I have faith in the wisdom you exemplify within your rhymes of shared solace,
I\'m certain you possess the ability to unfurl realisable avenues for managing this obstacles before you,
and I look forward to reading the fruits they will yield, once you\'ve found that safe place to land,
if I you permit me to share my two scents worth of \'learned through mistake\' - insight:
remember to share a simple joke or pick a flower or simply offer a hug, to that treasured someone(s) by your side
even in the most challenging of times, for in simply appreciating the gift - that is their presence in your life,
you will remind yourself - that yes their may still be worse to come,
but still, you possess some treasures other\'s can only dream of...
keep the faith my friend, sing your song even in the face of that bleak that threatens to swallow you whole: sing it loud and unashamedly Proud!
January 8th, 2021 08:34
5am rambling thoughts
Jerry Reynolds said:
Moving is a huge stress, be careful and stay safe.
January 8th, 2021 07:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Moving is a huge stress, be careful and stay safe.
January 8th, 2021 07:27
A love undefined yet
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking words my friend,
inclusive of those opposing extremities within reality,
yet still undeniably sang with a positive perspective\'s yield of self-mined prudence, choosing to believe in our ability to dictate and govern what fates: we are faced with,
a wonderful read
January 8th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking words my friend,
inclusive of those opposing extremities within reality,
yet still undeniably sang with a positive perspective\'s yield of self-mined prudence, choosing to believe in our ability to dictate and govern what fates: we are faced with,
a wonderful read
January 8th, 2021 05:49
5am rambling thoughts
dusk arising said:
I\'m sorry to read you are having a tough time at the moment. Shit happens and really tests us. You know you have the love of the family unit around you though, imagine if you were alone with all that going on.
I think you identify well the inner peace to be found when detaching from the hum-drum and hustle of city life and let your mind relax into your surroundings. I know it works for me and several others on here. Some have found a contact with the life force, the creator spirit, in this way. A way which was there long before christian churches interfered with our natural spirituality with all their mumbo jumbo.
Stay safe and don\'t lose sight of the fact that you will be on the other side of problems before long and this pandemic will also end.
Sincere best wishes to you and yours at this time my friend.
January 8th, 2021 04:52
dusk arising said:
I\'m sorry to read you are having a tough time at the moment. Shit happens and really tests us. You know you have the love of the family unit around you though, imagine if you were alone with all that going on.
I think you identify well the inner peace to be found when detaching from the hum-drum and hustle of city life and let your mind relax into your surroundings. I know it works for me and several others on here. Some have found a contact with the life force, the creator spirit, in this way. A way which was there long before christian churches interfered with our natural spirituality with all their mumbo jumbo.
Stay safe and don\'t lose sight of the fact that you will be on the other side of problems before long and this pandemic will also end.
Sincere best wishes to you and yours at this time my friend.
January 8th, 2021 04:52
A love undefined yet
RDS said:
Nice poem Dan and tied up nicely on the last line. I\'ve met a lot of different people and got to thinking people either grew up with the presence or an absence of love...real thoughtful stuff mate.
J
January 7th, 2021 20:44
RDS said:
Nice poem Dan and tied up nicely on the last line. I\'ve met a lot of different people and got to thinking people either grew up with the presence or an absence of love...real thoughtful stuff mate.
J
January 7th, 2021 20:44
A love undefined yet
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I enjoyed the read - nice one Dan.
January 7th, 2021 16:31
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I enjoyed the read - nice one Dan.
January 7th, 2021 16:31
A love undefined yet
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptive look at linguistic energy Dan - - yes Poetry is indeed life and your verse captured the depth so precisely .
January 7th, 2021 10:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptive look at linguistic energy Dan - - yes Poetry is indeed life and your verse captured the depth so precisely .
January 7th, 2021 10:59
A love undefined yet
dusk arising said:
If every one of us could use that energy you describe but in a wholesome and positive way then our world, our home, would see such a wonderful change.
January 7th, 2021 10:23
dusk arising said:
If every one of us could use that energy you describe but in a wholesome and positive way then our world, our home, would see such a wonderful change.
January 7th, 2021 10:23
A love undefined yet
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be with us all and the world will become a better place.
Good words Dan.
Andy
January 7th, 2021 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be with us all and the world will become a better place.
Good words Dan.
Andy
January 7th, 2021 02:55
Dark side of the moon
L. B. Mek said:
kinda crazy, what a few inked blots of alphabet can do on a blank canvas of possibility, when it\'s utilised with such sincerity...
when we share, our reality - stripped: from that \'self\' we think \'needs\' to be \'projected\',
distilled to that raw truth of chaotic fragility - we choose to own, in that mirror reflection we can barely confront, yet still find the strength to accept as our true selves...
what a beautiful write my friend, never take for granted this avenue of solace your writing provides to other\'s but also - more importantly: yourself,
thanks for sharing!
January 5th, 2021 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
kinda crazy, what a few inked blots of alphabet can do on a blank canvas of possibility, when it\'s utilised with such sincerity...
when we share, our reality - stripped: from that \'self\' we think \'needs\' to be \'projected\',
distilled to that raw truth of chaotic fragility - we choose to own, in that mirror reflection we can barely confront, yet still find the strength to accept as our true selves...
what a beautiful write my friend, never take for granted this avenue of solace your writing provides to other\'s but also - more importantly: yourself,
thanks for sharing!
January 5th, 2021 04:09
Dark side of the moon
Goldfinch60 said:
You know that life can be hard you have had hard times but you have got through them and have been finding the light side of the moon, this hard times are in your mind but the more you move forward with the light you have found the less times you will remember them.
See you tonight Dan under the light of the moon.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You know that life can be hard you have had hard times but you have got through them and have been finding the light side of the moon, this hard times are in your mind but the more you move forward with the light you have found the less times you will remember them.
See you tonight Dan under the light of the moon.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:49
Dark side of the moon
dusk arising said:
Forget about harping on about broken wings Dan, be pleased you can fly. Many can\'t.
January 4th, 2021 14:20
dusk arising said:
Forget about harping on about broken wings Dan, be pleased you can fly. Many can\'t.
January 4th, 2021 14:20
I wear all words close to my chest...
L. B. Mek said:
\'For still within this tortured mind many laugh as many cry, unable to see what others do! I keep up the blag until it becomes true, the proof is in the pudding mine must be good!
Unless we are all insane and around for tea, I take no sugar and Mad Hatter takes three!\'
Brilliant!
thank you for sharing dear Poet
January 4th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'For still within this tortured mind many laugh as many cry, unable to see what others do! I keep up the blag until it becomes true, the proof is in the pudding mine must be good!
Unless we are all insane and around for tea, I take no sugar and Mad Hatter takes three!\'
Brilliant!
thank you for sharing dear Poet
January 4th, 2021 05:46
I wear all words close to my chest...
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan which come straight from your heart which has become so much stronger and more positive with the new life that you are finding.
Wonderful tribute to you in the letter that you published from Soraya and Bubba, you certainly have found your place in life.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan which come straight from your heart which has become so much stronger and more positive with the new life that you are finding.
Wonderful tribute to you in the letter that you published from Soraya and Bubba, you certainly have found your place in life.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:47
I wear all words close to my chest...
dusk arising said:
I reckon in a previous life somewhere you were the alpha male of the wolf pack Dan. You must have done something wrong though cos you\'ve come back as a human, a lower life form. But hey, we\'re all making the best of this human thing although i\'m sure the animals laugh at us really.
There was a dog tethered outside the post office and as i walked in wearing a mask you could tell that this dog was thinking \"I wonder who that bloke has bitten to have to wear that muzzle\"
Praise where praise is due Dan... you know about dogs for sure. And you make wicked vids.
January 3rd, 2021 07:40
dusk arising said:
I reckon in a previous life somewhere you were the alpha male of the wolf pack Dan. You must have done something wrong though cos you\'ve come back as a human, a lower life form. But hey, we\'re all making the best of this human thing although i\'m sure the animals laugh at us really.
There was a dog tethered outside the post office and as i walked in wearing a mask you could tell that this dog was thinking \"I wonder who that bloke has bitten to have to wear that muzzle\"
Praise where praise is due Dan... you know about dogs for sure. And you make wicked vids.
January 3rd, 2021 07:40
Freedoms expanding, no questioning if permission was granted!
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A wonderful poem poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:42
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A wonderful poem poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:42
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Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, yes we may feel a bit down sometimes but you know that your life is so much better so those down times are moments that have passed and each new moment will be special, treasure each one.
Love the picture.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, yes we may feel a bit down sometimes but you know that your life is so much better so those down times are moments that have passed and each new moment will be special, treasure each one.
Love the picture.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:07
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Fay Slimm. said:
What a beautiful reason that gorgeous baby for staying on top and not going under - - your loving heart and positive outlook shines out from this reading dear Dan.......... keep that ink flowing my friend.
January 1st, 2021 13:37
Fay Slimm. said:
What a beautiful reason that gorgeous baby for staying on top and not going under - - your loving heart and positive outlook shines out from this reading dear Dan.......... keep that ink flowing my friend.
January 1st, 2021 13:37
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Neville said:
Sound advice from DA Dan ... I am glad you captured your feelings and shared them here with us ... I get the feeling you have moved forward during these last 12 very difficult months .... write on sir ....
Neville
January 1st, 2021 13:22
Neville said:
Sound advice from DA Dan ... I am glad you captured your feelings and shared them here with us ... I get the feeling you have moved forward during these last 12 very difficult months .... write on sir ....
Neville
January 1st, 2021 13:22
Freedoms expanding, no questioning if permission was granted!
dusk arising said:
Interesting to read your comment about blame. You are happy and you are to blame for that.
\"Life\'s light and dark poetic symphony\" what a great phrase you have made there. \"All I need is the air that I breathe\" is really a statement of contentment which is why i chose it for my music the other day. Long ago i accepted myself for what I am and how i think i fit/don\'t fit into the way of things. That ended all inner conflicts. Accepting the past had passed there really was no point in dwelling upon those events... exactly as your learned words tell today. You have travelled far Dan.
January 1st, 2021 10:38
dusk arising said:
Interesting to read your comment about blame. You are happy and you are to blame for that.
\"Life\'s light and dark poetic symphony\" what a great phrase you have made there. \"All I need is the air that I breathe\" is really a statement of contentment which is why i chose it for my music the other day. Long ago i accepted myself for what I am and how i think i fit/don\'t fit into the way of things. That ended all inner conflicts. Accepting the past had passed there really was no point in dwelling upon those events... exactly as your learned words tell today. You have travelled far Dan.
January 1st, 2021 10:38
More than words
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and caring tribute for that special lady who lights up your life Dan - thank you for sharing it.
December 31st, 2020 09:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and caring tribute for that special lady who lights up your life Dan - thank you for sharing it.
December 31st, 2020 09:59
More than words
dusk arising said:
It\'s so good to see the love in your words today Dan. To be able to express the love in your heart and before your eyes means you have a treasure any man would be proud of. Stand tall, the tallest of tall, for there is no greater gift than the sharing of love.
December 31st, 2020 08:02
dusk arising said:
It\'s so good to see the love in your words today Dan. To be able to express the love in your heart and before your eyes means you have a treasure any man would be proud of. Stand tall, the tallest of tall, for there is no greater gift than the sharing of love.
December 31st, 2020 08:02
River of thoughts to an ocean of dreams
L. B. Mek said:
within your choice words of nature anchored transparency - we too, recognise those emotions - we could not gather to form tangible thought\'s, let alone have them be versed: so poetically...
thanks for sharing your comforting words of wisdom dear Poet,
Happy New Year, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
within your choice words of nature anchored transparency - we too, recognise those emotions - we could not gather to form tangible thought\'s, let alone have them be versed: so poetically...
thanks for sharing your comforting words of wisdom dear Poet,
Happy New Year, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:04
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