Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Few little steps in the poerty of life
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
Few little steps in the poerty of life
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
Life is ment to inspire us all
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Life is ment to inspire us all
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
Life is ment to inspire us all
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
The growth that you have shown over recent times is so inspiring Dan, may that inspiration in your life take you to a glorious future.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
The growth that you have shown over recent times is so inspiring Dan, may that inspiration in your life take you to a glorious future.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:31
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
Neville said:
loaded with super cool metaphor and self disclosive analogy ... write on and right up my street ..............................
December 9th, 2020 18:02
Neville said:
loaded with super cool metaphor and self disclosive analogy ... write on and right up my street ..............................
December 9th, 2020 18:02
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
dusk arising said:
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what a wonderful future humanity would have. But we are all individuals and push, shove, steer, navigate and flow in a selfish and haphazard manner..... human nature eh?
December 9th, 2020 08:00
dusk arising said:
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what a wonderful future humanity would have. But we are all individuals and push, shove, steer, navigate and flow in a selfish and haphazard manner..... human nature eh?
December 9th, 2020 08:00
Eye of the beholder
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is the word that we must all use in our lives, if we respect all in our life it would be so much easier.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is the word that we must all use in our lives, if we respect all in our life it would be so much easier.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:17
Knowledge & unknown
RDS said:
That\'s a great poem Dan, can tell it\'s a happy place to be. Knowledge is an aspect of learning that keeps growing, as a mountain, you\'re climbing and more of the unknown mountain emerging from the mists. Some of the things we wish to know can\'t be grasped and some knowledge reminds us we have to participate and rediscover stuff.
Stay creative.
J
December 8th, 2020 13:36
RDS said:
That\'s a great poem Dan, can tell it\'s a happy place to be. Knowledge is an aspect of learning that keeps growing, as a mountain, you\'re climbing and more of the unknown mountain emerging from the mists. Some of the things we wish to know can\'t be grasped and some knowledge reminds us we have to participate and rediscover stuff.
Stay creative.
J
December 8th, 2020 13:36
Knowledge & unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
You are in a wonderful place Dan with happiness flowing from you, that happiness will guide you into the the unknown in a positive way and all will be so wonderful, keep keep looking forward.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
You are in a wonderful place Dan with happiness flowing from you, that happiness will guide you into the the unknown in a positive way and all will be so wonderful, keep keep looking forward.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:35
Knowledge & unknown
Michael Edwards said:
Dan - thank you so much for your really kind words. no matter what sparked this write it certainly gave rise to another super work from your pen.
keep writing mate.
December 7th, 2020 13:08
Michael Edwards said:
Dan - thank you so much for your really kind words. no matter what sparked this write it certainly gave rise to another super work from your pen.
keep writing mate.
December 7th, 2020 13:08
Knowledge & unknown
Neville said:
I got no other words but AMAZING .. there, that\'ll do nicely .... so happy for you my friend ... great vid .. great post and a couple of universal truths thrown in ... just to balance everything up nicely ....
December 7th, 2020 10:47
Neville said:
I got no other words but AMAZING .. there, that\'ll do nicely .... so happy for you my friend ... great vid .. great post and a couple of universal truths thrown in ... just to balance everything up nicely ....
December 7th, 2020 10:47
Knowledge & unknown
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many people you can blag, even yourself into facts but nature and children will see right through that!\'
what a line! a brilliant shard of penetrating wisdom - mined from within: generously shared, unfiltered and so inspiringly brave
December 7th, 2020 07:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many people you can blag, even yourself into facts but nature and children will see right through that!\'
what a line! a brilliant shard of penetrating wisdom - mined from within: generously shared, unfiltered and so inspiringly brave
December 7th, 2020 07:13
Poetry is guiding me
L. B. Mek said:
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so refreshing
December 7th, 2020 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so refreshing
December 7th, 2020 06:15
Knowledge & unknown
dusk arising said:
So much going on in your post today and your video is again terrific.
I\'m reading the words of the happy man in Dan today and it\'s good to see.
December 7th, 2020 05:46
dusk arising said:
So much going on in your post today and your video is again terrific.
I\'m reading the words of the happy man in Dan today and it\'s good to see.
December 7th, 2020 05:46
Poetry is guiding me
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful write and may poetry always be there for you.
December 6th, 2020 15:09
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful write and may poetry always be there for you.
December 6th, 2020 15:09
Poetry is guiding me
dusk arising said:
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as if we were turned inside out and able to show our most vulnerable to the world.
And of course if the world says \'that\'s beautifu;l\' then we may relax about ourselves.
So, in a word Dan \'relax\' mate.
December 6th, 2020 05:58
dusk arising said:
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as if we were turned inside out and able to show our most vulnerable to the world.
And of course if the world says \'that\'s beautifu;l\' then we may relax about ourselves.
So, in a word Dan \'relax\' mate.
December 6th, 2020 05:58
Poetry is guiding me
Goldfinch60 said:
IT is so good to see you this way Dan may your worries be truly behind you and your life be the wonderful place it now is forever.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
IT is so good to see you this way Dan may your worries be truly behind you and your life be the wonderful place it now is forever.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 04:23
Dear mother
dusk arising said:
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are changing into words of giving out love to the world. Doesn\'t giving, giving from your heart, feel good.
Keep smiling. The world smiles back when you do that.
December 5th, 2020 06:08
dusk arising said:
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are changing into words of giving out love to the world. Doesn\'t giving, giving from your heart, feel good.
Keep smiling. The world smiles back when you do that.
December 5th, 2020 06:08
Two for one because you are worth it!
Goldfinch60 said:
That world has found you Dan and has shown you the glory that it can bring to you.
Andy
December 5th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That world has found you Dan and has shown you the glory that it can bring to you.
Andy
December 5th, 2020 01:45
Two for one because you are worth it!
L. B. Mek said:
in the words of Jerry Maguire - you had me at:
\'Not sure what to write but I can tell you this, if you let others truly inspire you then there is no limit!\'
truly, a wonderful read
December 4th, 2020 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
in the words of Jerry Maguire - you had me at:
\'Not sure what to write but I can tell you this, if you let others truly inspire you then there is no limit!\'
truly, a wonderful read
December 4th, 2020 07:26
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan you have come out from a very dark time and have reached a wonderful brightness in your life.
LIVE LONG AND PROSPER indeed.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan you have come out from a very dark time and have reached a wonderful brightness in your life.
LIVE LONG AND PROSPER indeed.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:41
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