Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Poetry is guiding me
dusk arising said:
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as if we were turned inside out and able to show our most vulnerable to the world.
And of course if the world says \'that\'s beautifu;l\' then we may relax about ourselves.
So, in a word Dan \'relax\' mate.
December 6th, 2020 05:58
dusk arising said:
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as if we were turned inside out and able to show our most vulnerable to the world.
And of course if the world says \'that\'s beautifu;l\' then we may relax about ourselves.
So, in a word Dan \'relax\' mate.
December 6th, 2020 05:58
Poetry is guiding me
Goldfinch60 said:
IT is so good to see you this way Dan may your worries be truly behind you and your life be the wonderful place it now is forever.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
IT is so good to see you this way Dan may your worries be truly behind you and your life be the wonderful place it now is forever.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 04:23
Dear mother
dusk arising said:
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are changing into words of giving out love to the world. Doesn\'t giving, giving from your heart, feel good.
Keep smiling. The world smiles back when you do that.
December 5th, 2020 06:08
dusk arising said:
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are changing into words of giving out love to the world. Doesn\'t giving, giving from your heart, feel good.
Keep smiling. The world smiles back when you do that.
December 5th, 2020 06:08
Two for one because you are worth it!
Goldfinch60 said:
That world has found you Dan and has shown you the glory that it can bring to you.
Andy
December 5th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That world has found you Dan and has shown you the glory that it can bring to you.
Andy
December 5th, 2020 01:45
Two for one because you are worth it!
L. B. Mek said:
in the words of Jerry Maguire - you had me at:
\'Not sure what to write but I can tell you this, if you let others truly inspire you then there is no limit!\'
truly, a wonderful read
December 4th, 2020 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
in the words of Jerry Maguire - you had me at:
\'Not sure what to write but I can tell you this, if you let others truly inspire you then there is no limit!\'
truly, a wonderful read
December 4th, 2020 07:26
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan you have come out from a very dark time and have reached a wonderful brightness in your life.
LIVE LONG AND PROSPER indeed.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan you have come out from a very dark time and have reached a wonderful brightness in your life.
LIVE LONG AND PROSPER indeed.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:41
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
dusk arising said:
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on injustice.
Those are some building blocks for a better future for us all.
December 1st, 2020 19:10
dusk arising said:
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on injustice.
Those are some building blocks for a better future for us all.
December 1st, 2020 19:10
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
RDS said:
A simple message neatly woven together bud. Yes we\'ve got to find our nature breathing in all the rich life and decay that we feel through the years. We all shed tears, feel pain but we can stay in shape. Just breathe...and release. Good flow and nice turns of phrase mate.
You stay creative too
J
December 1st, 2020 18:38
RDS said:
A simple message neatly woven together bud. Yes we\'ve got to find our nature breathing in all the rich life and decay that we feel through the years. We all shed tears, feel pain but we can stay in shape. Just breathe...and release. Good flow and nice turns of phrase mate.
You stay creative too
J
December 1st, 2020 18:38
Mediators of life
RDS said:
This really shows your spirit Dan, a lovely soulful song of peace and love.
This string of pearls made me catch my breath at the simplicity of what you\'re saying
\"... I\'ve felt the darkness
I\'ve felt the lightness
Each is inside us...\"
Swee work my friend
J
November 30th, 2020 13:27
RDS said:
This really shows your spirit Dan, a lovely soulful song of peace and love.
This string of pearls made me catch my breath at the simplicity of what you\'re saying
\"... I\'ve felt the darkness
I\'ve felt the lightness
Each is inside us...\"
Swee work my friend
J
November 30th, 2020 13:27
Children of nature
RDS said:
A really good sentiment to bring to life with some lovely descriptive experiences knotted in your verse. Good work here Dan.
J
November 30th, 2020 13:18
RDS said:
A really good sentiment to bring to life with some lovely descriptive experiences knotted in your verse. Good work here Dan.
J
November 30th, 2020 13:18
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
L. B. Mek said:
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me energised!
wonderful flow as well, thank you for the positivity, just what I needed on a dreary Monday morning
November 30th, 2020 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me energised!
wonderful flow as well, thank you for the positivity, just what I needed on a dreary Monday morning
November 30th, 2020 04:34
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
RDS said:
Wow I am humbled thank you Dan, yes you\'re right the comments sometimes hold rare gems that can\'t be held in a poem. Unless they inspire a new one that holds the glitter and glimmering to account.
Yes humbled to find myself inspiring when I totter along...barely making sense or being coherent. Guess it\'s about finding a place where ideas resonate and agile minds are quick to pick up random threads they turn into a new dress or patches for an old much loved jacket.
We all have different turns of phrase and hooks to catch attention that increase with our exposure to other writers or styles we never tried ourselves
Stay creative bud.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:35
RDS said:
Wow I am humbled thank you Dan, yes you\'re right the comments sometimes hold rare gems that can\'t be held in a poem. Unless they inspire a new one that holds the glitter and glimmering to account.
Yes humbled to find myself inspiring when I totter along...barely making sense or being coherent. Guess it\'s about finding a place where ideas resonate and agile minds are quick to pick up random threads they turn into a new dress or patches for an old much loved jacket.
We all have different turns of phrase and hooks to catch attention that increase with our exposure to other writers or styles we never tried ourselves
Stay creative bud.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:35
I just can\'t stop!!
RDS said:
All neatly wrapped up in rhyme Poetic Dan. A reflection of you marathon sitting and you go into all the things you will continue doing. Good stuff, keep up the good word.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:15
RDS said:
All neatly wrapped up in rhyme Poetic Dan. A reflection of you marathon sitting and you go into all the things you will continue doing. Good stuff, keep up the good word.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:15
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, your life is in a great place and will be forever with you.
Love the video.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 04:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, your life is in a great place and will be forever with you.
Love the video.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 04:15
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
PoeticBiscuit said:
Great write Dan. This community is definitely amazing. Being able to ride each other’s waves of inspiration and then return the favor down the road. I know I’ve been inspired by many on here.
November 29th, 2020 03:25
PoeticBiscuit said:
Great write Dan. This community is definitely amazing. Being able to ride each other’s waves of inspiration and then return the favor down the road. I know I’ve been inspired by many on here.
November 29th, 2020 03:25
I just can\'t stop!!
Goldfinch60 said:
That guidance from nature is out there for us all Dan, you know that and are now in a place to walk with it in love and joy.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That guidance from nature is out there for us all Dan, you know that and are now in a place to walk with it in love and joy.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:42
A soulful purge!
RDS said:
Whimsically poetic story, haha Poetic Dan. Sounds like a bit of pinch your in and I must say I wouldn\'t cut it, being responsible for such decisions.
Seems like you ARE prolific at the moment and I might catch up all you\'ve posted.
Stay creative!
J
November 28th, 2020 18:18
RDS said:
Whimsically poetic story, haha Poetic Dan. Sounds like a bit of pinch your in and I must say I wouldn\'t cut it, being responsible for such decisions.
Seems like you ARE prolific at the moment and I might catch up all you\'ve posted.
Stay creative!
J
November 28th, 2020 18:18
A soulful purge!
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind is looking into your future and that is so good to be looking ahead instead of worrying about the sad times that have gone before. Your decision will be made between you and your wife and once made your life will go on with each other and your children.
Keep moving forward Dan, you are doing so well.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind is looking into your future and that is so good to be looking ahead instead of worrying about the sad times that have gone before. Your decision will be made between you and your wife and once made your life will go on with each other and your children.
Keep moving forward Dan, you are doing so well.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:09
A soulful purge!
PoeticBiscuit said:
Poetry is one of many therapies. To take your thoughts and place them on paper. I enjoyed walking through your mind in this poem of sorts and I hope you find the answers you seek.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 15:45
PoeticBiscuit said:
Poetry is one of many therapies. To take your thoughts and place them on paper. I enjoyed walking through your mind in this poem of sorts and I hope you find the answers you seek.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 15:45
What else is there to do!
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
What else is there to do!
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
I rhyme better than I can act
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
What else is there to do!
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
What else is there to do!
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
I rhyme better than I can act
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
I rhyme better than I can act
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
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