Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Life is but a dream
L. B. Mek said:
in me, at least
you\'ll always have a hand
reaching-out, ready
to do what it can,
stay strong my friend
January 22nd, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
in me, at least
you\'ll always have a hand
reaching-out, ready
to do what it can,
stay strong my friend
January 22nd, 2021 05:16
Life is a risk, get over it!
L. B. Mek said:
death tolls, my brother...
death tolls!
black n white figures, until
like Lord Sugar
(sounded a lot like you
in March
then his Sister died
in December...)
it becomes far too real
to simply ignore.
My POV is that of someone
who has immediate family members working with the NHS in the \'front line\' so to speak, dealing with both the physical and mental aspects of this cataclysmic catastrophe.
So as a supportive friend
I empathise with your plight, but
best not to base
our \'understanding\'
of a complicated situation, based on
the goal orientated opinions
of suntanned -
\'fear mongering\': sluts...
Yes, I totally agree
our \'democratically elected\' government
mishandled this crisis
at every point!
Still, what does that say about us...
Stay Safe brother
January 22nd, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
death tolls, my brother...
death tolls!
black n white figures, until
like Lord Sugar
(sounded a lot like you
in March
then his Sister died
in December...)
it becomes far too real
to simply ignore.
My POV is that of someone
who has immediate family members working with the NHS in the \'front line\' so to speak, dealing with both the physical and mental aspects of this cataclysmic catastrophe.
So as a supportive friend
I empathise with your plight, but
best not to base
our \'understanding\'
of a complicated situation, based on
the goal orientated opinions
of suntanned -
\'fear mongering\': sluts...
Yes, I totally agree
our \'democratically elected\' government
mishandled this crisis
at every point!
Still, what does that say about us...
Stay Safe brother
January 22nd, 2021 05:10
Life is but a dream
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve been down My River then Dan, it always holds my hand and guides me into wonder.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve been down My River then Dan, it always holds my hand and guides me into wonder.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:29
Life is but a dream
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Whatever floats your boat....
January 19th, 2021 20:24
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Whatever floats your boat....
January 19th, 2021 20:24
Life is but a dream
Jerry Reynolds said:
Rivers evoke questions, oceans wonder.
January 19th, 2021 18:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Rivers evoke questions, oceans wonder.
January 19th, 2021 18:21
Life is but a dream
dusk arising said:
The Buddha taught \"life is but an illusion\".
Someone else just said \"writing about yourself is therapy, writing about the world is artistry\".
January 19th, 2021 17:39
dusk arising said:
The Buddha taught \"life is but an illusion\".
Someone else just said \"writing about yourself is therapy, writing about the world is artistry\".
January 19th, 2021 17:39
Life is a risk, get over it!
Suresh said:
We have the right to bitch, but earnestly, nobody cares - so do the best you know how.
January 17th, 2021 05:41
Suresh said:
We have the right to bitch, but earnestly, nobody cares - so do the best you know how.
January 17th, 2021 05:41
Life is a risk, get over it!
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show such truth Dan, as Robert has said if we\'d have kept that first lockdown going for longer and even better to stop ANYONE coming into the country things would have been much better. But those in charge could not (and never will ) see beyond their own fulfillment.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show such truth Dan, as Robert has said if we\'d have kept that first lockdown going for longer and even better to stop ANYONE coming into the country things would have been much better. But those in charge could not (and never will ) see beyond their own fulfillment.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:18
Life is a risk, get over it!
FredPeyer said:
I understand you well P D. We haven\'t seen our kids and grand-kids for a year now. Thank God for Whatsapp and Facetime!
January 16th, 2021 13:55
FredPeyer said:
I understand you well P D. We haven\'t seen our kids and grand-kids for a year now. Thank God for Whatsapp and Facetime!
January 16th, 2021 13:55
Life is a risk, get over it!
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hang in there and Stay Safe.
January 16th, 2021 12:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hang in there and Stay Safe.
January 16th, 2021 12:03
Life is a risk, get over it!
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that, Dan. Good old Russell B - court jester, truth teller. I haven\'t seen him for a while.
I think what you say is pretty right. But we do have to take precautions on an individual level....or rather, you do with your family and I will have to when covid strikes here in Oz. as it could at any time.
Take care of yourself and family.
Dave
January 16th, 2021 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that, Dan. Good old Russell B - court jester, truth teller. I haven\'t seen him for a while.
I think what you say is pretty right. But we do have to take precautions on an individual level....or rather, you do with your family and I will have to when covid strikes here in Oz. as it could at any time.
Take care of yourself and family.
Dave
January 16th, 2021 06:15
Life is a risk, get over it!
dusk arising said:
Listen to cynics and you\'ll become a cynic. Imperfection is a part of everyday life - get over it!
January 16th, 2021 06:00
dusk arising said:
Listen to cynics and you\'ll become a cynic. Imperfection is a part of everyday life - get over it!
January 16th, 2021 06:00
Scream & shout to find what lifes about
Suresh said:
Let each shout of your lifts someone else\'s misery out. So shout, shout, shout!
January 14th, 2021 13:19
Suresh said:
Let each shout of your lifts someone else\'s misery out. So shout, shout, shout!
January 14th, 2021 13:19
Scream & shout to find what lifes about
L. B. Mek said:
ha, just need this versed to some Cha Cha Cha or Merengue music and we can all get that party started, lol
wonderfully life affirming sentiments you\'ve shared my friend, way to stay positive!
January 14th, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
ha, just need this versed to some Cha Cha Cha or Merengue music and we can all get that party started, lol
wonderfully life affirming sentiments you\'ve shared my friend, way to stay positive!
January 14th, 2021 06:17
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nature way, is the only way!\'
Amen to that a good write my fried,
Trust born of self worth,
mined from those \'lost minutes\' within introspection\'s sleepless musings,
gifts us an understanding far greater than our intellect can seemingly comprehend - but somehow, we instinctively recognise as being unquantifiable yet undeniably: true...
January 14th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nature way, is the only way!\'
Amen to that a good write my fried,
Trust born of self worth,
mined from those \'lost minutes\' within introspection\'s sleepless musings,
gifts us an understanding far greater than our intellect can seemingly comprehend - but somehow, we instinctively recognise as being unquantifiable yet undeniably: true...
January 14th, 2021 06:10
Scream & shout to find what lifes about
Goldfinch60 said:
You have obviously found love in your life Dan and that love has changed your dark into light.
Love the video, she is doing so well.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
You have obviously found love in your life Dan and that love has changed your dark into light.
Love the video, she is doing so well.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:36
Scream & shout to find what lifes about
Doggerel Dave said:
(Provided you don\'t scare other people, scream all you like, mate.)
Dan, I think you\'ve got something there - \'To live is a purpose unrefined\' is a worthwhile conclusion for me, while how you achieve your mid poem balance is probably different for everyone, as you rightly point out.
Take care, Dave
January 13th, 2021 15:35
Doggerel Dave said:
(Provided you don\'t scare other people, scream all you like, mate.)
Dan, I think you\'ve got something there - \'To live is a purpose unrefined\' is a worthwhile conclusion for me, while how you achieve your mid poem balance is probably different for everyone, as you rightly point out.
Take care, Dave
January 13th, 2021 15:35
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
Neville said:
This is brilliant Dan a great and meaningful prose poem and an amazing educational video too .. as a dog guy myself .. I thank you and on behalf of all those who are not but learn from this page, I also thank you ...
Neville
January 13th, 2021 04:53
Neville said:
This is brilliant Dan a great and meaningful prose poem and an amazing educational video too .. as a dog guy myself .. I thank you and on behalf of all those who are not but learn from this page, I also thank you ...
Neville
January 13th, 2021 04:53
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dan, I was brought up with dogs in the house and you just get to know how to be with them so even now in my elder years and I meet dogs all is always fine and dogs can see this and respond so well.
Andy
January 13th, 2021 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dan, I was brought up with dogs in the house and you just get to know how to be with them so even now in my elder years and I meet dogs all is always fine and dogs can see this and respond so well.
Andy
January 13th, 2021 02:01
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
dusk arising said:
You\'re so right Dan, not that you need me to tell you LOL. My jobs were always in peoples homes and often I would encounter that noisey alert nervous dog scenario. What do I do...I ignore it completely (unless it\'s growling and slavering - i\'m out the door if its one of those). In it\'s own time the dog will quieten down and get enquisitive just as u suggest. I still ignore it and let it get used to the idea i\'m not a threat. Now I love dogs so it\'s a pleasure if that dog changes it\'s demeanor and lets me pet it. They mostly do. Always a dog is more on the alert though if I, as a solitary big male with a deep voice, should come into it\'s space where it is with the lady of the house. This has always given me the impression that a dog or bitch is being very protective of that lady of the house. Everybody should be aware of these things in dog behaviour. Eye contact should be momentary, if at all, until the dog relaxes. Also if you pretend to yawn it helps relax the dog.... yawning cannot be seen as in any way aggressive.
January 12th, 2021 16:42
dusk arising said:
You\'re so right Dan, not that you need me to tell you LOL. My jobs were always in peoples homes and often I would encounter that noisey alert nervous dog scenario. What do I do...I ignore it completely (unless it\'s growling and slavering - i\'m out the door if its one of those). In it\'s own time the dog will quieten down and get enquisitive just as u suggest. I still ignore it and let it get used to the idea i\'m not a threat. Now I love dogs so it\'s a pleasure if that dog changes it\'s demeanor and lets me pet it. They mostly do. Always a dog is more on the alert though if I, as a solitary big male with a deep voice, should come into it\'s space where it is with the lady of the house. This has always given me the impression that a dog or bitch is being very protective of that lady of the house. Everybody should be aware of these things in dog behaviour. Eye contact should be momentary, if at all, until the dog relaxes. Also if you pretend to yawn it helps relax the dog.... yawning cannot be seen as in any way aggressive.
January 12th, 2021 16:42
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
Suresh said:
The fear, and ignorance can be best eleviate day learning to communicate. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 14:35
Suresh said:
The fear, and ignorance can be best eleviate day learning to communicate. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 14:35
Dog or not we have mostly forgot
orchidee said:
Bit dark there! Good write Dan.
January 12th, 2021 06:45
orchidee said:
Bit dark there! Good write Dan.
January 12th, 2021 06:45
Just a clip or is it? believe what you wish
FredPeyer said:
I like this one P D! Maybe the world IS spinning faster. It seems to me that time accelerates as we age.
January 9th, 2021 15:09
FredPeyer said:
I like this one P D! Maybe the world IS spinning faster. It seems to me that time accelerates as we age.
January 9th, 2021 15:09
Just a clip or is it? believe what you wish
dusk arising said:
Funny thing about nature is, you don\'t ever have to ask if it\'s true or false cos it\'s nature doing it\'s thing. Maybe the further away from nature we get, the more we fall out of harmony with just being what we are.
January 9th, 2021 05:46
dusk arising said:
Funny thing about nature is, you don\'t ever have to ask if it\'s true or false cos it\'s nature doing it\'s thing. Maybe the further away from nature we get, the more we fall out of harmony with just being what we are.
January 9th, 2021 05:46
Just a clip or is it? believe what you wish
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write Dan
January 9th, 2021 03:14
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write Dan
January 9th, 2021 03:14
Just a clip or is it? believe what you wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things in front of you as you walk in life are the only way to believe.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things in front of you as you walk in life are the only way to believe.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 02:41
5am rambling thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
The positive power that you have have found over recent times will be the strength that you now have to live your life in a great ways despite the obstacles that come your way Dan.
Your life WILL be good.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The positive power that you have have found over recent times will be the strength that you now have to live your life in a great ways despite the obstacles that come your way Dan.
Your life WILL be good.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:17
5am rambling thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.\'
I would suggest some 75% of sincere Poetry may began with these thoughts you\'ve versed so accessibly: relatable.
A wonderful write dear Poet,
I\'m sorry you\'re experiencing one of life\'s \'sharp slaps\' of fate.
Still, I have faith in the wisdom you exemplify within your rhymes of shared solace,
I\'m certain you possess the ability to unfurl realisable avenues for managing this obstacles before you,
and I look forward to reading the fruits they will yield, once you\'ve found that safe place to land,
if I you permit me to share my two scents worth of \'learned through mistake\' - insight:
remember to share a simple joke or pick a flower or simply offer a hug, to that treasured someone(s) by your side
even in the most challenging of times, for in simply appreciating the gift - that is their presence in your life,
you will remind yourself - that yes their may still be worse to come,
but still, you possess some treasures other\'s can only dream of...
keep the faith my friend, sing your song even in the face of that bleak that threatens to swallow you whole: sing it loud and unashamedly Proud!
January 8th, 2021 08:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.\'
I would suggest some 75% of sincere Poetry may began with these thoughts you\'ve versed so accessibly: relatable.
A wonderful write dear Poet,
I\'m sorry you\'re experiencing one of life\'s \'sharp slaps\' of fate.
Still, I have faith in the wisdom you exemplify within your rhymes of shared solace,
I\'m certain you possess the ability to unfurl realisable avenues for managing this obstacles before you,
and I look forward to reading the fruits they will yield, once you\'ve found that safe place to land,
if I you permit me to share my two scents worth of \'learned through mistake\' - insight:
remember to share a simple joke or pick a flower or simply offer a hug, to that treasured someone(s) by your side
even in the most challenging of times, for in simply appreciating the gift - that is their presence in your life,
you will remind yourself - that yes their may still be worse to come,
but still, you possess some treasures other\'s can only dream of...
keep the faith my friend, sing your song even in the face of that bleak that threatens to swallow you whole: sing it loud and unashamedly Proud!
January 8th, 2021 08:34
5am rambling thoughts
Jerry Reynolds said:
Moving is a huge stress, be careful and stay safe.
January 8th, 2021 07:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Moving is a huge stress, be careful and stay safe.
January 8th, 2021 07:27
A love undefined yet
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking words my friend,
inclusive of those opposing extremities within reality,
yet still undeniably sang with a positive perspective\'s yield of self-mined prudence, choosing to believe in our ability to dictate and govern what fates: we are faced with,
a wonderful read
January 8th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking words my friend,
inclusive of those opposing extremities within reality,
yet still undeniably sang with a positive perspective\'s yield of self-mined prudence, choosing to believe in our ability to dictate and govern what fates: we are faced with,
a wonderful read
January 8th, 2021 05:49
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