Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
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L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, another sample evidence of the inclusive atmosphere you\'ve all helped cultivate here at MPS,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 15th, 2020 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, another sample evidence of the inclusive atmosphere you\'ve all helped cultivate here at MPS,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 15th, 2020 05:40
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey can change form moment to moment but your moments are becoming more joyful every time Dan.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey can change form moment to moment but your moments are becoming more joyful every time Dan.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:25
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly said 101 % I\'ll be giving till I\'m dead!
Thank you again for the support of my ramblings
Always appreciated!
December 14th, 2020 07:56
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly said 101 % I\'ll be giving till I\'m dead!
Thank you again for the support of my ramblings
Always appreciated!
December 14th, 2020 07:56
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
L. B. Mek said:
like Dusk, I\'m on board 101%, lol
another good read you\'ve penned dear Poet
December 14th, 2020 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
like Dusk, I\'m on board 101%, lol
another good read you\'ve penned dear Poet
December 14th, 2020 06:18
Few little steps in the poerty of life
L. B. Mek said:
\'then I\'ll slap myself with all I\'ve written here\'
that Sir, is Poetry (in all its forms) distilled to its very nucleus: purpose, for existence...
Amen! oh gifted Poet, what a beautiful dedication you\'ve penned to one of life\'s most wholesome of wonder\'s, may the love you imbued in your song keep her safe and never too far: from her next smile, thank you for sharing!
December 14th, 2020 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'then I\'ll slap myself with all I\'ve written here\'
that Sir, is Poetry (in all its forms) distilled to its very nucleus: purpose, for existence...
Amen! oh gifted Poet, what a beautiful dedication you\'ve penned to one of life\'s most wholesome of wonder\'s, may the love you imbued in your song keep her safe and never too far: from her next smile, thank you for sharing!
December 14th, 2020 05:14
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
dusk arising said:
Yes, it\'s all about the journey, I am with you 100% on that vibe.
December 14th, 2020 03:57
dusk arising said:
Yes, it\'s all about the journey, I am with you 100% on that vibe.
December 14th, 2020 03:57
Few little steps in the poerty of life
dusk arising said:
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures they bring forth.
You words today are more than about what young Maarii Iris has achieved, for there are great big steps you have too achieved and it seems your are learning to walk tall and look the world right in the eye with love shining out of your eyes.
Respect.
December 14th, 2020 03:30
dusk arising said:
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures they bring forth.
You words today are more than about what young Maarii Iris has achieved, for there are great big steps you have too achieved and it seems your are learning to walk tall and look the world right in the eye with love shining out of your eyes.
Respect.
December 14th, 2020 03:30
Few little steps in the poerty of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful video Dan, those first steps are so important and you have captured them bring joy to all of us.
May you new dragonfly bring you the beauty and love as she flies through the wonder of her life that is ahead of her.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful video Dan, those first steps are so important and you have captured them bring joy to all of us.
May you new dragonfly bring you the beauty and love as she flies through the wonder of her life that is ahead of her.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 01:51
Few little steps in the poerty of life
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
Few little steps in the poerty of life
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
Life is ment to inspire us all
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Life is ment to inspire us all
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
Life is ment to inspire us all
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
The growth that you have shown over recent times is so inspiring Dan, may that inspiration in your life take you to a glorious future.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
The growth that you have shown over recent times is so inspiring Dan, may that inspiration in your life take you to a glorious future.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:31
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
Neville said:
loaded with super cool metaphor and self disclosive analogy ... write on and right up my street ..............................
December 9th, 2020 18:02
Neville said:
loaded with super cool metaphor and self disclosive analogy ... write on and right up my street ..............................
December 9th, 2020 18:02
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
dusk arising said:
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what a wonderful future humanity would have. But we are all individuals and push, shove, steer, navigate and flow in a selfish and haphazard manner..... human nature eh?
December 9th, 2020 08:00
dusk arising said:
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what a wonderful future humanity would have. But we are all individuals and push, shove, steer, navigate and flow in a selfish and haphazard manner..... human nature eh?
December 9th, 2020 08:00
Eye of the beholder
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is the word that we must all use in our lives, if we respect all in our life it would be so much easier.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is the word that we must all use in our lives, if we respect all in our life it would be so much easier.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:17
Knowledge & unknown
RDS said:
That\'s a great poem Dan, can tell it\'s a happy place to be. Knowledge is an aspect of learning that keeps growing, as a mountain, you\'re climbing and more of the unknown mountain emerging from the mists. Some of the things we wish to know can\'t be grasped and some knowledge reminds us we have to participate and rediscover stuff.
Stay creative.
J
December 8th, 2020 13:36
RDS said:
That\'s a great poem Dan, can tell it\'s a happy place to be. Knowledge is an aspect of learning that keeps growing, as a mountain, you\'re climbing and more of the unknown mountain emerging from the mists. Some of the things we wish to know can\'t be grasped and some knowledge reminds us we have to participate and rediscover stuff.
Stay creative.
J
December 8th, 2020 13:36
Knowledge & unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
You are in a wonderful place Dan with happiness flowing from you, that happiness will guide you into the the unknown in a positive way and all will be so wonderful, keep keep looking forward.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
You are in a wonderful place Dan with happiness flowing from you, that happiness will guide you into the the unknown in a positive way and all will be so wonderful, keep keep looking forward.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:35
Knowledge & unknown
Michael Edwards said:
Dan - thank you so much for your really kind words. no matter what sparked this write it certainly gave rise to another super work from your pen.
keep writing mate.
December 7th, 2020 13:08
Michael Edwards said:
Dan - thank you so much for your really kind words. no matter what sparked this write it certainly gave rise to another super work from your pen.
keep writing mate.
December 7th, 2020 13:08
Knowledge & unknown
Neville said:
I got no other words but AMAZING .. there, that\'ll do nicely .... so happy for you my friend ... great vid .. great post and a couple of universal truths thrown in ... just to balance everything up nicely ....
December 7th, 2020 10:47
Neville said:
I got no other words but AMAZING .. there, that\'ll do nicely .... so happy for you my friend ... great vid .. great post and a couple of universal truths thrown in ... just to balance everything up nicely ....
December 7th, 2020 10:47
Knowledge & unknown
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many people you can blag, even yourself into facts but nature and children will see right through that!\'
what a line! a brilliant shard of penetrating wisdom - mined from within: generously shared, unfiltered and so inspiringly brave
December 7th, 2020 07:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'For many people you can blag, even yourself into facts but nature and children will see right through that!\'
what a line! a brilliant shard of penetrating wisdom - mined from within: generously shared, unfiltered and so inspiringly brave
December 7th, 2020 07:13
Poetry is guiding me
L. B. Mek said:
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so refreshing
December 7th, 2020 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so refreshing
December 7th, 2020 06:15
Knowledge & unknown
dusk arising said:
So much going on in your post today and your video is again terrific.
I\'m reading the words of the happy man in Dan today and it\'s good to see.
December 7th, 2020 05:46
dusk arising said:
So much going on in your post today and your video is again terrific.
I\'m reading the words of the happy man in Dan today and it\'s good to see.
December 7th, 2020 05:46
Poetry is guiding me
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful write and may poetry always be there for you.
December 6th, 2020 15:09
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful write and may poetry always be there for you.
December 6th, 2020 15:09
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