Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Fusion inspired to no longer survive
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read Dan. Have a Happy Holiday
December 18th, 2020 14:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read Dan. Have a Happy Holiday
December 18th, 2020 14:53
Fusion inspired to no longer survive
AuburnScribbler said:
Powerful words here Poetic Dan, and I totally understand the chosen picture to accompany the piece.
I hope that all is well and that you have a safe and Merry Christmas.
December 18th, 2020 10:27
AuburnScribbler said:
Powerful words here Poetic Dan, and I totally understand the chosen picture to accompany the piece.
I hope that all is well and that you have a safe and Merry Christmas.
December 18th, 2020 10:27
Changing times & still a need to rhyme!
L. B. Mek said:
such a true point, especially the \'intended\' element of your message,
sadly we are all subjected to varied childhood\'s and thus instilled with such differing fundamentals to that core foundation we establish - as to the true worth of a life, of other\'s and especially our own,
I have found those with little self-respect tend to demonstrate the cruellest of outwardly symptoms, as-if in each act of brutality they indulge - they are daring for anything within existence to stop them, because when they experienced whatever ill-fate imbued such hate - within them: nothing came to their aid...
while those with a much more \'humane\' foundation of self-worth have the \'luxury/ability\' to empathise the consequences of their actions, they know how shocking physical pain is: when it\'s experienced rarely...
a brilliantly simplified write, to what is a deeply complex and disturbingly common aspect of human nature,
thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply, hope I interpreted the sentiment\'s in you write accurately
December 17th, 2020 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
such a true point, especially the \'intended\' element of your message,
sadly we are all subjected to varied childhood\'s and thus instilled with such differing fundamentals to that core foundation we establish - as to the true worth of a life, of other\'s and especially our own,
I have found those with little self-respect tend to demonstrate the cruellest of outwardly symptoms, as-if in each act of brutality they indulge - they are daring for anything within existence to stop them, because when they experienced whatever ill-fate imbued such hate - within them: nothing came to their aid...
while those with a much more \'humane\' foundation of self-worth have the \'luxury/ability\' to empathise the consequences of their actions, they know how shocking physical pain is: when it\'s experienced rarely...
a brilliantly simplified write, to what is a deeply complex and disturbingly common aspect of human nature,
thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply, hope I interpreted the sentiment\'s in you write accurately
December 17th, 2020 05:12
Changing times & still a need to rhyme!
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dan.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dan.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:21
Changing times & still a need to rhyme!
FredPeyer said:
Three kids and I only slapped one of them once after he said something bad about his mother. The slap was not premeditated, came out of nowhere and I still regret it today so many years later. My son though later said he deserved it.
Very well written PD and I agree with you despite my one slip!
December 16th, 2020 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Three kids and I only slapped one of them once after he said something bad about his mother. The slap was not premeditated, came out of nowhere and I still regret it today so many years later. My son though later said he deserved it.
Very well written PD and I agree with you despite my one slip!
December 16th, 2020 12:04
Changing times & still a need to rhyme!
peto said:
Well said Dan
Powerful message
No need to do unto others what was done to us in a different era
December 16th, 2020 07:51
peto said:
Well said Dan
Powerful message
No need to do unto others what was done to us in a different era
December 16th, 2020 07:51
Changing times & still a need to rhyme!
orchidee said:
Good write and clip Dan.
December 16th, 2020 07:30
orchidee said:
Good write and clip Dan.
December 16th, 2020 07:30
Dear writers
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, I too remember Kevin Browne as well. There are many fine poets on this site and we should be grateful to them all for the inspiration that they give us, this of course includes you.
Well done
Andy
(love the picture of the goldfinch)
December 16th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, I too remember Kevin Browne as well. There are many fine poets on this site and we should be grateful to them all for the inspiration that they give us, this of course includes you.
Well done
Andy
(love the picture of the goldfinch)
December 16th, 2020 01:45
Dear writers
FredPeyer said:
Dan, thank you for your kind words. I do believe that MPS is quite unique and it does feel good to be a part it. You expressed it well.
December 15th, 2020 11:54
FredPeyer said:
Dan, thank you for your kind words. I do believe that MPS is quite unique and it does feel good to be a part it. You expressed it well.
December 15th, 2020 11:54
Dear writers
Michael Edwards said:
Well said my good man - this site is truely a bunch of roses despite the few picks who post from time to time.
December 15th, 2020 09:18
Michael Edwards said:
Well said my good man - this site is truely a bunch of roses despite the few picks who post from time to time.
December 15th, 2020 09:18
Dear writers
dusk arising said:
Well said Dan. I know MPS has given me many things and i have learned so much from many poetic outpourings from talented, learned and wiser minds.
December 15th, 2020 08:23
dusk arising said:
Well said Dan. I know MPS has given me many things and i have learned so much from many poetic outpourings from talented, learned and wiser minds.
December 15th, 2020 08:23
Dear writers
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, another sample evidence of the inclusive atmosphere you\'ve all helped cultivate here at MPS,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 15th, 2020 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, another sample evidence of the inclusive atmosphere you\'ve all helped cultivate here at MPS,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 15th, 2020 05:40
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey can change form moment to moment but your moments are becoming more joyful every time Dan.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey can change form moment to moment but your moments are becoming more joyful every time Dan.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:25
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly said 101 % I\'ll be giving till I\'m dead!
Thank you again for the support of my ramblings
Always appreciated!
December 14th, 2020 07:56
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly said 101 % I\'ll be giving till I\'m dead!
Thank you again for the support of my ramblings
Always appreciated!
December 14th, 2020 07:56
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
L. B. Mek said:
like Dusk, I\'m on board 101%, lol
another good read you\'ve penned dear Poet
December 14th, 2020 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
like Dusk, I\'m on board 101%, lol
another good read you\'ve penned dear Poet
December 14th, 2020 06:18
Few little steps in the poerty of life
L. B. Mek said:
\'then I\'ll slap myself with all I\'ve written here\'
that Sir, is Poetry (in all its forms) distilled to its very nucleus: purpose, for existence...
Amen! oh gifted Poet, what a beautiful dedication you\'ve penned to one of life\'s most wholesome of wonder\'s, may the love you imbued in your song keep her safe and never too far: from her next smile, thank you for sharing!
December 14th, 2020 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'then I\'ll slap myself with all I\'ve written here\'
that Sir, is Poetry (in all its forms) distilled to its very nucleus: purpose, for existence...
Amen! oh gifted Poet, what a beautiful dedication you\'ve penned to one of life\'s most wholesome of wonder\'s, may the love you imbued in your song keep her safe and never too far: from her next smile, thank you for sharing!
December 14th, 2020 05:14
We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us!
dusk arising said:
Yes, it\'s all about the journey, I am with you 100% on that vibe.
December 14th, 2020 03:57
dusk arising said:
Yes, it\'s all about the journey, I am with you 100% on that vibe.
December 14th, 2020 03:57
Few little steps in the poerty of life
dusk arising said:
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures they bring forth.
You words today are more than about what young Maarii Iris has achieved, for there are great big steps you have too achieved and it seems your are learning to walk tall and look the world right in the eye with love shining out of your eyes.
Respect.
December 14th, 2020 03:30
dusk arising said:
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures they bring forth.
You words today are more than about what young Maarii Iris has achieved, for there are great big steps you have too achieved and it seems your are learning to walk tall and look the world right in the eye with love shining out of your eyes.
Respect.
December 14th, 2020 03:30
Few little steps in the poerty of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful video Dan, those first steps are so important and you have captured them bring joy to all of us.
May you new dragonfly bring you the beauty and love as she flies through the wonder of her life that is ahead of her.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful video Dan, those first steps are so important and you have captured them bring joy to all of us.
May you new dragonfly bring you the beauty and love as she flies through the wonder of her life that is ahead of her.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 01:51
Few little steps in the poerty of life
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
FredPeyer said:
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain\'t bad either!
I don\'t remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
December 13th, 2020 13:15
Few little steps in the poerty of life
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
orchidee said:
A lovely clip and write Dan.
December 13th, 2020 06:29
Life is ment to inspire us all
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a has said, you have come such a long way in your life and it has now become wonderful and will always be so with the positive attitude you now have.
As for going in the sea, afraid not I have never learned to swim.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:12
Life is ment to inspire us all
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
dusk arising said:
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture for you.
You can only be what you are today because you are made a better man by surviving. It is only the darkness of your yesterdays which enable you to see the light of today so brightly and to dance in it\'s glory. Enjoy what you have today, for you deserve the goodness.
There will be times when the darkness of the past enters your mind again and tries to pull you into a dark place again. Be prepared. Keep something - like a sergeants stripes on your arm for example - so that, when dark days call, you can touch those stripes and say to yourself \"F..k off darkness, i have earned the right to be happy - these stripes are my proof\".
December 12th, 2020 19:20
Life is ment to inspire us all
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
FredPeyer said:
PD you did it again, penned a great poem. I salute you and your wife for dipping into the ocean in December. We do it all the time here, nothing special! Welcome to Hawaii!!!
December 12th, 2020 14:59
Humanity needs pollen & seeds
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
some inspiring nuggets of truth you\'ve inked here, dear poet
thank you for sharing
December 10th, 2020 04:45
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