Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Not the end of the world, just the edge!
L. B. Mek said:
\'Until you come back to a reality where hope is not gone, yet the connection to others is a delicate tone
No food for thought just an empty shell, a world that\'s crumbling behind the smile of all is well!\'
Brilliant!!!
November 12th, 2020 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Until you come back to a reality where hope is not gone, yet the connection to others is a delicate tone
No food for thought just an empty shell, a world that\'s crumbling behind the smile of all is well!\'
Brilliant!!!
November 12th, 2020 04:59
Maarii lullaby returns
Goldfinch60 said:
Great positive words Dan, that light is there for both of you and I can see you both singing and dancing by the see with the absolute joy and wonder that is there with you and Maarii.
Andy
November 12th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Great positive words Dan, that light is there for both of you and I can see you both singing and dancing by the see with the absolute joy and wonder that is there with you and Maarii.
Andy
November 12th, 2020 01:25
Just another poem
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
Just another poem but wait this is a good poem.
Only three hours sleep and you came up with this perfect write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown
FineB
November 11th, 2020 14:46
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
Just another poem but wait this is a good poem.
Only three hours sleep and you came up with this perfect write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown
FineB
November 11th, 2020 14:46
Just another poem
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s more than just another poem - super work and a true cry from the heart.
November 11th, 2020 04:16
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s more than just another poem - super work and a true cry from the heart.
November 11th, 2020 04:16
Just another poem
Goldfinch60 said:
That better tomorrow will be there for you Dan, just look back at how far you have moved on in your life, you have come a long way and will always be better than you were.
Andy
November 11th, 2020 03:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That better tomorrow will be there for you Dan, just look back at how far you have moved on in your life, you have come a long way and will always be better than you were.
Andy
November 11th, 2020 03:28
Not the end of the world, just the edge!
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge is always there in life but we should always leave it behind us as in the maps of old at the edge of the earth was the warning \"Here be dragons!\"
Andy
November 11th, 2020 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge is always there in life but we should always leave it behind us as in the maps of old at the edge of the earth was the warning \"Here be dragons!\"
Andy
November 11th, 2020 02:57
Not the end of the world, just the edge!
MendedFences27 said:
\"It\'s not the end of the world.\" If it were would we be standing around talking about it, People say these things not for another\'s sake, but for their own.
As for the \"Edge,\" that\'s why we\'re here, poets live on the edge. It\'s a scary place, so we create phrases of hope, \"Life will go on, Hang in there, etc.\"
A thought provoking poem. Thank you. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2020 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
\"It\'s not the end of the world.\" If it were would we be standing around talking about it, People say these things not for another\'s sake, but for their own.
As for the \"Edge,\" that\'s why we\'re here, poets live on the edge. It\'s a scary place, so we create phrases of hope, \"Life will go on, Hang in there, etc.\"
A thought provoking poem. Thank you. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2020 15:38
Love will find a way
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16
Walk the line
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things and feelings in a super way. Kudos for this rich poem.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 12:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things and feelings in a super way. Kudos for this rich poem.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 12:21
Walk the line
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this Poem, Poetic Dan! Yes if we can get past what we see as ugly in our own minds then maybe we can get to the Beauty We All Really Are! Love Don
November 9th, 2020 11:15
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this Poem, Poetic Dan! Yes if we can get past what we see as ugly in our own minds then maybe we can get to the Beauty We All Really Are! Love Don
November 9th, 2020 11:15
Walk the line
Goldfinch60 said:
\"It is written in the stars, love never leaves the heart! \" so important in our lives, love can cure all ills in our lives.
Andy
November 9th, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
\"It is written in the stars, love never leaves the heart! \" so important in our lives, love can cure all ills in our lives.
Andy
November 9th, 2020 01:52
Love will find a way
Saima said:
This is a wonderful poem, reminds me of my current relationship. Always ups and downs, but nothing comes inbetween our love.
Carry on writing, I always enjoy your poems.
November 3rd, 2020 23:28
Saima said:
This is a wonderful poem, reminds me of my current relationship. Always ups and downs, but nothing comes inbetween our love.
Carry on writing, I always enjoy your poems.
November 3rd, 2020 23:28
Love will find a way
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, brilliant imagery and a seamless rhythmic flow,
great write!
November 2nd, 2020 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, brilliant imagery and a seamless rhythmic flow,
great write!
November 2nd, 2020 05:37
Love will find a way
Michael Edwards said:
As music grows
the water flows
and carries dreams
in rythmic streams.
Nice one PD
November 1st, 2020 13:16
Michael Edwards said:
As music grows
the water flows
and carries dreams
in rythmic streams.
Nice one PD
November 1st, 2020 13:16
Love will find a way
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
Thanks for a great write.
Love such a splendid thing,!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:13
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
Thanks for a great write.
Love such a splendid thing,!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:13
Love will find a way
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you will dance down that river of dreams together to the reality of the love that is there between you both and will go on for ever. Keep dancing.
Andy
November 1st, 2020 04:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you will dance down that river of dreams together to the reality of the love that is there between you both and will go on for ever. Keep dancing.
Andy
November 1st, 2020 04:03
Last one before sun
Crowns4Christ said:
i don\'t know what your beliefs are,but put your trust into god and ask him for healing,he is there when you need him.great write,i look forward to reading more of your work.thank you dan. melissa crown
October 12th, 2020 18:44
Crowns4Christ said:
i don\'t know what your beliefs are,but put your trust into god and ask him for healing,he is there when you need him.great write,i look forward to reading more of your work.thank you dan. melissa crown
October 12th, 2020 18:44
Last one before sun
Neville said:
You must keep writing .. you have a real and rare talent for expressing how it really is ..
October 12th, 2020 14:59
Neville said:
You must keep writing .. you have a real and rare talent for expressing how it really is ..
October 12th, 2020 14:59
Last one before sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted in.\'
such a poignant line,
it was the great Montaigne that stated: \'I speak to paper, as I speak to the first person I meet\' and ultimately, this must be the greatest gift poetry yields for those who utilise its healing secrets, as all your writes demonstrate
October 12th, 2020 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted in.\'
such a poignant line,
it was the great Montaigne that stated: \'I speak to paper, as I speak to the first person I meet\' and ultimately, this must be the greatest gift poetry yields for those who utilise its healing secrets, as all your writes demonstrate
October 12th, 2020 04:48
Last one before sun
Goldfinch60 said:
You certainly will be back home Dan and back into that wonderful life that you have been creating over the years.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
You certainly will be back home Dan and back into that wonderful life that you have been creating over the years.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:42
So dark, I can\'t find a smile
Crowns4Christ said:
just know the mps family is here to support you if you need it.i can feel the raw emotion,dan. here for you melissa crown
October 11th, 2020 17:12
Crowns4Christ said:
just know the mps family is here to support you if you need it.i can feel the raw emotion,dan. here for you melissa crown
October 11th, 2020 17:12
So dark, I can\'t find a smile
Neville said:
Listen to the little golden bird Dan .. He is a wise old bird indeed & said it far better than I can ...
October 11th, 2020 01:03
Neville said:
Listen to the little golden bird Dan .. He is a wise old bird indeed & said it far better than I can ...
October 11th, 2020 01:03
So dark, I can\'t find a smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Dan, you have moved on so much in your life that the good days will outweigh the bad days, we all still have bad days but we also know that the good ones will be there for us.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Dan, you have moved on so much in your life that the good days will outweigh the bad days, we all still have bad days but we also know that the good ones will be there for us.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:35
Next stage....
L. B. Mek said:
good write, I appreciate its uplifting positivity and insightful observations
October 8th, 2020 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
good write, I appreciate its uplifting positivity and insightful observations
October 8th, 2020 03:55
Next stage....
Goldfinch60 said:
Life’s lessons give strength to go forward into the better life that you are creating for yourself Dan.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Life’s lessons give strength to go forward into the better life that you are creating for yourself Dan.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:49
Next stage....
MaddieJ said:
I love the relationship between life\'s lessons and the stars. There\'s a lot we can learn from them indeed. I also find it interesting that there are so many! Everyone has a chance to shine and even after death, light can be seen from their presence in the universe!
October 7th, 2020 01:04
MaddieJ said:
I love the relationship between life\'s lessons and the stars. There\'s a lot we can learn from them indeed. I also find it interesting that there are so many! Everyone has a chance to shine and even after death, light can be seen from their presence in the universe!
October 7th, 2020 01:04
No hiding here!
Fay Slimm. said:
A top drawer write Dan and one that I will read over again for a long time - into my faves goes No Hiding Here.
September 29th, 2020 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A top drawer write Dan and one that I will read over again for a long time - into my faves goes No Hiding Here.
September 29th, 2020 05:17
No hiding here!
Goldfinch60 said:
There is more out there Dan, it will come to us all once we realise those who have the power in our lives are only in it for their own greed.
We know that living a none greedy life will take us further than they will ever go.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 04:36
Goldfinch60 said:
There is more out there Dan, it will come to us all once we realise those who have the power in our lives are only in it for their own greed.
We know that living a none greedy life will take us further than they will ever go.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 04:36
Write to be popular, that is not what I do!
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks PD
September 23rd, 2020 04:30
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks PD
September 23rd, 2020 04:30
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