Walk the line
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things and feelings in a super way. Kudos for this rich poem.

Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.

November 9th, 2020 12:21

Walk the line
Goldfinch60 said:

\"It is written in the stars, love never leaves the heart! \" so important in our lives, love can cure all ills in our lives.

Andy

November 9th, 2020 01:52

Love will find a way
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful dedication, brilliant imagery and a seamless rhythmic flow,
great write!

November 2nd, 2020 05:37

Love will find a way
FineB said:

Hi Poetic Dan,

Thanks for a great write.

Love such a splendid thing,!

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

November 1st, 2020 13:13

Last one before sun
Crowns4Christ said:

i don\'t know what your beliefs are,but put your trust into god and ask him for healing,he is there when you need him.great write,i look forward to reading more of your work.thank you dan. melissa crown

October 12th, 2020 18:44

Last one before sun
L. B. Mek said:

\'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted in.\'
such a poignant line,
it was the great Montaigne that stated: \'I speak to paper, as I speak to the first person I meet\' and ultimately, this must be the greatest gift poetry yields for those who utilise its healing secrets, as all your writes demonstrate

October 12th, 2020 04:48

So dark, I can\'t find a smile
Crowns4Christ said:

just know the mps family is here to support you if you need it.i can feel the raw emotion,dan. here for you melissa crown

October 11th, 2020 17:12

So dark, I can\'t find a smile
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write Dan, you have moved on so much in your life that the good days will outweigh the bad days, we all still have bad days but we also know that the good ones will be there for us.

Andy

October 11th, 2020 00:35

Next stage....
Saxon Crow said:

I love this Dan. Never lose hope... Ever

October 8th, 2020 02:33

Next stage....
MaddieJ said:

I love the relationship between life\'s lessons and the stars. There\'s a lot we can learn from them indeed. I also find it interesting that there are so many! Everyone has a chance to shine and even after death, light can be seen from their presence in the universe!

October 7th, 2020 01:04

No hiding here!
Goldfinch60 said:

There is more out there Dan, it will come to us all once we realise those who have the power in our lives are only in it for their own greed.
We know that living a none greedy life will take us further than they will ever go.

Andy

September 29th, 2020 04:36

Write to be popular, that is not what I do!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Dan.

I write because I enjoy writing, I share it in the hope that others may like it. People have often asked me why do I not get my poems published, I respond by saying I do not write to make money I write for me and for others with no charge.

Andy

September 23rd, 2020 00:24

Grown..
MelissaJA said:

So cute. I am also a parent, and so I can relate to this. They grow so quickly.

September 21st, 2020 21:48

Grown..
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words, that love will be there forever and grow stronger as time progresses.

Andy

September 21st, 2020 00:16

Many may think
L. B. Mek said:

brave sharing, yet written without too much detail, so as to allow readers to relate - whilst still being able to appreciate, its poetic merits

September 19th, 2020 03:45