Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
dusk arising said:
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on injustice.
Those are some building blocks for a better future for us all.
December 1st, 2020 19:10
dusk arising said:
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on injustice.
Those are some building blocks for a better future for us all.
December 1st, 2020 19:10
Broken chains, no more crying shame!
RDS said:
A simple message neatly woven together bud. Yes we\'ve got to find our nature breathing in all the rich life and decay that we feel through the years. We all shed tears, feel pain but we can stay in shape. Just breathe...and release. Good flow and nice turns of phrase mate.
You stay creative too
J
December 1st, 2020 18:38
RDS said:
A simple message neatly woven together bud. Yes we\'ve got to find our nature breathing in all the rich life and decay that we feel through the years. We all shed tears, feel pain but we can stay in shape. Just breathe...and release. Good flow and nice turns of phrase mate.
You stay creative too
J
December 1st, 2020 18:38
Mediators of life
RDS said:
This really shows your spirit Dan, a lovely soulful song of peace and love.
This string of pearls made me catch my breath at the simplicity of what you\'re saying
\"... I\'ve felt the darkness
I\'ve felt the lightness
Each is inside us...\"
Swee work my friend
J
November 30th, 2020 13:27
RDS said:
This really shows your spirit Dan, a lovely soulful song of peace and love.
This string of pearls made me catch my breath at the simplicity of what you\'re saying
\"... I\'ve felt the darkness
I\'ve felt the lightness
Each is inside us...\"
Swee work my friend
J
November 30th, 2020 13:27
Children of nature
RDS said:
A really good sentiment to bring to life with some lovely descriptive experiences knotted in your verse. Good work here Dan.
J
November 30th, 2020 13:18
RDS said:
A really good sentiment to bring to life with some lovely descriptive experiences knotted in your verse. Good work here Dan.
J
November 30th, 2020 13:18
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
L. B. Mek said:
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me energised!
wonderful flow as well, thank you for the positivity, just what I needed on a dreary Monday morning
November 30th, 2020 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me energised!
wonderful flow as well, thank you for the positivity, just what I needed on a dreary Monday morning
November 30th, 2020 04:34
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
RDS said:
Wow I am humbled thank you Dan, yes you\'re right the comments sometimes hold rare gems that can\'t be held in a poem. Unless they inspire a new one that holds the glitter and glimmering to account.
Yes humbled to find myself inspiring when I totter along...barely making sense or being coherent. Guess it\'s about finding a place where ideas resonate and agile minds are quick to pick up random threads they turn into a new dress or patches for an old much loved jacket.
We all have different turns of phrase and hooks to catch attention that increase with our exposure to other writers or styles we never tried ourselves
Stay creative bud.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:35
RDS said:
Wow I am humbled thank you Dan, yes you\'re right the comments sometimes hold rare gems that can\'t be held in a poem. Unless they inspire a new one that holds the glitter and glimmering to account.
Yes humbled to find myself inspiring when I totter along...barely making sense or being coherent. Guess it\'s about finding a place where ideas resonate and agile minds are quick to pick up random threads they turn into a new dress or patches for an old much loved jacket.
We all have different turns of phrase and hooks to catch attention that increase with our exposure to other writers or styles we never tried ourselves
Stay creative bud.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:35
I just can\'t stop!!
RDS said:
All neatly wrapped up in rhyme Poetic Dan. A reflection of you marathon sitting and you go into all the things you will continue doing. Good stuff, keep up the good word.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:15
RDS said:
All neatly wrapped up in rhyme Poetic Dan. A reflection of you marathon sitting and you go into all the things you will continue doing. Good stuff, keep up the good word.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:15
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, your life is in a great place and will be forever with you.
Love the video.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 04:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, your life is in a great place and will be forever with you.
Love the video.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 04:15
I didn\'t know this until you came to exist
PoeticBiscuit said:
Great write Dan. This community is definitely amazing. Being able to ride each other’s waves of inspiration and then return the favor down the road. I know I’ve been inspired by many on here.
November 29th, 2020 03:25
PoeticBiscuit said:
Great write Dan. This community is definitely amazing. Being able to ride each other’s waves of inspiration and then return the favor down the road. I know I’ve been inspired by many on here.
November 29th, 2020 03:25
I just can\'t stop!!
Goldfinch60 said:
That guidance from nature is out there for us all Dan, you know that and are now in a place to walk with it in love and joy.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That guidance from nature is out there for us all Dan, you know that and are now in a place to walk with it in love and joy.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:42
A soulful purge!
RDS said:
Whimsically poetic story, haha Poetic Dan. Sounds like a bit of pinch your in and I must say I wouldn\'t cut it, being responsible for such decisions.
Seems like you ARE prolific at the moment and I might catch up all you\'ve posted.
Stay creative!
J
November 28th, 2020 18:18
RDS said:
Whimsically poetic story, haha Poetic Dan. Sounds like a bit of pinch your in and I must say I wouldn\'t cut it, being responsible for such decisions.
Seems like you ARE prolific at the moment and I might catch up all you\'ve posted.
Stay creative!
J
November 28th, 2020 18:18
A soulful purge!
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind is looking into your future and that is so good to be looking ahead instead of worrying about the sad times that have gone before. Your decision will be made between you and your wife and once made your life will go on with each other and your children.
Keep moving forward Dan, you are doing so well.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind is looking into your future and that is so good to be looking ahead instead of worrying about the sad times that have gone before. Your decision will be made between you and your wife and once made your life will go on with each other and your children.
Keep moving forward Dan, you are doing so well.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:09
A soulful purge!
PoeticBiscuit said:
Poetry is one of many therapies. To take your thoughts and place them on paper. I enjoyed walking through your mind in this poem of sorts and I hope you find the answers you seek.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 15:45
PoeticBiscuit said:
Poetry is one of many therapies. To take your thoughts and place them on paper. I enjoyed walking through your mind in this poem of sorts and I hope you find the answers you seek.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 15:45
What else is there to do!
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
What else is there to do!
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
I rhyme better than I can act
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
What else is there to do!
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
What else is there to do!
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
I rhyme better than I can act
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
I rhyme better than I can act
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
Poetry in motion
Doggerel Dave said:
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give - which is clearly plenty.
Respect, Dave.
November 24th, 2020 04:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give - which is clearly plenty.
Respect, Dave.
November 24th, 2020 04:50
Poetry in motion
dusk arising said:
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love for our canine friends.
...... and reading your words now, you have encapsulated what you have just shown us so well.
November 24th, 2020 04:12
dusk arising said:
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love for our canine friends.
...... and reading your words now, you have encapsulated what you have just shown us so well.
November 24th, 2020 04:12
Poetry in motion
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed move passed fear. the unknown can be wondrous in our lives.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed move passed fear. the unknown can be wondrous in our lives.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:10
Time & space
Goldfinch60 said:
Death will be there for us all but we do not need to think about it yet, you especially as in your life at the moment you have a wonderful wife and a beautiful daughter who you obviously love. You have changed into a person who is looking at life in a new light, keep that light with you and live your wonderful life to the full.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Death will be there for us all but we do not need to think about it yet, you especially as in your life at the moment you have a wonderful wife and a beautiful daughter who you obviously love. You have changed into a person who is looking at life in a new light, keep that light with you and live your wonderful life to the full.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:20
Time & space
Clara said:
I am pleased you wrote this and shared this for us... On the surface, its almost humorous - death asking what\'s for dinner - but underneath, you capture what I suspect most of us to be feeling and what most of us also hope to achieve - a change of menu. It\'s very clever. I too normally write from a dark place, I find expression from my pen also brings the light. You press publish with a sense of satisfaction at your creation but also with a sense that the weight upon your shoulders has slightly shifted. One for the favourites.
November 19th, 2020 14:37
Clara said:
I am pleased you wrote this and shared this for us... On the surface, its almost humorous - death asking what\'s for dinner - but underneath, you capture what I suspect most of us to be feeling and what most of us also hope to achieve - a change of menu. It\'s very clever. I too normally write from a dark place, I find expression from my pen also brings the light. You press publish with a sense of satisfaction at your creation but also with a sense that the weight upon your shoulders has slightly shifted. One for the favourites.
November 19th, 2020 14:37
Time & space
dusk arising said:
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of questions..... probably because we have learned some of the answer.... we are getting there.
Death will always accept us but there is no reward for giving in too early..... reincarnation comes with a lesson...... but thats another story.
November 19th, 2020 07:46
dusk arising said:
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of questions..... probably because we have learned some of the answer.... we are getting there.
Death will always accept us but there is no reward for giving in too early..... reincarnation comes with a lesson...... but thats another story.
November 19th, 2020 07:46
Mediators of life
Clara said:
This is a wonderful reminder of the power we hold. The power our choices have. The world isn\'t black and white but our mission to heal the world is clear. Excellent.
November 18th, 2020 19:35
Clara said:
This is a wonderful reminder of the power we hold. The power our choices have. The world isn\'t black and white but our mission to heal the world is clear. Excellent.
November 18th, 2020 19:35
Mediators of life
L. B. Mek said:
again wonderfully life affirming, a good read
November 17th, 2020 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
again wonderfully life affirming, a good read
November 17th, 2020 04:30
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