Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
What else is there to do!
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
Neville said:
Been there, done that and wore the dog out and all before breakfast .. good un mate .. that\'s the spirit .. share n share alike :)
November 27th, 2020 13:58
What else is there to do!
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
You could try doing some pen abstracts - but there again - no - don\'t want compretition. A cheerful write PD.
November 27th, 2020 00:29
I rhyme better than I can act
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it\'s time to walk reality\'s chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
November 26th, 2020 04:53
What else is there to do!
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
dusk arising said:
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair, get to bed can\'t sleep, arose at 03.15 to find something to do. Wrote a poem that fell out of my fingertips somehow (post it tomoz).
Envy you, it\'s been a while since i walked in the wee small hours... not safe around here.
November 26th, 2020 02:20
What else is there to do!
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
\'US LOT\' will always be there for your words Dan.
Great video.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:18
I rhyme better than I can act
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 01:36
I rhyme better than I can act
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that\'s just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
November 26th, 2020 00:38
Poetry in motion
Doggerel Dave said:
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give - which is clearly plenty.
Respect, Dave.
November 24th, 2020 04:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give - which is clearly plenty.
Respect, Dave.
November 24th, 2020 04:50
Poetry in motion
dusk arising said:
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love for our canine friends.
...... and reading your words now, you have encapsulated what you have just shown us so well.
November 24th, 2020 04:12
dusk arising said:
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love for our canine friends.
...... and reading your words now, you have encapsulated what you have just shown us so well.
November 24th, 2020 04:12
Poetry in motion
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed move passed fear. the unknown can be wondrous in our lives.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed move passed fear. the unknown can be wondrous in our lives.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:10
Time & space
Goldfinch60 said:
Death will be there for us all but we do not need to think about it yet, you especially as in your life at the moment you have a wonderful wife and a beautiful daughter who you obviously love. You have changed into a person who is looking at life in a new light, keep that light with you and live your wonderful life to the full.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Death will be there for us all but we do not need to think about it yet, you especially as in your life at the moment you have a wonderful wife and a beautiful daughter who you obviously love. You have changed into a person who is looking at life in a new light, keep that light with you and live your wonderful life to the full.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:20
Time & space
Clara said:
I am pleased you wrote this and shared this for us... On the surface, its almost humorous - death asking what\'s for dinner - but underneath, you capture what I suspect most of us to be feeling and what most of us also hope to achieve - a change of menu. It\'s very clever. I too normally write from a dark place, I find expression from my pen also brings the light. You press publish with a sense of satisfaction at your creation but also with a sense that the weight upon your shoulders has slightly shifted. One for the favourites.
November 19th, 2020 14:37
Clara said:
I am pleased you wrote this and shared this for us... On the surface, its almost humorous - death asking what\'s for dinner - but underneath, you capture what I suspect most of us to be feeling and what most of us also hope to achieve - a change of menu. It\'s very clever. I too normally write from a dark place, I find expression from my pen also brings the light. You press publish with a sense of satisfaction at your creation but also with a sense that the weight upon your shoulders has slightly shifted. One for the favourites.
November 19th, 2020 14:37
Time & space
dusk arising said:
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of questions..... probably because we have learned some of the answer.... we are getting there.
Death will always accept us but there is no reward for giving in too early..... reincarnation comes with a lesson...... but thats another story.
November 19th, 2020 07:46
dusk arising said:
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of questions..... probably because we have learned some of the answer.... we are getting there.
Death will always accept us but there is no reward for giving in too early..... reincarnation comes with a lesson...... but thats another story.
November 19th, 2020 07:46
Mediators of life
Clara said:
This is a wonderful reminder of the power we hold. The power our choices have. The world isn\'t black and white but our mission to heal the world is clear. Excellent.
November 18th, 2020 19:35
Clara said:
This is a wonderful reminder of the power we hold. The power our choices have. The world isn\'t black and white but our mission to heal the world is clear. Excellent.
November 18th, 2020 19:35
Mediators of life
L. B. Mek said:
again wonderfully life affirming, a good read
November 17th, 2020 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
again wonderfully life affirming, a good read
November 17th, 2020 04:30
Mediators of life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon DAN - Angela here ! Thanks for an encouraging Poem ! WE all need to be Encouragers in these dire straights ! Thanks for sharing - it stirred my MUSE ~ OK
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
November 16th, 2020 12:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon DAN - Angela here ! Thanks for an encouraging Poem ! WE all need to be Encouragers in these dire straights ! Thanks for sharing - it stirred my MUSE ~ OK
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
November 16th, 2020 12:14
Mediators of life
dusk arising said:
Yes I agree. Surely out first responsibilities are to respect and protect each other and our planet.
November 16th, 2020 05:28
dusk arising said:
Yes I agree. Surely out first responsibilities are to respect and protect each other and our planet.
November 16th, 2020 05:28
Mediators of life
Goldfinch60 said:
The world will be healed by people like you Dan, you are seeing the good that is in our world.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 04:57
Goldfinch60 said:
The world will be healed by people like you Dan, you are seeing the good that is in our world.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 04:57
I am pure poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see you like this Dan, over the years I have seen you become this positive loving man who with his loving wife and daughter and his wonder with dogs become the way you are now. We all have those \'down\' days but they get fewer and fewer as you come to terms with them a put them behind you. The future is always so bright and wonderful Dan and you are finding that future in your life.
Well done.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see you like this Dan, over the years I have seen you become this positive loving man who with his loving wife and daughter and his wonder with dogs become the way you are now. We all have those \'down\' days but they get fewer and fewer as you come to terms with them a put them behind you. The future is always so bright and wonderful Dan and you are finding that future in your life.
Well done.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 00:59
I am pure poetry
Neville said:
nine out of every ten cats are gonna agree with what DA and Michael have already said ... I know I do.............. write on ...
Neville
November 15th, 2020 12:25
Neville said:
nine out of every ten cats are gonna agree with what DA and Michael have already said ... I know I do.............. write on ...
Neville
November 15th, 2020 12:25
I am pure poetry
Michael Edwards said:
This is a great write and have such respect for you - as my Dad used to say ;
Be proud of youreself and always hold your head up high\' and you\'ve got so much to be proud of.
November 15th, 2020 10:43
Michael Edwards said:
This is a great write and have such respect for you - as my Dad used to say ;
Be proud of youreself and always hold your head up high\' and you\'ve got so much to be proud of.
November 15th, 2020 10:43
I am pure poetry
dusk arising said:
Dan, please never lose sight of what you are today. You are an authority on dogs and the behaviour, in addition to being a loving husband and father, a much respected poet and a sound, soul searching guy.
Recently we\'ve seen you soul searching and being hard on yourself, questioning so many things. But here today is the positive Dan, self assured and proud with every right to be.
There are times when we all go downwards in spirit so I repeat - don\'t lose sight of what you are today.
Once again I\'m going to remind you of that Desiderata piece i showed you quite a while ago now..... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars....... theres also another part of it about ..... be proud of your achievements....... there will always be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
There is so much wisdom in that piece.
November 15th, 2020 07:38
dusk arising said:
Dan, please never lose sight of what you are today. You are an authority on dogs and the behaviour, in addition to being a loving husband and father, a much respected poet and a sound, soul searching guy.
Recently we\'ve seen you soul searching and being hard on yourself, questioning so many things. But here today is the positive Dan, self assured and proud with every right to be.
There are times when we all go downwards in spirit so I repeat - don\'t lose sight of what you are today.
Once again I\'m going to remind you of that Desiderata piece i showed you quite a while ago now..... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars....... theres also another part of it about ..... be proud of your achievements....... there will always be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
There is so much wisdom in that piece.
November 15th, 2020 07:38
I am pure poetry
Poetic Dan said:
We had a session with Dan yesterday which was extremely helpful. His understanding and knowledge of how a dog\'s mind works and how human behaviour creates the dogs behaviour enabled me and my dog to turn a massive corner on a single session. I would definitely recommend Art of the Mutt to anyone struggling with their hound. Dan was great and easy to get along with and my dog gave him the upmost respect.
November 15th, 2020 04:52
Poetic Dan said:
We had a session with Dan yesterday which was extremely helpful. His understanding and knowledge of how a dog\'s mind works and how human behaviour creates the dogs behaviour enabled me and my dog to turn a massive corner on a single session. I would definitely recommend Art of the Mutt to anyone struggling with their hound. Dan was great and easy to get along with and my dog gave him the upmost respect.
November 15th, 2020 04:52
Children of nature
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful video, it brought tears of joy and laughter to me and as d a has said the words nail it completely.
Such a wonderful input, especially from Maarii. May the joy in all your lives be forever with you.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful video, it brought tears of joy and laughter to me and as d a has said the words nail it completely.
Such a wonderful input, especially from Maarii. May the joy in all your lives be forever with you.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:22
Children of nature
dusk arising said:
I Watched the Video then read your short poem. I\'ll, tell you what, I hada huge grin on my face all the way through and your worrds nail it completely Dan.
That little lady is growing up, great to hear her tiny voice and giggles.
November 14th, 2020 09:46
dusk arising said:
I Watched the Video then read your short poem. I\'ll, tell you what, I hada huge grin on my face all the way through and your worrds nail it completely Dan.
That little lady is growing up, great to hear her tiny voice and giggles.
November 14th, 2020 09:46
Maarii lullaby returns
L. B. Mek said:
such a sweet dedication, a wonderful read
November 13th, 2020 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
such a sweet dedication, a wonderful read
November 13th, 2020 05:30
Maarii lullaby returns
Neville said:
... lovely vibe my friend .. that\'s the ticket ... got me smiling big sir so ya have ....
November 12th, 2020 23:52
Neville said:
... lovely vibe my friend .. that\'s the ticket ... got me smiling big sir so ya have ....
November 12th, 2020 23:52
Maarii lullaby returns
dusk arising said:
Dan, it\'s so good to see you writing about someone you love and feeling the warmth through your words.
I know how it feels to give out the love, to share it..... and my it feels good doesn\'t it.
Forgive me for not commenting recently, I\'ve been waiting and hoping for something like today\'s post from you. So much better to see you not looking deep into yourself.... sometimes we look to deep and the answers nor the right questions are just not there yet. But all around there are things which can bring us joy and today youve written a cracker together with a great video (your vids are always so good).
November 12th, 2020 08:03
dusk arising said:
Dan, it\'s so good to see you writing about someone you love and feeling the warmth through your words.
I know how it feels to give out the love, to share it..... and my it feels good doesn\'t it.
Forgive me for not commenting recently, I\'ve been waiting and hoping for something like today\'s post from you. So much better to see you not looking deep into yourself.... sometimes we look to deep and the answers nor the right questions are just not there yet. But all around there are things which can bring us joy and today youve written a cracker together with a great video (your vids are always so good).
November 12th, 2020 08:03
Just another poem
L. B. Mek said:
these hallway lanes of artistry\'s inspirational spurts must always be treasured, so write, let it all out and enjoy the ride,
as soon enough those lacklustre corridors of worrisome blank pages will seemingly overtake,
such is the curse of stop-start - jarring ebb-n-flow: endured by all Poets,
good read
November 12th, 2020 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
these hallway lanes of artistry\'s inspirational spurts must always be treasured, so write, let it all out and enjoy the ride,
as soon enough those lacklustre corridors of worrisome blank pages will seemingly overtake,
such is the curse of stop-start - jarring ebb-n-flow: endured by all Poets,
good read
November 12th, 2020 05:49
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