Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Unspoken words not healing
Goldfinch60 said:
Every line we write puts part of the life within us onto the page and with those lines we can become freer within ourselves and move onto a better place within our lives. Those lines are so important to us all.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Every line we write puts part of the life within us onto the page and with those lines we can become freer within ourselves and move onto a better place within our lives. Those lines are so important to us all.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 23:54
Unspoken words not healing
Neville said:
The only thing for certain is everything\'s always changing ...
tis a fact of life, captured and presented so well......... nice un sun :)
August 16th, 2020 08:17
Neville said:
The only thing for certain is everything\'s always changing ...
tis a fact of life, captured and presented so well......... nice un sun :)
August 16th, 2020 08:17
Billion more colours than we see!
jarcher54 said:
Only someone who pours everything he\'s got into his poems would choose to say this: each rhyme takes its toll. To those of us who do that in any of our endeavors, very memorably put.
August 16th, 2020 01:24
jarcher54 said:
Only someone who pours everything he\'s got into his poems would choose to say this: each rhyme takes its toll. To those of us who do that in any of our endeavors, very memorably put.
August 16th, 2020 01:24
Billion more colours than we see!
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will light up your life into one of harmony.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will light up your life into one of harmony.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 00:12
Billion more colours than we see!
orchidee said:
OOhhh, don\'t go yet. What about the dogs? and family?! They will all need you! :)
August 15th, 2020 02:05
orchidee said:
OOhhh, don\'t go yet. What about the dogs? and family?! They will all need you! :)
August 15th, 2020 02:05
Card or not! This war won\'t stop
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just do not see or want to be aware of hidden problems, some cannot even care for those with obvious problems but in this world there are many, many more who are aware and they far outnumber the selfish brutes.
Keep strong Dan you have come a long way in dealing with your life and your words have been so telling in the struggles that you have already overcome.
Stay strong
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just do not see or want to be aware of hidden problems, some cannot even care for those with obvious problems but in this world there are many, many more who are aware and they far outnumber the selfish brutes.
Keep strong Dan you have come a long way in dealing with your life and your words have been so telling in the struggles that you have already overcome.
Stay strong
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:19
Greatful to all here...
jarcher54 said:
So many ways to do poetry, so many reasons to make it. Sending a message straight from your head to another is a compelling reason. Good point! It worked.
August 14th, 2020 20:43
jarcher54 said:
So many ways to do poetry, so many reasons to make it. Sending a message straight from your head to another is a compelling reason. Good point! It worked.
August 14th, 2020 20:43
Rock on a rock
FineB said:
2020, is indeed a year we will never forget.
A good write ✍ Poetic Dan.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:55
FineB said:
2020, is indeed a year we will never forget.
A good write ✍ Poetic Dan.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:55
Greatful to all here...
Goldfinch60 said:
That River of Life is there for you Dan maybe one day your River and My River will meet.
Andy
July 27th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That River of Life is there for you Dan maybe one day your River and My River will meet.
Andy
July 27th, 2020 00:16
Greatful to all here...
dusk arising said:
That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
July 26th, 2020 16:59
dusk arising said:
That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
July 26th, 2020 16:59
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
Goldfinch60 said:
From these words Dan it shows how far you have come on your journey into that better you.
You have found that way forwards and I am sure that you will now be able to find that way forward for your son into a place of peace wonder and love - that love that you have for him.
Wonderful poem Dan.
Andy
July 25th, 2020 23:34
Goldfinch60 said:
From these words Dan it shows how far you have come on your journey into that better you.
You have found that way forwards and I am sure that you will now be able to find that way forward for your son into a place of peace wonder and love - that love that you have for him.
Wonderful poem Dan.
Andy
July 25th, 2020 23:34
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
dusk arising said:
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan.
When you lift your head above your own concerns about how you relate to society and show your concern for others, especially those close to you.... it\'s these times we all can see the soul of you and there is much wisdom in there.
You are a very humble saint in my estimation.
July 24th, 2020 09:47
dusk arising said:
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan.
When you lift your head above your own concerns about how you relate to society and show your concern for others, especially those close to you.... it\'s these times we all can see the soul of you and there is much wisdom in there.
You are a very humble saint in my estimation.
July 24th, 2020 09:47
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
TWENTY3 said:
you have hit the nail firmly on its head.
July 24th, 2020 07:07
TWENTY3 said:
you have hit the nail firmly on its head.
July 24th, 2020 07:07
Undervalued
Goldfinch60 said:
In your world you have found the place that suits you and where you are happy in helping others to find there way. Money does not matter as you have riches within your life and they are so invaluable.
Andy
July 21st, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
In your world you have found the place that suits you and where you are happy in helping others to find there way. Money does not matter as you have riches within your life and they are so invaluable.
Andy
July 21st, 2020 23:55
Undervalued
dusk arising said:
Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with a tin of small value coins at their feet. You stop and realise this person is truly a talented artist. Later on TV is some pretty kid who can\'t sing or play without enhancement but obviously earning a lot of dosh.
Life is unfair and nobody gets any kind of a guarantee.
But inside there is a light, a glow, which some of us become aware of and it keeps us doing what we do. Because, even if its just for ourselves, we know we do it well.
Keep on keeping on. Move the world just one step on.
July 21st, 2020 12:19
dusk arising said:
Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with a tin of small value coins at their feet. You stop and realise this person is truly a talented artist. Later on TV is some pretty kid who can\'t sing or play without enhancement but obviously earning a lot of dosh.
Life is unfair and nobody gets any kind of a guarantee.
But inside there is a light, a glow, which some of us become aware of and it keeps us doing what we do. Because, even if its just for ourselves, we know we do it well.
Keep on keeping on. Move the world just one step on.
July 21st, 2020 12:19
Praise or delusion, we\'re choosing
Goldfinch60 said:
That praise is not given lightly Dan, over the time I have known you on this site your world has changed and you have become a better person in coming to terms with your new life in such a wonderful way and I am sure your life will get more relaxed each day.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 23:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That praise is not given lightly Dan, over the time I have known you on this site your world has changed and you have become a better person in coming to terms with your new life in such a wonderful way and I am sure your life will get more relaxed each day.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 23:43
Praise or delusion, we\'re choosing
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Questions PD Questions
Doubts and Doubters
I\'m not a poet... I just write poems
Beauty is in the eye of those who see and hear
Yes you deserve the praise
I wish I was half the man my dog thinks I am
July 12th, 2020 05:45
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Questions PD Questions
Doubts and Doubters
I\'m not a poet... I just write poems
Beauty is in the eye of those who see and hear
Yes you deserve the praise
I wish I was half the man my dog thinks I am
July 12th, 2020 05:45
Praise or delusion, we\'re choosing
Michael Edwards said:
Yes you deserve the praise - accept in good grace and enjoy the world. Love the write PD
July 12th, 2020 03:24
Michael Edwards said:
Yes you deserve the praise - accept in good grace and enjoy the world. Love the write PD
July 12th, 2020 03:24
Rock on a rock
Goldfinch60 said:
Each bigger rock we deal with will take us to a better place in our lives making it easier to deal with the next rock.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Each bigger rock we deal with will take us to a better place in our lives making it easier to deal with the next rock.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 00:53
Eye with no sight
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each individuals and lead our own lives in our own way.
One of my philosophies in life is:
\"This is me, if you do not like it it is not my problem - it is yours.\"
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each individuals and lead our own lives in our own way.
One of my philosophies in life is:
\"This is me, if you do not like it it is not my problem - it is yours.\"
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:22
Eye with no sight
Fay Slimm. said:
A real treat of a read Dan - - this \"coming out from within\" is going into my favourites for sure......... great write..
July 7th, 2020 14:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A real treat of a read Dan - - this \"coming out from within\" is going into my favourites for sure......... great write..
July 7th, 2020 14:39
Eye with no sight
dusk arising said:
You have every right to your opinions and to voice them. \"For you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees\"
Keep on keeping on.
July 7th, 2020 12:26
dusk arising said:
You have every right to your opinions and to voice them. \"For you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees\"
Keep on keeping on.
July 7th, 2020 12:26
Eye with no sight
PoeticBiscuit said:
I agree with you on those first two lines! We are all beautifully unique and that’s the way it should stay.
July 7th, 2020 10:46
PoeticBiscuit said:
I agree with you on those first two lines! We are all beautifully unique and that’s the way it should stay.
July 7th, 2020 10:46
Grow
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ripples in your life are leading us all to a better place.
Andy
July 6th, 2020 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ripples in your life are leading us all to a better place.
Andy
July 6th, 2020 00:14
Grow
Neville said:
letting go aint always as easy as it sounds, is it... bet ya took gold tho...
July 5th, 2020 08:56
Neville said:
letting go aint always as easy as it sounds, is it... bet ya took gold tho...
July 5th, 2020 08:56
Grow
PoeticBiscuit said:
Your ripple is reaching mine my friend, I think I’ve just found some inspiration to write. Thanks!
July 5th, 2020 08:43
PoeticBiscuit said:
Your ripple is reaching mine my friend, I think I’ve just found some inspiration to write. Thanks!
July 5th, 2020 08:43
Grow
dusk arising said:
I guess that\'s what they call \"feeling the vibes man\".
July 5th, 2020 06:55
dusk arising said:
I guess that\'s what they call \"feeling the vibes man\".
July 5th, 2020 06:55
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