Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Sixteen turns!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, and in that picture I can see the love that you have for each other. My son and I have this similar and so wonderful gift of love for each other.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, and in that picture I can see the love that you have for each other. My son and I have this similar and so wonderful gift of love for each other.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:14
Sixteen turns!
dusk arising said:
I know that feeling well and it\'s wonderful to know the same is coming back at you.
Look after him, difficult years are ahead as you know when all kinds of temptation will encourage him astray.
Fatherly love is unconditional and so rewarding.
September 5th, 2020 12:37
dusk arising said:
I know that feeling well and it\'s wonderful to know the same is coming back at you.
Look after him, difficult years are ahead as you know when all kinds of temptation will encourage him astray.
Fatherly love is unconditional and so rewarding.
September 5th, 2020 12:37
Inspired by the best...
Goldfinch60 said:
Your reflections can sometime be fleeting but they can be so wonderful that they need to be put into words. I can get lost in them, listening to music, walking with nature and writing words about them can give me such wonderful times as I am sure you have with your family and your dogs.
Keep your words flowing Dan.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Your reflections can sometime be fleeting but they can be so wonderful that they need to be put into words. I can get lost in them, listening to music, walking with nature and writing words about them can give me such wonderful times as I am sure you have with your family and your dogs.
Keep your words flowing Dan.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:55
Inspired by the best...
Neville said:
Nice one Dan .. hope ya feeling better mate..
Neville
September 4th, 2020 07:00
Neville said:
Nice one Dan .. hope ya feeling better mate..
Neville
September 4th, 2020 07:00
Inspired by the best...
Michael Edwards said:
I lose myself in my art - just off to do some designs for an album cover for a Christmas release - so little time to get it done. Just hope what I come up with meets with approval. But it keeps my mind occupied. A poignant write Dan.
September 4th, 2020 02:52
Michael Edwards said:
I lose myself in my art - just off to do some designs for an album cover for a Christmas release - so little time to get it done. Just hope what I come up with meets with approval. But it keeps my mind occupied. A poignant write Dan.
September 4th, 2020 02:52
Inspired by the best...
dusk arising said:
I guess we all get lost in the day to day humdrum and if we look too closely so the misgivings begin.
Instead, I think of something beautiful, poetic. Sometimes writing about it, as a complete change from writing about me, is really lifting and reminds me - the world really is quite beautiful.
September 4th, 2020 01:45
dusk arising said:
I guess we all get lost in the day to day humdrum and if we look too closely so the misgivings begin.
Instead, I think of something beautiful, poetic. Sometimes writing about it, as a complete change from writing about me, is really lifting and reminds me - the world really is quite beautiful.
September 4th, 2020 01:45
Tree of life
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree of life has so many memories for us some good, some bad, some indifferent bu the good always outweigh all the others.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree of life has so many memories for us some good, some bad, some indifferent bu the good always outweigh all the others.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:03
Tree of life
dusk arising said:
Those are the words of a man who has come to terms with the way of the world in a gentle sphere through times of trouble, tears and damned steadfastness.
September 3rd, 2020 12:18
dusk arising said:
Those are the words of a man who has come to terms with the way of the world in a gentle sphere through times of trouble, tears and damned steadfastness.
September 3rd, 2020 12:18
Tree of life
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to hear your short poem read aloud as the dogs wandered around that very tree Dan - a lovely posting and glad to see you back again here.
September 3rd, 2020 10:00
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to hear your short poem read aloud as the dogs wandered around that very tree Dan - a lovely posting and glad to see you back again here.
September 3rd, 2020 10:00
Tree of life
Neville said:
Hey Dan... sorry to hear you were up to ya neck in it last week ... hope things are now much better ...
I imagine I will only be the first of many visitors to these words for a short while so just wanna say how much I enjoyed this little bit o poetic brevity ..... and say hi to the family n dogs from me now would ya .... :)
September 3rd, 2020 04:09
Neville said:
Hey Dan... sorry to hear you were up to ya neck in it last week ... hope things are now much better ...
I imagine I will only be the first of many visitors to these words for a short while so just wanna say how much I enjoyed this little bit o poetic brevity ..... and say hi to the family n dogs from me now would ya .... :)
September 3rd, 2020 04:09
September\'s not blue, remember me & you
L. B. Mek said:
an impassioned write,
what a miraculous blessing it must be to share a birthday with your child,
Happy Birthday to you both
Namaste
September 3rd, 2020 02:24
L. B. Mek said:
an impassioned write,
what a miraculous blessing it must be to share a birthday with your child,
Happy Birthday to you both
Namaste
September 3rd, 2020 02:24
September\'s not blue, remember me & you
Goldfinch60 said:
Great to see how far you have come over the years, that place where you now are is filled with family, peace and love, especially love. That love will be forever with you.
Please give your little girl a hug from me for her birthday.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Great to see how far you have come over the years, that place where you now are is filled with family, peace and love, especially love. That love will be forever with you.
Please give your little girl a hug from me for her birthday.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 01:08
September\'s not blue, remember me & you
dusk arising said:
That little daughter of yours is sure growing up daddy. Happy birthday girlie and well done mamma.
Good to read your positive words again Dan. Have a laugh at the nursery rhyme i posted on monday and read it to your little one when shes a little older.
September 2nd, 2020 10:23
dusk arising said:
That little daughter of yours is sure growing up daddy. Happy birthday girlie and well done mamma.
Good to read your positive words again Dan. Have a laugh at the nursery rhyme i posted on monday and read it to your little one when shes a little older.
September 2nd, 2020 10:23
Unspoken words not healing
Goldfinch60 said:
Every line we write puts part of the life within us onto the page and with those lines we can become freer within ourselves and move onto a better place within our lives. Those lines are so important to us all.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Every line we write puts part of the life within us onto the page and with those lines we can become freer within ourselves and move onto a better place within our lives. Those lines are so important to us all.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 23:54
Unspoken words not healing
Neville said:
The only thing for certain is everything\'s always changing ...
tis a fact of life, captured and presented so well......... nice un sun :)
August 16th, 2020 08:17
Neville said:
The only thing for certain is everything\'s always changing ...
tis a fact of life, captured and presented so well......... nice un sun :)
August 16th, 2020 08:17
Billion more colours than we see!
jarcher54 said:
Only someone who pours everything he\'s got into his poems would choose to say this: each rhyme takes its toll. To those of us who do that in any of our endeavors, very memorably put.
August 16th, 2020 01:24
jarcher54 said:
Only someone who pours everything he\'s got into his poems would choose to say this: each rhyme takes its toll. To those of us who do that in any of our endeavors, very memorably put.
August 16th, 2020 01:24
Billion more colours than we see!
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will light up your life into one of harmony.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will light up your life into one of harmony.
Andy
August 16th, 2020 00:12
Billion more colours than we see!
orchidee said:
OOhhh, don\'t go yet. What about the dogs? and family?! They will all need you! :)
August 15th, 2020 02:05
orchidee said:
OOhhh, don\'t go yet. What about the dogs? and family?! They will all need you! :)
August 15th, 2020 02:05
Card or not! This war won\'t stop
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just do not see or want to be aware of hidden problems, some cannot even care for those with obvious problems but in this world there are many, many more who are aware and they far outnumber the selfish brutes.
Keep strong Dan you have come a long way in dealing with your life and your words have been so telling in the struggles that you have already overcome.
Stay strong
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just do not see or want to be aware of hidden problems, some cannot even care for those with obvious problems but in this world there are many, many more who are aware and they far outnumber the selfish brutes.
Keep strong Dan you have come a long way in dealing with your life and your words have been so telling in the struggles that you have already overcome.
Stay strong
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:19
Greatful to all here...
jarcher54 said:
So many ways to do poetry, so many reasons to make it. Sending a message straight from your head to another is a compelling reason. Good point! It worked.
August 14th, 2020 20:43
jarcher54 said:
So many ways to do poetry, so many reasons to make it. Sending a message straight from your head to another is a compelling reason. Good point! It worked.
August 14th, 2020 20:43
Rock on a rock
FineB said:
2020, is indeed a year we will never forget.
A good write ✍ Poetic Dan.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:55
FineB said:
2020, is indeed a year we will never forget.
A good write ✍ Poetic Dan.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:55
Greatful to all here...
Goldfinch60 said:
That River of Life is there for you Dan maybe one day your River and My River will meet.
Andy
July 27th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That River of Life is there for you Dan maybe one day your River and My River will meet.
Andy
July 27th, 2020 00:16
Greatful to all here...
dusk arising said:
That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
July 26th, 2020 16:59
dusk arising said:
That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
July 26th, 2020 16:59
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
Goldfinch60 said:
From these words Dan it shows how far you have come on your journey into that better you.
You have found that way forwards and I am sure that you will now be able to find that way forward for your son into a place of peace wonder and love - that love that you have for him.
Wonderful poem Dan.
Andy
July 25th, 2020 23:34
Goldfinch60 said:
From these words Dan it shows how far you have come on your journey into that better you.
You have found that way forwards and I am sure that you will now be able to find that way forward for your son into a place of peace wonder and love - that love that you have for him.
Wonderful poem Dan.
Andy
July 25th, 2020 23:34
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
dusk arising said:
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan.
When you lift your head above your own concerns about how you relate to society and show your concern for others, especially those close to you.... it\'s these times we all can see the soul of you and there is much wisdom in there.
You are a very humble saint in my estimation.
July 24th, 2020 09:47
dusk arising said:
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan.
When you lift your head above your own concerns about how you relate to society and show your concern for others, especially those close to you.... it\'s these times we all can see the soul of you and there is much wisdom in there.
You are a very humble saint in my estimation.
July 24th, 2020 09:47
A bit of glue but don\'t lose you
TWENTY3 said:
you have hit the nail firmly on its head.
July 24th, 2020 07:07
TWENTY3 said:
you have hit the nail firmly on its head.
July 24th, 2020 07:07
Undervalued
Goldfinch60 said:
In your world you have found the place that suits you and where you are happy in helping others to find there way. Money does not matter as you have riches within your life and they are so invaluable.
Andy
July 21st, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
In your world you have found the place that suits you and where you are happy in helping others to find there way. Money does not matter as you have riches within your life and they are so invaluable.
Andy
July 21st, 2020 23:55
Undervalued
dusk arising said:
Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with a tin of small value coins at their feet. You stop and realise this person is truly a talented artist. Later on TV is some pretty kid who can\'t sing or play without enhancement but obviously earning a lot of dosh.
Life is unfair and nobody gets any kind of a guarantee.
But inside there is a light, a glow, which some of us become aware of and it keeps us doing what we do. Because, even if its just for ourselves, we know we do it well.
Keep on keeping on. Move the world just one step on.
July 21st, 2020 12:19
dusk arising said:
Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with a tin of small value coins at their feet. You stop and realise this person is truly a talented artist. Later on TV is some pretty kid who can\'t sing or play without enhancement but obviously earning a lot of dosh.
Life is unfair and nobody gets any kind of a guarantee.
But inside there is a light, a glow, which some of us become aware of and it keeps us doing what we do. Because, even if its just for ourselves, we know we do it well.
Keep on keeping on. Move the world just one step on.
July 21st, 2020 12:19
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