Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The dark side is always here
dusk arising said:
Hey Dan, why dont you take a few days off and write something about the beautiful world instead of the introvert stuff. All around you is beauty, trees, sunsets, clouds, tides, people, animals.... the stuff poets write about loads.
Seriously m8, taking time away from introspection could be like a holiday and quite theraputic.
January 30th, 2020 05:38
dusk arising said:
Hey Dan, why dont you take a few days off and write something about the beautiful world instead of the introvert stuff. All around you is beauty, trees, sunsets, clouds, tides, people, animals.... the stuff poets write about loads.
Seriously m8, taking time away from introspection could be like a holiday and quite theraputic.
January 30th, 2020 05:38
The dark side is always here
orchidee said:
Well, turn the light bulb on then! (heehee).
January 30th, 2020 02:59
orchidee said:
Well, turn the light bulb on then! (heehee).
January 30th, 2020 02:59
Balance & Harmony
Goldfinch60 said:
That balance and harmony, together with the love in your life, will be forever with you Dan.
January 30th, 2020 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That balance and harmony, together with the love in your life, will be forever with you Dan.
January 30th, 2020 02:24
Unhuggable
Goldfinch60 said:
With your mind filled with your words you are always huggable Dan.
January 28th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
With your mind filled with your words you are always huggable Dan.
January 28th, 2020 01:35
Unhuggable
FineB said:
A wonderful and vivid write!
Thanks Poetic Dan.
There is a lot of love out there in this complex world and the key is not pushing those away whose love for us is genuine.
Keep writing FineB
January 27th, 2020 15:51
FineB said:
A wonderful and vivid write!
Thanks Poetic Dan.
There is a lot of love out there in this complex world and the key is not pushing those away whose love for us is genuine.
Keep writing FineB
January 27th, 2020 15:51
Unhuggable
orchidee said:
They would melt you with their hugs! That dog there need a hug? I\'m on my way to him (her?).
January 27th, 2020 07:45
orchidee said:
They would melt you with their hugs! That dog there need a hug? I\'m on my way to him (her?).
January 27th, 2020 07:45
Inspired by nature & you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan.
Be careful where you step. LOL
Andy
January 26th, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan.
Be careful where you step. LOL
Andy
January 26th, 2020 01:18
Different fluff
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts in his brain are all there but may come out in a different order than we may expect, that is fine as each of us is different and your understanding is a way forward for both him and yourself Dan. Good write.
Andy
January 25th, 2020 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts in his brain are all there but may come out in a different order than we may expect, that is fine as each of us is different and your understanding is a way forward for both him and yourself Dan. Good write.
Andy
January 25th, 2020 01:15
I\'m not fed up with me
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit believes in you and will get stronger as it has been over passed few months. Your life is so much better now and it may be that your apologies have moved you on in some way. We all make mistakes and need to apologise but in apologising we can move on an life becomes better.
Your life is becoming fulfilled Dan and all WILL be good.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit believes in you and will get stronger as it has been over passed few months. Your life is so much better now and it may be that your apologies have moved you on in some way. We all make mistakes and need to apologise but in apologising we can move on an life becomes better.
Your life is becoming fulfilled Dan and all WILL be good.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 01:44
I\'m not fed up with me
Fractured Dreams said:
Apologies make people feel better, if its a sincere apology then I don\'t mind it. As it works out they mean it, and it also gives them a good feeling, knowing they have tried to put it right. It\'s those empty ones you want to be careful of
I hope you are feeling better
All the best Fractured Dreams
January 23rd, 2020 17:55
Fractured Dreams said:
Apologies make people feel better, if its a sincere apology then I don\'t mind it. As it works out they mean it, and it also gives them a good feeling, knowing they have tried to put it right. It\'s those empty ones you want to be careful of
I hope you are feeling better
All the best Fractured Dreams
January 23rd, 2020 17:55
I\'m not fed up with me
dusk arising said:
Many moons ago an old boss of mine said \"I\'m old enough and ugly enough to know i should apologise\".
I thought his whimsical phrase was in tune with a lot of wisdom.
Those who can\'t apologise and move on would appear to have put themselves upon some kind of a pedestal.
January 23rd, 2020 11:31
dusk arising said:
Many moons ago an old boss of mine said \"I\'m old enough and ugly enough to know i should apologise\".
I thought his whimsical phrase was in tune with a lot of wisdom.
Those who can\'t apologise and move on would appear to have put themselves upon some kind of a pedestal.
January 23rd, 2020 11:31
4 months of her light in my life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Dan, just wonderful, she will always be a joy in your life.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Dan, just wonderful, she will always be a joy in your life.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:21
4 months of her light in my life
Fractured Dreams said:
Nice to see such a proud daddy, beautiful tribute to the joy of your little one
January 22nd, 2020 17:44
Fractured Dreams said:
Nice to see such a proud daddy, beautiful tribute to the joy of your little one
January 22nd, 2020 17:44
4 months of her light in my life
Neville said:
Everything about this page is beautiful....
January 22nd, 2020 06:15
Neville said:
Everything about this page is beautiful....
January 22nd, 2020 06:15
For you & me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan keep moving forward, all will be fine.
Andy
January 22nd, 2020 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan keep moving forward, all will be fine.
Andy
January 22nd, 2020 02:08
Bright side
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A good write and your coping very well.
An enchanting child you have.
Keep writing FineB
January 21st, 2020 06:20
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A good write and your coping very well.
An enchanting child you have.
Keep writing FineB
January 21st, 2020 06:20
For you & me
dusk arising said:
LOL at \'choose to exist\'. Does someone give us a choice.
The real choice is whether we as individuals dwell upon lifes hardships and sad yesterdays OR we cheer up an d get on with enjoying life and all the beautiful stuff around us.
January 21st, 2020 06:08
dusk arising said:
LOL at \'choose to exist\'. Does someone give us a choice.
The real choice is whether we as individuals dwell upon lifes hardships and sad yesterdays OR we cheer up an d get on with enjoying life and all the beautiful stuff around us.
January 21st, 2020 06:08
Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race
Goldfinch60 said:
Those demons may still be with you but as you move on is life they will be consigned to a box in your mind and the further you go the more secure that box will remain.
Andy
January 21st, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those demons may still be with you but as you move on is life they will be consigned to a box in your mind and the further you go the more secure that box will remain.
Andy
January 21st, 2020 00:55
Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race
dusk arising said:
Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with them. Perspective is the key. i.e. do the demons rule your life or are you in charge?
January 20th, 2020 04:01
dusk arising said:
Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with them. Perspective is the key. i.e. do the demons rule your life or are you in charge?
January 20th, 2020 04:01
Bright side
Goldfinch60 said:
You are really coming to terms with your life Dan, it is wonderful to see it coming to fruition.
January 20th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
You are really coming to terms with your life Dan, it is wonderful to see it coming to fruition.
January 20th, 2020 01:34
Bright side
kevin browne said:
Your stance as a father figure showing pure delight in the fact that you stand tall and strong inbetween the children you have raised and raised by a proper loving and caring father who kust know how to carry across the word of love. Keep loving, my freind...
January 19th, 2020 20:33
kevin browne said:
Your stance as a father figure showing pure delight in the fact that you stand tall and strong inbetween the children you have raised and raised by a proper loving and caring father who kust know how to carry across the word of love. Keep loving, my freind...
January 19th, 2020 20:33
Bright side
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely group to father and am sure you are the kindest of Dads.
January 19th, 2020 13:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely group to father and am sure you are the kindest of Dads.
January 19th, 2020 13:51
Bright side
dusk arising said:
Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
We are all part-timers i think Dan. Too much of a good thing would leave us unappreciative.
January 19th, 2020 07:14
dusk arising said:
Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
We are all part-timers i think Dan. Too much of a good thing would leave us unappreciative.
January 19th, 2020 07:14
Iceberg
Nafis Light said:
You may not see;
Heck...I may not even see myself,
Just thought of saying this,
Feels like a part of me is there by your side.
How?...Who?...I may not Know;
but I wouldn\'t think so Low.
There are reasons that I may not be ready to know yet;
Just that I am here and there...helping others to be free from their trap.
Nicely done...but then
it\'s not like somebody won...not that kind of sense.
January 17th, 2020 22:40
Nafis Light said:
You may not see;
Heck...I may not even see myself,
Just thought of saying this,
Feels like a part of me is there by your side.
How?...Who?...I may not Know;
but I wouldn\'t think so Low.
There are reasons that I may not be ready to know yet;
Just that I am here and there...helping others to be free from their trap.
Nicely done...but then
it\'s not like somebody won...not that kind of sense.
January 17th, 2020 22:40
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