Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Hold on if you can
Mil57Man said:

Poetic Dan. You\'re the man.

February 10th, 2020 09:38

Hold on if you can
Fay Slimm. said:

A fantastic write Dan - -a very appealing read and I love all the clever rhyming.

February 10th, 2020 09:18

Beautiful mess
Goldfinch60 said:

Those games bring love to all at any time of the day.

Andy

February 7th, 2020 02:27

Random fun
Goldfinch60 said:

Random thoughts can bring joy to our hearts.
Your sunbeam may be a moonbeam at times but she still beams at you - and you at her.

Andy

February 6th, 2020 01:13

Random fun
dusk arising said:

Igloo eh?..... luxury that is. When i was a kid we lived in an ig ... thats an igloo without a loo.... and it was bloody cold outside.

Frozen pees anybody?

February 5th, 2020 16:24

Random fun
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan.

February 5th, 2020 11:26

Catch & fall
Goldfinch60 said:

With your love she will fly to a wonderful future showing her love for you as she grows.

Andy

February 4th, 2020 01:41

Catch & fall
Nafis Light said:

With that picture, I thought you were doing some kind of magic.

I kinda wonder if there will be others who will trust you with their soul.
I mean...that deep, that strong.

February 3rd, 2020 10:27

The dark side is always here
Goldfinch60 said:

If you keep on choosing to \"think light\" that light will fill you life and the dark thoughts will be eradicated. (blimey, where did that word come from at ten passed six in the morning!)

Andy

January 31st, 2020 01:10

The dark side is always here
dusk arising said:

Hey Dan, why dont you take a few days off and write something about the beautiful world instead of the introvert stuff. All around you is beauty, trees, sunsets, clouds, tides, people, animals.... the stuff poets write about loads.
Seriously m8, taking time away from introspection could be like a holiday and quite theraputic.

January 30th, 2020 05:38

The dark side is always here
orchidee said:

Well, turn the light bulb on then! (heehee).

January 30th, 2020 02:59

Balance & Harmony
Goldfinch60 said:

That balance and harmony, together with the love in your life, will be forever with you Dan.

January 30th, 2020 02:24

Unhuggable
Goldfinch60 said:

With your mind filled with your words you are always huggable Dan.

January 28th, 2020 01:35

Unhuggable
FineB said:

A wonderful and vivid write!

Thanks Poetic Dan.

There is a lot of love out there in this complex world and the key is not pushing those away whose love for us is genuine.

Keep writing FineB

January 27th, 2020 15:51

Unhuggable
orchidee said:

They would melt you with their hugs! That dog there need a hug? I\'m on my way to him (her?).

January 27th, 2020 07:45

Inspired by nature & you
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Dan.

Be careful where you step. LOL

Andy

January 26th, 2020 01:18

Inspired by nature & you
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

January 25th, 2020 13:12

Different fluff
Goldfinch60 said:

Those thoughts in his brain are all there but may come out in a different order than we may expect, that is fine as each of us is different and your understanding is a way forward for both him and yourself Dan. Good write.

Andy

January 25th, 2020 01:15

Different fluff
Nemo said:

Beautiful ❤️

January 24th, 2020 14:54

I\'m not fed up with me
Goldfinch60 said:

Your Spirit believes in you and will get stronger as it has been over passed few months. Your life is so much better now and it may be that your apologies have moved you on in some way. We all make mistakes and need to apologise but in apologising we can move on an life becomes better.

Your life is becoming fulfilled Dan and all WILL be good.

Andy

January 24th, 2020 01:44

I\'m not fed up with me
Fractured Dreams said:

Apologies make people feel better, if its a sincere apology then I don\'t mind it. As it works out they mean it, and it also gives them a good feeling, knowing they have tried to put it right. It\'s those empty ones you want to be careful of

I hope you are feeling better
All the best Fractured Dreams

January 23rd, 2020 17:55

I\'m not fed up with me
dusk arising said:

Many moons ago an old boss of mine said \"I\'m old enough and ugly enough to know i should apologise\".
I thought his whimsical phrase was in tune with a lot of wisdom.
Those who can\'t apologise and move on would appear to have put themselves upon some kind of a pedestal.

January 23rd, 2020 11:31

4 months of her light in my life
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful Dan, just wonderful, she will always be a joy in your life.

Andy

January 23rd, 2020 00:21

4 months of her light in my life
Fractured Dreams said:

Nice to see such a proud daddy, beautiful tribute to the joy of your little one

January 22nd, 2020 17:44

4 months of her light in my life
Neville said:

Everything about this page is beautiful....

January 22nd, 2020 06:15

For you & me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write Dan keep moving forward, all will be fine.

Andy

January 22nd, 2020 02:08

For you & me
Nemo said:

I feel motivated 🌹

January 21st, 2020 12:41

Bright side
FineB said:

Hello Poetic Dan,

A good write and your coping very well.

An enchanting child you have.

Keep writing FineB

January 21st, 2020 06:20

For you & me
dusk arising said:

LOL at \'choose to exist\'. Does someone give us a choice.

The real choice is whether we as individuals dwell upon lifes hardships and sad yesterdays OR we cheer up an d get on with enjoying life and all the beautiful stuff around us.

January 21st, 2020 06:08

Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race
Goldfinch60 said:

Those demons may still be with you but as you move on is life they will be consigned to a box in your mind and the further you go the more secure that box will remain.

Andy

January 21st, 2020 00:55



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