Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race
dusk arising said:
Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with them. Perspective is the key. i.e. do the demons rule your life or are you in charge?
January 20th, 2020 04:01
dusk arising said:
Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with them. Perspective is the key. i.e. do the demons rule your life or are you in charge?
January 20th, 2020 04:01
Bright side
Goldfinch60 said:
You are really coming to terms with your life Dan, it is wonderful to see it coming to fruition.
January 20th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
You are really coming to terms with your life Dan, it is wonderful to see it coming to fruition.
January 20th, 2020 01:34
Bright side
kevin browne said:
Your stance as a father figure showing pure delight in the fact that you stand tall and strong inbetween the children you have raised and raised by a proper loving and caring father who kust know how to carry across the word of love. Keep loving, my freind...
January 19th, 2020 20:33
kevin browne said:
Your stance as a father figure showing pure delight in the fact that you stand tall and strong inbetween the children you have raised and raised by a proper loving and caring father who kust know how to carry across the word of love. Keep loving, my freind...
January 19th, 2020 20:33
Bright side
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely group to father and am sure you are the kindest of Dads.
January 19th, 2020 13:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely group to father and am sure you are the kindest of Dads.
January 19th, 2020 13:51
Bright side
dusk arising said:
Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
We are all part-timers i think Dan. Too much of a good thing would leave us unappreciative.
January 19th, 2020 07:14
dusk arising said:
Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
We are all part-timers i think Dan. Too much of a good thing would leave us unappreciative.
January 19th, 2020 07:14
Iceberg
Nafis Light said:
You may not see;
Heck...I may not even see myself,
Just thought of saying this,
Feels like a part of me is there by your side.
How?...Who?...I may not Know;
but I wouldn\'t think so Low.
There are reasons that I may not be ready to know yet;
Just that I am here and there...helping others to be free from their trap.
Nicely done...but then
it\'s not like somebody won...not that kind of sense.
January 17th, 2020 22:40
Nafis Light said:
You may not see;
Heck...I may not even see myself,
Just thought of saying this,
Feels like a part of me is there by your side.
How?...Who?...I may not Know;
but I wouldn\'t think so Low.
There are reasons that I may not be ready to know yet;
Just that I am here and there...helping others to be free from their trap.
Nicely done...but then
it\'s not like somebody won...not that kind of sense.
January 17th, 2020 22:40
Time reveals all
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes indeed with exposure even under the pier we see the hidden again..... an intriguing read Dan
January 16th, 2020 13:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes indeed with exposure even under the pier we see the hidden again..... an intriguing read Dan
January 16th, 2020 13:04
Stitched
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A good write.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:40
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A good write.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:40
Missing teen
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad that this has happened. We need more love in our world.
January 10th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad that this has happened. We need more love in our world.
January 10th, 2020 01:00
Missing teen
dusk arising said:
So sad Dan.... One wonders all sorts of things when this happens. Too often we have seen it end badly.
I do hope she turns up fit and well. My sympathy is with her family and friends.
This would not happen if there was enough love in the world.
January 9th, 2020 12:52
dusk arising said:
So sad Dan.... One wonders all sorts of things when this happens. Too often we have seen it end badly.
I do hope she turns up fit and well. My sympathy is with her family and friends.
This would not happen if there was enough love in the world.
January 9th, 2020 12:52
Missing teen
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A great write and indicative of the times we live in.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:03
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A great write and indicative of the times we live in.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:03
#poetrycommunityofig
dusk arising said:
Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and achievements are as a rainbow in the sun. For the sun will be there for eons and we shall not. But there are days when there is no rain nor rainbow and we can enjoy the sunshine (seen u doing it in yer videos).
Life is not a bowl of cherries and it can seem that lifes rewards are handed out unfairly.
As soon as i wrote that my mind went to that \'desiderata\' piece i showed you some while back. It\'s an amazing piece and it lifts me in those times when my spirit wains.
January 8th, 2020 04:58
dusk arising said:
Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and achievements are as a rainbow in the sun. For the sun will be there for eons and we shall not. But there are days when there is no rain nor rainbow and we can enjoy the sunshine (seen u doing it in yer videos).
Life is not a bowl of cherries and it can seem that lifes rewards are handed out unfairly.
As soon as i wrote that my mind went to that \'desiderata\' piece i showed you some while back. It\'s an amazing piece and it lifts me in those times when my spirit wains.
January 8th, 2020 04:58
#poetrycommunityofig
orchidee said:
Where ya going? When will ya get there? How will ya know when you\'ve got there? (heehee)!
Keep on journeying, even if it only seems like \'existing\' sometimes.
Well - you\'re here - that\'s good enough, if nothing else!
January 8th, 2020 04:25
orchidee said:
Where ya going? When will ya get there? How will ya know when you\'ve got there? (heehee)!
Keep on journeying, even if it only seems like \'existing\' sometimes.
Well - you\'re here - that\'s good enough, if nothing else!
January 8th, 2020 04:25
Wait!
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can always be sublime, the wonder is always there each new day.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can always be sublime, the wonder is always there each new day.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 01:00
Wait!
dusk arising said:
Once again a superb video and great Acid Jazz sounds.
Your short piece today is one of your best. Punchy and positive, the way to be.
January 7th, 2020 18:18
dusk arising said:
Once again a superb video and great Acid Jazz sounds.
Your short piece today is one of your best. Punchy and positive, the way to be.
January 7th, 2020 18:18
Wait!
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the wise rhyme and oh those gorgeous canines............. great posting Dan
January 7th, 2020 16:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the wise rhyme and oh those gorgeous canines............. great posting Dan
January 7th, 2020 16:51
Alright new year
Nemo said:
Love the video 👌
Great write, all you gotta do is put in the work and you will succeed 🙌
January 7th, 2020 05:51
Nemo said:
Love the video 👌
Great write, all you gotta do is put in the work and you will succeed 🙌
January 7th, 2020 05:51
Alright new year
Goldfinch60 said:
Ride those waves with the strength that now abounds within you Dan.
Andy
January 7th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Ride those waves with the strength that now abounds within you Dan.
Andy
January 7th, 2020 01:47
Alright new year
dusk arising said:
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.
Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.
January 6th, 2020 11:28
dusk arising said:
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.
Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.
January 6th, 2020 11:28
Alright new year
dusk arising said:
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.
Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.
January 6th, 2020 09:00
dusk arising said:
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.
Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.
January 6th, 2020 09:00
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