Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



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FineB said:

Hi Poetic Dan,

A good write.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

Keep writing FineB

January 10th, 2020 09:40

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dusk arising said:

That rhythm is in you m8 and it\'ll stay there.

January 10th, 2020 05:48

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Nemo said:

Well written 🌹

January 10th, 2020 05:18

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orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

January 10th, 2020 04:22

Missing teen
Goldfinch60 said:

So sad that this has happened. We need more love in our world.

January 10th, 2020 01:00

Missing teen
Nemo said:

The world we live in...
I hope she is safe

January 9th, 2020 13:29

Missing teen
dusk arising said:

So sad Dan.... One wonders all sorts of things when this happens. Too often we have seen it end badly.
I do hope she turns up fit and well. My sympathy is with her family and friends.

This would not happen if there was enough love in the world.

January 9th, 2020 12:52

Missing teen
FineB said:

Hello Poetic Dan,

A great write and indicative of the times we live in.

Keep writing FineB

January 9th, 2020 09:03

#poetrycommunityofig
dusk arising said:

Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and achievements are as a rainbow in the sun. For the sun will be there for eons and we shall not. But there are days when there is no rain nor rainbow and we can enjoy the sunshine (seen u doing it in yer videos).

Life is not a bowl of cherries and it can seem that lifes rewards are handed out unfairly.

As soon as i wrote that my mind went to that \'desiderata\' piece i showed you some while back. It\'s an amazing piece and it lifts me in those times when my spirit wains.



January 8th, 2020 04:58

#poetrycommunityofig
orchidee said:

Where ya going? When will ya get there? How will ya know when you\'ve got there? (heehee)!
Keep on journeying, even if it only seems like \'existing\' sometimes.
Well - you\'re here - that\'s good enough, if nothing else!

January 8th, 2020 04:25

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Goldfinch60 said:

Life can always be sublime, the wonder is always there each new day.

Andy

January 8th, 2020 01:00

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dusk arising said:

Once again a superb video and great Acid Jazz sounds.

Your short piece today is one of your best. Punchy and positive, the way to be.

January 7th, 2020 18:18

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Fay Slimm. said:

Love the wise rhyme and oh those gorgeous canines............. great posting Dan

January 7th, 2020 16:51

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orchidee said:

Good write and fine pic Dan.

January 7th, 2020 07:40

Alright new year
Nemo said:

Love the video 👌
Great write, all you gotta do is put in the work and you will succeed 🙌

January 7th, 2020 05:51

Alright new year
Goldfinch60 said:

Ride those waves with the strength that now abounds within you Dan.

Andy

January 7th, 2020 01:47

Alright new year
dusk arising said:

Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.

Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.

January 6th, 2020 11:28

Alright new year
dusk arising said:

Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack really makes it.

Keep riding the waves Dan, theyre only there to remind us all that none of us are perfect m8. Wiishing you a happy and joyous 2020 - you\'ve lots to look forward to.

January 6th, 2020 09:00

One among many
Goldfinch60 said:

You have moved so far in your life Dan, don\'t look back at the sad times look forward to the good times that WILL be in front of you. Write those words even if you just leave them on the page they will be there for you.

Andy

January 6th, 2020 02:17

One among many
dusk arising said:

Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner turmoil. The battles continue and gradually mature into wisdom.

Wisdom has no completion.

Don\'t feel compelled to write/publish here everyday my friend.

January 5th, 2020 04:33

One among many
dusk arising said:

Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner turmoil. The battles continue and gradually mature into wisdom.

Wisdom has no completion.

Don\'t feel compelled to write/publish here everyday my friend.

January 5th, 2020 04:06

One among many
orchidee said:

Oohh, let\'s hear them all! (heehee). They may only gather dust otherwise.
Writer\'s block? \'Reading poetry\' block?

January 5th, 2020 03:32

Once I declared, now I dedicate
Suresh said:

You have laid bare your love for all to see and share - for it shall last forever

December 31st, 2019 21:47

Once I declared, now I dedicate
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure your life together is and will be wonderful Dan.

December 29th, 2019 01:40

Once I declared, now I dedicate
dusk arising said:

Some flowers begin life buried in a very dark place and struggle but find the light. The light encourages growth and when the season is right a flower blossoms into something beautifully mature.

December 28th, 2019 12:32

Once I declared, now I dedicate
orchidee said:

Oohh lovely write Dan.

December 28th, 2019 05:20

Maarii lullaby
Suresh said:

Merriment is the spice of the season

Merry Christmas

December 25th, 2019 20:18

Maarii lullaby
Michael Edwards said:

Love the clip - what a delight and great write too.

December 24th, 2019 09:13

Maarii lullaby
orchidee said:

Lovely write and clip Dan.

December 24th, 2019 07:40

I\'m not sure but I definitely am
Goldfinch60 said:

As Michael has said every day is to be treasured and at our ages Michael and I treasure them even more.

December 24th, 2019 02:24



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