Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Open up & flex
orchidee said:

Doh! No vibes now - broken headphones. Or negative vibes?

October 29th, 2019 03:47

F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day
Goldfinch60 said:

Sometimes we all have those sort of days but your new found strength of character will accept it and the new day will be fine.

October 29th, 2019 01:20

F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day
Neville said:

Win some, lose some...tis a good job we can\'t see round the corner innit...

October 28th, 2019 14:31

F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day
dusk arising said:

Thats life innit. I just tell myself im big enough and ugly enought to take the blows when they come.

Tenacity

October 28th, 2019 10:14

Hanging with a rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:

No matter which way you face your love is always there for all.

October 28th, 2019 01:21

Hanging with a rhyme
kevin browne said:

And as it appeared your life used to be upside down, but have managed to straighten up in an orderly fashion over the last months gone by...

October 27th, 2019 20:41

Hanging with a rhyme
FineB said:

Hello Poetic Dan,

A super write.

Keep writing FineB

October 27th, 2019 14:08

Hanging with a rhyme
orchidee said:

So - you knew there was no one like me around?! heehee. Call me Superman? Or call me Joe Bloggs?! lol.

October 27th, 2019 08:08

Rhyme a day away
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write.

I got soggy yesterday, all my own fault, a friend and I played croquet in the rain for almost three hours, it was a good afternoon though.

Skin is waterproof.

October 27th, 2019 01:16

Rhyme a day away
kevin browne said:

If it\'s raining it\'s raining...

October 27th, 2019 00:48

Rhyme a day away
Michael Edwards said:

A fun read - love it.

October 26th, 2019 13:45

Magic eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

You are so right Dan, life love and laughter are most precious at all ages in life.

October 26th, 2019 00:38

Magic eyes
orchidee said:

Ahh lovely!

October 25th, 2019 10:53

33 days at 1:33am, my mind contemplates
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, families are all different but we are always there for them and may that ever be so.

October 24th, 2019 08:09

33 days at 1:33am, my mind contemplates
Thoughts In Time said:

So true and yes the way you grow up affects you for the rest of your life but we have choice to change ways and make different futures for ourselves..kids learn from what they see..and hear...🌹

October 24th, 2019 06:37

I don\'t know ego but I know me
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, PD! Being a father is great. When the kids are little you are \'God\', when they are teenagers you are \'nothing\', and when they are grown up and have kids themselves, they realize how hard and beautiful it is to be a father.

October 23rd, 2019 18:56

Sun, sea & air. Time over money
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment in our lives are so precious treasure each of them.
There is nothing in our lives that is so precious as time.

October 23rd, 2019 00:36

Inspired to never sway
Goldfinch60 said:

People are all individuals and should all be treated with respect no matter what tune of life they are playing.

October 22nd, 2019 00:20

Inspired to never sway
FineB said:

Hi Poetic Dan,

This poem is superb!

It evokes a deeper meaning about tolerance and acceptance of others as well as being accepting of ourselves.

Keep writing FineB



October 21st, 2019 14:42

Inspired to never sway
orchidee said:

Some shops have a notice now:\' No hoods up while in shop, please!\'
Another one said \'No more than 3 students in the shop at time, please\'. A bit immature I thought - students are practically grown men/women. They\'re not going to trash the shop, are they?

October 21st, 2019 10:16

Cartwheel for life
Goldfinch60 said:

I can’t count up to 71, to perform that many cartwheels!

October 20th, 2019 10:28

Cartwheel for life
orchidee said:

Oohh I\'m gonna try that, though I\'m a bit old. heehee

October 20th, 2019 07:41

All light comes from the dark
Goldfinch60 said:

That darkness will always be overcome by the light within our souls.

October 20th, 2019 00:31

Words in heart & hand, but the gut has the plan
Neville said:


I think this is brilliant..

October 19th, 2019 16:56

All light comes from the dark
orchidee said:

Folk go insane hearing me sing, but that\'s another matter.... heehee.

October 19th, 2019 14:27

All light comes from the dark
orchidee said:

But how about \'God is light, and in Him there is no darkness at all\'. The one without beginning or end. He just IS light. Though we would go insane trying to humanly imagine a Being with no beginning, even if we can imaging no ending!

October 19th, 2019 14:26

Words in heart & hand, but the gut has the plan
Goldfinch60 said:

Your movement into your new life has been wonderful and that wonder will increase every moment of your life.

October 19th, 2019 00:00

Words in heart & hand, but the gut has the plan
Jamie said:

Right on, Moving forward, Great dogs too!

October 18th, 2019 11:03

Words in heart & hand, but the gut has the plan
orchidee said:

A fine write and clip/pic Dan.

October 18th, 2019 10:39

Reverse it
Goldfinch60 said:

Each new day is filled with wonder, your days will be that way Dan.

October 18th, 2019 00:32



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