Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Penny for your thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, I too give what I can Dan.
November 24th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, I too give what I can Dan.
November 24th, 2019 01:58
Penny for your thoughts
Caring dove said:
I love this too . You have a good way with your words
November 24th, 2019 01:08
Caring dove said:
I love this too . You have a good way with your words
November 24th, 2019 01:08
Penny for your thoughts
FredPeyer said:
PD, where do you come up with these ideas? I love this poem.
November 23rd, 2019 22:54
FredPeyer said:
PD, where do you come up with these ideas? I love this poem.
November 23rd, 2019 22:54
Trapped
FredPeyer said:
PD, I think we all have trouble accepting ourselves for who we are. Life would be so much easier and better if we could.
November 22nd, 2019 22:01
FredPeyer said:
PD, I think we all have trouble accepting ourselves for who we are. Life would be so much easier and better if we could.
November 22nd, 2019 22:01
Trapped
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that cage around your mind is released soon and you can become the person that you are in your new found loving life.
Andy
November 22nd, 2019 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that cage around your mind is released soon and you can become the person that you are in your new found loving life.
Andy
November 22nd, 2019 03:05
Flashback to 88
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day of our life we step into a new way having learned from the experiences of the previous days of our life. That experience has led you to a happier place.
You replied to Kevin that you are in a dark place at the moment but surely all you need to do is to look into your babies eyes to see the light of your future.
November 20th, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day of our life we step into a new way having learned from the experiences of the previous days of our life. That experience has led you to a happier place.
You replied to Kevin that you are in a dark place at the moment but surely all you need to do is to look into your babies eyes to see the light of your future.
November 20th, 2019 01:33
Flashback to 88
kevin browne said:
There you go again, Mr P Dan. Opening up in the entirety of honesty and a sounding reflection from within a persistence to reveal the inner you, yet just as importantly guiding us away from the pitfalls you have taken as indeed many of us have, Also. There somehow appears in poets and poetesses in which a sinking feeling of overwhelming odds that you may actually succeed in doing something which is worthwhile and that it\'s this way to a better life...
November 19th, 2019 10:30
kevin browne said:
There you go again, Mr P Dan. Opening up in the entirety of honesty and a sounding reflection from within a persistence to reveal the inner you, yet just as importantly guiding us away from the pitfalls you have taken as indeed many of us have, Also. There somehow appears in poets and poetesses in which a sinking feeling of overwhelming odds that you may actually succeed in doing something which is worthwhile and that it\'s this way to a better life...
November 19th, 2019 10:30
I don\'t see a poetic mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Those writings (and this one) are so very meaningful Dan.
November 19th, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Those writings (and this one) are so very meaningful Dan.
November 19th, 2019 01:50
Sunday fun rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
May that lightheartedness be forever with you Dan.
November 17th, 2019 15:52
Goldfinch60 said:
May that lightheartedness be forever with you Dan.
November 17th, 2019 15:52
Muddle & Squeak
Neville said:
sounds like fun... sounds like my day in Malta when the floods hit.... cheers mate..... N
November 17th, 2019 07:16
Neville said:
sounds like fun... sounds like my day in Malta when the floods hit.... cheers mate..... N
November 17th, 2019 07:16
Muddle & Squeak
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that you can play those toes in order so that a wonderful tune can arise from your skipping.
November 17th, 2019 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that you can play those toes in order so that a wonderful tune can arise from your skipping.
November 17th, 2019 02:09
Muddle & Squeak
Michael Edwards said:
Great - would love to have joined you.
November 16th, 2019 15:26
Michael Edwards said:
Great - would love to have joined you.
November 16th, 2019 15:26
Human contamination
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep going Dan, you have your wonderful world to live for.
November 15th, 2019 16:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep going Dan, you have your wonderful world to live for.
November 15th, 2019 16:01
Human contamination
orchidee said:
Got a hole in ya boat? Don\'t sink there!
November 15th, 2019 07:23
orchidee said:
Got a hole in ya boat? Don\'t sink there!
November 15th, 2019 07:23
Day 55 of light
Goldfinch60 said:
Nursery rhymes are not dead, she will love this, as I do.
November 15th, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Nursery rhymes are not dead, she will love this, as I do.
November 15th, 2019 01:35
Day 55 of light
Fay Slimm. said:
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28
The Scream of life
orchidee said:
Yes, you have dealt well with children, as well as dogs.
November 14th, 2019 02:44
orchidee said:
Yes, you have dealt well with children, as well as dogs.
November 14th, 2019 02:44
The Scream of life
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness in your life has been overcome, it may come back occasionally and need to be dealt with but I am sure it is becoming less and less frequent as your new life with lover, little one and dogs takes you into a wonderfully bright and happy future.
November 14th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness in your life has been overcome, it may come back occasionally and need to be dealt with but I am sure it is becoming less and less frequent as your new life with lover, little one and dogs takes you into a wonderfully bright and happy future.
November 14th, 2019 01:01
The Scream of life
kevin browne said:
in fine form yet again, Mr P Dan. Colouring in and shading out the darkness of your not so picture-perfect comfortably numbed life you have, Dealing with many subjects as each line revs up to a speed that only the best can surpass. Great stuff..!!
November 13th, 2019 12:26
kevin browne said:
in fine form yet again, Mr P Dan. Colouring in and shading out the darkness of your not so picture-perfect comfortably numbed life you have, Dealing with many subjects as each line revs up to a speed that only the best can surpass. Great stuff..!!
November 13th, 2019 12:26
Illusionary
Suresh said:
Your suffering makes you helpless,
My helplessness makes me suffer
The reality is that we are both suffering,
You have a cause
I have no place to hide.
Poetry - bravo
November 12th, 2019 22:22
Suresh said:
Your suffering makes you helpless,
My helplessness makes me suffer
The reality is that we are both suffering,
You have a cause
I have no place to hide.
Poetry - bravo
November 12th, 2019 22:22
Don\'t be offended by my remembering
Suresh said:
Powerfully stated, the spikes that pierced the truth, while making us the beneficiaries
November 11th, 2019 21:53
Suresh said:
Powerfully stated, the spikes that pierced the truth, while making us the beneficiaries
November 11th, 2019 21:53
Don\'t be offended by my remembering
Goldfinch60 said:
All we can do is live our own lives in the most peaceful way we can and hope that our peace can show others the way we should go.
November 11th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
All we can do is live our own lives in the most peaceful way we can and hope that our peace can show others the way we should go.
November 11th, 2019 01:58
I want..
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to hear more poems like this
I want your journey in life\'s freedom to continue.
November 10th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to hear more poems like this
I want your journey in life\'s freedom to continue.
November 10th, 2019 00:54
Only you can earn those stripes of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Dan, may you always dance to the rhythm of life.
November 9th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Dan, may you always dance to the rhythm of life.
November 9th, 2019 01:06
Only you can earn those stripes of life
vvnrose said:
Love this!! Just amazingly transcribed. Everyone’s journey is unique. To find love in authenticity, inspire and be inspired, the beauty expressed in art (however it shows up), when we follow our own path and wear our stripes of pride, ...we realize everything we could ever need is already within us. Kuttos!
November 8th, 2019 06:35
vvnrose said:
Love this!! Just amazingly transcribed. Everyone’s journey is unique. To find love in authenticity, inspire and be inspired, the beauty expressed in art (however it shows up), when we follow our own path and wear our stripes of pride, ...we realize everything we could ever need is already within us. Kuttos!
November 8th, 2019 06:35
None will ever know existed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets do emerge onto pages in time as they will as you write more wonderful words like these Dan.
November 8th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets do emerge onto pages in time as they will as you write more wonderful words like these Dan.
November 8th, 2019 01:17
None will ever know existed
PoeticBiscuit said:
Fantastic Write to go with a fantastic message.
November 7th, 2019 12:47
PoeticBiscuit said:
Fantastic Write to go with a fantastic message.
November 7th, 2019 12:47
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