Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Human contamination
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep going Dan, you have your wonderful world to live for.
November 15th, 2019 16:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep going Dan, you have your wonderful world to live for.
November 15th, 2019 16:01
Human contamination
orchidee said:
Got a hole in ya boat? Don\'t sink there!
November 15th, 2019 07:23
orchidee said:
Got a hole in ya boat? Don\'t sink there!
November 15th, 2019 07:23
Day 55 of light
Goldfinch60 said:
Nursery rhymes are not dead, she will love this, as I do.
November 15th, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Nursery rhymes are not dead, she will love this, as I do.
November 15th, 2019 01:35
Day 55 of light
Fay Slimm. said:
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28
The Scream of life
orchidee said:
Yes, you have dealt well with children, as well as dogs.
November 14th, 2019 02:44
orchidee said:
Yes, you have dealt well with children, as well as dogs.
November 14th, 2019 02:44
The Scream of life
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness in your life has been overcome, it may come back occasionally and need to be dealt with but I am sure it is becoming less and less frequent as your new life with lover, little one and dogs takes you into a wonderfully bright and happy future.
November 14th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness in your life has been overcome, it may come back occasionally and need to be dealt with but I am sure it is becoming less and less frequent as your new life with lover, little one and dogs takes you into a wonderfully bright and happy future.
November 14th, 2019 01:01
The Scream of life
kevin browne said:
in fine form yet again, Mr P Dan. Colouring in and shading out the darkness of your not so picture-perfect comfortably numbed life you have, Dealing with many subjects as each line revs up to a speed that only the best can surpass. Great stuff..!!
November 13th, 2019 12:26
kevin browne said:
in fine form yet again, Mr P Dan. Colouring in and shading out the darkness of your not so picture-perfect comfortably numbed life you have, Dealing with many subjects as each line revs up to a speed that only the best can surpass. Great stuff..!!
November 13th, 2019 12:26
Illusionary
Suresh said:
Your suffering makes you helpless,
My helplessness makes me suffer
The reality is that we are both suffering,
You have a cause
I have no place to hide.
Poetry - bravo
November 12th, 2019 22:22
Suresh said:
Your suffering makes you helpless,
My helplessness makes me suffer
The reality is that we are both suffering,
You have a cause
I have no place to hide.
Poetry - bravo
November 12th, 2019 22:22
Don\'t be offended by my remembering
Suresh said:
Powerfully stated, the spikes that pierced the truth, while making us the beneficiaries
November 11th, 2019 21:53
Suresh said:
Powerfully stated, the spikes that pierced the truth, while making us the beneficiaries
November 11th, 2019 21:53
Don\'t be offended by my remembering
Goldfinch60 said:
All we can do is live our own lives in the most peaceful way we can and hope that our peace can show others the way we should go.
November 11th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
All we can do is live our own lives in the most peaceful way we can and hope that our peace can show others the way we should go.
November 11th, 2019 01:58
I want..
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to hear more poems like this
I want your journey in life\'s freedom to continue.
November 10th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to hear more poems like this
I want your journey in life\'s freedom to continue.
November 10th, 2019 00:54
Only you can earn those stripes of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Dan, may you always dance to the rhythm of life.
November 9th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Dan, may you always dance to the rhythm of life.
November 9th, 2019 01:06
Only you can earn those stripes of life
vvnrose said:
Love this!! Just amazingly transcribed. Everyone’s journey is unique. To find love in authenticity, inspire and be inspired, the beauty expressed in art (however it shows up), when we follow our own path and wear our stripes of pride, ...we realize everything we could ever need is already within us. Kuttos!
November 8th, 2019 06:35
vvnrose said:
Love this!! Just amazingly transcribed. Everyone’s journey is unique. To find love in authenticity, inspire and be inspired, the beauty expressed in art (however it shows up), when we follow our own path and wear our stripes of pride, ...we realize everything we could ever need is already within us. Kuttos!
November 8th, 2019 06:35
None will ever know existed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets do emerge onto pages in time as they will as you write more wonderful words like these Dan.
November 8th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets do emerge onto pages in time as they will as you write more wonderful words like these Dan.
November 8th, 2019 01:17
None will ever know existed
PoeticBiscuit said:
Fantastic Write to go with a fantastic message.
November 7th, 2019 12:47
PoeticBiscuit said:
Fantastic Write to go with a fantastic message.
November 7th, 2019 12:47
Unwilling subjects
PoeticBiscuit said:
Absolutely love the message Dan, speak your truth with the words from the brilliant mind of yours.
November 6th, 2019 16:44
PoeticBiscuit said:
Absolutely love the message Dan, speak your truth with the words from the brilliant mind of yours.
November 6th, 2019 16:44
Unwilling subjects
Goldfinch60 said:
There will always be those allegedly above us but many are not better than us.
November 6th, 2019 16:06
Goldfinch60 said:
There will always be those allegedly above us but many are not better than us.
November 6th, 2019 16:06
Unwilling subjects
FredPeyer said:
You have the royals, we have the movie stars! Unfortunately, there will always be some held above the rest, whether they deserve it or not.
November 6th, 2019 13:48
FredPeyer said:
You have the royals, we have the movie stars! Unfortunately, there will always be some held above the rest, whether they deserve it or not.
November 6th, 2019 13:48
Unwilling subjects
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Freedom is a hoax for the likes of us
November 6th, 2019 08:11
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Freedom is a hoax for the likes of us
November 6th, 2019 08:11
Unwilling subjects
Chris Yellow said:
I follow the logic and I understand it is a disturbing concept. Being born in a republic I wouldn\'t know, but I wish you had explored more the emotion this creates on you. I think you could have made it a powerful piece, but I guess the subject is strong on its own.
November 6th, 2019 06:05
Chris Yellow said:
I follow the logic and I understand it is a disturbing concept. Being born in a republic I wouldn\'t know, but I wish you had explored more the emotion this creates on you. I think you could have made it a powerful piece, but I guess the subject is strong on its own.
November 6th, 2019 06:05
Remember remember, we\'re the V in November
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, we need to make that change, are you going to join me underneath the Houses of Parliament when the members deign to return to work.
November 5th, 2019 03:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, we need to make that change, are you going to join me underneath the Houses of Parliament when the members deign to return to work.
November 5th, 2019 03:44
Remember remember, we\'re the V in November
orchidee said:
I might blow a fuse, or burn up though! lol.
November 5th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
I might blow a fuse, or burn up though! lol.
November 5th, 2019 02:58
Winds of change
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan!
A superb write!
Society is ever changing so quickly in this social media age!
What happened to the good old fashioned change like the winds of change its all streaming now!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:10
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan!
A superb write!
Society is ever changing so quickly in this social media age!
What happened to the good old fashioned change like the winds of change its all streaming now!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:10
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