Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Tortured Mind
germanamericanchurch said:

Nice flow :)

December 20th, 2019 14:40

Work & poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

Learning from books has its way but experience is always the better way and cannot be taught. I have seen it so often in my life where people have all the qualifications in the world but have no idea how to work with others who KNOW what they are doing.

Good write Dan and I am with you all the way.
Love the video.

Andy.

December 19th, 2019 01:21

Even experience can\'t train you for this
Michael Edwards said:

Been through all that but it\'ll pass lol
Love the write PD

December 17th, 2019 03:41

Even experience can\'t train you for this
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful start to my day the laughter resonates within me.

My son put a picture on facebook about a year ago showing his newly born daughter in the back of the car with poo all over the place.
You are right nothing can prepare you for this but you just have to laugh and love the young ones with all your heart.

Andy

December 17th, 2019 03:09

Even experience can\'t train you for this
orchidee said:

You gonna fly there in that pic?!

December 17th, 2019 03:01

What\'s in me
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Dan, I am sure that in a short while all your dreams will come true and all will be great in your life.

Andy

December 12th, 2019 01:52

What\'s in me
Michael Edwards said:

You\'ve already got the key - great work.

December 11th, 2019 16:25

Don\'t be long
FredPeyer said:

Nice writing! Wishing all of you all the BEST and speedy recovery!

December 10th, 2019 22:17

Don\'t be long
dusk arising said:

My thoughts are with you and yours Dan. Wishing you all a positive outcome.
Hopefully you will look back on this trying time with this well known phrase under your belt \"what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\"

December 9th, 2019 18:27

Don\'t be long
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope all is ok Dan and they will be back soon.

Andy.

December 9th, 2019 16:32

Never normal
Goldfinch60 said:

That long journey has led you into a new life of joy, yes there are still hard times but many are now dealt with and you are moving forward with experience and new found resilience - don\'t stop.

Andy

December 9th, 2019 01:49

Never normal
kevin browne said:

in some people I\'ve noticed a lot of emptyness, lonliness, suicidal, traumatised, scared an lost. This poem reveals the undercurrent flow of relentless and unwanted thoughts which since I\'ve known of you have persisted to haunt you. However, I have met people with passion, love, desire, compassion, hope, determination, success, complimented, awarded and most importanly it\'s people like you who I\'ve known normally end up winning the day with the power from within. Great acheivements on a scale which is difficult to reach. You have reached out within your poetry and to me that\'s just entirely beautiful..!!

December 8th, 2019 11:26

Never normal
orchidee said:

I\'m sure you and the dogs have the good vibes between you both!

December 8th, 2019 08:12

Tortured Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

When you put down word of feeling
You are poet of wonder,
Those words show your healing.

December 5th, 2019 02:10

Tortured Mind
Bragee said:

Love this!
especially the last line.

December 4th, 2019 12:45

Tortured Mind
dusk arising said:

There will always be scar tissue.

Not every day will you see the sun but believe in this - above the clouds the sun still shines.

December 4th, 2019 04:17

Cones attack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A great inspiring story poem of family and home wow. You describe and relate in a fine splendid poetic way with great word choice. Are cones some hailstones? Kudos.

Pls pleez do review comment my newest poem too.

December 3rd, 2019 15:44

Cones attack
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, home is where the heart is every moment of our lives.

The vagaries of the M25 eh?

December 2nd, 2019 01:54

Cones attack
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

TWO THINGS HAVE BLIGHTED MODERN LIFE
And caused us ANGST and endless STRIFE
Rerouting via TRAFFIC CONES ~ and the
FOBILE MOAN of our MOBILE PHONES !

Thanks *PD* for ~ A great parable for Sunday on Modern Life ! Thank GOD (or Mother Nature) for Parents & GParents ~ BLOOD is always thicker than water ! Thank God (or MN) for FAMILIES !

Blessings & Peace & Joy for YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN ~ 🧡💚🧡💚🧡

December 1st, 2019 10:39

Cones attack
kevin browne said:

That\'s because there is no sweeter place than home and those traffick cones will remain for many a year to come. An essential piece of equipment used for a wide variation of things that need these mischevious cones..


December 1st, 2019 10:08

Humane ship
orchidee said:

Well, only if the dogs make the \'mistake\' of attacking someone, and injuring them. Fido (my imaginary, non-existent watchdog) would be upset, if dogs were put down for their mistakes generally!

November 30th, 2019 03:17

Humane ship
SabreLi said:

How peaceful a world it would be if there was only more humanity! Love the idea here, great job! :)

November 29th, 2019 12:42

Dog destiny
FredPeyer said:

And every dog in the world thanks you!

November 28th, 2019 12:37

Dog destiny
kevin browne said:

Nice tribut to all dogas and all animals on this planet should be protected and loved.

November 28th, 2019 05:34

Dog destiny
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light be forever with you.

November 28th, 2019 02:52

Dog destiny
orchidee said:

A good write Dan. Yep, I\'m at the edge too, with me \'watchdog\' Fido!

November 28th, 2019 02:41

Soulful beauty never lies
Mil57Man said:

I\'ve found that deep within is much better than just skin. And if beautiful thoughts we can achieve if in ourselves we believe. Poetic Dan this poem is hard and deserves a reward.

November 26th, 2019 23:46

Loco at Acapulco
Goldfinch60 said:

You certainly will never be alone in your life Dan with writing like this.

November 25th, 2019 14:50

Soulful beauty never lies
Goldfinch60 said:

That love is inside us and is shown in the combined souls of two lovers together.

November 25th, 2019 01:40

Penny for your thoughts
sarahlynne said:

Homelessness has become so prevalent in today’s world...I really think you brought the plight of homeless alive.

November 24th, 2019 19:14



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