Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
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orchidee said:
I had a vibration, but I blew a fuse! lol. I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
October 17th, 2019 05:42
orchidee said:
I had a vibration, but I blew a fuse! lol. I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
October 17th, 2019 05:42
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dusk arising said:
This piece excells at what i like to call \"less is more\" poetry.
Short and punchy!
No need for any more detail, the reader knows instinctively to reflect within and be patient.
October 17th, 2019 04:30
dusk arising said:
This piece excells at what i like to call \"less is more\" poetry.
Short and punchy!
No need for any more detail, the reader knows instinctively to reflect within and be patient.
October 17th, 2019 04:30
I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2)
Jamie said:
I am often devastated by criticism, so this was especially encouraging, thank you Dan!
October 16th, 2019 12:01
Jamie said:
I am often devastated by criticism, so this was especially encouraging, thank you Dan!
October 16th, 2019 12:01
I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2)
dusk arising said:
Dan, don\'t ever worry about grammar or spelling.... cos fact is you are a great communicator....no doubt about that whatsoever.
More important than that tho is that you have got really worthwhile stuff to say, and it gets through to people.
You are living!
October 16th, 2019 11:09
dusk arising said:
Dan, don\'t ever worry about grammar or spelling.... cos fact is you are a great communicator....no doubt about that whatsoever.
More important than that tho is that you have got really worthwhile stuff to say, and it gets through to people.
You are living!
October 16th, 2019 11:09
I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2)
Goldfinch60 said:
“We must run in harmony to our own inner truth,“ What a cracking line Dan, so very true, you really have found yourself and will go on in peace, harmony and love.
Andy
October 16th, 2019 04:49
Goldfinch60 said:
“We must run in harmony to our own inner truth,“ What a cracking line Dan, so very true, you really have found yourself and will go on in peace, harmony and love.
Andy
October 16th, 2019 04:49
I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2)
Thoughts In Time said:
Amazing..what you find inside if you allow yourself to see and be the true you🌹
October 16th, 2019 04:16
Thoughts In Time said:
Amazing..what you find inside if you allow yourself to see and be the true you🌹
October 16th, 2019 04:16
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dusk arising said:
Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8.
I get te feeling that in this piece you are saying - this is where i\'m at, if you\'re not with me, that\'s ok... we are all on our own and separate journeys to...... (nirvana perhaps?)
October 15th, 2019 03:45
dusk arising said:
Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8.
I get te feeling that in this piece you are saying - this is where i\'m at, if you\'re not with me, that\'s ok... we are all on our own and separate journeys to...... (nirvana perhaps?)
October 15th, 2019 03:45
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kevin browne said:
That\' crackingly good and funny Mr Dan..Kepp em coming, my friend...!!!
October 15th, 2019 02:35
kevin browne said:
That\' crackingly good and funny Mr Dan..Kepp em coming, my friend...!!!
October 15th, 2019 02:35
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Thoughts In Time said:
Well sometimes we get so carried away we need something to rattle us back to reality(illusion)
October 15th, 2019 02:32
Thoughts In Time said:
Well sometimes we get so carried away we need something to rattle us back to reality(illusion)
October 15th, 2019 02:32
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Michael Edwards said:
Well I love that last word - it gave a smile after such an encouraging read.
October 15th, 2019 02:12
Michael Edwards said:
Well I love that last word - it gave a smile after such an encouraging read.
October 15th, 2019 02:12
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Goldfinch60 said:
Life is wonderful and will always remain so within our hearts.
October 15th, 2019 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is wonderful and will always remain so within our hearts.
October 15th, 2019 02:02
I forgot
dusk arising said:
Envy is according to christianity a sin. I envy you my friend for the love which surrounds you and the love you have surrounded yourself with.
Sincerity
October 14th, 2019 04:22
dusk arising said:
Envy is according to christianity a sin. I envy you my friend for the love which surrounds you and the love you have surrounded yourself with.
Sincerity
October 14th, 2019 04:22
Hat, home & tea.
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant positive write Dan, your life is now secure and all will be wonderful in your future.
October 14th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant positive write Dan, your life is now secure and all will be wonderful in your future.
October 14th, 2019 00:20
Hat, home & tea.
dusk arising said:
This is Dan at his absolute best so far! I love this piece, filled with pearls of wisdom gained from looking deep into yourself.... You make it sound easy but you and many of us know it\'s a tough job with plenty heartaches along the way.
\"No judgement undunkable\" a pearl of wisdom m8.
Most definitely into my favourites, for this is a true expression of Dan for what Dan is.
If only we could encourage more folk to take a journey like yours, there would be so many many more people at peace with themselves and the world at large.
Sincerely
October 13th, 2019 06:33
dusk arising said:
This is Dan at his absolute best so far! I love this piece, filled with pearls of wisdom gained from looking deep into yourself.... You make it sound easy but you and many of us know it\'s a tough job with plenty heartaches along the way.
\"No judgement undunkable\" a pearl of wisdom m8.
Most definitely into my favourites, for this is a true expression of Dan for what Dan is.
If only we could encourage more folk to take a journey like yours, there would be so many many more people at peace with themselves and the world at large.
Sincerely
October 13th, 2019 06:33
Hat, home & tea.
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Indeed a super write!
I agree with all of the above comments regarding your poem!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~🌻
October 13th, 2019 03:47
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Indeed a super write!
I agree with all of the above comments regarding your poem!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~🌻
October 13th, 2019 03:47
Hat, home & tea.
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A great write. Superb!
Home is our refuge, our palace, our shield, our safeguard from the world!
Keep writing FineB
October 13th, 2019 02:04
FineB said:
Hi Poetic Dan,
A great write. Superb!
Home is our refuge, our palace, our shield, our safeguard from the world!
Keep writing FineB
October 13th, 2019 02:04
Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you
Neville said:
Nice one my friend....
October 11th, 2019 07:00
Neville said:
Nice one my friend....
October 11th, 2019 07:00
Magnetise and attract
Thoughts In Time said:
Be true to you...things happen...things change...it’s sadly part of the game...know who u are ...there’s no shame...rekindle the flame ..otherwise it returns to blame...🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:33
Thoughts In Time said:
Be true to you...things happen...things change...it’s sadly part of the game...know who u are ...there’s no shame...rekindle the flame ..otherwise it returns to blame...🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:33
Rhyme for life
Thoughts In Time said:
Exit...choices...inner voices...blessed to be able to see the signs and lucky to know how to choose the right choice...🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:28
Thoughts In Time said:
Exit...choices...inner voices...blessed to be able to see the signs and lucky to know how to choose the right choice...🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:28
Joyful tear or two, I\'m ready are you?
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes it’s all there right in front of us or right in our back yard ...we travel for miles trying to find it and all we need to do is look inwards or just turn around and...see🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:25
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes it’s all there right in front of us or right in our back yard ...we travel for miles trying to find it and all we need to do is look inwards or just turn around and...see🌹
October 10th, 2019 13:25
Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you
dusk arising said:
That\'s the reality of existence you just encompassed Dan. No rules, and any plan is just adopting to whatever comes along.
Whereas you\'re likely to continue exercising your mind with the written word it\'s not essential is it? Time off and letting go can and will i think bring new perspectives. I recall that when i stopped playing my saxes for long periods, the return to them revealed a completely new approach from me and it was potent.
I\'m thinking you just might find something similar happens..... after all Dan, with that beautiful daughter and loving wife, there\'s plenty to be getting on with.
If you do disappear for a while, don\'t stay away.
October 10th, 2019 11:11
dusk arising said:
That\'s the reality of existence you just encompassed Dan. No rules, and any plan is just adopting to whatever comes along.
Whereas you\'re likely to continue exercising your mind with the written word it\'s not essential is it? Time off and letting go can and will i think bring new perspectives. I recall that when i stopped playing my saxes for long periods, the return to them revealed a completely new approach from me and it was potent.
I\'m thinking you just might find something similar happens..... after all Dan, with that beautiful daughter and loving wife, there\'s plenty to be getting on with.
If you do disappear for a while, don\'t stay away.
October 10th, 2019 11:11
Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved on a long way in your life Dan, you are so much freer now and not held down by the troubles that daunted you in the beginning. It will be a shame if you do leave this site as you obviously have so many more words within you that you could share.
If you do leave us Dan I wish you well for the future for you and your family.
May your God go with you.
Andy.
October 10th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved on a long way in your life Dan, you are so much freer now and not held down by the troubles that daunted you in the beginning. It will be a shame if you do leave this site as you obviously have so many more words within you that you could share.
If you do leave us Dan I wish you well for the future for you and your family.
May your God go with you.
Andy.
October 10th, 2019 01:07
Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you
Thoughts In Time said:
Hmmmm straight from the heart...going back to the start..always good to reflect but pause there and be back here now..at times it seems like a game but you’re winning all the same..time and place has its space but the heart needs to do what is good for you ..sometimes we think too much and too deep we need to be still and just know all shall be well..another deep true and amazing poem...don’t ever doubt ...🌹
October 10th, 2019 00:40
Thoughts In Time said:
Hmmmm straight from the heart...going back to the start..always good to reflect but pause there and be back here now..at times it seems like a game but you’re winning all the same..time and place has its space but the heart needs to do what is good for you ..sometimes we think too much and too deep we need to be still and just know all shall be well..another deep true and amazing poem...don’t ever doubt ...🌹
October 10th, 2019 00:40
Be the \"S\" in front of our word
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show supreme salvation setting such super swords SDan.
SAndy.
October 10th, 2019 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show supreme salvation setting such super swords SDan.
SAndy.
October 10th, 2019 00:37
Vibrational link
Thoughts In Time said:
You are amazing...I don’t think u know just how ...I sit and shake my head and snigger at the words I read ...you are one deep seed and original in yourself...wisdom from pain a lesson you gain..u right not much can compare to what you give away...given freely and without it we have nothing...amazeballs...🌹
October 9th, 2019 16:04
Thoughts In Time said:
You are amazing...I don’t think u know just how ...I sit and shake my head and snigger at the words I read ...you are one deep seed and original in yourself...wisdom from pain a lesson you gain..u right not much can compare to what you give away...given freely and without it we have nothing...amazeballs...🌹
October 9th, 2019 16:04
Riding the wave
Thoughts In Time said:
We came in alone go out alone ...sometimes it feels like we’re alone trying to make this world a better place...but acceptance is the key to being free...we won’t always understand but we can accept no matter how trying...deep you are ...🌹
October 9th, 2019 15:35
Thoughts In Time said:
We came in alone go out alone ...sometimes it feels like we’re alone trying to make this world a better place...but acceptance is the key to being free...we won’t always understand but we can accept no matter how trying...deep you are ...🌹
October 9th, 2019 15:35
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