Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Magnetise and attract
Goldfinch60 said:

That smile is within you Dan it is just hiding today, it will be back tomorrow.

September 30th, 2019 01:08

Magnetise and attract
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

Just look at your baby...
Her smile will
‘attract’ and ‘magnetise’...
You will ride ‘the wave’
without a doubt!

~Laura~🌻


September 29th, 2019 08:30

Acorn Valley
FredPeyer said:

\'Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage\'
I feel like that when standing at the shore looking out over the ocean. I do like your poem PD!

September 28th, 2019 14:50

Acorn Valley
Neville said:

some very nice touches dear poet...

September 28th, 2019 09:55

Acorn Valley
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

I love the pic and your words that complement it! A beautiful and serene scene along with your sincere thoughts that you’ve shared with us! Let us know what you found on ‘Mushroom Hill’! 🍄

~Laura~🌻

September 28th, 2019 07:17

Acorn Valley
Goldfinch60 said:

Those walks with nature are so meaningful and relaxing. They give you a chance to relax and feel the goodness that is in life and within yourself.

September 28th, 2019 04:52

Negatives in Paradise
Goldfinch60 said:

A heartfelt write Dan, you are now along the right path and it will get better with every future moment.

September 28th, 2019 04:46

Acorn Valley
Clara said:

Oh this is great... The visuals and the words chosen. I really enjoyed reading this.

\'\'Many doors can be your home but when the mind is lost we always roam\'\'

Excellent and very true. I like the sound of this place. Thanks for sharing!

September 28th, 2019 02:26

Acorn Valley
orchidee said:

Careful with those mushrooms - \'rolling around!\' oohh.

September 28th, 2019 01:45

Negatives in Paradise
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

An honest and heartfelt write! You are so right, “Changing what I can, letting go of what I can’t.” That’s the best we can do...and that’s good enough for me...and obviously, good enough for you!

Reading this poem felt like breathing a breath of fresh air! Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~🌻

September 27th, 2019 10:31

Uncontained
Goldfinch60 said:

That love is so pure, keep on dancing Dan, keep on dancing.

September 27th, 2019 00:54

Uncontained
FredPeyer said:

It\'s great to be a father, isn\'t it?
Beautiful baby and the writing ain\'t too shabby either!

September 26th, 2019 16:53

Uncontained
Michael Edwards said:

A real beaut of a write.

September 26th, 2019 15:21

Write on your own wall, I will not fall
dusk arising said:

None of us know where life will take us. I hope one day, when growing-up is done, and a fullfilled existence surrounds your daughter, she will be able to read the \'selected works of Dan who searched and found\'. I think she will be immesely proud and inspired.

September 26th, 2019 04:19

Write on your own wall, I will not fall
Goldfinch60 said:

Your life has changed, a life now full of joy, hope, love and a future. Enjoy every moment.

September 26th, 2019 00:29

Write on your own wall, I will not fall
kevin browne said:

I think you got your message across really well and understood Mr Meistro Poetic Dan...Congratulations on giving life a chance...What a cutie...

September 25th, 2019 17:45

Write on your own wall, I will not fall
Neville said:

Write on Dan...


....................... Neville

September 25th, 2019 16:59

Crystal clear
FredPeyer said:

Love that last line. Well done, P D.

September 24th, 2019 13:04

Crystal clear
dusk arising said:

Creating from the darkness (or from nothing) a gift has to be the finest display of care. Completely unbidden, such actions must be a treasure to receive.

Wonderful mother, bearer of the finest gift, bathe in the perfumed oils of my devotion.

September 24th, 2019 12:36

Crystal clear
Nafis Light said:

Let Love Be The Beacon
That Shows That Hope Is There In The World
And Nothing Is Ever Broken.

----
That just came out of me in repose to your post/poem.

September 24th, 2019 05:03

Crystal clear
Fay Slimm. said:

Love is indeed to be held dear and you tell it so well Dan - I love the framed presentation too.

September 24th, 2019 04:40

Placed in your hand
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words show the wonder that is in your life and that wonder will be shown to your child.
As in all life love is the most important and you show that love for your son (and you family) with these beautiful words.

September 24th, 2019 00:22

Placed in your hand
FredPeyer said:

Lovely poem, Dan. Make sure you keep all your poems so your child can one day read them and see what a great father you are.

September 23rd, 2019 19:51

Placed in your hand
dusk arising said:

\"You\'ll never outlive the love in a tear\" What a classic line Dan.
You\'re coming out with some real balls of wisdom mate.
\"Who are we to push our view onto others, they only job we have is to live true to ourselves.
Not follow patterns that are not in touch with our own experiences!\"

I\'m shoving your own stuff back at you because i couldnt put it any better if i tried.

Walking on sunshine!

September 23rd, 2019 12:11

Placed in your hand
orchidee said:

A lovely write Dan. Them good vibes still blasting away on all cylinders?!
But not good vibes about abortion - unless one is deformed, etc. Yet who are we that we should decide if an unborn child lives or not?

September 23rd, 2019 04:36

Rock House of light you can call home
dusk arising said:

Give of your heart the love you held within. Give with your mind the purity of sincerity. Give, and so you shall receive, for you will be deserving.

These words just came to me after reading you today.

September 22nd, 2019 22:59

Rock House of light you can call home
Goldfinch60 said:

You have come a long way Dan, keep going forward in the joy you have found in you new life, we are with you.

September 22nd, 2019 13:46

Inner child be free
Goldfinch60 said:

Having kids is so wonderful and so inspiring.

September 22nd, 2019 13:38

Rock House of light you can call home
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

Wow!
This is a super write complemented with a super pic and quotable words!
What a journey to be on! Enjoy to the fullest!

~Laura~🌻

September 22nd, 2019 10:32

Inner child be free
orchidee said:

Those vibes gone into overdrive? - in a good way!

September 22nd, 2019 01:49



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