Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Vibrational contradiction
sylviasearcher said:

I always find hope even in your searching poems. I sense a strong belief in your worth and right to belong. But it is a journey and a struggle and you always seem ready to embrace that and never give in.

You\'re strength and determination is an inspiration 🌟

August 30th, 2018 02:41

Absorbed and realised
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful song and sentiments 💜

August 28th, 2018 01:35

Absorbed and realised
kevin browne said:

To be distraught has to be noticed by others without a choice. You have placed the metaphor of your poem into peoples hearts which is a great beginning for a new start. The pain suffered by both mentally and physically is suffered by most. There is always someone telling a story of sorrow, sadness, loneliness and pain. Those areas are enough for a million love songs and poems, You capture the moments of these words with great wisdom.

August 27th, 2018 19:48

Absorbed and realised
dusk arising said:

Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance. Finding your path and having faith in your path will realise your strength.

August 27th, 2018 07:49

Absorbed and realised
Goldfinch60 said:

May those songs be filled with love for and from all.

August 27th, 2018 07:39

No better lesson than to be open to the message
Goldfinch60 said:

Within ourselves is the place where we can move forward into peace and light.

August 27th, 2018 00:50

I on compass
ExistentialSarah said:

\"In the South
You find all my loving darkness
With an ability to endlessly harvest
Magic \"

This. Why does this resonate with me? \"Loving darkness\". I cant decide if its a positive statement or a negative one, but perhaps its a bit of both and that\'s the point...either way...its a powerful force that is able to \"endlessly harvest magic\" as if living and loving from a place of tragedy somehow enables perspective and creativity.

August 27th, 2018 00:21

No better lesson than to be open to the message
onepauly said:

when we do one.
we often say
i\'ll do you one better.

August 26th, 2018 22:14

No better lesson than to be open to the message
poetboy123 said:

You always shock me with the brilliance of your writing, continue uniting people as you always do friend!

August 26th, 2018 16:19

No better lesson than to be open to the message
Poetic Dan said:

Always appreciated
The tune is very soothing to sing
Much love and peace

August 26th, 2018 12:57

Pardon me
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

“Blisters across the boarder
Poetically all in order
Helping my heart grow large”

Well said my Poetic Brother.

It is an honor and a pleasure to have met you...
On this site that we all share...
Our hearts will grow large...
Will grow large...
TOGETHER

Thank you for the excellent write that you have generously shared and the choice of a great music video! Most enjoyable!

Your Poetic Blister...

~Laura~

August 25th, 2018 07:46

Pardon me
ridingonawave said:

Electric and glorious.
Thanks.

August 25th, 2018 06:02

I on compass
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

Using the four cardinal directions as your focal points will have a great outcome! I totally enjoyed the musical clip!
HAPPY FRIDAY 🤗

~Laura~

August 24th, 2018 05:33

Untitled
sylviasearcher said:

Interesting poem. Almost two in one for me?
A sense of the many I ams. I have found some people can struggle to see the transient nature of being. We are only in those moments. Then we shift with the next.
The way we experience and interact with the world shapes us.
So what is left but ti be kind?

August 21st, 2018 01:13

Reaching out
Crystal Hope said:

That\'s a really great thing you are doing! :)

August 19th, 2018 13:03

What do you see
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Dan, if eeverybody was at one with nature life would be so wonderful.

August 19th, 2018 00:35

What do you see
poetboy123 said:

Hah! If that was me I\'d have jumped out of my seat! On a more serious note, this was a great spiritual piece Dan, I could learn a thing or two from your relation to nature!

August 18th, 2018 14:36

What do you see
orchidee said:

We\'ll be likely to swat it, to kill it! Maybe not, if it did not have a sting. :)

August 18th, 2018 13:36

What do you see
dusk arising said:

Tuning into and accepting the way of the planet is your way. All life has its purpose, it\'s highs and lows. Ours is the gift of enjoyment.

August 18th, 2018 10:41

What do you see
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:

Poetic Dan, I can relate. I also am a Virgo, I loved your poem.

August 18th, 2018 10:07

Many hands come from the sun & moon
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words fill our hearts with emotion but I know that the darkness will disperse and the light will dispel the darkness.

August 18th, 2018 00:18

Many hands come from the sun & moon
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful poem and video.

Thinking of your new day 🌔

August 17th, 2018 05:06

A cry of more light
dusk arising said:

No meaningful words of comfort from me today brother man, for none will comfort. Dig deep into your faith and if you can, be her rock for all your tomorrows.

August 17th, 2018 04:30

Many hands come from the sun & moon
Laura🌻 said:

We accept you in your ups and downs ...
Share all you want...
We’ll hold your hand and let you cry...
Because, my friend, we DO care!❤️

August 17th, 2018 03:55

A cry of more light
Goldfinch60 said:

This is so hard Dan but support is out there in many ways. Your words will help you and you know that the light will be there for you.
Bless you Dan.

August 17th, 2018 00:50

A cry of more light
Christina8 said:

There are no words. Having gone through it with twins......I just want to say you are doing a super job, Dan!

August 16th, 2018 19:05

A cry of more light
Laura🌻 said:

My dear Dan,

This truly saddens me!

If you need to cry...cry!
No matter what, the need to cry is often necessary! Work it through together with your lady! Cry together!
Embracing life’s difficulties...and this is certainly one of them...is another opportunity for you and your lady to grow even closer together!
I know you’ll be open to face this loss! In doing so, you will mend that soul!

As in the song, “Older Chests”...
“Like a crack in a wall
Starting small, and grow in time...”
If that small crack isn’t repaired, it will grow! It needs to be resolved!
You and your lady need to mend yourselves!
“Harmony and balance from life is all I need”
“ No blame lives in what will be will”
Que será será!

Sending an abundance of love your way!

~Laura~


August 16th, 2018 11:13

A cry of more light
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dan. It\'s time to weep. I scolded myself sometimes at some funerals/thanksgiving tribute services, where I did not weep. I suppose though, it depends how close we are to the person.

August 16th, 2018 10:01

A cry of more light
sylviasearcher said:

😪💜

August 16th, 2018 09:42

Rambling thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:

Your journey will be filled with joy, light and love.

August 15th, 2018 00:37



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