Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Getting old
Michael Edwards said:
I was quite chipper till I read this - which goes to show what a good write it is.
September 5th, 2018 14:43
Michael Edwards said:
I was quite chipper till I read this - which goes to show what a good write it is.
September 5th, 2018 14:43
Getting old
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard, be strong, be alive and show that you are strong enough to move forward. The light is there.
September 5th, 2018 07:54
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard, be strong, be alive and show that you are strong enough to move forward. The light is there.
September 5th, 2018 07:54
Getting old
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get straight into the heart - a \"life of endless sorrow\" is such a hard challenge.
September 5th, 2018 04:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get straight into the heart - a \"life of endless sorrow\" is such a hard challenge.
September 5th, 2018 04:38
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
Lorna said:
What a wonderful magical experience Dan! I hope you come to love each other very much! Thanks for the music also - I\'m going to look him up and hear more.......
September 4th, 2018 06:08
Lorna said:
What a wonderful magical experience Dan! I hope you come to love each other very much! Thanks for the music also - I\'m going to look him up and hear more.......
September 4th, 2018 06:08
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
misskay said:
Dan,
Your heartfelt poem has made me smile.
The effects of your words are truly touching.
A wonderful piece!
I hope you and your new found younger brother grow a bond that lasts forever and may you be blessed with the love and joy it brings
September 4th, 2018 03:16
misskay said:
Dan,
Your heartfelt poem has made me smile.
The effects of your words are truly touching.
A wonderful piece!
I hope you and your new found younger brother grow a bond that lasts forever and may you be blessed with the love and joy it brings
September 4th, 2018 03:16
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
orchidee said:
And now you know you have that brother! A fine write Dan.
So - see you later. I\'m off to stand in a den of lions, to overcome my fears. See ya later, if they don\'t eat me!
September 4th, 2018 01:57
orchidee said:
And now you know you have that brother! A fine write Dan.
So - see you later. I\'m off to stand in a den of lions, to overcome my fears. See ya later, if they don\'t eat me!
September 4th, 2018 01:57
I pass on
Lorna said:
OMG - I read this one AFTER the one where I told you you were channeling Rumi! I got it so right!!!!
September 3rd, 2018 06:40
Lorna said:
OMG - I read this one AFTER the one where I told you you were channeling Rumi! I got it so right!!!!
September 3rd, 2018 06:40
When asked to trust in your belief
Lorna said:
Dan lovely - you are channeling Rumi:
\"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.\"
Rumi
See Open Secret: Versions of Rumi with translations by Coleman
September 3rd, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Dan lovely - you are channeling Rumi:
\"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.\"
Rumi
See Open Secret: Versions of Rumi with translations by Coleman
September 3rd, 2018 06:37
When asked to trust in your belief
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, harmony can be found in so many ways.
September 3rd, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, harmony can be found in so many ways.
September 3rd, 2018 00:40
When asked to trust in your belief
dusk arising said:
In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
September 2nd, 2018 14:26
dusk arising said:
In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
September 2nd, 2018 14:26
When asked to trust in your belief
orchidee said:
And yet, in wisdom we surely gain something. We may or may not lose something in it too.
The pic may be someone who has an \'Eastern \'religion. I\'m not into the \'emptying the mind\' aspects myself, though your poem is not on that theme!
September 2nd, 2018 06:57
orchidee said:
And yet, in wisdom we surely gain something. We may or may not lose something in it too.
The pic may be someone who has an \'Eastern \'religion. I\'m not into the \'emptying the mind\' aspects myself, though your poem is not on that theme!
September 2nd, 2018 06:57
When asked to trust in your belief
Michael Edwards said:
If only everybody met there - great little \'un.
September 2nd, 2018 04:39
Michael Edwards said:
If only everybody met there - great little \'un.
September 2nd, 2018 04:39
Vibrational contradiction
sylviasearcher said:
I always find hope even in your searching poems. I sense a strong belief in your worth and right to belong. But it is a journey and a struggle and you always seem ready to embrace that and never give in.
You\'re strength and determination is an inspiration 🌟
August 30th, 2018 02:41
sylviasearcher said:
I always find hope even in your searching poems. I sense a strong belief in your worth and right to belong. But it is a journey and a struggle and you always seem ready to embrace that and never give in.
You\'re strength and determination is an inspiration 🌟
August 30th, 2018 02:41
Vibrational contradiction
sylviasearcher said:
I always find hope even in your searching poems. I sense a strong belief in your worth and right to belong. But it is a journey and a struggle and you always seem ready to embrace that and never give in.
You\'re strength and determination is an inspiration 🌟
August 30th, 2018 02:41
sylviasearcher said:
I always find hope even in your searching poems. I sense a strong belief in your worth and right to belong. But it is a journey and a struggle and you always seem ready to embrace that and never give in.
You\'re strength and determination is an inspiration 🌟
August 30th, 2018 02:41
Absorbed and realised
kevin browne said:
To be distraught has to be noticed by others without a choice. You have placed the metaphor of your poem into peoples hearts which is a great beginning for a new start. The pain suffered by both mentally and physically is suffered by most. There is always someone telling a story of sorrow, sadness, loneliness and pain. Those areas are enough for a million love songs and poems, You capture the moments of these words with great wisdom.
August 27th, 2018 19:48
kevin browne said:
To be distraught has to be noticed by others without a choice. You have placed the metaphor of your poem into peoples hearts which is a great beginning for a new start. The pain suffered by both mentally and physically is suffered by most. There is always someone telling a story of sorrow, sadness, loneliness and pain. Those areas are enough for a million love songs and poems, You capture the moments of these words with great wisdom.
August 27th, 2018 19:48
Absorbed and realised
dusk arising said:
Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance. Finding your path and having faith in your path will realise your strength.
August 27th, 2018 07:49
dusk arising said:
Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance. Finding your path and having faith in your path will realise your strength.
August 27th, 2018 07:49
Absorbed and realised
Goldfinch60 said:
May those songs be filled with love for and from all.
August 27th, 2018 07:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May those songs be filled with love for and from all.
August 27th, 2018 07:39
No better lesson than to be open to the message
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves is the place where we can move forward into peace and light.
August 27th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves is the place where we can move forward into peace and light.
August 27th, 2018 00:50
I on compass
ExistentialSarah said:
\"In the South
You find all my loving darkness
With an ability to endlessly harvest
Magic \"
This. Why does this resonate with me? \"Loving darkness\". I cant decide if its a positive statement or a negative one, but perhaps its a bit of both and that\'s the point...either way...its a powerful force that is able to \"endlessly harvest magic\" as if living and loving from a place of tragedy somehow enables perspective and creativity.
August 27th, 2018 00:21
ExistentialSarah said:
\"In the South
You find all my loving darkness
With an ability to endlessly harvest
Magic \"
This. Why does this resonate with me? \"Loving darkness\". I cant decide if its a positive statement or a negative one, but perhaps its a bit of both and that\'s the point...either way...its a powerful force that is able to \"endlessly harvest magic\" as if living and loving from a place of tragedy somehow enables perspective and creativity.
August 27th, 2018 00:21
No better lesson than to be open to the message
onepauly said:
when we do one.
we often say
i\'ll do you one better.
August 26th, 2018 22:14
onepauly said:
when we do one.
we often say
i\'ll do you one better.
August 26th, 2018 22:14
No better lesson than to be open to the message
poetboy123 said:
You always shock me with the brilliance of your writing, continue uniting people as you always do friend!
August 26th, 2018 16:19
poetboy123 said:
You always shock me with the brilliance of your writing, continue uniting people as you always do friend!
August 26th, 2018 16:19
No better lesson than to be open to the message
Poetic Dan said:
Always appreciated
The tune is very soothing to sing
Much love and peace
August 26th, 2018 12:57
Poetic Dan said:
Always appreciated
The tune is very soothing to sing
Much love and peace
August 26th, 2018 12:57
Pardon me
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“Blisters across the boarder
Poetically all in order
Helping my heart grow large”
Well said my Poetic Brother.
It is an honor and a pleasure to have met you...
On this site that we all share...
Our hearts will grow large...
Will grow large...
TOGETHER
Thank you for the excellent write that you have generously shared and the choice of a great music video! Most enjoyable!
Your Poetic Blister...
~Laura~
August 25th, 2018 07:46
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“Blisters across the boarder
Poetically all in order
Helping my heart grow large”
Well said my Poetic Brother.
It is an honor and a pleasure to have met you...
On this site that we all share...
Our hearts will grow large...
Will grow large...
TOGETHER
Thank you for the excellent write that you have generously shared and the choice of a great music video! Most enjoyable!
Your Poetic Blister...
~Laura~
August 25th, 2018 07:46
I on compass
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Using the four cardinal directions as your focal points will have a great outcome! I totally enjoyed the musical clip!
HAPPY FRIDAY 🤗
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 05:33
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Using the four cardinal directions as your focal points will have a great outcome! I totally enjoyed the musical clip!
HAPPY FRIDAY 🤗
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 05:33
Untitled
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting poem. Almost two in one for me?
A sense of the many I ams. I have found some people can struggle to see the transient nature of being. We are only in those moments. Then we shift with the next.
The way we experience and interact with the world shapes us.
So what is left but ti be kind?
August 21st, 2018 01:13
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting poem. Almost two in one for me?
A sense of the many I ams. I have found some people can struggle to see the transient nature of being. We are only in those moments. Then we shift with the next.
The way we experience and interact with the world shapes us.
So what is left but ti be kind?
August 21st, 2018 01:13
Reaching out
Crystal Hope said:
That\'s a really great thing you are doing! :)
August 19th, 2018 13:03
Crystal Hope said:
That\'s a really great thing you are doing! :)
August 19th, 2018 13:03
What do you see
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Dan, if eeverybody was at one with nature life would be so wonderful.
August 19th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Dan, if eeverybody was at one with nature life would be so wonderful.
August 19th, 2018 00:35
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