Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I\'ve made it
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday there! I never know I was so may days old! heehee.
September 20th, 2018 03:38
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday there! I never know I was so may days old! heehee.
September 20th, 2018 03:38
Universal language
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking it off can be so therapeutic,.
September 19th, 2018 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking it off can be so therapeutic,.
September 19th, 2018 07:59
Universal language
orchidee said:
Those dogs will know. They\'ll take you (or you take them) on a nice walk to reflect, think things over, etc.
September 19th, 2018 07:53
orchidee said:
Those dogs will know. They\'ll take you (or you take them) on a nice walk to reflect, think things over, etc.
September 19th, 2018 07:53
It\'s everyone and everything
dusk arising said:
Your life is what you make it. One thing your life is definitely not though, your life is not another man\'s words.
September 15th, 2018 15:07
dusk arising said:
Your life is what you make it. One thing your life is definitely not though, your life is not another man\'s words.
September 15th, 2018 15:07
Hugo nose
orchidee said:
Yes, hope you get on OK. Even chihuahuas can be savage! Most dogs are tame and friendly though, I find.
September 14th, 2018 13:01
orchidee said:
Yes, hope you get on OK. Even chihuahuas can be savage! Most dogs are tame and friendly though, I find.
September 14th, 2018 13:01
With these hands
dusk arising said:
Life lived in its most wholesome must surely be life lived in harmony not in contest.
peace
September 13th, 2018 21:03
dusk arising said:
Life lived in its most wholesome must surely be life lived in harmony not in contest.
peace
September 13th, 2018 21:03
With these hands
Goldfinch60 said:
May your joy always outweigh your fear.
September 13th, 2018 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May your joy always outweigh your fear.
September 13th, 2018 07:53
With these hands
The Gifted One said:
I love this short poem of the Yin to the Yang of one\'s life
The Gifted One
September 13th, 2018 05:21
The Gifted One said:
I love this short poem of the Yin to the Yang of one\'s life
The Gifted One
September 13th, 2018 05:21
With these hands
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
September 13th, 2018 04:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
September 13th, 2018 04:43
There it is
Goldfinch60 said:
The words you write will lead you to the brightness in your life, keep writing and get rid of your demons onto the page.
September 13th, 2018 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The words you write will lead you to the brightness in your life, keep writing and get rid of your demons onto the page.
September 13th, 2018 00:48
There it is
dusk arising said:
I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a man, a man like many riddled with imperfection - it\'s just the way we are made.
But if ever a man fought his demons it\'s you. And you\'ve let us see some of your struggles too.
Have a break from this serious stuff and laugh, yes laugh at your failings. Love yourself. You strive for self knowledge, self improvement, a spiritual path. Look around yourself... there aren\'t so many people as aware as you. You\'re courageous, brave, a fighter.
You are no longer yesterdays man, you\'ve lifted yourself. You\'re not perfect yet - but who is.
September 12th, 2018 11:14
dusk arising said:
I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a man, a man like many riddled with imperfection - it\'s just the way we are made.
But if ever a man fought his demons it\'s you. And you\'ve let us see some of your struggles too.
Have a break from this serious stuff and laugh, yes laugh at your failings. Love yourself. You strive for self knowledge, self improvement, a spiritual path. Look around yourself... there aren\'t so many people as aware as you. You\'re courageous, brave, a fighter.
You are no longer yesterdays man, you\'ve lifted yourself. You\'re not perfect yet - but who is.
September 12th, 2018 11:14
Opinions wanted!
Goldfinch60 said:
Your power of mind is increasing on a daily basis, go forward into the workshop with the new power that is coming to you. Very well done, I will be with you.
September 11th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Your power of mind is increasing on a daily basis, go forward into the workshop with the new power that is coming to you. Very well done, I will be with you.
September 11th, 2018 00:33
Opinions wanted!
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetic Brother,
I’m there with you! I appreciate your invite to your continued journey! Your participation at the workshop will be invaluable! You’ll be awesome! I love the quote and the Nahko’s musical inspiration!
~Laura~
Aka...Your Poetic Blister 😉
September 10th, 2018 11:57
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetic Brother,
I’m there with you! I appreciate your invite to your continued journey! Your participation at the workshop will be invaluable! You’ll be awesome! I love the quote and the Nahko’s musical inspiration!
~Laura~
Aka...Your Poetic Blister 😉
September 10th, 2018 11:57
Caution...I think? More from my soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Dan but all our actions give us the experience to move on into a better life.
September 10th, 2018 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Dan but all our actions give us the experience to move on into a better life.
September 10th, 2018 00:57
Caution...I think? More from my soul
onepauly said:
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
September 10th, 2018 00:14
onepauly said:
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
September 10th, 2018 00:14
Caution...I think? More from my soul
w c said:
Enjoyed it, PD. Ahh yes, to know desire and creation!
September 9th, 2018 22:05
w c said:
Enjoyed it, PD. Ahh yes, to know desire and creation!
September 9th, 2018 22:05
Caution...I think? More from my soul
fuche_bu said:
words of advice for young people? Although some of us old dogs might learn from it as well.
September 9th, 2018 12:04
fuche_bu said:
words of advice for young people? Although some of us old dogs might learn from it as well.
September 9th, 2018 12:04
Caution...I think? More from my soul
dusk arising said:
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and will not learn wisdom by being told. If it were so easy, then even horrific warfare would stop.
September 9th, 2018 09:36
dusk arising said:
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and will not learn wisdom by being told. If it were so easy, then even horrific warfare would stop.
September 9th, 2018 09:36
Caution...I think? More from my soul
Reyas said:
Another great piece with such an intricate and important message.
September 9th, 2018 08:31
Reyas said:
Another great piece with such an intricate and important message.
September 9th, 2018 08:31
Caution...I think? More from my soul
orchidee said:
Woof! Be quiet Fido
! (18+ watchdog). Got him on my lead here.
Well, it\'s a natural human function - apart from my daftness of swooning.
Maybe it\'s \'everything in moderation\'. It\'s the same if we overdo anything. We may suffer the consequences - over-drinking, over-eating, etc.
September 9th, 2018 07:20
orchidee said:
Woof! Be quiet Fido
! (18+ watchdog). Got him on my lead here.
Well, it\'s a natural human function - apart from my daftness of swooning.
Maybe it\'s \'everything in moderation\'. It\'s the same if we overdo anything. We may suffer the consequences - over-drinking, over-eating, etc.
September 9th, 2018 07:20
The birth of music in me
poetboy123 said:
I read this and I found I couldn\'t comment right away. Sincerely, this is one of my favorite poems, simply amazing my friend.
September 8th, 2018 11:23
poetboy123 said:
I read this and I found I couldn\'t comment right away. Sincerely, this is one of my favorite poems, simply amazing my friend.
September 8th, 2018 11:23
The birth of music in me
dusk arising said:
A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now. A long journey, who did that for you? Well it was you wasn\'t it. The diamond light inside you initially stifled by circumstance and ignorance began to tell you \'there is a better way\' and you listened.
With that encapsulated in your soul you\'ll readily relate to others lost in struggle.
Wisdom comes, perhaps not with answers, but with a survival path.
September 6th, 2018 13:50
dusk arising said:
A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now. A long journey, who did that for you? Well it was you wasn\'t it. The diamond light inside you initially stifled by circumstance and ignorance began to tell you \'there is a better way\' and you listened.
With that encapsulated in your soul you\'ll readily relate to others lost in struggle.
Wisdom comes, perhaps not with answers, but with a survival path.
September 6th, 2018 13:50
The birth of music in me
orchidee said:
You only gotta worry about my 18+ \'watchdog\'. Woof! There he goes. Not now Fido!
He barks loudly at any not marking poems as 18+ if they need to be!
It\'s tricky though, as sometimes he barks to save me from swooning over certain poems. heehee
September 6th, 2018 09:56
orchidee said:
You only gotta worry about my 18+ \'watchdog\'. Woof! There he goes. Not now Fido!
He barks loudly at any not marking poems as 18+ if they need to be!
It\'s tricky though, as sometimes he barks to save me from swooning over certain poems. heehee
September 6th, 2018 09:56
Getting old
Lorna said:
\"Getting Old\" - No you\'re not. In the words of Indiana Jones, it\'s not the years, it\'s the mileage..........
September 6th, 2018 07:38
Lorna said:
\"Getting Old\" - No you\'re not. In the words of Indiana Jones, it\'s not the years, it\'s the mileage..........
September 6th, 2018 07:38
The birth of music in me
Lorna said:
Full of hard truths and wisdom Dan........ I was expecting something really raunchy from your comments but this is exactly what under 18 should read!
September 6th, 2018 07:11
Lorna said:
Full of hard truths and wisdom Dan........ I was expecting something really raunchy from your comments but this is exactly what under 18 should read!
September 6th, 2018 07:11
The birth of music in me
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
One of your best writes I’ve read since I met you on this site! A TRUTHFUL, COURAGEOUS and INSPIRATIONAL piece!
Kudos to you my Poetic Brother!
18+?! No worries 😉
~Laura~
aka...your Poetic Blister
September 6th, 2018 07:03
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
One of your best writes I’ve read since I met you on this site! A TRUTHFUL, COURAGEOUS and INSPIRATIONAL piece!
Kudos to you my Poetic Brother!
18+?! No worries 😉
~Laura~
aka...your Poetic Blister
September 6th, 2018 07:03
Getting old
dusk arising said:
Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what you are becoming. You will never be perfect but you strive to be happy and to self improve. It\'s not a perfect world, the wise accept others imperfection and smile at their humanity. Smile at yourself.
September 5th, 2018 16:21
dusk arising said:
Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what you are becoming. You will never be perfect but you strive to be happy and to self improve. It\'s not a perfect world, the wise accept others imperfection and smile at their humanity. Smile at yourself.
September 5th, 2018 16:21
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