Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
With these hands
The Gifted One said:
I love this short poem of the Yin to the Yang of one\'s life
The Gifted One
September 13th, 2018 05:21
The Gifted One said:
I love this short poem of the Yin to the Yang of one\'s life
The Gifted One
September 13th, 2018 05:21
With these hands
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
September 13th, 2018 04:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
September 13th, 2018 04:43
There it is
Goldfinch60 said:
The words you write will lead you to the brightness in your life, keep writing and get rid of your demons onto the page.
September 13th, 2018 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The words you write will lead you to the brightness in your life, keep writing and get rid of your demons onto the page.
September 13th, 2018 00:48
There it is
dusk arising said:
I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a man, a man like many riddled with imperfection - it\'s just the way we are made.
But if ever a man fought his demons it\'s you. And you\'ve let us see some of your struggles too.
Have a break from this serious stuff and laugh, yes laugh at your failings. Love yourself. You strive for self knowledge, self improvement, a spiritual path. Look around yourself... there aren\'t so many people as aware as you. You\'re courageous, brave, a fighter.
You are no longer yesterdays man, you\'ve lifted yourself. You\'re not perfect yet - but who is.
September 12th, 2018 11:14
dusk arising said:
I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a man, a man like many riddled with imperfection - it\'s just the way we are made.
But if ever a man fought his demons it\'s you. And you\'ve let us see some of your struggles too.
Have a break from this serious stuff and laugh, yes laugh at your failings. Love yourself. You strive for self knowledge, self improvement, a spiritual path. Look around yourself... there aren\'t so many people as aware as you. You\'re courageous, brave, a fighter.
You are no longer yesterdays man, you\'ve lifted yourself. You\'re not perfect yet - but who is.
September 12th, 2018 11:14
Opinions wanted!
Goldfinch60 said:
Your power of mind is increasing on a daily basis, go forward into the workshop with the new power that is coming to you. Very well done, I will be with you.
September 11th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Your power of mind is increasing on a daily basis, go forward into the workshop with the new power that is coming to you. Very well done, I will be with you.
September 11th, 2018 00:33
Opinions wanted!
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetic Brother,
I’m there with you! I appreciate your invite to your continued journey! Your participation at the workshop will be invaluable! You’ll be awesome! I love the quote and the Nahko’s musical inspiration!
~Laura~
Aka...Your Poetic Blister 😉
September 10th, 2018 11:57
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetic Brother,
I’m there with you! I appreciate your invite to your continued journey! Your participation at the workshop will be invaluable! You’ll be awesome! I love the quote and the Nahko’s musical inspiration!
~Laura~
Aka...Your Poetic Blister 😉
September 10th, 2018 11:57
Caution...I think? More from my soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Dan but all our actions give us the experience to move on into a better life.
September 10th, 2018 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Dan but all our actions give us the experience to move on into a better life.
September 10th, 2018 00:57
Caution...I think? More from my soul
onepauly said:
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
September 10th, 2018 00:14
onepauly said:
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
September 10th, 2018 00:14
Caution...I think? More from my soul
w c said:
Enjoyed it, PD. Ahh yes, to know desire and creation!
September 9th, 2018 22:05
w c said:
Enjoyed it, PD. Ahh yes, to know desire and creation!
September 9th, 2018 22:05
Caution...I think? More from my soul
fuche_bu said:
words of advice for young people? Although some of us old dogs might learn from it as well.
September 9th, 2018 12:04
fuche_bu said:
words of advice for young people? Although some of us old dogs might learn from it as well.
September 9th, 2018 12:04
Caution...I think? More from my soul
dusk arising said:
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and will not learn wisdom by being told. If it were so easy, then even horrific warfare would stop.
September 9th, 2018 09:36
dusk arising said:
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and will not learn wisdom by being told. If it were so easy, then even horrific warfare would stop.
September 9th, 2018 09:36
Caution...I think? More from my soul
Reyas said:
Another great piece with such an intricate and important message.
September 9th, 2018 08:31
Reyas said:
Another great piece with such an intricate and important message.
September 9th, 2018 08:31
Caution...I think? More from my soul
orchidee said:
Woof! Be quiet Fido
! (18+ watchdog). Got him on my lead here.
Well, it\'s a natural human function - apart from my daftness of swooning.
Maybe it\'s \'everything in moderation\'. It\'s the same if we overdo anything. We may suffer the consequences - over-drinking, over-eating, etc.
September 9th, 2018 07:20
orchidee said:
Woof! Be quiet Fido
! (18+ watchdog). Got him on my lead here.
Well, it\'s a natural human function - apart from my daftness of swooning.
Maybe it\'s \'everything in moderation\'. It\'s the same if we overdo anything. We may suffer the consequences - over-drinking, over-eating, etc.
September 9th, 2018 07:20
The birth of music in me
poetboy123 said:
I read this and I found I couldn\'t comment right away. Sincerely, this is one of my favorite poems, simply amazing my friend.
September 8th, 2018 11:23
poetboy123 said:
I read this and I found I couldn\'t comment right away. Sincerely, this is one of my favorite poems, simply amazing my friend.
September 8th, 2018 11:23
The birth of music in me
dusk arising said:
A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now. A long journey, who did that for you? Well it was you wasn\'t it. The diamond light inside you initially stifled by circumstance and ignorance began to tell you \'there is a better way\' and you listened.
With that encapsulated in your soul you\'ll readily relate to others lost in struggle.
Wisdom comes, perhaps not with answers, but with a survival path.
September 6th, 2018 13:50
dusk arising said:
A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now. A long journey, who did that for you? Well it was you wasn\'t it. The diamond light inside you initially stifled by circumstance and ignorance began to tell you \'there is a better way\' and you listened.
With that encapsulated in your soul you\'ll readily relate to others lost in struggle.
Wisdom comes, perhaps not with answers, but with a survival path.
September 6th, 2018 13:50
The birth of music in me
orchidee said:
You only gotta worry about my 18+ \'watchdog\'. Woof! There he goes. Not now Fido!
He barks loudly at any not marking poems as 18+ if they need to be!
It\'s tricky though, as sometimes he barks to save me from swooning over certain poems. heehee
September 6th, 2018 09:56
orchidee said:
You only gotta worry about my 18+ \'watchdog\'. Woof! There he goes. Not now Fido!
He barks loudly at any not marking poems as 18+ if they need to be!
It\'s tricky though, as sometimes he barks to save me from swooning over certain poems. heehee
September 6th, 2018 09:56
Getting old
Lorna said:
\"Getting Old\" - No you\'re not. In the words of Indiana Jones, it\'s not the years, it\'s the mileage..........
September 6th, 2018 07:38
Lorna said:
\"Getting Old\" - No you\'re not. In the words of Indiana Jones, it\'s not the years, it\'s the mileage..........
September 6th, 2018 07:38
The birth of music in me
Lorna said:
Full of hard truths and wisdom Dan........ I was expecting something really raunchy from your comments but this is exactly what under 18 should read!
September 6th, 2018 07:11
Lorna said:
Full of hard truths and wisdom Dan........ I was expecting something really raunchy from your comments but this is exactly what under 18 should read!
September 6th, 2018 07:11
The birth of music in me
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
One of your best writes I’ve read since I met you on this site! A TRUTHFUL, COURAGEOUS and INSPIRATIONAL piece!
Kudos to you my Poetic Brother!
18+?! No worries 😉
~Laura~
aka...your Poetic Blister
September 6th, 2018 07:03
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
One of your best writes I’ve read since I met you on this site! A TRUTHFUL, COURAGEOUS and INSPIRATIONAL piece!
Kudos to you my Poetic Brother!
18+?! No worries 😉
~Laura~
aka...your Poetic Blister
September 6th, 2018 07:03
Getting old
dusk arising said:
Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what you are becoming. You will never be perfect but you strive to be happy and to self improve. It\'s not a perfect world, the wise accept others imperfection and smile at their humanity. Smile at yourself.
September 5th, 2018 16:21
dusk arising said:
Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what you are becoming. You will never be perfect but you strive to be happy and to self improve. It\'s not a perfect world, the wise accept others imperfection and smile at their humanity. Smile at yourself.
September 5th, 2018 16:21
Getting old
Michael Edwards said:
I was quite chipper till I read this - which goes to show what a good write it is.
September 5th, 2018 14:43
Michael Edwards said:
I was quite chipper till I read this - which goes to show what a good write it is.
September 5th, 2018 14:43
Getting old
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard, be strong, be alive and show that you are strong enough to move forward. The light is there.
September 5th, 2018 07:54
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so hard, be strong, be alive and show that you are strong enough to move forward. The light is there.
September 5th, 2018 07:54
Getting old
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get straight into the heart - a \"life of endless sorrow\" is such a hard challenge.
September 5th, 2018 04:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get straight into the heart - a \"life of endless sorrow\" is such a hard challenge.
September 5th, 2018 04:38
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
Lorna said:
What a wonderful magical experience Dan! I hope you come to love each other very much! Thanks for the music also - I\'m going to look him up and hear more.......
September 4th, 2018 06:08
Lorna said:
What a wonderful magical experience Dan! I hope you come to love each other very much! Thanks for the music also - I\'m going to look him up and hear more.......
September 4th, 2018 06:08
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
misskay said:
Dan,
Your heartfelt poem has made me smile.
The effects of your words are truly touching.
A wonderful piece!
I hope you and your new found younger brother grow a bond that lasts forever and may you be blessed with the love and joy it brings
September 4th, 2018 03:16
misskay said:
Dan,
Your heartfelt poem has made me smile.
The effects of your words are truly touching.
A wonderful piece!
I hope you and your new found younger brother grow a bond that lasts forever and may you be blessed with the love and joy it brings
September 4th, 2018 03:16
Can\'t Adam and Eve it
orchidee said:
And now you know you have that brother! A fine write Dan.
So - see you later. I\'m off to stand in a den of lions, to overcome my fears. See ya later, if they don\'t eat me!
September 4th, 2018 01:57
orchidee said:
And now you know you have that brother! A fine write Dan.
So - see you later. I\'m off to stand in a den of lions, to overcome my fears. See ya later, if they don\'t eat me!
September 4th, 2018 01:57
I pass on
Lorna said:
OMG - I read this one AFTER the one where I told you you were channeling Rumi! I got it so right!!!!
September 3rd, 2018 06:40
Lorna said:
OMG - I read this one AFTER the one where I told you you were channeling Rumi! I got it so right!!!!
September 3rd, 2018 06:40
When asked to trust in your belief
Lorna said:
Dan lovely - you are channeling Rumi:
\"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.\"
Rumi
See Open Secret: Versions of Rumi with translations by Coleman
September 3rd, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Dan lovely - you are channeling Rumi:
\"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.\"
Rumi
See Open Secret: Versions of Rumi with translations by Coleman
September 3rd, 2018 06:37
When asked to trust in your belief
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, harmony can be found in so many ways.
September 3rd, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, harmony can be found in so many ways.
September 3rd, 2018 00:40
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