Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
A beautiful story I have to share
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving write. The wisdom of children can astound us.
October 22nd, 2018 12:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving write. The wisdom of children can astound us.
October 22nd, 2018 12:08
A beautiful story I have to share
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - a pleasure to read it - thanks for posting
October 22nd, 2018 07:52
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - a pleasure to read it - thanks for posting
October 22nd, 2018 07:52
A beautiful story I have to share
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. I wish I would learn from my \'watchdog\' Fido. he barks at any poems not marked 18+, which should be marked so! heehee. (me being barmy with imaginary dog).
October 22nd, 2018 03:31
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. I wish I would learn from my \'watchdog\' Fido. he barks at any poems not marked 18+, which should be marked so! heehee. (me being barmy with imaginary dog).
October 22nd, 2018 03:31
Mind at the door
dusk arising said:
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were yesterday with your dog walking video. I\'m not brave enough to do that. Hold your head up, it suits you. And when you feel down,, allow yourself those times, you know they will pass. There now follows a cliche.... \'tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life\' ..... smile often.
October 21st, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were yesterday with your dog walking video. I\'m not brave enough to do that. Hold your head up, it suits you. And when you feel down,, allow yourself those times, you know they will pass. There now follows a cliche.... \'tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life\' ..... smile often.
October 21st, 2018 16:13
Mind at the door
orchidee said:
If this helps, or rather, on a spiritual plane, we could say: \'God has not given us a spirit of fear, but a spirit of power, love, and a sound mind\' (2Timothy1 v.7). A verse I need to apply to myself more too.
October 21st, 2018 11:49
orchidee said:
If this helps, or rather, on a spiritual plane, we could say: \'God has not given us a spirit of fear, but a spirit of power, love, and a sound mind\' (2Timothy1 v.7). A verse I need to apply to myself more too.
October 21st, 2018 11:49
Mind at the door
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Keep up this new pattern and you’ll be just FINE! I feel I’m witnessing the rebirth of an enlightened human being! Continue your journey!
Fearless
Identifiable
Non resistant
Elated
~Laura~
October 21st, 2018 09:54
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Keep up this new pattern and you’ll be just FINE! I feel I’m witnessing the rebirth of an enlightened human being! Continue your journey!
Fearless
Identifiable
Non resistant
Elated
~Laura~
October 21st, 2018 09:54
I feel the chains breaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderfully positive write. You have become yourself and dug your way out of the darkness into the light. The light will always be with you and your children.
Fabulous strong video - yes just be yourself, and go on into your future with the strength that you have newly found.
Andy
October 21st, 2018 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderfully positive write. You have become yourself and dug your way out of the darkness into the light. The light will always be with you and your children.
Fabulous strong video - yes just be yourself, and go on into your future with the strength that you have newly found.
Andy
October 21st, 2018 00:11
I feel the chains breaking
Shallsea said:
I love your vulnerability.. very beautiful!! Self love is key
October 20th, 2018 19:16
Shallsea said:
I love your vulnerability.. very beautiful!! Self love is key
October 20th, 2018 19:16
I feel the chains breaking
orchidee said:
All you gotta fear, all anyone gotta fear, is my singing! heehee. If only that was all there was to be fearful and anxious about!
October 20th, 2018 11:46
orchidee said:
All you gotta fear, all anyone gotta fear, is my singing! heehee. If only that was all there was to be fearful and anxious about!
October 20th, 2018 11:46
I feel the chains breaking
dusk arising said:
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend highly:-
http://mwkworks.com/desiderata.html
If it is already known to you then i apologise. Printing off a copy and hanging it upon the loo door is a good idea. For in those quiet contemplative moments alone one can often find a phrase to uplift thoughts.
October 20th, 2018 10:19
dusk arising said:
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend highly:-
http://mwkworks.com/desiderata.html
If it is already known to you then i apologise. Printing off a copy and hanging it upon the loo door is a good idea. For in those quiet contemplative moments alone one can often find a phrase to uplift thoughts.
October 20th, 2018 10:19
Learning
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful write. WE re always looking for that way forward but be sure that the way is there and we will find it as we move towards eternity.
October 16th, 2018 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful write. WE re always looking for that way forward but be sure that the way is there and we will find it as we move towards eternity.
October 16th, 2018 00:30
Learning
orchidee said:
Erm, things didn\'t quite work out for me. I didn\'t believe \'Pride goes before a fall\'. I thought \'Oh I can cross this canyon blindfold\' . Then I fell in the ravineeeeeeeeeeee. Good acting there, innit? Good sound effects. Could ya almost see me falling? heehee.
October 15th, 2018 11:37
orchidee said:
Erm, things didn\'t quite work out for me. I didn\'t believe \'Pride goes before a fall\'. I thought \'Oh I can cross this canyon blindfold\' . Then I fell in the ravineeeeeeeeeeee. Good acting there, innit? Good sound effects. Could ya almost see me falling? heehee.
October 15th, 2018 11:37
Stand out!
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within ourselves must be shown to others, maybe the scientists can make a peace disease that would destroy enmity.
October 14th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within ourselves must be shown to others, maybe the scientists can make a peace disease that would destroy enmity.
October 14th, 2018 00:46
Stand out!
dusk arising said:
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the peacemakers camoflage.
October 13th, 2018 07:46
dusk arising said:
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the peacemakers camoflage.
October 13th, 2018 07:46
What being human is to me
dusk arising said:
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18
dusk arising said:
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18
This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Love the positivity in this writing!
Great choice of pic and quotation!
“I embody the inspiration to become more than I could.”
You have been an “open book to read “ and to graciously “receive”.
This wonderful world with all its glory is yours to embrace and it to embrace you...a star amongst us!
We’re blessed to know and learn from you!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 12:15
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Love the positivity in this writing!
Great choice of pic and quotation!
“I embody the inspiration to become more than I could.”
You have been an “open book to read “ and to graciously “receive”.
This wonderful world with all its glory is yours to embrace and it to embrace you...a star amongst us!
We’re blessed to know and learn from you!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 12:15
This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am
kevin browne said:
Keep eating the plants and you\'ll be cured from all things, including your ability to take a step up to the moon and shine like your work does. Stay strong, brother.
October 11th, 2018 11:04
kevin browne said:
Keep eating the plants and you\'ll be cured from all things, including your ability to take a step up to the moon and shine like your work does. Stay strong, brother.
October 11th, 2018 11:04
This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you have moved in Dan and it has been awe inspiring to follow your journey, the journey will now continue in glory and joy. Well done.
October 11th, 2018 07:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you have moved in Dan and it has been awe inspiring to follow your journey, the journey will now continue in glory and joy. Well done.
October 11th, 2018 07:51
This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am
dusk arising said:
Dan. This is a statement from you isn\'t it. To me it is saying \" i have moved on, i know who i am and i am now ready to continue lifes adventure anew, with eyes and mind open\".
October 11th, 2018 05:23
dusk arising said:
Dan. This is a statement from you isn\'t it. To me it is saying \" i have moved on, i know who i am and i am now ready to continue lifes adventure anew, with eyes and mind open\".
October 11th, 2018 05:23
I am free
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, may your journey be filled with love and joy.
October 10th, 2018 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, may your journey be filled with love and joy.
October 10th, 2018 00:08
I am free
poetboy123 said:
A powerful, thought-provoking piece as always Dan! Each of these poems allow us to walk in your feet, to an extent, and reflect upon the ideas you present. Sometimes to grow closer to others, we need to grow closer to ourselves first.
October 9th, 2018 21:36
poetboy123 said:
A powerful, thought-provoking piece as always Dan! Each of these poems allow us to walk in your feet, to an extent, and reflect upon the ideas you present. Sometimes to grow closer to others, we need to grow closer to ourselves first.
October 9th, 2018 21:36
I am free
dusk arising said:
Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i am at - at last! Casting off all need for approval and accepting who i am whilst trying to live in harmony with all and everything. Like you, my shared past is my treasure and it is indeed treasured. Not backward looking though, the future is mine, in harmony.
A great write today. Thank you, gave me a buzz.
October 9th, 2018 13:43
dusk arising said:
Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i am at - at last! Casting off all need for approval and accepting who i am whilst trying to live in harmony with all and everything. Like you, my shared past is my treasure and it is indeed treasured. Not backward looking though, the future is mine, in harmony.
A great write today. Thank you, gave me a buzz.
October 9th, 2018 13:43
I am free
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing your message Dan, and thanks for being you! Sending peace and prayers. Christina
October 9th, 2018 11:13
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing your message Dan, and thanks for being you! Sending peace and prayers. Christina
October 9th, 2018 11:13
I am free
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Powerful my friend...truly powerful!
Loved your write in its entirety!
“Thank you universe for the stars and birds above.”
...and thank you for being YOU!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 08:33
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Powerful my friend...truly powerful!
Loved your write in its entirety!
“Thank you universe for the stars and birds above.”
...and thank you for being YOU!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 08:33
Grand wisdom of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, calmness does seem to come with age, I seem to be very calm now.
October 8th, 2018 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, calmness does seem to come with age, I seem to be very calm now.
October 8th, 2018 01:00
Grand wisdom of love
kevin browne said:
Its not until you\'ve lost what\'s gone that you realise you needed it the most. A cherished write.
October 7th, 2018 14:55
kevin browne said:
Its not until you\'ve lost what\'s gone that you realise you needed it the most. A cherished write.
October 7th, 2018 14:55
Grand wisdom of love
dusk arising said:
Often age is accompanied by a serene-ness which is so admirable. Oh that one day i were able to be so blessed.
Cherish her. Maybe in her company your mind will find new places.
October 7th, 2018 08:44
dusk arising said:
Often age is accompanied by a serene-ness which is so admirable. Oh that one day i were able to be so blessed.
Cherish her. Maybe in her company your mind will find new places.
October 7th, 2018 08:44
Grand wisdom of love
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. Erm, I tried holding my breath for 24 hours once. Why did I not feel well afterwards? Doh!
October 7th, 2018 08:20
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. Erm, I tried holding my breath for 24 hours once. Why did I not feel well afterwards? Doh!
October 7th, 2018 08:20
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