Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Meanwhile - I dunno if I\'m coming or going. Am I 1,2, or 3 people? \'Me, Myself, and I\'.
I will stop digging this hole now, or I will never get out of it! lol.
August 2nd, 2018 11:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Meanwhile - I dunno if I\'m coming or going. Am I 1,2, or 3 people? \'Me, Myself, and I\'.
I will stop digging this hole now, or I will never get out of it! lol.
August 2nd, 2018 11:34
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Sending your way all the love and energy I can muster up!
I love your choice of pic and music...Nahko, of course!
~Laura~
August 2nd, 2018 09:13
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Sending your way all the love and energy I can muster up!
I love your choice of pic and music...Nahko, of course!
~Laura~
August 2nd, 2018 09:13
Better than worse
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your daughter (and son) be filled with the wonder of life and go forward towards their wondrous futures.
Loved the cake and the song.
August 2nd, 2018 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your daughter (and son) be filled with the wonder of life and go forward towards their wondrous futures.
Loved the cake and the song.
August 2nd, 2018 00:06
Better than worse
dusk arising said:
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and knockout verse.
Happy days!
August 1st, 2018 08:47
dusk arising said:
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and knockout verse.
Happy days!
August 1st, 2018 08:47
Better than worse
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s an incredible looking chocolate birthday cake! Chocolate is my favorite!
Wishing your daughter a very Happy Birthday 🎉🎊🎈🎁! Enjoy the day!
Nice poem and that video is amazing! Enjoyed it!
All the best for a beautiful magical day!
~Laura~
August 1st, 2018 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s an incredible looking chocolate birthday cake! Chocolate is my favorite!
Wishing your daughter a very Happy Birthday 🎉🎊🎈🎁! Enjoy the day!
Nice poem and that video is amazing! Enjoyed it!
All the best for a beautiful magical day!
~Laura~
August 1st, 2018 08:08
Better than worse
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments with her to remember forever.
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments with her to remember forever.
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Better than worse
Heartwriter said:
Hope your daughter has a great birthday. You are such a good daddy. She\'s lucky to have you. Great write!
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Heartwriter said:
Hope your daughter has a great birthday. You are such a good daddy. She\'s lucky to have you. Great write!
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Better than worse
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s an awesome verse you both came up with.
I hope she has an amazing birthday 🎉
August 1st, 2018 02:45
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s an awesome verse you both came up with.
I hope she has an amazing birthday 🎉
August 1st, 2018 02:45
Rock and hard place
Lorna said:
Yeah Dan - it\'s a balance isn\'t it........ sometimes \"duty\" has to win out for the ones that depend on you........ you\'re a great guy!
July 31st, 2018 08:00
Lorna said:
Yeah Dan - it\'s a balance isn\'t it........ sometimes \"duty\" has to win out for the ones that depend on you........ you\'re a great guy!
July 31st, 2018 08:00
Short and sweet
Goldfinch60 said:
That which you have been missing will come to life for so that you will live your dreams.
July 31st, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That which you have been missing will come to life for so that you will live your dreams.
July 31st, 2018 07:50
Short and sweet
orchidee said:
You\'ll miss my singing if you\'re asleep fast enough (in deep sleep)!
July 31st, 2018 06:47
orchidee said:
You\'ll miss my singing if you\'re asleep fast enough (in deep sleep)!
July 31st, 2018 06:47
Short and sweet
kevin browne said:
You won\'t miss a thing, my friend. Dreaming is okay and sometimes they show the light of your true existence when you wake. Waking up is okay too, but allow those dreams to create whatever it is they create. With you and your dreams as we read them make us believe the things you think we wouldn\'t normally thing. It\'s called intelligence and you have bucket loads of it so get writing and show us what you\'re made of.
July 31st, 2018 03:37
kevin browne said:
You won\'t miss a thing, my friend. Dreaming is okay and sometimes they show the light of your true existence when you wake. Waking up is okay too, but allow those dreams to create whatever it is they create. With you and your dreams as we read them make us believe the things you think we wouldn\'t normally thing. It\'s called intelligence and you have bucket loads of it so get writing and show us what you\'re made of.
July 31st, 2018 03:37
Short and sweet
sylviasearcher said:
But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful punctuation of feeling somehow more free?
July 31st, 2018 02:47
sylviasearcher said:
But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful punctuation of feeling somehow more free?
July 31st, 2018 02:47
Rock and hard place
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right, time is the most precious thing we have, it should be used wisely.
July 31st, 2018 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right, time is the most precious thing we have, it should be used wisely.
July 31st, 2018 01:23
Rock and hard place
kevin browne said:
Politely is the Sun in your heart and the way you have opened up some deep emotional expressions which are rare these days. You are brave and brilliant with these words you have given us. I will learn you words into real life and see what comes of it. I think you deserve an award for this poem. Nice one Dan.
July 30th, 2018 20:45
kevin browne said:
Politely is the Sun in your heart and the way you have opened up some deep emotional expressions which are rare these days. You are brave and brilliant with these words you have given us. I will learn you words into real life and see what comes of it. I think you deserve an award for this poem. Nice one Dan.
July 30th, 2018 20:45
Rock and hard place
onepauly said:
maybe its precious
because it is so short.
if its to long, it could get pretty
boring.
July 30th, 2018 14:03
onepauly said:
maybe its precious
because it is so short.
if its to long, it could get pretty
boring.
July 30th, 2018 14:03
Rock and hard place
orchidee said:
Erm, can ya explain? What is it that you\'ve had 504 hours for? I makes that 21 days = 3 weeks.
Ya can learn that form me today - a bit of maths! heehee.
July 30th, 2018 13:18
orchidee said:
Erm, can ya explain? What is it that you\'ve had 504 hours for? I makes that 21 days = 3 weeks.
Ya can learn that form me today - a bit of maths! heehee.
July 30th, 2018 13:18
Rock and hard place
Reyas said:
I feel like I’m actually getting a front row seat of your heart and mind with this piece. Very well penned, wonderful job.
July 30th, 2018 12:31
Reyas said:
I feel like I’m actually getting a front row seat of your heart and mind with this piece. Very well penned, wonderful job.
July 30th, 2018 12:31
Rock and hard place
Christina8 said:
Started with a great quote and it was followed by a very wise poem. \"Must be all the love I have in this world, Also a reminder of what money can\'\'t heal\" Very deep and I enjoyed it very much, Dan!!
July 30th, 2018 11:58
Christina8 said:
Started with a great quote and it was followed by a very wise poem. \"Must be all the love I have in this world, Also a reminder of what money can\'\'t heal\" Very deep and I enjoyed it very much, Dan!!
July 30th, 2018 11:58
Lullaby part two
Heartwriter said:
Dan, you always touch my heart in the sweetest way. You shine!
July 29th, 2018 20:37
Heartwriter said:
Dan, you always touch my heart in the sweetest way. You shine!
July 29th, 2018 20:37
Lullaby part two
dusk arising said:
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle tentative guitar playing accompanied by what sounds like waves and occasional gull calls or was the mike picking up movement acoustics (they sometimes do).
July 29th, 2018 07:19
dusk arising said:
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle tentative guitar playing accompanied by what sounds like waves and occasional gull calls or was the mike picking up movement acoustics (they sometimes do).
July 29th, 2018 07:19
Lullaby part two
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Absolutely beautiful!
The sweet soothing
words and the guitar
accompaniment went
straight to the heart!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
July 29th, 2018 05:07
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Absolutely beautiful!
The sweet soothing
words and the guitar
accompaniment went
straight to the heart!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
July 29th, 2018 05:07
Lullaby part two
Lorna said:
I love your dreamy strumming Dan.... it\'s good to \"see\" you!
July 29th, 2018 05:01
Lorna said:
I love your dreamy strumming Dan.... it\'s good to \"see\" you!
July 29th, 2018 05:01
A song may say it better?
poetboy123 said:
Breathtakingly inspirational, the final two lines especially struck a chord with me. Reading pieces like this sets of a flame of joy within me, along with the finely picked song, this is one of the best writes I\'ve ever read.
July 28th, 2018 21:49
poetboy123 said:
Breathtakingly inspirational, the final two lines especially struck a chord with me. Reading pieces like this sets of a flame of joy within me, along with the finely picked song, this is one of the best writes I\'ve ever read.
July 28th, 2018 21:49
A song may say it better?
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“I’ve put all my faith into myself”...
“Let’s not wait for better
We can make it now”
Live the here and the now...
The yesterdays are gone...
We don’t know about our tomorrows...
Today is the day!
I enjoyed listening to
“Love Letters To God”!
Nahko’s music is inspirational!
~Laura~
July 28th, 2018 10:21
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“I’ve put all my faith into myself”...
“Let’s not wait for better
We can make it now”
Live the here and the now...
The yesterdays are gone...
We don’t know about our tomorrows...
Today is the day!
I enjoyed listening to
“Love Letters To God”!
Nahko’s music is inspirational!
~Laura~
July 28th, 2018 10:21
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