Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Short and sweet
sylviasearcher said:
But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful punctuation of feeling somehow more free?
July 31st, 2018 02:47
sylviasearcher said:
But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful punctuation of feeling somehow more free?
July 31st, 2018 02:47
Rock and hard place
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right, time is the most precious thing we have, it should be used wisely.
July 31st, 2018 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right, time is the most precious thing we have, it should be used wisely.
July 31st, 2018 01:23
Rock and hard place
kevin browne said:
Politely is the Sun in your heart and the way you have opened up some deep emotional expressions which are rare these days. You are brave and brilliant with these words you have given us. I will learn you words into real life and see what comes of it. I think you deserve an award for this poem. Nice one Dan.
July 30th, 2018 20:45
kevin browne said:
Politely is the Sun in your heart and the way you have opened up some deep emotional expressions which are rare these days. You are brave and brilliant with these words you have given us. I will learn you words into real life and see what comes of it. I think you deserve an award for this poem. Nice one Dan.
July 30th, 2018 20:45
Rock and hard place
onepauly said:
maybe its precious
because it is so short.
if its to long, it could get pretty
boring.
July 30th, 2018 14:03
onepauly said:
maybe its precious
because it is so short.
if its to long, it could get pretty
boring.
July 30th, 2018 14:03
Rock and hard place
orchidee said:
Erm, can ya explain? What is it that you\'ve had 504 hours for? I makes that 21 days = 3 weeks.
Ya can learn that form me today - a bit of maths! heehee.
July 30th, 2018 13:18
orchidee said:
Erm, can ya explain? What is it that you\'ve had 504 hours for? I makes that 21 days = 3 weeks.
Ya can learn that form me today - a bit of maths! heehee.
July 30th, 2018 13:18
Rock and hard place
Reyas said:
I feel like I’m actually getting a front row seat of your heart and mind with this piece. Very well penned, wonderful job.
July 30th, 2018 12:31
Reyas said:
I feel like I’m actually getting a front row seat of your heart and mind with this piece. Very well penned, wonderful job.
July 30th, 2018 12:31
Rock and hard place
Christina8 said:
Started with a great quote and it was followed by a very wise poem. \"Must be all the love I have in this world, Also a reminder of what money can\'\'t heal\" Very deep and I enjoyed it very much, Dan!!
July 30th, 2018 11:58
Christina8 said:
Started with a great quote and it was followed by a very wise poem. \"Must be all the love I have in this world, Also a reminder of what money can\'\'t heal\" Very deep and I enjoyed it very much, Dan!!
July 30th, 2018 11:58
Lullaby part two
Heartwriter said:
Dan, you always touch my heart in the sweetest way. You shine!
July 29th, 2018 20:37
Heartwriter said:
Dan, you always touch my heart in the sweetest way. You shine!
July 29th, 2018 20:37
Lullaby part two
dusk arising said:
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle tentative guitar playing accompanied by what sounds like waves and occasional gull calls or was the mike picking up movement acoustics (they sometimes do).
July 29th, 2018 07:19
dusk arising said:
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle tentative guitar playing accompanied by what sounds like waves and occasional gull calls or was the mike picking up movement acoustics (they sometimes do).
July 29th, 2018 07:19
Lullaby part two
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Absolutely beautiful!
The sweet soothing
words and the guitar
accompaniment went
straight to the heart!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
July 29th, 2018 05:07
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Absolutely beautiful!
The sweet soothing
words and the guitar
accompaniment went
straight to the heart!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
July 29th, 2018 05:07
Lullaby part two
Lorna said:
I love your dreamy strumming Dan.... it\'s good to \"see\" you!
July 29th, 2018 05:01
Lorna said:
I love your dreamy strumming Dan.... it\'s good to \"see\" you!
July 29th, 2018 05:01
A song may say it better?
poetboy123 said:
Breathtakingly inspirational, the final two lines especially struck a chord with me. Reading pieces like this sets of a flame of joy within me, along with the finely picked song, this is one of the best writes I\'ve ever read.
July 28th, 2018 21:49
poetboy123 said:
Breathtakingly inspirational, the final two lines especially struck a chord with me. Reading pieces like this sets of a flame of joy within me, along with the finely picked song, this is one of the best writes I\'ve ever read.
July 28th, 2018 21:49
A song may say it better?
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“I’ve put all my faith into myself”...
“Let’s not wait for better
We can make it now”
Live the here and the now...
The yesterdays are gone...
We don’t know about our tomorrows...
Today is the day!
I enjoyed listening to
“Love Letters To God”!
Nahko’s music is inspirational!
~Laura~
July 28th, 2018 10:21
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“I’ve put all my faith into myself”...
“Let’s not wait for better
We can make it now”
Live the here and the now...
The yesterdays are gone...
We don’t know about our tomorrows...
Today is the day!
I enjoyed listening to
“Love Letters To God”!
Nahko’s music is inspirational!
~Laura~
July 28th, 2018 10:21
A song may say it better?
dusk arising said:
There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that combination action!. Brill!
Now reflect upon the torturous path you have travelled, and those who travelled parts of the path with you. Achiever!
Look how you were and also at those who are only beginning and cannot see a path yet. Each will tread a path to wisdom. It\'s important not to stand in their way. Old heads grow on old shoulders.
July 28th, 2018 02:25
dusk arising said:
There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that combination action!. Brill!
Now reflect upon the torturous path you have travelled, and those who travelled parts of the path with you. Achiever!
Look how you were and also at those who are only beginning and cannot see a path yet. Each will tread a path to wisdom. It\'s important not to stand in their way. Old heads grow on old shoulders.
July 28th, 2018 02:25
A song may say it better?
orchidee said:
You \'getting there\'? You \'making it\' in life?!
July 28th, 2018 02:11
orchidee said:
You \'getting there\'? You \'making it\' in life?!
July 28th, 2018 02:11
Changing existence
kevin browne said:
A self awareness poem and well written, too. I engaged through your thoughts which has left me thinking about my illusions of words and life. Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts. It\'s always good to let them out.
July 27th, 2018 11:08
kevin browne said:
A self awareness poem and well written, too. I engaged through your thoughts which has left me thinking about my illusions of words and life. Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts. It\'s always good to let them out.
July 27th, 2018 11:08
Changing existence
dusk arising said:
Great self expression. Letting go of frustrations by losing yourself into something else is a really worthwhile practice. Similar to the oft used phrase \'sleep on it, see how you feel in the morning\'\'. Its amazing how having mentally \'let go\' of something for a while gives it a whole new perspective when once again you pick up its reins isn\'t it.
A good book can be a distraction but when my mind is in turmoil over something i get in my car and go for a drive. Something about being out amongst the trees and fields by the roadside remind me of my own insignificant speck status.
July 27th, 2018 10:36
dusk arising said:
Great self expression. Letting go of frustrations by losing yourself into something else is a really worthwhile practice. Similar to the oft used phrase \'sleep on it, see how you feel in the morning\'\'. Its amazing how having mentally \'let go\' of something for a while gives it a whole new perspective when once again you pick up its reins isn\'t it.
A good book can be a distraction but when my mind is in turmoil over something i get in my car and go for a drive. Something about being out amongst the trees and fields by the roadside remind me of my own insignificant speck status.
July 27th, 2018 10:36
Changing existence
Heartwriter said:
Dan you have grew into such a fine poet. You are an inspiration! Your writes are wonderful!
July 27th, 2018 09:59
Heartwriter said:
Dan you have grew into such a fine poet. You are an inspiration! Your writes are wonderful!
July 27th, 2018 09:59
Changing existence
Lorna said:
PD - I am learning to \"live lightly\" on this earth and am so much happier for it..... I love your Dragonfly........
July 27th, 2018 06:28
Lorna said:
PD - I am learning to \"live lightly\" on this earth and am so much happier for it..... I love your Dragonfly........
July 27th, 2018 06:28
Changing existence
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for sharing that. The theme really resinates with the book I will never finish writing.
The video what beauty and strength. That which seems to evade me!
July 27th, 2018 03:26
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for sharing that. The theme really resinates with the book I will never finish writing.
The video what beauty and strength. That which seems to evade me!
July 27th, 2018 03:26
Changing existence
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. You gone? You flown away, as a dragonfly? Where ya gone?!
Though suffering is not the main theme here, I can\'t really go along with all of the quote.
We can\'t really escape suffering, though I try to \'pray it away\' sometimes. The \'detachment\' may cause us to go into escapism, or be insensitive to other\'s sufferings.
Not that I followed Buddha anyway!
July 27th, 2018 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. You gone? You flown away, as a dragonfly? Where ya gone?!
Though suffering is not the main theme here, I can\'t really go along with all of the quote.
We can\'t really escape suffering, though I try to \'pray it away\' sometimes. The \'detachment\' may cause us to go into escapism, or be insensitive to other\'s sufferings.
Not that I followed Buddha anyway!
July 27th, 2018 02:52
Changing existence
Goldfinch60 said:
May your new flight give you the freedom that is inspired by your words.
July 27th, 2018 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May your new flight give you the freedom that is inspired by your words.
July 27th, 2018 02:37
Isolation
Goldfinch60 said:
Very gooderite, go forward in your belief, all will be well.
July 26th, 2018 08:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very gooderite, go forward in your belief, all will be well.
July 26th, 2018 08:23
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