Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The slower I go the deeper I flow
Goldfinch60 said:
We all go at our own pace in life, if you go quickly there are many things that we don\'t see, going slowly you absorb more.
I have recently read a book which I was reading slower and slower as I thought it was so good I didn\'t want to finish reading it.
August 6th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We all go at our own pace in life, if you go quickly there are many things that we don\'t see, going slowly you absorb more.
I have recently read a book which I was reading slower and slower as I thought it was so good I didn\'t want to finish reading it.
August 6th, 2018 00:16
The slower I go the deeper I flow
E-Poems said:
LOVE!! This is my favourite one so far. Loved the music and pic too! ~ E
August 5th, 2018 15:55
E-Poems said:
LOVE!! This is my favourite one so far. Loved the music and pic too! ~ E
August 5th, 2018 15:55
The slower I go the deeper I flow
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s not lost the plot (Brian)! heehee. Which is more than can be said for me (is it?). lol.
August 5th, 2018 11:19
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s not lost the plot (Brian)! heehee. Which is more than can be said for me (is it?). lol.
August 5th, 2018 11:19
The slower I go the deeper I flow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT VIBE BROTHER DAN ! Still Waters always run deep ! I read BOOKS real sklow and I\'m always making notes so I don\'t lose the PLOT ! I like the slow BALLAD MUSIC of the 50\'s & 60\'s Jim Reeves ~ Loan Baez ~ Mama\'s & Papa\'s ~ Nat King Cole etc awesome Lyrics ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check our Poems and a slow FUSION on ICE CREAM ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK) and ANGELA (NZ)
August 5th, 2018 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT VIBE BROTHER DAN ! Still Waters always run deep ! I read BOOKS real sklow and I\'m always making notes so I don\'t lose the PLOT ! I like the slow BALLAD MUSIC of the 50\'s & 60\'s Jim Reeves ~ Loan Baez ~ Mama\'s & Papa\'s ~ Nat King Cole etc awesome Lyrics ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check our Poems and a slow FUSION on ICE CREAM ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK) and ANGELA (NZ)
August 5th, 2018 10:29
I declare
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You have a beautiful heart and soul!
“Blessed for the windows of time for staying permanently open”
Substantive words my friend!
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 07:59
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You have a beautiful heart and soul!
“Blessed for the windows of time for staying permanently open”
Substantive words my friend!
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 07:59
I declare
Goldfinch60 said:
This is great Dan go forward into your new life filled with the knowledge that ALL will be well.
\"Live long and prosper.\"
August 4th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
This is great Dan go forward into your new life filled with the knowledge that ALL will be well.
\"Live long and prosper.\"
August 4th, 2018 01:09
Things changed that day
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
A great George Eliot quote!
Just finished reading her novel, “Middlemarch in Spring”!
A fantastic literary work!
Did Jorja enjoy her birthday?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 00:52
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
A great George Eliot quote!
Just finished reading her novel, “Middlemarch in Spring”!
A fantastic literary work!
Did Jorja enjoy her birthday?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 00:52
Things changed that day
Heartwriter said:
Great write Dan. I felt the message. Well done!
August 3rd, 2018 06:46
Heartwriter said:
Great write Dan. I felt the message. Well done!
August 3rd, 2018 06:46
Things changed that day
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
August 3rd, 2018 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
August 3rd, 2018 05:18
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
onepauly said:
you surely have the wisdom
of a great poet.
August 3rd, 2018 03:33
onepauly said:
you surely have the wisdom
of a great poet.
August 3rd, 2018 03:33
Things changed that day
onepauly said:
I feel so humble with this one.
wonderful!
August 3rd, 2018 02:53
onepauly said:
I feel so humble with this one.
wonderful!
August 3rd, 2018 02:53
Things changed that day
orchidee said:
Well, if she actually sung it, she would have won it. There was only her and me in the competition! heehee. I won a cat show. Not for a cat, for me whining!
August 3rd, 2018 02:32
orchidee said:
Well, if she actually sung it, she would have won it. There was only her and me in the competition! heehee. I won a cat show. Not for a cat, for me whining!
August 3rd, 2018 02:32
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
Goldfinch60 said:
May your soul be released into the beauty and the power of its love.
Good positive write.
August 3rd, 2018 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May your soul be released into the beauty and the power of its love.
Good positive write.
August 3rd, 2018 01:18
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Meanwhile - I dunno if I\'m coming or going. Am I 1,2, or 3 people? \'Me, Myself, and I\'.
I will stop digging this hole now, or I will never get out of it! lol.
August 2nd, 2018 11:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Meanwhile - I dunno if I\'m coming or going. Am I 1,2, or 3 people? \'Me, Myself, and I\'.
I will stop digging this hole now, or I will never get out of it! lol.
August 2nd, 2018 11:34
Between the who we are and the one we strive for
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Sending your way all the love and energy I can muster up!
I love your choice of pic and music...Nahko, of course!
~Laura~
August 2nd, 2018 09:13
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Sending your way all the love and energy I can muster up!
I love your choice of pic and music...Nahko, of course!
~Laura~
August 2nd, 2018 09:13
Better than worse
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your daughter (and son) be filled with the wonder of life and go forward towards their wondrous futures.
Loved the cake and the song.
August 2nd, 2018 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your daughter (and son) be filled with the wonder of life and go forward towards their wondrous futures.
Loved the cake and the song.
August 2nd, 2018 00:06
Better than worse
dusk arising said:
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and knockout verse.
Happy days!
August 1st, 2018 08:47
dusk arising said:
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and knockout verse.
Happy days!
August 1st, 2018 08:47
Better than worse
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s an incredible looking chocolate birthday cake! Chocolate is my favorite!
Wishing your daughter a very Happy Birthday 🎉🎊🎈🎁! Enjoy the day!
Nice poem and that video is amazing! Enjoyed it!
All the best for a beautiful magical day!
~Laura~
August 1st, 2018 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s an incredible looking chocolate birthday cake! Chocolate is my favorite!
Wishing your daughter a very Happy Birthday 🎉🎊🎈🎁! Enjoy the day!
Nice poem and that video is amazing! Enjoyed it!
All the best for a beautiful magical day!
~Laura~
August 1st, 2018 08:08
Better than worse
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments with her to remember forever.
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments with her to remember forever.
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Better than worse
Heartwriter said:
Hope your daughter has a great birthday. You are such a good daddy. She\'s lucky to have you. Great write!
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Heartwriter said:
Hope your daughter has a great birthday. You are such a good daddy. She\'s lucky to have you. Great write!
August 1st, 2018 04:20
Better than worse
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s an awesome verse you both came up with.
I hope she has an amazing birthday 🎉
August 1st, 2018 02:45
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s an awesome verse you both came up with.
I hope she has an amazing birthday 🎉
August 1st, 2018 02:45
Rock and hard place
Lorna said:
Yeah Dan - it\'s a balance isn\'t it........ sometimes \"duty\" has to win out for the ones that depend on you........ you\'re a great guy!
July 31st, 2018 08:00
Lorna said:
Yeah Dan - it\'s a balance isn\'t it........ sometimes \"duty\" has to win out for the ones that depend on you........ you\'re a great guy!
July 31st, 2018 08:00
Short and sweet
Goldfinch60 said:
That which you have been missing will come to life for so that you will live your dreams.
July 31st, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That which you have been missing will come to life for so that you will live your dreams.
July 31st, 2018 07:50
Short and sweet
orchidee said:
You\'ll miss my singing if you\'re asleep fast enough (in deep sleep)!
July 31st, 2018 06:47
orchidee said:
You\'ll miss my singing if you\'re asleep fast enough (in deep sleep)!
July 31st, 2018 06:47
Short and sweet
kevin browne said:
You won\'t miss a thing, my friend. Dreaming is okay and sometimes they show the light of your true existence when you wake. Waking up is okay too, but allow those dreams to create whatever it is they create. With you and your dreams as we read them make us believe the things you think we wouldn\'t normally thing. It\'s called intelligence and you have bucket loads of it so get writing and show us what you\'re made of.
July 31st, 2018 03:37
kevin browne said:
You won\'t miss a thing, my friend. Dreaming is okay and sometimes they show the light of your true existence when you wake. Waking up is okay too, but allow those dreams to create whatever it is they create. With you and your dreams as we read them make us believe the things you think we wouldn\'t normally thing. It\'s called intelligence and you have bucket loads of it so get writing and show us what you\'re made of.
July 31st, 2018 03:37
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