Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
You\'re all in my cup
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You got it my dear man!
Beautiful words to stand by...
āUnderstanding this power I hold
Iāll now be nothing but a host.ā
Thatās exactly what we are...
A host for all the love and
benevolence we can muster up for ourselves and everyone within our circle!
Iāve seen such a wonderful and positive change in your writings since the first time I read your poetry on this site! To me this indicates that thereās a wonderful and positive change within YOU! Thatās a beautiful thing!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 08:57
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You got it my dear man!
Beautiful words to stand by...
āUnderstanding this power I hold
Iāll now be nothing but a host.ā
Thatās exactly what we are...
A host for all the love and
benevolence we can muster up for ourselves and everyone within our circle!
Iāve seen such a wonderful and positive change in your writings since the first time I read your poetry on this site! To me this indicates that thereās a wonderful and positive change within YOU! Thatās a beautiful thing!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 08:57
A rhyme a day...
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not listen, they may hear but not listen.
In your life though you are listening to yourself and going forward with patience and understanding.
Keep moving forward in harmony Dan, life is wondrous.
August 11th, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not listen, they may hear but not listen.
In your life though you are listening to yourself and going forward with patience and understanding.
Keep moving forward in harmony Dan, life is wondrous.
August 11th, 2018 00:18
A rhyme a day...
orchidee said:
Doh! And there\'s me thinking that you (and I) are perfect. Well, are we 99% perfect? heehee.
A rhyme a day keep the doctor away? Like an apple does? Who ate all me apples, let alone me pies?
I must put this sherry down and stop rambling. lol.
August 10th, 2018 08:05
orchidee said:
Doh! And there\'s me thinking that you (and I) are perfect. Well, are we 99% perfect? heehee.
A rhyme a day keep the doctor away? Like an apple does? Who ate all me apples, let alone me pies?
I must put this sherry down and stop rambling. lol.
August 10th, 2018 08:05
Two day break (ish)
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m away camping too... but in the van not brace enough for a tent... says the forest girl lol!
You are so reflective and insightful.
I\'m just listening to the pitter patter of rain on the roof having a cuppa before the boys wake up.
The internet is terrible so I can\'t even get on google docs to do some writing!
If I don\'t write my soul will fall out š
August 10th, 2018 01:23
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m away camping too... but in the van not brace enough for a tent... says the forest girl lol!
You are so reflective and insightful.
I\'m just listening to the pitter patter of rain on the roof having a cuppa before the boys wake up.
The internet is terrible so I can\'t even get on google docs to do some writing!
If I don\'t write my soul will fall out š
August 10th, 2018 01:23
Two day break (ish)
Goldfinch60 said:
\"This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit \" is the way to go into the future in a positive way.
Good write Dan.
August 10th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
\"This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit \" is the way to go into the future in a positive way.
Good write Dan.
August 10th, 2018 00:47
Two day break (ish)
Fay Slimm. said:
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart, soul and spirit Dan - lovely pic. of a more relaxed Dad shows you will soon camp out again. Good read and love that positive final line.
August 9th, 2018 16:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart, soul and spirit Dan - lovely pic. of a more relaxed Dad shows you will soon camp out again. Good read and love that positive final line.
August 9th, 2018 16:25
Two day break (ish)
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Nature is life! It fills our soul!
āThis new adjustment to align with
heart, soul and spiritā...
āLetting go of our stories to connect deeper withinā...
Nice pic and choice of video which I enjoyed very much!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2018 15:43
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Nature is life! It fills our soul!
āThis new adjustment to align with
heart, soul and spiritā...
āLetting go of our stories to connect deeper withinā...
Nice pic and choice of video which I enjoyed very much!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2018 15:43
Two day break (ish)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, getting nearer October - the annual reunion of Hastings 1066. You can join too - have to be very old, and must have been there in person in 1066! A few of us poets will be there. It\'s completely nutty of course. lol.
August 9th, 2018 13:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol, getting nearer October - the annual reunion of Hastings 1066. You can join too - have to be very old, and must have been there in person in 1066! A few of us poets will be there. It\'s completely nutty of course. lol.
August 9th, 2018 13:55
Two day break (ish)
orchidee said:
When ya coming back? Where ya been?! A nice write Dan.
August 9th, 2018 13:15
orchidee said:
When ya coming back? Where ya been?! A nice write Dan.
August 9th, 2018 13:15
More rambling of life
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder in this world is all around us and children see it and can show us the beauty and wonder that fills the world.
August 9th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder in this world is all around us and children see it and can show us the beauty and wonder that fills the world.
August 9th, 2018 00:29
More rambling of life
dusk arising said:
You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be unable to cope with, are the ones who teach us so much about ourselves and our society.
My special daughter taught me so much.
I hope you see that other people around your son are benefiting from his company too. We become nicer people.
August 8th, 2018 10:32
dusk arising said:
You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be unable to cope with, are the ones who teach us so much about ourselves and our society.
My special daughter taught me so much.
I hope you see that other people around your son are benefiting from his company too. We become nicer people.
August 8th, 2018 10:32
More rambling of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I love the endearing names youāve given your children!
As far as the labeling, you hold on to your beliefs...
and you can tell the āquacksā what to do with their beliefs as far as YOUR son is concerned! You are being a great and caring dad! In this case, FATHER KNOWS BEST!
~Laura~
August 8th, 2018 09:46
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I love the endearing names youāve given your children!
As far as the labeling, you hold on to your beliefs...
and you can tell the āquacksā what to do with their beliefs as far as YOUR son is concerned! You are being a great and caring dad! In this case, FATHER KNOWS BEST!
~Laura~
August 8th, 2018 09:46
Untravelled traveler
Heartwriter said:
Everyone has the right to come to terms of their own believes. Wonderful write Dan!
August 6th, 2018 16:25
Heartwriter said:
Everyone has the right to come to terms of their own believes. Wonderful write Dan!
August 6th, 2018 16:25
Untravelled traveler
dusk arising said:
Whatever faith we have, so long as it does not demand anything from others, cannot be a bad thing surely?
It is a personal thing within ones self. Leaves in question the motives of those who daily pontificate their chosen faith.
August 6th, 2018 02:19
dusk arising said:
Whatever faith we have, so long as it does not demand anything from others, cannot be a bad thing surely?
It is a personal thing within ones self. Leaves in question the motives of those who daily pontificate their chosen faith.
August 6th, 2018 02:19
Untravelled traveler
orchidee said:
An interesting write Dan. I can\'t sustain \'arguments\' at this level. I mean \'argument\' in a sort of technical sense of \'debate or discussion\', not as a row!
Sometimes I just \'know\' what I believe - if you see what I mean?
August 6th, 2018 01:38
orchidee said:
An interesting write Dan. I can\'t sustain \'arguments\' at this level. I mean \'argument\' in a sort of technical sense of \'debate or discussion\', not as a row!
Sometimes I just \'know\' what I believe - if you see what I mean?
August 6th, 2018 01:38
The slower I go the deeper I flow
dusk arising said:
First impressions are something which just happens, difficult to combat. I guess learning to look inside ones self and ask why did i form that impression may be a beginning to correct this. But you\'re so right intelligence cannot be a race. It\'s a continual learning.
Mr Men stories - were they about Mr Men or pleasing young minds with care and love. Simple words \"bring the power of emotions with them\" in all sorts of guises.
So right.
August 6th, 2018 01:25
dusk arising said:
First impressions are something which just happens, difficult to combat. I guess learning to look inside ones self and ask why did i form that impression may be a beginning to correct this. But you\'re so right intelligence cannot be a race. It\'s a continual learning.
Mr Men stories - were they about Mr Men or pleasing young minds with care and love. Simple words \"bring the power of emotions with them\" in all sorts of guises.
So right.
August 6th, 2018 01:25
The slower I go the deeper I flow
Goldfinch60 said:
We all go at our own pace in life, if you go quickly there are many things that we don\'t see, going slowly you absorb more.
I have recently read a book which I was reading slower and slower as I thought it was so good I didn\'t want to finish reading it.
August 6th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We all go at our own pace in life, if you go quickly there are many things that we don\'t see, going slowly you absorb more.
I have recently read a book which I was reading slower and slower as I thought it was so good I didn\'t want to finish reading it.
August 6th, 2018 00:16
The slower I go the deeper I flow
E-Poems said:
LOVE!! This is my favourite one so far. Loved the music and pic too! ~ E
August 5th, 2018 15:55
E-Poems said:
LOVE!! This is my favourite one so far. Loved the music and pic too! ~ E
August 5th, 2018 15:55
The slower I go the deeper I flow
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s not lost the plot (Brian)! heehee. Which is more than can be said for me (is it?). lol.
August 5th, 2018 11:19
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan.
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s not lost the plot (Brian)! heehee. Which is more than can be said for me (is it?). lol.
August 5th, 2018 11:19
The slower I go the deeper I flow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT VIBE BROTHER DAN ! Still Waters always run deep ! I read BOOKS real sklow and I\'m always making notes so I don\'t lose the PLOT ! I like the slow BALLAD MUSIC of the 50\'s & 60\'s Jim Reeves ~ Loan Baez ~ Mama\'s & Papa\'s ~ Nat King Cole etc awesome Lyrics ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check our Poems and a slow FUSION on ICE CREAM ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK) and ANGELA (NZ)
August 5th, 2018 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT VIBE BROTHER DAN ! Still Waters always run deep ! I read BOOKS real sklow and I\'m always making notes so I don\'t lose the PLOT ! I like the slow BALLAD MUSIC of the 50\'s & 60\'s Jim Reeves ~ Loan Baez ~ Mama\'s & Papa\'s ~ Nat King Cole etc awesome Lyrics ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check our Poems and a slow FUSION on ICE CREAM ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK) and ANGELA (NZ)
August 5th, 2018 10:29
I declare
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You have a beautiful heart and soul!
āBlessed for the windows of time for staying permanently openā
Substantive words my friend!
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 07:59
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You have a beautiful heart and soul!
āBlessed for the windows of time for staying permanently openā
Substantive words my friend!
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 07:59
I declare
Goldfinch60 said:
This is great Dan go forward into your new life filled with the knowledge that ALL will be well.
\"Live long and prosper.\"
August 4th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
This is great Dan go forward into your new life filled with the knowledge that ALL will be well.
\"Live long and prosper.\"
August 4th, 2018 01:09
Things changed that day
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great George Eliot quote!
Just finished reading her novel, āMiddlemarch in Springā!
A fantastic literary work!
Did Jorja enjoy her birthday?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 00:52
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great George Eliot quote!
Just finished reading her novel, āMiddlemarch in Springā!
A fantastic literary work!
Did Jorja enjoy her birthday?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 00:52
Things changed that day
Heartwriter said:
Great write Dan. I felt the message. Well done!
August 3rd, 2018 06:46
Heartwriter said:
Great write Dan. I felt the message. Well done!
August 3rd, 2018 06:46
Things changed that day
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
August 3rd, 2018 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
August 3rd, 2018 05:18
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