Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
A cry of more light
Christina8 said:
There are no words. Having gone through it with twins......I just want to say you are doing a super job, Dan!
August 16th, 2018 19:05
Christina8 said:
There are no words. Having gone through it with twins......I just want to say you are doing a super job, Dan!
August 16th, 2018 19:05
A cry of more light
Lauraš» said:
My dear Dan,
This truly saddens me!
If you need to cry...cry!
No matter what, the need to cry is often necessary! Work it through together with your lady! Cry together!
Embracing lifeās difficulties...and this is certainly one of them...is another opportunity for you and your lady to grow even closer together!
I know youāll be open to face this loss! In doing so, you will mend that soul!
As in the song, āOlder Chestsā...
āLike a crack in a wall
Starting small, and grow in time...ā
If that small crack isnāt repaired, it will grow! It needs to be resolved!
You and your lady need to mend yourselves!
āHarmony and balance from life is all I needā
ā No blame lives in what will be willā
Que serĆ” serĆ”!
Sending an abundance of love your way!
~Laura~
August 16th, 2018 11:13
Lauraš» said:
My dear Dan,
This truly saddens me!
If you need to cry...cry!
No matter what, the need to cry is often necessary! Work it through together with your lady! Cry together!
Embracing lifeās difficulties...and this is certainly one of them...is another opportunity for you and your lady to grow even closer together!
I know youāll be open to face this loss! In doing so, you will mend that soul!
As in the song, āOlder Chestsā...
āLike a crack in a wall
Starting small, and grow in time...ā
If that small crack isnāt repaired, it will grow! It needs to be resolved!
You and your lady need to mend yourselves!
āHarmony and balance from life is all I needā
ā No blame lives in what will be willā
Que serĆ” serĆ”!
Sending an abundance of love your way!
~Laura~
August 16th, 2018 11:13
A cry of more light
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. It\'s time to weep. I scolded myself sometimes at some funerals/thanksgiving tribute services, where I did not weep. I suppose though, it depends how close we are to the person.
August 16th, 2018 10:01
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. It\'s time to weep. I scolded myself sometimes at some funerals/thanksgiving tribute services, where I did not weep. I suppose though, it depends how close we are to the person.
August 16th, 2018 10:01
Rambling thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Your journey will be filled with joy, light and love.
August 15th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Your journey will be filled with joy, light and love.
August 15th, 2018 00:37
My affirmation
dusk arising said:
That world is the here and now. Your message is wholesome and true.
Sadly, many minds will not listen.
August 13th, 2018 15:51
dusk arising said:
That world is the here and now. Your message is wholesome and true.
Sadly, many minds will not listen.
August 13th, 2018 15:51
My affirmation
Crystal Hope said:
An incredible read. Well done penning and thought.
August 13th, 2018 12:15
Crystal Hope said:
An incredible read. Well done penning and thought.
August 13th, 2018 12:15
My affirmation
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Dan, I am sure your family will be wonderful in your and their future.
August 13th, 2018 07:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Dan, I am sure your family will be wonderful in your and their future.
August 13th, 2018 07:58
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
sylviasearcher said:
I had to read your poem because it was about my favourite superhero, with a hint of my favourite super villain (the joker).
Was Harley Quinn out?
Seriously though. I know batman is less super hero.and more super rich. But he reaches towards strength and light from so much darkness inside.
And he has a batcave.
I\'m not a big comic reader, but I don\'t think Harley Quinn managed the same rising from her darkness. She.seems more compelled towards it. But I\'m still rooting for her. Won\'t give up rooting!
August 13th, 2018 01:14
sylviasearcher said:
I had to read your poem because it was about my favourite superhero, with a hint of my favourite super villain (the joker).
Was Harley Quinn out?
Seriously though. I know batman is less super hero.and more super rich. But he reaches towards strength and light from so much darkness inside.
And he has a batcave.
I\'m not a big comic reader, but I don\'t think Harley Quinn managed the same rising from her darkness. She.seems more compelled towards it. But I\'m still rooting for her. Won\'t give up rooting!
August 13th, 2018 01:14
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
onepauly said:
quite the story.
did it really happen?
August 12th, 2018 20:47
onepauly said:
quite the story.
did it really happen?
August 12th, 2018 20:47
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Brother_Kane said:
Not all superheroās wear capes... but BatDan does š would of been funny to see batman saving some kid from getting beaten up and I bet for on lookers it was a sight to be hold š
August 12th, 2018 12:29
Brother_Kane said:
Not all superheroās wear capes... but BatDan does š would of been funny to see batman saving some kid from getting beaten up and I bet for on lookers it was a sight to be hold š
August 12th, 2018 12:29
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Reyas said:
Amazing poet during the day, superhero by night? What canāt you do? You write does has a lot of truth though, we all play both sides of the spectrum. If you need a robin though, Iām one message away. :)
August 12th, 2018 09:12
Reyas said:
Amazing poet during the day, superhero by night? What canāt you do? You write does has a lot of truth though, we all play both sides of the spectrum. If you need a robin though, Iām one message away. :)
August 12th, 2018 09:12
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Poetic Dan said:
All dogs are mine, I\'m part Dolittle too.
Nothing can stand in my way
I\'m taking over the world
August 12th, 2018 07:45
Poetic Dan said:
All dogs are mine, I\'m part Dolittle too.
Nothing can stand in my way
I\'m taking over the world
August 12th, 2018 07:45
Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
orchidee said:
You two on telly? BatDan and BatDog? Will the dog take part, or is it just wanting food titbits?! heehee.
August 12th, 2018 07:18
orchidee said:
You two on telly? BatDan and BatDog? Will the dog take part, or is it just wanting food titbits?! heehee.
August 12th, 2018 07:18
You\'re all in my cup
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all changing all the time and the positive change that has come over you is so wonderful.
As for the tea we drink real tea, Rwanda/Burundi, which we get from a nearby tea and coffee specialist shop, none of this teabag nonsense. I am just about to make the first cuppa of the day.
August 12th, 2018 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all changing all the time and the positive change that has come over you is so wonderful.
As for the tea we drink real tea, Rwanda/Burundi, which we get from a nearby tea and coffee specialist shop, none of this teabag nonsense. I am just about to make the first cuppa of the day.
August 12th, 2018 00:13
You\'re all in my cup
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You got it my dear man!
Beautiful words to stand by...
āUnderstanding this power I hold
Iāll now be nothing but a host.ā
Thatās exactly what we are...
A host for all the love and
benevolence we can muster up for ourselves and everyone within our circle!
Iāve seen such a wonderful and positive change in your writings since the first time I read your poetry on this site! To me this indicates that thereās a wonderful and positive change within YOU! Thatās a beautiful thing!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 08:57
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You got it my dear man!
Beautiful words to stand by...
āUnderstanding this power I hold
Iāll now be nothing but a host.ā
Thatās exactly what we are...
A host for all the love and
benevolence we can muster up for ourselves and everyone within our circle!
Iāve seen such a wonderful and positive change in your writings since the first time I read your poetry on this site! To me this indicates that thereās a wonderful and positive change within YOU! Thatās a beautiful thing!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 08:57
A rhyme a day...
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not listen, they may hear but not listen.
In your life though you are listening to yourself and going forward with patience and understanding.
Keep moving forward in harmony Dan, life is wondrous.
August 11th, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not listen, they may hear but not listen.
In your life though you are listening to yourself and going forward with patience and understanding.
Keep moving forward in harmony Dan, life is wondrous.
August 11th, 2018 00:18
A rhyme a day...
orchidee said:
Doh! And there\'s me thinking that you (and I) are perfect. Well, are we 99% perfect? heehee.
A rhyme a day keep the doctor away? Like an apple does? Who ate all me apples, let alone me pies?
I must put this sherry down and stop rambling. lol.
August 10th, 2018 08:05
orchidee said:
Doh! And there\'s me thinking that you (and I) are perfect. Well, are we 99% perfect? heehee.
A rhyme a day keep the doctor away? Like an apple does? Who ate all me apples, let alone me pies?
I must put this sherry down and stop rambling. lol.
August 10th, 2018 08:05
Two day break (ish)
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m away camping too... but in the van not brace enough for a tent... says the forest girl lol!
You are so reflective and insightful.
I\'m just listening to the pitter patter of rain on the roof having a cuppa before the boys wake up.
The internet is terrible so I can\'t even get on google docs to do some writing!
If I don\'t write my soul will fall out š
August 10th, 2018 01:23
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m away camping too... but in the van not brace enough for a tent... says the forest girl lol!
You are so reflective and insightful.
I\'m just listening to the pitter patter of rain on the roof having a cuppa before the boys wake up.
The internet is terrible so I can\'t even get on google docs to do some writing!
If I don\'t write my soul will fall out š
August 10th, 2018 01:23
Two day break (ish)
Goldfinch60 said:
\"This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit \" is the way to go into the future in a positive way.
Good write Dan.
August 10th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
\"This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit \" is the way to go into the future in a positive way.
Good write Dan.
August 10th, 2018 00:47
Two day break (ish)
Fay Slimm. said:
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart, soul and spirit Dan - lovely pic. of a more relaxed Dad shows you will soon camp out again. Good read and love that positive final line.
August 9th, 2018 16:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart, soul and spirit Dan - lovely pic. of a more relaxed Dad shows you will soon camp out again. Good read and love that positive final line.
August 9th, 2018 16:25
Two day break (ish)
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Nature is life! It fills our soul!
āThis new adjustment to align with
heart, soul and spiritā...
āLetting go of our stories to connect deeper withinā...
Nice pic and choice of video which I enjoyed very much!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2018 15:43
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Nature is life! It fills our soul!
āThis new adjustment to align with
heart, soul and spiritā...
āLetting go of our stories to connect deeper withinā...
Nice pic and choice of video which I enjoyed very much!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2018 15:43
Two day break (ish)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, getting nearer October - the annual reunion of Hastings 1066. You can join too - have to be very old, and must have been there in person in 1066! A few of us poets will be there. It\'s completely nutty of course. lol.
August 9th, 2018 13:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol, getting nearer October - the annual reunion of Hastings 1066. You can join too - have to be very old, and must have been there in person in 1066! A few of us poets will be there. It\'s completely nutty of course. lol.
August 9th, 2018 13:55
Two day break (ish)
orchidee said:
When ya coming back? Where ya been?! A nice write Dan.
August 9th, 2018 13:15
orchidee said:
When ya coming back? Where ya been?! A nice write Dan.
August 9th, 2018 13:15
More rambling of life
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder in this world is all around us and children see it and can show us the beauty and wonder that fills the world.
August 9th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder in this world is all around us and children see it and can show us the beauty and wonder that fills the world.
August 9th, 2018 00:29
More rambling of life
dusk arising said:
You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be unable to cope with, are the ones who teach us so much about ourselves and our society.
My special daughter taught me so much.
I hope you see that other people around your son are benefiting from his company too. We become nicer people.
August 8th, 2018 10:32
dusk arising said:
You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be unable to cope with, are the ones who teach us so much about ourselves and our society.
My special daughter taught me so much.
I hope you see that other people around your son are benefiting from his company too. We become nicer people.
August 8th, 2018 10:32
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