Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



What do you see
poetboy123 said:

Hah! If that was me I\'d have jumped out of my seat! On a more serious note, this was a great spiritual piece Dan, I could learn a thing or two from your relation to nature!

August 18th, 2018 14:36

What do you see
orchidee said:

We\'ll be likely to swat it, to kill it! Maybe not, if it did not have a sting. :)

August 18th, 2018 13:36

What do you see
dusk arising said:

Tuning into and accepting the way of the planet is your way. All life has its purpose, it\'s highs and lows. Ours is the gift of enjoyment.

August 18th, 2018 10:41

What do you see
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:

Poetic Dan, I can relate. I also am a Virgo, I loved your poem.

August 18th, 2018 10:07

Many hands come from the sun & moon
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words fill our hearts with emotion but I know that the darkness will disperse and the light will dispel the darkness.

August 18th, 2018 00:18

Many hands come from the sun & moon
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful poem and video.

Thinking of your new day šŸŒ”

August 17th, 2018 05:06

A cry of more light
dusk arising said:

No meaningful words of comfort from me today brother man, for none will comfort. Dig deep into your faith and if you can, be her rock for all your tomorrows.

August 17th, 2018 04:30

Many hands come from the sun & moon
Laura🌻 said:

We accept you in your ups and downs ...
Share all you want...
We’ll hold your hand and let you cry...
Because, my friend, we DO care!ā¤ļø

August 17th, 2018 03:55

A cry of more light
Goldfinch60 said:

This is so hard Dan but support is out there in many ways. Your words will help you and you know that the light will be there for you.
Bless you Dan.

August 17th, 2018 00:50

A cry of more light
Christina8 said:

There are no words. Having gone through it with twins......I just want to say you are doing a super job, Dan!

August 16th, 2018 19:05

A cry of more light
Laura🌻 said:

My dear Dan,

This truly saddens me!

If you need to cry...cry!
No matter what, the need to cry is often necessary! Work it through together with your lady! Cry together!
Embracing life’s difficulties...and this is certainly one of them...is another opportunity for you and your lady to grow even closer together!
I know you’ll be open to face this loss! In doing so, you will mend that soul!

As in the song, ā€œOlder Chestsā€...
ā€œLike a crack in a wall
Starting small, and grow in time...ā€
If that small crack isn’t repaired, it will grow! It needs to be resolved!
You and your lady need to mend yourselves!
ā€œHarmony and balance from life is all I needā€
ā€œ No blame lives in what will be willā€
Que serĆ” serĆ”!

Sending an abundance of love your way!

~Laura~


August 16th, 2018 11:13

A cry of more light
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dan. It\'s time to weep. I scolded myself sometimes at some funerals/thanksgiving tribute services, where I did not weep. I suppose though, it depends how close we are to the person.

August 16th, 2018 10:01

A cry of more light
sylviasearcher said:

šŸ˜ŖšŸ’œ

August 16th, 2018 09:42

Rambling thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:

Your journey will be filled with joy, light and love.

August 15th, 2018 00:37

My affirmation
dusk arising said:

That world is the here and now. Your message is wholesome and true.
Sadly, many minds will not listen.

August 13th, 2018 15:51

My affirmation
orchidee said:

You breathing there still?! A fine write Dan.

August 13th, 2018 13:51

My affirmation
Crystal Hope said:

An incredible read. Well done penning and thought.

August 13th, 2018 12:15

My affirmation
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Dan, I am sure your family will be wonderful in your and their future.

August 13th, 2018 07:58

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
sylviasearcher said:

I had to read your poem because it was about my favourite superhero, with a hint of my favourite super villain (the joker).

Was Harley Quinn out?

Seriously though. I know batman is less super hero.and more super rich. But he reaches towards strength and light from so much darkness inside.

And he has a batcave.

I\'m not a big comic reader, but I don\'t think Harley Quinn managed the same rising from her darkness. She.seems more compelled towards it. But I\'m still rooting for her. Won\'t give up rooting!



August 13th, 2018 01:14

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
onepauly said:

quite the story.
did it really happen?

August 12th, 2018 20:47

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Brother_Kane said:

Not all superhero’s wear capes... but BatDan does šŸ˜‚ would of been funny to see batman saving some kid from getting beaten up and I bet for on lookers it was a sight to be hold šŸ˜‚

August 12th, 2018 12:29

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Reyas said:

Amazing poet during the day, superhero by night? What can’t you do? You write does has a lot of truth though, we all play both sides of the spectrum. If you need a robin though, I’m one message away. :)

August 12th, 2018 09:12

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
Poetic Dan said:

All dogs are mine, I\'m part Dolittle too.
Nothing can stand in my way
I\'m taking over the world

August 12th, 2018 07:45

Na na na na Na na na na BatDan
orchidee said:

You two on telly? BatDan and BatDog? Will the dog take part, or is it just wanting food titbits?! heehee.

August 12th, 2018 07:18

You\'re all in my cup
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all changing all the time and the positive change that has come over you is so wonderful.
As for the tea we drink real tea, Rwanda/Burundi, which we get from a nearby tea and coffee specialist shop, none of this teabag nonsense. I am just about to make the first cuppa of the day.

August 12th, 2018 00:13

You\'re all in my cup
orchidee said:

You had that cuppa?!

August 11th, 2018 11:02

You\'re all in my cup
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

You got it my dear man!

Beautiful words to stand by...

ā€œUnderstanding this power I hold
I’ll now be nothing but a host.ā€

That’s exactly what we are...
A host for all the love and
benevolence we can muster up for ourselves and everyone within our circle!

I’ve seen such a wonderful and positive change in your writings since the first time I read your poetry on this site! To me this indicates that there’s a wonderful and positive change within YOU! That’s a beautiful thing!

~Laura~


August 11th, 2018 08:57

A rhyme a day...
Goldfinch60 said:

Some people just do not listen, they may hear but not listen.

In your life though you are listening to yourself and going forward with patience and understanding.

Keep moving forward in harmony Dan, life is wondrous.

August 11th, 2018 00:18

A rhyme a day...
orchidee said:

Doh! And there\'s me thinking that you (and I) are perfect. Well, are we 99% perfect? heehee.
A rhyme a day keep the doctor away? Like an apple does? Who ate all me apples, let alone me pies?
I must put this sherry down and stop rambling. lol.

August 10th, 2018 08:05

A rhyme a day...
sylviasearcher said:

Oh happy campers lol šŸ˜‚



August 10th, 2018 04:50



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