Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
My inner child say be fearless and brave
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
My inner child say be fearless and brave
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
orchidee said:
There you all are - a fine poem and pics!
July 18th, 2018 08:12
orchidee said:
There you all are - a fine poem and pics!
July 18th, 2018 08:12
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Goldfinch60 said:
May your children go through their worlds in joy, wonder and love.
July 18th, 2018 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May your children go through their worlds in joy, wonder and love.
July 18th, 2018 08:00
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - lovely piece of writing Dan - Straight from your warm heart this birthday love-filled poem which I am sure Gabriel will treasure. Great to read your caring words my friend.
July 18th, 2018 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - lovely piece of writing Dan - Straight from your warm heart this birthday love-filled poem which I am sure Gabriel will treasure. Great to read your caring words my friend.
July 18th, 2018 05:34
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We are what we are and that comes to us through our experiences in life and experience cannot be taught.
July 18th, 2018 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We are what we are and that comes to us through our experiences in life and experience cannot be taught.
July 18th, 2018 00:24
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Rainbow said:
very good expressive poem.
I like how you have expressed yourself here and your thoughts
July 17th, 2018 14:17
Rainbow said:
very good expressive poem.
I like how you have expressed yourself here and your thoughts
July 17th, 2018 14:17
Antagonist vs Antonyms
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN for giving us some great FOOD for THOUGHT on a Tuesday Morning. Thanks GOD that MODERN (21st C) POETRY is not a slave to Spelling ~ Grammar ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm or even Reason ~ we all have a carte blanche to write as the MUSE moves and damn OFSTED and the Critics ! Love your POEM ~ Perfect as presented but there is a PARADOX. I teach my Students that SELF RESPECT & SELF WORTH are very important traits in self development and life. All my students are VOCATIONAL ~ Caterers ~ Hair & Beauty ~ Pre-Nursing ~ Lab Technicians ~ Builders ~ Engineers etc. They all need SELF RESPECT in their Trades. The GOOD BOOK teaches \"Don\'t let a Man or Woman consider themselves better than they are !\" So it is all about the equilibrium between SELF RESPECT and RESPECT for OTHERS. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN for giving us some great FOOD for THOUGHT on a Tuesday Morning. Thanks GOD that MODERN (21st C) POETRY is not a slave to Spelling ~ Grammar ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm or even Reason ~ we all have a carte blanche to write as the MUSE moves and damn OFSTED and the Critics ! Love your POEM ~ Perfect as presented but there is a PARADOX. I teach my Students that SELF RESPECT & SELF WORTH are very important traits in self development and life. All my students are VOCATIONAL ~ Caterers ~ Hair & Beauty ~ Pre-Nursing ~ Lab Technicians ~ Builders ~ Engineers etc. They all need SELF RESPECT in their Trades. The GOOD BOOK teaches \"Don\'t let a Man or Woman consider themselves better than they are !\" So it is all about the equilibrium between SELF RESPECT and RESPECT for OTHERS. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2018 06:02
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Fay Slimm. said:
Really wise answers to these jibes and pokes by those who as yet have no idea of just who we all are....... a clever way of avoiding bad confrontation and am putting this needed reminder among my favourites. Thanks a load Dan
July 17th, 2018 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Really wise answers to these jibes and pokes by those who as yet have no idea of just who we all are....... a clever way of avoiding bad confrontation and am putting this needed reminder among my favourites. Thanks a load Dan
July 17th, 2018 05:23
Antagonist vs Antonyms
onepauly said:
knowing our worth goes a long way.
interesting.
July 17th, 2018 04:11
onepauly said:
knowing our worth goes a long way.
interesting.
July 17th, 2018 04:11
Why I love everyones thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write PD we write hoping that others will read our work.
July 16th, 2018 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write PD we write hoping that others will read our work.
July 16th, 2018 08:10
Why I love everyones thoughts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN you have touched on an important aspect of what MPS is all about ~ We are Family ! If NOBODY reads or comments on one of our Poems ~ THE POEM DOES NOT EXIST ~ OK. I try to encourage NEW POETS and explain to them that MPS is all about READING & COMMENTING ! Thanks for reading & commenting on mine. We have a heritage of 10,000 Years of ORAL & WRITTEN POETRY ~ Man is a poetic Animal ! I love FUSIONS because you can add an actual ODE instead of just commenting ~ awesome ! Please check my latest FUSION on PRAYER ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 16th, 2018 07:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN you have touched on an important aspect of what MPS is all about ~ We are Family ! If NOBODY reads or comments on one of our Poems ~ THE POEM DOES NOT EXIST ~ OK. I try to encourage NEW POETS and explain to them that MPS is all about READING & COMMENTING ! Thanks for reading & commenting on mine. We have a heritage of 10,000 Years of ORAL & WRITTEN POETRY ~ Man is a poetic Animal ! I love FUSIONS because you can add an actual ODE instead of just commenting ~ awesome ! Please check my latest FUSION on PRAYER ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 16th, 2018 07:53
Why I love everyones thoughts
onepauly said:
everyone has a tale to tell.
great write.
July 16th, 2018 07:39
onepauly said:
everyone has a tale to tell.
great write.
July 16th, 2018 07:39
Why I love everyones thoughts
E-Poems said:
I LOVE that picture and quote so much! You my friend have a special talent. a brilliant mind and insanely good thought process. I admire you daily. ~ E
July 16th, 2018 06:52
E-Poems said:
I LOVE that picture and quote so much! You my friend have a special talent. a brilliant mind and insanely good thought process. I admire you daily. ~ E
July 16th, 2018 06:52
Why I love everyones thoughts
Heartwriter said:
You are always noticed as a great guy and a wonderful mind.
July 16th, 2018 06:41
Heartwriter said:
You are always noticed as a great guy and a wonderful mind.
July 16th, 2018 06:41
Magnetic poetic fun
dusk arising said:
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the fridge door. My muse named Beko or Hotpoint.
A great idea.
July 15th, 2018 15:59
dusk arising said:
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the fridge door. My muse named Beko or Hotpoint.
A great idea.
July 15th, 2018 15:59
4am Questions
E-Poems said:
Oh god I can relate to these questions far too well! 4am is prime thinking time, about the world we live in about the universe. So many questions and little answers. you\'re not alone In your thought process! ~E
July 14th, 2018 10:50
E-Poems said:
Oh god I can relate to these questions far too well! 4am is prime thinking time, about the world we live in about the universe. So many questions and little answers. you\'re not alone In your thought process! ~E
July 14th, 2018 10:50
4am Questions
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve plenty of answers but I need to identify the questions - of dear - it\'s a hard life.
July 14th, 2018 09:54
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve plenty of answers but I need to identify the questions - of dear - it\'s a hard life.
July 14th, 2018 09:54
4am Questions
dusk arising said:
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose these questions because as an intelligent being you have the capacity to be your own \'devils advocate\'. Whilst loving \'our\' world you see its imperfections. Your vivid (poetic) imagination sees other ways and possibly the imperfection of those other ways too..
I would encourage you to entertain the teachings of the Buddha. Walking the beach at night is therapy. \'Where do i fit into this whole damn thing\'.
July 14th, 2018 08:52
dusk arising said:
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose these questions because as an intelligent being you have the capacity to be your own \'devils advocate\'. Whilst loving \'our\' world you see its imperfections. Your vivid (poetic) imagination sees other ways and possibly the imperfection of those other ways too..
I would encourage you to entertain the teachings of the Buddha. Walking the beach at night is therapy. \'Where do i fit into this whole damn thing\'.
July 14th, 2018 08:52
4am Questions
Heartwriter said:
I don\'t have the answers either. I wish the chain had never broke. I would have helped you pick up the rubish. I hate polluted beaches. Fine write!
July 14th, 2018 03:30
Heartwriter said:
I don\'t have the answers either. I wish the chain had never broke. I would have helped you pick up the rubish. I hate polluted beaches. Fine write!
July 14th, 2018 03:30
4am Questions
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno, I was asleep at 4am, not thinking! heehee.
Have to come back and look at these questions again, or some them.
July 14th, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno, I was asleep at 4am, not thinking! heehee.
Have to come back and look at these questions again, or some them.
July 14th, 2018 01:39
Thoughts from body & mind
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thoughts, feelings, emotions...
All an integral part of our being!
Itās up to us to what we do with them!
ā...emotions are more than just triggers
that help us learn from experience, they are the gateway to our very own existence.ā
Very well said!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2018 14:36
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Thoughts, feelings, emotions...
All an integral part of our being!
Itās up to us to what we do with them!
ā...emotions are more than just triggers
that help us learn from experience, they are the gateway to our very own existence.ā
Very well said!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2018 14:36
Thoughts from body & mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions can trigger all thoughts and feelings within us, we just need to go with the ones that will lead us into the light.
July 13th, 2018 08:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions can trigger all thoughts and feelings within us, we just need to go with the ones that will lead us into the light.
July 13th, 2018 08:25
Thoughts from body & mind
orchidee said:
I\'ve often gone by : \'Thoughts lead to feelings; feelings (including emotions) lead to behaviour/actions\'.
So somewhere to start with, we used a brain cell or two to have a thought. Pity mine have gone on holiday. Dunno when they will be back! heehee.
July 13th, 2018 04:44
orchidee said:
I\'ve often gone by : \'Thoughts lead to feelings; feelings (including emotions) lead to behaviour/actions\'.
So somewhere to start with, we used a brain cell or two to have a thought. Pity mine have gone on holiday. Dunno when they will be back! heehee.
July 13th, 2018 04:44
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