Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
When we sway
Goldfinch60 said:
May you sway to the times in your life. We each have our paths to travel, may you go along yours in peace, tranqulity and love.
July 23rd, 2018 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May you sway to the times in your life. We each have our paths to travel, may you go along yours in peace, tranqulity and love.
July 23rd, 2018 00:14
When we sway
poetboy123 said:
Another amazing poem, I found myself connecting with each and every line! We all must strive to achieve something noble and have each others backs at the same time!
July 22nd, 2018 09:59
poetboy123 said:
Another amazing poem, I found myself connecting with each and every line! We all must strive to achieve something noble and have each others backs at the same time!
July 22nd, 2018 09:59
When we sway
dusk arising said:
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation after revelation like a dance to the rhythm of existence itself. Akin to the humdrum of trance there are highs and lows but long may your music play,... dance, sway.... dance away.
July 22nd, 2018 03:47
dusk arising said:
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation after revelation like a dance to the rhythm of existence itself. Akin to the humdrum of trance there are highs and lows but long may your music play,... dance, sway.... dance away.
July 22nd, 2018 03:47
I am assisting are you listening
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write. We can learn from all age groups.
July 22nd, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write. We can learn from all age groups.
July 22nd, 2018 00:31
I am assisting are you listening
dusk arising said:
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to get. Isn\'t it so that in learning every day even our last here will teach us more as we move on to... where...?
July 21st, 2018 09:12
dusk arising said:
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to get. Isn\'t it so that in learning every day even our last here will teach us more as we move on to... where...?
July 21st, 2018 09:12
I am assisting are you listening
Heartwriter said:
Another great write by Dan. The poetic man.
July 21st, 2018 06:07
Heartwriter said:
Another great write by Dan. The poetic man.
July 21st, 2018 06:07
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Goldfinch60 said:
The meeting of souls and minds is the way to be, once they are intertwined the intensity becomes relaxed that you can then move on towards eternity.
July 21st, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The meeting of souls and minds is the way to be, once they are intertwined the intensity becomes relaxed that you can then move on towards eternity.
July 21st, 2018 00:18
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Jenn2009 said:
Wow! I love this thanks Dan.
July 20th, 2018 23:40
Jenn2009 said:
Wow! I love this thanks Dan.
July 20th, 2018 23:40
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
poetboy123 said:
This poem is amazing! I could feel your passion with every word, and just like hodge tiger said this write gives off a wave of sincerity. Often I find that I purposely limit the ways I act to friends and family despite those individuals being the people I can be free with. I am trying to unchain myself in this aspect, but overall this encapsulated that emotion perfectly! Bravo!
July 20th, 2018 17:16
poetboy123 said:
This poem is amazing! I could feel your passion with every word, and just like hodge tiger said this write gives off a wave of sincerity. Often I find that I purposely limit the ways I act to friends and family despite those individuals being the people I can be free with. I am trying to unchain myself in this aspect, but overall this encapsulated that emotion perfectly! Bravo!
July 20th, 2018 17:16
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
onepauly said:
the two and no more.
July 20th, 2018 12:16
onepauly said:
the two and no more.
July 20th, 2018 12:16
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Well done!
July 20th, 2018 11:47
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Well done!
July 20th, 2018 11:47
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
dusk arising said:
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to words quite readily. To pair with a simple soul would not be successful. A kindred spirit is desired and will continue to be desired no matter how sweet are the fruits we taste along our journey.
Here and in \'safe\' company it is easy to share ones thoughts. Elsewhere i\'m wary.
July 20th, 2018 11:46
dusk arising said:
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to words quite readily. To pair with a simple soul would not be successful. A kindred spirit is desired and will continue to be desired no matter how sweet are the fruits we taste along our journey.
Here and in \'safe\' company it is easy to share ones thoughts. Elsewhere i\'m wary.
July 20th, 2018 11:46
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Rainbow said:
i like this its very good. you have expressed your thoughts very well.
Your right we should all feel free with friends or lovers!
July 20th, 2018 11:36
Rainbow said:
i like this its very good. you have expressed your thoughts very well.
Your right we should all feel free with friends or lovers!
July 20th, 2018 11:36
My inner child say be fearless and brave
dusk arising said:
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent writings i feel you do struggle with \'should i or shouldn\'t i say what i want to say.\' Well you\'ve been writing here for a while now and you\'re getting a good reception so i think it\'s fair to say MPS likes you. So get it off ya chest sir... say wotever ya want! (Nike) Just do it!
July 20th, 2018 00:47
dusk arising said:
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent writings i feel you do struggle with \'should i or shouldn\'t i say what i want to say.\' Well you\'ve been writing here for a while now and you\'re getting a good reception so i think it\'s fair to say MPS likes you. So get it off ya chest sir... say wotever ya want! (Nike) Just do it!
July 20th, 2018 00:47
My inner child say be fearless and brave
onepauly said:
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
July 19th, 2018 15:17
onepauly said:
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
July 19th, 2018 15:17
Why I love everyones thoughts
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
If I hadnāt read Spinnerās MURMURATION, I would have totally missed this awesome poem of yours! How the h*** did I miss this one!
āI canāt change the past but I can make my voice pureā...
Great words to adhere to ... by all of us!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 10:58
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
If I hadnāt read Spinnerās MURMURATION, I would have totally missed this awesome poem of yours! How the h*** did I miss this one!
āI canāt change the past but I can make my voice pureā...
Great words to adhere to ... by all of us!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 10:58
My inner child say be fearless and brave
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
My inner child say be fearless and brave
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
orchidee said:
There you all are - a fine poem and pics!
July 18th, 2018 08:12
orchidee said:
There you all are - a fine poem and pics!
July 18th, 2018 08:12
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Goldfinch60 said:
May your children go through their worlds in joy, wonder and love.
July 18th, 2018 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May your children go through their worlds in joy, wonder and love.
July 18th, 2018 08:00
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - lovely piece of writing Dan - Straight from your warm heart this birthday love-filled poem which I am sure Gabriel will treasure. Great to read your caring words my friend.
July 18th, 2018 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - lovely piece of writing Dan - Straight from your warm heart this birthday love-filled poem which I am sure Gabriel will treasure. Great to read your caring words my friend.
July 18th, 2018 05:34
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We are what we are and that comes to us through our experiences in life and experience cannot be taught.
July 18th, 2018 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We are what we are and that comes to us through our experiences in life and experience cannot be taught.
July 18th, 2018 00:24
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Rainbow said:
very good expressive poem.
I like how you have expressed yourself here and your thoughts
July 17th, 2018 14:17
Rainbow said:
very good expressive poem.
I like how you have expressed yourself here and your thoughts
July 17th, 2018 14:17
Antagonist vs Antonyms
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN for giving us some great FOOD for THOUGHT on a Tuesday Morning. Thanks GOD that MODERN (21st C) POETRY is not a slave to Spelling ~ Grammar ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm or even Reason ~ we all have a carte blanche to write as the MUSE moves and damn OFSTED and the Critics ! Love your POEM ~ Perfect as presented but there is a PARADOX. I teach my Students that SELF RESPECT & SELF WORTH are very important traits in self development and life. All my students are VOCATIONAL ~ Caterers ~ Hair & Beauty ~ Pre-Nursing ~ Lab Technicians ~ Builders ~ Engineers etc. They all need SELF RESPECT in their Trades. The GOOD BOOK teaches \"Don\'t let a Man or Woman consider themselves better than they are !\" So it is all about the equilibrium between SELF RESPECT and RESPECT for OTHERS. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAN for giving us some great FOOD for THOUGHT on a Tuesday Morning. Thanks GOD that MODERN (21st C) POETRY is not a slave to Spelling ~ Grammar ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm or even Reason ~ we all have a carte blanche to write as the MUSE moves and damn OFSTED and the Critics ! Love your POEM ~ Perfect as presented but there is a PARADOX. I teach my Students that SELF RESPECT & SELF WORTH are very important traits in self development and life. All my students are VOCATIONAL ~ Caterers ~ Hair & Beauty ~ Pre-Nursing ~ Lab Technicians ~ Builders ~ Engineers etc. They all need SELF RESPECT in their Trades. The GOOD BOOK teaches \"Don\'t let a Man or Woman consider themselves better than they are !\" So it is all about the equilibrium between SELF RESPECT and RESPECT for OTHERS. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2018 06:02
Antagonist vs Antonyms
Fay Slimm. said:
Really wise answers to these jibes and pokes by those who as yet have no idea of just who we all are....... a clever way of avoiding bad confrontation and am putting this needed reminder among my favourites. Thanks a load Dan
July 17th, 2018 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Really wise answers to these jibes and pokes by those who as yet have no idea of just who we all are....... a clever way of avoiding bad confrontation and am putting this needed reminder among my favourites. Thanks a load Dan
July 17th, 2018 05:23
Antagonist vs Antonyms
onepauly said:
knowing our worth goes a long way.
interesting.
July 17th, 2018 04:11
onepauly said:
knowing our worth goes a long way.
interesting.
July 17th, 2018 04:11
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