Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
A lullaby
Heartwriter said:
Dan, this is so tender and sweet. Loved it. Great dad you are.
July 24th, 2018 06:13
Heartwriter said:
Dan, this is so tender and sweet. Loved it. Great dad you are.
July 24th, 2018 06:13
A lullaby
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes a healing piece of tender care and wise advice Dan - and a fine tribute from a Dad who knows how to comfort his children. A lovely read.
July 24th, 2018 05:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes a healing piece of tender care and wise advice Dan - and a fine tribute from a Dad who knows how to comfort his children. A lovely read.
July 24th, 2018 05:14
A lullaby
sylviasearcher said:
Was this for one of your children?
If so we were simultaneously writing about our children!
I wonder if it is the time of year?
My boys never stop teaching me and I can never stop believing in them!
July 24th, 2018 02:37
sylviasearcher said:
Was this for one of your children?
If so we were simultaneously writing about our children!
I wonder if it is the time of year?
My boys never stop teaching me and I can never stop believing in them!
July 24th, 2018 02:37
It went like this
sylviasearcher said:
Hey this really resonated with the theme of a book I\'m slowly writing...
Thanks for sharing
July 23rd, 2018 06:31
sylviasearcher said:
Hey this really resonated with the theme of a book I\'m slowly writing...
Thanks for sharing
July 23rd, 2018 06:31
It went like this
Heartwriter said:
This was a super write Dan. Most people do not open up and share the inner self. I think it is a part of the healing process. Pleased to know you at least somewhat.
July 23rd, 2018 03:52
Heartwriter said:
This was a super write Dan. Most people do not open up and share the inner self. I think it is a part of the healing process. Pleased to know you at least somewhat.
July 23rd, 2018 03:52
It went like this
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Dan.
Meanwhile - people wish they did not have to listen to me singing. Why have the shops run out of ear plugs?! heehee.
July 23rd, 2018 02:01
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Dan.
Meanwhile - people wish they did not have to listen to me singing. Why have the shops run out of ear plugs?! heehee.
July 23rd, 2018 02:01
It went like this
dusk arising said:
Here we are like a brotherhood of understanding and nurture. Its good that you are able to let your soul speak so freely among us and your words are learned - a lesson for us all. Of humanity, dignity and self exploration for the purpose of being the finest you can be.
Great to read your open heart therapy.
July 23rd, 2018 01:51
dusk arising said:
Here we are like a brotherhood of understanding and nurture. Its good that you are able to let your soul speak so freely among us and your words are learned - a lesson for us all. Of humanity, dignity and self exploration for the purpose of being the finest you can be.
Great to read your open heart therapy.
July 23rd, 2018 01:51
It went like this
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, the \"experts\" may know what it is but it is people who can LISTEN to you who can help the most, talking to those who listen can cure many things.
I am a listener and I have seen it happen to people who talk to me who know that I am LISTENING and understanding their troubles but not necessarily giving them a cure.
July 23rd, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, the \"experts\" may know what it is but it is people who can LISTEN to you who can help the most, talking to those who listen can cure many things.
I am a listener and I have seen it happen to people who talk to me who know that I am LISTENING and understanding their troubles but not necessarily giving them a cure.
July 23rd, 2018 01:45
It went like this
Rainbow said:
very well expressed
i too have possible CPTSD.
You have made some good points in this poem as well
July 23rd, 2018 01:35
Rainbow said:
very well expressed
i too have possible CPTSD.
You have made some good points in this poem as well
July 23rd, 2018 01:35
When we sway
Goldfinch60 said:
May you sway to the times in your life. We each have our paths to travel, may you go along yours in peace, tranqulity and love.
July 23rd, 2018 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May you sway to the times in your life. We each have our paths to travel, may you go along yours in peace, tranqulity and love.
July 23rd, 2018 00:14
When we sway
poetboy123 said:
Another amazing poem, I found myself connecting with each and every line! We all must strive to achieve something noble and have each others backs at the same time!
July 22nd, 2018 09:59
poetboy123 said:
Another amazing poem, I found myself connecting with each and every line! We all must strive to achieve something noble and have each others backs at the same time!
July 22nd, 2018 09:59
When we sway
dusk arising said:
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation after revelation like a dance to the rhythm of existence itself. Akin to the humdrum of trance there are highs and lows but long may your music play,... dance, sway.... dance away.
July 22nd, 2018 03:47
dusk arising said:
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation after revelation like a dance to the rhythm of existence itself. Akin to the humdrum of trance there are highs and lows but long may your music play,... dance, sway.... dance away.
July 22nd, 2018 03:47
I am assisting are you listening
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write. We can learn from all age groups.
July 22nd, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write. We can learn from all age groups.
July 22nd, 2018 00:31
I am assisting are you listening
dusk arising said:
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to get. Isn\'t it so that in learning every day even our last here will teach us more as we move on to... where...?
July 21st, 2018 09:12
dusk arising said:
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to get. Isn\'t it so that in learning every day even our last here will teach us more as we move on to... where...?
July 21st, 2018 09:12
I am assisting are you listening
Heartwriter said:
Another great write by Dan. The poetic man.
July 21st, 2018 06:07
Heartwriter said:
Another great write by Dan. The poetic man.
July 21st, 2018 06:07
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Goldfinch60 said:
The meeting of souls and minds is the way to be, once they are intertwined the intensity becomes relaxed that you can then move on towards eternity.
July 21st, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The meeting of souls and minds is the way to be, once they are intertwined the intensity becomes relaxed that you can then move on towards eternity.
July 21st, 2018 00:18
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Jenn2009 said:
Wow! I love this thanks Dan.
July 20th, 2018 23:40
Jenn2009 said:
Wow! I love this thanks Dan.
July 20th, 2018 23:40
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
poetboy123 said:
This poem is amazing! I could feel your passion with every word, and just like hodge tiger said this write gives off a wave of sincerity. Often I find that I purposely limit the ways I act to friends and family despite those individuals being the people I can be free with. I am trying to unchain myself in this aspect, but overall this encapsulated that emotion perfectly! Bravo!
July 20th, 2018 17:16
poetboy123 said:
This poem is amazing! I could feel your passion with every word, and just like hodge tiger said this write gives off a wave of sincerity. Often I find that I purposely limit the ways I act to friends and family despite those individuals being the people I can be free with. I am trying to unchain myself in this aspect, but overall this encapsulated that emotion perfectly! Bravo!
July 20th, 2018 17:16
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
onepauly said:
the two and no more.
July 20th, 2018 12:16
onepauly said:
the two and no more.
July 20th, 2018 12:16
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Well done!
July 20th, 2018 11:47
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Well done!
July 20th, 2018 11:47
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
dusk arising said:
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to words quite readily. To pair with a simple soul would not be successful. A kindred spirit is desired and will continue to be desired no matter how sweet are the fruits we taste along our journey.
Here and in \'safe\' company it is easy to share ones thoughts. Elsewhere i\'m wary.
July 20th, 2018 11:46
dusk arising said:
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to words quite readily. To pair with a simple soul would not be successful. A kindred spirit is desired and will continue to be desired no matter how sweet are the fruits we taste along our journey.
Here and in \'safe\' company it is easy to share ones thoughts. Elsewhere i\'m wary.
July 20th, 2018 11:46
Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get
Rainbow said:
i like this its very good. you have expressed your thoughts very well.
Your right we should all feel free with friends or lovers!
July 20th, 2018 11:36
Rainbow said:
i like this its very good. you have expressed your thoughts very well.
Your right we should all feel free with friends or lovers!
July 20th, 2018 11:36
My inner child say be fearless and brave
dusk arising said:
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent writings i feel you do struggle with \'should i or shouldn\'t i say what i want to say.\' Well you\'ve been writing here for a while now and you\'re getting a good reception so i think it\'s fair to say MPS likes you. So get it off ya chest sir... say wotever ya want! (Nike) Just do it!
July 20th, 2018 00:47
dusk arising said:
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent writings i feel you do struggle with \'should i or shouldn\'t i say what i want to say.\' Well you\'ve been writing here for a while now and you\'re getting a good reception so i think it\'s fair to say MPS likes you. So get it off ya chest sir... say wotever ya want! (Nike) Just do it!
July 20th, 2018 00:47
My inner child say be fearless and brave
onepauly said:
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
July 19th, 2018 15:17
onepauly said:
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
July 19th, 2018 15:17
Why I love everyones thoughts
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
If I hadnāt read Spinnerās MURMURATION, I would have totally missed this awesome poem of yours! How the h*** did I miss this one!
āI canāt change the past but I can make my voice pureā...
Great words to adhere to ... by all of us!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 10:58
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
If I hadnāt read Spinnerās MURMURATION, I would have totally missed this awesome poem of yours! How the h*** did I miss this one!
āI canāt change the past but I can make my voice pureā...
Great words to adhere to ... by all of us!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 10:58
My inner child say be fearless and brave
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
orchidee said:
Me bit confused ,with all those \'whos\'. Do you mean \'yoo-hoo?!\' Now I\'ve lost the plot! lol.
July 19th, 2018 10:36
My inner child say be fearless and brave
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDNāT BE YOU!!
Write to your heartās content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 06:14
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
dusk arising said:
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his father is today or in his years to come is beyond anyone\'s control. But he WILL see words of a caring man. Maybe you\'re not buying him rich mans trinkets but plain for all to read you\'re giving of yourself. Your heart, your passion, your love.
Excellent emotive writing.
July 18th, 2018 18:26
1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Happy birthday to your son, Gabriel! ( love the name)
Great pics! Thank you for sharing!
Your poem was penned with the most valuable ink there in the world...the ink of LOVE!
Your sentiments, your love, your caring heart for your children transcends all! Youāre an amazing dad to those two amazing children!
āFor the kids I am raising that help raise meā...
Truer than true words from the great song by Satsang, āBeautiful Dayāsā!
Enjoy Gabrielās birthday celebration!š
~Laura~
July 18th, 2018 09:08
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