Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Turned
poetboy123 said:
The simplest ideas can be the most difficult to grasp, another brilliant piece Dan!
October 26th, 2018 16:03
poetboy123 said:
The simplest ideas can be the most difficult to grasp, another brilliant piece Dan!
October 26th, 2018 16:03
Turned
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s a great quote from Virginia Wolf! Not too long ago, I saw the film based on her life starring Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton! Phenomenal!!
Continue to Keep the float above !
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 10:03
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
That’s a great quote from Virginia Wolf! Not too long ago, I saw the film based on her life starring Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton! Phenomenal!!
Continue to Keep the float above !
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 10:03
Turned
sylviasearcher said:
Short but powerful. The idea of a battle and a blessing resonates with me. It reminds me of the journey you go on if you read John Keats early and later work.
I love that quote too. I was trying to express exactly that earlier today but I\'m no Virginia Woolf.
October 26th, 2018 04:12
sylviasearcher said:
Short but powerful. The idea of a battle and a blessing resonates with me. It reminds me of the journey you go on if you read John Keats early and later work.
I love that quote too. I was trying to express exactly that earlier today but I\'m no Virginia Woolf.
October 26th, 2018 04:12
Living from my soul
sylviasearcher said:
I often wonder if feeling deeoly, strongly, intensely is a blessing or a curse. But if I had the choice I would not be without it. You have a rich soul Dan. Treasure yourself đź’ś
October 26th, 2018 01:08
sylviasearcher said:
I often wonder if feeling deeoly, strongly, intensely is a blessing or a curse. But if I had the choice I would not be without it. You have a rich soul Dan. Treasure yourself đź’ś
October 26th, 2018 01:08
Living from my soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Standing on your boulder you can look down at your past but you can now look up into your future knowing that the future will be full of joy and love.
October 26th, 2018 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Standing on your boulder you can look down at your past but you can now look up into your future knowing that the future will be full of joy and love.
October 26th, 2018 00:57
Living from my soul
dusk arising said:
Lovely mate! Big smiles here. Wicked picture.
October 25th, 2018 12:47
dusk arising said:
Lovely mate! Big smiles here. Wicked picture.
October 25th, 2018 12:47
Living from my soul
orchidee said:
I was gonna waffle too, but Laura beat me to it. lol. A fine write Dan.
October 25th, 2018 11:08
orchidee said:
I was gonna waffle too, but Laura beat me to it. lol. A fine write Dan.
October 25th, 2018 11:08
Living from my soul
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Awesome pic!
Awesome video!
Your poem expresses the pain of love!
The constant struggle within you is causing
all your pain as I can discern from your written words...
“Yet my brain can still flick between what it wants and what is real
As I remind it we are happy for all that we feel”
Until you can fully come to terms with that struggle within you, that battle will continue! So stay strong, stand proud, shed the tears so that “anger doesn’t build a wall”!
The years do go by fast. Your children will be adults sooner than you think! They’ll be free to be with you anytime they wish! They’ll need you “whole”! Right now this is what you’re trying to accomplish! Stay strong...don’t cave in!
Enough of my “waffling”!
~Laura~
October 25th, 2018 11:04
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Awesome pic!
Awesome video!
Your poem expresses the pain of love!
The constant struggle within you is causing
all your pain as I can discern from your written words...
“Yet my brain can still flick between what it wants and what is real
As I remind it we are happy for all that we feel”
Until you can fully come to terms with that struggle within you, that battle will continue! So stay strong, stand proud, shed the tears so that “anger doesn’t build a wall”!
The years do go by fast. Your children will be adults sooner than you think! They’ll be free to be with you anytime they wish! They’ll need you “whole”! Right now this is what you’re trying to accomplish! Stay strong...don’t cave in!
Enough of my “waffling”!
~Laura~
October 25th, 2018 11:04
Old mixing with new
Goldfinch60 said:
You must have the old to give you the experience so that you can move into the new you, that new you will show you the way.
October 25th, 2018 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
You must have the old to give you the experience so that you can move into the new you, that new you will show you the way.
October 25th, 2018 01:21
A beautiful story I have to share
Magic Maker said:
I love this :) If only more people could appreciate our animals in this world. They’re more like people when you look at it closely!
October 24th, 2018 13:56
Magic Maker said:
I love this :) If only more people could appreciate our animals in this world. They’re more like people when you look at it closely!
October 24th, 2018 13:56
Old mixing with new
dusk arising said:
I am reading that a weight is lifting off your shoulders.
Once again i think of desiderata, \"you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars\".
Go hug a tree, love is everything!
October 24th, 2018 06:49
dusk arising said:
I am reading that a weight is lifting off your shoulders.
Once again i think of desiderata, \"you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars\".
Go hug a tree, love is everything!
October 24th, 2018 06:49
Old mixing with new
sylviasearcher said:
It was like you were painting a canvas with a sense of freedom
October 24th, 2018 04:58
sylviasearcher said:
It was like you were painting a canvas with a sense of freedom
October 24th, 2018 04:58
A beautiful story I have to share
A.H. Browning said:
This is wonderful. Thank you very much.
October 22nd, 2018 19:16
A.H. Browning said:
This is wonderful. Thank you very much.
October 22nd, 2018 19:16
A beautiful story I have to share
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving write. The wisdom of children can astound us.
October 22nd, 2018 12:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving write. The wisdom of children can astound us.
October 22nd, 2018 12:08
A beautiful story I have to share
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - a pleasure to read it - thanks for posting
October 22nd, 2018 07:52
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - a pleasure to read it - thanks for posting
October 22nd, 2018 07:52
A beautiful story I have to share
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. I wish I would learn from my \'watchdog\' Fido. he barks at any poems not marked 18+, which should be marked so! heehee. (me being barmy with imaginary dog).
October 22nd, 2018 03:31
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. I wish I would learn from my \'watchdog\' Fido. he barks at any poems not marked 18+, which should be marked so! heehee. (me being barmy with imaginary dog).
October 22nd, 2018 03:31
Mind at the door
dusk arising said:
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were yesterday with your dog walking video. I\'m not brave enough to do that. Hold your head up, it suits you. And when you feel down,, allow yourself those times, you know they will pass. There now follows a cliche.... \'tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life\' ..... smile often.
October 21st, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were yesterday with your dog walking video. I\'m not brave enough to do that. Hold your head up, it suits you. And when you feel down,, allow yourself those times, you know they will pass. There now follows a cliche.... \'tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life\' ..... smile often.
October 21st, 2018 16:13
Mind at the door
orchidee said:
If this helps, or rather, on a spiritual plane, we could say: \'God has not given us a spirit of fear, but a spirit of power, love, and a sound mind\' (2Timothy1 v.7). A verse I need to apply to myself more too.
October 21st, 2018 11:49
orchidee said:
If this helps, or rather, on a spiritual plane, we could say: \'God has not given us a spirit of fear, but a spirit of power, love, and a sound mind\' (2Timothy1 v.7). A verse I need to apply to myself more too.
October 21st, 2018 11:49
Mind at the door
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Keep up this new pattern and you’ll be just FINE! I feel I’m witnessing the rebirth of an enlightened human being! Continue your journey!
Fearless
Identifiable
Non resistant
Elated
~Laura~
October 21st, 2018 09:54
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Keep up this new pattern and you’ll be just FINE! I feel I’m witnessing the rebirth of an enlightened human being! Continue your journey!
Fearless
Identifiable
Non resistant
Elated
~Laura~
October 21st, 2018 09:54
I feel the chains breaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderfully positive write. You have become yourself and dug your way out of the darkness into the light. The light will always be with you and your children.
Fabulous strong video - yes just be yourself, and go on into your future with the strength that you have newly found.
Andy
October 21st, 2018 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderfully positive write. You have become yourself and dug your way out of the darkness into the light. The light will always be with you and your children.
Fabulous strong video - yes just be yourself, and go on into your future with the strength that you have newly found.
Andy
October 21st, 2018 00:11
I feel the chains breaking
Shallsea said:
I love your vulnerability.. very beautiful!! Self love is key
October 20th, 2018 19:16
Shallsea said:
I love your vulnerability.. very beautiful!! Self love is key
October 20th, 2018 19:16
I feel the chains breaking
orchidee said:
All you gotta fear, all anyone gotta fear, is my singing! heehee. If only that was all there was to be fearful and anxious about!
October 20th, 2018 11:46
orchidee said:
All you gotta fear, all anyone gotta fear, is my singing! heehee. If only that was all there was to be fearful and anxious about!
October 20th, 2018 11:46
I feel the chains breaking
dusk arising said:
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend highly:-
http://mwkworks.com/desiderata.html
If it is already known to you then i apologise. Printing off a copy and hanging it upon the loo door is a good idea. For in those quiet contemplative moments alone one can often find a phrase to uplift thoughts.
October 20th, 2018 10:19
dusk arising said:
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend highly:-
http://mwkworks.com/desiderata.html
If it is already known to you then i apologise. Printing off a copy and hanging it upon the loo door is a good idea. For in those quiet contemplative moments alone one can often find a phrase to uplift thoughts.
October 20th, 2018 10:19
Learning
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful write. WE re always looking for that way forward but be sure that the way is there and we will find it as we move towards eternity.
October 16th, 2018 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful write. WE re always looking for that way forward but be sure that the way is there and we will find it as we move towards eternity.
October 16th, 2018 00:30
Learning
orchidee said:
Erm, things didn\'t quite work out for me. I didn\'t believe \'Pride goes before a fall\'. I thought \'Oh I can cross this canyon blindfold\' . Then I fell in the ravineeeeeeeeeeee. Good acting there, innit? Good sound effects. Could ya almost see me falling? heehee.
October 15th, 2018 11:37
orchidee said:
Erm, things didn\'t quite work out for me. I didn\'t believe \'Pride goes before a fall\'. I thought \'Oh I can cross this canyon blindfold\' . Then I fell in the ravineeeeeeeeeeee. Good acting there, innit? Good sound effects. Could ya almost see me falling? heehee.
October 15th, 2018 11:37
Stand out!
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within ourselves must be shown to others, maybe the scientists can make a peace disease that would destroy enmity.
October 14th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within ourselves must be shown to others, maybe the scientists can make a peace disease that would destroy enmity.
October 14th, 2018 00:46
Stand out!
dusk arising said:
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the peacemakers camoflage.
October 13th, 2018 07:46
dusk arising said:
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the peacemakers camoflage.
October 13th, 2018 07:46
What being human is to me
dusk arising said:
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18
dusk arising said:
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18
This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Love the positivity in this writing!
Great choice of pic and quotation!
“I embody the inspiration to become more than I could.”
You have been an “open book to read “ and to graciously “receive”.
This wonderful world with all its glory is yours to embrace and it to embrace you...a star amongst us!
We’re blessed to know and learn from you!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 12:15
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Love the positivity in this writing!
Great choice of pic and quotation!
“I embody the inspiration to become more than I could.”
You have been an “open book to read “ and to graciously “receive”.
This wonderful world with all its glory is yours to embrace and it to embrace you...a star amongst us!
We’re blessed to know and learn from you!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 12:15
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