Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



All About Hats
Doggerel Dave said:

A battle of the limericks is there
Because Teddy is up for the dare;
But what she hasn’t done though
Is send a picture to go
Of all the hats on her stand in her care.

Come on Teddy - do an artistic arrangement.


August 28th, 2024 02:17

All About Hats
Michael Edwards said:

There was a young lady called Teddy
Who wore a big hat on her heady
‘twas tied ‘neath her chin with fine gauze
And the reason for this was because
In the wind her big hat was unsteady


August 28th, 2024 01:28

Bello Casentino
Dan Williams said:

Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.

August 28th, 2024 00:40

Bello Casentino
MendedFences27 said:

Wonderful images. Like being in the forest. Well-spoken in a few words and yet picturesque. Loved \"The Ghost of Dante.\" It set the tone. - Phil A.

August 27th, 2024 18:38

Bello Casentino
Doggerel Dave said:

Richness of sensation provided in so very few words, Teddy. Often I pass poems relating to nature by, but here as I put my nose close to the screen, I swear I smelt that richness.

August 27th, 2024 07:06

Bello Casentino
sorenbarrett said:

What an image you paint in poetic ink. It is not just black and white but contains the colors of ghosts and past rides in dusk over hallowed ground. I can hear the heart beat of the forest and the breath of the horse. Lovely

August 27th, 2024 05:48

Senryu to Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful senryu Teddy.

Andy

August 27th, 2024 01:20

Senryu to Love
Dan Williams said:

Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.

August 27th, 2024 00:02

Senryu to Love
Thomas W Case said:

You hit the nail on the head sweet Teddy.

August 26th, 2024 21:36

Senryu to Love
Bella Shepard said:

Golden my dear!! And did I mention perfect?

August 26th, 2024 14:37

Senryu to Love
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning senryu!! 👍
Very romantic 😍
and refreshing too!! 🏆
My pleasure to read
today thank you!! 😊
Best wishes 🙏 🌹 Thad

August 26th, 2024 09:48

Senryu to Love
Doggerel Dave said:

Words (perish the thought!) can be false, whereas actions speak for themselves. A truth so well poemed, Teddy.

Does that mean that poetry is now redundant??? 🤣


August 26th, 2024 07:13

Senryu to Love
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, words can be precious but the proof of the pudding is unquestionably in actions. Nothing proves love more than what a dear one does, not what they say. Someone with no words can be the most caring and thoughtful of all. A lovely senryu. Have a beautiful day dear poet. 🌹

August 26th, 2024 06:21

Senryu to Love
sorenbarrett said:

This strikes deep to the heart of anyone who loves. Is it love or words? Concisely and beautifully said my friend.

August 26th, 2024 05:20

Inside Out
Bella Shepard said:

Your words strike a note deep in the heart, for everyone who has had those darkest days, that hope is there and light will find them. Thank you dear Teddy, this poem is especially appreciated.

August 25th, 2024 10:42

Temporal Lobe 
Bella Shepard said:

Oh Teddy, the story of my life. How did you know. I\'m sorry, what was I talking about?

August 25th, 2024 10:33

The day of New To You Belongs
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images portrayed in this poem that merges fantasy and reality into a single shining morning. Lovely my friend

August 25th, 2024 06:11

Inside Out
aDarkerMind said:

nailed it indeed Teddy...

what a talent you are.

August 25th, 2024 01:37

Just a Dream I Had
sorenbarrett said:

We all have a dream song and this was a good one. A fun story that was upbeat and heart warming.

August 24th, 2024 19:04

Temporal Lobe 
Goldfinch60 said:

I thought there was something strange in the post yesterday!

Andy

August 24th, 2024 01:39

Temporal Lobe 
Thomas W Case said:

I can relate. lol

August 23rd, 2024 15:18

Temporal Lobe 
MendedFences27 said:

That\'s me, just a minion with no skills and dangerous around things that break. A good laugh. What more can one ask for? - Phil A.

August 23rd, 2024 14:57

Temporal Lobe 
sorenbarrett said:

You talking about me? I\'ve been there, done that but can\'t remember when. A most fun read Teddy you had me smiling.

August 23rd, 2024 05:57

Temporal Lobe 
Cassie58 said:

Ha ha. That is so me. That’s how my poetry is at the moment. I’ve hardly penned anything new for quite some time. You know Teddy, this little gem will be relatable to many. Happy Friday dear poet 🌹

August 23rd, 2024 04:29

Temporal Lobe 
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m going - doncha know it is wrong to make fun of the afflicted, Teddy? ..... ................................ Now where woz I?

August 23rd, 2024 03:02

A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Thomas W Case said:

Love this—tremendous work.

August 22nd, 2024 17:55

The Perfect Painting
sorenbarrett said:

The description of a friend, lover, nature and all that brings happiness. A most wonderful poem

August 22nd, 2024 05:29

Inside Out
Accidental Poet said:

You just amaze me Teddy. 🌹

August 22nd, 2024 02:11

Inside Out
Goldfinch60 said:

The light will always find its way inot your life Teddy as it always does to mine.

Andy

August 22nd, 2024 01:16

Inside Out
Dan Williams said:

Where do you buy such optimism? I\'ll take a bushel of it! Nice work.

August 21st, 2024 23:59



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