Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Inside Out
Cassie58 said:
Those dark days of loss are so incredibly painful. They have to be worked through. No short cuts. You can measure the love by the strength of the pain experienced. Sometimes that can feel intolerable. And then a glimpse of light. Yes like being reborn. Super writing dear Teddy. I felt these words deeply. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 15:13
Cassie58 said:
Those dark days of loss are so incredibly painful. They have to be worked through. No short cuts. You can measure the love by the strength of the pain experienced. Sometimes that can feel intolerable. And then a glimpse of light. Yes like being reborn. Super writing dear Teddy. I felt these words deeply. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 15:13
Inside Out
Thoughtless said:
Good advice. Timely message. When we are young, we either think we are immortal or have already lived too long. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.
August 21st, 2024 10:52
Thoughtless said:
Good advice. Timely message. When we are young, we either think we are immortal or have already lived too long. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.
August 21st, 2024 10:52
Inside Out
sorenbarrett said:
The inner light becomes an outer glow. Smiles of the heart on the outside grow. Love for what lies within is shown to others through a compassionate grin. Sorry for the ramble but your poem just brought this out. Such a great message to be sent. Lovely
August 21st, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
The inner light becomes an outer glow. Smiles of the heart on the outside grow. Love for what lies within is shown to others through a compassionate grin. Sorry for the ramble but your poem just brought this out. Such a great message to be sent. Lovely
August 21st, 2024 10:22
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never forget that place Teddy as I will never forget Rochester where I was brough up.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never forget that place Teddy as I will never forget Rochester where I was brough up.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:41
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Dan Williams said:
Never been there but would sure like to visit. Well Done.
August 20th, 2024 23:59
Dan Williams said:
Never been there but would sure like to visit. Well Done.
August 20th, 2024 23:59
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
NafisaSB said:
what a beautiful and emotional tribute to those who left physically but whose memories live on forever..great write
August 20th, 2024 23:22
NafisaSB said:
what a beautiful and emotional tribute to those who left physically but whose memories live on forever..great write
August 20th, 2024 23:22
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Bella Shepard said:
This ode to your beloved home is beautiful. The Bard would be proud!
August 20th, 2024 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
This ode to your beloved home is beautiful. The Bard would be proud!
August 20th, 2024 13:42
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Doggerel Dave said:
Mustn\'t do this too often Teddy - it\'s too disturbing - especially when I throw the sixties and seventies into the mix.
Don\'t you dare take any notice of me....😊
August 20th, 2024 08:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Mustn\'t do this too often Teddy - it\'s too disturbing - especially when I throw the sixties and seventies into the mix.
Don\'t you dare take any notice of me....😊
August 20th, 2024 08:05
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Thoughtless said:
What I consider my original home is not where I was born but understand the sentiment. There are times that I want to click my heels and say, \"There\'s no place like home.\"
You expressed it very well. Excellent write.
August 20th, 2024 07:00
Thoughtless said:
What I consider my original home is not where I was born but understand the sentiment. There are times that I want to click my heels and say, \"There\'s no place like home.\"
You expressed it very well. Excellent write.
August 20th, 2024 07:00
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
sorenbarrett said:
Shakespearian in sound it rings out a shout. I too have memories of my original home that I have not seen in over 20 years yet remains in my memories home. It has changed too much for me to want to see it any more. And as a metaphor this piece might say we ourselves although changed and far from what we used to be still look back to that old self and say that is home and who we are. A glorious write Teddy
August 20th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Shakespearian in sound it rings out a shout. I too have memories of my original home that I have not seen in over 20 years yet remains in my memories home. It has changed too much for me to want to see it any more. And as a metaphor this piece might say we ourselves although changed and far from what we used to be still look back to that old self and say that is home and who we are. A glorious write Teddy
August 20th, 2024 04:59
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Cassie58 said:
You write of the city of my birth as well Teddy. I have to say, it is in need of much love at present. Beautifully penned my poet friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. 🌹
August 20th, 2024 04:56
Cassie58 said:
You write of the city of my birth as well Teddy. I have to say, it is in need of much love at present. Beautifully penned my poet friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. 🌹
August 20th, 2024 04:56
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
AuburnScribbler said:
A nice little \"co-write\" with the bard here Teddy.15, and bless your love for London, which at the current time, is very much needed in order to truly rebuild our capital.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:51
AuburnScribbler said:
A nice little \"co-write\" with the bard here Teddy.15, and bless your love for London, which at the current time, is very much needed in order to truly rebuild our capital.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:51
A Co-Write With Shakespeare
Accidental Poet said:
You can take the girl out of the city, but you\'ll never take the city out of the girl. I\'m the same way for my Scituate. 🌹
August 20th, 2024 04:30
Accidental Poet said:
You can take the girl out of the city, but you\'ll never take the city out of the girl. I\'m the same way for my Scituate. 🌹
August 20th, 2024 04:30
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Bella Shepard said:
This is the most beautiful poem to love I\'ve ever read, and there is a tear there ready to drop. Add to this the swans forming a heart and it is perfection. Truly and profoundly meant dear Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
This is the most beautiful poem to love I\'ve ever read, and there is a tear there ready to drop. Add to this the swans forming a heart and it is perfection. Truly and profoundly meant dear Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 12:49
An Ode to Sunday
aDarkerMind said:
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest right outside my window here on my 2nd floor flat. and your Ode To Sunday adds even more of a sparkle Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 10:08
aDarkerMind said:
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest right outside my window here on my 2nd floor flat. and your Ode To Sunday adds even more of a sparkle Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 10:08
The Devil\'s In Town
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written piece here Teddy.15, to me, it sounds like a saucily penned diary entry, that either tells the wanting to create such a scene in town, or documents the fear of doing so.
Or perhaps, you have already done it, eh!?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 19th, 2024 04:57
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written piece here Teddy.15, to me, it sounds like a saucily penned diary entry, that either tells the wanting to create such a scene in town, or documents the fear of doing so.
Or perhaps, you have already done it, eh!?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 19th, 2024 04:57
An Ode to Sunday
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful ode Teddy, we too had a relaxing Sunday.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful ode Teddy, we too had a relaxing Sunday.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:20
An Ode to Sunday
Dan Williams said:
So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me; thank for reminding me of it.
August 19th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me; thank for reminding me of it.
August 19th, 2024 00:21
An Ode to Sunday
MendedFences27 said:
There is nothing quite like a relaxing Sunday with the freedom to do as one pleases, and then to be in Tuscany as well. Just too uplifting and spiritual an experience. it seems ever so fitting that you paint that tree. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 20:45
MendedFences27 said:
There is nothing quite like a relaxing Sunday with the freedom to do as one pleases, and then to be in Tuscany as well. Just too uplifting and spiritual an experience. it seems ever so fitting that you paint that tree. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 20:45
An Ode to Sunday
jarcher54 said:
Sharing your Sunday morning thoughts and sights and sounds is a treat! Anything can happen. For us as well as you! My Sunday has been busy, occasionally stressful, but unlike Monday I don\'t have to check in with anyone and attend to their agenda!
August 18th, 2024 18:43
jarcher54 said:
Sharing your Sunday morning thoughts and sights and sounds is a treat! Anything can happen. For us as well as you! My Sunday has been busy, occasionally stressful, but unlike Monday I don\'t have to check in with anyone and attend to their agenda!
August 18th, 2024 18:43
An Ode to Sunday
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve sure not lost your touch - I\'m reminded of one my early poems in which I refer to the land of cobalt skies \'\'where cyprus fingers point\'\'
August 18th, 2024 14:32
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve sure not lost your touch - I\'m reminded of one my early poems in which I refer to the land of cobalt skies \'\'where cyprus fingers point\'\'
August 18th, 2024 14:32
An Ode to Sunday
Accidental Poet said:
Paint the tree? Did the tree not grow with color? Ahh well, yes it is Sunday, Do whatever your heart desires Teddy. After all, you are a poet and an artist. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 10:35
Accidental Poet said:
Paint the tree? Did the tree not grow with color? Ahh well, yes it is Sunday, Do whatever your heart desires Teddy. After all, you are a poet and an artist. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 10:35
An Ode to Sunday
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a Sunday…
Love your Sunday, Teddy. Don’t want to boast but it is an almost perfect description of quite a number of days in my week (retired). There’s trees out of my window, flowers, green…but it just ain’t quite Tuscan. Can smell the coffee from here.
A very evocative write.
August 18th, 2024 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a Sunday…
Love your Sunday, Teddy. Don’t want to boast but it is an almost perfect description of quite a number of days in my week (retired). There’s trees out of my window, flowers, green…but it just ain’t quite Tuscan. Can smell the coffee from here.
A very evocative write.
August 18th, 2024 08:17
An Ode to Sunday
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing like a Sunday with a sundae at the local dessert parlor. Your Sunday is a treat in words.
August 18th, 2024 08:10
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing like a Sunday with a sundae at the local dessert parlor. Your Sunday is a treat in words.
August 18th, 2024 08:10
An Ode to Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom pervades this poem and more still carefree maybe carefreedom. Colorful bright and open a fulfilling felling to the opening or closing, as you choose, of a week.
August 18th, 2024 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom pervades this poem and more still carefree maybe carefreedom. Colorful bright and open a fulfilling felling to the opening or closing, as you choose, of a week.
August 18th, 2024 06:11
An Ode to Sunday
rhmn_7 said:
Isn\'t that the perfect Sunday put together into verses? Great poem Teddy!
August 18th, 2024 05:54
rhmn_7 said:
Isn\'t that the perfect Sunday put together into verses? Great poem Teddy!
August 18th, 2024 05:54
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