Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Perfect Moment in May
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
The Death Of A Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
The Death Of A Poet
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
The Death Of A Poet
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
The Death Of A Poet
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
The Death Of A Poet
Accidental Poet said:
A poet will always have something to write about Teddy. But hopefully more of the finer points you mentioned here in the beautiful things in life, like a poem from yourself dear poet. 😁👍
May 1st, 2024 05:44
Accidental Poet said:
A poet will always have something to write about Teddy. But hopefully more of the finer points you mentioned here in the beautiful things in life, like a poem from yourself dear poet. 😁👍
May 1st, 2024 05:44
Rocking Worlds
DLewis88 said:
I love it. It\'s a great story. I hope you do become a great musician.
April 30th, 2024 04:38
DLewis88 said:
I love it. It\'s a great story. I hope you do become a great musician.
April 30th, 2024 04:38
Rocking Worlds
Goldfinch60 said:
Your time will certainly come Teddy and I will be in the front of the audience cheering you on.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Your time will certainly come Teddy and I will be in the front of the audience cheering you on.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:16
Rocking Worlds
Cassie58 said:
Don’t let go of your dreams Teddy. About time there were more lady rock stars. Rock on . That’s some ambition, you’ve got there for the next world. Happy Monday. 🌸
April 29th, 2024 11:54
Cassie58 said:
Don’t let go of your dreams Teddy. About time there were more lady rock stars. Rock on . That’s some ambition, you’ve got there for the next world. Happy Monday. 🌸
April 29th, 2024 11:54
Rocking Worlds
Neville said:
I once shared that dream Teddy but had to content myself with rhythm guitar and mandolin .. I sold my bass to another would be rock star only a month or so back .. Neville 🌹
April 29th, 2024 11:06
Neville said:
I once shared that dream Teddy but had to content myself with rhythm guitar and mandolin .. I sold my bass to another would be rock star only a month or so back .. Neville 🌹
April 29th, 2024 11:06
Rocking Worlds
Thomas W Case said:
Superb vision. I saw King in the 90\'s. Superb concert. He played with so much soul.
April 29th, 2024 10:00
Thomas W Case said:
Superb vision. I saw King in the 90\'s. Superb concert. He played with so much soul.
April 29th, 2024 10:00
Rocking Worlds
peto said:
You are already a magnificent star Teddy
You wanna add music
Suits me just fine
Rock on
April 29th, 2024 09:40
peto said:
You are already a magnificent star Teddy
You wanna add music
Suits me just fine
Rock on
April 29th, 2024 09:40
Rocking Worlds
sorenbarrett said:
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are there poets. Loved the play on music.
April 29th, 2024 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are there poets. Loved the play on music.
April 29th, 2024 08:15
Rocking Worlds
Accidental Poet said:
Well that\'s positive thinking at its best Teddy. I can\'t wait to hear you. 😊👍
April 29th, 2024 08:08
Accidental Poet said:
Well that\'s positive thinking at its best Teddy. I can\'t wait to hear you. 😊👍
April 29th, 2024 08:08
Rocking Worlds
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any other, Teddy. Still keeping an open mind.... but sometimes those advertising glossies and/or even those old parchment jobs can be entertaining - certainly that was so with yours... Bon voyage 😇😊👍
April 29th, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any other, Teddy. Still keeping an open mind.... but sometimes those advertising glossies and/or even those old parchment jobs can be entertaining - certainly that was so with yours... Bon voyage 😇😊👍
April 29th, 2024 07:14
Raven\'s Encore
Neville said:
Ouch, how extraordinarily noir my friend, but beautifully executed .. makes me wanna write you a rainbow 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:21
Neville said:
Ouch, how extraordinarily noir my friend, but beautifully executed .. makes me wanna write you a rainbow 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:21
Raven\'s Encore
Goldfinch60 said:
Spreading the joy indeed, so glad it is not true Teddy.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Spreading the joy indeed, so glad it is not true Teddy.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:01
Raven\'s Encore
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, Teddy. You paint the mood and the scene so well.
April 27th, 2024 17:40
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, Teddy. You paint the mood and the scene so well.
April 27th, 2024 17:40
Raven\'s Encore
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, your lines this morning are so very much in the mood of Poe. He did darkness so well, and so do you. The black shroud of grief and the silence of time stopping still, comes through clearly. Loss is such a hard burden to bear. I hope you have a sunshine Saturday. We have wet and dreary here. Also Poe like. Have a bouquet of weekend flowers 💐
April 27th, 2024 07:43
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, your lines this morning are so very much in the mood of Poe. He did darkness so well, and so do you. The black shroud of grief and the silence of time stopping still, comes through clearly. Loss is such a hard burden to bear. I hope you have a sunshine Saturday. We have wet and dreary here. Also Poe like. Have a bouquet of weekend flowers 💐
April 27th, 2024 07:43
Raven\'s Encore
sorenbarrett said:
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you the more cheerful of poets in a somber tone and I the more morose in a tone of longing a most beautiful peace, I hope it is not personal. Fantastic metaphors\"
\"The clocks have stopped ticking
no chimes, no bells
no sound\"
I can hear the silence.
\"death has stolen my warm blanket\" another great line.
\"every clock in my house
now without hands\"
brilliant!
and the last line
\"my love, my love now gone.\" carries a bit of the flavor of Poe. A most wonderful write.
April 27th, 2024 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you the more cheerful of poets in a somber tone and I the more morose in a tone of longing a most beautiful peace, I hope it is not personal. Fantastic metaphors\"
\"The clocks have stopped ticking
no chimes, no bells
no sound\"
I can hear the silence.
\"death has stolen my warm blanket\" another great line.
\"every clock in my house
now without hands\"
brilliant!
and the last line
\"my love, my love now gone.\" carries a bit of the flavor of Poe. A most wonderful write.
April 27th, 2024 03:41
Raven\'s Encore
Bella Shepard said:
Haunting depiction of death\'s encapsulation. Sad and remarkably beautiful at the same time. This is one to read over and over.
April 26th, 2024 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Haunting depiction of death\'s encapsulation. Sad and remarkably beautiful at the same time. This is one to read over and over.
April 26th, 2024 13:52
Raven\'s Encore
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else, will ya......😂🤣😇👅LOL
April 26th, 2024 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else, will ya......😂🤣😇👅LOL
April 26th, 2024 06:11
Raven\'s Encore
mirrorball said:
\"Death has stolen my warm blanket\" wow. I\'m in love with this one!!
April 26th, 2024 03:18
mirrorball said:
\"Death has stolen my warm blanket\" wow. I\'m in love with this one!!
April 26th, 2024 03:18
Raven\'s Encore
Accidental Poet said:
But in the silence there will always be love. 🌹 🫂
April 26th, 2024 02:17
Accidental Poet said:
But in the silence there will always be love. 🌹 🫂
April 26th, 2024 02:17
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Parisab said:
Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the generational trauma. The damages are real, be it on the TV screen, or falling from the red skies above. Please keep writing as poems have real impact…
April 26th, 2024 01:00
Parisab said:
Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the generational trauma. The damages are real, be it on the TV screen, or falling from the red skies above. Please keep writing as poems have real impact…
April 26th, 2024 01:00
Awakening
Neville said:
sound advice dear T .. the old saying one mans dream is another mans delusion springs to mind .. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 16:31
Neville said:
sound advice dear T .. the old saying one mans dream is another mans delusion springs to mind .. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 16:31
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Teddy and so true but we can use our imagination to take us to such wonderful times.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Teddy and so true but we can use our imagination to take us to such wonderful times.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:19
Awakening
Accidental Poet said:
Imagination is the spice of life with the main course of solid reality. Wonderfully put Teddy. 😉👍
April 24th, 2024 08:23
Accidental Poet said:
Imagination is the spice of life with the main course of solid reality. Wonderfully put Teddy. 😉👍
April 24th, 2024 08:23
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