Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



A very Gracious Goodbye
Cheeky Missy said:

What on earth is THIS, sweet Teddy, that silence haunts its presence? I was too beleaguered when I first saw it and now am befuddled. Fascinating and intriguing, rendered to effect with excellent poignancy and grand similes, whatever shall I do now?! Thank you very much for sharing. Love you!

September 21st, 2024 14:47

“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
sorenbarrett said:

Sometimes honesty is not the best policy. I am not sure how I missed this one Teddy. A most fun read and relatable.

September 21st, 2024 05:00

A very Gracious Goodbye
Cassie58 said:

So well penned dear Teddy. Dramatic and determined words. It would make a hugely successful BBC drama. Thinking of an actress who could play leading lady. Have a super weekend 🌹

September 21st, 2024 02:39

A very Gracious Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful piece of poetry Teddy and I will do something I rarely do and put it into my favourites.

Andy

September 21st, 2024 01:23

A very Gracious Goodbye
Dan Williams said:

Greving properly is healing. The dead are hopefully at peace. Nice work here.

September 21st, 2024 00:13

A very Gracious Goodbye
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Teddy

September 20th, 2024 07:29

A very Gracious Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:

Teddy this sounds so Shakesperian and has a forboding forshadow to it that at the same time is so lovely and bright. Very dramatic and romantic I really like this one very much

September 20th, 2024 05:44

A very Gracious Goodbye
aDarkerMind said:

you have taken your poetry to a new level here Teddy.

a wonderfully written work of art.



September 20th, 2024 05:44

Soul-finder
Dan Williams said:

I sure hope you are right.

September 20th, 2024 01:01

Soul-finder
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful, sweet Teddy. I think everyone has been lost whether they admit it or not.

September 19th, 2024 17:38

Soul-finder
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, I love how you have used potholes here as a metaphor and thrown in too the thick fog to highlight the struggle many feel in life. You conveyed that so well. It’s lovely of you to mention Bella and others who are currently experiencing that emptiness. That shows your wonderful caring nature. One step at a time, I always say. A great read. Have s beautiful day Teddy. 🌹🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿

September 19th, 2024 09:25

Soul-finder
Accidental Poet said:

So kind of you to write this for Bella and anyone who has traveled that road of fog and potholes. Always believe there is a beacon of light there to help find your way. 🌹

September 19th, 2024 08:12

Soul-finder
sorenbarrett said:

Teddy I have to periodically search for mine it tends to wander and like a small child gets into all kinds of mischief when not suppervised. I now keep it on a short leash. A poem of self understanding in that existential search for self

September 19th, 2024 05:01

Soul-finder
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Teddy, no matter how many problems we come across on our life\'s pathway there is always a new path to be found which will lead us into a better future.

Andy

September 19th, 2024 02:05

Soul-finder
aDarkerMind said:

a very touching, moving write Teddy.

a poem to read and live through,
many times.

which, of course....I will.

September 19th, 2024 01:58

Perfectly polished
Dan Williams said:

I think I have been colour coordinated maybe twice in my life, probably by accident. This lady had the right ideas though. Nice.

September 19th, 2024 00:53

Perfectly polished
Thomas W Case said:

Simply beautiful. I love it.

September 18th, 2024 20:37

Perfectly polished
aDarkerMind said:

what a wonderful story Teddy...

am losing count of the times you have put a smile on my face.

and yes, perhaps at times we judge what we know very little of.

I have learnt much from you Teddy.
and am most grateful.

September 18th, 2024 12:10

Perfectly polished
Accidental Poet said:

The smile makes all the difference Teddy. 🌹🙂

September 18th, 2024 08:15

Perfectly polished
Tony36 said:

Love it Teddy

September 18th, 2024 07:39

Perfectly polished
sorenbarrett said:

Great insight into a deep thought. We all judge others by ourselves when we can\'t see ourselves very clearly. We impose our values on others and then judge them by it. So nicely said Teddy

September 18th, 2024 04:57

Perfectly polished
Cassie58 said:

A fifth glass Teddy? That’s nearly a whole bottle lol. Drowning in sorrows. You are of course spot on here. I don’t feel sorry for that highly polished woman at all. She’s got time for herself. Good luck to her. I’m so busy running around everyone else, I can’t even remember where my shoes are, but hey, I keep smiling too. Gotta smile and no one’s life is perfect. Have a great day dear Teddy 🌹

September 18th, 2024 03:14

Perfectly polished
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep smiling Teddy.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 02:07

Poet
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words and tribute Teddy.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 01:53

Poet
Accidental Poet said:

I don\'t know Melvin, and have not read his poetry before, but with so much praise of a poet how can I not? Your poem for him shows your gratitude and appreciation for his craft. Beautifully penned Teddy. 🌹

September 17th, 2024 09:04

Poet
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy. You have such a generous heart. A fine tribute to Melvin and all the help he has given with your writing. From the heart is so important when conveying words. I can see already this has knocked his socks off and made his day. I also have to say Teddy, that unknowingly you pointed me towards Melvin’s unique writing. So a big thank you to you and your mentor. Have a super day. 🌹

September 17th, 2024 06:12

Poet
aDarkerMind said:

well Teddy, am not ashamed to say this wonderful write has put many tears in my eyes.
and words fail me right now.

you are blessed with a talent to write...
and blessed with a true heart of gold.

Thank You Teddy.

September 17th, 2024 04:48

Poet
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful tribute to another great poet. Fun to read and a surprise ending as well.

September 17th, 2024 04:17

The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Goldfinch60 said:

Enjoy those dreams Teddy as we all do when you write about them.

Mozart played be Bees eh? That would be good to listen to.

Andy

September 17th, 2024 01:27

The Sweetest of Slumberbash
NafisaSB said:

i wish, how i wish i too could have such a slumberbash..
well done, dear poet

September 17th, 2024 00:59



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