Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Swan\'s Lake
MendedFences27 said:

As we pass through life beauty surrounds us. Most of it goes unnoticed, because we are so focused on our own passing. But once in a while someone calls to our attention what we are missing. They call that person a poet. You are one. Thanks for reminding me. - Phil A.

August 10th, 2024 10:50

Swan\'s Lake
Bella Shepard said:

I love the celebration of life this poem extolls, beautiful dear Teddy, you\'ve done it again, brighten the day with your love of life. Thank you!!

August 10th, 2024 10:17

Swan\'s Lake
Accidental Poet said:

I love your imagery and positivity Teddy. You are a poet among all poets. ๐ŸŒน

August 10th, 2024 08:45

Swan\'s Lake
sorenbarrett said:

It\'s a wonderful world sung by Lois Armstrong in poetry. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. A lovely most positive view of things that adds pleasure to life. Most well expressed friend.

August 10th, 2024 06:54

Swan\'s Lake
Doggerel Dave said:

Richness and diversity - anything other than turning outward and appreciating a textured world is not worth a candle.
Thanks for the reminder Teddy.

August 10th, 2024 06:40

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Goldfinch60 said:

I too love Lemon Meringue Pie. LOL

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:22

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Dan Williams said:

Aw come on. Not even him?

August 9th, 2024 23:47

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Doggerel Dave said:

No gain out of staying round here then, is there....... ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™ƒ?

August 9th, 2024 07:33

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
sorenbarrett said:

Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with such decadence. I too would go for a Lemon Meringue Pie. A most fun read well built up and paced to cause one to salivate in anticipation of the ending.

August 9th, 2024 05:52

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Cassie58 said:

Youโ€™re too good to be true, canโ€™t take my eyes off you. I remember the great Andy Williams singing this song Teddy. You aced with this poem. You kept the suspense going. That word filthy had my eyes out on stalks lol. However, l love lemon meringue pie too, so you canโ€™t hog it all ๐Ÿ˜€. A fun poem, much enjoyed humour. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 03:01

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Accidental Poet said:

Enjoy your pie dear Teddy. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 02:45

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, yes, thatโ€™s where our dearly departed loved ones stay. Deep in the heart. Never far away. A part of us. In a few days it will be the 10th anniversary of losing my brother. I keep close to my three nephews. They all have a little of him in them. It is a blessing to see and feel it. A lovely write which touched me this Friday morning. Have a beautiful day dear poet. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 02:11

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Accidental Poet said:

But there in your heart is a smile left there for you by them. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 01:47

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Fantastic work.

August 8th, 2024 19:34

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
aDarkerMind said:

goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.

(and a few tears while thinking of lost ones to go with it)

oh my!

August 8th, 2024 13:23

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:

I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone. Relatives too and I wonder how much longer I have

August 8th, 2024 12:08

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Teddy. I light a candle on those days and let them out.

August 8th, 2024 09:36

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Teddy but they will always be with you in Spirit.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:50

A Very Grand Finale
Goldfinch60 said:

Play away Teddy but please to not go yet as we need to hear your final concerto.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:30

A Very Grand Finale
Dan Williams said:

Or, no?

August 8th, 2024 00:17

A Very Grand Finale
Dan Williams said:

Wow. Sadness with a capital \'S\'. Very well done.

August 8th, 2024 00:16

A Very Grand Finale
Bella Shepard said:

Poetry and music inextricably linked in this beautiful dream of a poem. The pic couldn\'t be more perfect, come think of it, so is the poem.

August 7th, 2024 15:13

A Very Grand Finale
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful vision, sweet Teddy.

August 7th, 2024 10:30

A Very Grand Finale
MendedFences27 said:

Hang in there. Life is all we have. Loved your poem and it\'s rather intense subject. To go out with a smile? I guess I want to be run over by a beer truck.
Keep writing and posting and practicing your piano. - Phil A.

August 7th, 2024 10:08

A Very Grand Finale
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Teddy. Are you getting married? Dreams, death, and pianos.

August 7th, 2024 09:14

A Very Grand Finale
sorenbarrett said:

Dying with a smile is the only way to go. Then to die while performing two arts simultaneously is add victory to one\'s final act. Glad that it was a dram though

August 7th, 2024 06:30

The Poetess and the Pussy
AuburnScribbler said:

This is a marvelously penned piece of literary surrealism here Teddy.15, which is handsomely adorned by a beautiful picture.

I also wholeheartedly agree with the quote, madness is an avenue that must be traversed, in order to live a full life.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

August 7th, 2024 05:49

The Poetess and the Pussy
sorenbarrett said:

Fun is what I can say about this write. Yes I agree you have not lived unless you have seen insanity, faced death, loved, and lost all.

August 7th, 2024 05:16

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Great new word Neville, slumberdash souns good to me.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:50

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, I love how you can turn the everyday ordinary into something so poetic. Hope you had a beautiful holiday and feel well rested. Your posted image of London in the rain, takes me back many years. I prefer to remember it as it once was. Have a wonderful Wednesday ๐ŸŒน

August 6th, 2024 23:28



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