Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Dreamers Quilt
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Dreamers Quilt
Accidental Poet said:
As the rain pitter-patters on your skylight and you drift off in sleep, may your dreams of happiness flourish in the fields of love. 😉
September 12th, 2024 06:24
Accidental Poet said:
As the rain pitter-patters on your skylight and you drift off in sleep, may your dreams of happiness flourish in the fields of love. 😉
September 12th, 2024 06:24
Dreamers Quilt
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
When Everything Glows but Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
When Everything Glows but Me
Accidental Poet said:
The light you seek is within your own heart Teddy. Healing is never easy and fast. We heal in the knowing that those that have gone will always be remembered in our hearts. It\'s their light we see that heals us. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:46
Accidental Poet said:
The light you seek is within your own heart Teddy. Healing is never easy and fast. We heal in the knowing that those that have gone will always be remembered in our hearts. It\'s their light we see that heals us. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:46
When Everything Glows but Me
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
When Everything Glows but Me
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
When Everything Glows but Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
In Silence and Disbelief
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
In Silence and Disbelief
Dan Williams said:
Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times. What demented beliefs justify this grief? Nice write though.
September 11th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times. What demented beliefs justify this grief? Nice write though.
September 11th, 2024 00:31
In Silence and Disbelief
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute, sweet Teddy. Tremendous work.
September 10th, 2024 19:04
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute, sweet Teddy. Tremendous work.
September 10th, 2024 19:04
In Silence and Disbelief
Accidental Poet said:
Thank you Teddy for remembering those people and that tragic day.
Your words: \"where desperate screams echoed into space\" brought back the horror of that day for me as I too, like everyone remembers where they were and how time just stopped. I\'ll have to repost the poem I wrote for that day. 🫂
September 10th, 2024 09:20
Accidental Poet said:
Thank you Teddy for remembering those people and that tragic day.
Your words: \"where desperate screams echoed into space\" brought back the horror of that day for me as I too, like everyone remembers where they were and how time just stopped. I\'ll have to repost the poem I wrote for that day. 🫂
September 10th, 2024 09:20
In Silence and Disbelief
Doggerel Dave said:
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent people die in war.
\'World peace\' is absolutely right.
September 10th, 2024 08:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent people die in war.
\'World peace\' is absolutely right.
September 10th, 2024 08:59
In Silence and Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I was as I watched in disbelief as the second plane dove into the towers A very appropriate write for the day
September 10th, 2024 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I was as I watched in disbelief as the second plane dove into the towers A very appropriate write for the day
September 10th, 2024 05:46
Home
Doggerel Dave said:
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned...... before....60\'s and 70\'s London......
But I do understand, Teddy.
September 9th, 2024 08:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned...... before....60\'s and 70\'s London......
But I do understand, Teddy.
September 9th, 2024 08:22
Home
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in this poem. The pool of the dirt from which we were born, his magnetically strong. Find memories of the past drawers, as if they were the currents in the sea . “Your sea of lights But a memory “ A beautiful line. I feel your longing. Hopefully you will see home soon. Nicely written friend.
September 9th, 2024 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in this poem. The pool of the dirt from which we were born, his magnetically strong. Find memories of the past drawers, as if they were the currents in the sea . “Your sea of lights But a memory “ A beautiful line. I feel your longing. Hopefully you will see home soon. Nicely written friend.
September 9th, 2024 06:42
Rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:42
Rainbow
aDarkerMind said:
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much needed
and very much enjoyed my friend.
September 8th, 2024 11:36
aDarkerMind said:
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much needed
and very much enjoyed my friend.
September 8th, 2024 11:36
Rainbow
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific haiku, \"a smiley face upside down\" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2024 11:32
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific haiku, \"a smiley face upside down\" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2024 11:32
Rainbow
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂
September 8th, 2024 10:29
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂
September 8th, 2024 10:29
Rainbow
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.
September 8th, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.
September 8th, 2024 06:17
A Very Poetic Finish
Doggerel Dave said:
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me larf.
Not a rhyme in sight..... couldn\'t be a poet didn\'t see or hear a thing.....
September 6th, 2024 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me larf.
Not a rhyme in sight..... couldn\'t be a poet didn\'t see or hear a thing.....
September 6th, 2024 23:12
A Very Poetic Finish
Thomas W Case said:
So funny, sweet Teddy. I needed a good laugh.
September 6th, 2024 16:58
Thomas W Case said:
So funny, sweet Teddy. I needed a good laugh.
September 6th, 2024 16:58
A Very Poetic Finish
Cheeky Missy said:
La! Poetic indeed! What on earth was so \"sweet\" about eating his owner?! And Brits yielding behind doors to the indulgence of strip poker netted them an ungodly end?!!! Poetic to the extreme.
September 6th, 2024 15:49
Cheeky Missy said:
La! Poetic indeed! What on earth was so \"sweet\" about eating his owner?! And Brits yielding behind doors to the indulgence of strip poker netted them an ungodly end?!!! Poetic to the extreme.
September 6th, 2024 15:49
A Very Poetic Finish
MendedFences27 said:
And also a poetic lunch. Gruesome, yet comical. Alligators devouring poets, they get indigestion and burp sonnets. If we devour poets maybe we\'ll be able to burp a few lines.
Well, a very interesting tale, told nicely with tongue in cheek. - Phil A.
September 6th, 2024 12:38
MendedFences27 said:
And also a poetic lunch. Gruesome, yet comical. Alligators devouring poets, they get indigestion and burp sonnets. If we devour poets maybe we\'ll be able to burp a few lines.
Well, a very interesting tale, told nicely with tongue in cheek. - Phil A.
September 6th, 2024 12:38
A Whale of a Time (senryu)
Cassie58 said:
Imagery is my thing Teddy. It tends to be what I see first when reading poetry. Having said that, nothing wrong in setting your dreams high, even though you may catch sprats. Have a happy weekend dear poet. 🌹
September 6th, 2024 12:05
Cassie58 said:
Imagery is my thing Teddy. It tends to be what I see first when reading poetry. Having said that, nothing wrong in setting your dreams high, even though you may catch sprats. Have a happy weekend dear poet. 🌹
September 6th, 2024 12:05
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