Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Through Eyes of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Through Eyes of Light
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
Spring\'s Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Spring\'s Wish
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
Secrets of the Great Fig
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
April\'s Senryu
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
Painted Sky
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
Secrets of the Great Fig
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
Secrets of the Great Fig
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
Painted Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Painted Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
April\'s Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
April\'s Senryu
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Neilton said:
I love romanticism ! Perfectly written!!
I just wrote an ode my self so I found it very interesting!
March 17th, 2025 18:20
Neilton said:
I love romanticism ! Perfectly written!!
I just wrote an ode my self so I found it very interesting!
March 17th, 2025 18:20
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Parisab said:
Technical and sensitive-nice pairing Teddy :)
March 17th, 2025 12:03
Parisab said:
Technical and sensitive-nice pairing Teddy :)
March 17th, 2025 12:03
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:29
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Bella Shepard said:
Dear, sweet Teddy your beautiful words, coupled with such an incredible visual depiction, well only one word, Perfection!
March 16th, 2025 12:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dear, sweet Teddy your beautiful words, coupled with such an incredible visual depiction, well only one word, Perfection!
March 16th, 2025 12:45
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
spilleronsheet said:
True their emotions…words are justifying the beating heart…good one teddy
March 16th, 2025 12:16
spilleronsheet said:
True their emotions…words are justifying the beating heart…good one teddy
March 16th, 2025 12:16
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one before it. Well done
March 16th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one before it. Well done
March 16th, 2025 06:17
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
aDarkerMind said:
romantic and beautifully written Teddy x
March 16th, 2025 06:12
aDarkerMind said:
romantic and beautifully written Teddy x
March 16th, 2025 06:12
Soul Tracker
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
Abbundently Timeless
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
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