Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Seasonal Mayhem (senryu)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh hard...and I get it! LOL! Well done, my friend! Here\'s to some more egg nog, a rioting turkey or otherwise, my dear Teddy! 🌹👏🤣
December 13th, 2024 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh hard...and I get it! LOL! Well done, my friend! Here\'s to some more egg nog, a rioting turkey or otherwise, my dear Teddy! 🌹👏🤣
December 13th, 2024 08:31
Seasonal Mayhem (senryu)
sorenbarrett said:
Love eggnog and am still plagued with the ghost of season past but the turkey need not worry I prefer prime rib
December 13th, 2024 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
Love eggnog and am still plagued with the ghost of season past but the turkey need not worry I prefer prime rib
December 13th, 2024 08:31
You May Get a Kiss (senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words but Mary and I do not need mistletoe to share a kiss Teddy.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words but Mary and I do not need mistletoe to share a kiss Teddy.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:13
You May Get a Kiss (senryu)
Cassie58 said:
How positively heart warming Teddy. Way to go. Lovely. A wonderful Christmas wish. 🌹🎄
December 12th, 2024 12:48
Cassie58 said:
How positively heart warming Teddy. Way to go. Lovely. A wonderful Christmas wish. 🌹🎄
December 12th, 2024 12:48
You May Get a Kiss (senryu)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You may say your no good at the limerick, dear Teddy. Not sure about that, but I do know you are brilliant with senryu and every other thing I have read! This, dear friend…masterfully beautiful. 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You may say your no good at the limerick, dear Teddy. Not sure about that, but I do know you are brilliant with senryu and every other thing I have read! This, dear friend…masterfully beautiful. 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:04
You May Get a Kiss (senryu)
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful seasonal message you send. Far better than wrapped presents, glittering ornaments or shining lights. This message conveys the meaning of Christmas.
December 12th, 2024 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful seasonal message you send. Far better than wrapped presents, glittering ornaments or shining lights. This message conveys the meaning of Christmas.
December 12th, 2024 04:20
You May Get a Kiss (senryu)
arqios said:
Now that\'s precise, succinct and speaks volumes!
December 12th, 2024 03:50
arqios said:
Now that\'s precise, succinct and speaks volumes!
December 12th, 2024 03:50
Reflections Of Pissmas
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. Great work, sweet Teddy. I used to drink a lot. (to cope with in laws and everything else.) lol
December 11th, 2024 22:03
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. Great work, sweet Teddy. I used to drink a lot. (to cope with in laws and everything else.) lol
December 11th, 2024 22:03
Tornado of Light
NafisaSB said:
yes, you are right - some dates are so dark and sad, they keep haunting you time and again
hoping you get over them, and find solace
December 11th, 2024 06:57
NafisaSB said:
yes, you are right - some dates are so dark and sad, they keep haunting you time and again
hoping you get over them, and find solace
December 11th, 2024 06:57
Reflections Of Pissmas
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. With enough wine all things are bearable. Just think of the great material you will get.
December 10th, 2024 14:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. With enough wine all things are bearable. Just think of the great material you will get.
December 10th, 2024 14:48
Reflections Of Pissmas
Cassie58 said:
Can you imagine Christmas without booze? Of course not😂 As much as I enjoy Christmas Teddy, there are always one or two people that can make you top your glass up to keep your blood pressure down. This is such a fun write. Love your satirical muse here dear poet fantastique🌹
December 10th, 2024 12:17
Cassie58 said:
Can you imagine Christmas without booze? Of course not😂 As much as I enjoy Christmas Teddy, there are always one or two people that can make you top your glass up to keep your blood pressure down. This is such a fun write. Love your satirical muse here dear poet fantastique🌹
December 10th, 2024 12:17
Reflections Of Pissmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, dear Teddy, this really did make me laugh! Hard! 🤣 To start, I was thinking where is the drinking...the pissing? LOL! Then I got to \"hoping the next door neighbor’s dog doesn’t leave a present?\" There\'s the piss, or is it? 💩 And then I got to \"(and not vodka unfortunately)\" and thought...doh..they opened the wrong spirit! 🤣 But the ending question, my dearest friend, there in lies the brilliant punch-line! And it\'s fucking (oops) true? LOL! I actually get along with my in-laws well...almost all of them. 🤣 And, having read your request to our dear friend Soren, no worries...your secret is safe with me! 🤐🤪
December 10th, 2024 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, dear Teddy, this really did make me laugh! Hard! 🤣 To start, I was thinking where is the drinking...the pissing? LOL! Then I got to \"hoping the next door neighbor’s dog doesn’t leave a present?\" There\'s the piss, or is it? 💩 And then I got to \"(and not vodka unfortunately)\" and thought...doh..they opened the wrong spirit! 🤣 But the ending question, my dearest friend, there in lies the brilliant punch-line! And it\'s fucking (oops) true? LOL! I actually get along with my in-laws well...almost all of them. 🤣 And, having read your request to our dear friend Soren, no worries...your secret is safe with me! 🤐🤪
December 10th, 2024 09:40
Reflections Of Pissmas
arqios said:
Christmas Day is quite a different sort of hangover, dusted with cinnamon and peppered with peppermint candy cane. Strange feeling to be half awake and waking still to the aftermath of Eve’s past celebrations.
December 10th, 2024 05:19
arqios said:
Christmas Day is quite a different sort of hangover, dusted with cinnamon and peppered with peppermint candy cane. Strange feeling to be half awake and waking still to the aftermath of Eve’s past celebrations.
December 10th, 2024 05:19
Reflections Of Pissmas
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in a message all too true. We all long for closeness, but too much closeness by too many for too much time is unbearable. Made me smile again which deserves a Fav
December 10th, 2024 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in a message all too true. We all long for closeness, but too much closeness by too many for too much time is unbearable. Made me smile again which deserves a Fav
December 10th, 2024 04:16
Reflections Of Pissmas
Goldfinch60 said:
One goes to one\'s favourite restaurant for a glorious Christmas Day repast Teddy.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
One goes to one\'s favourite restaurant for a glorious Christmas Day repast Teddy.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:25
Extraordinary Unearth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spot on! 💯 🤯 I can’t even say anything but wow! This needs no interpretation. It speaks for itself! Again, dearest Teddy, I am in awe! ❤️🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spot on! 💯 🤯 I can’t even say anything but wow! This needs no interpretation. It speaks for itself! Again, dearest Teddy, I am in awe! ❤️🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 09:39
Extraordinary Unearth
arqios said:
Ooh, nice one! 👍🏻 Right between the eyes 🎯
December 9th, 2024 06:12
arqios said:
Ooh, nice one! 👍🏻 Right between the eyes 🎯
December 9th, 2024 06:12
Extraordinary Unearth
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and wise in one short piece Brilliant! And even better you are right. The wisdom of that is it has many levels not just one and may be seen as ripples in a pond circle within circle
December 9th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and wise in one short piece Brilliant! And even better you are right. The wisdom of that is it has many levels not just one and may be seen as ripples in a pond circle within circle
December 9th, 2024 04:41
Extraordinary Unearth
Caring dove said:
A circle makes me think of balance and peace .
Nice writing
Maybe it doesn’t have two sides ..
December 9th, 2024 04:29
Caring dove said:
A circle makes me think of balance and peace .
Nice writing
Maybe it doesn’t have two sides ..
December 9th, 2024 04:29
Extraordinary Unearth
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is like superglue Teddy.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is like superglue Teddy.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:16
Tornado of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those dates Teddy, yesterday was my wife\'s birthday and on the 30th of this month was the day she passed into heaven.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those dates Teddy, yesterday was my wife\'s birthday and on the 30th of this month was the day she passed into heaven.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:01
Tornado of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"There are some dates that I could never forget even if I tried, one being the 7th of December. ❤️\" Friend, I am not sure of the significance of that date to you...but whatever it is...I can tell you it sparked a significant piece of art in this, my friend. I mean everything I say, sincerely. This is...just wow! This poem is beautiful...I am not joking that this poem is up there, for me, with Mr. Poe\'s ancient bird of Nevermore! I mean that. Obviously the poem is different structurally...but in terms of impact. Wow! Let me ask you, dearest Teddy, is your Raven collection published and able to be purchased...because I would immediately! 😊❤️ I\'m a fan!
December 8th, 2024 17:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"There are some dates that I could never forget even if I tried, one being the 7th of December. ❤️\" Friend, I am not sure of the significance of that date to you...but whatever it is...I can tell you it sparked a significant piece of art in this, my friend. I mean everything I say, sincerely. This is...just wow! This poem is beautiful...I am not joking that this poem is up there, for me, with Mr. Poe\'s ancient bird of Nevermore! I mean that. Obviously the poem is different structurally...but in terms of impact. Wow! Let me ask you, dearest Teddy, is your Raven collection published and able to be purchased...because I would immediately! 😊❤️ I\'m a fan!
December 8th, 2024 17:06
Tornado of Light
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work, sad and powerful, sweet Teddy.
December 8th, 2024 16:08
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work, sad and powerful, sweet Teddy.
December 8th, 2024 16:08
Tornado of Light
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry Teddy. Your Raven keeping you company as you grieve. Maybe you would miss him if he didn’t visit? I think grief softens with time, so maybe your Raven will always visit. Loss never completely goes. We just learn to live with it. Lovely touching words. 🌹❤️
December 8th, 2024 13:33
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry Teddy. Your Raven keeping you company as you grieve. Maybe you would miss him if he didn’t visit? I think grief softens with time, so maybe your Raven will always visit. Loss never completely goes. We just learn to live with it. Lovely touching words. 🌹❤️
December 8th, 2024 13:33
Tornado of Light
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Yes you will grief is grief.
December 8th, 2024 09:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Yes you will grief is grief.
December 8th, 2024 09:01
Tornado of Light
aDarkerMind said:
oh for the love of the raven who shares our grief Teddy.
a poem to touch many hearts.
December 8th, 2024 05:29
aDarkerMind said:
oh for the love of the raven who shares our grief Teddy.
a poem to touch many hearts.
December 8th, 2024 05:29
Tornado of Light
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep wisdom in this poem. Sometimes we grow so used to grief itself that we miss it. Grief does seem to be one of the main muses of poetry. Pollitt and songwriting are inspired often by minor keys, and I believe deeper emotions come from sadness than from joy. The most beautiful write Teddy
December 8th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep wisdom in this poem. Sometimes we grow so used to grief itself that we miss it. Grief does seem to be one of the main muses of poetry. Pollitt and songwriting are inspired often by minor keys, and I believe deeper emotions come from sadness than from joy. The most beautiful write Teddy
December 8th, 2024 05:28
Tornado of Light
arqios said:
Now that is a splendid twist on personification. Very effective in carrying the message across.
December 8th, 2024 05:23
arqios said:
Now that is a splendid twist on personification. Very effective in carrying the message across.
December 8th, 2024 05:23
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