Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Last Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I remember those days with the phone on the wall or table operator and party lines. Used to listen in to the neighbor ladies and yell at them to hang up so I could use the phone. (I was 10 at the time) got in alot of trouble from my parents about this.
August 17th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I remember those days with the phone on the wall or table operator and party lines. Used to listen in to the neighbor ladies and yell at them to hang up so I could use the phone. (I was 10 at the time) got in alot of trouble from my parents about this.
August 17th, 2024 08:57
Pinocchio, deep in thought
sorenbarrett said:
That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun write Teddy
August 16th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun write Teddy
August 16th, 2024 05:28
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Parisab said:
Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your poem! That’s what happens in Tuscany, forget Keanu’s Hollywood-your heart sings of opera 🥂
August 16th, 2024 00:54
Parisab said:
Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your poem! That’s what happens in Tuscany, forget Keanu’s Hollywood-your heart sings of opera 🥂
August 16th, 2024 00:54
In The Line Of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A little humor is the fuel needed to start the morning. Funny how these things make their way into children\'s nursery rhymes. A most fun write.
August 15th, 2024 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A little humor is the fuel needed to start the morning. Funny how these things make their way into children\'s nursery rhymes. A most fun write.
August 15th, 2024 04:36
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. This is a beautiful. Heartfelt and gorgeous words. Now if that doesn’t melt his butter heart, I don’t know what will. Love your posted image too. Happy Thursday dear poet 🌹
August 15th, 2024 02:53
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. This is a beautiful. Heartfelt and gorgeous words. Now if that doesn’t melt his butter heart, I don’t know what will. Love your posted image too. Happy Thursday dear poet 🌹
August 15th, 2024 02:53
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
aDarkerMind said:
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one wish,
it would that I am Keanu Reeves.
am longing for an Italian pizza, and my ironing.......
that can wait ;o)
August 14th, 2024 11:40
aDarkerMind said:
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one wish,
it would that I am Keanu Reeves.
am longing for an Italian pizza, and my ironing.......
that can wait ;o)
August 14th, 2024 11:40
My Nevada
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An existential crisis where faith in the words of others was not sustained, and the sought after sun was not obtained. Sad but so close to truth and truth is what a poet is supposed to tell.
August 14th, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An existential crisis where faith in the words of others was not sustained, and the sought after sun was not obtained. Sad but so close to truth and truth is what a poet is supposed to tell.
August 14th, 2024 06:01
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Teddy.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Teddy.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:28
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. Tremendous.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. Tremendous.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
MendedFences27 said:
A sweet tribute to one\'s lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to him. He would trade it all for your love, I\'m sure. Wonderful poem. _ Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:21
MendedFences27 said:
A sweet tribute to one\'s lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to him. He would trade it all for your love, I\'m sure. Wonderful poem. _ Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:21
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Accidental Poet said:
Such passionate words of love for one so special. For me, brings thoughts of one such person. Beautiful write Teddy. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Such passionate words of love for one so special. For me, brings thoughts of one such person. Beautiful write Teddy. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 08:39
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
sorenbarrett said:
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures splendors compared to another\'s worth. So nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures splendors compared to another\'s worth. So nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 08:33
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will take to his heart and cherish.
August 13th, 2024 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will take to his heart and cherish.
August 13th, 2024 07:37
What Of Love?
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
August 13th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
August 13th, 2024 04:59
The Devil\'s In Town
Accidental Poet said:
Pay no mind to the devil. He\'s no poet like you. 😁👍
August 12th, 2024 21:35
Accidental Poet said:
Pay no mind to the devil. He\'s no poet like you. 😁👍
August 12th, 2024 21:35
The Devil\'s In Town
Bella Shepard said:
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question. Perhaps your muse is gently nudging you towards a beautiful piece that simply needs no rhyme, thus this exquisite poem. The devil be damned!
August 12th, 2024 07:41
Bella Shepard said:
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question. Perhaps your muse is gently nudging you towards a beautiful piece that simply needs no rhyme, thus this exquisite poem. The devil be damned!
August 12th, 2024 07:41
The Devil\'s In Town
Dan Williams said:
Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice read.
August 12th, 2024 00:23
Dan Williams said:
Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice read.
August 12th, 2024 00:23
The Devil\'s In Town
MendedFences27 said:
Is it because its Sunday? everything I\'ve read so far today is all very theological and profound.
Your poem was most entertaining and lighter, but still mentioned the \"Devil.\" Maybe \"Hell\" is just not being able to rhyme. I too, am possessed by memories. This read like a \"stream of thought\" poem and was a fun read yet very heavy in intent. I enjoyed it a lot. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:15
MendedFences27 said:
Is it because its Sunday? everything I\'ve read so far today is all very theological and profound.
Your poem was most entertaining and lighter, but still mentioned the \"Devil.\" Maybe \"Hell\" is just not being able to rhyme. I too, am possessed by memories. This read like a \"stream of thought\" poem and was a fun read yet very heavy in intent. I enjoyed it a lot. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:15
The Devil\'s In Town
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. You make the reader feel it. Great job, sweet Teddy.
August 11th, 2024 10:32
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. You make the reader feel it. Great job, sweet Teddy.
August 11th, 2024 10:32
The Devil\'s In Town
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
The Devil\'s In Town
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
The Devil\'s In Town
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - leave the rhyming to the pedestrian proles. You, Teddy are more at home in the realms of exotic fantasy. 😉
August 11th, 2024 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - leave the rhyming to the pedestrian proles. You, Teddy are more at home in the realms of exotic fantasy. 😉
August 11th, 2024 07:54
The Devil\'s In Town
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying to write a rhyme. Don\'t ya just hate when the wrong line rhymes? A most fun read friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying to write a rhyme. Don\'t ya just hate when the wrong line rhymes? A most fun read friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:00
Swan\'s Lake
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, life is wonderful in so many aspects of it.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, life is wonderful in so many aspects of it.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:34
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
aDarkerMind said:
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has touched my heart, and put a big smile on my face.
me, and a certain lady, Thank You...
I am deeply touched....x
August 10th, 2024 11:50
aDarkerMind said:
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has touched my heart, and put a big smile on my face.
me, and a certain lady, Thank You...
I am deeply touched....x
August 10th, 2024 11:50
Swan\'s Lake
Thoughtless said:
Keep on dancing, Teddy.15. Poetry may be ballet expressed in words.
August 10th, 2024 11:41
Thoughtless said:
Keep on dancing, Teddy.15. Poetry may be ballet expressed in words.
August 10th, 2024 11:41
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