Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
April\'s Senryu
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
Painted Sky
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
Secrets of the Great Fig
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
Secrets of the Great Fig
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
Painted Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Painted Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
April\'s Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
April\'s Senryu
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Neilton said:
I love romanticism ! Perfectly written!!
I just wrote an ode my self so I found it very interesting!
March 17th, 2025 18:20
Neilton said:
I love romanticism ! Perfectly written!!
I just wrote an ode my self so I found it very interesting!
March 17th, 2025 18:20
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Parisab said:
Technical and sensitive-nice pairing Teddy :)
March 17th, 2025 12:03
Parisab said:
Technical and sensitive-nice pairing Teddy :)
March 17th, 2025 12:03
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:29
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
Bella Shepard said:
Dear, sweet Teddy your beautiful words, coupled with such an incredible visual depiction, well only one word, Perfection!
March 16th, 2025 12:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dear, sweet Teddy your beautiful words, coupled with such an incredible visual depiction, well only one word, Perfection!
March 16th, 2025 12:45
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
spilleronsheet said:
True their emotions…words are justifying the beating heart…good one teddy
March 16th, 2025 12:16
spilleronsheet said:
True their emotions…words are justifying the beating heart…good one teddy
March 16th, 2025 12:16
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one before it. Well done
March 16th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one before it. Well done
March 16th, 2025 06:17
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
aDarkerMind said:
romantic and beautifully written Teddy x
March 16th, 2025 06:12
aDarkerMind said:
romantic and beautifully written Teddy x
March 16th, 2025 06:12
Soul Tracker
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
Abbundently Timeless
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Distant View said:
A fine, heartfelt tribute to a truly remarkable poet and novelist! A great write, my friend!
March 9th, 2025 15:12
Distant View said:
A fine, heartfelt tribute to a truly remarkable poet and novelist! A great write, my friend!
March 9th, 2025 15:12
Abbundently Timeless
spilleronsheet said:
Two hearts may be minds apart….bur where science ends, poetry begins….a priceless piece dearest teddy…those ticking touched my mind and heart
March 9th, 2025 12:24
spilleronsheet said:
Two hearts may be minds apart….bur where science ends, poetry begins….a priceless piece dearest teddy…those ticking touched my mind and heart
March 9th, 2025 12:24
Lazarus a Reincarnation
aDarkerMind said:
and you have done Sylvia proud with this true masterpiece Teddy;
every line a gem!
March 9th, 2025 07:43
aDarkerMind said:
and you have done Sylvia proud with this true masterpiece Teddy;
every line a gem!
March 9th, 2025 07:43
Lazarus a Reincarnation
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines asserting the power that is within all of us and the layers we all are. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines asserting the power that is within all of us and the layers we all are. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 07:35
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Cassie58 said:
The Sylvia in you is alive and kicking dear Teddy. Delivering sensationally in attitude. I’ve just bought a book of her work. You delivered a little punch here as well as some humour. I love the combination of both. Now where are those men for devouring? How about with a little chianti or maybe a vintage red lol. 💜🌹🍷
March 9th, 2025 07:06
Cassie58 said:
The Sylvia in you is alive and kicking dear Teddy. Delivering sensationally in attitude. I’ve just bought a book of her work. You delivered a little punch here as well as some humour. I love the combination of both. Now where are those men for devouring? How about with a little chianti or maybe a vintage red lol. 💜🌹🍷
March 9th, 2025 07:06
Abbundently Timeless
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Teddy, time passes anyway and even if we did not realise it it would still take us to the next phase of our lives.
Andy
https://youtu.be/0QVPUIRGthI?si=wV2osIKiic-r7jXZ
March 9th, 2025 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Teddy, time passes anyway and even if we did not realise it it would still take us to the next phase of our lives.
Andy
https://youtu.be/0QVPUIRGthI?si=wV2osIKiic-r7jXZ
March 9th, 2025 02:56
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