Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Devil Plays the Fiddle
NafisaSB said:
the verses written in our youth are much more open and one feels the pain more deeply -and i think age mellows us down, and makes us reflect..
September 17th, 2024 00:58
NafisaSB said:
the verses written in our youth are much more open and one feels the pain more deeply -and i think age mellows us down, and makes us reflect..
September 17th, 2024 00:58
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Dan Williams said:
And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
September 17th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
September 17th, 2024 00:34
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Accidental Poet said:
I too was brought back to the Beatles and Sgt Pepper in Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds. Ahh the days of our youth, must they be so brief? ๐ค
September 16th, 2024 09:58
Accidental Poet said:
I too was brought back to the Beatles and Sgt Pepper in Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds. Ahh the days of our youth, must they be so brief? ๐ค
September 16th, 2024 09:58
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Accidental Poet said:
But what the devil doesn\'t know is that the ballerina will play a tune on his fiddle that will scare the bejesus out of him. Dance on my lovely ballerina. ๐น
September 16th, 2024 08:59
Accidental Poet said:
But what the devil doesn\'t know is that the ballerina will play a tune on his fiddle that will scare the bejesus out of him. Dance on my lovely ballerina. ๐น
September 16th, 2024 08:59
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. What a beautiful scene you create sweet Teddy.
September 16th, 2024 08:14
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. What a beautiful scene you create sweet Teddy.
September 16th, 2024 08:14
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
sorenbarrett said:
So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant grandchildren, my own small children, and my childhood. Filled with nursery rhymes and Disney I feel rejuvinated.
September 16th, 2024 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant grandchildren, my own small children, and my childhood. Filled with nursery rhymes and Disney I feel rejuvinated.
September 16th, 2024 06:58
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Cassie58 said:
What a wonderful dreamscape you have painted here. Full of vibrant imagery and lsd type of experiences. Not that I have ever tried lol, but I got a real feel here of the Beatles and Sargeant Pepper. I enjoyed the bright, sunny aspect. Not a hint of darkness or violence . What sweet dreams you have Teddy. A wonderful uplifting read for a Monday morning. Thank you so much my fellow Brit ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ ๐น
September 16th, 2024 06:08
Cassie58 said:
What a wonderful dreamscape you have painted here. Full of vibrant imagery and lsd type of experiences. Not that I have ever tried lol, but I got a real feel here of the Beatles and Sargeant Pepper. I enjoyed the bright, sunny aspect. Not a hint of darkness or violence . What sweet dreams you have Teddy. A wonderful uplifting read for a Monday morning. Thank you so much my fellow Brit ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ ๐น
September 16th, 2024 06:08
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
aDarkerMind said:
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would gladly live in.
a bright blue frog be nice ;0)
September 16th, 2024 06:02
aDarkerMind said:
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would gladly live in.
a bright blue frog be nice ;0)
September 16th, 2024 06:02
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look in the mirror you never see the real you, you see yourself in an opposite aspect Teddy.
Andy
https://youtu.be/7QtGOWemQhY?si=oo3v-wBA5Xg3TC46
September 16th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look in the mirror you never see the real you, you see yourself in an opposite aspect Teddy.
Andy
https://youtu.be/7QtGOWemQhY?si=oo3v-wBA5Xg3TC46
September 16th, 2024 01:20
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Dan Williams said:
Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain also. Thank you for this.
September 16th, 2024 00:46
Dan Williams said:
Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain also. Thank you for this.
September 16th, 2024 00:46
Devil Plays the Fiddle
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. ๐น
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. ๐น
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Devil Plays the Fiddle
aDarkerMind said:
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and live with for a while.
beautifully written.
September 15th, 2024 06:39
aDarkerMind said:
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and live with for a while.
beautifully written.
September 15th, 2024 06:39
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Doggerel Dave said:
The devil would be in her feet and diet denial - the pain and torture involved in the production of such beauty...
First hand experience, Teddy?
September 15th, 2024 05:51
Doggerel Dave said:
The devil would be in her feet and diet denial - the pain and torture involved in the production of such beauty...
First hand experience, Teddy?
September 15th, 2024 05:51
Hold On Tight
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep holding on Teddy as I have all my long life, the thoughts in your heart and mind just keep strengthening you.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep holding on Teddy as I have all my long life, the thoughts in your heart and mind just keep strengthening you.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:19
Hold On Tight
Dan Williams said:
Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\" to
\"crushed or worse , dead\" seems a little harsh. But then life can be just like that I guess.
September 15th, 2024 00:26
Dan Williams said:
Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\" to
\"crushed or worse , dead\" seems a little harsh. But then life can be just like that I guess.
September 15th, 2024 00:26
Hold On Tight
Cassie58 said:
So true Teddy. Roller coaster life it is. I never much enjoyed fun fair rides but we have to deal with whatever comes our way. All things eventually pass. Have a glorious weekend dear poet ๐น
September 14th, 2024 12:29
Cassie58 said:
So true Teddy. Roller coaster life it is. I never much enjoyed fun fair rides but we have to deal with whatever comes our way. All things eventually pass. Have a glorious weekend dear poet ๐น
September 14th, 2024 12:29
Hold On Tight
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously, this is a true description of life. A wonderful poem that reaches to teach of life\'s ups and downs. We all go along for the ride, but there are always those who insist on standing up, or not wearing their seat belt, and choose to go for a second ride. Not this kid. Much enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:30
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously, this is a true description of life. A wonderful poem that reaches to teach of life\'s ups and downs. We all go along for the ride, but there are always those who insist on standing up, or not wearing their seat belt, and choose to go for a second ride. Not this kid. Much enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:30
Hold On Tight
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well enjoy it. The ride is over soon enough.
September 14th, 2024 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well enjoy it. The ride is over soon enough.
September 14th, 2024 03:39
Karmasutra
Dan Williams said:
Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel? Wow.
September 14th, 2024 00:29
Dan Williams said:
Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel? Wow.
September 14th, 2024 00:29
Karmasutra
Ladywithaquill said:
Bend like a Pretzel??? It\'s the most hilarious line ever!
September 13th, 2024 17:00
Ladywithaquill said:
Bend like a Pretzel??? It\'s the most hilarious line ever!
September 13th, 2024 17:00
Karmasutra
MendedFences27 said:
I believe the passion should last a bit longer than a lightning bolt, and pretzels can be fun. I have no idea about Biryani, but if it will stand still long enough, I\'m in. So now my Friday is awakened and I\'m praying for rain.
What a saucy poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2024 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
I believe the passion should last a bit longer than a lightning bolt, and pretzels can be fun. I have no idea about Biryani, but if it will stand still long enough, I\'m in. So now my Friday is awakened and I\'m praying for rain.
What a saucy poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2024 10:13
Karmasutra
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think Iโll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryaniโs are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. ๐๐น
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think Iโll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryaniโs are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. ๐๐น
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Karmasutra
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....๐!!!๐
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....๐!!!๐
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Karmasutra
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
Dreamers Quilt
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Dreamers Quilt
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
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