Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Devil\'s In Town
Dan Williams said:
Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice read.
August 12th, 2024 00:23
Dan Williams said:
Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice read.
August 12th, 2024 00:23
The Devil\'s In Town
MendedFences27 said:
Is it because its Sunday? everything I\'ve read so far today is all very theological and profound.
Your poem was most entertaining and lighter, but still mentioned the \"Devil.\" Maybe \"Hell\" is just not being able to rhyme. I too, am possessed by memories. This read like a \"stream of thought\" poem and was a fun read yet very heavy in intent. I enjoyed it a lot. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:15
MendedFences27 said:
Is it because its Sunday? everything I\'ve read so far today is all very theological and profound.
Your poem was most entertaining and lighter, but still mentioned the \"Devil.\" Maybe \"Hell\" is just not being able to rhyme. I too, am possessed by memories. This read like a \"stream of thought\" poem and was a fun read yet very heavy in intent. I enjoyed it a lot. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:15
The Devil\'s In Town
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. You make the reader feel it. Great job, sweet Teddy.
August 11th, 2024 10:32
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. You make the reader feel it. Great job, sweet Teddy.
August 11th, 2024 10:32
The Devil\'s In Town
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
The Devil\'s In Town
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
aDarkerMind said:
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny day.
one to savour.
August 11th, 2024 08:31
The Devil\'s In Town
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - leave the rhyming to the pedestrian proles. You, Teddy are more at home in the realms of exotic fantasy. 😉
August 11th, 2024 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - leave the rhyming to the pedestrian proles. You, Teddy are more at home in the realms of exotic fantasy. 😉
August 11th, 2024 07:54
The Devil\'s In Town
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying to write a rhyme. Don\'t ya just hate when the wrong line rhymes? A most fun read friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying to write a rhyme. Don\'t ya just hate when the wrong line rhymes? A most fun read friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:00
Swan\'s Lake
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, life is wonderful in so many aspects of it.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, life is wonderful in so many aspects of it.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:34
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
aDarkerMind said:
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has touched my heart, and put a big smile on my face.
me, and a certain lady, Thank You...
I am deeply touched....x
August 10th, 2024 11:50
aDarkerMind said:
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has touched my heart, and put a big smile on my face.
me, and a certain lady, Thank You...
I am deeply touched....x
August 10th, 2024 11:50
Swan\'s Lake
Thoughtless said:
Keep on dancing, Teddy.15. Poetry may be ballet expressed in words.
August 10th, 2024 11:41
Thoughtless said:
Keep on dancing, Teddy.15. Poetry may be ballet expressed in words.
August 10th, 2024 11:41
Swan\'s Lake
MendedFences27 said:
As we pass through life beauty surrounds us. Most of it goes unnoticed, because we are so focused on our own passing. But once in a while someone calls to our attention what we are missing. They call that person a poet. You are one. Thanks for reminding me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:50
MendedFences27 said:
As we pass through life beauty surrounds us. Most of it goes unnoticed, because we are so focused on our own passing. But once in a while someone calls to our attention what we are missing. They call that person a poet. You are one. Thanks for reminding me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:50
Swan\'s Lake
Bella Shepard said:
I love the celebration of life this poem extolls, beautiful dear Teddy, you\'ve done it again, brighten the day with your love of life. Thank you!!
August 10th, 2024 10:17
Bella Shepard said:
I love the celebration of life this poem extolls, beautiful dear Teddy, you\'ve done it again, brighten the day with your love of life. Thank you!!
August 10th, 2024 10:17
Swan\'s Lake
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s a wonderful world sung by Lois Armstrong in poetry. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. A lovely most positive view of things that adds pleasure to life. Most well expressed friend.
August 10th, 2024 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s a wonderful world sung by Lois Armstrong in poetry. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. A lovely most positive view of things that adds pleasure to life. Most well expressed friend.
August 10th, 2024 06:54
Swan\'s Lake
Doggerel Dave said:
Richness and diversity - anything other than turning outward and appreciating a textured world is not worth a candle.
Thanks for the reminder Teddy.
August 10th, 2024 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Richness and diversity - anything other than turning outward and appreciating a textured world is not worth a candle.
Thanks for the reminder Teddy.
August 10th, 2024 06:40
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Goldfinch60 said:
I too love Lemon Meringue Pie. LOL
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I too love Lemon Meringue Pie. LOL
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:22
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Doggerel Dave said:
No gain out of staying round here then, is there....... 😂🙃?
August 9th, 2024 07:33
Doggerel Dave said:
No gain out of staying round here then, is there....... 😂🙃?
August 9th, 2024 07:33
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with such decadence. I too would go for a Lemon Meringue Pie. A most fun read well built up and paced to cause one to salivate in anticipation of the ending.
August 9th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with such decadence. I too would go for a Lemon Meringue Pie. A most fun read well built up and paced to cause one to salivate in anticipation of the ending.
August 9th, 2024 05:52
You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Cassie58 said:
You’re too good to be true, can’t take my eyes off you. I remember the great Andy Williams singing this song Teddy. You aced with this poem. You kept the suspense going. That word filthy had my eyes out on stalks lol. However, l love lemon meringue pie too, so you can’t hog it all 😀. A fun poem, much enjoyed humour. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 03:01
Cassie58 said:
You’re too good to be true, can’t take my eyes off you. I remember the great Andy Williams singing this song Teddy. You aced with this poem. You kept the suspense going. That word filthy had my eyes out on stalks lol. However, l love lemon meringue pie too, so you can’t hog it all 😀. A fun poem, much enjoyed humour. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 03:01
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, yes, that’s where our dearly departed loved ones stay. Deep in the heart. Never far away. A part of us. In a few days it will be the 10th anniversary of losing my brother. I keep close to my three nephews. They all have a little of him in them. It is a blessing to see and feel it. A lovely write which touched me this Friday morning. Have a beautiful day dear poet. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 02:11
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, yes, that’s where our dearly departed loved ones stay. Deep in the heart. Never far away. A part of us. In a few days it will be the 10th anniversary of losing my brother. I keep close to my three nephews. They all have a little of him in them. It is a blessing to see and feel it. A lovely write which touched me this Friday morning. Have a beautiful day dear poet. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 02:11
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Fantastic work.
August 8th, 2024 19:34
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Fantastic work.
August 8th, 2024 19:34
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
aDarkerMind said:
goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.
(and a few tears while thinking of lost ones to go with it)
oh my!
August 8th, 2024 13:23
aDarkerMind said:
goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.
(and a few tears while thinking of lost ones to go with it)
oh my!
August 8th, 2024 13:23
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone. Relatives too and I wonder how much longer I have
August 8th, 2024 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone. Relatives too and I wonder how much longer I have
August 8th, 2024 12:08
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Teddy. I light a candle on those days and let them out.
August 8th, 2024 09:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Teddy. I light a candle on those days and let them out.
August 8th, 2024 09:36
In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but they will always be with you in Spirit.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but they will always be with you in Spirit.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:50
A Very Grand Finale
Goldfinch60 said:
Play away Teddy but please to not go yet as we need to hear your final concerto.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Play away Teddy but please to not go yet as we need to hear your final concerto.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:30
A Very Grand Finale
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Sadness with a capital \'S\'. Very well done.
August 8th, 2024 00:16
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Sadness with a capital \'S\'. Very well done.
August 8th, 2024 00:16
A Very Grand Finale
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry and music inextricably linked in this beautiful dream of a poem. The pic couldn\'t be more perfect, come think of it, so is the poem.
August 7th, 2024 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry and music inextricably linked in this beautiful dream of a poem. The pic couldn\'t be more perfect, come think of it, so is the poem.
August 7th, 2024 15:13
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