Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



My Darling London
Accidental Poet said:

London will always call to it\'s favored sons and daughters. Beautiful write Teddy. 🌹

April 13th, 2024 08:12

My Darling London
sorenbarrett said:

It is strange how locations of birth, childhood, and places where one first found love are marked indelibly in the heart and mind. These associations retrieve past emotions that seem dream like.
\"And so here I am in a dream
or so it would seem? \" A most nostalgic write Teddy

April 13th, 2024 04:55

A Poet’s Death or Encore?
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Teddy. You can always arise from within that curtain and bow to us anytime and we will still applaud you.

Andy

April 13th, 2024 01:12

A Poet’s Death or Encore?
sorenbarrett said:

Such a grand love, inspiring and in this there is no shame. In the pronouncing of it or the acting it out no shame as well. And if rejected the shame on one who could deny such a love. As for the fall at the end, love is a fall and so they say falling in love. I too wish to have the shame of a Shakespeare. A most inspiring and wonderful write.

April 12th, 2024 14:03

A Poet’s Death or Encore?
Doggerel Dave said:

Rrrrich versifickation there, Teddy 😂😇

April 12th, 2024 10:40

A Poet’s Death or Encore?
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. I like this a lot.

April 12th, 2024 09:44

A Poet’s Death or Encore?
Accidental Poet said:

It is but no shame in being as you are within dear Teddy. 🌹

April 12th, 2024 08:53

Observer Of A Gentle Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Teddy,

“I wouldn\'t be me without them
acquiring knowledge is always a lesson
even if it’s most unpleasant”

Such true words.

Andy

April 12th, 2024 01:25

Observer Of A Gentle Soul
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderfully penned Teddy. Self-discovery is quite possibly the final frontier. 😉👍
\"Of magic doors there is this- you do not see them even as you\'re pass through them.\" - Author Unknown

April 11th, 2024 08:36

Observer Of A Gentle Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Such a message of what we all go through in many different ways of pretending to please others and darkening our days with this weight.
The first stanza displays this so well.
\"And as she called it love
and put him on his very own pedestal
she knew deep within
that it wasn’t\"
This is a psychological analysis of denial of our own needs to be accepted by others and where it leads and how to fix it. A lovely poem Teddy.

April 11th, 2024 06:45

Tangerine Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

The hippies had it right Teddy:
\"MAKE LOVE., NOT WAR!\"

Andy

April 11th, 2024 01:25

Tangerine Dreams
Thomas W Case said:

I love this Teddy. Your muse is hard at work.

April 10th, 2024 21:01

Tangerine Dreams
Accidental Poet said:

My memories of the Beatles are a treasured part of my youth. Your poem brings back all the colors and feelings of those times. One question though. You have more than one Muse? 😊

April 10th, 2024 08:57

Tangerine Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

Such imagery in vivid color and setting. I too remember the Beatles, one of my favorite bands back when. Their lyrics were inspiring as was their music. This poem does great tribute to some of their works. I find inspiration in the art of others and music is a great muse.

April 10th, 2024 05:45

Chasing Butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep chasing them butterflies Teddy.

Those days of our childhood were so good and so innocent, wonderful times much remembered.

Andy

April 10th, 2024 01:13

Chasing Butterflies
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, a beautiful read. So much enjoyed. I loved your memories. That inner child is never far away. She just has to come out and play once in a while. Visually stunning. Warms the heart dear poet. Pleased I stopped by. Butterflies are so spiritual.

April 9th, 2024 18:38

Chasing Butterflies
Thomas W Case said:

Truly beautiful.

April 9th, 2024 18:37

Chasing Butterflies
Bella Shepard said:

Wonderful memories of childhood captured in chasing butterflies, such a beautiful metaphor. This poem was such a treat to read, and the pic couldn\'t have been better. Loved it!!

April 9th, 2024 14:02

Senryu 3
sorenbarrett said:

A sad truth and a well written piece Teddy.

April 9th, 2024 07:05

Enlightened
spilleronsheet said:

It surely would be a blessing for letting go, but still in process of being weigh down though. Serene words dearest teddy.

April 9th, 2024 02:33

I\'ve Been Touched By An Angel Today.
sorenbarrett said:

Some beautiful lines:
\"I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of sun\"
Very nice in its thought and also in its composition.


April 8th, 2024 15:44

Nightingale and I
sorenbarrett said:

Never give up on oneself is a battle cry that should be held by all of us. A great parable my friend.

April 6th, 2024 10:56

Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots
Mase ♪ said:

So short, yet so simple. Thanks for sharing Teddy.

April 5th, 2024 19:41

A Perfect Madness
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Great painting of the scene.

April 5th, 2024 19:27

A Perfect Madness
sorenbarrett said:

I love the picture and the poem but having worked with the insane for many years it was easy to tell that these were not from one with madness. Sorry to tell you Teddy that you are still okay. A fun write with images that carried me along.

April 5th, 2024 17:09

Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots
Goldfinch60 said:

I would agree with what AP has said and send them all away to an uninhabited planet and let them try and sort their own lives out.
Good words Teddy.

Andy

April 5th, 2024 01:05

Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots
sorenbarrett said:

Dreams, such an interesting topic. Some say their meanings are important, others just saturated with vivid, at times terrifying, experiences.
I have had my share and hope you take warning and stay safe. A short write but captivating.

April 4th, 2024 13:03

Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots
Thomas W Case said:

Interesting. Superb work.

April 4th, 2024 10:39

Enlightened
Bella Shepard said:

The human spirit endures grief and at the same time has the capacity to restore and make whole again. Your poem speaks volumes to this wonder. Beautifully written from the heart!

April 4th, 2024 07:50

Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots
Bella Shepard said:

Prickly feeling of foreboding, until the leopard wakes. Quite chilling my friend, and so cleverly written!

April 4th, 2024 07:42



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