Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
An Ode to my very own Sanity
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re all E.T.\'s to her, or maybe, he just wanted to borrow her phone and one thing led to another.
Your poem becomes more powerful with the line \"we still meet from time to time,\" and soars with your closing. A fun poem. - Phil A.
October 11th, 2023 15:24
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re all E.T.\'s to her, or maybe, he just wanted to borrow her phone and one thing led to another.
Your poem becomes more powerful with the line \"we still meet from time to time,\" and soars with your closing. A fun poem. - Phil A.
October 11th, 2023 15:24
An Ode to my very own Sanity
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!!!! I love your sense of humor!! Gets me every time!! 😂😂😂😂😂 I mean....if you think about it...we\'re all a \"little\" insane....OR is it \"A LOT\" insane? Mmmmmm....I wonder! LOL
October 11th, 2023 07:49
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!!!! I love your sense of humor!! Gets me every time!! 😂😂😂😂😂 I mean....if you think about it...we\'re all a \"little\" insane....OR is it \"A LOT\" insane? Mmmmmm....I wonder! LOL
October 11th, 2023 07:49
An Ode to my very own Sanity
orchidee said:
Didn\'t he go home, E.T.? Where is he now?
Oh well, if she does have an affair with him, any children will look like KP. lol.
Get well soon. 😁
October 11th, 2023 07:20
orchidee said:
Didn\'t he go home, E.T.? Where is he now?
Oh well, if she does have an affair with him, any children will look like KP. lol.
Get well soon. 😁
October 11th, 2023 07:20
An Ode to my very own Sanity
Neville said:
I once had a time slip that I just can\'t explain .. lost an hour and fifteen mins .. three time pieces all stopped at the same moment .. my wristwatch .. my car clock and the wall clock in my lounge .. sorry, I just got carried away again .. a fun post today Teddy ....... ❤️
October 11th, 2023 04:06
Neville said:
I once had a time slip that I just can\'t explain .. lost an hour and fifteen mins .. three time pieces all stopped at the same moment .. my wristwatch .. my car clock and the wall clock in my lounge .. sorry, I just got carried away again .. a fun post today Teddy ....... ❤️
October 11th, 2023 04:06
An Ode to my very own Sanity
Arastu Goyal said:
Very fun to read! Enjoyed this!
October 11th, 2023 03:55
Arastu Goyal said:
Very fun to read! Enjoyed this!
October 11th, 2023 03:55
An ode to the Mushroom
Neville said:
I\'m a mushroomy kinda guy found some nice fly agaric while out foraging recently .. Neville
October 11th, 2023 03:08
Neville said:
I\'m a mushroomy kinda guy found some nice fly agaric while out foraging recently .. Neville
October 11th, 2023 03:08
An ode to the Mushroom
LIZ said:
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 OH MY GOD!!! This is fabulous 👌 👏
I laughed so hard!!! Teddy....thank you!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 10th, 2023 15:48
LIZ said:
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 OH MY GOD!!! This is fabulous 👌 👏
I laughed so hard!!! Teddy....thank you!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 10th, 2023 15:48
An ode to the Mushroom
MendedFences27 said:
L.O.L. My second reading of \"Mushrooms\" today. Are they all coming out of there dark rooms? This one puts a twist on them, wait, that could be painful, let\'s just say that they are short but tasty, oops bad image, how about they\'re potent and make a great sauce. There I think I\'ve said something no one will pick on. But wait, what about the people who pick mushrooms? I give up. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:57
MendedFences27 said:
L.O.L. My second reading of \"Mushrooms\" today. Are they all coming out of there dark rooms? This one puts a twist on them, wait, that could be painful, let\'s just say that they are short but tasty, oops bad image, how about they\'re potent and make a great sauce. There I think I\'ve said something no one will pick on. But wait, what about the people who pick mushrooms? I give up. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:57
An ode to the Mushroom
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that the S.F.T.P.O.M. will be pleased. Is there possibly a double entendre here, or is it just my warped mind? Either way, short, sweet, fun, you rule!!!
October 10th, 2023 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that the S.F.T.P.O.M. will be pleased. Is there possibly a double entendre here, or is it just my warped mind? Either way, short, sweet, fun, you rule!!!
October 10th, 2023 13:41
An ode to the Mushroom
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that the S.F.T.P.O.M. will be pleased. Is there possibly a double entendre here, or is it just my warped mind? Either way, short, sweet, fun, you rule!!!
October 10th, 2023 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that the S.F.T.P.O.M. will be pleased. Is there possibly a double entendre here, or is it just my warped mind? Either way, short, sweet, fun, you rule!!!
October 10th, 2023 13:40
A Beautiful Madness
LIZ said:
Oh my God Teddy!! It is within our \"madness\" we create the most beautiful pieces of art....for example....THIS!! We paint, we paint, we paint 🎨 LOVED IT!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 9th, 2023 02:42
LIZ said:
Oh my God Teddy!! It is within our \"madness\" we create the most beautiful pieces of art....for example....THIS!! We paint, we paint, we paint 🎨 LOVED IT!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 9th, 2023 02:42
A Beautiful Madness
L. B. Mek said:
Seal said it best, I believe:
\'But we\'re never gonna survive unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive unless
We are a little crazy
No no, never survive, unless we get a little bit
Oh, a little bit
Oh, a little bit\'
from \'Crazy\' by Seal
(I do appreciate your poetry\'s sincerity
In everything you write, there you
are..
It\'s a privilege to get to know you
through your own choice words
my cherished friend)
Hope you n yours have a wonderful week!
October 9th, 2023 01:50
L. B. Mek said:
Seal said it best, I believe:
\'But we\'re never gonna survive unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive unless
We are a little crazy
No no, never survive, unless we get a little bit
Oh, a little bit
Oh, a little bit\'
from \'Crazy\' by Seal
(I do appreciate your poetry\'s sincerity
In everything you write, there you
are..
It\'s a privilege to get to know you
through your own choice words
my cherished friend)
Hope you n yours have a wonderful week!
October 9th, 2023 01:50
Caged Bird
aDarkerMind said:
I wish the same Teddy.
I couldn\'t of put it better myself.
October 8th, 2023 10:35
aDarkerMind said:
I wish the same Teddy.
I couldn\'t of put it better myself.
October 8th, 2023 10:35
A Beautiful Madness
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, this word-art is for sure a masterpiece. Is it a sensation of being elsewhere when you create your art. You\'re right, what others think is inconsequential. What matters is the relationship of the artist to the art. In this case both are beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:27
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, this word-art is for sure a masterpiece. Is it a sensation of being elsewhere when you create your art. You\'re right, what others think is inconsequential. What matters is the relationship of the artist to the art. In this case both are beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:27
A Beautiful Madness
Neville said:
I know all about madness which is why I share so much of mine with thee ..
what a little masterpiece you have gifted us Teddy .. Neville ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:43
Neville said:
I know all about madness which is why I share so much of mine with thee ..
what a little masterpiece you have gifted us Teddy .. Neville ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:43
Caged Bird
L. B. Mek said:
\'There are wings
Then those, taking flight without feathers\'
like you my cherished friend
and most gifted Poetess..
a rare classic in style from your wonderful pen
just as much a joy to read as your modern greats..
Thank you!
October 6th, 2023 07:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'There are wings
Then those, taking flight without feathers\'
like you my cherished friend
and most gifted Poetess..
a rare classic in style from your wonderful pen
just as much a joy to read as your modern greats..
Thank you!
October 6th, 2023 07:18
Caged Bird
Bella Shepard said:
We bow to convention, and sadly lose ourselves in the process. To regain that \"I\", does take courage and determination which you have so brilliantly captured here. Love the pic as well.
October 5th, 2023 15:09
Bella Shepard said:
We bow to convention, and sadly lose ourselves in the process. To regain that \"I\", does take courage and determination which you have so brilliantly captured here. Love the pic as well.
October 5th, 2023 15:09
Caged Bird
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such beautiful writing , teddy 🙂🌸
I havnt been reading so much on here lately but I always like reading yoir poems .. so nicely expressed
Hope your ok
October 5th, 2023 13:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such beautiful writing , teddy 🙂🌸
I havnt been reading so much on here lately but I always like reading yoir poems .. so nicely expressed
Hope your ok
October 5th, 2023 13:08
Caged Bird
BlessedbyGod said:
You will be free Teddy,
Allow yourself to be set free,
Be free Teddy, Spread your wings and fly!!
October 5th, 2023 11:48
BlessedbyGod said:
You will be free Teddy,
Allow yourself to be set free,
Be free Teddy, Spread your wings and fly!!
October 5th, 2023 11:48
Caged Bird
Neville said:
point me in the direction of a poet who has not put pen to paper on this very subject and I shall brand them a numbskull ..
Tho writ about often, it is rare that it be writ about so well .. Neville ❤️
October 5th, 2023 09:13
Neville said:
point me in the direction of a poet who has not put pen to paper on this very subject and I shall brand them a numbskull ..
Tho writ about often, it is rare that it be writ about so well .. Neville ❤️
October 5th, 2023 09:13
Reflection
Accidental Poet said:
I was fortunate to have found you long ago my friend. And so happy I did. Excellent write. 😉👍
October 5th, 2023 08:56
Accidental Poet said:
I was fortunate to have found you long ago my friend. And so happy I did. Excellent write. 😉👍
October 5th, 2023 08:56
Caged Bird
Pop64 said:
The picture and the image you created with your words are one and the same and so well tell the truth about setting ourselves (yourself) free, by letting our mind be open and therefore expanding the horizon. Beautiful!
October 5th, 2023 05:12
Pop64 said:
The picture and the image you created with your words are one and the same and so well tell the truth about setting ourselves (yourself) free, by letting our mind be open and therefore expanding the horizon. Beautiful!
October 5th, 2023 05:12
Caged Bird
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom comes in many forms and we often construct our own cages. No physical cage is as constraining as a mental cage. Loved the write it reads with tenderness and power.
October 5th, 2023 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom comes in many forms and we often construct our own cages. No physical cage is as constraining as a mental cage. Loved the write it reads with tenderness and power.
October 5th, 2023 04:39
Caged Bird
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Caged bird” by Teddy.15
The photo shows a person’s head like a cage, with the cage door open and a bird flying off in the distance. Thus, you have broken free from the cage.
A paraphrase of the poem :
Stanza 1 : It is your heart that enabled you to survive in the face of such odds. The quality of your heart is gentle. Yet, it has the strength to allow you to survive the ordeals. Your feathers would have burned your soul, such was the agony imposed on you by the imprisonment. You had been jailed for so long that your freedom had become something of the past.
Stanza 2 : These depressing thoughts bring even more damage to your mind. You need to change them into something positive; it is positivity that will save you. “harmony entwined” : the search for a balance that will save your sanity.
Stanza 3 : You are patiently waiting for the day humanity comes to its senses and frees you. Humanity should get some consolation in the thought that you will do your best after getting your freedom and that you will face any future constraints.
Stanza 4 : The winds were once gentle but now they have gathered strength and are driving you possibly towards destruction. “blazing sun” : after liberation, there is no telling what would happen; there might be dangers. However, you remain steadfast in hoping that things will work out for you. “courageous assumption….. yet to be undone” : your will to fight through future obstacles is strong.
Stanza 5 : You ask lightning to kill you off if you are not allowed a free life. You ask for compassion to be the force that will open the cage --- your jail. The opening of the cage will set both your mind and your body free.
See my poem “The caged bird” on this site.
“Give me liberty or give me death.” Attributed to Patrick Henry, 1775.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Give_me_liberty,_or_give_me_death!
Soman Ragavan. 5 October, 2023. //
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October 5th, 2023 03:42
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Caged bird” by Teddy.15
The photo shows a person’s head like a cage, with the cage door open and a bird flying off in the distance. Thus, you have broken free from the cage.
A paraphrase of the poem :
Stanza 1 : It is your heart that enabled you to survive in the face of such odds. The quality of your heart is gentle. Yet, it has the strength to allow you to survive the ordeals. Your feathers would have burned your soul, such was the agony imposed on you by the imprisonment. You had been jailed for so long that your freedom had become something of the past.
Stanza 2 : These depressing thoughts bring even more damage to your mind. You need to change them into something positive; it is positivity that will save you. “harmony entwined” : the search for a balance that will save your sanity.
Stanza 3 : You are patiently waiting for the day humanity comes to its senses and frees you. Humanity should get some consolation in the thought that you will do your best after getting your freedom and that you will face any future constraints.
Stanza 4 : The winds were once gentle but now they have gathered strength and are driving you possibly towards destruction. “blazing sun” : after liberation, there is no telling what would happen; there might be dangers. However, you remain steadfast in hoping that things will work out for you. “courageous assumption….. yet to be undone” : your will to fight through future obstacles is strong.
Stanza 5 : You ask lightning to kill you off if you are not allowed a free life. You ask for compassion to be the force that will open the cage --- your jail. The opening of the cage will set both your mind and your body free.
See my poem “The caged bird” on this site.
“Give me liberty or give me death.” Attributed to Patrick Henry, 1775.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Give_me_liberty,_or_give_me_death!
Soman Ragavan. 5 October, 2023. //
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October 5th, 2023 03:42
Caged Bird
arqios said:
The truth hath set free and the loss of the gentle tenderness broke the padlock... fly Freedom FLY from off the coop you Go!
October 5th, 2023 03:28
arqios said:
The truth hath set free and the loss of the gentle tenderness broke the padlock... fly Freedom FLY from off the coop you Go!
October 5th, 2023 03:28
Caged Bird
orchidee said:
Good write Teddy.
Oh, you\'ve gone, empty cage. Gone like a puff of smoke! lol. Where ya gone?
October 5th, 2023 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write Teddy.
Oh, you\'ve gone, empty cage. Gone like a puff of smoke! lol. Where ya gone?
October 5th, 2023 02:31
Caged Bird
LIZ said:
A free mind is the best asset a person can have!! It allows us to create, and be ourselves!! Sometimes we are our own cage. Letting go, is our saving grace!! Teddy...this picture reflects your words perfectly!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 5th, 2023 02:28
LIZ said:
A free mind is the best asset a person can have!! It allows us to create, and be ourselves!! Sometimes we are our own cage. Letting go, is our saving grace!! Teddy...this picture reflects your words perfectly!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 5th, 2023 02:28
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