Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Love in my Heart
aDarkerMind said:
a beautiful poem
and a very proud mother.
god bless you both.
May 12th, 2024 06:10
aDarkerMind said:
a beautiful poem
and a very proud mother.
god bless you both.
May 12th, 2024 06:10
The Love in my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! There can not be one without the other Love and Hate are identical twins the Janus face. The strongest forms of emotion. One that can\'t hate you can\'t love you. A wonderful write Teddy
May 12th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! There can not be one without the other Love and Hate are identical twins the Janus face. The strongest forms of emotion. One that can\'t hate you can\'t love you. A wonderful write Teddy
May 12th, 2024 05:49
Bed Bath and Beyond
Bella Shepard said:
If there is genius in madness, which I think there is, then you are absolutely bonkers in the most loveable and wonderful way. What a gift you\'ve given us!
May 11th, 2024 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
If there is genius in madness, which I think there is, then you are absolutely bonkers in the most loveable and wonderful way. What a gift you\'ve given us!
May 11th, 2024 12:47
Bed Bath and Beyond
Neville said:
Why not pop over to my place, I\'ve got a rubber room just ready for you to bounce around in .. Neville 🌹
May 11th, 2024 04:44
Neville said:
Why not pop over to my place, I\'ve got a rubber room just ready for you to bounce around in .. Neville 🌹
May 11th, 2024 04:44
Just to Hear your Laughter
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and carries one on. The use of periods of the day is a wonderful and creative use of time in this display. A great message as well. Very nice.
May 11th, 2024 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and carries one on. The use of periods of the day is a wonderful and creative use of time in this display. A great message as well. Very nice.
May 11th, 2024 03:55
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Doggerel Dave said:
Your Vincent inspired poetry is painterly of itself, Teddy - and I don\'t know how to express this better, 🌕
May 10th, 2024 21:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Your Vincent inspired poetry is painterly of itself, Teddy - and I don\'t know how to express this better, 🌕
May 10th, 2024 21:16
Bed Bath and Beyond
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mad, Teddy - just irresponsible. Chucking cacti arms out of the window on the 15th floor. Up the medication, chemical straight jacket required……… behavioral control…. Don’t gag her though – all the fun of the fair in a nut house – certainly kept me amused when I worked there…… You calling for me to come out of retirement...?... LOL lol LOL lol…..
May 10th, 2024 20:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mad, Teddy - just irresponsible. Chucking cacti arms out of the window on the 15th floor. Up the medication, chemical straight jacket required……… behavioral control…. Don’t gag her though – all the fun of the fair in a nut house – certainly kept me amused when I worked there…… You calling for me to come out of retirement...?... LOL lol LOL lol…..
May 10th, 2024 20:35
Bed Bath and Beyond
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy your muse is highly creative and this little journey you took me on was both colorful and funny. And if you want your sunflowers florescent pink, then why not. I think visiting hours have just finished, so I will my leave, but be sure I’ll visit you again. 🌺
May 10th, 2024 12:42
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy your muse is highly creative and this little journey you took me on was both colorful and funny. And if you want your sunflowers florescent pink, then why not. I think visiting hours have just finished, so I will my leave, but be sure I’ll visit you again. 🌺
May 10th, 2024 12:42
Bed Bath and Beyond
aDarkerMind said:
very whitty n fun Teddy.
sadly, am genuinely afraid of heights.
and am not a sunflower either;
ho hum
May 10th, 2024 12:05
aDarkerMind said:
very whitty n fun Teddy.
sadly, am genuinely afraid of heights.
and am not a sunflower either;
ho hum
May 10th, 2024 12:05
Bed Bath and Beyond
Thomas W Case said:
Yay. I love this. Everything about it. I can\'t figure out how to favorite poems, if I could, I would have lots of them, including this brilliant piece.
May 10th, 2024 10:43
Thomas W Case said:
Yay. I love this. Everything about it. I can\'t figure out how to favorite poems, if I could, I would have lots of them, including this brilliant piece.
May 10th, 2024 10:43
Bed Bath and Beyond
Accidental Poet said:
I too have been in stores named Bed, Bath and Beyond. Never mind those who say you\'re crazy, in this day and age you\'re crazy if you\'re not crazy. Right Orchi? 🤪
May 10th, 2024 08:50
Accidental Poet said:
I too have been in stores named Bed, Bath and Beyond. Never mind those who say you\'re crazy, in this day and age you\'re crazy if you\'re not crazy. Right Orchi? 🤪
May 10th, 2024 08:50
Bed Bath and Beyond
sorenbarrett said:
At first the title led me to think that this was about a store we used to have called just that \"Bed Bath and Beyond\" but as I read on it became amazingly creative and identifiable as for 40 years as a psychologist I saw people with hallucinations and delusions, some of which were funny wonderful people. There is nothing like a psychotic with a sense of humor. This poem was wonderfully timed to bring out the humor and let it build until the end. Very Nice Teddy
May 10th, 2024 02:42
sorenbarrett said:
At first the title led me to think that this was about a store we used to have called just that \"Bed Bath and Beyond\" but as I read on it became amazingly creative and identifiable as for 40 years as a psychologist I saw people with hallucinations and delusions, some of which were funny wonderful people. There is nothing like a psychotic with a sense of humor. This poem was wonderfully timed to bring out the humor and let it build until the end. Very Nice Teddy
May 10th, 2024 02:42
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light filled smile be always with you Teddy.
Andy
May 10th, 2024 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light filled smile be always with you Teddy.
Andy
May 10th, 2024 01:10
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love Van Gogh. I\'m staring at one of his self-portraits now, above my desk. Great imagery.
May 9th, 2024 17:44
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love Van Gogh. I\'m staring at one of his self-portraits now, above my desk. Great imagery.
May 9th, 2024 17:44
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful picture and so well written with a bit of mysticism. So appropriate in that the moon has always been associated with female powers and goddesses. Loved it.
May 9th, 2024 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful picture and so well written with a bit of mysticism. So appropriate in that the moon has always been associated with female powers and goddesses. Loved it.
May 9th, 2024 17:39
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Neville said:
it never ceases to amaze me how complex even the simplest of things might seem .. and vice versa ..
take a rose for example 🌹
May 9th, 2024 16:54
Neville said:
it never ceases to amaze me how complex even the simplest of things might seem .. and vice versa ..
take a rose for example 🌹
May 9th, 2024 16:54
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, a beautiful painting and your words are finely matched to its brushstrokes. Olive trees peacefully sleeping. How calming is that. Hope you have had a beautiful day.
May 9th, 2024 12:16
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, a beautiful painting and your words are finely matched to its brushstrokes. Olive trees peacefully sleeping. How calming is that. Hope you have had a beautiful day.
May 9th, 2024 12:16
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Accidental Poet said:
A spotlight on a special girl. 😊👍
May 9th, 2024 09:17
Accidental Poet said:
A spotlight on a special girl. 😊👍
May 9th, 2024 09:17
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂
May 9th, 2024 05:17
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂
May 9th, 2024 05:17
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy.
I felt every word.
May 9th, 2024 05:04
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy.
I felt every word.
May 9th, 2024 05:04
Firefly
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned dear Teddy. Grief has, and always will touch us. It leaves a painful and profound hole in the heart that you\'ve captured so eoquently in this poem. On a warm summer\'s night, seeing the fireflys thick in the woods, I like to imagine they are the atoms of a loved one who has passed, flittering and flickering, existing unchanged until they join other fireflys to create something wonderful and new. Just loved it!
May 8th, 2024 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned dear Teddy. Grief has, and always will touch us. It leaves a painful and profound hole in the heart that you\'ve captured so eoquently in this poem. On a warm summer\'s night, seeing the fireflys thick in the woods, I like to imagine they are the atoms of a loved one who has passed, flittering and flickering, existing unchanged until they join other fireflys to create something wonderful and new. Just loved it!
May 8th, 2024 14:23
A Soul\'s Portrait
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart that once bloomed
\"now in ruins spread on a gutter
black dead petals, soaking up the rain
as the sun has been taken hostage\"
Fraught with memories of past pain this paints a picture of damage and regret that has not healed touching the heart of the reader. Very touching in its sadness.
May 8th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart that once bloomed
\"now in ruins spread on a gutter
black dead petals, soaking up the rain
as the sun has been taken hostage\"
Fraught with memories of past pain this paints a picture of damage and regret that has not healed touching the heart of the reader. Very touching in its sadness.
May 8th, 2024 05:34
The Death of Love
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and I feel the pain. Great work, Teddy.
May 6th, 2024 14:47
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and I feel the pain. Great work, Teddy.
May 6th, 2024 14:47
Firefly
sorenbarrett said:
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for one just lost tp past love. The raven I took for an harbinger of death and the stars, clouds and rainbows as indications of one passed on. I always loved looking at the stars, although they have grown dimmer of late. But then many things have grown dimmer. Great imagery used here along with imagination. Such a nice flow smoothing it along as if on a drifting breeze.
May 6th, 2024 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for one just lost tp past love. The raven I took for an harbinger of death and the stars, clouds and rainbows as indications of one passed on. I always loved looking at the stars, although they have grown dimmer of late. But then many things have grown dimmer. Great imagery used here along with imagination. Such a nice flow smoothing it along as if on a drifting breeze.
May 6th, 2024 10:46
Firefly
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that situation Teddy when my wife died but I know that she is a star looking down on me and is very pleased about my new love.
Andy
May 6th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that situation Teddy when my wife died but I know that she is a star looking down on me and is very pleased about my new love.
Andy
May 6th, 2024 01:11
Firefly
Cassie58 said:
Grief, is like being swamped by waves from the sea, you think you are going to drown and you never know when it is going to hit you. Dear Teddy, I am no stranger to it , having lost many family members and friends. I felt yours here. 🌹
May 5th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
Grief, is like being swamped by waves from the sea, you think you are going to drown and you never know when it is going to hit you. Dear Teddy, I am no stranger to it , having lost many family members and friends. I felt yours here. 🌹
May 5th, 2024 16:15
Firefly
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it, Teddy. I used to crush them on my face, thinking I would glow in the dark. I was 6 lol
May 5th, 2024 13:50
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it, Teddy. I used to crush them on my face, thinking I would glow in the dark. I was 6 lol
May 5th, 2024 13:50
Firefly
Neville said:
Good grief is just a saying .. there is no such thing ..
Grief is the most dreadful of pains that only time may heal isn\'t it ..
I could feel some of yours here my friend .. that realisation of eternal goneness .. Neville 💜🌹
May 5th, 2024 09:55
Neville said:
Good grief is just a saying .. there is no such thing ..
Grief is the most dreadful of pains that only time may heal isn\'t it ..
I could feel some of yours here my friend .. that realisation of eternal goneness .. Neville 💜🌹
May 5th, 2024 09:55
Firefly
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
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